SPOILER
Flask wrote:
o3o/
[Lally's Normal]ty for modding >u< was very helpfull <3
- 00:24:425 (1,2,3) - Oh well, the rhythms are great, but the placement... makes me feel ugly when I see this. Try to make like the example? I think the placement would be nicer :3 ty fixed
- 00:27:425 (1) - By looking at your finish rules, it's better if you can add a finish here to make consistent with other pattern. ok o3o
- 00:33:987 - Is that a mistake to add a clap here? I don't hear any clap sound by using 25% speed. Consider to remove it.will think about but it's not a mistake u.u
- 00:36:425 (6,1) - Swap the new combos here since you've added nc at the downbeat, not follow with vocals. sure
- 00:43:175 (2) - Nazi here, but I can improve the curve at this slider. Looks more natural o3o ty >u<
- 00:45:425 (1) - I have no idea why you add a finish here, is that a mistake? Finish is too strong here, whistle would be better I think. D: uh yap fixed
- 01:12:425 - Well add a note here please. You can hear a very strong music there. And please do not break the sense of rhythm while playing like this. o3o ok
- 01:21:237 (4) - Actually I'll recommend you use a note at the downbeat instead of this. 1/2 slider suppose nothing there, it doesn't follow the vocals/bgm/sense of rhythm. The music are simple here, better to add a note at the downbeat instead of this slider. true >u< fixed
- 01:45:425 - Hear the music carefully, you can hear a strong finish sound. Add nothing here isn't fit with that, so better to add a finish here. Another reason is, by looking your finish rules, you should add a finish here. (Also add finish at 01:51:425 - / 01:54:425 - too if you agree. :3)
added \o3o/
le fix o3o
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Tags:Lally BCI Black_Cherry_Ita i am jumping down rap russian
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