Renard - Because Maybe! pt. 3 [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

Nashmun

Joined November 2008

Nashmun 2012-11-21T13:23:40+00:00

Taiko mod, only Norbi's part :<

In bold red, what you have to fix
In bold blue, please, fix it ;w;
In blue, it'd be better if you could fix it
In normal text, just some suggestions.

Also, I have separated some suggestion with "-----------". This means that every sugestion within the same cell, should be all fixed. So be aware if you decide to only fix some, I won't be responsible for map destruction or randomness ;_; (This also means you should try to test those suggestion by block).

I barely modified your structure (deleted few note and adding only one), ecause I thin it's good. Though, there is a lot of HS changes, because some were totally random. I also totally didn't think about difficulty gap or whatever, just what sounded GREAT compared to what you already had.

For those you will think it's still too difficult or nonsense, I suggest them to listen to it with auto, and to focus on the rhythm made by the dons (don't mind the kats).
Once you'll get that rhythm, you'll understand kats are just ghost beats (dunno the exact term, but this is how we call it in drumming), and see that the map/my mod isn't random or difficult on purpose.

Norbi's part

14:06:814 (2) - k ?
-----------
14:11:814 (1) - d ?
-----------
14:47:814 (2) - d
14:48:564 (2) - d
14:48:626 (1) - k
14:48:689 (2) - k
14:49:439 (2) - k
14:51:814 (2) - d
Okay those suggestions are juste here to make your dons fit more the rhythm and be more diversified.
However, nothing were REALLY wrong on this part, so if you don't like it you can keep it like this. (Although I recommand you to fix it :3)
-----------
14:53:814 (3) - d
14:53:939 (1) - k
14:54:064 (1) - d
Basically here you have to make the dons support the beat AND support the bar change. By adding those d d d d, you'll show clearly that you're are changing to another bar.
-----------
14:55:814 (1) - d
14:56:001 (1) - k
14:56:064 (1) - d
14:56:251 (1) - k
14:56:314 (1) - d
14:56:439 (1) - k
14:56:564 (1) - d
14:56:626 (1) - k
14:56:689 (1) - d
14:56:876 (3) - d
14:56:939 - Add a d here
14:57:001 (1) - k
14:57:064 (1) - d
14:57:251 (1) - k
Wow wow wow... this was totally nonsense. Here you HAVE to apply those suggestion, which will add a real rhythm which fits the music instead of this random dons placement.
-----------
14:57:501 (1) - k
14:57:564 (1) - d
14:57:689 (1) - k
14:57:814 (1) - d
14:58:001 (1) - k
14:58:064 (1) - d
14:58:189 (1, 2) - k, k
14:58:439 (2) - k
14:58:564 (1) - d
Same as 14:53:814 and 14:55:814, so do it :3
-----------
14:59:001 (2) - k
14:59:064 (1) - d
14:59:189 (1) - k
14:59:251 (2) - k
14:59:314 (1) - d
14:59:689 (2) - k
14:59:814 (1) - d
15:00:064 (3) - d
15:00:189 (1) - k
15:00:314 (2) - d
Same :3
-----------
15:20:314 (1) - d, sounds better imo.
-----------
15:45:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkd so that it'll follow the rhythm.
15:46:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkk ^
15:48:939 (2,1, 2) - Same as 15:45:939
15:55:064 (4) - d
-----------
15:58:314 (1) - Maybe make it a little bit shorter ? :<
-----------
16:33:064 (1,2, 3) - delete those three notes, let the player have some rest xD (Plus there is no music/voice during this part, so those are useless)
-----------
16:52:439 (2,3,1) - Inverse those three. This ddk should be a kkd.
16:53:814 (2) - d
Basically those two suggestion help your map to fit to the ending climax. You heard the drum bass being heavy and persistant on every beat. You should renforce it with a don in every beat.
This will make the player feel the beat and the rhythm even more.
-----------
17:04:564 (1) - k
17:04:689 (1) - d
17:04:876 (2) - k
17:05:189 (1) - d
17:05:314 (1) - k
17:05:439 (1) - d
17:05:626 (2) - delete this note
17:05:814 (2) - d
Same as above. This is the end of your song, the drum is showing it by this persistant dd dd dd dd just before comming to the final part. Here again, you should follow it.
-----------
17:06:189 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Okay, this stream doesn't totally fit the drum, but tbh I'm ok with it. So maybe if someone tell you to change it you should do it, but I don't mind keeping it.

That's all folks ~~

Maybe if I have time I'll mod some other parts :< *Nashmun disappears*

Norbi

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Norbi 2012-11-21T14:42:54+00:00

Nashmun wrote:
Norbi's part
14:06:814 (2) - k ? - Sure.
-----------
14:11:814 (1) - d ? - If the previous one is a kat, then this why shouldn't be? So nope.
-----------
14:47:814 (2) - d - Ah, right.
14:48:564 (2) - d - Sure.
14:48:626 (1) - k - ^
14:48:689 (2) - k - The don is fine here.
14:49:439 (2) - k - ^
14:51:814 (2) - d - Be it.
Okay those suggestions are juste here to make your dons fit more the rhythm and be more diversified.
However, nothing were REALLY wrong on this part, so if you don't like it you can keep it like this. (Although I recommand you to fix it :3)
-----------
14:53:814 (3) - d - Sure.
14:53:939 (1) - k - Nah.
14:54:064 (1) - d - Done.
Basically here you have to make the dons support the beat AND support the bar change. By adding those d d d d, you'll show clearly that you're are changing to another bar.
-----------
14:55:814 (1) - d
14:56:001 (1) - k
14:56:064 (1) - d
14:56:251 (1) - k
14:56:314 (1) - d
14:56:439 (1) - k
14:56:564 (1) - d
14:56:626 (1) - k
14:56:689 (1) - d
14:56:876 (3) - d
14:56:939 - Add a d here
14:57:001 (1) - k
14:57:064 (1) - d
14:57:251 (1) - k
Wow wow wow... this was totally nonsense. Here you HAVE to apply those suggestion, which will add a real rhythm which fits the music instead of this random dons placement.
^Changed everything in there.
-----------
14:57:501 (1) - k
14:57:564 (1) - d
14:57:689 (1) - k
14:57:814 (1) - d
14:58:001 (1) - k
14:58:064 (1) - d
14:58:189 (1, 2) - k, k
14:58:439 (2) - k
14:58:564 (1) - d
Same as 14:53:814 and 14:55:814, so do it :3
^Everything applied here as well.
-----------
14:59:001 (2) - k
14:59:064 (1) - d
14:59:126 (1) - k
14:59:251 (2) - k
14:59:314 (1) - d
14:59:689 (2) - k
14:59:814 (1) - d
15:00:064 (3) - d
15:00:189 (1) - k
15:00:314 (2) - d
Same :3
^Changes everywhere. lol
-----------
15:20:314 (1) - d, sounds better imo. - But not in mine. :3
-----------
15:45:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkd so that it'll follow the rhythm. - Done.
15:46:939 (1,2,1) - Make it dkk ^ - ^
15:48:939 (2,1, 2) - Same as 15:45:939 - Done.
15:55:064 (4) - d - This one is already a don.
-----------
15:58:314 (1) - Maybe make it a little bit shorter ? :< - I like it this way. Btw I could put a break in here if needed.
-----------
16:33:064 (1,2, 3) - delete those three notes, let the player have some rest xD (Plus there is no music/voice during this part, so those are useless) - Well, okay.
-----------
16:52:439 (2,3,1) - Inverse those three. This ddk should be a kkd.
16:53:814 (2) - d
Basically those two suggestion help your map to fit to the ending climax. You heard the drum bass being heavy and persistant on every beat. You should renforce it with a don in every beat.
This will make the player feel the beat and the rhythm even more.
^Well, it plays nicely.
-----------
17:04:564 (1) - k
17:04:689 (1) - d
17:04:876 (2) - k
17:05:189 (1) - d
17:05:314 (1) - k
17:05:439 (1) - d
17:05:626 (2) - delete this note
17:05:814 (2) - d
Same as above. This is the end of your song, the drum is showing it by this persistant dd dd dd dd just before comming to the final part. Here again, you should follow it.
^Followed.
-----------
17:06:189 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Okay, this stream doesn't totally fit the drum, but tbh I'm ok with it. So maybe if someone tell you to change it you should do it, but I don't mind keeping it.

^Yeah,I know it's hard, but the best stream I've ever mapped.

That's all folks ~~

Here is the new file, BD.

Nolan Watercolour

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Joined November 2012

Nolan Watercolour 2012-11-22T16:49:41+00:00

this map must be aproved

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2012-11-24T14:19:50+00:00

ha bad mod incoming xD It is hard for me to mod such crazy hard stuff ^^ but i said i ~~try to~~ mod it when i find time

[Marathon]

00:58:717 (7,8) - I think this "jump" would be better if it had an Distance space of 1.3xDS instead of 1.4x DS. Can't explain why really ._. 1.2x is way to short and 1.4x feels to far. Maybe, because you mostly used 0.9x DS which is fair for this part and suddenly 1.4x DS but oh well xD I really can't explain anything at all :3
01:44:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty fast stream after that easier slower part. It is not like it doesn't fit but ... I guess I am just not a fan of 1/4 streams which have the same DS like 1/2 xD I would lower the stream speed to 1x DS or so. 01:45:082 (9) - would look like it continues the stream later (you can't see it until
01:44:672 (6) - so it won't confuse anybody) which looks neat imo
02:09:217 (4,1) - this small overlap doesn't look nice :/
04:51:884 (1) - maybe one 1/1 beat longer so it starts from 04:51:611 - . Would fit more to the vocal and also would be fairer, because this spinner is a bit short ~~I know it is allowed though~~
05:33:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would almost ask if you could make it completly symmetric so that 05:34:360 (9,1) - (either one of them) share the same spot with 05:35:735 (1,2) - (either one of them) and 05:37:110 (12,13) - (either one of them) but I am not even sure if it would add that much xD better just keep it as you have
06:16:360 - add note?
07:08:235 (6) - new combo and
07:08:485 (7) - new combo I think it looks way cooler than ^^ (I don't think it would cause trouble for the gameplay at least)
09:42:867 (2,1) - you mapped the upcoming parts so that there is always a jump on the new combo, because of this sound you hear at 09:42:992 (1) - (I suck at explaining xD) so why not add a jump here? Doesn't have to be that hard. If possible something like 1.3x DS, because you always switch between 1.8x DS and 1.3x DS jumps until 09:44:367 (1) -
11:11:367 (4,1) - Even for this hard Marathon i think this jump is way over the top ^^ and yes i see that 11:10:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these two combos are mirrored but still
11:14:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

Well yeah ^^ I said don't expect anything but i hope you like some suggestions :3
Crazy map

Makyu

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Joined April 2012

Makyu 2012-12-19T05:18:17+00:00

Why is this awesomess in the grave D:

Froslass

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Froslass 2012-12-19T05:22:32+00:00

Makyu wrote:
Why is this awesomess in the grave D:

Because it's bugged and I can't update it.

Landere

65 posts

Joined November 2012

Landere 2012-12-28T10:13:56+00:00

God, this needs to be ranked o.o
Such awesomness....

Also why is "Why am I so angry?" in the graveyard... It's such a nice map >-<

Makyu

424 posts

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Makyu 2013-01-12T01:29:04+00:00

evillander wrote:
God, this needs to be ranked o.o
Such awesomness....

Also why is "Why am I so angry?" in the graveyard... It's such a nice map >-<

Cartographer

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Cartographer 2013-02-09T14:13:09+00:00

<3

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-03T01:47:17+00:00

gahhhhhhhhhhhh how to get mods for marathon maps? -.-

KinomiCandy

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KinomiCandy 2013-03-03T17:41:10+00:00

OnosakiHito requested me to check the Taiko Collab. (Just my opinion)

It's okay and hard, but the most hardest part compared to everyones is Loctav's. It's pretty overmapped.
I suggest to make it easier and calm down with the 1/6. If this doesn't happen, I hope someone else can take his place.

fabriciorby

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fabriciorby 2013-03-04T02:31:30+00:00

Loctav's part is so banana

Birdy

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Birdy 2013-03-04T04:51:56+00:00

40 stars, I hope that helps a bit.

Legalist

Legalist 2013-03-04T20:01:29+00:00

BEST. Love your style <3

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-04T20:41:53+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
40 stars, I hope that helps a bit.

Oh god, thank you SO much. Really. If I could give you 40 kudosu for that, I would.

Landere

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Landere 2013-03-04T20:42:53+00:00

You got my star c;

DaxMasterix

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

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DaxMasterix 2013-03-04T21:24:03+00:00

Blue Dragon wrote:
gahhhhhhhhhhhh how to get mods for marathon maps? -.-

Ask Dax. LEL
~~Yes, nazi mod.~~

General:

Taiko BG is unrankeable now. Use the original BG (or Another is better imo) eerrrr about the SB.. Gomenasai for the Taiko mappers :c

Marathon

OD8 and HP5 ? Change it to HP6 and OD7 and Keep calm.
00:00:082 (1) - Move this Slider 1 grid up.[Grid lvl: 4] Why? dsasadsda The Distance between the End of this Slider and the next Slider isn't the same in the Distance between the end of the next Slider and 00:00:627 (1) .. NAZI >:D okno.. ._.
00:03:218 (2,3,4) - Move this Patter to x:340|y:332 [Grid lvl: 4]:33
00:03:559 (3,4) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33
00:05:400 (2,3) - Move this Pattern to x:380|108 [Grid lvl: 4]
00:06:081 (1) - Move this Slider 1 Grid up. [Grid lvl: 4]
00:07:922 (4,5) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33
00:11:809 (1,2,1,2) - IMO- I don't like these positions.. :c ... Or that ''transition'' xD I think you can notes in 00:11:672 , 00:12:081 , 00:12:490 .. But you will need make another Pattern (? xD
00:22:445 (1) - Move the last x:240|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4]
00:41:263 (6) - Move the 2nd Slider Point 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: OFF]
00:52:309 (6,7,8,9,10) - Bad Flower? Try make This ... Yeah.. You will have a little jump between the (10) and the next note. A little change of the Distance Snap.. But Cme'on. xD Here is the Inf about the positions.
```
00:52:445 (7) - x:172|y:228.
00:52:582 (8) - x:116|y:272.
00:52:718 (9) - x:144|y:340
00:52:854 (10) - x:216|y:336. 
All in Grid lvl: 4.
```
If you don't like the change in the Distance Snap between the (10) and the next Note. Rotate the pattern by angle to make the consistency keeping the Place of the note (6) ^^.
01:30:218 (2) - Move this Slider 2 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4]
01:30:627 (4) - ^ If you make my last Suggestion. Move this Slider 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
01:52:990 (1,2,3) - I don't if this was Intencional.. But these notes aren't stacked Perfectly in the same position of 01:52:717 (5)
02:36:338 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:39:202 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Move these notes, Clicking the (3), to x:395|y:98 [Grid lvl: 4] You will have This
02:54:748 (2) - Move this note to x:256|y:72 (? WELL you know.. If for make another flower with the others Notes :c
03:24:611 (6) - Move the 2nd SliderPoint to x:104|y:312 [Grid lvl: 4]
04:01:429 (3) - Move this note to x:116|y:4 (? xD You know.. A mirrowed Note of 04:01:020 (1)
04:20:111 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
05:28:985 (1,2) - Move the (1) 2 Grids to the Right [Grid lvl: 4] and the (2) to the same position of 05:28:735 (4). That is because This looks much better than This.
05:48:735 (5) - Move this to the same position of 05:47:485 (2) o3o If this is Intencional.. Yeah.. The ''imperfect'' looks good if is a bit obviously.
06:11:922 (5,6) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of 06:11:735 (4)
06:12:797 (8,9) - These notes aren't necessary.. The stream finish in 06:12:735 (7). I recommend erase (8) And move the (9) To make a jump. :33
07:39:485 (3) - Move this note to the same place of 07:37:860 (1)
08:37:867 (x) - Why not.. Add a note here. o3o
12:47:064 (3) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
12:49:064 (6) - (^) Same
12:50:064 (4) - Add a Clap.
12:53:189 (3) - (^) Same
12:55:189 (5) - (^) Same
12:57:189 (8) - (^) Same
13:02:939 (5) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
13:07:064 (5) - Add a Clap.
13:09:314 (1) - I remember this pattern. LOL Will be ''Wonderful!'' for some players.. And for others haters. A simple Copy-paste. But is good. NEVER SURRENDER.
16:08:064 (1,1) - Ctrl+J

independentemente que este mapa é mais do que 240'BPM (Fucking Portuguese ;^;) I think wasn't created for ''OMG IS SO HARD'' ... Because you used always the Distance Snap xD... I think this map was created with happiness.. >w< So.. I really wanna ser this map approved. Imo.. Is a good map.. But isn't your best work. Is funny~
Good luck!

Just Remember. Never Surrender.

PD: Maybe will mod the taiko too.. idk huh

Low

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Low 2013-03-04T23:26:43+00:00

congratulations, you've earned a placeholder for a MAT mod

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-05T06:10:20+00:00

HOLY SHIT SNB

I can't really help but here's one star~
~~rip taiko sb~~

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-06T02:50:27+00:00

DaxMasterix wrote:
Blue Dragon wrote:
gahhhhhhhhhhhh how to get mods for marathon maps? -.-
Ask Dax. LEL
~~Yes, nazi mod.~~

General:
Taiko BG is unrankeable now. Use the original BG (or Another is better imo) eerrrr about the SB.. Gomenasai for the Taiko mappers :c
fghsafjkdf i gotta talk to ono about this
Marathon
OD8 and HP5 ? Change it to HP6 and OD7 and Keep calm. why OD 7? It's a pretty hard map and we shouldn't give forgiving accuracy to players just because "it's hard". Also, Hp is a bit low because some people just want to pass the map without suffering too much (and this doesn't affect scores like OD would, so..)
00:00:082 (1) - Move this Slider 1 grid up.[Grid lvl: 4] Why? dsasadsda The Distance between the End of this Slider and the next Slider isn't the same in the Distance between the end of the next Slider and 00:00:627 (1) .. NAZI >:D okno.. ._. [b]I don't see why this is a problem. This was originally mapped with grid 3 so this is pretty common. Fixed anyways.
00:03:218 (2,3,4) - Move this Patter to x:340|y:332 [Grid lvl: 4]:33 kinda breaks spacing, but ok
00:03:559 (3,4) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33 they are stacked in-game, so this doesn't matter lol
00:05:400 (2,3) - Move this Pattern to x:380|108 [Grid lvl: 4] rearranged this pattern in another way
00:06:081 (1) - Move this Slider 1 Grid up. [Grid lvl: 4] done
00:07:922 (4,5) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33 they are stacked in-game.
00:11:809 (1,2,1,2) - IMO- I don't like these positions.. :c ... Or that ''transition'' xD I think you can notes in 00:11:672 , 00:12:081 , 00:12:490 .. But you will need make another Pattern (? xD I really like it the way it is.
00:22:445 (1) - Move the last x:240|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4] done
00:41:263 (6) - Move the 2nd Slider Point 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: OFF] fixed note placement instead
00:52:309 (6,7,8,9,10) - Bad Flower? Try make This ... Yeah.. You will have a little jump between the (10) and the next note. A little change of the Distance Snap.. But Cme'on. xD Here is the Inf about the positions.
00:52:445 (7) - x:172|y:228.
00:52:582 (8) - x:116|y:272.
00:52:718 (9) - x:144|y:340
00:52:854 (10) - x:216|y:336. 
All in Grid lvl: 4.
If you don't like the change in the Distance Snap between the (10) and the next Note. Rotate the pattern by angle to make the consistency keeping the Place of the note (6) ^^. fixed by myself
01:30:218 (2) - Move this Slider 2 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4] I really don't understand why, but done
01:30:627 (4) - ^ If you make my last Suggestion. Move this Slider 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4] ehh ok
01:52:990 (1,2,3) - I don't if this was Intencional.. But these notes aren't stacked Perfectly in the same position of 01:52:717 (5) that's not even noticeable in-game..
02:36:338 (3) - Ctrl+G breaks spacing
02:39:202 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Move these notes, Clicking the (3), to x:395|y:98 [Grid lvl: 4] You will have This done

02:54:748 (2) - Move this note to x:256|y:72 (? WELL you know.. If for make another flower with the others Notes :c i want it this way, sorry
03:24:611 (6) - Move the 2nd SliderPoint to x:104|y:312 [Grid lvl: 4] why? that breaks the flow
04:01:429 (3) - Move this note to x:116|y:4 (? xD You know.. A mirrowed Note of 04:01:020 (1) that'd play horribly with the next slider though lol
04:20:111 (4,5) - Ctrl+G fixed this square
05:28:985 (1,2) - Move the (1) 2 Grids to the Right [Grid lvl: 4] and the (2) to the same position of 05:28:735 (4). That is because This looks much better than This. done
05:48:735 (5) - Move this to the same position of 05:47:485 (2) o3o If this is Intencional.. Yeah.. The ''imperfect'' looks good if is a bit obviously. fixed
06:11:922 (5,6) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of 06:11:735 (4) they stack ingame.
06:12:797 (8,9) - These notes aren't necessary.. The stream finish in 06:12:735 (7). I recommend erase (8) And move the (9) To make a jump. :33 made it into a slider
07:39:485 (3) - Move this note to the same place of 07:37:860 (1) fghfjdsklsflk
08:37:867 (x) - Why not.. Add a note here. o3o there isn't any 1/4 sound there though...
12:47:064 (3) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider. doesn't seem any fitting..
12:49:064 (6) - (^) Same
12:50:064 (4) - Add a Clap.
12:53:189 (3) - (^) Same
12:55:189 (5) - (^) Same
12:57:189 (8) - (^) Same
13:02:939 (5) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
13:07:064 (5) - Add a Clap. done
13:09:314 (1) - I remember this pattern. LOL Will be ''Wonderful!'' for some players.. And for others haters. A simple Copy-paste. But is good. NEVER SURRENDER. well uh I think 99% of people like it
16:08:064 (1,1) - Ctrl+J why? o.o it looks much uglier
independentemente que este mapa é mais do que 240'BPM (Fucking Portuguese ;^;) I think wasn't created for ''OMG IS SO HARD'' ... Because you used always the Distance Snap xD... I think this map was created with happiness.. >w< So.. I really wanna ser this map approved. Imo.. Is a good map.. But isn't your best work. Is funny~
Good luck!

Just Remember. Never Surrender.
PD: Maybe will mod the taiko too.. idk huh

Thank you so much for modding

I'm really glad you took the time to do it! Thank you for the help!

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Low 2013-03-07T23:40:52+00:00

screw placeholders~

[Marathon]

Use tick rate 2. should be used for most maps when it can fit nicely.
00:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why are the hitsounds bland (non-existant) at this small part? feels empty to play.
00:45:763 (2,3) - Overlaps in-game.
00:56:400 (6) - seperate this into two sliders? The music calls for it here IMO
01:00:764 (6) - ^
01:09:491 (5) - reverse arrow on this slider is pretty much entirely hidden by 01:08:809 (3).
02:01:717 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider; sounds gr0ss
02:33:338 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this gets really confusing to read on a first try with hitbursts obstructing a player's view. You could increase the spacing, like this:

Patten

396,80,153748,6,0,B|432:116|476:108,1,80
500,172,154021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,240,154157,6,0,B|288:204|280:160,1,80
344,136,154429,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,380,154567,6,0,B|376:344|332:352,1,80
308,288,154838,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,160,154975,6,0,B|224:104,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,155384,5,0,0:0:0:0:

03:50:248 (6) - Thought this had only 1 or 2 repeats due to the previous patterns (03:48:884 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5)). you could make this easier to read by turning it into two repeat sliders (like this).
05:29:985 (2) - remove the finish from the beginning of this slider.
08:21:992 (1,2) - Ugly sliders. I'm sure there's something pretty you could do with these.
08:26:992 (1,2) - wouldn't it be a better idea to make these blanket? Looks kinda awkward

[Taiko Collab]

Remove the taiko BG

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-08T00:02:17+00:00

Jacob wrote:
screw placeholders~

[Marathon]

Use tick rate 2. should be used for most maps when it can fit nicely. Explained this in PM
00:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why are the hitsounds bland (non-existant) at this small part? feels empty to play. fixed
00:45:763 (2,3) - Overlaps in-game. fixed
00:56:400 (6) - seperate this into two sliders? The music calls for it here IMO since there was just a part like that (2 1/8 sliders), I prefer to not make it a easily combobreakable part because of it
01:00:764 (6) - ^ [b]^
01:09:491 (5) - reverse arrow on this slider is pretty much entirely hidden by 01:08:809 (3). fixed, i guess
02:01:717 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider; sounds gr0ss fixed
02:33:338 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this gets really confusing to read on a first try with hitbursts obstructing a player's view. You could increase the spacing, like this done
03:50:248 (6) - Thought this had only 1 or 2 repeats due to the previous patterns (03:48:884 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5)). you could make this easier to read by turning it into two repeat sliders (like this). fixed in another way
05:29:985 (2) - remove the finish from the beginning of this slider. done
08:21:992 (1,2) - Ugly sliders. I'm sure there's something pretty you could do with these. done
08:26:992 (1,2) - wouldn't it be a better idea to make these blanket? Looks kinda awkward probably a mistake, fixed

[Taiko Collab]

Remove the taiko BG ): ok (dunno what to do with the SB though, ono may want to help on this)

I'll have to wait for Backfire to finish his part, though

Backfire

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Backfire 2013-03-08T04:19:53+00:00

I'll finish part tomorrow, I hope.

We will need a new sb for the taiko since loctav is no longer a part of it and Cristians name was spelled wrong. I could get a friend to make it perhaps?

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-08T16:31:14+00:00

I still don't know if the green lines for taiko are fixed...

Backfire

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Backfire 2013-03-09T06:55:00+00:00

Here is my part + the rest of the map for easy upload :V
http://puu.sh/2exJq
I dunno if that's how we do it now, collabs are fuzzy for me. I just did what I was asked.

Hopefully it's not too hard. If there are some problems, obviously a mod or 2 can fix it.

Thanks for letting me participate in this ;w;

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Froslass 2013-03-09T15:30:52+00:00

I'll talk to ono and we'll see :v

Thank you for making your part!

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Nemis 2013-03-09T23:10:13+00:00

[Marathon]
00:52:991 (1) - Unsnapped
00:54:218 (3) - Unsnapped and you should remove 1/4 from it
00:54:899 (6) - Unsnapped
00:55:718 (3) - Unsnapped
00:55:991 (4) - Unsnapped
00:56:399 (6) - Unsnapped
00:56:808 (1) - Unsnapped
00:57:081 (2) - Unsnapped
00:57:899 (3) - Unsnapped
00:58:308 (5) - Unsnapped
00:58:582 (6) - Unsnapped
00:58:991 (8) - Unsnapped
00:59:809 (2) - Unsnapped
01:00:082 (3) - Unsnapped
01:00:491 (5) - Unsnapped
01:00:763 (6) - Unsnapped
01:01:173 (7) - Unsnapped
01:01:718 (1) - Unsnapped
01:01:991 (3) - Unsnapped
01:03:900 (1) - Unsnapped
01:04:991 (6) - Unsnapped
01:05:843 (2) - It's better here 01:05:825 (2) -
01:07:309 (6) - Unsnapped
01:07:718 (7) - Unsnapped
01:07:991 (8) - Unsnapped
01:08:809 (3) - Unsnapped
01:09:082 (4) - Unsnapped
01:09:491 (5) - Unsnapped
01:09:900 (6) - Unsnapped

[...another unsnapped notes...]

Fix all the unsnapped notes and I'll come back... there are really a lot of them
I don't know why AiMod doesn't see them

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-09T23:30:58+00:00

Hope it's fixed.

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-09T23:46:53+00:00

AiMod is really bugged
lel

wendao

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wendao 2013-03-10T03:40:03+00:00

no kds, just weird mod
[General]
pt. 3? what's that mean?
add Kurosanyan, Cristian, Loctav, OnosakiHito, [Luanny], Norbi to tags

SPOILER

Taiko Collab

[Metadata]
Title:Because Maybe! pt. 3
TitleUnicode:Because Maybe! pt. 3
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard

Marathon

[Metadata]
Title:Because Maybe! pt. 3
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:

^^ not sure must be same or not, i don't know

[Marathon]
Disable Countdown & Letterbox

star~

bomber34

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bomber34 2013-03-12T21:04:03+00:00

So I was on your UP and saw that message and thought okay why not ... only to see that I already tried my best to mod it lawl.

rank it. Have a star

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ryza 2013-03-14T09:53:38+00:00

I'm not going to do a full mod post for this because it would be way too much work and I don't have the time, but I do have a few things to point out after one run --

first, I think this should be OD9. With a BPM of 220, for most people that can get good combos on this, it's basically free accuracy.

accu

(all of the 50's were on the very last stream because my fingers were too tired to do it properly)

this is a play with no warmup and no pauses, so this is actually pretty bad accuracy

anyways, up to you, but I think OD9 would do this map much better

another thing: 02:54:611 (1,2,3) - this is very hard to read, I think you should remove the overlap here. This map is LONG, it's okay to make it hard, but please please please do not make it annoying. I have missed here multiple times just because I can't see what's going on

and final thing: I think it is in pretty bad taste to make the last 20 seconds of the map much harder than anything before them. I understand the song increases a lot in energy, but you are placing jumps more than twice as hard as anything before them and not to mention it's 1/2 spam with no sliders (the player is already tired enough, seriously)

I almost failed here just because of how fatigued I was, if you are going to keep the long stream and all of the 1/2, at least tone down the spacing a bit and make it a little easier to read (17:05:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these jumps are not particularly intuitive at all)

anyways that is all, I may play it again in the future and see other things that stand out

hope I could be of use

edit: wow I didn't even realize the entire second half is 240 bpm, what the hell lol

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Froslass 2013-03-15T00:18:39+00:00

Harez wrote:
no kds, just weird mod
[General]
pt. 3? what's that mean? part 3
add Kurosanyan, Cristian, Loctav, OnosakiHito, [Luanny], Norbi to tags will do when ono decides to do something..

^^ not sure must be same or not, i don't know doesn't seem to be a real issue, but i'll fix it when i have the right .osu

[Marathon]
Disable Countdown & Letterbox why? lol

star~

Silynn wrote:
I'm not going to do a full mod post for this because it would be way too much work and I don't have the time, but I do have a few things to point out after one run --

first, I think this should be OD9. With a BPM of 220, for most people that can get good combos on this, it's basically free accuracy. the problem is, I think it will be too much unforgiving considering it's a pretty insane marathon and some sections are draining, like the end of Let's Move, and 100s/50s there could make things pretty bad.

accu

(all of the 50's were on the very last stream because my fingers were too tired to do it properly)

this is a play with no warmup and no pauses, so this is actually pretty bad accuracy

anyways, up to you, but I think OD9 would do this map much better

another thing: 02:54:611 (1,2,3) - this is very hard to read, I think you should remove the overlap here. This map is LONG, it's okay to make it hard, but please please please do not make it annoying. I have missed here multiple times just because I can't see what's going on made it a star, probably is a bit better now

and final thing: I think it is in pretty bad taste to make the last 20 seconds of the map much harder than anything before them. I understand the song increases a lot in energy, but you are placing jumps more than twice as hard as anything before them and not to mention it's 1/2 spam with no sliders (the player is already tired enough, seriously) I seriously don't know what to do on this part. I've tried making it easier several times, but there's no way I can map it without making it really hard. I tried to make it easier once again, but I seriously dunno how to make it feel like the music without making it too hard.

I almost failed here just because of how fatigued I was, if you are going to keep the long stream and all of the 1/2, at least tone down the spacing a bit and make it a little easier to read (17:05:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these jumps are not particularly intuitive at all)

anyways that is all, I may play it again in the future and see other things that stand out

hope I could be of use

edit: wow I didn't even realize the entire second half is 240 bpm, what the hell lol many people don't :V

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Low 2013-03-16T21:48:39+00:00

[General]
add this line to the tags: "cristian kurisuchianu backfire onosakihito [luanny] norbi"
delete "taiko_bg.jpg" and the extra SB files.

[Marathon]
08:44:992 (11) - you should remove the short break after this note. it creates a nice "waiting" atmosphere during this part and the HP drain is low enough so that you don't lose a lot of it.
08:49:367 (14) - ^
08:53:367 (11) - ^
17:08:189 (19) - why does this stream stop here? you can still map for two more notes.

[Taiko Collab]
09:48:992 (5) - in the SB, during the break after this note, you should make the "OnosakiHito" SB image fade out like you did at the end of [Luanny]'s part. even though this isn't the end of Ono's part, you should still fade it out since nobody's mapping here and it looks weird to have it there during the break.

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Froslass 2013-03-16T23:54:10+00:00

Jacob wrote:
[General]
add this line to the tags: "cristian kurisuchianu backfire onosakihito [luanny] norbi"
delete "taiko_bg.jpg" and the extra SB files. explained in pm

[Marathon]
08:44:992 (11) - you should remove the short break after this note. it creates a nice "waiting" atmosphere during this part and the HP drain is low enough so that you don't lose a lot of it. done
08:49:367 (14) - ^
08:53:367 (11) - ^
17:08:189 (19) - why does this stream stop here? you can still map for two more notes. the section 'officially' stops at (19). There is a 1/4 break then the next part starts.

[Taiko Collab]
09:48:992 (5) - in the SB, during the break after this note, you should make the "OnosakiHito" SB image fade out like you did at the end of [Luanny]'s part. even though this isn't the end of Ono's part, you should still fade it out since nobody's mapping here and it looks weird to have it there during the break. honestly, since this is supposed to replicate the old SB names we had back then (with the black bar on BG, etc) it should be better to keep the name until the end of the part. Probably this is what taiko players would say since it keeps a bit of consistency with the other taiko ranked maps.

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Low 2013-03-17T00:00:20+00:00

we're finally here.

MAT bubble #1 for approval.

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-17T01:24:55+00:00

\:D/

Makyu

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Makyu 2013-03-18T03:37:50+00:00

This map is bubble

aaaaaaaaaand.... (Hope this get ~~ranked~~Approval)

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2013-03-18T08:36:44+00:00

WoW

Chewin

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Chewin 2013-03-18T23:21:24+00:00

wow will mod it probably :3

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-18T23:24:54+00:00

Chewin wrote:
wow will mod it probably :3

yeahhh

Zexous

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Zexous 2013-03-19T01:29:09+00:00

SNB stars.
How.

Lally

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Lally 2013-03-19T03:38:21+00:00

/me add a star o3o/°

Roxas

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Roxas 2013-03-19T20:32:13+00:00

BD, this map really deserves to be approved, really good job! (Tell me if you need a mod)

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Kurai 2013-03-21T20:35:00+00:00

Cool beans!

#2

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-21T20:39:20+00:00

LOLWHAT

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-21T20:49:20+00:00

I'm going to mod this map soon, please don't mod/approve it yet :p
Taking this post as a placeholder then.
And yes, last time I didn't say this, MMzz came and ranked the map I was going to mod :C

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Chewin 2013-03-21T20:51:32+00:00

I wanted to mod it too ._.
Buh, good luck blue dragon

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Kurai 2013-03-21T20:58:53+00:00

Chewin wrote:
I wanted to mod it too ._.
Buh, good luck blue dragon

y u so slow

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Froslass 2013-03-21T21:04:25+00:00

grumd wanted to bubble #2 actually and chewin was waiting since he would do approve-check

but we got surprised :p

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Chewin 2013-03-22T12:30:40+00:00

Kurai wrote:
Chewin wrote:
I wanted to mod it too ._.
Buh, good luck blue dragon
y u so slow

Blue Dragon asked me to wait grumd's mod before to mod it, that's why I still didn't mod the mapset.
Oh well, never mind. Good luck Blue Dragon :3

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ztrot 2013-03-22T14:50:53+00:00

grumd gonna come in and make shit happen

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-22T20:27:08+00:00

Soooo, here we go.

Marathon

00:33:013 - Remove the note. I thought I already said that earlier.
01:48:627 - And this I said too. Don't end a slider at such a heavy beat. Requesting a rearrange here.
01:56:672 - 01:57:081 - Same as above.
04:30:611 (9) - That's quite unusual for this map, divide it into two sliders please. Confusing people with double repeats is not good.
04:32:793 (8) - Same here.
05:04:702 (3) - Same goes for 5-ple sliders. It's when you're already used to triples (common thing for this map) but suddenly have to hold it more. I'd just remove 2 repeats and would add a circle at 05:04:975 - . The another reason for this change will be that 05:04:975 - has a downbeat that should be stressed by a circle on it. So, two birds with one stone.
05:17:485 (2) - Probably, just probably some people may do not understand at once that this is 1/1. I just suggest to Ctrl+G this one to make it easier to make it perfectly understandable. You're still free to leave it as it is.
06:01:610 (4) - 06:02:110 (7) - 06:05:610 (4) - 06:07:110 (2) - These offbeat sliders sound too bad, move it 1/2 later or earlier to land it on the heavier beat properly.
06:08:047 - There is no sound here, so it shouldn't be 5 notes. Instead: http://puu.sh/2m3le The same goes to next slider.
06:12:360 - 06:12:422 - These two notes do not represent the same sound as following notes of the stream. They actually represent nothing, so just remove them.
06:33:110 (18) - This combo is ridiculous. Add new combos at some downbeats like 06:30:985 (9) -
06:36:735 (1) - This jump is quite tricky to catch since it's a streamy stack. Either move 06:36:610 (4) - to x:32 y:84 or just move the stack closer.
06:48:360 - Actually, there is a sound here too. Add a note here.
07:00:485 (1,2,3) - Since these notes get higher accent here, space them out. Keeping same distances as before doesn't fit the sounds as good as it could.
07:25:610 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is an overmap, there is no 1/4 behind that.
07:59:992 (5) - There are some sounds between this circle and the next object. It should be mapped, try a slider here: http://puu.sh/2m3CD
08:08:742 (11) - This slider is at the center of the whole mess, noticing it properly might be tricky. I'd replace it by a triple with circles.
09:28:867 (6,1) - This jump is quite hard to read, it's when you singletab at constant distance snap and suddenly have to jump once and keep that same speed again. It looks like a 1/1 here. I'd replace 09:28:742 (5,6,1,2) - with two sliders which make a jump, that'd be cool.
11:11:367 (4,1) - Similar to stuff above, but worse. Yes you need to change it.
11:12:117 - 11:12:179 - There are two sounds here, they ask you for a triple!
11:12:554 - 11:12:679 - And some additional notes here.
11:15:304 - 11:15:554 - 11:16:054 - 11:16:117 - 11:16:679 - And here.
You need a huge rework on those parts above.
13:41:814 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes are just pointless since you put all the following similar part under the spinner. Remove them and start spinner earlier (or at the same point, as you wish)
14:21:439 (6,7,8) - 1 grid left-up

Taiko

03:21:066 - End the spinner here please. Auto misses here because of spinner being too long, lol. And start it properly at 03:19:975 - , not at the blue tick.
05:15:884 (1) - Auto misses here too. Shorten the spinner please to 05:16:838 - .
And yes, I know that all players in taiko spin faster than auto. I just don't want people who watch autoplay be confused with auto missing notes.
15:58:314 (1) - Delete this spinner. It's too long and it doesn't make sense. Since all players in taiko spin with different speed, it will end at different points. Delete it and map this part.
Remove letterbox.
Remove breaks from .osu file.

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-22T22:25:55+00:00

Fixed.

Gaba

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Gaba 2013-03-23T00:24:02+00:00

Vai viadão, bota pra fuder, vamo suar a camisa.

Cristian

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Cristian 2013-03-23T03:16:54+00:00

Wait i didn't see where is the bubble popped post, like 4hrs ago was bubbled and no problems...

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-23T05:21:48+00:00

Cristian wrote:
Wait i didn't see where is the bubble popped post, like 4hrs ago was bubbled and no problems...

I didn't find anything unrankable so I didn't pop the bubble instantly. BD self-popped it.

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2013-03-23T09:47:26+00:00

BD self-popped it.

[Luanny]

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[Luanny] 2013-03-23T14:13:08+00:00

^oh god aheuaheauehaue

BD YOU FORGOT MY GREENLINES ._________________________.

grumd

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grumd 2013-03-24T15:52:38+00:00

Rebubbled.
Count this as bubble #2.

Low

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Low 2013-03-24T15:55:31+00:00

someone swoop in and rank this s'il vous plaît

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-24T15:57:51+00:00

\:D/

RLC

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RLC 2013-03-24T16:17:09+00:00

o baby o baby o baby

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Kawayi Rika 2013-03-24T17:23:01+00:00

Checked map via IRC ~ Nice job marathon map :3

Rebubbled #2 ~

IRC Log

01:40 Kawayi Rika: 08:37:867 - how about add a note to here
01:40 Kawayi Rika: 08:37:992 (1,2,3,4) - same as this parttern
01:42 Blue Dragon: hmmm, let me see
01:42 Blue Dragon: but just something
01:42 Blue Dragon: Chewin will check the map
01:42 Blue Dragon: i will see your suggestions
01:42 Blue Dragon: but he will check more to approve
01:42 Blue Dragon: I need as many BATs as possible because it's a long map
01:42 Blue Dragon: and i don't want unranked after D:
01:42 Kawayi Rika: hmm, i see
01:43 Blue Dragon: anyway
01:43 Blue Dragon: applied 08:37:867 -
01:44 Kawayi Rika: ok
01:45 Kawayi Rika: this map really long ~

i already used 1hour 30min
01:45 Blue Dragon: oh

01:45 Blue Dragon: sorry for taking your time haha
01:45 Blue Dragon: took me 1 year to map the song ;_;
01:45 Kawayi Rika: np

but map still good
01:50 Blue Dragon: if you want to post in the thread then do >.< modding this long map really deserves some kd
01:50 Blue Dragon: and since i applied your suggestion xD
01:51 Kawayi Rika: 05:47:985 (1,4) - move both circle to center?
01:51 Kawayi Rika: np

if chewin will approvl this map
01:52 Blue Dragon: done
01:53 Kawayi Rika: 12:55:689 (2) - move up some? a bit offscreen

01:54 Kawayi Rika: or change direction
01:54 Blue Dragon: done
01:58 Kawayi Rika: 13:41:564 (1) - try add whistle?
01:58 Kawayi Rika: sound better than clap
01:59 Blue Dragon: oh, must have been mistake
01:59 Blue Dragon: fixed
01:59 Kawayi Rika:

02:09 Kawayi Rika: 16:34:689 (1) - start on 16:35:064 - ?
02:10 Blue Dragon: nah, it's supposed to start on 16:34:564 (10) - but there is a note already
02:10 Blue Dragon: so I pushed 1/2 later
02:11 Kawayi Rika: yeah
02:12 Kawayi Rika: 16:53:189 (5) - ctrl+g
02:14 Blue Dragon: done
02:15 Kawayi Rika: that's all ~ cool map :3
02:16 Blue Dragon: thank you :3
02:17 Blue Dragon: okay

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cheesiest 2013-03-24T17:38:53+00:00

gogoggogggo you can do it BD

Chewin

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Chewin 2013-03-24T18:55:38+00:00

General

Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO
Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background?

Marathon

00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well
00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts
00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music
00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8)
00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline
01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3
01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency
01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue
01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo
02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.<
02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg
02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider
03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here?
04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo?
04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps
05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C
05:07:293 (1) - New combo?
05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1)
05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well.
05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3)
05:55:985 (7) - New combo
06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using
06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both
07:04:485 (3) - ^
07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\
07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive
07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them
07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO
07:23:985 (7) - New combo
07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead
07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos
07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well
07:55:235 (5) - New combo
07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2
08:40:992 (4) - New combo
11:24:242 (6) - ^?
11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd
12:41:314 (8) - New combo
12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency
13:03:314 (6) - New combo
13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it
13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8)

Stuff I mentioned above are just some minor issues. It's long just because the song is long.
Fix those and I will approve then. :3

iRape_old

iRape_old 2013-03-24T19:22:54+00:00

SOON

Froslass

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Froslass 2013-03-24T20:00:34+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO done
Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background? meh... nah D: you can disable skin anyway if you're playing without BG because there's no sense on making fitting combo colours with BG when there is no BG
Marathon

00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well meh... done but not so much, I don't like fixing hp bar issues lol
00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts meh, I like it the way it is, it flows better now imo
00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music in this beginning I wanted to create some 1/1 'breaks' that flow kinda well with the instrument i'm following, so nah
00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8) grumd asked me to keep it this way because all of the other ones were this number of repeats, so to avoid even more combobreaks I left it like this
00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline i don't think that makes any difference ._. but done
01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3 done
01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency removed
01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue blehhh okay
01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo done
02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.< nah
02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg done but in a better position
02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider oops
03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here? done
04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo? nah, I want it to be kinda obvious that the order is 4 then 5 here to not confuse anyone
04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps only on (7)
05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C I really like them, adds some variation to the rhythm instead of only 1-repeat sliders
05:07:293 (1) - New combo? done
05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1) done
05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well. done
05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3) nah
05:55:985 (7) - New combo done
06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using done
06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both done
07:04:485 (3) - ^ these should be way easier to read than before
07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\ fixed
07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive removed 1 repeat but didn't add the new note
07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them done
07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO done
07:23:985 (7) - New combo done
07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead done
07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos done
07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well nah
07:55:235 (5) - New combo done
07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2 yeah, but here I want to keep a more listen-able rhythm
08:40:992 (4) - New combo done
11:24:242 (6) - ^? done
11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd i want some variation though
12:41:314 (8) - New combo done
12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency done
13:03:314 (6) - New combo done
13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it done
13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8) rearranged the pattern
Stuff I mentioned above are just some minor issues. It's long just because the song is long.
Fix those and I will approve then. :3

IT'S DONE