Sieg wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Recheck! Hello

General

hitcircleoverlay.png, spinner-osu.png, sliderpoint10.png, sliderpoint30.png are not visible, this is unrankable not reallyYes really it is unrankable now add them all
- scorebar-bg.png, scorebar-colour-0.png, scorebar-kidanger2.png, scorebar-kidanger.png, scorebar-ki.png, lighting.png are missed, to complete the skin yep, I just don't care on scorebarAdd the lighting[/color]


Insane

Overmapped diff is overmapped, the streams are wrong just wrong No, every single stream follows lyrics/music there.No it doesnt, ive posted points below in my mod what Must be changed

00:14:099 (5,6) - Spacing change yes, spacing change, so?So it needs fixing ofc, it doesnt follow the map or the song at all thus is not needed
00:27:118 (8,9) - ^same

HellDawn wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

Easy

01:27:627 (3) - Find another type of slider this is not good for Easy and shouldnt happen ARE YOU SURE ? OFCOURSE NO!

Thank you sieg updated for me <3, you know my style

jericho2442 wrote:

Hi, Recheck! Hello

General

hitcircleoverlay.png, spinner-osu.png, sliderpoint10.png, sliderpoint30.png are not visible, this is unrankable not reallyYes really it is unrankable now add them all

What I get from ranking criteria is that -
Gameplay elements must be visible. You cannot make any element that will impair the playability of the map invisible as it will make the map unintuitive or even impossible to play.
hitcircleoverlay.png - not impair the playability of the map in anyway, because overlay is joined to hitcircle.png to make effect that unable to reproduce in pair hitcircle + hitcircleoverlay what actually make hitcircleoverlay not needed.
spinner-osu.png - imo not impair the playability of the map, it has spin and clear and I believe this osu string is just not necessary
sliderpoint10.png and sliderpoint30.png - I can agree on this but if this really needed to improve the playability bacuse I see so many skins and maps that hasn't sliderpoints score and imo they just distract player from map.
If I get wrong understanding of ranking criteria on skins please explain me this things.



- scorebar-bg.png, scorebar-colour-0.png, scorebar-kidanger2.png, scorebar-kidanger.png, scorebar-ki.png, lighting.png are missed, to complete the skin yep, I just don't care on scorebarAdd the lighting[/color]

Oh yes, lighting. That what was missing in standard osu!template skin. I'll search for this because I like how standard looks.


Insane

Overmapped diff is overmapped, the streams are wrong just wrong No, every single stream follows lyrics/music there.No it doesnt, ive posted points below in my mod what Must be changed

00:14:099 (5,6) - Spacing change yes, spacing change, so?So it needs fixing ofc, it doesnt follow the map or the song at all thus is not needed
00:27:118 (8,9) - ^same

Ok, so that the reason?
00:14:099 (5,6) - fixed, but I want to say that in my mind little (0,2x) spacing incises from circle to slider on hard+ is not that thing that ruin the flow or plays bad.
00:27:118 (7,8,9,1) - this is just so easy playable pattern and firs music chords so I don't know why this is must be fixed on insane

adding more to insane

SPOILER

00:20:168 (4,5,6,7,8) - i rarely say this, but this stream is just total nonsense, please define in a legitimate reason why you used the stream here, what section and intrument it follows and the reasoning behind it, or remove it
It may seems to look that way on just quick view in editor, but this streams is music wise for insane. Why this? The main difference from so popular (and imo bad) random triplets or random overmap (which created definitely just to complete rhythm) is that lyrics that "speeds-up" this spots. You can here
00:20:168 (4,6,8) - is guitar
00:20:300 (5) - start of "most"
00:20:565 (7) - is end of s in "most" and actually one note you can call overmap but it competes the overall rhythm of this "speed-up"
More over this little stream have nice hotsounding created to complete and vary the whole rhythm.
I hope my thoughts is clear on this because I'll repeat that English is not my native and this is somehow hard to me explain complicated things.

00:26:317 (3,4,5,6) - this stream follows nothing and also doesnt follow your own style, this stream shouldent be here musically or map wise, needs removing
Here we have "such a" and guitar. And related previous stream

00:29:491 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again please a logical and musicaly legitimate reason for this stream or remove
Same reason here, " should be banned". But more over we add some "speed-ups" soft whistles to rhythm on previous stream and this is just complete them.

00:33:493 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - yea well same comment for everything i post, please reply with a logical reason for every time i link
00:33:885 (6) - this is helps to represent 8 9 10 and complete this "speed-up" also such "connectors" between sliders plays, sounds and reads so easy.
00:34:679 (8,9,10) - represent can

00:39:059 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
follows "the most loneliest", moreover made very wise I think with mix of standard drum and normal sounds which in result give so awesome hitsounding.
00:45:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
absolutely ^ the same as above

01:04:853 (4,5,6,7,8) -
vocals - "such a lonely day"

01:11:235 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
vocals and to complete the whole pattern of hitsouns and rhythm

02:01:481 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
absolutely ^ the same as above

02:07:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
and again

02:13:870 (2,3,4,5,6) -
and again

overmapping is a bad habit and one which i shall from now on be trying to cut down in osu!, i will be keeping a very close eye on this map to make sure it improves and becomes rankable while being much less overmapped, also your attitude to replieing to mods in this whole topic is extremely bad, learn to be polite and accept that people have spent there free time to give you a mod. please improve in these factors, bad attitude mappers need to improve same as bad attitude modders do. ok best of luck i will be back once you have fixed everything within my post and the edis to the quote

I agree on this strongly and after some discussion with other people as result I decided to refuse from this streams so no point in insane because of this. But hard was adjusted a little. As for my attitude I wrote before and I really promise to get more attention to this because I don't want to make a bad image of myself.

Hi, from the Queue!

Easy

01:27:627 (3) - Find another type of slider this is not good for Easy and shouldnt happen ARE YOU SURE ? OFCOURSE NO!

Thank you sieg updated for me <3, you know my style

I was acutually the one who comment over this for her to post over when i was helping her mod since im currently helping her modding wise. unexpected slider speed changes, wether it is done by crushing a slider or a point makes no diff to me.. so yes this slider is not good for a easy and needs to be changed, easy should never have such things in. sigh also try to reply with something what makes sense to the mod, your reply just seems nonsense and that doesnt help a modder know your view or improve in the long run
sorry about that

Wiinter wrote:

the center of your spinner is not in the center and the way it moves while you're spinning is really annoying :v fix that please

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Sorry but I'm having trouble adjusting the timing here since the notes keep snapping wrong and I have to keep starting over and over, which isn't getting me anywhere...

For what I managed to see most of the offsets are fine but some of the them might be off like on the beginning are 6ms early and some on the kiai might be ~20ms early, I suggest you ask an expert timer for this.

Again I apologise.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Sieg ~ Hello :3

• • I don't like your BG, I'm sure that you can find another one to use that fits better with this song.

• • Approach Rate: 3
  • 00:22:332 (1) - This slider isn't perfectly simmetrycal, it can be better.
  
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  • 00:41:453 (4) - I don't really like this slider, try to make it like this:
  
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  • 00:47:835 (4) - Same as before, this slider isn't perfectly simmetrycal, you used a lot of simmetry in this diff so make sure everything is perfect.
  • 00:55:014 (2) - Try to make it like this:
  
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  • 01:13:363 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to make a better shape.
  • 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard compared to the rest of this diff, try this pattern:
  
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  • 02:08:180 (2) - Remove 1 repeat and start this slider at 02:09:732.

• • 00:14:099 (3) - Convert this slider in 3 circles.
  • 00:14:886 (4,1) - Delete (4) and move (1) 1/3 earlier.
  • 00:26:317 (2) - Convert this slider in 4 circles. (or 2 1/3 sliders)
  • 00:43:846 (4) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:51:823 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:33:926 (1) - Too many repeats here! Try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:35:082 (5) - Reverse this slider. (Ctrl + g)
  • 00:43:846 (4,5,6) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:50:228 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, don't stack these circles and try a different spacing.
  • 01:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pentagon perfectly simmetrical. (compose --> create polygon circles)
  • 01:33:387 (1) - This slider is almost overlapping with the previous one, move it a bit down.
  • 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:18:284 (5) - Convert this slider into a 1/6 circles stream.

1. yes
2. no

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
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General

• • I don't like your BG, I'm sure that you can find another one to use that fits better with this song.

Seriously? I don't think this is really a big deal. I don't have suggestions to change bg until this but many people says current one fitting perfectly.


HellDawn's Easy

• • Approach Rate: 3
  Can I ask why this in "You should fix" category? I don't get this, if you look closely to this diff you can call this super easy and AR 2 fits that description perfectly and we don't have 3+ notes on screen at time so idk why you force this to AR 3
  • 00:22:332 (1) - This slider isn't perfectly simmetrycal, it can be better. okay
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:41:453 (4) - I don't really like this slider, try to make it like this: this slider is fine to me
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:47:835 (4) - Same as before, this slider isn't perfectly simmetrycal, you used a lot of simmetry in this diff so make sure everything is perfect. okay
  • 00:55:014 (2) - Try to make it like this: okay
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:13:363 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to make a better shape. nope
  • 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4) - This part is way too hard compared to the rest of this diff, try this pattern: I don't feel so, but I'll think about this
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:08:180 (2) - Remove 1 repeat and start this slider at 02:09:732.

nope, I don't feel this is necessary


Normal

• • 00:14:099 (3) - Convert this slider in 3 circles. current slider plays much much better than 5 circles in a row at start
  • 00:14:886 (4,1) - Delete (4) and move (1) 1/3 earlier. no sense because I need repeats on 00:15:941 and 00:16:739 and music flow need a whistle on 00:15:143
  • 00:26:317 (2) - Convert this slider in 4 circles. (or 2 1/3 sliders) [/color]
  • 00:43:846 (4) - Try this pattern: that may be nice
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:51:823 (1,2,3,4) - Try this: nope, I don't think this spot needs this
  
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  • 01:33:926 (1) - Too many repeats here! Try to do something like this: on purpose, not going to change this
  
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Hard

• • 00:35:082 (5) - Reverse this slider. (Ctrl + g) eh, but this will ruin the flow, why?
  • 00:43:846 (4,5,6) - Try this pattern: I feel this must be stacked to represent a long vocal and make little slowdown in flow
  
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  • 00:50:228 (4,5,6) - Same thing here, don't stack these circles and try a different spacing. same goes here and I'm not going to change spacing because this is a slow song and has almost zero spots that can be mapped as jumps\spacing change in map
  • 01:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pentagon perfectly simmetrical. (compose --> create polygon circles) okay
  • 01:33:387 (1) - This slider is almost overlapping with the previous one, move it a bit down. but this looks nice
  • 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this pattern: I think current patterns is better
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:18:284 (5) - Convert this slider into a 1/6 circles stream. this slider made on purpose

Afterxeffect wrote:

Holy shit! Such a fun beatmap! And so far the only one i can do the hardest difficulty without failing! Can't wait till this gets approved!

1. According to AIMod, there are some kiai times unsnapped. Ugh, I checked them and they look alright.. perhaps AIMod is sayin senseless stuff? check it by yourself if you can. I tried checking it with AIBat and nothing. The issue seems to appear only on AIMod. Weird..
2. Personally dislike the background. There are plenty of awesome artworks around that give a more sad and lonely atmosphere. You can get these at Pixiv. I really recommend you these. o3o

1. 00:29:491 (4,5,6) - This pattern doesn't really play good imo. I think it would play better if you move 00:29:491 (4) a bit up, and make the curve a bit better. Also, CTRL+J 00:30:294 (6). That would play much better imo. Here's a screenshot so you can see what i'm reffering to and how to do it if you like. It would give the map more blanket structure and better flow for (6)
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:082 (5) - This slider doesn't really fit with the vocals. It's just a long boring curve. The vocals give a "wavy" slider feeling imo, so a wavy slider would fit more with the music. I was trying to make a curved slider like yours but with waves and i failed so hard. This is what i've got instead of what i really wanted, still good, but not what i wanted. At least you get my idea with this.. so try to consider changing the shape of this slider into something more fitting with the voice. Remember, this screenshot is just an idea :p
   
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3. 00:39:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These notes look kinda messy like that. I think a curved simple form with them is more than enough. Feels good to play, and looks less messy imo. I know it's very basic and not visually outstanding, but flow is important too! well my suggestion is to move notes like this, just like you did at 00:46:239 (3,4,5,6,7,8).
   
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4. 00:51:823 (2,3) - The flow of these two sliders is bad. I think here it's better to keep the Distance Snap, and remove the jump by using ctrl+g on 00:51:823 (2).
5. 00:57:408 (1) - ^ I know you're trying to make jumps to make the diff a bit more challenging since you don't have an [insane], but at some parts it's better to keep the DS for the sake of good flow. Better have simple patterns with DS than uncomfortable jumps imo~
6. 01:08:044 (3) - ^
7. 01:24:494 (3) - ^
8. 01:30:787 (2) - ^
9. 01:34:432 (4) - Nazi :p move some grids down to make a better curve with those circles
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - When I tested the map I failed at these. It surprised me.. I wasn't expecting them.. really. Now that I manually test that part I can pass it, but at the 1st time it was weird. o.o
    
    *Consider adding some whistles at the guitar calm parts such as at 00:13:551 (3) start. That would sound good with the guitar. Leaving the slider without hitsounds sounds empty.. also at 00:15:143 (6) start, 00:16:739 (4), etc. Feels weird to ignore that relaxing guitar melody, so consider adding some whistles to follow it!
    
    Overall, good difficulty. The flow fails at some parts.. you don't need to force jumps in such a slow song. It's better to ctrl+g these notes listed there ^ imo. That would improve the flow.
    _____________________

Kei wrote:

Testplayed [Hard] like you wanted.. but.. I'm modding it in detail this time ([Hard] only)
Hello Kei, thanks for looking in

General

1. According to AIMod, there are some kiai times unsnapped. Ugh, I checked them and they look alright.. perhaps AIMod is sayin senseless stuff? check it by yourself if you can. I tried checking it with AIBat and nothing. The issue seems to appear only on AIMod. Weird..
   Yep, I see this on many maps, guess this is AIMod issue
   
2. Personally dislike the background. There are plenty of awesome artworks around that give a more sad and lonely atmosphere. You can get these at Pixiv. I really recommend you these. o3o

But I really don't want to change current.

[Hard]

1. 00:29:491 (4,5,6) - This pattern doesn't really play good imo. I think it would play better if you move 00:29:491 (4) a bit up, and make the curve a bit better. Also, CTRL+J 00:30:294 (6). That would play much better imo. Here's a screenshot so you can see what i'm reffering to and how to do it if you like. It would give the map more blanket structure and better flow for (6)
   
   SPOILER

   
   Yep, 4 and 5 moved up little bit but don't think ctrl+j on 6 is a good idea mainly because I think this little flow break fits vocal well.
   
2. 00:35:082 (5) - This slider doesn't really fit with the vocals. It's just a long boring curve. The vocals give a "wavy" slider feeling imo, so a wavy slider would fit more with the music. I was trying to make a curved slider like yours but with waves and i failed so hard. This is what i've got instead of what i really wanted, still good, but not what i wanted. At least you get my idea with this.. so try to consider changing the shape of this slider into something more fitting with the voice. Remember, this screenshot is just an idea :p
   
   SPOILER

   
   Nice try :p, but seriously yep vocal is wavy and slider is long and boring but this is better way imo than this like wubwub sliders, and unfortunately there is not so much room left.
   
3. 00:39:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These notes look kinda messy like that. I think a curved simple form with them is more than enough. Feels good to play, and looks less messy imo. I know it's very basic and not visually outstanding, but flow is important too! well my suggestion is to move notes like this, just like you did at 00:46:239 (3,4,5,6,7,8).
   
   SPOILER

   
   Yep, I guess it was intended but now I can't remember why in that eh "jumpy" way, so changed.
   
4. 00:51:823 (2,3) - The flow of these two sliders is bad. I think here it's better to keep the Distance Snap, and remove the jump by using ctrl+g on 00:51:823 (2).
   Yes
   
5. 00:57:408 (1) - ^ I know you're trying to make jumps to make the diff a bit more challenging since you don't have an [insane], but at some parts it's better to keep the DS for the sake of good flow. Better have simple patterns with DS than uncomfortable jumps imo~
   You so much right
6. 01:08:044 (3) - ^
7. 01:24:494 (3) - ^
8. 01:30:787 (2) - ^
9. 01:34:432 (4) - Nazi :p move some grids down to make a better curve with those circles
   
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10. 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - When I tested the map I failed at these. It surprised me.. I wasn't expecting them.. really. Now that I manually test that part I can pass it, but at the 1st time it was weird. o.o
    But this is fine.
    
    *Consider adding some whistles at the guitar calm parts such as at 00:13:551 (3) start. That would sound good with the guitar. Leaving the slider without hitsounds sounds empty.. also at 00:15:143 (6) start, 00:16:739 (4), etc. Feels weird to ignore that relaxing guitar melody, so consider adding some whistles to follow it!
    I love my way with whistles there.
    
    Overall, good difficulty. The flow fails at some parts.. you don't need to force jumps in such a slow song. It's better to ctrl+g these notes listed there ^ imo. That would improve the flow.
    _____________________

Really love this song. I would give you the replay but i think i didn't save it properly lol.

Oh and, watch out. According to AIBat there's an unsnapped slider (repeat) at 01:29:972 (1) in HellDawn's Easy. Fix that.
fixed

Best of luck to you~

Thanks

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Sorry for the Huge delay, Sieg. Here is my mod anyways (1st mod as a BAT)
Hello

• Timing:[/b] According to the AiMod, there are inconsistent in the Uninherited Timing Points (Red Lines) between Easy - Normal and Hard. You should check out this properly and make them consistency.
rechecked this, and found 1 little red line missed, fxd

• Combo Colours: I like to see at least 3 combo colours in all the mapsets, with just 2 everything looks pretty repetitive. Looking the BG, I think a Grey colour is fitting here
Yes, I guess so.

[Helldawn's Easy:]

• 00:29:491 (3) - I'd add a Whistle at the Slider end, because follow properly the Vocal.
+
• 00:35:082 (4) - Hmm.. Maybe a single combo fits fine here since it is a long Slider, so I'd add a New Combo here
+
• 00:51:823 - 01:12:565 - Here, you can add more Soft whistles to match better the vocals, Actually this section sounds kinda empty without them
+
• 01:11:767 (x) - Follow the 1/1 pattern, here it sounds really empty when the music it is still running.
+
• 01:16:554 - 01:35:444 - It is better if you map this Kiai with the same Hitsound sampleset, you can use some soft finishes and stuff, but would be better if you map with the Normal sample set, it sounds more fitting. Give it a try pls.
+
• 02:03:532 (5) - I suggest you a single combo here as well, so Add it one please
+
• 02:08:180 (2) - This diff. is fully of long sliders (in general your Easy diffs. looks like this ), this looong slider with 2 repetitions makes the diff really boring to play. Try to do a pattern like this one, to make the diff. a bit more enjoyable at least:

SPOILER

+

- Well that's all in this difficulty, is not bad technically but it becomes really boring, even to New players. Full of long Sliders in a low BPM song, I think that you could make this map more interesting, covering more beats with objects, but ok, that's my personal thoughts.

[Normal:]

• Settings:
--> Actually, the approach rate is a bit exaggerated looking the low BPM that you have in this song. For this reason I'd reduce it by 1 Tick (AR-1)
agree
• 00:20:168 (2) - *This is really nazi*- Maybe you can make this Slider a bit curvy, will provide a better transition between the previous and the next Slider.
done
• 00:21:511 (4) - Add a Whistle at the Slider beginning to follow better the Vocal.
I feel it is a little excessive whistle
• 00:34:277 (4) - (^)
added
• 00:38:262 (3,1) - I'd swap the combo placement in these Notes, the pitch in the music it is higher in (3), so add the New Combo in (3) and remove it in (1).
done
• 00:59:801 (6) - A bit nazi, but why don't you do a totally symetric pattern here? To do that, move (6) to x:124 y:288, after that you'll have a minor spacing mistake but it doesn't hurt because is really short
yes, but this plays not so natural as current one
• 01:08:044 (2) - *This is really nazi (again)* Make this Slider a bit curvy for a better transition in the pattern
done
• 01:10:172 (1,2) - The rhythm here is not the best in my opinion, the note and the Slider is not following properly the music in my personal point of view. For a better Rhythm, I'd change the placement of the Notes in the Timeline. I mean, first you should add the Slider, this Slider have to start in 01:10:172 and finish in 01:10:704. Then the Note should be placed in 01:10:969, as I show you in the following screenshoot:

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actually I think 1,2 is pretty authentically fits music and music-flowed nice with 01:11:235 (3,4) -
• 01:20:542 (1,2) - Here you made the same mistake as above, in this case plays much better if you add the slider at the first time and after this Slider you should add the Note. Follow the previous screenshoot pls.
same here, oh I guess my rhythm feeling not so great all the time but I think current way is good
• 01:21:870 (4,5) - This is not following the vocal properly, if you check properly the 'long' vocal starts where you placed (4). So, would be better if you delete (4), and after that move the Slider (5) to 01:21:870 (Where it was placed (1)), then this Slider have to finish in 01:22:933. To ilustrate you better, take an screenshoot:

SPOILER

I think the main issue is here is that I love to switch between vocals and music, this may be not the best way idk, I need to think abut this
• 01:33:926 (1) - This Slider with a lot of repetitions it becomes boring at the time to play the map. It makes the pattern more enjoyable if you try to do something like this:

SPOILER

I know this, you right but this slider is sooooo much intended and I'm really don't want to change this.
• 01:46:927 (3) - I find the Soft Whistle in this Note useless, I think that it is not following anything in the song. Hmm.. Could you remove it pls?
yep
• 02:05:335 (2) - In this Slider, Claps at the start and the end of this Slider sounds really fine to me, I think that it is a good idea if you add them. The music it is exactly the same as 02:11:543 (3,4), and you added claps in this notes, would be consistent too
oh, I guess I just missed that, fixed
• 02:18:284 (5) - And for consistency here as well, add a Clap at the Slider start.
done

- Some hitsounds inconsistency and rhythm could be better in some sections, but I mentioned all of them in my mod xD. If you fix my mod, you will fix these mistakes . I liked this diff.

[Hard:]

• 00:19:114 (3) - It is the hardest diff. in the mapset, so I think that you can risking a bit more with the Rhythm. Reduce the Slider lenght till 00:19:377, then add a Note in 00:19:640, plus: would be good if you mix this new note with the Note in 00:19:903, replacing the notes in a Slider instead.
Yes, I know this will fit hard but such unbalanced in timing part... changed
• 00:21:511 (1) - I'd add a Whistle at the Slider beginning, this pattern sounds kinda empty actually
empty as my soul, lol /jk but seriously idk why, I don't this is need a whistle
• 00:35:082 (5) - I'd do a Ctrl+G in this Slider, it looks like you denied that suggestion in xxheroxx's mod, but still. I agree with him, it increase the flow a bit imo.
yes, http://puu.sh/2ven6 I found "red" way far more natural then "green"
• 00:44:378 (6,1,2) - This jump is completely random and non-fluent (it plays really forced), it doesn't fit in the music. *Remember:* Good jumps must fit with the song in some way, the Reverse selections in correct spaced objects to make a jump is not the best way. To fix that you have to do a Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) in (1).
reversed
• 00:54:483 (4,5) - The stacks becomes kinda boring, looking that you have 2 previous Stacked patterns. You can make this more enjoyable if you unstack these Notes.
unstacked
• 01:08:044 (3,4) - The blanket here doesn't look really fluent to me. I'd try something like this for a better flow:

Screenshoot + Code.

36,92,67778,1,2,0:3:0:0:
132,76,68044,2,0,P|172:80|208:64,1,80
164,152,68576,2,0,P|236:132|296:72,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

you pasted wrong code , changed
• 02:00:963 (x) - Add a Note with Normal Sampleset here, follow fine the drums
added
• 02:05:852 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest you to reduce the spacing between these Notes a bit more, at least till 0.7x, will be much more easier in this Hard difficulty (I think that I suggested you something like that in your Evanescence's map)
yes but the main difference this is 1\6 77bpm which is ~100 in 1\4 I guess, and on Evanescence it was ehm 140 and way more than 5 notes, second reason is that with this skin heavily stacked they will look messy
• 02:12:060 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - (^)


- Nice difficulty as well. Kei's suggestions helped you to improve the flow, it plays much better than before now.
yes

Well, that's all.
Maybe you can find a pro timmer for a double check in the timing. If you can do that, feel free to call me back for a recheck.
I really love System of a Down! , and you did a well job with the mapset.
I'll try

TicClick wrote:

Soooo I retimed it using less timing points and fixing early/late offsets. Remove all the red lines you have and copy and paste these:

SPOILER

12762,795.865968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
15930,795.755968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
19641,795.755968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
22305,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
23116,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
23924,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
28419,796.812749003984,4,2,0,30,1,0
32675,796.812749003984,4,2,0,30,1,0
38262,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,1
38394,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
59008,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
63804,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
70193,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
74970,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
76553,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,1
81329,792.602377807133,4,1,0,60,1,1
82914,790.513833992095,4,1,0,60,1,1
86063,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
88415,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
89190,786.369593709043,4,1,0,60,1,1
94163,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
95469,781.046602447279,4,1,0,60,1,0
106664,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
107965,781.25,4,2,0,60,1,0
118891,780.234070221066,4,1,0,60,1,0
120184,777.20207253886,4,1,0,60,1,0
123286,774.193548387097,4,1,0,60,1,0
124834,774.193548387097,4,1,0,60,1,0
126636,775.193798449612,4,1,0,60,1,0
132837,778.210116731518,4,1,0,60,1,0
135705,773.19587628866,4,1,0,60,1,0
138282,718.562874251497,4,1,0,60,1,0
139000,780.234070221066,4,1,0,60,1,0
142120,779.220779220779,4,1,0,60,1,0
145254,820.232399179768,4,1,0,60,1,0

READ THIS BEFORE APPLYING

It ruins some of your sliders, making them sound mistimed, having wrong length etc. If you experience any difficulties with fixing/remapping your patterns that go off, contact me.

Bonus (Hard difficulty)

01:41:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - тут должно быть четыре куска по четыре ноты, а не четыре по пять. Лучше либо делай четыре ноты, либо три ноты и короткий слайдер

• Helldawn's Easy

1. 02:10:511 (3) - Here's clearly missing a clap. You can add it by yourself Sieg, it's inconsistent and he probably forgot to add it.

• Normal

1. 00:52:621 (4) - This pattern would flow much better if you ctrl+g this slider.
2. 01:15:767 (3) - Move 1 grid down for a perfect blanket. Yeah I'm very nazi because these are the final polishments for the diff.
3. 01:34:163 (2) - I personally dislike this slider. Too many repeats that may be unpredictable for a beginner, but I guess it's fine.

• Hard

1. 01:44:060 (5,6,7,8) - Make this stream with a good curved shape? looks a bit messy due to 01:44:320 (7)'s placement. Small change.
   
   Lol nothing else, just that. :3

Kei wrote:

Finally! I've been waiting for this for so many days.
:3

• Helldawn's Easy

1. 02:10:511 (3) - Here's clearly missing a clap. You can add it by yourself Sieg, it's inconsistent and he probably forgot to add it.
   done

• Normal

1. 00:52:621 (4) - This pattern would flow much better if you ctrl+g this slider.
   indeed
2. 01:15:767 (3) - Move 1 grid down for a perfect blanket. Yeah I'm very nazi because these are the final polishments for the diff.
   same, I guess this just shifted because of timing :3
3. 01:34:163 (2) - I personally dislike this slider. Too many repeats that may be unpredictable for a beginner, but I guess it's fine.
   That slider even loose 1 repeat on new timing

• Hard

1. 01:44:060 (5,6,7,8) - Make this stream with a good curved shape? looks a bit messy due to 01:44:320 (7)'s placement. Small change.
   fixed
   
   Lol nothing else, just that. :3

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Yey! Let's see this again :3 (No kds in this post pls)
Hey :3

General:

• 01:48:062 (Break) - You can do a good thing with the break. If you listen the music properly, you will listen a different pitch since 01:48:550 - (Setting the Beat Snap Divisor in 1/4), so would be a good idea if you drag the Break start till 01:48:550
done

Helldawn's Easy:

• 01:29:976 (1) - I think you are missing a Clap at the Slider start, should be better if you add one in this point
done

Normal:

• 01:25:549 (3) - I didn't find the reason to reduce the volume at the Slider start. I think that in 60% provides a good sound listening Vocals and Instrumentals. So, I'd leave it in 60% in this place as well
raised to 40%, 60 sounds too loud as for me, this was repeat slider btw before timing fix

Hard:

• 01:24:495 (3,4) - Ugh.. This antijump plays akwardly to me, is kinda big for a pretty dinamic map. You can maybe add 2 Notes, one in 01:25:549 and other one in 01:25:812 to avoid the antijump, or invent another kind of thing if you want. But I highly suggest you to fix that!
Uh... but I really love the way this made This circle fits this pause I want to make and placement increases this pause. eh... so much intended trick want to keep this.

Minor things, but would be better if you fix all of them before the rank . Call me back again when you are ready

Thanks Mancuso
updated