1. 00:58:717 (7,8) - I think this "jump" would be better if it had an Distance space of 1.3xDS instead of 1.4x DS. Can't explain why really ._. 1.2x is way to short and 1.4x feels to far. Maybe, because you mostly used 0.9x DS which is fair for this part and suddenly 1.4x DS but oh well xD I really can't explain anything at all :3
2. 01:44:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty fast stream after that easier slower part. It is not like it doesn't fit but ... I guess I am just not a fan of 1/4 streams which have the same DS like 1/2 xD I would lower the stream speed to 1x DS or so. 01:45:082 (9) - would look like it continues the stream later (you can't see it until
   01:44:672 (6) - so it won't confuse anybody) which looks neat imo
3. 02:09:217 (4,1) - this small overlap doesn't look nice :/
4. 04:51:884 (1) - maybe one 1/1 beat longer so it starts from 04:51:611 - . Would fit more to the vocal and also would be fairer, because this spinner is a bit short I know it is allowed though
5. 05:33:485 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I would almost ask if you could make it completly symmetric so that 05:34:360 (9,1) - (either one of them) share the same spot with 05:35:735 (1,2) - (either one of them) and 05:37:110 (12,13) - (either one of them) but I am not even sure if it would add that much xD better just keep it as you have
6. 06:16:360 - add note?
7. 07:08:235 (6) - new combo and
8. 07:08:485 (7) - new combo I think it looks way cooler than ^^ (I don't think it would cause trouble for the gameplay at least)
9. 09:42:867 (2,1) - you mapped the upcoming parts so that there is always a jump on the new combo, because of this sound you hear at 09:42:992 (1) - (I suck at explaining xD) so why not add a jump here? Doesn't have to be that hard. If possible something like 1.3x DS, because you always switch between 1.8x DS and 1.3x DS jumps until 09:44:367 (1) -
10. 11:11:367 (4,1) - Even for this hard Marathon i think this jump is way over the top ^^ and yes i see that 11:10:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these two combos are mirrored but still
11. 11:14:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

Makyu wrote:

Why is this awesomess in the grave D:

evillander wrote:

God, this needs to be ranked o.o
Such awesomness....

Also why is "Why am I so angry?" in the graveyard... It's such a nice map >-<

Static Noise Bird wrote:

40 stars, I hope that helps a bit.

Blue Dragon wrote:

gahhhhhhhhhhhh how to get mods for marathon maps? -.-

1. OD8 and HP5 ? Change it to HP6 and OD7 and Keep calm.
2. 00:00:082 (1) - Move this Slider 1 grid up.[Grid lvl: 4] Why? dsasadsda The Distance between the End of this Slider and the next Slider isn't the same in the Distance between the end of the next Slider and 00:00:627 (1) .. NAZI >:D okno.. ._.
3. 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - Move this Patter to x:340|y:332 [Grid lvl: 4]:33
4. 00:03:559 (3,4) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33
5. 00:05:400 (2,3) - Move this Pattern to x:380|108 [Grid lvl: 4]
6. 00:06:081 (1) - Move this Slider 1 Grid up. [Grid lvl: 4]
7. 00:07:922 (4,5) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33
8. 00:11:809 (1,2,1,2) - IMO- I don't like these positions.. :c ... Or that ''transition'' xD I think you can notes in 00:11:672 , 00:12:081 , 00:12:490 .. But you will need make another Pattern (? xD
9. 00:22:445 (1) - Move the last x:240|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4]
10. 00:41:263 (6) - Move the 2nd Slider Point 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: OFF]
11. 00:52:309 (6,7,8,9,10) - Bad Flower? Try make This ... Yeah.. You will have a little jump between the (10) and the next note. A little change of the Distance Snap.. But Cme'on. xD Here is the Inf about the positions.

    00:52:445 (7) - x:172|y:228.
    00:52:582 (8) - x:116|y:272.
    00:52:718 (9) - x:144|y:340
    00:52:854 (10) - x:216|y:336. 
    All in Grid lvl: 4.

    If you don't like the change in the Distance Snap between the (10) and the next Note. Rotate the pattern by angle to make the consistency keeping the Place of the note (6) ^^.
12. 01:30:218 (2) - Move this Slider 2 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4]
13. 01:30:627 (4) - ^ If you make my last Suggestion. Move this Slider 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
14. 01:52:990 (1,2,3) - I don't if this was Intencional.. But these notes aren't stacked Perfectly in the same position of 01:52:717 (5)
15. 02:36:338 (3) - Ctrl+G
16. 02:39:202 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Move these notes, Clicking the (3), to x:395|y:98 [Grid lvl: 4] You will have This
17. 02:54:748 (2) - Move this note to x:256|y:72 (? WELL you know.. If for make another flower with the others Notes :c
18. 03:24:611 (6) - Move the 2nd SliderPoint to x:104|y:312 [Grid lvl: 4]
19. 04:01:429 (3) - Move this note to x:116|y:4 (? xD You know.. A mirrowed Note of 04:01:020 (1)
20. 04:20:111 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
21. 05:28:985 (1,2) - Move the (1) 2 Grids to the Right [Grid lvl: 4] and the (2) to the same position of 05:28:735 (4). That is because This looks much better than This.
22. 05:48:735 (5) - Move this to the same position of 05:47:485 (2) o3o If this is Intencional.. Yeah.. The ''imperfect'' looks good if is a bit obviously.
23. 06:11:922 (5,6) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of 06:11:735 (4)
24. 06:12:797 (8,9) - These notes aren't necessary.. The stream finish in 06:12:735 (7). I recommend erase (8) And move the (9) To make a jump. :33
25. 07:39:485 (3) - Move this note to the same place of 07:37:860 (1)
26. 08:37:867 (x) - Why not.. Add a note here. o3o
27. 12:47:064 (3) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
28. 12:49:064 (6) - (^) Same
29. 12:50:064 (4) - Add a Clap.
30. 12:53:189 (3) - (^) Same
31. 12:55:189 (5) - (^) Same
32. 12:57:189 (8) - (^) Same
33. 13:02:939 (5) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
34. 13:07:064 (5) - Add a Clap.
35. 13:09:314 (1) - I remember this pattern. LOL Will be ''Wonderful!'' for some players.. And for others haters. A simple Copy-paste. But is good. NEVER SURRENDER.
36. 16:08:064 (1,1) - Ctrl+J

DaxMasterix wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

gahhhhhhhhhhhh how to get mods for marathon maps? -.-

Ask Dax. LEL
Yes, nazi mod.

General:

1. Taiko BG is unrankeable now. Use the original BG (or Another is better imo) eerrrr about the SB.. Gomenasai for the Taiko mappers :c

fghsafjkdf i gotta talk to ono about this
Marathon

1. OD8 and HP5 ? Change it to HP6 and OD7 and Keep calm. why OD 7? It's a pretty hard map and we shouldn't give forgiving accuracy to players just because "it's hard". Also, Hp is a bit low because some people just want to pass the map without suffering too much (and this doesn't affect scores like OD would, so..)
2. 00:00:082 (1) - Move this Slider 1 grid up.[Grid lvl: 4] Why? dsasadsda The Distance between the End of this Slider and the next Slider isn't the same in the Distance between the end of the next Slider and 00:00:627 (1) .. NAZI >:D okno.. ._. [b]I don't see why this is a problem. This was originally mapped with grid 3 so this is pretty common. Fixed anyways.
3. 00:03:218 (2,3,4) - Move this Patter to x:340|y:332 [Grid lvl: 4]:33 kinda breaks spacing, but ok
4. 00:03:559 (3,4) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33 they are stacked in-game, so this doesn't matter lol
5. 00:05:400 (2,3) - Move this Pattern to x:380|108 [Grid lvl: 4] rearranged this pattern in another way
6. 00:06:081 (1) - Move this Slider 1 Grid up. [Grid lvl: 4] done
7. 00:07:922 (4,5) - These notes aren't Stacked Perfectly in the end of the Previous Slider :33 they are stacked in-game.
8. 00:11:809 (1,2,1,2) - IMO- I don't like these positions.. :c ... Or that ''transition'' xD I think you can notes in 00:11:672 , 00:12:081 , 00:12:490 .. But you will need make another Pattern (? xD I really like it the way it is.
9. 00:22:445 (1) - Move the last x:240|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4] done
10. 00:41:263 (6) - Move the 2nd Slider Point 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: OFF] fixed note placement instead
11. 00:52:309 (6,7,8,9,10) - Bad Flower? Try make This ... Yeah.. You will have a little jump between the (10) and the next note. A little change of the Distance Snap.. But Cme'on. xD Here is the Inf about the positions.

    00:52:445 (7) - x:172|y:228.
    00:52:582 (8) - x:116|y:272.
    00:52:718 (9) - x:144|y:340
    00:52:854 (10) - x:216|y:336. 
    All in Grid lvl: 4.

    If you don't like the change in the Distance Snap between the (10) and the next Note. Rotate the pattern by angle to make the consistency keeping the Place of the note (6) ^^. fixed by myself
12. 01:30:218 (2) - Move this Slider 2 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4] I really don't understand why, but done
13. 01:30:627 (4) - ^ If you make my last Suggestion. Move this Slider 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4] ehh ok
14. 01:52:990 (1,2,3) - I don't if this was Intencional.. But these notes aren't stacked Perfectly in the same position of 01:52:717 (5) that's not even noticeable in-game..
15. 02:36:338 (3) - Ctrl+G breaks spacing
16. 02:39:202 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Move these notes, Clicking the (3), to x:395|y:98 [Grid lvl: 4] You will have This done
    
17. 02:54:748 (2) - Move this note to x:256|y:72 (? WELL you know.. If for make another flower with the others Notes :c i want it this way, sorry
18. 03:24:611 (6) - Move the 2nd SliderPoint to x:104|y:312 [Grid lvl: 4] why? that breaks the flow
19. 04:01:429 (3) - Move this note to x:116|y:4 (? xD You know.. A mirrowed Note of 04:01:020 (1) that'd play horribly with the next slider though lol
20. 04:20:111 (4,5) - Ctrl+G fixed this square
21. 05:28:985 (1,2) - Move the (1) 2 Grids to the Right [Grid lvl: 4] and the (2) to the same position of 05:28:735 (4). That is because This looks much better than This. done
22. 05:48:735 (5) - Move this to the same position of 05:47:485 (2) o3o If this is Intencional.. Yeah.. The ''imperfect'' looks good if is a bit obviously. fixed
23. 06:11:922 (5,6) - These notes aren't perfectly in the same place of 06:11:735 (4) they stack ingame.
24. 06:12:797 (8,9) - These notes aren't necessary.. The stream finish in 06:12:735 (7). I recommend erase (8) And move the (9) To make a jump. :33 made it into a slider
25. 07:39:485 (3) - Move this note to the same place of 07:37:860 (1) fghfjdsklsflk
26. 08:37:867 (x) - Why not.. Add a note here. o3o there isn't any 1/4 sound there though...
27. 12:47:064 (3) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider. doesn't seem any fitting..
28. 12:49:064 (6) - (^) Same
29. 12:50:064 (4) - Add a Clap.
30. 12:53:189 (3) - (^) Same
31. 12:55:189 (5) - (^) Same
32. 12:57:189 (8) - (^) Same
33. 13:02:939 (5) - Add a clap to the end of the Slider.
34. 13:07:064 (5) - Add a Clap. done
35. 13:09:314 (1) - I remember this pattern. LOL Will be ''Wonderful!'' for some players.. And for others haters. A simple Copy-paste. But is good. NEVER SURRENDER. well uh I think 99% of people like it
36. 16:08:064 (1,1) - Ctrl+J why? o.o it looks much uglier

independentemente que este mapa é mais do que 240'BPM (Fucking Portuguese ;^;) I think wasn't created for ''OMG IS SO HARD'' ... Because you used always the Distance Snap xD... I think this map was created with happiness.. >w< So.. I really wanna ser this map approved. Imo.. Is a good map.. But isn't your best work. Is funny~
Good luck!

Just Remember. Never Surrender.
PD: Maybe will mod the taiko too.. idk huh

Jacob wrote:

screw placeholders~

[Marathon]

Use tick rate 2. should be used for most maps when it can fit nicely. Explained this in PM
00:18:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why are the hitsounds bland (non-existant) at this small part? feels empty to play. fixed
00:45:763 (2,3) - Overlaps in-game. fixed
00:56:400 (6) - seperate this into two sliders? The music calls for it here IMO since there was just a part like that (2 1/8 sliders), I prefer to not make it a easily combobreakable part because of it
01:00:764 (6) - ^ [b]^
01:09:491 (5) - reverse arrow on this slider is pretty much entirely hidden by 01:08:809 (3). fixed, i guess
02:01:717 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider; sounds gr0ss fixed
02:33:338 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this gets really confusing to read on a first try with hitbursts obstructing a player's view. You could increase the spacing, like this done
03:50:248 (6) - Thought this had only 1 or 2 repeats due to the previous patterns (03:48:884 (14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5)). you could make this easier to read by turning it into two repeat sliders (like this). fixed in another way
05:29:985 (2) - remove the finish from the beginning of this slider. done
08:21:992 (1,2) - Ugly sliders. I'm sure there's something pretty you could do with these. done
08:26:992 (1,2) - wouldn't it be a better idea to make these blanket? Looks kinda awkward probably a mistake, fixed

[Taiko Collab]

Remove the taiko BG ): ok (dunno what to do with the SB though, ono may want to help on this)

Harez wrote:

no kds, just weird mod
[General]
pt. 3? what's that mean? part 3
add Kurosanyan, Cristian, Loctav, OnosakiHito, [Luanny], Norbi to tags will do when ono decides to do something..


^^ not sure must be same or not, i don't know doesn't seem to be a real issue, but i'll fix it when i have the right .osu

[Marathon]
Disable Countdown & Letterbox why? lol

star~

Silynn wrote:

I'm not going to do a full mod post for this because it would be way too much work and I don't have the time, but I do have a few things to point out after one run --

first, I think this should be OD9. With a BPM of 220, for most people that can get good combos on this, it's basically free accuracy. the problem is, I think it will be too much unforgiving considering it's a pretty insane marathon and some sections are draining, like the end of Let's Move, and 100s/50s there could make things pretty bad.

accu

(all of the 50's were on the very last stream because my fingers were too tired to do it properly)

this is a play with no warmup and no pauses, so this is actually pretty bad accuracy

anyways, up to you, but I think OD9 would do this map much better

another thing: 02:54:611 (1,2,3) - this is very hard to read, I think you should remove the overlap here. This map is LONG, it's okay to make it hard, but please please please do not make it annoying. I have missed here multiple times just because I can't see what's going on made it a star, probably is a bit better now

and final thing: I think it is in pretty bad taste to make the last 20 seconds of the map much harder than anything before them. I understand the song increases a lot in energy, but you are placing jumps more than twice as hard as anything before them and not to mention it's 1/2 spam with no sliders (the player is already tired enough, seriously) I seriously don't know what to do on this part. I've tried making it easier several times, but there's no way I can map it without making it really hard. I tried to make it easier once again, but I seriously dunno how to make it feel like the music without making it too hard.

I almost failed here just because of how fatigued I was, if you are going to keep the long stream and all of the 1/2, at least tone down the spacing a bit and make it a little easier to read (17:05:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these jumps are not particularly intuitive at all)

anyways that is all, I may play it again in the future and see other things that stand out

hope I could be of use

edit: wow I didn't even realize the entire second half is 240 bpm, what the hell lol many people don't :V

Jacob wrote:

[General]
add this line to the tags: "cristian kurisuchianu backfire onosakihito [luanny] norbi"
delete "taiko_bg.jpg" and the extra SB files. explained in pm

[Marathon]
08:44:992 (11) - you should remove the short break after this note. it creates a nice "waiting" atmosphere during this part and the HP drain is low enough so that you don't lose a lot of it. done
08:49:367 (14) - ^
08:53:367 (11) - ^
17:08:189 (19) - why does this stream stop here? you can still map for two more notes. the section 'officially' stops at (19). There is a 1/4 break then the next part starts.

[Taiko Collab]
09:48:992 (5) - in the SB, during the break after this note, you should make the "OnosakiHito" SB image fade out like you did at the end of [Luanny]'s part. even though this isn't the end of Ono's part, you should still fade it out since nobody's mapping here and it looks weird to have it there during the break. honestly, since this is supposed to replicate the old SB names we had back then (with the black bar on BG, etc) it should be better to keep the name until the end of the part. Probably this is what taiko players would say since it keeps a bit of consistency with the other taiko ranked maps.

Chewin wrote:

wow will mod it probably :3

Chewin wrote:

I wanted to mod it too ._.
Buh, good luck blue dragon

Kurai wrote:

Chewin wrote:

I wanted to mod it too ._.
Buh, good luck blue dragon

y u so slow

1. 00:33:013 - Remove the note. I thought I already said that earlier.
2. 01:48:627 - And this I said too. Don't end a slider at such a heavy beat. Requesting a rearrange here.
3. 01:56:672 - 01:57:081 - Same as above.
4. 04:30:611 (9) - That's quite unusual for this map, divide it into two sliders please. Confusing people with double repeats is not good.
5. 04:32:793 (8) - Same here.
6. 05:04:702 (3) - Same goes for 5-ple sliders. It's when you're already used to triples (common thing for this map) but suddenly have to hold it more. I'd just remove 2 repeats and would add a circle at 05:04:975 - . The another reason for this change will be that 05:04:975 - has a downbeat that should be stressed by a circle on it. So, two birds with one stone.
7. 05:17:485 (2) - Probably, just probably some people may do not understand at once that this is 1/1. I just suggest to Ctrl+G this one to make it easier to make it perfectly understandable. You're still free to leave it as it is.
8. 06:01:610 (4) - 06:02:110 (7) - 06:05:610 (4) - 06:07:110 (2) - These offbeat sliders sound too bad, move it 1/2 later or earlier to land it on the heavier beat properly.
9. 06:08:047 - There is no sound here, so it shouldn't be 5 notes. Instead: http://puu.sh/2m3le The same goes to next slider.
10. 06:12:360 - 06:12:422 - These two notes do not represent the same sound as following notes of the stream. They actually represent nothing, so just remove them.
11. 06:33:110 (18) - This combo is ridiculous. Add new combos at some downbeats like 06:30:985 (9) -
12. 06:36:735 (1) - This jump is quite tricky to catch since it's a streamy stack. Either move 06:36:610 (4) - to x:32 y:84 or just move the stack closer.
13. 06:48:360 - Actually, there is a sound here too. Add a note here.
14. 07:00:485 (1,2,3) - Since these notes get higher accent here, space them out. Keeping same distances as before doesn't fit the sounds as good as it could.
15. 07:25:610 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is an overmap, there is no 1/4 behind that.
16. 07:59:992 (5) - There are some sounds between this circle and the next object. It should be mapped, try a slider here: http://puu.sh/2m3CD
17. 08:08:742 (11) - This slider is at the center of the whole mess, noticing it properly might be tricky. I'd replace it by a triple with circles.
18. 09:28:867 (6,1) - This jump is quite hard to read, it's when you singletab at constant distance snap and suddenly have to jump once and keep that same speed again. It looks like a 1/1 here. I'd replace 09:28:742 (5,6,1,2) - with two sliders which make a jump, that'd be cool.
19. 11:11:367 (4,1) - Similar to stuff above, but worse. Yes you need to change it.
20. 11:12:117 - 11:12:179 - There are two sounds here, they ask you for a triple!
21. 11:12:554 - 11:12:679 - And some additional notes here.
22. 11:15:304 - 11:15:554 - 11:16:054 - 11:16:117 - 11:16:679 - And here.
    You need a huge rework on those parts above.
23. 13:41:814 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes are just pointless since you put all the following similar part under the spinner. Remove them and start spinner earlier (or at the same point, as you wish)
24. 14:21:439 (6,7,8) - 1 grid left-up

1. 03:21:066 - End the spinner here please. Auto misses here because of spinner being too long, lol. And start it properly at 03:19:975 - , not at the blue tick.
2. 05:15:884 (1) - Auto misses here too. Shorten the spinner please to 05:16:838 - .
   And yes, I know that all players in taiko spin faster than auto. I just don't want people who watch autoplay be confused with auto missing notes.
3. 15:58:314 (1) - Delete this spinner. It's too long and it doesn't make sense. Since all players in taiko spin with different speed, it will end at different points. Delete it and map this part.
4. Remove letterbox.
5. Remove breaks from .osu file.

Cristian wrote:

Wait i didn't see where is the bubble popped post, like 4hrs ago was bubbled and no problems...

BD self-popped it.

1. Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO
2. Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background?

1. 00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well
2. 00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts
3. 00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music
4. 00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8)
5. 00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline
6. 01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3
7. 01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency
8. 01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue
9. 01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo
10. 02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.<
11. 02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg
12. 02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider
13. 03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here?
14. 04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo?
15. 04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
16. 04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps
17. 05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C
18. 05:07:293 (1) - New combo?
19. 05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1)
20. 05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well.
21. 05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3)
22. 05:55:985 (7) - New combo
23. 06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using
24. 06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both
25. 07:04:485 (3) - ^
26. 07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\
27. 07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive
28. 07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them
29. 07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO
30. 07:23:985 (7) - New combo
31. 07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead
32. 07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos
33. 07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well
34. 07:55:235 (5) - New combo
35. 07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2
36. 08:40:992 (4) - New combo
37. 11:24:242 (6) - ^?
38. 11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd
39. 12:41:314 (8) - New combo
40. 12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency
41. 13:03:314 (6) - New combo
42. 13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it
43. 13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8)

Chewin wrote:

General

1. Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO done
2. Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background? meh... nah D: you can disable skin anyway if you're playing without BG because there's no sense on making fitting combo colours with BG when there is no BG

Marathon

1. 00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well meh... done but not so much, I don't like fixing hp bar issues lol
2. 00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts meh, I like it the way it is, it flows better now imo
3. 00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music in this beginning I wanted to create some 1/1 'breaks' that flow kinda well with the instrument i'm following, so nah
4. 00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8) grumd asked me to keep it this way because all of the other ones were this number of repeats, so to avoid even more combobreaks I left it like this
5. 00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline i don't think that makes any difference ._. but done
6. 01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3 done
7. 01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency removed
8. 01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue blehhh okay
9. 01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo done
10. 02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.< nah
11. 02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg done but in a better position
12. 02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider oops
13. 03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here? done
14. 04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo? nah, I want it to be kinda obvious that the order is 4 then 5 here to not confuse anyone
15. 04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
16. 04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps only on (7)
17. 05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C I really like them, adds some variation to the rhythm instead of only 1-repeat sliders
18. 05:07:293 (1) - New combo? done
19. 05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1) done
20. 05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well. done
21. 05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3) nah
22. 05:55:985 (7) - New combo done
23. 06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using done
24. 06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both done
25. 07:04:485 (3) - ^ these should be way easier to read than before
26. 07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\ fixed
27. 07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive removed 1 repeat but didn't add the new note
28. 07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them done
29. 07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO done
30. 07:23:985 (7) - New combo done
31. 07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead done
32. 07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos done
33. 07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well nah
34. 07:55:235 (5) - New combo done
35. 07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2 yeah, but here I want to keep a more listen-able rhythm
36. 08:40:992 (4) - New combo done
37. 11:24:242 (6) - ^? done
38. 11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd i want some variation though
39. 12:41:314 (8) - New combo done
40. 12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency done
41. 13:03:314 (6) - New combo done
42. 13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it done
43. 13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8) rearranged the pattern

Stuff I mentioned above are just some minor issues. It's long just because the song is long.
Fix those and I will approve then. :3

iRape wrote:

SOON

[Luanny] wrote:

first?

Blue Dragon wrote:

YES YES YES YES OH GOD OH MAN OH GOD MAN OYES

UnderminE wrote:

Finally, i was waiting for that goddamn taiko