eufonius - Hiyoku no Hane (TV Size) · forum

Totoro

Joined November 2012

Totoro 2013-04-07T19:36:26+00:00

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Looks very good. but I'm not so sure about third fountain in the kiai time. I think it does not suit that well. Other than that, very good mapset. Good luck!

Peace

00:01:245 (1,2,3) - i suggest a perfect triangle rather than scattered triangle

00:17:460 (2,3,1) - ^

01:06:108 (3,5) - blanket these

01:20:703 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is bit too hard on easy. consider making at least a slider

Loneliness

Why is this difficulty using different CS? make it consistent

Other than that, its fine

Serenity

00:09:353 (1,1) - make these two closer therefore players wouldn't get confused. since it has the same distance with others eventhough it has slower SV

00:51:311 - i think there should be a note here because it matches with the vocal

00:54:554 (8) - NC

00:55:771 (1) - remove NC

Solitude

00:25:568 (5) - ctrl + g would look better

00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks like stream... maybe you should fix it

00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make it to a perfect square

Miko

00:26:784 (8,2) - not perfectly stacked

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2013-04-07T19:39:57+00:00

Wolf

Wolf wrote:
Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

Peace
00:30:028 (4,1) - You could have made the same blanket here, like in 00:26:784 (4,1) - for symmetry: http://puu.sh/2vKFY. Good idea actually. I never even thought about reusing the slider from before. Changed
00:40:163 (1,2,3) - Flow isn't good, consider making (1,2) a blanket: http://puu.sh/2vKQm Made a huge change to this part. Hopefully it looks good.

Serenity
00:26:987 (1,2) - Make a blanket here? http://puu.sh/2vLD9
00:30:433 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLE5
00:32:663 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLG2 When I did the first one, these next two came naturally after, nice idea!
00:48:271 (1) - Place under 00:48:068 (2) - to improve flow: http://puu.sh/2vLIS I personally like how this one goes, but I adjusted the (1,2) before the kiai time starts a little bit to make a bit better.
00:57:798 (5) - Consider re-working on the shape of this slider, it's not smooth. Changed it to somewhat match a slider later on in the song so it isn't so plain. Thanks!

Solitude
Couldn't find anything wrong here, good work. Thanks

Quite good work on this map so far, so I'll drop my star here: Thanks!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! My Easy/Normal+ diffs look a lot cleaner now!

those

3,136 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2013-04-07T19:53:18+00:00

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TitleUnicode:比翼の羽根 (TV Size)
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Thanks for all the fish

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2013-04-07T20:06:51+00:00

-iCo-

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Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Looks very good. but I'm not so sure about third fountain in the kiai time. I think it does not suit that well. Other than that, very good mapset. Good luck! I was unsure of this myself, but I agree that it might be a bit over the top.

Peace

00:01:245 (1,2,3) - i suggest a perfect triangle rather than scattered triangle Moved around a bit

00:17:460 (2,3,1) - ^ Moved the previous (1) and the (2) mentioned slightly.

01:06:108 (3,5) - blanket these made slight changes.

01:20:703 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is bit too hard on easy. consider making at least a slider I personally like how it works. Leaving as is. It works well with the 4 sliders I did before. If more say something about this though I might make 2 slider 2 circle patterns maybe

Loneliness

Why is this difficulty using different CS? make it consistent Guest difficulty, I'll let him decide

Other than that, its fine

Serenity

00:09:353 (1,1) - make these two closer therefore players wouldn't get confused. since it has the same distance with others eventhough it has slower SV I definitely understand what you mean here. The only thing is that anything I do unless I stack it directly underneath the end, will look really really ugly. If another person says something about this, I'll definitely try to work something out. As for now though, I think its perfectly fine.

00:51:311 - i think there should be a note here because it matches with the vocal It would have to be an extended slider, but I think the hold on the 'no' doesn't need to be mapped as its not very strong, left as is for now.

00:54:554 (8) - NC v

00:55:771 (1) - remove NC NC follows the vocals here, and it starts a new part after the (8). Left alone for now. I personally don't like starting NCs before the big white lines either.

Solitude

00:25:568 (5) - ctrl + g would look better Actually it does, changed.

00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks like stream... maybe you should fix it I still personally like these anti's, it matches well with the vocals but again, you are probably like the 10th person to comment on them now. Didn't realize people were against them so much XD (Not saying they, or you are, but this seems to be the most pointed out thing on my map)

00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make it to a perfect square Was never intended to be a square, I'll move these around slightly, but I'm not aiming for a square

Thanks for the mod!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-04-08T05:01:48+00:00

Peace (Lanturn's) has the same CS than Loneliness (mine) so it's not an odd one, about the kiai, Lanturn, can you remove the two green lines for the third kiai? x3 I think it fits but well, it's good to mantain a bit of consistency c:

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2013-04-08T05:05:49+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Peace (Lanturn's) has the same CS than Loneliness (mine) so it's not an odd one, about the kiai, Lanturn, can you remove the two green lines for the third kiai? x3 I think it fits but well, it's good to mantain a bit of consistency c:

Done. I forgot to remove them from Serenity and Solitude as well lol. All difficulties have those removed now.

Edit: April 9th: I decided to put more effort in my hit sounds and make them try to work out a bit more like the guest difficulties. I mapped most of this to vocals which made it hard to use other hit sounds, but after a few changes. It looks a bit better. I'll probably end up trying to figure out how I can make my easy diff a bit better as well, but the main hits land off of the standard 2 & 4 so its a bit hard because I believe the vocals stand out more than the beat. I'll work on it a bit more later, but for now.. I'm pretty happy with the new change!

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-04-10T15:29:41+00:00

Hi Lanturn!
From Aincrad's Modding queue~

Yosuga no Sora >3<

Peace

00:05:805 - 00:07:427 - In easy diff should not be slowing. Fix it please.

Loneliness

Good job DakeDekaane!

Serenity

00:52:933(5) - NC. New vocal part.

Solitude

01:05:602(5) - remove note.
01:11:885(8) - ^

Miko

Those - good job!!!

Good luck

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2013-04-10T22:06:31+00:00

Verlaren

Verlaren wrote:
Hi Lanturn!
From Aincrad's Modding queue~

Yosuga no Sora >3< \o/

Peace
00:05:805 - 00:07:427 - In easy diff should not be slowing. Fix it please. I've had lots of other people talk to me about this, and I've asked around. Its fine because the slider would be very very long otherwise taking up over half the screen. The song feels slow at this part anyways.

Serenity
00:52:933(5) - NC. New vocal part. Done, but I put it at 00:53:135 because the 'to' is just a lead up note to the main part.

Solitude
01:05:602(5) - remove note. This one is kind of iffy, but I changed the hitsounds around and it plays much better with the note in. Leaving this as is.
01:11:885(8) - ^ You can definitely hear the drums here at this point. I made some changes to this as well, though so its a bit easier to tell.

Thanks for the mod!

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2013-04-12T15:05:57+00:00

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Remove unnecessary transparency from "DakeDekaane.png" and "those.png".

Peace

• 00:03:880 (1) - A single spinner doesn't really fit here imo, if you really want to have it then move it at 00:05:907.
• 00:16:649 (1,2,3,1) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER
• 00:19:082 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next circle.
• 00:28:811 (3) - End this slider 1/1 later.
• 00:38:338 (3) - This slider doesn't flow that well, try to make it like this:
SPOILER
• 00:49:689 (3,4,1) - Try this:
SPOILER

Loneliness

• HP Drain Rate: 4
• Overall Difficulty: 4
• 00:14:015 (3) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:203 y:43.
• 00:22:934 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:23:541.
• 00:33:676 (6) - I understand what you're trying to do here but this slider could be better:
SPOILER
• 00:43:812 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier.
• 00:57:798 (4) - Same as before, try this:
SPOILER

Serenity

• 00:06:109 (1) - Same as "Peace", just delete this spinner and add a slider, or try this:
SPOILER
• 00:54:554 (4) - Try this:
SPOILER
• 00:57:798 (4) - Same thing here, I know that you're trying to follow the voice but avoid making long sliders, they're kinda boring to play, try to follow the drums.
• 01:14:014 (3) - ^
• 01:15:635 (5) - ^

Solitude

• HP Drain Rate: 6
• Approach Rate: 7
• Overall Difficulty: 6
• 00:03:474 (5) - Why a finish here? Add a whistle like the other diffs.
• 00:45:838 (1) - This spinner is too short, delete it and map this part in a different way. (if you want to keep a spinner start it at 00:44:825 or 00:45:028)
• 00:58:406 (2,3,4) - Try this:
SPOILER

• 01:00:027 (3,4) - Keep spacing consistent here, move (4) at x:182 y:320.
• 01:00:635 (5) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:01:041.
• 01:15:635 (9) - Same as "Serenity", try this:
SPOILER
• 01:23:946 (2) - Same thing here, delete this slider and try a different pattern.

Miko

• There's no video in this diff, add it.
• 00:31:446 (3) - Make this slider like the previous one, it flows better.
• 00:37:528 (4) - Try this:
SPOILER
• 01:13:608 (3) - Curve this slider 20° anticlockwise.
• 01:26:176 (6,7) - Try this:
SPOILER

Call me after your fixes for a recheck.

those

3,136 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2013-04-12T16:46:16+00:00

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 755
PreviewTime: 47611
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 64

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Title:Hiyoku no Hane (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:比翼の羽根 (TV Size)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Miko
Source:Yosuga no Sora
Tags:riya Visual Novel Eroge Opening those DakeDekaane
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OverallDifficulty:8
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186,363,65095,2,0,B|153:352|131:311,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,344,65500,1,10,0:0:0:0:
1,289,65703,1,0,1:0:0:0:
70,251,65906,1,2,0:0:0:0:
19,190,66108,2,0,P|17:139|21:109,2,75,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
97,178,66716,2,0,P|201:168|270:171,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,170,67325,1,0,1:0:0:0:
406,282,67527,6,0,P|421:227|397:140,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,263,68135,2,0,L|286:268,3,37.5,0|0|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,269,68541,2,0,P|234:268|199:263,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,292,68946,2,0,P|112:251|115:203,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,39,69352,6,0,P|174:113|184:187,1,150,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
199,263,69960,2,0,P|268:288|342:268,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,191,70568,1,0,1:0:0:0:
420,273,70770,2,0,B|470:212|459:169|459:169|434:141,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,45,71379,2,0,L|359:120,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,191,71784,2,0,L|358:213,2,37.5,0|0|10,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,156,72189,2,0,P|216:147|154:149,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,232,72595,6,0,P|101:249|188:224,1,150,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
223,314,73203,2,0,L|211:350,2,37.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,335,73608,2,0,L|328:370,2,37.5,2|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
401,282,74014,6,0,P|423:211|401:128,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,63,74622,2,0,P|392:56|352:52,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,117,75027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,62,75230,1,10,0:0:0:0:
199,117,75433,2,0,L|118:108,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,222,75838,2,0,P|49:183|56:148,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,216,76243,2,0,P|125:255|118:290,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,353,76649,1,0,1:0:0:0:
209,287,76852,2,0,L|211:250,2,37.5,8|0|0,0:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,352,77257,1,0,1:0:0:0:
330,353,77460,6,0,P|372:356|404:354,2,75,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
483,352,78068,2,0,B|491:314|473:243|473:243|488:194,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,247,78676,2,0,P|394:216|410:177,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,226,79081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,152,79284,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,214,79487,1,0,1:0:0:0:
207,140,79689,2,0,P|124:117|56:124,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,228,80298,2,0,P|56:208|85:198,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,290,80703,6,0,P|162:270|133:260,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,316,81108,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,382,81311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
198,372,81514,2,0,P|243:364|290:374,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,376,81919,2,0,P|356:327|350:291,1,75,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,214,82325,2,0,P|270:263|274:289,2,75,12|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
194,283,82933,2,0,P|124:293|44:280,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,211,83541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
62,155,83743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,185,83946,6,0,P|218:197|280:182,1,150,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
357,165,84554,2,0,B|394:154|432:151|432:151|434:113|448:80,1,150,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,178,85162,1,0,1:0:0:0:
443,229,85365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,304,85568,2,0,P|418:342|323:338,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,262,86176,2,0,P|251:299|252:338,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,264,86581,2,0,P|174:300|173:339,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,222,86987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87189,12,0,88811,0:0:0:0:

Here's all the changes, including storyboard. If you could fix the image so that all the transparency around it is removed, that would be great. I'll have to reposition the name, so let me know when that happens.

Video not added cuz preference.
01:13:608 (3) - rotated, great suggest.
The rest declined cuz preference. Have tried though, but didn't really like. Thanks.

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-04-12T22:54:00+00:00

xxheroxx

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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Loneliness

• HP Drain Rate: 4 /*This got a bit harder than original one, but well, I think it's ok as this is not intended as an Easy, both done
• Overall Difficulty: 4 /*^
• 00:14:015 (3) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:203 y:43. /*Ok
• 00:22:934 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:23:541. /*And this pattern came back, done
• 00:33:676 (6) - I understand what you're trying to do here but this slider could be better: /*I like how mine looks, I tried to do something similar but the peak before the zigzag didn't appear or didn't have a nice appealing for me
SPOILER
• 00:43:812 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier. /*Ok, and done something else
• 00:57:798 (4) - Same as before, try this: /*Made some very similar
SPOILER

Thanks for modding :3

(I have no idea of SBing, so I didn't touch anything orz) My update is here: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=CgrMFXBE

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Lanturn 2013-04-12T23:50:30+00:00

xxheroxx

xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• Remove unnecessary transparency from "DakeDekaane.png" and "those.png". Done, there is a bit of transparency left on those because I need it to be the same size as DakeDekaane for positioning. It shouldn't be too excessive.

Peace

• 00:03:880 (1) - A single spinner doesn't really fit here imo, if you really want to have it then move it at 00:05:907. Done, spinner is much longer and better now.
• 00:16:649 (1,2,3,1) - Try this pattern: See below
• 00:19:082 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next circle. I didn't really like having the long slider placed on the 2 and 4 parts. I'd rather have it on the whole 1, and it sounds much better. No change.
• 00:28:811 (3) - End this slider 1/1 later. Since this is an easy difficulty, and the bpm (148) is somewhat high. I'm trying to leave a bit of breathing room here and there. I know I'm missing the end of the vocals but its probably the best spot to add a much needed space here. No change here as well.
• 00:38:338 (3) - This slider doesn't flow that well, try to make it like this: Changed this around a bit. Looks much better.
• 00:49:689 (3,4,1) - Try this: Made a few changes to this section, looks better now.
Serenity

• 00:06:109 (1) - Same as "Peace", just delete this spinner and add a slider, or try this: Changed it to two spinners, the third spinner would be a bit fast for this difficulty.
• 00:54:554 (4) - Try this: see last response
• 00:57:798 (4) - Same thing here, I know that you're trying to follow the voice but avoid making long sliders, they're kinda boring to play, try to follow the drums.
• 01:14:014 (3) - ^
• 01:15:635 (5) - ^ In general, I made a few changes early on, but I left some of the later ones in because I prefer the held notes to the vocals. This difficulty is just a Normal+/easy Hard

Solitude

• HP Drain Rate: 6
• Approach Rate: 7
• Overall Difficulty: 6 I don't believe this is necessary, especially since this is a hard+/easy insane difficulty. Its supposed to be about the same difficulty as Miko, not easier. Hope this makes sense. I never have a problem playing with the current 7/8/7 setup I've got going and I believe it suits it better.
• 00:03:474 (5) - Why a finish here? Add a whistle like the other diffs. Swapped to a whistle.
• 00:45:838 (1) - This spinner is too short, delete it and map this part in a different way. (if you want to keep a spinner start it at 00:44:825 or 00:45:028) Changed to remove spinner.
• 00:58:406 (2,3,4) - Try this: I personally like my current setup, I made slight adjustments around this, but not much.
• 01:00:027 (3,4) - Keep spacing consistent here, move (4) at x:182 y:320. I made the spacing a bit better, just not the way you suggested. I made it a little bit more understandable hopefully. I like the triplet anti-jump and having it revert back just after (hopefully using the previous slider as a warning)
• 01:00:635 (5) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:01:041. I've tried this many many times, and it just sounds/plays horrible. I've had people test play it as well and they said it doesn't play well. so I'm not going to do this. I'm sure its mostly because of how the music fades out a bit here.
• 01:15:635 (9) - Same as "Serenity", try this: I like this slider because it gives off an indication its the end of this 'section' and something new is coming up. No change here as well. Another reason is that I need the spacing for the double drum hit (End of the slider, and beginning of the next one) so your suggestion wouldn't work as well.
• 01:23:946 (2) - Same thing here, delete this slider and try a different pattern. I agree to this. Changed around a bit.

Call me after your fixes for a recheck. Thanks,~~After DakeDekaane is done with his side of the mod,~~ I'll send you a PM. Thanks

Thanks for the mod! I'll get back to you in a bit.

those wrote:
Here's all the changes, including storyboard. If you could fix the image so that all the transparency around it is removed, that would be great. I'll have to reposition the name, so let me know when that happens. Changed, and I personally moved it myself. (redownload song for pics) The new position of it is 490,439. If you'd like it higher or anything, just tell me the coords and I'll update it (on your difficulty and dekaane's difficulty)

those

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those 2013-04-12T23:57:18+00:00

Doesn't seem to have updated. Try removing the images then updating, then replace the images in the folder and update again. Also please use the storyboard section in the code I have provided above, thanks .

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Diasios 2013-04-15T09:58:33+00:00

General

• "comboburst-1.png" and "comboburst-2.png" are almost nsfw, mind removing them? (if I were I'd remove all your combobursts, I don't really like them to be honest)

Peace

• 00:43:203 (4) - Add a new combo.
• 00:51:514 (1) - I kinda understand your combo placement here but it's better to add a new combo almost every 8 white tick imo, don't set your combos according to how you map patterns. (I'm suggesting you to remove this new combo and to add it at the previous circle)
• 00:55:771 (5,1) - Same thing here.
• 01:01:649 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:08:541 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next slider.
• 01:20:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow here can be better, try this pattern:
SPOILER

Loneliness

• 00:18:880 (4) - If I were you I'd start this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:18:879, I know that these sliders ticks are following the guitar but they sound kinda awkward.
• 00:44:826 (3) - Try this:
SPOILER

Serenity

• 01:03:271 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it at the next circle.
• 01:08:946 (7) - Add a new combo here and remove the one placed at the next slider.
• 01:25:568 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern:
SPOILER

Solitude

• 00:01:245 (1) - This slider is noisy, add a S:C2 section here so the sliderslide is muted.
• 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing doesn't fit the song imo, if you want to keep it then reduce the slider velocity of 00:44:825 (7) and 00:45:636 (9) and keep the reduced spacing.

That's all, call me again after your fixes.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2013-04-15T23:19:19+00:00

xxheroxx's recheck

xxheroxx wrote:
General

• "comboburst-1.png" and "comboburst-2.png" are almost nsfw, mind removing them? (if I were I'd remove all your combobursts, I don't really like them to be honest) I really like them, but I understand about the nsfw part (on combo-1 definitely) For comboburst-1, I photoshopped the questionable parts (got rid of the transparency on the clothing) so it should honestly be a lot more sfw, and I changed Comboburst-2 completely. I don't plan on removing these, and I'm hoping Comboburst-1 is sfw enough now.

Peace

• 00:43:203 (4) - Add a new combo. Done.
• 00:51:514 (1) - I kinda understand your combo placement here but it's better to add a new combo almost every 8 white tick imo, don't set your combos according to how you map patterns. (I'm suggesting you to remove this new combo and to add it at the previous circle)
• 00:55:771 (5,1) - Same thing here.
• 01:01:649 (3) - Add a new combo.
• 01:08:541 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next slider. Changed the majority of these around. I'm not 100% sure of starting NC's a white tick before the big white one is a good idea. (the first couple notes before the kiai time is just lead in. I added an NC just after that so its a bit more consistent. I made a few changes here and there, and I personally like how its set up now.
• 01:20:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow here can be better, try this pattern: I liked this. Just hoping its not too confusing for the newer players. Changed anyhow
Serenity

• 01:03:271 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it at the next circle.
• 01:08:946 (7) - Add a new combo here and remove the one placed at the next slider. Did both above as it follows the vocals a lot better.
• 01:25:568 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern: I like this. Changed

Solitude

• 00:01:245 (1) - This slider is noisy, add a S:C2 section here so the sliderslide is muted. wow my mistake.. can't believe I missed this somehow... Thanks!
• 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing doesn't fit the song imo, if you want to keep it then reduce the slider velocity of 00:44:825 (7) and 00:45:636 (9) and keep the reduced spacing. Definitely don't want to reduce the slider velocity here as there really isn't any slow down. This was just meant to be simple anti jumps but it really has recieved a lot of negative response lately, so I went and changed this. I also changed the anti jump later on in the song since it was getting even worse responses lol.

That's all, call me again after your fixes.

Thanks for the recheck! Just awaiting for dekaane's changes and then I'll send another PM out

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-04-16T01:40:37+00:00

All applied here, made some slight changes too, my update: http://pastebin.com/raw.php?i=CgrMFXBE

Thanks :3

Diasios

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Diasios 2013-04-16T08:57:17+00:00

(ノﾟДﾟ)ノ彡

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2013-04-16T08:58:28+00:00

Hurray! Thanks again for all the help \o/

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-04-19T14:40:35+00:00

wut... i think i'm too late :c

gratz anyway

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shARPII 2013-04-21T12:24:37+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
(ノﾟДﾟ)ノ彡

Omg dat throw

Make me this ranked guys go go go

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Kurai 2013-04-21T20:41:38+00:00

those wrote:
Video not added cuz preference.

I believe video should be played in every difficulties. Imagine if a player download the map with the video because s/he loves the game/music so much and then notice the video is not played in the insane. Or if someone with a pretty slow internet download the video, because s/he simply likes playing with the video when there is one, realize that the video is not played in your difficulty. What would be their reaction ? Disappointment, frustration, even anger, etc.

Also I don't like the mere idea of letting the players download a map with a video that is not used in one difficulty, especially the hardest which is the only difficulty a good player will play. They'd just have downloaded it for nothing.

Reconsider that please. If the player doesn't want to play the video, they're free not to download it or to disable it, but it should not be forced.

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those 2013-04-21T21:06:49+00:00

I suppose that's a good argument. The original idea was to have a difficulty stand out (before we received that second guest diff) with a different background and the name to go with it, but sure, video will be added.

Lanturn, please.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2013-04-21T21:19:41+00:00

Video Added, needs rebubble now.

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Kurai 2013-04-21T21:25:07+00:00