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TicClick

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Joined February 2011

TicClick 2013-02-12T15:13:22+00:00

Впечатления: на харде за музыкой не слышно хитсаундов, пропущены финиши в некоторых местах (самый провал -- пропуск са-амого первого финиша). Кроме этого, +27 к оффсету (кажется, будет 425), а ещё я буду тебе признателен, если ты уполовинишь BPM, чтобы он соответствовал реальному.

Да и "I am jumping down" я б выкинул из тэгов.

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-02-12T18:53:29+00:00

Hello

General:
combo colors

BCI's Easy:
00:41:460 (3) - why this start from red, you follow music until this so why you make such rhythm-destroy spot
00:44:460 (3) - ^ it's not creative, not a well playable for easy and break sound flow
01:03:398 (1) - you can do better blanket here
01:11:648 (3) - ok you see, it skips one white beat but placed not on "creative" red and plays good. With this your previous "vocal" sliders start to seems random to me
01:31:898 (2) - nooo, please don't skip downbeats
well, nice diff for easy

Lally's Normal:
00:52:710 (4) - move to 104:244 and 00:52:898 (5) - to 100:184 to make a better flow?
well made but you can up volume for hitsounds by 10-20%

Hard:
00:28:335 (4) - not fitting, there is no sounds and no vocal on 00:28:335 at all, so idk why you put slider start here
00:33:023 (4) - опять эта наркомания, это модно сейчас стало вместо рандомных триплетов?
01:34:898 (2,3,4,5) - как-нибудь по (басам) ритму? слайдер туда втиснуть, сейчас это звучит странно да и еще и джамп
классная дифа, ну и Тик написал насчет ХСов их не слышно совсем.

он так весело поет, что я уже сомневаюсь про - This song contains suicide-related and depressive lyrics.

Hope some of this can help. Good Luck.

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2013-02-12T19:03:03+00:00

Sieg wrote:
BCI's Easy:
01:31:898 (2) - nooo, please don't skip downbeats vocal stops and you know it :3

other was fxd , also пиши мне по-русски в следующий раз, пожайлуста :U

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-02-12T20:17:37+00:00

BCI wrote:
Sieg wrote:
BCI's Easy:
01:31:898 (2) - nooo, please don't skip downbeats vocal stops and you know it :3
other was fxd , also пиши мне по-русски в следующий раз, пожайлуста :U

А, да, конечно, also извини если немного резковат мод был, настроение не очень.

riffy

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Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

riffy 2013-02-13T03:26:02+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello

General:
combo colors the best i can do
Hard:
00:28:335 (4) - not fitting, there is no sounds and no vocal on 00:28:335 at all, so idk why you put slider start here ~
00:33:023 (4) - опять эта наркомания, это модно сейчас стало вместо рандомных триплетов? по вокалу
01:34:898 (2,3,4,5) - как-нибудь по (басам) ритму? слайдер туда втиснуть, сейчас это звучит странно да и еще и джамп ~
классная дифа, ну и Тик написал насчет ХСов их не слышно совсем. тик писал, бакари применял

он так весело поет, что я уже сомневаюсь про - This song contains suicide-related and depressive lyrics. НЕ БОИСЬ, Я Б ЕГО С КРЫШИ ЛИЧНО СКИНУЛ
Hope some of this can help. Good Luck.

@TicClick
поменял оффсет и меняю хс. Но из тэгов перевод не выкину, оно ИДЕАЛЬНО подходит под определение слова "тэг".

спасибо, апдейтнул. <3

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-02-14T18:56:28+00:00

I love thins song ♥

Good Luck

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-14T20:11:11+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Lally's Normal:
00:52:710 (4) - move to 104:244 and 00:52:898 (5) - to 100:184 to make a better flow?
well made but you can up volume for hitsounds by 10-20%
no changes by me it will ruin spacing i think is ok atm :3

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2013-02-16T05:45:20+00:00

o3o/

[General]

Well.. BCI's diff hasn't set a preview time. 24398 will be consistent between other diffs o3o
Same here, better to untick countdown from BCI's diff. It doesn't fit ;w;

[BCI's Easy]

Look at the General part before fix mods :3
00:31:175 - Whistle here would be great, since you've use clap at the previous part (second short tick), nothing at here would be boring. (Also do this at 00:34:175 - )
Another reason is, I can hear a whistle sound in the background at here and 00:32:675 - . Consistent hitsounding may works :3
00:41:300 (3) - The whistle at the slider begin/end are annoying to me >: Looking at your whistle rules, that's like "Add whistle at the downbeat/second tick", better to remove whistle from them. (If you agree, remove the whistle from 00:44:300 (3) - too.)
01:00:425 (1,3) - ULTRA NAZI but they aren't parallel. Try to make them parallel would be better while gameplaying, so that's move (1)'s second node 1 gird down. Well... it's nazi here. :3
01:07:550 (2) - Nazi here too, but the inconsistent spacing looks terrible/break the spacing pattern here, even that's only 0.03x more. Yeah, not hard to fix right? >.<
01:24:800 - Remove whistle here, well I don't see any reason to add it too, maybe it's a mistake...
01:34:550 (2) - Your rhythm makes me feel odd, it cross the downbeat >: That's not nice at all, since there's a strong vocal at the downbeat. Try to make the rhythm like this, it fits with vocal & background music a bit. :>
01:45:425 - I prefer finish here, whistle isn't strong enough for here. And I saw you've add finish at 01:36:425 - / 01:39:425 - / 01:42:425 - at the previous part, that's 2 downbeats per finish. To follow the consistent finish rules, better to add a finish here. (Do the same thing for 01:51:425 (1) - 01:57:425 (1) - too if you agree. >.<)

[Lally's Normal]

00:24:425 (1,2,3) - Oh well, the rhythms are great, but the placement... makes me feel ugly when I see this. Try to make like the example? I think the placement would be nicer :3
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00:27:425 (1) - By looking at your finish rules, it's better if you can add a finish here to make consistent with other pattern.
00:33:987 - Is that a mistake to add a clap here? I don't hear any clap sound by using 25% speed. Consider to remove it.
00:36:425 (6,1) - Swap the new combos here since you've added nc at the downbeat, not follow with vocals.
00:43:175 (2) - Nazi here, but I can improve the curve at this slider. Looks more natural o3o
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00:45:425 (1) - I have no idea why you add a finish here, is that a mistake? Finish is too strong here, whistle would be better I think.
01:12:425 - Well add a note here please. You can hear a very strong music there. And please do not break the sense of rhythm while playing like this. o3q
01:21:237 (4) - Actually I'll recommend you use a note at the downbeat instead of this. 1/2 slider suppose nothing there, it doesn't follow the vocals/bgm/sense of rhythm. The music are simple here, better to add a note at the downbeat instead of this slider.
01:45:425 - Hear the music carefully, you can hear a strong finish sound. Add nothing here isn't fit with that, so better to add a finish here. Another reason is, by looking your finish rules, you should add a finish here. (Also add finish at 01:51:425 - / 01:54:425 - too if you agree. :3)

[Hard]

Come on, add some claps >:

00:27:425 (1,3) - Add whistle would be fit with musics I think.
00:29:675 (3,4) - Jump between this? I saw you've jumped between (1,2,3), the 1.0 spacing between (3,4) would be boring after some jumps. You can place the note at x:240, y:44, that stack on (1)'s slider begin. It's a jump too, and it's nice :3
00:31:550 (4) - Listen the music carefully, the vocals ends at the red tick (00:31:737 - ), it's better to end the slider there, and add another note at the downbeat. That fits the vocals :3
00:33:425 (5) - Add a new combo here? I think it needs that, since your new combo rule is like one downbeat per nc. Also, add a whistle here o3o
00:37:925 - Whistle o3o
01:14:300 (2) - Actually I don't see any reason for jumping
A box of whistles!
00:45:425 -
00:46:925 -
00:48:425 (4) -
00:51:425 -
00:52:925 -
00:55:925 (1) -
01:28:175 - Well clap here
01:32:675 - Clap
01:53:675 (3) - clap
01:45:425 -
Clean diff :3

Good luck -Moeri- o3o/

riffy

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Topic Starter

riffy 2013-02-16T06:29:58+00:00

Flask wrote:
o3o/

[General]
Well.. BCI's diff hasn't set a preview time. 24398 will be consistent between other diffs o3o
Same here, better to untick countdown from BCI's diff. It doesn't fit ;w;
^TsunCI WILL fix this as soon as possible.

[Hard]
Come on, add some claps >: >3</
00:27:425 (1,3) - Add whistle would be fit with musics I think.
00:29:675 (3,4) - Jump between this? I saw you've jumped between (1,2,3), the 1.0 spacing between (3,4) would be boring after some jumps. You can place the note at x:240, y:44, that stack on (1)'s slider begin. It's a jump too, and it's nice :3 but it's TOO much for calm Hard diff! >3< I think it's ok and helps players to relax
00:31:550 (4) - Listen the music carefully, the vocals ends at the red tick (00:31:737 - ), it's better to end the slider there, and add another note at the downbeat. That fits the vocals :3 but there's some kind of eco + pattern here follows music, too! I always do that vocals+music mix and i think it's ok here >3</
00:33:425 (5) - Add a new combo here? I think it needs that, since your new combo rule is like one downbeat per nc. Also, add a whistle here o3o from now on feel free to call me idiot. I MUST fix this because it breaks my pattern! :<
00:37:925 - Whistle o3o ~
01:14:300 (2) - Actually I don't see any reason for jumping ~
A box of fixed whistles!
00:45:425 -
00:46:925 -
00:48:425 (4) -
00:51:425 -
00:52:925 -
00:55:925 (1) -
01:28:175 - Well clap here
01:32:675 - Clap
01:53:675 (3) - clap
01:45:425 -
Clean diff :3
Good luck -Moeri- o3o/

Thank you moe-moe-moe Flask! <3

BCI

1,081 posts

Joined May 2011

BCI 2013-02-18T08:59:14+00:00

Flask wrote:
o3o/ \о3о

[BCI's Easy]
01:45:425 - I prefer finish here, whistle isn't strong enough for here. And I saw you've add finish at 01:36:425 - / 01:39:425 - / 01:42:425 - at the previous part, that's 2 downbeats per finish. To follow the consistent finish rules, better to add a finish here. (Do the same thing for 01:51:425 (1) - 01:57:425 (1) - too if you agree. >.<) music haven't any finishes at all these parts, listen a bit more :<

http://puu.sh/24sXg

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-20T03:46:43+00:00

SPOILER

Flask wrote:
o3o/
[Lally's Normal]
00:24:425 (1,2,3) - Oh well, the rhythms are great, but the placement... makes me feel ugly when I see this. Try to make like the example? I think the placement would be nicer :3 ty fixed
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00:27:425 (1) - By looking at your finish rules, it's better if you can add a finish here to make consistent with other pattern. ok o3o
00:33:987 - Is that a mistake to add a clap here? I don't hear any clap sound by using 25% speed. Consider to remove it.will think about but it's not a mistake u.u
00:36:425 (6,1) - Swap the new combos here since you've added nc at the downbeat, not follow with vocals. sure
00:43:175 (2) - Nazi here, but I can improve the curve at this slider. Looks more natural o3o ty >u<
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00:45:425 (1) - I have no idea why you add a finish here, is that a mistake? Finish is too strong here, whistle would be better I think. D: uh yap fixed
01:12:425 - Well add a note here please. You can hear a very strong music there. And please do not break the sense of rhythm while playing like this. o3o ok
01:21:237 (4) - Actually I'll recommend you use a note at the downbeat instead of this. 1/2 slider suppose nothing there, it doesn't follow the vocals/bgm/sense of rhythm. The music are simple here, better to add a note at the downbeat instead of this slider. true >u< fixed
01:45:425 - Hear the music carefully, you can hear a strong finish sound. Add nothing here isn't fit with that, so better to add a finish here. Another reason is, by looking your finish rules, you should add a finish here. (Also add finish at 01:51:425 - / 01:54:425 - too if you agree. :3)
added \o3o/
ty for modding >u< was very helpfull <3

le fix o3o

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eveless

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eveless 2013-02-20T11:40:18+00:00

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Nice rain

[Hard]

00:28:175 (3) - whistle?
00:58:175 (3) - move it a bit right will better. For example x:388 y:276
01:08:675 (7) - whistle?
01:09:050 (8) - add whistle in the end
01:34:925 (2,3,4) - It's really odd if you use 1/4. Both of the downbeat and the vocal are 1/6.
This is correct : http://puu.sh/25xza
00:32:675 (3) - add whistle in the beginning?

[Lally's Normal]

01:15:425 (4) - I found this combo is too long, newcombo?
There are some overlapped places, just like 01:54:612 (1) and 00:36:050 (5). They're not so good in a normal diff. But well, this is a 4 star normal.

riffy

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riffy 2013-02-20T12:15:37+00:00

goodbye wrote:
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Nice rain

[Hard]
00:28:175 (3) - whistle? clap
00:58:175 (3) - move it a bit right will better. For example x:388 y:276 why? It doesn't make any sense + I like current pattern
01:08:675 (7) - whistle? there's CLAP at the music. let's follow music and pattern :/
01:09:050 (8) - add whistle in the end ~
01:34:925 (2,3,4) - It's really odd if you use 1/4. Both of the downbeat and the vocal are 1/6. disagree with your pattern, changed mine, tho
This is correct : http://puu.sh/25xza
00:32:675 (3) - add whistle in the beginning? ~

thanks

no changes for Lally's diff.

Lally

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Lally 2013-02-20T12:21:04+00:00

goodbye wrote:
[Lally's Normal]
01:15:425 (4) - I found this combo is too long, newcombo?is ok owo
There are some overlapped places, just like 01:54:612 (1) and 00:36:050 (5). They're not so good in a normal diff. But well, this is a 4 star normal. is not a problem to read they so no chages o3o

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-25T15:24:07+00:00

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello, a further modding here

　General

BPM: 160.020
How about a half speed for countdown if you intend to keep it enable? (Please remind that it should be applied to all difficulties)
SPOILER

　BCI's Easy

Missing a preview point for this difficulty, please set one at 00:24:398 -
OAD and HPD -1 (They're actually same with AR at the moment)

　Lally's Normal

00:30:425 - to 00:34:175 - Just an own opinion, I suggest to remove those claps which aren't fit with music from this section.
00:42:612 (1) - This slider is covered by hitburst, when it should be visable since it was emerged. Here's a suggestion with an arranged pattern:
SPOILER
```
428,164,42612,6,0,L|352:156,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,220,43175,2,0,B|220:196|216:148|216:148|156:196|76:176|64:96,2,260,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:56:862 (3) - (slider's tail) Although it's the last object before spinner, I recommend to use a whistle here to keep the consistency of your hitsounds.
01:57:425 (1) - Bakari and BCI used whistle for the last note on their difficulties, how about to use finish instead of whistle for spinner's end too?

　Hard

00:32:675 (3,4) - hmmm...is it necessary to have ~3.00x jump here? It's kind of awkward when music supports nothing for such big spacing, I'll suggest to reduce it.
00:55:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What about a rearrangement for these notes? (1,2,3,4) are in same pitch, current pattern is actually fit enough. But for remaining notes, they may have a lager spacing due to the pitch changes. And for sight-reading, I'll suggest to add a new combo 00:56:675 - here.
SPOILER
01:01:925 (5,1) - Swap new combos here to coordinate the pattern and new measure.
01:52:175 (3) - (slider's tail) That single whistle breaks the consistency of hitsounds imo, it's better to remove it.

Tell me when you're ready!

riffy

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riffy 2013-02-25T16:22:48+00:00

Pokie wrote:
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello, a further modding here

　General
BPM: 160.020 will check it. because I got mp3 and timing from another mapset, with exactly the same bpm. I will re-check it twice!
How about a half speed for countdown if you intend to keep it enable? (Please remind that it should be applied to all difficulties) sorry, but I don't feel like it fits here :<
SPOILER

　Hard
00:32:675 (3,4) - hmmm...is it necessary to have ~3.00x jump here? It's kind of awkward when music supports nothing for such big spacing, I'll suggest to reduce it. oh my god, it's a bug! fixed D:
00:55:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What about a rearrangement for these notes? (1,2,3,4) are in same pitch, current pattern is actually fit enough. But for remaining notes, they may have a lager spacing due to the pitch changes. And for sight-reading, I'll suggest to add a new combo 00:56:675 - here. I think it will be too much for a calm Hard diff I have here.
SPOILER
01:01:925 (5,1) - Swap new combos here to coordinate the pattern and new measure. This song is in my native language, and I swear, this NC here FITS and it's done on purpose to follow vocals
01:52:175 (3) - (slider's tail) That single whistle breaks the consistency of hitsounds imo, it's better to remove it. ~

Tell me when you're ready!

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-25T16:28:43+00:00

For countdown:

Better ask BCI to remove it from his/her difficulty

BCI

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BCI 2013-02-25T17:57:52+00:00

Bakari will fix this for me. I don't wanna do once more this thing since I already fixed it two times, FUCKING TWO TIMES stop scaring me via SMS, baka :<
also umad Pokie-nyan, I'm female

Pokie wrote:
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

BCI's Easy
OAD and HPD -1 (They're actually same with AR at the moment) this reason isn't enough for me, but I agree cause of consistensy with Normal \о/

riffy

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riffy 2013-02-26T11:12:23+00:00

k, fxd.
Lally where are you?

Lally

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Lally 2013-02-26T15:33:27+00:00

Pokie wrote:
Request from
　Lally's Normal
00:30:425 - to 00:34:175 - Just an own opinion, I suggest to remove those claps which aren't fit with music from this section.for me thy are ok in the kiai time ; w ; if i detle they here i have to do it in the next kiai too and i don't think it fits much :/
00:42:612 (1) - [b]This slider is covered by hitburst, when it should be visable since it was emerged. Here's a suggestion with an arranged pattern: fixed ty o3o
SPOILER
428,164,42612,6,0,L|352:156,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,220,43175,2,0,B|220:196|216:148|216:148|156:196|76:176|64:96,2,260,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:56:862 (3) - (slider's tail) Although it's the last object before spinner, I recommend to use a whistle here to keep the consistency of your hitsounds.>.< fixed
01:57:425 (1) - Bakari and BCI used whistle for the last note on their difficulties, how about to use finish instead of whistle for spinner's end too?sure

le fix

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: dniwester.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 24398
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Ya Prigayu Vniz
TitleUnicode:Я Прыгаю Вниз
Artist:Daster
ArtistUnicode:Daster
Creator:-Bakari-
Version:Lally's Normal
Source:
Tags:Lally BCI Black_Cherry_Ita i am jumping down rap russian
BeatmapID:218593
BeatmapSetID:77788

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"o3o.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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296,172,72425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,248,72800,6,0,P|192:176|32:100,2,260,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,74675,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,75050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,248,75425,2,0,P|320:176|480:100,2,260,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,308,77112,2,0,P|336:352|372:360,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,312,77675,2,0,P|464:216|424:196,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,78425,6,0,B|388:92|388:92|436:88|472:48,2,130,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,228,79550,2,0,P|255:264|205:223,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,124,80300,2,0,B|124:92|124:92|76:88|40:48,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,81425,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,284,81800,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,168,82175,2,0,P|356:104|424:80,2,130,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,284,83300,2,0,P|268:308|240:308,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,83675,2,0,P|144:292|124:228,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,84425,6,0,P|84:60|200:128,1,260,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,85550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
310,122,85925,2,0,P|428:60|440:132,1,260,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,184,86862,2,0,P|384:216|352:232,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,87425,6,0,P|176:300|124:272,2,130,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,172,88550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,68,88925,2,0,B|156:56|156:56|96:68|48:128|60:172,1,260,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,228,89862,2,0,P|92:284|112:300,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,90425,6,0,B|292:356|292:356|364:344|392:296|380:228,1,260,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,184,91362,2,0,P|348:136|328:120,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,91925,2,0,P|144:44|68:172,2,260,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,93800,2,0,L|360:204,2,65,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94550,12,4,96425,0:0:0:0:
256,324,96800,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,264,97175,2,0,P|116:224|140:144,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,108,97737,2,0,P|204:80|232:80,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,144,98300,2,0,P|372:136|408:56,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,156,99425,6,0,P|148:176|128:204,2,65,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,72,100175,2,0,P|216:40|152:52,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,140,100925,2,0,B|32:184|36:248|36:248|128:240|168:292,1,260,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,324,101862,2,0,P|236:348|256:372,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,102425,6,0,P|388:232|392:160,2,130,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,103550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,308,103925,2,0,P|124:232|120:160,2,130,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,105050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,132,105425,6,0,P|212:88|136:68,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,92,105987,2,8,P|44:112|36:124,1,65
4,236,106550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,304,106925,2,0,P|164:340|260:208,2,260,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,188,108800,6,0,P|108:136|128:120,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,84,109175,2,0,B|180:48|180:48|220:48|284:32,1,130,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,108,109925,2,0,P|365:115|393:159,1,65
424,208,110300,2,0,B|476:244|476:244|492:280|492:316,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,148,111425,6,0,P|256:88|212:100,1,130,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,112,111987,2,0,P|112:136|104:152,1,65,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,240,112550,2,0,P|72:296|140:344,2,130,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,113675,2,0,P|68:56|140:44,2,130,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,184,114612,6,0,P|40:228|60:248,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,292,115175,2,0,B|280:324|280:184|396:200,2,260,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,264,116862,2,0,P|64:232|60:216,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,117425,12,2,120425,0:0:0:0:

riffy

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riffy 2013-02-26T15:44:34+00:00

Updated. As for BPM I discussed it with some friends and they say it's ok.

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-02-27T00:28:36+00:00

So...Recheck is here!

　General

Still have a mistake on BCI's Easy's preview point, please set it to 00:24:398 -.

Otherwise are fine already, please fix this single line and...call me back again xD

riffy

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riffy 2013-02-27T15:58:51+00:00

fixed o3o

Pokie

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Pokie 2013-03-01T07:26:28+00:00

Here you go!

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-03-02T01:38:17+00:00

~Lally's Normal~

HP Drain +1 is better to me.

~Hard~

00:28:175 (3) - Whistle here.
00:28:925 (1) - Whistle on slider start.
01:29:675 (5) - Clap on slider start.
01:34:925 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer a slider here actually.
01:36:425 (1) - Remove the Whistle and add a Finish.

Here you go o3o

Lally

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Lally 2013-03-02T02:36:21+00:00

uguu baka can you fix it for me?

riffy

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riffy 2013-03-02T04:04:16+00:00

~~No. <grumpy_cat.jpg>~~
Fixed and updated! :3/

Applied everything.