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Belle Lawrence - Bad Day (Nightcore Mix)

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Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 31 maggio 2013 at 09:20:54

Artist: Belle Lawrence
Title: Bad Day (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Techno Remix Cover Daniel Powter Darksonic Katty Pie osuplayer111 Sekai-nyan
BPM: 175,4
Filesize: 4829kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bad (5 stars, 409 notes)
  2. Decent (4,98 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Good (4,33 stars, 160 notes)
  4. Nice (2,67 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Belle Lawrence - Bad Day (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 178th Beatmap.

Special thanks to Katty Pie for the BG. ^^


Mapset:

Bad (Andrea) - Done.
Decent (Katty Pie) - Done.
Good (Darksonic) - Done.
Nice (Sekai-nyan) - Done.
Lally
first o3o
Suimya
2nd o3o
Flask
3rd o3o

yay nightcore <3
HeatKai
Lawrence not Danial Powter?
even if it's not should be in the artist, he should be in the tags.
Topic Starter
Andrea

HeatKai wrote:

Lawrence not Danial Powter?
even if it's not should be in the artist, he should be in the tags.
Good point, I'll add that later.

Thank you!
Poggo
Haaa Andrea baka :3

Heatkai yep~ 1 song but various artists~
Lawrence it's a girl, who sing this song in the women's performance~
HeatKai
it's a nightcore, which version does he take before change it to nightcore we don't even know whether it's lawrence or danial powter. but yes if it is lawrence, then danial powter must be in the tags, danial powter should be in the artist then lawrence shouldn't be anywhere in here :/
Topic Starter
Andrea
I mixed it myself, original artist of this version is Lawrence, a girl which sings the cover of the original song of Daniel Powter.
HeatKai
then danial powter should be in the tags \o/
Topic Starter
Andrea
Yep, fixed.

Thank you \:D/
cRyo[iceeicee]
BAD Andrea
Topic Starter
Andrea
You're so mean, cRyo.
Kurokami
Koi Andrea no Naitoucouruu mapu. :3
Gero
EDIT: 700 Posts Yuhu! :3

You Had A Bad Day (8) , Good Luck Man :P! call me when finished I try mod this
Darksonic
http://puu.sh/30zEj.osu

Here is my diff, I hope you like it.

If you gonna change anything before submitting it, please let me know.
Topic Starter
Andrea
Yeah, it's great, thank you. <3

Updated and moved to Pending, please mod. ^^
riffy
'ello

[General]
  1. C'mon, almost EVERY nightcore map has that awesome and cute skin! Please, add it! uguu ♥
  2. Missed tags. People always miss this or that tag. Try to add Techno and Remix and maybe Cover since it's Daniel Powte's song!
  3. I'm pretty sure that your artist is incorrect. I've checked it with YouTube and iTunes. Both souces say that it's Belle Lawrence iTunes (see #8)
  4. As for background picture, you'd better find a 1366x768 one. It'll be recommened resolution for BG.
  5. 00:22:332 - how about kiai fountain here? Feels like a PERFECT spot for placing one.
[Great]
  1. Well.. If we'll look at other diffs, it'll be better too use HP Drain 2 to keep balance between diffs.
  2. 00:39:436 (1) - we use shape like this one to make a blanket-sllider,that's why shape of this slider looks a bit awkward here. We can use something like uguu here.
  3. 01:03:381 (3,4) - to emphasize vocals here, you can start this slider 1/1 earlier. Don't forghet to place a circle at 01:04:408 - to follow background music. So, we will mix vocals and music in awesome way.
[Good]
did you mean Nice? Nice sounds a bit better, imo
  1. 00:03:347 (1) - 00:08:649 (1) - if it is possible, use silenced spinner-bonus.wav here or use S:5% volume here to reduce that sound because it is kinda annoying and doesn't fits with music.
  2. 00:50:040 (3,5) - you have notes here, but youve missed a beat at 00:48:672 - cоnsider placing a circle here to keep rhythm more consistent.
  3. 00:58:592 (3,1) - nazi - (1)'s tail is too close, so players might mistakenly click it. Can't you place it somewhere else? I know, you can move it so,ewhere to make flow even better! example

    During kiai you have no 1/2 notes, but kiai is supposed to be hardest and most memorable part of the map! How about making kiai a bit harded and non-kiai parts a bit easier?
[Decent]
oh..well.. Hi! \:D/
  1. Try to increase HP Drain by one tick to keep diff spread a bit more balanced!
  2. Well. The diff itself looks kinda too hard, imo. Why? 1/8 sliders like 00:32:424 (5) - are hardly readable. Try to speed up them a bit, to make reverse-arrows easier visible?
  3. 00:37:042 (2) - jumps like this are too hard. This is a [Hard] diff, not [Insane]. That's why ou should keep patterns passable. I'm pretty sure that keeping distance f jumps under x2.25 DS is the best way to make [Hard] diffs.
  4. 00:59:961 (6) - nazi - you can fix NCs here, to make them follow vocals better. 01:00:645 (1,2) - swap NCs here and place NC at 00:59:961 (6) - to follow vocals.
    Note: finish at 01:00:645 (1) - doesn't really fit, consider replacing it with whistle. Something calm will fit here much better, imo.
  5. 01:06:289 (1) - appears too soon after spinner. Please, remember that players need some time to relax and focus on objet after spinner! Try to keep 1/1 gap between spinner and any-following-object
  6. 01:11:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - previously, you used A LOT of 1/2 patterns where it wasn't really necessary. What happend here? Why did you stop using them? I bet that 1/2 sliders will fit here perfectly, just try it! :)
  7. 01:47:338 (1) - sounds just like FINAL spinner, that's why players may miss objects after it. Can't you replace this spinner with one of those long and nicely-curved sliders you used before? I bet it will improve your map a lot!

    Well.. It's not bad, but this diff is too [Hard]. try to make it a bit easier, this is NOT the hardest diff here! :)
[Bad]
OH HEY ANDREA YOU SAID IT'LL BE FULL VERSION YOU LIAR I just wanted to say "Hey, have a nice day tomorrow!"
  1. 00:05:143 (5,6) - try to make something, that will fit with music better? :3 I'm pretty sure, that simple doubles will work better! Just listen to the song with 25% playback rate, you'll hear it!
  2. 00:31:568 (8) - nazi - since like this slider used to be an ugly blanket-slider. Let's make it look better! You can use this slider, it'll fit with your style and looks good.
  3. 01:06:460 - even [Hard] diff had more triplets here! try to make some, they will fit here!
Have a nice day tomorrow, my friends! :)
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Good luck!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Stop being so awesome, Bakari. <3

Such a great and useful mod, updated most of it. ^^
Suimya
Thanks Bakari for your mod :3

EDIT: Fixed something else too >< http://puu.sh/30PH2.osu
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated.
Darksonic

-Bakari- wrote:

[Good]
did you mean Nice? Nice sounds a bit better, imo Nice sounds almost like Decent imo xD, but that's something that Andrea should think about.
  1. 00:03:347 (1) - 00:08:649 (1) - if it is possible, use silenced spinner-bonus.wav here or use S:5% volume here to reduce that sound because it is kinda annoying and doesn't fits with music. 50% should be enough, isn't that loud.
  2. 00:50:040 (3,5) - you have notes here, but youve missed a beat at 00:48:672 - cоnsider placing a circle here to keep rhythm more consistent. No, I didn't add a circle in 00:48:672 - because there is no vocal there, and I was following it a bit, so it will sound a bit ugly.
  3. 00:58:592 (3,1) - nazi - (1)'s tail is too close, so players might mistakenly click it. Can't you place it somewhere else? I know, you can move it so,ewhere to make flow even better! example I wanted that slider tail to stack (2), shouldn't be a problem.

    During kiai you have no 1/2 notes, but kiai is supposed to be hardest and most memorable part of the map! How about making kiai a bit harded and non-kiai parts a bit easier? Isn't too necessary xD, I mapped kiai the best as possible, I can't make it harder because I can't find where or how to do it, so I prefer to keep it.
Thanks for modding!
vipto
IRC modding

Mod
16:40 Andrea: \:D/
16:40 vipto: 00:03:775 (2,3) -
16:40 vipto: slider would be better i think
16:40 vipto: 00:05:058 - circle here
16:41 Andrea: what diff xD
16:41 vipto: Bad
16:41 Andrea: ok let me see
16:41 vipto: http://puu.sh/32ZEj.jpg
16:41 vipto: this does quite well
16:41 vipto: 00:10:531 -
16:41 vipto: circle
16:41 vipto: 00:10:787 -
16:41 vipto: here too
16:42 vipto: so you dont have the broken rhythm
16:42 vipto: doubles play better than solos on blue ticks
16:42 Andrea: changing them :D
16:42 vipto: 00:12:583 (4) -
16:42 vipto: blanket plssss
16:42 vipto: arround 6
16:43 vipto: short break for you to fix stuff before i go on?
16:43 Andrea: yep a sec
16:43 Andrea: xD
16:46 Andrea: ok ready
16:46 vipto: 00:23:872 (1) -
16:46 vipto: i find it cinfusing how you switch your sliders to red here
16:47 Andrea: well, combo would be too long if I don't
16:47 vipto: try this http://puu.sh/32ZOv.jpg
16:47 vipto: and
16:47 vipto: http://puu.sh/32ZOJ.jpg
16:47 vipto: this
16:48 vipto: fits way better
16:50 vipto: 00:36:186 (10) -
16:50 vipto: 2 circles fit better here
16:50 vipto: 00:44:738 (2) -
16:51 vipto: it's weird how the lyrics begin on the sliders end
16:51 vipto: try to have a circle or a sliderstart here 00:44:909 -
16:51 Andrea: if you actually hear carefully she begins on previous red >.<
16:52 vipto: naaah
16:52 vipto: better fix it
16:52 vipto: 00:52:435 (4) -
16:52 vipto: this should be where 3 is
16:53 vipto: http://puu.sh/32ZYr.jpg
16:53 vipto: try like this
16:53 vipto: fits better
16:53 vipto: and then you have a nice jump in it too
16:54 vipto: and you start with the lyrics correctly
16:54 vipto: 00:53:119 -
16:54 vipto: here
16:55 vipto: 01:02:355 (1) -
16:55 vipto: switch like this http://puu.sh/3301J.jpg
16:55 vipto: first circle then sliders to fit the lyrics
16:56 vipto: did you fix so far?
16:56 Andrea: fixing some of them yep
16:56 vipto: from there it's fine
16:56 vipto: 01:43:404 (2) -
16:57 vipto: i'd change this into circles
16:57 vipto: lyrics again
16:57 vipto: 01:48:193 (6,7,8) -
16:57 vipto: maybe move this down a few grids
16:57 vipto: might touch score
16:57 vipto: Decent now
16:58 vipto: 00:13:096 -
16:58 vipto: circle here
16:58 vipto: 00:13:267 -
16:58 vipto: start the slider here
16:58 vipto: again, for the lyrics
16:59 vipto: 00:15:833 -
16:59 vipto: circle here
16:59 vipto: 00:16:004 -
16:59 vipto: slider here
16:59 vipto: lyrics again xD
16:59 vipto: 00:27:121 (3,4,5,6,1,2) -
16:59 vipto: i dont know about this
17:00 Andrea: I'll change it
17:00 vipto: good
17:00 vipto: 00:53:119 (3) -
17:00 vipto: this kickslider is questionable
17:02 vipto: the rest is fine
17:02 Andrea: good good :D
17:02 Andrea: let's go on Good
17:02 Andrea: xD
17:02 vipto: i'm not a big help with Easys or Normal
17:02 vipto: but i'll try
17:03 vipto: 00:13:096 (3) -
17:03 vipto: i would avoid the reverse here
17:03 vipto: it doesnt really fit the music here
17:05 vipto: 01:38:957 (4,1) -
17:05 vipto: this is a bit too confusing for a normal
17:06 vipto: the rest is fine
17:06 vipto: great Normal
17:06 vipto: Nice now
17:06 vipto: 00:07:281 (2) -
17:06 vipto: cmon
17:06 vipto: you can make a blanket here
17:07 vipto: 00:18:912 (4) -
17:07 vipto: here too
17:07 Andrea: Sekai not so nazi
17:07 Andrea: xD
17:07 vipto: if i were nazi
17:07 vipto: i would have told you to change every single slider in Normal to a blanket
17:08 vipto: there were a lot that you could have turned into a blanket
17:08 vipto: A LOT
17:08 Andrea: HEUEHEUEH
17:08 vipto: but it's fine
17:08 vipto: 00:55:856 (2) -
17:08 vipto: meh
17:08 vipto: 01:01:329 (3) -
17:08 vipto: meh
17:08 vipto: 01:11:591 (1) -
17:08 vipto: meh x3
17:08 vipto: 01:17:064 (1) -
17:08 vipto: mehehehehe
17:09 vipto: it's just cosmetical :D
17:09 Andrea: rofl
17:09 vipto: 01:33:484 (2) -
17:09 vipto: move this to
17:09 vipto: x161 y259
17:09 vipto: 01:47:167 (1) -
17:09 vipto: bah
17:10 vipto: blanket
17:10 vipto: goo
17:10 vipto: d
17:10 vipto: done
17:10 vipto: great map
17:10 vipto: ready for rank imo
17:10 Andrea: wooo :D
17:10 vipto: i'll post the log

Ready for rank imo
gogo
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thank you :3
Ayesha Altugle
SPOILER
I want to do a guest diff

Andrea is so mean

Have a bad, bad day.
Chyo-Kun
Mod requested In-Game omfg andrea asked me for a mod wtf

[General]


  1. Non hai fatto lo storyboard,quindi letterbox during breaks dovrebbe essere attivato
  2. Non fa alcuna differenza,ma"daniel powter" dovrebbe essere "Daniel Powter" Giusto per fare il perfettino. <3
  3. "normal-hitclap" sembra sia stato tagliato alla fine,infatti suona un pò strano. Consiglio di modificarlo e di allungarlo un pò in modo che il suono scompaia più lentamente invece di stopparsi da un millisecondo all'altro
  4. Perchè c'è un tizo sulla destra che impugna una spada sul bg? o.o


    [Nice]

  5. 00:55:172 (1) - Get the volume of this slider star higher by 5%
  6. 01:21:511 - This clap on tick sounds bad compared to the others

    [Good]

  7. 00:07:452 (1,2,3,4) - Not that intuitive pattern for a normal D: Use a different one?
  8. 01:00:816 (1) - This whistle sounds bad here,get its volume lower or just remove it

    [Decent]


    Hi katty. Modded your map just 5 min ago xD
  9. 00:47:817 (4) - This slider here sounds bad while playng,maybe remove the reverse arrow and make it longer
  10. 00:53:119 (3) - ^
  11. 01:03:381 (2) - Silence this whistle,it doesen't fit much in that quiet moment of the song

    [Bad]

  12. Diff bellissima,gli hitsounds e i beat sono usati da dio per una nightcore,soltanto non mi piacciono alcuni sliders:

  13. 00:32:424 (1)
  14. 00:42:002 (6)
  15. 00:42:515 (8)
  16. 00:43:028 (1)
  17. 01:14:841 (3)
  18. 01:15:525 (1)
  19. 01:15:867 (2)
  20. 01:16:209 (3)
  21. 01:16:551 (4)
  22. 01:16:893 (1)
  23. 01:27:156 (4)
  24. 01:36:734 (3)
  25. 01:37:418 (1)
  26. 01:37:760 (2)
  27. 01:38:102 (3)
  28. 01:47:680 (4)
  29. 01:48:364 (8)

    Sono davvvero brutti da giocare e fanno un casino di hitsounds che non ci sta proprio x.x
    Gestiscili come vuoi,te li ho solo fatti notare ;)

Nice map :P
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