lolcubes wrote:

In the insane:
00:24:595 (1) - and 00:40:596 (1) - should definitely have a whistle at the start along with that finish, without any kind of a drum here they sort of sound meh if you ask me, cause there is no expected impact. The same actually goes for 01:52:595 (1) - as well. Yeah there should be whistle sound but, there is problem with volume, whistle is too loud with this volume and i cannot reduce it because it will apply to finish as well, so whistle will be always louder then finish, since finish is like main sound here i decided to make accent on it (well we have 99 custom sets now so guess i can just add another whistle sample with lower volume, i just dont think its so important x_x)
00:36:595 (2) - Here you're definitely missing a whistle at the start. yep
00:56:762 (2) - This was weird cause there is a vocal at 00:56:929 - which you kinda missed, I'd rather have it end there. (in contrast, you did the same here 01:10:762 (2) - however this one actually fits nicely and I agree to have it just like you have it because the vocals hold all the way until the next slider, while in the first case they actually land on a tick you ignored) i just followed beat and instrument, didnt want to stick with vocal, because music is louder then vocal here and its easier to follow music
02:40:262 (4) - This should probably be a new combo? The reason is you have it at 00:08:262 (1) - which is essentially the same thing. It's fine not to have it though, so I would even suggest removal from 00:08:262 (1) - instead. ok
03:04:762 (1,1,1) - You should have each of the spinners end on a downbeat instead so they match the piano better. You did this exact thing at 03:04:262 (3) - which sounded awesome. This way you don't need to silence the spinner ends and it would bring more impact. Also not sure if intended but the first spinner has a normal hit at the end. its a long story but i think i will change it

The only other thing I could suggest to bring even bigger contrast into this map is to introduce more combo colors and then just use them differently. For example, for calmer sections you could use some darker or more monochrome colors, while for the choruses and more alive parts you can use really vivid and strong colors (for example yellow, I would absolutely like to see yellow in the choruses). will think about that

Absolutely loved the hitsounds btw, great job there, liked how the map flows too. :3 Thx :3
Have a couple of stars. Don't kudo this post as it's not really a mod, just a few thoughts about the map from a play I did earlier. :p

edit: Oh yeah one more thing I almost forgot, if possible you should consider changing the claps which sound like normal hits and use higher volume instead, because for some people on certain sound cards (like mine), the sound sort of "warps", you can hear them both, but not at the same time so it kinda sounds silly. It's probably nothing critical as people have used this in the past, however if you don't mind putting some work into this, I think it could solve this issue for some people. ehh i didnt know that <_<, it will take a lot of time to change every single clap on normal hit .......maybe change it later, since i dont have any bubble posts yet x_x

edit2: Added 2 more little things I forgot about, I was so sleepy so I forgot. ;_;

lolcubes wrote:

Oh and the artist's correct name should be momori, not Momori.

< from their site
< from the CD cover

:p

phaZ wrote:

sorry but i can't mod taiko~

your osu!-diffs have no kiai time . make them linke in taiko-diffs?i dont want to add kiai for this song, taiko have kiai because it gives 2x score during kiai time :>
[Easy]

00:30:595 (1) - move the red waypoint to 252;336 to make it more symmetrical i didnt want it to be symmetrical
02:21:929 (2) - its not exactly parallel to (1) o.o
[Normal]

01:16:596 (1) - slider-waypoint at 152;316 and end at 256;268 to improve the curve
02:22:595 (1) - set the beat snap divisor to 1/2 for this. move the first slider-waypoint to 204;88; second to 180;132; third to 140;108 and end at 68;128. it looks better then http://puu.sh/1RzjCits just another non symmetrical shape xD
[Hard]

00:45:596 (3) - ctrl+g. this is really a bit hard
03:06:595 and 03:08:595 - the hitsound fits with the piano but not with the last hitsound :/. i suggest to make N, 20% (S, 15% works well too) and add finishes like 03:04:262 (5) and remove the clap on the last spinner in Hard and also in Insane diff. this fit very well imo (remove 03:10:595 then)i think this clap is fine (sounds so mystical \oo/), reduced volume to 20%
[Insane]

00:47:679 (5) - this looks much better, ctrl+j (move to 124;328) i want to keep current antijump spacing o:

i didnt found that much. Of course i could say some things about placing but i respect the mapping-style of other mappers too(but i really liked it ^^)
awesome map!
fav and Thx :>

CDFA wrote:

School makes me so busy. Sorry for not getting to modding this sooner. Hopefully I can still finds lots of stuff.

Storyboarding:
00:24:595 (1) - You could add like, a white flash here (and at every other crash cymbal hit where it feels neccesary). Since you have a storyboard, you should make it a bit more exciting owo. =w= http://puu.sh/1STGw

Insane:
00:01:929 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not really a big fan of overlaps. I tried playing along with the shaping and wanted to make it kind of like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582865 (with (4) stacking on the end of the previous slider). If this was my map, I'd also switch (2) and (3), but you don't have to. Play along with it so overlaps don't happen.idk but this overlap dont distract me during the play
00:23:095 (5) - A bit too big of a jump. It looks pretty but with the pattern that this has been taking so far, it looks weird
01:04:096 (3) - Move this closer to (4) so it'd be spaced out like (1) and (2) i wanted to make bigger jump only for last note oo!
01:06:262 (3) - Move this so it's more like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/582867i think current pattern more interesting to play o:
01:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a pretty pretty starpretty pretty star dont fit www, also i want larger jump for last note :p
03:04:762 (1,1,1) - Just a pet peeve thing, I'm never a fan of more than one spinner in a row.i think spinners spam fits better, because of piano sound, also i cannot change this spinners to notes/sliders because its part of SB
It's a bit jumpy but it's not too bad.

Hard:
02:13:929 (4) - This overlap bugs me, but I know spacing should be consistent. If there's any way you can make it not overlap, then try and do so.
03:04:762 (1,1,1) - Just a pet peeve thing, I'm never a fan of more than one spinner in a row. already said
Stellar difficulty. Nice job.

Normal:
I like it.

Easy:
The star rating is a bit high for my taste, but I'm assuming it's because of BPM. Very simple yet creative. I like it.its because of # of objects i guess, but rhytm is still easy for me, only 1/1 white ticks clicking whole map ww

tl;dr your map is great. It's mostly polishing I'm getting at atm.

Lally wrote:

Hi from my Queue :3 Hi oo/

[General]

1. why dont you add kiai here? çwç from 00:48:595 - to 01:22:595 and the 2nd from 02:00:595 - to 02:32:595 - (if you don't want much kiai if not) - it's better to end it here : 03:04:595 -

idk but i decided not to use kiai here o:

[Easy]
Unsnapped inherited timing points at:

1. 01:29:595 (2) - since you started spacing 1.1 , fix the spacing here ok!
2. 01:54:262 (2,3) - this blanket can be made better ok!
3. 02:12:262 (3,4) - just little spacing fix

I think this difference in spacing +-0.1-0.5 are fine
[Normal]
Unsnapped inherited timing points at:

1. 00:31:929 (4,5) - little spacing issue
2. 01:30:595 (1,2) - spacing
3. 02:06:595 (1,2,3) - spacing

I think this difference in spacing +-0.1-0.2 are fine
[Hard]

1. same usnapped points
2. 01:03:095 (2) - something like ↓ i like current one more
3. 01:42:595 (3) - something more softer like ↓ (ugly slider but only for ex) dont want wavy slider :p
4. 02:36:429 (6,1) - blanket ok!
5. 02:48:262 (3,4,1) - blanket ok!

[Insane]

1. same unsnapped green lines
2. 01:35:595 (3) - i think it will be more fit with the vocal if you do something like ↓ didnt paid attention to vocal here, wanted to follow music oo!
   

Green sections works fine, those unsnapped not affecting anything
Uhm i think that's all owo/ good luck

lolcubes wrote:

Late mod, can only mod during weekends basically. :/

[General]

1. Taiko backgrounds (with the playfield) are now unrankable. Just use your normal BG.

[Insane]

1. 00:52:262 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move it a bit down, because of how stacking works it breaks the spacing a little. Since you did focus mostly on the consistent spacing, it would look better (about 3 grids lvl4).
2. 00:56:762 (2) - I already suggested this, but I will do it again with a better explanation. If you end it at 00:56:929 it sounds more natural because the vocals land there. I know you aren't focusing on the vocals, but there is nothing at 00:57:012. The thing is, the slider end creates a beat and that throws the rhythm off a little. Silencing it is not rankable and making it quiet won't really help because the player already noticed it went past the vocals. :p
3. 02:04:262 (4,5,6,7,8) - Because of stacking this is actually further away than intended I guess. Move it a bit to the right, I know that small inconsistency in spacing isn't a big issue, however when everything is nice and clean, breaking that makes it look sloppy.

I still not agree with your suggestion.
Your suggestion is, to make pattern that will follow only vocal, i dont want to do this because i didnt paid attention on vocal here, I was focused on 2 heavy beats, you can check this
00:50:595 (3,4) -
00:54:596 (5,6) -
00:58:596 (3,4) -
and even more
Those parts have absolutely same rhytm which is based on 2 heavy beats, if i change only 1 part to vocal pattern it will be some strange inconsistency in rhytms o:
00:56:596 (1,2) - this slider + note placed on 2 heavy beats, you saying that there is nothing at 00:57:012 but your suggested slider which ends at 00:56:929 also not supported by any heavy sound/beats in music \:D/
Theoretically this slider 00:56:762 (2) - should ends at 00:57:095 but i want this note to be clickable because vocal starts here and it supported by heavy beat in music, that the reason the slider was shorten till blue tick and added extra note/slider on the 00:57:095 to emphasise it, to make it clickable ! ( if you ask why its shorten to 1/4 tick and not to 1/8 or 1/16, because 1/8 or 1/16 will hurt gameplay)
[Hard]

1. 01:06:596 (4) - This should be a new combo I believe.
2. 01:08:596 (3) - Same here.
3. 01:10:596 (3) - Same here, etc. The thing is, maybe you should reconsider about putting a new combo for the drum objects, because they make it short, like this the main comboing is always late. (example: 01:12:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - See how you did this, the drum objects don't have a new combo and this makes the comboing fine because the new combo isn't coming too early)
4. 01:55:095 (2) - Missing a whistle at the end.
5. 02:09:929 (1,2,3) - Same thing about comboing, it looks like you consistently changed these so they are late haha. Won't mention these anymore, I think you know where these are by now. :3
   I see that my NC confused you so i will try to explain xD
   Ussualy i following vocal (sometimes downbeat NC) but I have 1 exception, it happenes when i using rhytm stops, like this 01:09:596 (5) - as you can see its like
   orange rhytm then -----pause----- then purple rhytm, also my stops ussually stacked so i think its easier to read it like this xD
   I dont think its very important though, but i used same stop ----> NC in every single map i made xD

[Normal]

1. OD+1, OD3 is a bit too low considering you already have an easy diff.
2. 00:52:596 (1) - This one looks a bit ugly, maybe if you move the bottom part a little it could look better. Example: http://puu.sh/1Wg4B
3. 01:49:929 - Move this timing section to 01:49:679, because the sliderslide.wav sounds bad otherwise.
4. 02:15:929 (5) - A small detail, but if you make the midpoint lower and the endpoint higher, it would make a prettier pattern. Example: http://puu.sh/1Wg6Y

[Easy]

1. OD1 is way too low, it shouldn't even exist haha. Make it OD2 please, that's more standard. (don't worry about it being above 3 stars)
2. 00:40:429 - Move this timing section to 00:40:345, else you have sliderslide issues (they sound bad).
3. 01:31:095 - Yeah, move this one to 01:31:262, same reason.
4. 01:39:095 - Same thing here, need to move it to 01:39:262.
   Changed everything you said exept green lines, instead of it i changed all S, N to custom samples and added muted sliderslide ( yeah this is how it supposed to be, i guess i just forgot to add blanket samples to NC/SC2/3) which is actually the same, but now i am sure that i didnt missed any of this slider's noise <.<
   +Added low volume ticks (50% and 75%)

MMzz wrote:

You need to understand that this is a overmap compared to the rest of the song.

MMzz wrote:

Throwing these 1/4 patterns at the end of a very simple muzu that will attract a lot of players just attempting to learn how to grasp 1/2 rhythms better without being disturbed too much by 1/4 (I saw you use it a few times but it made sense according to the drum.)

MMzz wrote:

is just a silly gimmick tactic that is NOT NEEDED. Keep it simple like you have the whole song, there is absolutely NO REASON you need to do this.

MMzz wrote:

I was even told they were 5 beats before and that they were toned down and it's still not enough. With that said you need to go with lolcubes suggestion of just flat out removing those 1/4.

MMzz wrote:

The team is already having a hard enough time dealing with overmaps in osu! mode, don't put more stress on us over something this silly.

Frostmourne wrote:

before lolcubes is going to bubble this
I have something to mention about hitsounds here
the gameplay and rhythm of the whole mapset is really nice so I will not touch it

Easy
01:04:262 (4) - still a bit peaked up which is quite unexpected from its sound, I guess the finish will fit this more than clap because the sound like this
as 01:02:596 (2) - you use finish here (volume is quite the same)
if you compare with 02:15:929 (3) - , this point has lower sound so it wouldn't be standing out like this mentioned
(found that you use finish on the Normal diff too) idk i still think that clap match better with bgm, i used finish in Normal by mistake (fixed) \:D/
Normal
00:26:595 (1) - missing whistle on the head here (bass drum)

Hard
01:55:095 (2) - missing whistle tail
02:13:929 (4,1) - this changed !
Insane
02:08:595 (1) - if you want to follow the vocal by whistle , the whistle should be on head instead of tail for this slider (as the next next sliders are alike)
and I have seen whistles on the first downbeat sound amazing so far , e.g. 02:16:595 (1) - 02:20:595 (1) -
02:34:762 (2) - whistle on the first point ? , to follow guitar sounds with double whistle like this, it feels empty comparing with other sliders in this part
03:02:595 (3) - ^ ? but I think it's almost the end of song so leave it be would be great too this whistle sounds a bit lonely there, so i added few more xD

cRyo is probably an evil this time? because the song is not moe T_T (but I prefer this epic song from you wwwww)i like evil songs ww!

lolcubes wrote:

Aaaand another recheck lol.

[Insane]
01:19:095 (6) - Don't like this finish because you extended 01:18:762 (5). I am actually okay with extending this more or less, however this finish sounds wrong then, just remove it, it's on an offbeat too. Offbeat cymbal crashes are rare usually and this one doesn't exactly fit because of a rhythm hit 1/4 before it. You can always choose to not extend the slider though, then this finish wouldn't be rhythm breaking. Up to you to choose which one will you change. I think everything is correct here, i clearly hear finish in bgm ._.
02:08:595 (1) - Missing a finish? There is a finish here in all diffs (both with a whistle). added

Can bubble afterwards. No kd.

Xakyrie wrote:

Meis Clauson ;w; Meis Clauson is the best d=(´▽｀)=b

pro cryo!

NatsumeRin wrote:

lazy NtR ==/

OnosakiHito wrote:

Congratulations!
happy map finished. Just waiting for aabc's part. Haha ok haha xD

jonathanlfj wrote:

love this map <3 (shoud have said star b4 rank ><) who knew ^^
Gratz~

ryuu wrote:

congratulations, icee-nyan, h3k1 and onozakihito ;wwwwwwwwww; Thank you ryuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu o(>< )o

h3k1ru wrote:

finally puuuuuuuuuuuuuut' >33333333<

Garven wrote:

Oh, I see lolcubes got this running again, haha. Congratulations! go bubble Lizz lazy Garven =3=/

merchat7 wrote:

Images for SB from a softhouse-seal game? Art looks so familiar to me. yeah its from [softhouse-seal] Zettai Junshu ☆ Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!!

Congrats!