Testplayed [Hard] like you wanted.. but.. I'm modding it in detail this time ([Hard] only)
General
Oh and, watch out. According to AIBat there's an unsnapped slider (repeat) at 01:29:972 (1) in HellDawn's Easy. Fix that.
Best of luck to you~
Edit: Forgot to give a star ><
General
- According to AIMod, there are some kiai times unsnapped. Ugh, I checked them and they look alright.. perhaps AIMod is sayin senseless stuff? check it by yourself if you can. I tried checking it with AIBat and nothing. The issue seems to appear only on AIMod. Weird..
- Personally dislike the background. There are plenty of awesome artworks around that give a more sad and lonely atmosphere. You can get these at Pixiv. I really recommend you these. o3o
- 00:29:491 (4,5,6) - This pattern doesn't really play good imo. I think it would play better if you move 00:29:491 (4) a bit up, and make the curve a bit better. Also, CTRL+J 00:30:294 (6). That would play much better imo. Here's a screenshot so you can see what i'm reffering to and how to do it if you like. It would give the map more blanket structure and better flow for (6)
- 00:35:082 (5) - This slider doesn't really fit with the vocals. It's just a long boring curve. The vocals give a "wavy" slider feeling imo, so a wavy slider would fit more with the music. I was trying to make a curved slider like yours but with waves and i failed so hard. This is what i've got instead of what i really wanted, still good, but not what i wanted. At least you get my idea with this.. so try to consider changing the shape of this slider into something more fitting with the voice. Remember, this screenshot is just an idea :p
- 00:39:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These notes look kinda messy like that. I think a curved simple form with them is more than enough. Feels good to play, and looks less messy imo. I know it's very basic and not visually outstanding, but flow is important too! well my suggestion is to move notes like this, just like you did at 00:46:239 (3,4,5,6,7,8).
- 00:51:823 (2,3) - The flow of these two sliders is bad. I think here it's better to keep the Distance Snap, and remove the jump by using ctrl+g on 00:51:823 (2).
- 00:57:408 (1) - ^ I know you're trying to make jumps to make the diff a bit more challenging since you don't have an [insane], but at some parts it's better to keep the DS for the sake of good flow. Better have simple patterns with DS than uncomfortable jumps imo~
- 01:08:044 (3) - ^
- 01:24:494 (3) - ^
- 01:30:787 (2) - ^
- 01:34:432 (4) - Nazi :p move some grids down to make a better curve with those circles
- 01:41:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - When I tested the map I failed at these. It surprised me.. I wasn't expecting them.. really. Now that I manually test that part I can pass it, but at the 1st time it was weird. o.o
*Consider adding some whistles at the guitar calm parts such as at 00:13:551 (3) start. That would sound good with the guitar. Leaving the slider without hitsounds sounds empty.. also at 00:15:143 (6) start, 00:16:739 (4), etc. Feels weird to ignore that relaxing guitar melody, so consider adding some whistles to follow it!
Overall, good difficulty. The flow fails at some parts.. you don't need to force jumps in such a slow song. It's better to ctrl+g these notes listed there ^ imo. That would improve the flow.
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Oh and, watch out. According to AIBat there's an unsnapped slider (repeat) at 01:29:972 (1) in HellDawn's Easy. Fix that.
Best of luck to you~
Edit: Forgot to give a star ><