Weez wrote:

Love this song :3

Red=Unrankable issue that must be fixed.
Bold=Strongly advise that the issue should be fixed to improve the mapset.
Normal=Suggestion that should still be taking into consideration.

[Easy]
00:31:212 (1,2,3) - This patter is hard to get for an easy difficulty. Please change this to a slider like so http://puu.sh/1S0qO Changed pattern considering your suggestion.
00:56:687 - Consider add maybe a slider here to be consistent and continue on with the flow. Right now its just a weird unfitting pause during the main part of the song. um,no change for the sake of consistency with 00:45:960 - .
01:32:888 (3,4) - 4 seems out of place and isn't following anything where it should be follow the vocals. Remove a repeat on 3 then move 4 to 01:34:229. Extend the slider a bit too so it should look like this: http://puu.sh/1S0Cb no,it follows back-music like sounds of clap.
02:10:430 - Same issue as the last kiai time, consider add maybe a slider here to be consistent and continue on with the flow. same as above.
02:29:871 (1,1) - Very bad idea to have a stack with such a long space between them on an easy. Unstack from them please. okay fixed.
03:23:502 - Again same issue as the last kiai time, consider add maybe a slider here to be consistent and continue on with the flow. same as above.
03:42:944 (1,2) - Again very bad idea to have a stack with such a long space between them on an easy. Unstack from them please. fixed.

[Normal]
00:39:257 (2) - You can follow the vocals a lot better and fits better to the diff if you change the pattern to this instead: Moving the slider back by 1/2 so it starts at 00:39:089 and also add a hit circle at 00:40:095. http://puu.sh/1Tgc5 no change,I want to put a sounds to white line here.
00:41:938 (2,3) - Same as above, I find that this pattern follows the vocals better: Move 2 and 3 back by 1/2 so they are on the red tick and add a hit circle at 00:42:776. http://puu.sh/1Tgii same here. no change~.
01:26:519 (4) - This is a usless beat that doesn't fit the main part of this part (talking about the guitar in the bg music). It makes more sense to just delete this note so the slider and the guitar part are going together. okay.
01:29:201 (4) - Same as above. same,changed.
01:52:329 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - For this part, map it like I said up above for this section earlier. same as above. no changed.
03:02:217 - For this break I strongly advise you map it, I think just having 2 breaks is enough and it would be nice to have this section playable :3 Same goes to Hard and Insane
just want to keep it now.. if modders says same thing,will change here.
[Hard]
00:12:441 (3,4) - Really really bad jump change pattern here.
01:37:078 (4,5) - Reverse this section sounds better (ctrl+G) true.changed.
02:52:329 (4) - This slider is completely hidden making it pretty hard to even read it. Move this somewhere else. um,said other modder..so I changed here,probably it would be better now.
03:02:217 - Refer to Normal. same as normal.

[Insane]
You are really inconsistent with your spacing of streams at points of the diff. Example; here 00:22:162 (4,5,6,7,1) - its x0.6 and here 00:41:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - its 0.8x and here 01:07:748 (7,8,9,10,1) - its 0.9x. There are more throughout the diff. Please stick to just 1 spacing for these kinds of streams. Note: I'm not talking about the reduced spaced streams, those are fine. these are follow the speed / rhythm of music. (yes,it's just my feeling..)

00:11:100 - Should really follow the guitar here and not break the flow. Should really add 4 more hit circles. I like current pattern.
00:56:184 (2,3) - Stack properly please. it is intentional. properly stack when plays
01:24:173 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent with spacing for each combo. Please fix. intentional. has increased by 0.2
01:47:972 (3) - Remove clap. it follow the back music like clap sounds.
02:32:553 (4) - Stack properly with 1. I have a clear intention by these ( 02:30:039 (2) - , 02:31:547 (1) - , 02:32:553 (4) - )
03:02:217 - Refer to Normal. same as normal.

Last comments:
Nice map all in all, just a few consistency errors in Insane but again nice map and good luck . ^_^ uh thanks ><

wcx19911123 wrote:

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Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best. I would like to using tick 1..
I'm getting -16 ms for timing. Changed.

[Easy]
00:04:731 (1) - I don't recommend using these types of sliders in an Easy. Especially when you have other hit objects so soon after them. umm.. I agree with you,but I feel like it fits the song..
00:33:223 (1) - Your tick sounds are switching between soft and normal here. Sounds weird. I'm using a different hitsounds like normal-hitnormal and soft-hitclap for fit the song.If I remember correctly, maybe silence sliderslide and silence tick can not be used simultaneously,right?
01:16:128 (1,1) - Needs more spacing. A tad too close. ok~
01:24:173 (1,2) - Might be better just as circles. I really want to keep it now. it really fits the song.
01:32:217 (2) - Same thing as earlier - short sliders like this really should be avoided in easier difficulties. I want to follow the sound about 01:32:385 - .
01:48:307 (2,1,2) - Your tick sounds are switching between soft and normal here. Sounds weird. Same as above.
03:02:050 (1) - Eh, having this break here just to wait for this circle is kind of lame. Might have a better transition if you delete the circle and delay the break at that same point.great ><
03:36:910 (4,1) - I'm kind of wary of these 1/2 rhythms over sliders. It's... okay I guess, but not something I would advocate using in an Easy difficulty. There was another one or two earlier in the map too, but seeing it show up again here just kinda prompted a comment at least. 03:36:910 (4) - change to circle.

[Normal]
00:33:223 (1) - Same thing going on with the tick sounds from the Easy. I suspect this is occuring for all the difficulties, so I won't mention it anymore. Same as Easy..
00:45:960 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal at this BPM. Give more time for recovery. um.. Deleted slider.
00:52:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not really liking these short combos okay deleted.
00:56:687 (1) - ^ Applies for other instances in later kiais. want keep it.
01:59:704 (1) - Too soon after a spinner Deleted.
03:02:050 (1) - Same suggestion from the Easy. Delayed break. Looks like it applies to the Hard and Insane too.changed like Easy.
03:12:776 (2) - Should add a clap at slightly louder volume on the end. Sounds much cooler. I also like it better with circles instead of a slider um,changed both.
03:41:100 (3) - Why is this a slider? Feels extra and doesn't add anything positive to the music. change to circle.

[Hard]
OD +1 or 2 change to 6 (+1)
00:32:553 (2) - This is a little dangerous with covering the repeat with a hitburst I have tried several times,and it is probably okay I guess.. but yeah, I have changed it to get rid of anxiety..
00:52:497 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same thing with the new combos from the Normal. No need for that many. ok.
01:24:173 (1) - Give about 1 beat after a spinner for recovery in a Hard difficulty. This is more of an Insane's level. I want to keep it. I'm sure It is difficult, but I think it's easy for a hard player.

[Insane]
OD +1? current OD is better I think. Already,this diff is too hard enough.
00:15:777 (7,8) - I kind of wanted more spacing between these considering the flow of the previous patterns. Yep. changed spacing.
00:45:777 - No extra hit here for the bass hit? I want to keep current pattern.
00:51:978 (4) - Adjust this down a little to avoid the hitburst covering the repeat okay changed~.

The soft hitsounds feel far too quiet for this song. Without headphones, most people are going to have a hard time hearing the majority of the hits unless you have that custom clap attached. I think normal hitsounds are not fits the song if use it always..

Got bored and streamed the mod. yeah,I'm getting bored when mapping too for 4min 4diff >_>
http://www.twitch.tv/garvenn/b/371200692

Garven wrote:

Sorry for the delays. Been a busy week.

[Easy]
00:04:715 (1) - I am still very wary of this. Maybe a rhythm like this? changed. how about this..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639723

SPOILER

00:33:207 (1) - The silenced can be used on both if it's only for short periods such as this. okay,Added green line for change volume.
01:30:861 (1) - fm. How about changing this here? Right now you change between the long beats with your hitsounding emphasizing the percussion, so it feels weird when you follow the guitar with the short slider at 01:32:201 - changed.but its not like rhythm of your suggestion.

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:16:112 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Don't forget to apply the new combo changes for the super-short combos at the end of the kiais in this difficulty as well (also Insane)aw sorry,removed both.
01:24:157 (1) - You have the end of the spinner silent, so there's no real change in play if you make this end earlier. okay.
03:02:034 - Ah, did you forget to do the delayed break like in Normal/Easy? Seems to be the same in Insane as well. aw sorry again ;_;
03:13:095 (2) - Slider end unsnapped woops,forgot to use 0.8

[Insane]
Just fix up those short combos and the delayed break. fixed.

Garven wrote:

Boom

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Ryafuka ~

[Insane]

1. 01:16:112 (1,2,5,6) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.　aw sorry,fixed.

Pls no kds ~ Nice job on your full ver with this song too ~!

Call me back ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks much better now ~

Here you go <3

lolcubes wrote:

Silly Bruno, that IOSYS song and your rank #3 on it have nothing to do with this map!

Sorry I just had to. <3

-Cloudchaser wrote:

7th crossing field in osu! LEL

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

-Cloudchaser wrote:

7th crossing field in osu! LEL