sorry i have to pop this for the offset..
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- offset: 287 (-8)
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- 00:07:607 (3) - the spacing looks really weird and i want to ask, why set a tiny jump here? obviously it would be much better if you move it onto x.200 y.188.
- 00:08:170 (4) - to be consistent as above, move to x.252 y.268 and adjust the anchors for the better blanket. (and don't forget to restack the following circle (5)
- 00:09:107 (6) - why difference here? i mean the shape..
- 00:10:795 (3) - make a blanket with circle (1) here? as a slow song the present pattern seems randomly and plays a bit awkward.. (such like this http://puu.sh/2SDcg.jpg
- 00:14:357 (6) - you can make a adjustment here as well. make the arcs paralleled plz..
- 00:16:795 (4) - idk.. the repeats just look a bit absurd. it follows nothing. it could be much better by following the vocal or something suitable.. not the present one as i heard.
- 00:19:420 (2) - i'd like to say "ctrl+g it" however i think you can totally del it and remake the new one copied by slider (1) with ctrl+hj fora neater composition.
- 00:20:732 (5) - a bit loud for the such quiet intro on that tail. try 20% volume by inherited point?
- 00:27:295 - ~00:29:920 - overmapped here. the rhythm are filled but sounds really messy bcz it's unreasonable for the music (nor the vocal.
- 00:31:420 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2SDpV.jpg
- 00:35:170 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - try to reset them like this? http://puu.sh/2SDwi.jpg
- 00:55:607 (6) - make the blanket better
- 00:58:232 (1) - try to shape it as a blanket as above? and about this combo, i'd like to give my suggestions. http://puu.sh/2SDzQ.jpg
- 01:04:232 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - plays weird. how about ctrl+g (1,3) and (2,4) on the orange combo respectively?