Chewin wrote:

General

1. Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO done
2. Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background? meh... nah D: you can disable skin anyway if you're playing without BG because there's no sense on making fitting combo colours with BG when there is no BG

Marathon

1. 00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well meh... done but not so much, I don't like fixing hp bar issues lol
2. 00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts meh, I like it the way it is, it flows better now imo
3. 00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music in this beginning I wanted to create some 1/1 'breaks' that flow kinda well with the instrument i'm following, so nah
4. 00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8) grumd asked me to keep it this way because all of the other ones were this number of repeats, so to avoid even more combobreaks I left it like this
5. 00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline i don't think that makes any difference ._. but done
6. 01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3 done
7. 01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency removed
8. 01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue blehhh okay
9. 01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo done
10. 02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.< nah
11. 02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg done but in a better position
12. 02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider oops
13. 03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here? done
14. 04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo? nah, I want it to be kinda obvious that the order is 4 then 5 here to not confuse anyone
15. 04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
16. 04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps only on (7)
17. 05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C I really like them, adds some variation to the rhythm instead of only 1-repeat sliders
18. 05:07:293 (1) - New combo? done
19. 05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1) done
20. 05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well. done
21. 05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3) nah
22. 05:55:985 (7) - New combo done
23. 06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using done
24. 06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both done
25. 07:04:485 (3) - ^ these should be way easier to read than before
26. 07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\ fixed
27. 07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive removed 1 repeat but didn't add the new note
28. 07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them done
29. 07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO done
30. 07:23:985 (7) - New combo done
31. 07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead done
32. 07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos done
33. 07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well nah
34. 07:55:235 (5) - New combo done
35. 07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2 yeah, but here I want to keep a more listen-able rhythm
36. 08:40:992 (4) - New combo done
37. 11:24:242 (6) - ^? done
38. 11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd i want some variation though
39. 12:41:314 (8) - New combo done
40. 12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency done
41. 13:03:314 (6) - New combo done
42. 13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it done
43. 13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8) rearranged the pattern

Stuff I mentioned above are just some minor issues. It's long just because the song is long.
Fix those and I will approve then. :3

iRape wrote:

SOON

[Luanny] wrote:

first?

Blue Dragon wrote:

YES YES YES YES OH GOD OH MAN OH GOD MAN OYES

UnderminE wrote:

Finally, i was waiting for that goddamn taiko

Silynn wrote:

why is the kiai so unplayable