1. Hard (3.36 stars, 530 notes)
2. Insane (4.51 stars, 707 notes)
3. lfj's Insane (4.66 stars, 814 notes)
4. lfj's Normal (1.96 stars, 279 notes)

jonathanlfj wrote:

first~
and star \o/
and can i take normal then? seems ur soloing insane

HabiHolic wrote:

[jonathanlfj's Normal]

00:31:746 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120608 sure
00:35:579 (3) - add whistle
00:40:913 (4) - ^ dont feel whistles fit in these places since the music is rather quiet
01:28:746 (3) - How about this Rhythm ? i tried to avoid having connected 1/2 rhythms in this diff, wound want to keep this for the sake of difficulty control


02:37:579 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120620 did something similar
03:02:913 (1) - delete note? ok
03:18:246 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120621
03:20:913 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1120622 kinda breaks spacing here, i'd just sacrifice the symmetry
all suggestion~ good luck~

jonathanlfj wrote:

eggrolls are delicious

EDIT: STARRRR

Rush_FTK wrote:

Seemed a well-listening songs.Thank you to bring this songs to us.

Here are some suggestion.
[box=Mod]I'm sorry for my poor English at first..
Sorry if my mod is terrible... I hope my mod can help you.


[General]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Green line is not snapped.(02:24:249→02:24:246) i did not seem to find a green line here?

[lfj's Normal]
Warning(You must fix it):
- Object is not snapped.(04:19:911/04:31:911) Fixed


[Hard]
Suggestion:
- 02:52:329 (1) Let the spinner end up at 02:54:579,add a note in 02:54:746,add a spinner at 02:54:913 ~ 02:57:079.

My Opinion:
- 00:22:913 (1,1) there is no any stress note in 00:22:996.Why not let Spinner begin at 00:22:913? i'll keep this because i wanted to emphasize the cymbal in the music
- 00:42:913 (4) Played a little uncomfortable. Fixed
- 02:06:579 (7) turnover it? should be ok imo

[Insane]
Suggestion:
- 03:48:246 add a note. theres a note~

My Opinion:
- 00:22:913 (1,1) Same as hard.
- 01:02:246 (7,8) swap?
- 01:02:246 (7,8) mobe to x=20 y=92? fixed a bit differently
- 04:25:079 ~ 04:38:579 not finished? just finished =v=


A awesome beatmap!
Good luck!

apaffy wrote:

lunarlfj

time to return the favor<3 <3

[General]
uwaaaaa, there's nothing wrong here...

[Insane]

1. 00:45:413 (6) - ctrl+G? movement between 5 + 6 currently is a bit odd i think i'll keep this for now, the pulling back motion seemed ok and i wanted to keep the spacing a bit conservative here
2. 00:59:413 (4) - you could have done something cool with the 1/4 drums here i guess ;_; Fixed~
3. 01:29:079 (3,4,5,1) - You could make a square with these! It would kinda look cool asthetic wise... i made like a rhombus lmao
4. 01:50:913 (2) - if you're doing a whistle every two measures, shouldn't there be one here? or are the whistles attached to something else? Fixed. yeah i was basing it mainly off what i heard rip
5. 03:13:746 - aww, I was kind of hoping you'd map this part like jonny did - the piano has some really nice stuff in there im debating this lol..ghufajkdseds

fantastic

[Hard]

1. 00:49:079 (7) - later on, you handle this as two circles (specifically here 02:09:079 (7,8) - ) - why can't the same be done here, i think it would fit better and put the correct emphasis on 00:49:246 - ! There are a few more instances of that drum stop that could be done the same way too, up to you though ww fixed
2. 03:07:579 (5,6,7) - t-this might be a bit confusing for hard players, not sure though changed to illuminati triangle
3. 03:25:579 (5) - why didn't you ctrl - g this? it would look so prettttyyy! same with 03:28:246 (5) - ;w; i wanted to keep a wavy motion with the cursor orz
4. 03:40:246 (1,2,3) - omg aaaaaaaa hngggngngnghgngf gnhnghnhgnhg
5. 04:09:079 - some of the gaps in this whole section were a bit confusing - there are a couple places where I was expecting a note due to vocals or bass, but there wasn't one there (like right here for instane) fixed i hope

wow, i'm totally copying this hard for any hard diffs i'm making in the future

[Mama Jonny's Normal]

1. www circles too big www wwwwwwww

This map is too pro for my modding skills. Hope this helps even slightly, and good luck~! (frankly this shouldn't really be kd-able ww) no you are kd-able w

smallboat wrote:

HI,Sakuya. o/

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1.Seems can add sliderslide mute the sliderslide sound? i think it'll be ok =v=
2.Add 'ghost' tag? huh?


[Hard] (Seems missed many whistle?) yes fixed lol

00:36:246 (5) - Forget to add a NC here? oops
00:52:246 (1) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
00:57:579 (3) - Forget to add a NC here? (Like 00:41:579 (1).) Fixed
01:48:246 (1) - Add a whistle? (Because you have add this in ins diff) Fixed
01:53:579 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:58:913 (1) - Seems missed a whistle again.(Because you have add this in ins diff) Fixed
02:01:579 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:04:246 (1) - Missed drum hs? ?
02:00:579 (5) - Perhaps can use ctrl+g. Fixed
02:18:913 (8) - Try to set a NC here? i kept to maintain consistency
02:40:246 (4) - Set a NC and remove clap,change whistle? (Look 02:40:246 (1) in ins diff) Fixed
03:53:579 (4) - NC? Fixed
04:17:413 (1,2) - Swap NC? (Check 04:17:579 (1) in ins diff.) Fixed
04:21:579 (6) - Add a NC? kept this
04:26:913 (4) - ^ Fixed

[Insane]

00:50:079 (2) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
01:18:746 (5) - Move to (312|212) make anti-jump? Fixed
02:12:746 (2) - Stack 02:10:913 (1) head? i'll keep the pinwheel w
02:41:079 (8) - Perhaps can use ctrl+g? Fixed
03:27:579 (3,4) - Feel add whistle at head is good better.(Like 03:24:913 (3,4).) Fixed
03:33:246 (3) - Perhaps can stack better. Fixed
04:10:913 (4) - DS changed(jump),so I suggest can set a NC here. Fixed

Good luck ~

jonathanlfj wrote:

apaffy wrote:

i have taught you well, but you forgot to FIRE IN THE HOLE
wow apaffy you missed