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IT'S DONEChewin wrote:
GeneralMarathon
- Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO done
- Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background? meh... nah D: you can disable skin anyway if you're playing without BG because there's no sense on making fitting combo colours with BG when there is no BG
Stuff I mentioned above are just some minor issues. It's long just because the song is long.
- 00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well meh... done but not so much, I don't like fixing hp bar issues lol
- 00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts meh, I like it the way it is, it flows better now imo
- 00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music in this beginning I wanted to create some 1/1 'breaks' that flow kinda well with the instrument i'm following, so nah
- 00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8) grumd asked me to keep it this way because all of the other ones were this number of repeats, so to avoid even more combobreaks I left it like this
- 00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline i don't think that makes any difference ._. but done
- 01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3 done
- 01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency removed
- 01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue blehhh okay
- 01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo done
- 02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.< nah
- 02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg done but in a better position
- 02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider oops
- 03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here? done
- 04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo? nah, I want it to be kinda obvious that the order is 4 then 5 here to not confuse anyone
- 04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
- 04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps only on (7)
- 05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C I really like them, adds some variation to the rhythm instead of only 1-repeat sliders
- 05:07:293 (1) - New combo? done
- 05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1) done
- 05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well. done
- 05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3) nah
- 05:55:985 (7) - New combo done
- 06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using done
- 06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both done
- 07:04:485 (3) - ^ these should be way easier to read than before
- 07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\ fixed
- 07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive removed 1 repeat but didn't add the new note
- 07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them done
- 07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO done
- 07:23:985 (7) - New combo done
- 07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead done
- 07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos done
- 07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well nah
- 07:55:235 (5) - New combo done
- 07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2 yeah, but here I want to keep a more listen-able rhythm
- 08:40:992 (4) - New combo done
- 11:24:242 (6) - ^? done
- 11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd i want some variation though
- 12:41:314 (8) - New combo done
- 12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency done
- 13:03:314 (6) - New combo done
- 13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it done
- 13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8) rearranged the pattern
Fix those and I will approve then. :3
iRape wrote:
SOON
I think I saw similar comment on Big Black or Airman map.Blue Dragon wrote:
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HahaUnderminE wrote:
Finally, i was waiting for that goddamn taiko