Hallöchen ^^
[Xin's Easy]
00:24:376 (4) - this slider looks a bit weird
00:44:376 (3) - ctrl h, and then place it there, where it was xD
01:41:519 (2) - clap?
02:08:662 (1) - should the spinner end that late on purpose? o.o
Note: Nice diff~
[Normal]
00:41:519 (3,4,5) - this seems kinda confusing for normal
00:55:805 (3) - arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/21XPi (3 should be under 1)
00:58:662 (3) - o.o weird reverses, i wouldn't use it like this, it's not very fitting imo
Note: I don't always like the slider shapes, and how they're placed..01:40:090 (1,2) - for example this. I like the slider shape, but i don't really like how they're placed xD maybe change the second "thunder" into something different
[Hard]
00:17:769 (2) - make this slider curvy as well?
00:48:662 (1,2) - 1 more reserve each?
00:57:233 (1,2) - i love this placing xD
01:04:733 (2) - replace this thorugh a reverse rslider?
01:07:590 (2) - ^
01:19:733 (5) - nc i guess
01:20:090 (1) - i feel like finish here O_O xD
01:31:519 (1) - 01:47:948 (5) - this part is awesome! really love the hitsounds here.
02:08:305 (4) - i would stack this under 3. not under the nc
Note: It's ok imo
[Insane]
Why don't you put off the sliderslide in the first part? it seems a bit noisy
00:43:483 (4) - i wouldn't use the same shape as 00:42:948 (3) - since it's the same .. background xD
01:04:376 (1,2) - make it like this maybe: http://puu.sh/21Y5i i think it fits the beat more
01:07:233 (1,2) - ^
01:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest a different pattern here: http://puu.sh/21Y6Q why? because the beat is like getting up, and i think this pattern fits more
Note: I like the flow in this map !
goood luck ^
[Xin's Easy]
00:24:376 (4) - this slider looks a bit weird
00:44:376 (3) - ctrl h, and then place it there, where it was xD
01:41:519 (2) - clap?
02:08:662 (1) - should the spinner end that late on purpose? o.o
Note: Nice diff~
[Normal]
00:41:519 (3,4,5) - this seems kinda confusing for normal
00:55:805 (3) - arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/21XPi (3 should be under 1)
00:58:662 (3) - o.o weird reverses, i wouldn't use it like this, it's not very fitting imo
Note: I don't always like the slider shapes, and how they're placed..01:40:090 (1,2) - for example this. I like the slider shape, but i don't really like how they're placed xD maybe change the second "thunder" into something different
[Hard]
00:17:769 (2) - make this slider curvy as well?
00:48:662 (1,2) - 1 more reserve each?
00:57:233 (1,2) - i love this placing xD
01:04:733 (2) - replace this thorugh a reverse rslider?
01:07:590 (2) - ^
01:19:733 (5) - nc i guess
01:20:090 (1) - i feel like finish here O_O xD
01:31:519 (1) - 01:47:948 (5) - this part is awesome! really love the hitsounds here.
02:08:305 (4) - i would stack this under 3. not under the nc
Note: It's ok imo
[Insane]
Why don't you put off the sliderslide in the first part? it seems a bit noisy
00:43:483 (4) - i wouldn't use the same shape as 00:42:948 (3) - since it's the same .. background xD
01:04:376 (1,2) - make it like this maybe: http://puu.sh/21Y5i i think it fits the beat more
01:07:233 (1,2) - ^
01:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - i suggest a different pattern here: http://puu.sh/21Y6Q why? because the beat is like getting up, and i think this pattern fits more
Note: I like the flow in this map !
goood luck ^