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Fix those and I will approve then. :3
- Disable letterbox during breaks? They are ugly IMO
- Honestly I don't like the Combo Colour 2, it will be hard to read without BG.. What about to use yellow or orange that fits much better with "Because Maybe" of the Background?
- 00:00:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I would move the whole pattern some grid down because, actually, the slider 00:01:717 (1) - touches the HP bar, and it's bad. Obviously when you have fixed that you should fix next elements placements as well
- 00:05:808 (3,4) - CTRL + G these two elements? Applying this you would also reduce the spacing between 00:05:945 (4,1) making it consistent with all other parts
- 00:08:604 - What about to add circle here with whistle? It would fill that "laser" (?) sound you can hear in the music
- 00:54:627 (5) - The sound is still going after the spinner is finished here. What about to add two more repeats till the blue tick on 00:54:831? I mean: http://puu.sh/2nbd9 Moreover, I would suggest you the same for 00:58:990 (8)
- 00:57:626 (2) - Uh, this slider is unsnapped by 1ms. I don't know why AIBat or AIMat doesn't catch is but oh well, snap it manually on the timeline
- 01:01:717 (1) - Add finish to emphasize that clash in the cymbals. Actually I feel finish here sounds much better than whistle ;3
- 01:05:536 (1) - Is this new combo really needed? You didn't use it on the next part and so I would remove it to keep consistency
- 01:39:899 (1,3) - I would avoid totally overlapped sliders like 01:39:217 (3,1). Then what about to CTRL those two sliders 01:39:899 (1,3)? The flow won't change, it will be the same, but at least you will fix that issue
- 01:44:536 (1) - This is just a suggestion: If I were you I would set new combo on this circe because squares are much easier to play if on the first circle is set a new combo
- 02:04:990 (1) - This slider touches HP bar.. It's the same for 02:09:763 (2). Move them elsewhere <.<
- 02:35:657 (3) - What about to move this circle till x:196 y:20 to make a square? http://puu.sh/2nbLg
- 02:52:975 (9) - I guess you forgot to set new combo on this slider
- 03:21:338 (1) - What about to add finish here?
- 04:20:248 (5) - Add new combo?
- 04:39:611 (1,3) - It would be more logical if you removed the new combo from the actual (1) adding it on that downbeat where is placed the slider (3)
- 04:45:884 (7,10) - Claps
- 05:04:702 (3) - I don't like 1/4 sliders with so much repeats that end on the downbeat.. What about to use this other rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/2nc3C
- 05:07:293 (1) - New combo?
- 05:32:985 (5,1) - Add new combo on (5) removing it from (1)
- 05:42:985 (5) - Add clap and remove from 05:43:485 (2) to keep consistency. Moreover, add clap on 05:44:985 (4)'s head and on 05:45:985 (4)'s head as well.
- 05:48:735 (5) - I would suggest you the same thing I wrote about 05:04:702 (3)
- 05:55:985 (7) - New combo
- 06:26:235 (5) - New combo to warn about the new 1/1 rhythm you are using
- 06:30:485 (7,9) - To make them easier to read, set new combo on both
- 07:04:485 (3) - ^
- 07:05:860 (6,7) - Why don't you keep the same rhythm you used for the previous 07:04:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6)? I mean, slider/circle - slider/circle - slider/circle. The slider/slider you used here breaks the rhythm and the flow you created :\
- 07:12:110 (6) - Remove a repeat and add a circle on the next red tick: http://puu.sh/2ncsU This rhythm is more intuitive
- 07:15:985 (1,1) - Add two finished on these two circles, they sound much better with them
- 07:18:360 (5) - Move this circle 1/2 later on the time line? (fixing the spacing, of course). That empty white line could confuse the players IMO
- 07:23:985 (7) - New combo
- 07:39:735 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) adding it on (2) instead
- 07:43:110 (12,1) - Do the same here. Change the new combos
- 07:47:735 (1) - I guess you already know what I want to suggest you here xD Remove one repeat from this slider adding a circle on the empty downbeat. Don't forget to fix the hitsounds as well
- 07:55:235 (5) - New combo
- 07:59:992 (5) - From here: listening the music with 25% playback rate this rhythm would fill all the sounds in the music: http://puu.sh/2ncU2
- 08:40:992 (4) - New combo
- 11:24:242 (6) - ^?
- 11:58:814 (6) - You should use this rhythm to keep consistency with previous parts: http://puu.sh/2ndrd
- 12:41:314 (8) - New combo
- 12:48:314 (4) - New combo for consistency
- 13:03:314 (6) - New combo
- 13:06:064 (2) - This slider would flow better if you decided to ctrl+g it
- 13:28:564 (6) - You should CTRL + G this slider as well because to keep consistency with 13:27:814 (3,4) / 13:28:814 (7,8)
Fix those and I will approve then. :3