AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
akira.jpg is 1228x767, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

i still dunno if there's rule is said that the max size is that 1024 x 768 or not, imo just make it 1024x768 or lower just in case if that's wd background actually probihited

[All .osu Files]

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Miko] :
Combo1 : 206,83,114
Combo2 : 160,148,235
Combo3 : 240,206,225

- [Peace] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Serenity] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

- [Solitude] :
Combo1 : 52,177,58
Combo2 : 0,232,232
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 179,64,64

The miko diff seems have a different combo color than the others, is it intentional?
imo just make it same to make them consistent is better^^

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Miko] : 755
- [Peace] : 3000
- [Serenity] : 3000
- [Solitude] : 3000

i guess it's better to make the leadin same for all diff

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Miko] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:17:460

- [Peace] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:242, ends on 01:12:569
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:594, ends on 01:17:459

- [Serenity] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

- [Solitude] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:271, ends on 01:01:218
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:243, ends on 01:12:570
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:595, ends on 01:17:460

same here, well, i don't really mind it though since it was a GD but i think it's better to make the general settings same for each diff ^^

[Peace]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243
01:12:569 - snap to 01:12:595

[Serenity]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:193
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

[Solitude]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:01:218 - snap to 01:01:243
01:12:570 - snap to 01:12:595

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. The files akira.jpg and sorabg.jpg are 1228x767, please make sure to resize them correctly. I'll let the guests know.
2. Increase the Audio Lead-In to 2 seconds, it's much better. The reason why its 755 is so the first note hits 2 seconds exactly after the map loads. I believe this is fine.
3. Disable the Letterbox during breaks since you're not actually using it right now. Sure, done.

~Peace~

1. 00:27:190 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Sure, it doesn't quite fit with the vocals, but I understand.
2. 00:28:811 (1) - Remove this new combo afterwards, since you won't need it.
3. 00:45:028 (1) - I can hear loud song on this spinner end, please make sure to fix your green line to silence it like you wish. Thanks, there was some issues when I added the timing points. Must of missed this somehow.
4. 01:04:081 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1), since the new section actually begins there. Done

~Serenity~

1. 00:03:880 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Done
2. 00:53:135 (5,6) - Try to avoid overlapping these two sliders together, it doesn't look so good to me. Changed around a bit, 2nd person to say something about this.
3. 01:05:500 (1) - The finish hitsound on this slider repeat feels too powerful for this part of the song, even if you reduce the volume, I suggest you to add a whistle instead with the same volume of before. Lowered it by 10, I must of added an extra 10 in somewhere because my easy uses 45 instead of 55.
4. 01:18:068 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved much more, I'm sure of it. Played around with it. Should be better.

~Solitude~

1. 00:05:907 (1,2,3) - These sliders looks really ugly to me, why don't you try a different shape? I'm sure you can make them much better than this. The only one I really don't like is the (3) which I've been playing around with. Made some slight changes to this
2. 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sudden change of spacing might be hard to read at first sight for players. Why don't you just space it normally like the rest of the difficulty? I'm pretty sure it would play and be much better. Done. I didn't even think of this
3. 00:59:622 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, another sudden spacing change that doesn't really make much sense and it's also hard to read, change it please to make it similiar to the rest of the difficulty. These anti-jumps are intentional and I really like them. I personally don't think its hard to read so I won't make any changes for now. You are the 3rd or 4th person to comment on these though
4. 01:02:460 (3,4,5,6) - I know you spaced them like this for symmetry, but it looks really bad. Move them near to the center so they are all of them spaced equally, looks and play much better. Edited this around. Didn't realize 4,5 were so spaced so wide from each other.
5. 01:06:108 (1,2) - This sudden spacing change doesn't play so good imo, space it normally please. I changed this a bit to match your suggestion.
6. 01:13:203 (2,3) - Same as above, they look like forced jumps and they don't play really good. I personally like this jump and I don't believe it feels too forced since it follows the vocals. It also sets up for 01:13:811 (3) which doesn't follow the vocals but the same pattern so its easier to read. I'll keep my eye out for more complaints on this though.
7. 01:19:689 (10,1) - New combo should go on (10) and not on (1), since the new stanza and music changes there. I'm following the vocals for this section on NC and I think its fine how it is. It matches up with the next combo this way and looks nicer.

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~random from #modreqs~
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
change combo color to same as all diff Guests wanted to use different combo colors. Should be alright
In [Miko] diff change kiai time as same as other diff please Guest difficulty, so its fine.

[Peace]
why not try to add normal-sampleset like [Loneliness] as clap? Because there isn't enough hits to add the clap and it sounds strange. I'm actually probably going to remove the claps from both of the later difficulties as they sound strange in my map that follows the vocals a bit too much.

1. 00:30:433 (1) - remove whistle head Done. Sounds better thanks!
2. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail Bit too sudden and doesn't give off enough power like 01:00:635 (2) - does

[Serenity]
change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap as same as other diff Example: 00:37:325 (2) - change whistle to normal-sampleset at head I've tried this before and all it does it end up sounding ugly because its missing a lot of places where the clap should be. the whistle is to follow vocals mostly and hit a few clap spots.

1. 00:05:501 (2) - change finish to whistle at tail Lowered volume of the finish
2. 00:11:582 (2) - remove whistle head Pretty sure I did this.
3. 00:26:987 (1) - remove whistle at reverse Done
4. 00:28:406 (3) - add whistle tail done
5. 00:31:041 (2) - remove whistle head & tail removed only the tail
6. 00:33:473 (3) - remove whistle head Yeah, done
7. 00:35:298 (1) - remove whistle done
8. 00:50:906 (1) - add whistle tail [/color]
9. 00:51:514 (2) - remove whistle head From this point on in the chorus, I try to add as many whistles to vocal notes, and less trying to worry about a basic clap pattern. This way it adds a bit of uniqueness. I left this in
10. 00:52:122 (3) - ^ ^
11. 00:52:933 (4) - remove whistle This is part of the vocal trail I've been following so no change
12. 00:53:541 (6) - add whistle head I missed this, after last update, thanks!
13. 00:54:149 (7) - remove whistle same as 52
14. 00:54:554 (8) - remove whistle head ^
15. 00:57:798 (5) - remove whistle tail^
16. 00:59:622 (1) - change whistle to finish at tail The finish at the head shouldn't of even been there, removing the finish at the end, leaving the tail the same.
17. 01:04:284 (4) - remove whistle tail Sounds better without it, changed.
18. 01:14:014 (3) - ^ Done, and added a whistle to the(4).
19. 01:15:433 (4) - add whistle
20. 01:15:635 (5) - remove whistle head Sounds better with it, leaving as is.
21. 01:25:162 (3) - add whistle Sure, done.

[Solitude]
same as [Serenity] change whistle to normal-sampleset as clap

1. 00:09:353 (3) - add clap tail Removed all of the claps for the samplesound set. I don't like them anymore.
2. 00:10:974 (1) - add clap ^
3. 00:36:919 (1) - add whistle or finish at head Liked, added
4. 00:39:149 (7) - remove whistle head & tail I personally like the double whistles in these areas so leaving alone.
5. 00:41:176 (4) - remove whistle head Song feels empty without it, no change
6. 00:42:392 (3) - remove whistle head & tail ^
7. 00:43:203 (1) - add finish head Thanks for noticing this. surprised I forgot to add it in this difficulty
8. 00:50:500 (8) - remove whistle tail Whistle is for the 'ki' sound, and with it feels empty with my current whistle flow.
9. 00:52:933 (1) - remove whistle head Vocals
10. 00:53:338 (2) - remove whistle ^
11. 00:55:771 (1) - ^ ^
12. 00:57:392 (6) - add whistle tail Nice!
13. 01:02:662 (4) - remove whistle I like this whistle because of the heavy vocals here
14. 01:03:068 (6) - ^ Sure, sounds better with 2 whistle hits than 3 anyways.
15. 01:04:284 (10) - ^ Turning down the volume a bit on this whistle. I still like it but I understand why you asked for it to be removed.
16. 01:09:352 (1) - add whistle tail Sure, I did it in the next spot similar to this. Thanks for noticing this as well.
17. 01:17:054 (1) - add whistle head Done
18. 01:20:703 (2) - remove whistle Done
19. 01:21:514 (5) - remove whistle head ^
20. 01:23:946 (2) - ^ Left this whistle in, need it for the upcoming finish part

That's all

captin1 wrote:

Hey! M4M from my queue~

just a couple suggestions

Peace

00:18:676 (3) - super nazi, this is on y:237, probably should be on 238 to stack Good eye!
00:59:622 (1,2) - make these the same, they don't blanket each other perfectly cause they're two different sizes Fixed this up a bit.

Serenity

00:38:744 (4) - curve this slider like you did (3) Curved this a bit then and matched up with the later one which is what I was copying before
00:51:514 (3) - x:452 y:228 for symmetry done
00:56:987 (4) - same angle as (3) I personally like how it is right now. so no change.
01:25:568 (1,2) - (1) at x:316 y:96, (2) at x:436 y:180, bit better symmetry very nice, thanks.

Solitude

00:18:676 (3,4,5) - perfect triangle these I like this set up how it is. no change.
00:20:703 (3,4) - make these symmetrical Fixed up this whole section a bit.
00:26:582 (4,5) - move (4) a bit farther away from (6) so (5) ends up about the same height or a bit higher I like this climb as it is.
00:40:163 (1,2,3,4) - perfect triangle these (3) stacks on (7) 's end so no change here. perfect triangles really are just 'meh' to me anyways.
00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are a bit odd to read, why don't you do a jump pattern with these beats? would fit with the build to chorus You are the first person to say this. I believe its fine how it is and I personally like these. Fits very well with the vocals. no change.
00:53:135 (1) - soft finish on the end of this slider nothing in the music to imply a finish here, no change.
00:54:554 (4) - soft finish on the very end of this slider Music still isn't built up enough here for one.
00:59:622 (1) - soft finish Too early, and not powerful enough to use one.
01:00:230 (4) - soft finish on the start of this slider too early for what I've been doing.
01:07:527 (4) - ^ ^

All I got. Good luck!

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! from my queue

PEACE

00:30:433 (1,2) - what do you think of making something like this, for me it sounds better (just a suggestion) I changed this whole section a bit thanks to your idea, gets rid of the ugly 1/2 I had just past this as well. Thanks



SERENITY

00:49:892 - add a note or make the previous slider longer here Moved the (6) to the spot you suggested, plays better
00:57:595 - also here add a note This part heavily follows the vocals, so no change.

SOLITUDE

00:05:907 (1,2,3) - maybe you should fix spacing here Adjusted a tiny bit
00:26:379 (7) - maybe this stacked in this way can be confusing, I always fail it, but you can keep it as it is if you want. I personally like it, hidden notes usually aren't something I like to do but it adds a little extra flavour into the difficulty since I have hidden notes in a few other places around this isn't that bad imo. no change, thanks for the feedback though!
00:35:298 (6) - fix spacing here, there is no jump in the music Changed the notes before to match the spacing a bit. should be a lot better.

MIKO

not much to say in this diff, just, why there isn't the video? just a question u.u those didn't want the video in on his difficulty which is fine.

that's all, very good map! GL! ^.^

PortalLife wrote:

Modding cause Yosuga No Sora wins You stole my blue

Peace
00:38:338 (3) - I suggest changing it to this to straighten it out and make it look nicer, and bring it a bit away from the very edge as it goes very slightly off screen. I personally like this slider as it catches riya's vocals a bit near the end, also the slider is meant to indicate the next note is going to be up from it so it shoots it off. No change here.


00:16:649 (1) - This silder is kinda off screen, raise it up like this: I moved this around, and surprisingly, I didn't have to do much.

You hit the key beats here in this diff, which is good ^^ Yeah, I wanted to map more to the song itself rather than a simple 1/1 steady beat throughout the whole thing to make it a bit more unique, but still easy enough for newer players. thanks.

Serenity

Really good diff, I couldn't really think of a way to improve it so I had no suggestions here. Thanks

Solitude

00:43:811 (2) There is no point to this pattern being stacked so close together, I suggest just using normal spacing here. The Anti-jumps here are something I think works great for this map. Since there is a lot of big spacing already, this part shouldn't be confusing really because its mapped 100% in tune to the vocals, and I like how it just plays here.
00:59:622 (1) Again, I suggest normal spacing. You can do a nice triangle pattern here instead of what you currently have. Another anti-jump I like as it matches the vocals again so people wouldn't consider it to be 1/4 notes.
01:05:500: (4) I don't understand the 1/4's here, Is it mapped to the vocals? Definitely not the vocals here. I assumed a drum was here, but you can at least hear something indicating a raise in volume on that 1/4 | I also believe it matches up with the upcoming 01:11:176 (5,6,7,8,9) - as it follows the same pattern.


Hope it gets ranked. I <3 Yosuga No Sora!

PortalLife wrote:

Modding cause Yosuga No Sora wins /*yay /o/


Loneliness

OD + 1 ? /*I don't really think so, this diff is meant to be quite easy.

00:18:879 (4) - Goes off the grid, I suggest using this:

SPOILER

00:20:501 (1) - Again this pattern goes off the grid, suggesting you do this:

SPOILER

(so at this point of the mod I realized those patterns don't go off screen in testing so you can use them if you wish) /*^Hehe :3

Hope it gets ranked. I <3 Yosuga No Sora!

tutuhaha wrote:

BG lager than 1024*768 Widescreen BGs are allowed now.

[Solitude]
00:07:731 (2) - try to make a space looks same like 00:05:704 (5,1) - will look better
00:07:731 (2,3) - ^same Sure, Makes sense.
00:11:379 (2) - move to x160 y64 will looks better
00:13:406 (8) - move to x312 y220 This is a bit odd, Going to leave as is.
00:17:460 (1) - not good place to add strong finish Lowered the volume
00:26:987 (10) - nc begin here I like the current NC setup for this. I'd rather NC after the whole note instead of before.
00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .......not agree to use this design
I will do this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691814
↓
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691816
↓
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691817
well...same like this ╮(╯▽╰)╭............ Interesting idea but I've already set my mind on keeping this as an anti-jump. I personally like it better.
00:49:689 (5) - ctrl+g will play more fun Nice, swapped a few notes around to make it even better.
00:54:757 (5) - space，move to x424 y308 Ah, didn't notice my spacing was a bit off there, thanks.
00:59:622 (1,2,3) - I think there need make a jump Sticking with the anti-jump here. I personally think it plays better
01:04:487 (1) - not good place to add finish Lowered volume.

[Serenity]
00:03:880 (1) - add whistle at the end Sure
00:16:649 (1) - delete finish lowered volume
00:18:473 (3) - whistle added
00:22:122 (4) - finish at the end added with lower volume
00:31:041 (2) - add whistle at the end Added, sounds better than I thought it would be.
00:31:649 (3) - ^Then delete this whistle
00:31:852 (4) - ^Then add whistle here Worked out good, follows the vocals nicely.
00:48:271 (3) - nc Been mentioned lots before, might as well now. lol

then GL

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

Peace
00:30:028 (4,1) - You could have made the same blanket here, like in 00:26:784 (4,1) - for symmetry: http://puu.sh/2vKFY. Good idea actually. I never even thought about reusing the slider from before. Changed
00:40:163 (1,2,3) - Flow isn't good, consider making (1,2) a blanket: http://puu.sh/2vKQm Made a huge change to this part. Hopefully it looks good.

Serenity
00:26:987 (1,2) - Make a blanket here? http://puu.sh/2vLD9
00:30:433 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLE5
00:32:663 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2vLG2 When I did the first one, these next two came naturally after, nice idea!
00:48:271 (1) - Place under 00:48:068 (2) - to improve flow: http://puu.sh/2vLIS I personally like how this one goes, but I adjusted the (1,2) before the kiai time starts a little bit to make a bit better.
00:57:798 (5) - Consider re-working on the shape of this slider, it's not smooth. Changed it to somewhat match a slider later on in the song so it isn't so plain. Thanks!

Solitude
Couldn't find anything wrong here, good work. Thanks

Quite good work on this map so far, so I'll drop my star here: Thanks!
Good luck!

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 755
PreviewTime: 47611
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.05
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:比翼の羽根 (TV Size)
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Miko
Source:Yosuga no Sora
Tags:riya Visual Novel Eroge Opening those DakeDekaane
BeatmapID:229283
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Looks very good. but I'm not so sure about third fountain in the kiai time. I think it does not suit that well. Other than that, very good mapset. Good luck! I was unsure of this myself, but I agree that it might be a bit over the top.

Peace

00:01:245 (1,2,3) - i suggest a perfect triangle rather than scattered triangle Moved around a bit

00:17:460 (2,3,1) - ^ Moved the previous (1) and the (2) mentioned slightly.

01:06:108 (3,5) - blanket these made slight changes.

01:20:703 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern is bit too hard on easy. consider making at least a slider I personally like how it works. Leaving as is. It works well with the 4 sliders I did before. If more say something about this though I might make 2 slider 2 circle patterns maybe

Loneliness

Why is this difficulty using different CS? make it consistent Guest difficulty, I'll let him decide

Other than that, its fine

Serenity

00:09:353 (1,1) - make these two closer therefore players wouldn't get confused. since it has the same distance with others eventhough it has slower SV I definitely understand what you mean here. The only thing is that anything I do unless I stack it directly underneath the end, will look really really ugly. If another person says something about this, I'll definitely try to work something out. As for now though, I think its perfectly fine.

00:51:311 - i think there should be a note here because it matches with the vocal It would have to be an extended slider, but I think the hold on the 'no' doesn't need to be mapped as its not very strong, left as is for now.

00:54:554 (8) - NC v

00:55:771 (1) - remove NC NC follows the vocals here, and it starts a new part after the (8). Left alone for now. I personally don't like starting NCs before the big white lines either.

Solitude

00:25:568 (5) - ctrl + g would look better Actually it does, changed.

00:43:811 (2,3,4,5,6) - this looks like stream... maybe you should fix it I still personally like these anti's, it matches well with the vocals but again, you are probably like the 10th person to comment on them now. Didn't realize people were against them so much XD (Not saying they, or you are, but this seems to be the most pointed out thing on my map)

00:52:933 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make it to a perfect square Was never intended to be a square, I'll move these around slightly, but I'm not aiming for a square

Verlaren wrote:

Hi Lanturn!
From Aincrad's Modding queue~

Yosuga no Sora >3< \o/

Peace

1. 00:05:805 - 00:07:427 - In easy diff should not be slowing. Fix it please. I've had lots of other people talk to me about this, and I've asked around. Its fine because the slider would be very very long otherwise taking up over half the screen. The song feels slow at this part anyways.

Serenity

1. 00:52:933(5) - NC. New vocal part. Done, but I put it at 00:53:135 because the 'to' is just a lead up note to the main part.

Solitude

1. 01:05:602(5) - remove note. This one is kind of iffy, but I changed the hitsounds around and it plays much better with the note in. Leaving this as is.
2. 01:11:885(8) - ^ You can definitely hear the drums here at this point. I made some changes to this as well, though so its a bit easier to tell.

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xxheroxx wrote:

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• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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Loneliness

• • HP Drain Rate: 4 /*This got a bit harder than original one, but well, I think it's ok as this is not intended as an Easy, both done
  • Overall Difficulty: 4 /*^
  • 00:14:015 (3) - Flip this slider vertically and move it at x:203 y:43. /*Ok
  • 00:22:934 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 00:23:541. /*And this pattern came back, done
  • 00:33:676 (6) - I understand what you're trying to do here but this slider could be better: /*I like how mine looks, I tried to do something similar but the peak before the zigzag didn't appear or didn't have a nice appealing for me
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:43:812 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier. /*Ok, and done something else
  • 00:57:798 (4) - Same as before, try this: /*Made some very similar
  
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xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Remove unnecessary transparency from "DakeDekaane.png" and "those.png". Done, there is a bit of transparency left on those because I need it to be the same size as DakeDekaane for positioning. It shouldn't be too excessive.

Peace

• • 00:03:880 (1) - A single spinner doesn't really fit here imo, if you really want to have it then move it at 00:05:907. Done, spinner is much longer and better now.
  • 00:16:649 (1,2,3,1) - Try this pattern: See below
  • 00:19:082 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next circle. I didn't really like having the long slider placed on the 2 and 4 parts. I'd rather have it on the whole 1, and it sounds much better. No change.
  • 00:28:811 (3) - End this slider 1/1 later. Since this is an easy difficulty, and the bpm (148) is somewhat high. I'm trying to leave a bit of breathing room here and there. I know I'm missing the end of the vocals but its probably the best spot to add a much needed space here. No change here as well.
  • 00:38:338 (3) - This slider doesn't flow that well, try to make it like this: Changed this around a bit. Looks much better.
  • 00:49:689 (3,4,1) - Try this: Made a few changes to this section, looks better now.

Serenity

• • 00:06:109 (1) - Same as "Peace", just delete this spinner and add a slider, or try this: Changed it to two spinners, the third spinner would be a bit fast for this difficulty.
  • 00:54:554 (4) - Try this: see last response
  • 00:57:798 (4) - Same thing here, I know that you're trying to follow the voice but avoid making long sliders, they're kinda boring to play, try to follow the drums.
  • 01:14:014 (3) - ^
  • 01:15:635 (5) - ^ In general, I made a few changes early on, but I left some of the later ones in because I prefer the held notes to the vocals. This difficulty is just a Normal+/easy Hard

Solitude

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6 I don't believe this is necessary, especially since this is a hard+/easy insane difficulty. Its supposed to be about the same difficulty as Miko, not easier. Hope this makes sense. I never have a problem playing with the current 7/8/7 setup I've got going and I believe it suits it better.
  • 00:03:474 (5) - Why a finish here? Add a whistle like the other diffs. Swapped to a whistle.
  • 00:45:838 (1) - This spinner is too short, delete it and map this part in a different way. (if you want to keep a spinner start it at 00:44:825 or 00:45:028) Changed to remove spinner.
  • 00:58:406 (2,3,4) - Try this: I personally like my current setup, I made slight adjustments around this, but not much.
  • 01:00:027 (3,4) - Keep spacing consistent here, move (4) at x:182 y:320. I made the spacing a bit better, just not the way you suggested. I made it a little bit more understandable hopefully. I like the triplet anti-jump and having it revert back just after (hopefully using the previous slider as a warning)
  • 01:00:635 (5) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:01:041. I've tried this many many times, and it just sounds/plays horrible. I've had people test play it as well and they said it doesn't play well. so I'm not going to do this. I'm sure its mostly because of how the music fades out a bit here.
  • 01:15:635 (9) - Same as "Serenity", try this: I like this slider because it gives off an indication its the end of this 'section' and something new is coming up. No change here as well. Another reason is that I need the spacing for the double drum hit (End of the slider, and beginning of the next one) so your suggestion wouldn't work as well.
  • 01:23:946 (2) - Same thing here, delete this slider and try a different pattern. I agree to this. Changed around a bit.

Call me after your fixes for a recheck. Thanks,After DakeDekaane is done with his side of the mod, I'll send you a PM. Thanks

xxheroxx wrote:

General

• • "comboburst-1.png" and "comboburst-2.png" are almost nsfw, mind removing them? (if I were I'd remove all your combobursts, I don't really like them to be honest) I really like them, but I understand about the nsfw part (on combo-1 definitely) For comboburst-1, I photoshopped the questionable parts (got rid of the transparency on the clothing) so it should honestly be a lot more sfw, and I changed Comboburst-2 completely. I don't plan on removing these, and I'm hoping Comboburst-1 is sfw enough now.

Peace

• • 00:43:203 (4) - Add a new combo. Done.
  • 00:51:514 (1) - I kinda understand your combo placement here but it's better to add a new combo almost every 8 white tick imo, don't set your combos according to how you map patterns. (I'm suggesting you to remove this new combo and to add it at the previous circle)
  • 00:55:771 (5,1) - Same thing here.
  • 01:01:649 (3) - Add a new combo.
  • 01:08:541 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to the next slider. Changed the majority of these around. I'm not 100% sure of starting NC's a white tick before the big white one is a good idea. (the first couple notes before the kiai time is just lead in. I added an NC just after that so its a bit more consistent. I made a few changes here and there, and I personally like how its set up now.
  • 01:20:703 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow here can be better, try this pattern: I liked this. Just hoping its not too confusing for the newer players. Changed anyhow

Serenity

• • 01:03:271 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it at the next circle.
  • 01:08:946 (7) - Add a new combo here and remove the one placed at the next slider. Did both above as it follows the vocals a lot better.
  • 01:25:568 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern: I like this. Changed

Solitude

• • 00:01:245 (1) - This slider is noisy, add a S:C2 section here so the sliderslide is muted. wow my mistake.. can't believe I missed this somehow... Thanks!
  • 00:43:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing doesn't fit the song imo, if you want to keep it then reduce the slider velocity of 00:44:825 (7) and 00:45:636 (9) and keep the reduced spacing. Definitely don't want to reduce the slider velocity here as there really isn't any slow down. This was just meant to be simple anti jumps but it really has recieved a lot of negative response lately, so I went and changed this. I also changed the anti jump later on in the song since it was getting even worse responses lol.

That's all, call me again after your fixes.