1. BCI's Easy (2,91 stars, 116 notes)
2. Hard (4,97 stars, 249 notes)
3. Lally's Normal (4,24 stars, 127 notes)

Stefan wrote:

Didn't someone else mapped it?
err whatever

-Bakari- wrote:

I love traps.

1. bg has not the right size,use this one with the right one :3
   
   SPOILER

   

1. add a spinner baka ;_; and BCI too ;_;
2. I dunno but you have soooo many unsnapped objects
   
   SPOILER

   AIBAT:
   Snapping 00:24:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:24:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:24:763 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:24:950 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:25:138 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:138 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:513 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:513 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:25:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:25:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:26:450 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:26:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:26:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:27:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:27:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:27:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:27:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:325 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:28:325 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:28:700 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:28:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:28:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:29:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:29:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:29:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:30:013 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:30:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:30:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:30:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:31:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:31:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:31:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:31:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:32:075 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:263 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:450 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:32:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:32:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:33:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:33:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:33:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:34:138 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:34:513 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:34:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:34:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:35:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:35:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:35:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:35:825 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:36:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:36:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:36:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:36:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:325 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:37:325 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:37:700 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:37:888 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:37:888 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:37:888 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:38:450 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:38:638 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:38:638 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:38:638 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:39:575 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:39:763 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:40:138 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:40:325 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:40:513 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:40:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:40:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:450 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:41:450 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:41:825 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:42:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:42:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:42:388 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:42:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:42:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:43:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:43:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:43:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:43:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:44:450 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:44:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:44:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:45:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:45:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:45:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:45:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:45:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:46:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:46:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:46:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:46:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:47:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:47:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:47:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:48:013 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:48:388 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:48:575 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:48:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:48:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:48:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:49:700 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:49:888 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:49:888 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:50:450 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:50:638 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:50:638 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:51:013 (7) - Unsnapped circle. 00:51:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:51:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:51:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:51:763 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:52:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:52:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:52:513 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:52:700 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:52:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:52:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:53:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:53:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:53:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:53:825 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:53:825 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:54:200 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:54:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:54:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:54:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:55:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:55:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:55:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:55:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:55:888 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 00:56:075 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:56:263 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 00:56:450 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 00:56:638 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 00:56:825 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 00:57:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:57:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:57:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:57:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:57:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:58:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:58:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:58:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:58:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:58:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:58:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 00:58:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 00:59:450 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 00:59:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 00:59:638 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:00:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:00:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:00:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:00:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:01:138 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:01:138 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:01:513 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:01:888 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:02:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:02:263 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:02:450 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:02:638 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:02:638 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:03:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:03:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:03:388 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 01:03:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:03:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:04:325 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:04:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:04:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:05:263 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:05:263 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:05:638 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:05:638 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:06:013 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:06:013 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:06:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:06:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:07:138 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:07:325 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:07:325 (3) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 01:07:325 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:07:888 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:08:075 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:08:075 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:08:450 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:08:450 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:09:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:09:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:09:575 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:09:763 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:09:950 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:10:138 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:10:138 (4) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 01:10:138 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:10:700 (5) - Unsnapped circle. 01:10:888 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:10:888 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:11:450 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:11:638 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:11:638 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:12:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:12:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:12:388 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:12:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:12:763 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:13:325 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:13:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:13:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:13:888 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:14:075 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:14:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:14:263 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:14:638 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:14:825 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:15:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:15:013 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:15:763 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:15:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:16:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:16:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:16:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:16:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:16:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:17:638 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:17:638 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:18:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:18:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:18:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:18:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:18:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:19:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:19:138 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:19:700 (4) - Unsnapped circle. 01:19:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:19:888 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:20:450 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:20:450 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:20:825 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:21:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:21:013 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:21:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:21:575 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:21:950 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:22:138 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:22:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:22:513 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:22:888 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:22:888 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 01:22:888 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:23:825 (6) - Unsnapped circle. 01:24:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:24:013 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:24:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:24:388 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:24:950 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:24:950 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat). 01:24:950 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:25:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:25:513 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:26:263 (1) - Unsnapped circle. 01:26:638 (2) - Unsnapped circle. 01:27:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start). 01:27:013 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
3. 01:01:148 - missing a clap
4. 01:08:273 - clap
5. 01:16:148 - clap
6. 01:19:148 - clap

1. Я бы вытащил I am jumping из тэгов и/или написал бы перевод в дескрипшене.

1. зачем нужны таймсекции на 00:57:398 и на 01:12:773 ?
2. в нескольких местах 1/1 слайдер просто просится быть разбитым на 1/2 + сёркл или 1/2 с рипитом.
3. 00:32:273 (2) - ^
4. 01:05:273 (3) - ^
5. 01:14:273 (3) - ^
6. 01:24:773 (1) - ^
7. 01:32:273 (3) - ^
8. 01:37:523 (2) - пащему не отзеркалить 01:39:398 (1) ?

1. 00:32:273 (3) - remove clap, add whistle since there's no clap in the music
2. 00:32:648 (4) - clap here instead of ^ because pattern suggests to add a clap here
3. 00:33:960 (2) - clap only at end? it'll follow your pattern too.
4. 00:36:773 (1) - idk, this sounds weird. too long for this diff. might be ok for Easy, but for Normal i'd split it this and next one.
5. 00:48:585 (1) - add repeat and start at 00:48:585 ? logical start with lyrics
6. 00:55:523 (3,4,5) - uuhhh.. lyrics and then music at the same time?
7. 01:11:273 (4) - maybe this will fit better http://puu.sh/1Zis3
8. 01:48:398 - finish here to follow your pattern (and so on till the last spinner?)
9. 01:45:960 (2) - maybe remove clap from start?

1. пару мест, где 1/2 с рипитом звучит лучше. ну или три ноты / слайдер с нотой.
2. 00:27:773 (2) - ^
3. 00:36:773 (1) - ^
4. 01:00:585 (1) - ^ когда нет музыки, лучше реально идти за текстом
5. 01:08:460 (6) - ^

THIS AWESOME RUSSIAN SINGER

Lally wrote:

а комуто нравитца -> 119
/me runs hard[/box]

-Bakari- wrote:

Yea, cause people nowadays don't even know what sarcasm is. :/

senaya wrote:

random pick from #modreqs

[General]

1. Я бы вытащил I am jumping из тэгов и/или написал бы перевод в дескрипшене. все путем, я такое видел тут. к тому же в описании я упомянул, о чем песня.

[Alina Hard]

1. пару мест, где 1/2 с рипитом звучит лучше. ну или три ноты / слайдер с нотой.
2. 00:27:773 (2) - ^ ~
3. 00:36:773 (1) - ^ по тексту, он поет "потеряяяяяяял" вполне вписывается, мне кажется. Я же пытаюсь сделать хард спокойным
4. 01:00:585 (1) - ^ когда нет музыки, лучше реально идти за текстом ~
5. 01:08:460 (6) - ^ ~

also, Alina, please take a look at hitsunds in Normal, might be something you'd like to suggest. I'll try to do it later.

Lally wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

Yea, cause people nowadays don't even know what sarcasm is. :/

@119 how i said 3-4 hours ago : nothink to talk about lol just sarcasm =w=)

-Bakari- wrote:

THIS AWESOME RUSSIAN SINGER

Sieg wrote:

BCI's Easy:
01:31:898 (2) - nooo, please don't skip downbeats vocal stops and you know it :3

BCI wrote:

Sieg wrote:

BCI's Easy:
01:31:898 (2) - nooo, please don't skip downbeats vocal stops and you know it :3

other was fxd , also пиши мне по-русски в следующий раз, пожайлуста :U

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:
combo colors the best i can do
Hard:
00:28:335 (4) - not fitting, there is no sounds and no vocal on 00:28:335 at all, so idk why you put slider start here ~
00:33:023 (4) - опять эта наркомания, это модно сейчас стало вместо рандомных триплетов? по вокалу
01:34:898 (2,3,4,5) - как-нибудь по (басам) ритму? слайдер туда втиснуть, сейчас это звучит странно да и еще и джамп ~
классная дифа, ну и Тик написал насчет ХСов их не слышно совсем. тик писал, бакари применял

он так весело поет, что я уже сомневаюсь про - This song contains suicide-related and depressive lyrics. НЕ БОИСЬ, Я Б ЕГО С КРЫШИ ЛИЧНО СКИНУЛ
Hope some of this can help. Good Luck.

Sieg wrote:

Lally's Normal:
00:52:710 (4) - move to 104:244 and 00:52:898 (5) - to 100:184 to make a better flow?
well made but you can up volume for hitsounds by 10-20%
no changes by me it will ruin spacing i think is ok atm :3

1. Well.. BCI's diff hasn't set a preview time. 24398 will be consistent between other diffs o3o
3. Same here, better to untick countdown from BCI's diff. It doesn't fit ;w;

1. Look at the General part before fix mods :3
2. 00:31:175 - Whistle here would be great, since you've use clap at the previous part (second short tick), nothing at here would be boring. (Also do this at 00:34:175 - )
   Another reason is, I can hear a whistle sound in the background at here and 00:32:675 - . Consistent hitsounding may works :3
3. 00:41:300 (3) - The whistle at the slider begin/end are annoying to me >: Looking at your whistle rules, that's like "Add whistle at the downbeat/second tick", better to remove whistle from them. (If you agree, remove the whistle from 00:44:300 (3) - too.)
4. 01:00:425 (1,3) - ULTRA NAZI but they aren't parallel. Try to make them parallel would be better while gameplaying, so that's move (1)'s second node 1 gird down. Well... it's nazi here. :3
5. 01:07:550 (2) - Nazi here too, but the inconsistent spacing looks terrible/break the spacing pattern here, even that's only 0.03x more. Yeah, not hard to fix right? >.<
6. 01:24:800 - Remove whistle here, well I don't see any reason to add it too, maybe it's a mistake...
7. 01:34:550 (2) - Your rhythm makes me feel odd, it cross the downbeat >: That's not nice at all, since there's a strong vocal at the downbeat. Try to make the rhythm like this, it fits with vocal & background music a bit. :>
   
8. 01:45:425 - I prefer finish here, whistle isn't strong enough for here. And I saw you've add finish at 01:36:425 - / 01:39:425 - / 01:42:425 - at the previous part, that's 2 downbeats per finish. To follow the consistent finish rules, better to add a finish here. (Do the same thing for 01:51:425 (1) - 01:57:425 (1) - too if you agree. >.<)

1. 00:24:425 (1,2,3) - Oh well, the rhythms are great, but the placement... makes me feel ugly when I see this. Try to make like the example? I think the placement would be nicer :3
   
   
   

   [HitObjects]
   268,328,24425,2,0,P|332:328|360:264,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   356,212,24987,1,0,0:0:0
   356,148,25175,2,0,P|412:116|476:140,2,130,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:27:425 (1) - By looking at your finish rules, it's better if you can add a finish here to make consistent with other pattern.
3. 00:33:987 - Is that a mistake to add a clap here? I don't hear any clap sound by using 25% speed. Consider to remove it.
4. 00:36:425 (6,1) - Swap the new combos here since you've added nc at the downbeat, not follow with vocals.
5. 00:43:175 (2) - Nazi here, but I can improve the curve at this slider. Looks more natural o3o
   
   
   

   264,220,43175,2,0,P|204:152|204:152|156:196|76:176|64:96,2,260,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

6. 00:45:425 (1) - I have no idea why you add a finish here, is that a mistake? Finish is too strong here, whistle would be better I think.
7. 01:12:425 - Well add a note here please. You can hear a very strong music there. And please do not break the sense of rhythm while playing like this. o3q
8. 01:21:237 (4) - Actually I'll recommend you use a note at the downbeat instead of this. 1/2 slider suppose nothing there, it doesn't follow the vocals/bgm/sense of rhythm. The music are simple here, better to add a note at the downbeat instead of this slider.
9. 01:45:425 - Hear the music carefully, you can hear a strong finish sound. Add nothing here isn't fit with that, so better to add a finish here. Another reason is, by looking your finish rules, you should add a finish here. (Also add finish at 01:51:425 - / 01:54:425 - too if you agree. :3)

• Come on, add some claps >:

1. 00:27:425 (1,3) - Add whistle would be fit with musics I think.
2. 00:29:675 (3,4) - Jump between this? I saw you've jumped between (1,2,3), the 1.0 spacing between (3,4) would be boring after some jumps. You can place the note at x:240, y:44, that stack on (1)'s slider begin. It's a jump too, and it's nice :3
3. 00:31:550 (4) - Listen the music carefully, the vocals ends at the red tick (00:31:737 - ), it's better to end the slider there, and add another note at the downbeat. That fits the vocals :3
4. 00:33:425 (5) - Add a new combo here? I think it needs that, since your new combo rule is like one downbeat per nc. Also, add a whistle here o3o
5. 00:37:925 - Whistle o3o
6. 01:14:300 (2) - Actually I don't see any reason for jumping
   
   A box of whistles!

   00:45:425 -
   00:46:925 -
   00:48:425 (4) -
   00:51:425 -
   00:52:925 -
   00:55:925 (1) -
   01:28:175 - Well clap here
   01:32:675 - Clap
   01:53:675 (3) - clap
   01:45:425 -
   Clean diff :3

Flask wrote:

o3o/

[General]

1. Well.. BCI's diff hasn't set a preview time. 24398 will be consistent between other diffs o3o
3. Same here, better to untick countdown from BCI's diff. It doesn't fit ;w;

^TsunCI WILL fix this as soon as possible.

[Hard]

• Come on, add some claps >: >3</

1. 00:27:425 (1,3) - Add whistle would be fit with musics I think.
2. 00:29:675 (3,4) - Jump between this? I saw you've jumped between (1,2,3), the 1.0 spacing between (3,4) would be boring after some jumps. You can place the note at x:240, y:44, that stack on (1)'s slider begin. It's a jump too, and it's nice :3 but it's TOO much for calm Hard diff! >3< I think it's ok and helps players to relax
3. 00:31:550 (4) - Listen the music carefully, the vocals ends at the red tick (00:31:737 - ), it's better to end the slider there, and add another note at the downbeat. That fits the vocals :3 but there's some kind of eco + pattern here follows music, too! I always do that vocals+music mix and i think it's ok here >3</
4. 00:33:425 (5) - Add a new combo here? I think it needs that, since your new combo rule is like one downbeat per nc. Also, add a whistle here o3o from now on feel free to call me idiot. I MUST fix this because it breaks my pattern! :<
5. 00:37:925 - Whistle o3o ~
6. 01:14:300 (2) - Actually I don't see any reason for jumping ~
   
   A box of fixed whistles!

   00:45:425 -
   00:46:925 -
   00:48:425 (4) -
   00:51:425 -
   00:52:925 -
   00:55:925 (1) -
   01:28:175 - Well clap here
   01:32:675 - Clap
   01:53:675 (3) - clap
   01:45:425 -
   Clean diff :3

Good luck -Moeri- o3o/

Flask wrote:

o3o/ \о3о

[BCI's Easy]

1. 01:45:425 - I prefer finish here, whistle isn't strong enough for here. And I saw you've add finish at 01:36:425 - / 01:39:425 - / 01:42:425 - at the previous part, that's 2 downbeats per finish. To follow the consistent finish rules, better to add a finish here. (Do the same thing for 01:51:425 (1) - 01:57:425 (1) - too if you agree. >.<) music haven't any finishes at all these parts, listen a bit more :<

1. 00:28:175 (3) - whistle?
2. 00:58:175 (3) - move it a bit right will better. For example x:388 y:276
3. 01:08:675 (7) - whistle?
4. 01:09:050 (8) - add whistle in the end
5. 01:34:925 (2,3,4) - It's really odd if you use 1/4. Both of the downbeat and the vocal are 1/6.
   This is correct : http://puu.sh/25xza
6. 00:32:675 (3) - add whistle in the beginning?

1. 01:15:425 (4) - I found this combo is too long, newcombo?
2. There are some overlapped places, just like 01:54:612 (1) and 00:36:050 (5). They're not so good in a normal diff. But well, this is a 4 star normal.
   

goodbye wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Nice rain

[Hard]

1. 00:28:175 (3) - whistle? clap
2. 00:58:175 (3) - move it a bit right will better. For example x:388 y:276 why? It doesn't make any sense + I like current pattern
3. 01:08:675 (7) - whistle? there's CLAP at the music. let's follow music and pattern :/
4. 01:09:050 (8) - add whistle in the end ~
5. 01:34:925 (2,3,4) - It's really odd if you use 1/4. Both of the downbeat and the vocal are 1/6. disagree with your pattern, changed mine, tho
   This is correct : http://puu.sh/25xza
6. 00:32:675 (3) - add whistle in the beginning? ~

goodbye wrote:

[Lally's Normal]

1. 01:15:425 (4) - I found this combo is too long, newcombo?is ok owo
2. There are some overlapped places, just like 01:54:612 (1) and 00:36:050 (5). They're not so good in a normal diff. But well, this is a 4 star normal. is not a problem to read they so no chages o3o

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello, a further modding here

　General

1. BPM: 160.020 will check it. because I got mp3 and timing from another mapset, with exactly the same bpm. I will re-check it twice!
2. How about a half speed for countdown if you intend to keep it enable? (Please remind that it should be applied to all difficulties) sorry, but I don't feel like it fits here :<
   
   SPOILER

   

　Hard

• 00:32:675 (3,4) - hmmm...is it necessary to have ~3.00x jump here? It's kind of awkward when music supports nothing for such big spacing, I'll suggest to reduce it. oh my god, it's a bug! fixed D:
  00:55:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What about a rearrangement for these notes? (1,2,3,4) are in same pitch, current pattern is actually fit enough. But for remaining notes, they may have a lager spacing due to the pitch changes. And for sight-reading, I'll suggest to add a new combo 00:56:675 - here. I think it will be too much for a calm Hard diff I have here.
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:01:925 (5,1) - Swap new combos here to coordinate the pattern and new measure. This song is in my native language, and I swear, this NC here FITS and it's done on purpose to follow vocals
  01:52:175 (3) - (slider's tail) That single whistle breaks the consistency of hitsounds imo, it's better to remove it. ~

Tell me when you're ready!

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

BCI's Easy

1. OAD and HPD -1 (They're actually same with AR at the moment) this reason isn't enough for me, but I agree cause of consistensy with Normal \о/

Pokie wrote:

Request from

　Lally's Normal

00:30:425 - to 00:34:175 - Just an own opinion, I suggest to remove those claps which aren't fit with music from this section.for me thy are ok in the kiai time ; w ; if i detle they here i have to do it in the next kiai too and i don't think it fits much :/
00:42:612 (1) - [b]This slider is covered by hitburst, when it should be visable since it was emerged. Here's a suggestion with an arranged pattern: fixed ty o3o

SPOILER

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01:56:862 (3) - (slider's tail) Although it's the last object before spinner, I recommend to use a whistle here to keep the consistency of your hitsounds.>.< fixed
01:57:425 (1) - Bakari and BCI used whistle for the last note on their difficulties, how about to use finish instead of whistle for spinner's end too?sure

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 24398
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Mode: 0
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Title:Ya Prigayu Vniz
TitleUnicode:Я Прыгаю Вниз
Artist:Daster
ArtistUnicode:Daster
Creator:-Bakari-
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