1. Remove extra .osb files from beatmap folder! (there's 3 of them, atm!)
2. According to AiBat spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 624x623).
3. your SB breaks guideline about SB load. :< (02:11:073 or 01:51:519 - here, for example). If it possible, try to reduce SB load. For old computers this SB load is too much! :<

1. 00:00:091 and so on - slider-slide sound doesn't fits here good enough, imo. Try to silince it? I think you should do it because this sound is annoying
2. 00:10:626 (4,5,1) - at first, it confused me a lot. And I think it's a bit hard to read, can you unstack 00:11:162 (5,1) - and 00:10:626 (4). It will make your patterns a bit more consistent and readable. example-picture
3. 00:12:948 (4,5) - ultra-nazi - ho about softer shape of sliders here? I think it will fit with music better.
   
   if you're lazy here's the code

   
   

   216,160,12948,2,0,P|194:108|194:108|152:88|152:88|128:32,1,150
   64,104,13483,2,0,P|80:152|80:152|128:176|128:176|144:224,1,150
   56,248,14019,2,0,P|79:322,1,75

4. 00:21:519 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - nazi - don't you feel like star-shaped pattern will fit great here? example (i know, you can make brilliant pattern!)
5. 01:04:376 (1,2) - did you forget to place some jumps here? If I got your pattern right, you should place some jumps here! (same for 01:17:233 (1,2) - music is energetic, and placing some jumps will make map more enjoyable)
6. 01:12:948 - how about making this spinner a bit louder? I feel like this beat MUST be louder. Players should FEEL the spinner's end!
7. 01:35:983 (5,6) - i don't think that it's really easy to read. for example 01:35:090 (3,4) - 1/2 notes are stacked. and here 01:35:983 (5,6) - is different rhythm. How about unstacking it? Think about players >3</
8. 01:39:912 (6,7,1) - inconsistency(nazi) - usually, you use manual-stack for triplets. Why do you use regular spacing here? :V It feels exatcly like 01:34:198 (4,5,1). (also check 01:42:858 (7,1) - probably the same)
9. 01:47:680 (3,4) - if you've applied 01:35:983 (5,6) - do the same here for consistency.
10. 02:10:090 (1) - you can't silince it, but you can use here Soft 5% volume hitsounds. Do it, please!

1. OD + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. Also [Hard] diff should be hard, that's why OD+1 is ok here.
2. 00:00:091 and so on - slider-slide sound doesn't fits here good enough, imo. Try to silince it? I think you should do it because this sound is annoying (same as insane)
3. 00:15:805 (4) - how about improving rhythm a bit? I think you can use here rhytht from [Insane] diff. example.jpg
4. 00:22:233 (5) - 2x reversed slider. I always complain about them. This slider is short, so we don't have enough time to notice 2nd reverse. Also it's inconsistent (00:23:840 (3) - 00:25:269 (3) - 00:26:698 (3) - 00:28:126 (3) - have only ONE repeat). If it's posible remove extra repeat from the slider, please!
5. 01:14:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i love it! <3
6. 02:07:233 (3) - if you remove 2nd repeat from this slider andd add circle instead, you will make me happy.
7. 02:10:090 (1) - same as insane here! />3<\

1. How about AR5 it will fit with energetic music! Also it fits with your slider velocity and patterns.
2. 00:00:091 (1) - and so on - same suggestion as [Insane] and [Hard] - silince slider-slide hitsound!
3. 00:41:519 (3,4,5,1) - I can't say that it's readable enough for Normal diff.00:42:233 (5) - is covered by (3)'s hitburst and 1 is too close to (4)
4. 00:58:662 (3) - 2x reversed slider. . I always complain about them. This slider is short, so we don't have enough time to notice 2nd reverse. try this instead (check 01:08:662 (1,2) - almost the same)
5. 01:20:090 (1,2) - if you've applied suggestion above, fix those two, too!
6. 01:36:519 (3) - same as above + this time this slider is too short. Keep patterns in [Normal] readable for new-players!

1. 00:00:091 and so on - slider-slide sound doesn't fits here good enough, imo. Try to silince it? I think you should do it because this sound is annoying
2. 00:11:519 (1) - 00:14:376 - and so on - try to use custom hitsound here. For example in BounceBabe's part there's an awesome custom clap
3. 00:57:233 (1,2) - can't say that I like 00:57:948 (2) - how about re-arranging this pattern a bit? maybe you will like it
4. 01:00:090 (1,2) - same as above. Apply both, or ignore both.
5. 01:20:090 (1,2) - nazi - blanket slider here isn't perfect. I'm sure you can improve it >3<//
6. 02:00:090 (5) - if you unstack this circle, and place new combo on it - it will be much better. It's always beter to make last note of the part more EPIC. Players like it.
7. 02:06:876 - I'd place here a circle. It fits here, and won't hurt your patterns too much!

-Bakari- wrote:

osu! need more your maps. ^-^

[General]

1. Remove extra .osb files from beatmap folder! (there's 3 of them, atm!) You're so right yes!
2. According to AiBat spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 624x623). Yup, fixed, never noticed haha.
3. your SB breaks guideline about SB load. :< (02:11:073 or 01:51:519 - here, for example). If it possible, try to reduce SB load. For old computers this SB load is too much! :<

If you go to test mode its not above 5 and this is fine!

[Insane]

1. 00:00:091 and so on - slider-slide sound doesn't fits here good enough, imo. Try to silince it? I think you should do it because this sound is annoying I wanted it like that! Fits the song imo and doesnt make the start so boring
2. 00:10:626 (4,5,1) - at first, it confused me a lot. And I think it's a bit hard to read, can you unstack 00:11:162 (5,1) - and 00:10:626 (4). It will make your patterns a bit more consistent and readable. example-picture The stack is on purpose to give the player a sign which says: Here starts the map
3. 00:12:948 (4,5) - ultra-nazi - ho about softer shape of sliders here? I think it will fit with music better.
   
   if you're lazy here's the code

   Your example is too strict, i want to give it more randomness sliderwise! But thanks
   

   216,160,12948,2,0,P|194:108|194:108|152:88|152:88|128:32,1,150
   64,104,13483,2,0,P|80:152|80:152|128:176|128:176|144:224,1,150
   56,248,14019,2,0,P|79:322,1,75

4. 00:21:519 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - nazi - don't you feel like star-shaped pattern will fit great here? example (i know, you can make brilliant pattern!) Its about the spacing and i thought about this too, but found how it is now better!
5. 01:04:376 (1,2) - did you forget to place some jumps here? If I got your pattern right, you should place some jumps here! (same for 01:17:233 (1,2) - music is energetic, and placing some jumps will make map more enjoyable) Didnt forget a jump? o.o
6. 01:12:948 - how about making this spinner a bit louder? I feel like this beat MUST be louder. Players should FEEL the spinner's end! It is on loud 90% ;w;
7. 01:35:983 (5,6) - i don't think that it's really easy to read. for example 01:35:090 (3,4) - 1/2 notes are stacked. and here 01:35:983 (5,6) - is different rhythm. How about unstacking it? Think about players >3</ Playing wise, its good to play, so i dont think theres a problem about reading hmm
8. 01:39:912 (6,7,1) - inconsistency(nazi) - usually, you use manual-stack for triplets. Why do you use regular spacing here? :V It feels exatcly like 01:34:198 (4,5,1). (also check 01:42:858 (7,1) - probably the same) Thats also on purpose, i wanted it like this >o<
9. 01:47:680 (3,4) - if you've applied 01:35:983 (5,6) - do the same here for consistency.
10. 02:10:090 (1) - you can't silince it, but you can use here Soft 5% volume hitsounds. Do it, please! The volume is on 80% ;w; and the end on 10%, no need to change is it?

[Hard]

1. OD + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. Also [Hard] diff should be hard, that's why OD+1 is ok here.Due to it being hard and not insane, i want it how it is to not make it too hard.
2. 00:00:091 and so on - slider-slide sound doesn't fits here good enough, imo. Try to silince it? I think you should do it because this sound is annoying (same as insane) Same as above
3. 00:15:805 (4) - how about improving rhythm a bit? I think you can use here rhytht from [Insane] diff. example.jpg I wanted a little difference too!
4. 00:22:233 (5) - 2x reversed slider. I always complain about them. This slider is short, so we don't have enough time to notice 2nd reverse. Also it's inconsistent (00:23:840 (3) - 00:25:269 (3) - 00:26:698 (3) - 00:28:126 (3) - have only ONE repeat). If it's posible remove extra repeat from the slider, please! I-I-It fits with the vocal and rythm o.o
5. 01:14:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i love it! <3 Yay
6. 02:07:233 (3) - if you remove 2nd repeat from this slider andd add circle instead, you will make me happy. Definately changed, good suggestion thanks!
7. 02:10:090 (1) - same as insane here! />3<\ Same as above >o<

[Normal]

1. How about AR5 it will fit with energetic music! Also it fits with your slider velocity and patterns.The Normal spread is totally fine, and it shouldnt be harder anyway. ><
2. 00:00:091 (1) - and so on - same suggestion as [Insane] and [Hard] - silince slider-slide hitsound! Same as above
3. 00:41:519 (3,4,5,1) - I can't say that it's readable enough for Normal diff.00:42:233 (5) - is covered by (3)'s hitburst and 1 is too close to (4) Will try to find good hit300 and so on >< Its hard to fit this skin, also had this prob at "She doesn't mind"
4. 00:58:662 (3) - 2x reversed slider. . I always complain about them. This slider is short, so we don't have enough time to notice 2nd reverse. try this instead (check 01:08:662 (1,2) - almost the same) No, i want to keep this rythm its pretty fine and fits imo!
5. 01:20:090 (1,2) - if you've applied suggestion above, fix those two, too! Didnt sorry
6. 01:36:519 (3) - same as above + this time this slider is too short. Keep patterns in [Normal] readable for new-players! It is readable?

Nice as always. <3

Good luck!

wa_ wrote:

Hi from M4M!
Awesome map and so hard to mod I'm not experienced modder, but I hope it helps You :>
Mostly suggestions.

[General]
Storyboard is amazing, but sometimes too much loaded. Its fine in testmode!
I think Kiai times might be better:
from 00:51:519 to 01:14:376
from 01:48:662 to 01:57:233 or 02:00:090 Kiai too long ;w; no change

[Normal]
00:31:519 (1) - what about to small shape change to like this http://puu.sh/1ZkQg (red points at slider ticks) Changed
00:32:948 (2) - this same ^
01:02:948 (1,2,1,2) - it looks a bit boring, for example timing: http://puu.sh/1ZlaZ (added hitcircle) Want to make it not too hard, and some difference too
01:46:162 (2,3) - this pattern sounds not good, try this http://puu.sh/1Zl2w It suits both, so its about the one looking at it, i like it how it is!

Another nice diff!

[Hard]
01:07:590 (2) - what about pattern like this http://puu.sh/1Zlw8 Fits the previous rythm i made
01:58:662 (1,2) - make more circular blanket? ex. http://puu.sh/1ZlCG No, i like it when they flow into each other

Looks great!

[Insane]
00:24:376 (1) - move slider tail a little higher to make better blanket 00:23:840 (3,4,1) - Its all about the triangle!
01:08:305 (3) - flip horizontally and vertically and reverse it (ofc move it to previous positon) - looks better imo Flows with the previous slider
01:24:019 (4) - make similar to 01:08:305 (3) but don't reverse slider ^
02:08:662 (1,2) - make like this? http://puu.sh/1Zm1M (ofc decrease spacing) Ending should be kept easy!

Pretty fun difficulty!

gl with rank ^^

BounceBabe wrote:

I dont change blanket stuff unless it really looks odd ;w;

1. There are unused skin and sb files: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png, sb\girls.png. Remove them
2. Sliderslide is too loud and noisy. Silence it!
3. The start is too short, maybe audio lead in ~2-3?

1. 00:11:519 ~ 00:22:948 - remove all claps. Sounds awful :<
2. 00:51:519 ~ 01:14:376 - remove claps from downbeats in this part. Try to put them on every second beat:
   
   1. 00:51:519 (1) - in the end
   2. 00:52:233 (2) - ^
   3. 00:55:448 (2) - here
   4. 00:56:876 (4) - and here and so on
3. 01:14:376 ~ 01:22:948 - you can alternate finish-clap on downbeats:
   
   1. 01:14:376 (1) - there is finish
   2. 01:15:805 (3) - put clap here
   3. 01:17:233 (1) - change clap to finish
   4. 01:20:090 (1) - ^
   Sounds really better
4. 01:31:519 (1,2,3) - you can add claps to the end
5. 01:35:805 (1) - remove clap from downbeat. Claps on downbeat sound bad!
6. 01:39:376 (3) - same here
7. 01:42:948 (1) - and here
8. 01:45:805 (4) - ^
9. 01:48:662 - 01:57:233 - why there are no claps on the end of this sliders?
10. 02:08:662 (1) - end spinner at 02:10:090 - with soft finish

1. HP -1
2. 00:11:519 ~ 00:21:340 - remove claps from downbeats. Sounds bad :\
3. 00:22:948 ~ 00:34:376 - how about claps on every second beat? Sounds better
4. 00:51:519 ~ 01:14:376 - same here, please, put claps on every 2nd beat.
5. 00:51:519 (1) - shorten or inscrease to white tick, would be better D: (and plays better too)
6. 00:54:019 - this is normal, why not to add here a note?
7. 00:54:376 (1) - again, end on white tick
8. 01:14:376 (1,2,3,4) - soft whistle on reverses
9. 01:22:769 (1) - start on 01:22:948 - please, plays better, look better and also, while playing in osu!mania, it's easier, cause spinner which is 1/2 after note is for hards
10. 01:31:519 ~ 01:37:233 - why claps are not on every second beat? :O Add it to 01:32:590 (3) - 01:34:019 (3) - 01:35:448 (3) - and so on too
11. 01:35:805 (1,2,3) - VERY bad rhythm for normal. Blue tick are not recommended for such a easy diff. Try this (pause sound really good in this moment)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:37:233 ~ 01:46:876 - remove claps from downbeat. Add on every second beat.
13. 01:47:233 (1,2,3) - again, such as on 01:35:805 (1,2,3) -
14. 01:48:662 - put claps better :<
15. 02:10:090 - maybe end map here?

1. AR seemed too fast for this diff, while I was playing. So, AR -1
2. Also, check out and fix your hitsounds here, like I suggested in easy and normal. I won't mention them here.
3. 00:21:519 (4) - put nc here to emphasise this moment
4. 00:30:090 (5) - new combo
5. 00:30:090 (5) - don't like this blue tick, try to change it
6. 00:30:805 (6) - move to 00:30:983 - to follow your rhythm before
7. 01:37:055 (4) - add clap, sounds much better with it
8. 02:00:090 - map this last break? It will be better, cause the end after it is short, so wait some seconds for this short end is boring
9. 02:10:090 - end here

1. AR - 1 too
2. Again, fix all claps in this diff
3. 00:34:465 - add spinner as in other diffs
4. 01:11:519 (1) - finish
5. 01:35:983 (5,6) - don't stack them, it's hard to read blue tick. Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:37:412 (5) - move nc here as this is the note which goes after downbeat
7. 01:47:680 (3,4) - again, don't stack. Try make triange around the 01:47:233 (1) -
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:00:090 - map this break?
9. 02:10:090 - end map here

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hey!

General

1. There are unused skin and sb files: default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, default-x.png, sb\girls.png. Remove them
2. Sliderslide is too loud and noisy. Silence it!
3. The start is too short, maybe audio lead in ~2-3?

Removed element and change audio lead in to 2. Wont silence the sliderslide because its part of my hitsounds

Xin's Easy

1. 00:11:519 ~ 00:22:948 - remove all claps. Sounds awful :<
2. 00:51:519 ~ 01:14:376 - remove claps from downbeats in this part. Try to put them on every second beat:
   
   1. 00:51:519 (1) - in the end
   2. 00:52:233 (2) - ^
   3. 00:55:448 (2) - here
   4. 00:56:876 (4) - and here and so on
3. 01:14:376 ~ 01:22:948 - you can alternate finish-clap on downbeats:
   
   1. 01:14:376 (1) - there is finish
   2. 01:15:805 (3) - put clap here
   3. 01:17:233 (1) - change clap to finish
   4. 01:20:090 (1) - ^
   Sounds really better
4. 01:31:519 (1,2,3) - you can add claps to the end
5. 01:35:805 (1) - remove clap from downbeat. Claps on downbeat sound bad!
6. 01:39:376 (3) - same here
7. 01:42:948 (1) - and here
8. 01:45:805 (4) - ^
9. 01:48:662 - 01:57:233 - why there are no claps on the end of this sliders?
10. 02:08:662 (1) - end spinner at 02:10:090 - with soft finish

No to these

Normal

1. HP -1 No because the spread is fine
2. 00:11:519 ~ 00:21:340 - remove claps from downbeats. Sounds bad :\
3. 00:22:948 ~ 00:34:376 - how about claps on every second beat? Sounds better
4. 00:51:519 ~ 01:14:376 - same here, please, put claps on every 2nd beat.
5. 00:51:519 (1) - shorten or inscrease to white tick, would be better D: (and plays better too)
6. 00:54:019 - this is normal, why not to add here a note?
7. 00:54:376 (1) - again, end on white tick
8. 01:14:376 (1,2,3,4) - soft whistle on reverses
9. 01:22:769 (1) - start on 01:22:948 - please, plays better, look better and also, while playing in osu!mania, it's easier, cause spinner which is 1/2 after note is for hards
10. 01:31:519 ~ 01:37:233 - why claps are not on every second beat? :O Add it to 01:32:590 (3) - 01:34:019 (3) - 01:35:448 (3) - and so on too
11. 01:35:805 (1,2,3) - VERY bad rhythm for normal. Blue tick are not recommended for such a easy diff. Try this (pause sound really good in this moment)
    
    SPOILER

    
    The rythm is ok and it plays fine too, i already asked jericho about it and he is also fine with it
12. 01:37:233 ~ 01:46:876 - remove claps from downbeat. Add on every second beat.
13. 01:47:233 (1,2,3) - again, such as on 01:35:805 (1,2,3) -
14. 01:48:662 - put claps better :<
15. 02:10:090 - maybe end map here?

No as well, also i wont end the map there because of the song itselfs not ending there yet. The hitsounds are taste, i like them

Hard

1. AR seemed too fast for this diff, while I was playing. So, AR -1 Changed
2. Also, check out and fix your hitsounds here, like I suggested in easy and normal. I won't mention them here.
3. 00:21:519 (4) - put nc here to emphasise this moment Added
4. 00:30:090 (5) - new combo Same
5. 00:30:090 (5) - don't like this blue tick, try to change it
6. 00:30:805 (6) - move to 00:30:983 - to follow your rhythm before
7. 01:37:055 (4) - add clap, sounds much better with it
8. 02:00:090 - map this last break? It will be better, cause the end after it is short, so wait some seconds for this short end is boring
9. 02:10:090 - end here

No as well like before

Insane

1. AR - 1 too No, it would make the map too slow
2. Again, fix all claps in this diff
3. 00:34:465 - add spinner as in other diffs
4. 01:11:519 (1) - finish
5. 01:35:983 (5,6) - don't stack them, it's hard to read blue tick. Try this: Changed
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:37:412 (5) - move nc here as this is the note which goes after downbeat Changed
7. 01:47:680 (3,4) - again, don't stack. Try make triange around the 01:47:233 (1) - Changed
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:00:090 - map this break?
9. 02:10:090 - end map here

Like i said above already

That's all. Good luck!

[General]

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

1. You're missing the files hit50.png, hit100.png, hit100k.png, hit300.png, hit300k.png and hit300g.png in your beatmap folder.

1. 02:00:090 (1) - You don't need this single combo here, just remove it.
2. 02:08:662 (1) - If I were you I'd let this spinner end at 02:10:090 and add a finish, for a better ending.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance your difficulty and make a proper spread.

1. 00:15:626 (3,4) - Wrong spacing, please make sure to fix it with using distance snap properly.
2. 00:17:233 (1,2,3,4) - Again, there are some little spacing inconsistenties through this pattern, respace them correctly please.
3. 00:41:519 (3,4,5) - I'd try to avoid to stack them this way, better making them this way instead.
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:44:376 (3,4,5) - Same thing for the pattern above.
5. 01:32:590 (3) - Do not stack this note under the previous slider end, it's way too confusing to read for beginners, move it somewhere else.
6. 01:32:948 (1,2,3) - Same goes for this one, make something else please.
7. 01:34:376 (1,2,3) - And this one as well.
8. 01:35:805 (1,2,3) - This pattern is way too tricky to read and play for a Normal difficulty, the slider repeats are just too confusing, what do you think about making a single slider instead? It would solve this problem.
9. 02:10:090 (1) - I'd actually prefer if you add a circle here instead of this spinner, like this.
   SPOILER

   

1. Settings are way too low for a Hard difficulty, increase HP, OD and AR by 1 tick at least.

1. 01:35:983 (4,5) - I'd actually prefer if you make these notes into a slider, it would be easier to read and better to play, like this.
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:07:233 (1,2,3) - I don't like how you spaced these notes together, it seems like a forced jump, make them this way instead for a better flow.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:15:805 (1) - You should remove this new combo from here since you didn't add it on the other parts that are like this.
3. 00:22:233 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it manually or through using the distance snap properly.
4. 00:26:519 (3) - I didn't notice this circle under slider because of the blue approachcircle that it's almost hard to see with this background, think about moving it somewhere else to fix it please.
5. 01:35:626 (4) - New combo due to the new stanza and spacing change.
6. 01:37:055 (4) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
7. 01:37:948 (3,4,5) - Wrong spacing, they're too far each other, please fix them with distance snap enabled.

• • You should use a silent sliderslide.wav, right now some slider are way too noisy.
  • Increase audio lead-in a little, 2 seconds should be fine.
  • 00:22:677 (green timing section) - This section is unsnapped, move it at 00:22:680.
  • 01:14:287 (kiai) - I understand what you're trying to do here but I think it's better to start this kiai fountain 1/4 later to better follow the music.
  • 02:00:000 (break) - Having a break near the end is kinda pointless to me, you should delete it and map this little part.

• • 00:12:948 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
  • 00:14:376 (3) - ...and add it here.
  • 00:25:448 (5,1) - This blanket can be better, try to improve it.
  • 00:37:144 (green timing section) - Move this section at 00:37:233.
  • 01:02:948 (1) - Move this slider at x:363 y:163.
  • 01:31:519 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this pattern, try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:39:019 (2) - Move this circle at x:256 y:368.
  • 01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern, try to make a pentagon.
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.

• • 00:37:144 (green timing section) - Move this section at 00:37:233.
  • 00:45:805 (1,2,3) - This blanket can be better, try to improve it.
  • 00:52:590 (2) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier then add a circle at 00:52:769.
  • 00:54:019 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:55:448 (2) - Same as 00:52:590.
  • 01:20:090 (1,2) - Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 00:28:662 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - You should keep using the same pattern as before, I mean long slider --> circle --> 1/2 slider with repeat, this change of rhythm kinda bothers me, if you want to do something different then try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:34:555 (x) - Add a spinner here like you did on Easy/Normal.
  • 01:11:340 (6) - Don't overlap this circle with the next slider, move it a bit up.
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • Overall Difficulty: 8
  • 00:34:555 (x) - Add a spinner here like you did on Easy/Normal.
  • 00:42:769 (2) - Move this circle at x:40 y:146.
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • You should use a silent sliderslide.wav, right now some slider are way too noisy. Thats the effect i was after
  • Increase audio lead-in a little, 2 seconds should be fine. Changed
  • 00:22:677 (green timing section) - This section is unsnapped, move it at 00:22:680. Changed
  • 01:14:287 (kiai) - I understand what you're trying to do here but I think it's better to start this kiai fountain 1/4 later to better follow the music. Changed
  • 02:00:000 (break) - Having a break near the end is kinda pointless to me, you should delete it and map this little part. Its on purpose, i wanted a Break there.

Xin's Easy

• • 00:12:948 (1) - Remove the new combo here... Changed
  • 00:14:376 (3) - ...and add it here.Changed
  • 00:25:448 (5,1) - This blanket can be better, try to improve it.Changed
  • 00:37:144 (green timing section) - Move this section at 00:37:144. It is o.o
  • 01:02:948 (1) - Move this slider at x:363 y:163.Changed
  • 01:31:519 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this pattern, try to do something like this Changed, i tried to recreate this pattern as good as i can!:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:39:019 (2) - Move this circle at x:256 y:368.Changed
  • 01:57:233 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern, try to make a pentagon.Changed
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.Changed

Normal

• • 00:37:144 (green timing section) - Move this section at 00:37:144. It is
  • 00:45:805 (1,2,3) - This blanket can be better, try to improve it.Changed
  • 00:52:590 (2) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier then add a circle at 00:52:769. No to this ><
  • 00:54:019 (x) - Add a circle. Changed
  • 00:55:448 (2) - Same as 00:52:590. Like above
  • 01:20:090 (1,2) - Try this pattern: No to this too
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090.Changed

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 6 Changed
  • Overall Difficulty: 6 Changed
  • 00:28:662 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - You should keep using the same pattern as before, I mean long slider --> circle --> 1/2 slider with repeat, this change of rhythm kinda bothers me, if you want to do something different then try this Changed:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:34:555 (x) - Add a spinner here like you did on Easy/Normal. Changed
  • 01:11:340 (6) - Don't overlap this circle with the next slider, move it a bit up. No change
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090. Changed

Insane

• • HP Drain Rate: 8 Increased a little
  • Overall Difficulty: 8 ^
  • 00:34:555 (x) - Add a spinner here like you did on Easy/Normal. Changed
  • 00:42:769 (2) - Move this circle at 00:42:323. What, this would be 1/4 o.O
  • 02:10:001 (green timing section) - Move this section at 02:10:090. Changed

Nice patterns, cool storyboard and really nice hitsounds, good job. Call me after your fixes for a recheck. Oh, thank you very much for these suggestions, about that kiai time i would of never noticed. Glad you like it too! ^-^

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

BounceBabe wrote:

Huch, don't know why the sliderborder has to be changed but oh well... what a silly rule ._.