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Kinya Kotani - BLAZE

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Lizbeth
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 15, 2009 at 9:10:39 AM

Artist: Kinya Kotani
Title: BLAZE
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Lissette
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6555kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.84 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (4.95 stars, 447 notes)
  3. Lissette's Normal (3.76 stars, 213 notes)
Download: Kinya Kotani - BLAZE
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Another map of Tsubasa OST, this is the first opening..
constructive critics r welcome
only 3 difficulties this time

If you wanna check all maps of the Tsubasa Chronicle OST Project Click Here

Enjoy n_n
Last edited by Lizbeth , edited 20 times in total.
Lissette
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Lissette
:)
Ekaru
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Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Easy: Good!

Normal: Good! But I would look for 1/2s slightly overlapping each other and unoverlap them, for neatness.

Hard:

02:12:97 (7,8,9) - Move the end of the slider up (or the slider itself) and the hitcircles under it. Partly offscreen = bad.

Good map, have a star!
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
thanks for modding Ekaru :)
dkey
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Joined June 2009
dkey
*~ :D
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Easy~
02:07:66 and the rest - Please remove the unused timing sections around here to the end.

Normal~
01:08:58 - Redo break. It'll shorten.
01:21:51 (2) - Add a clap on the reverse arrow.

Hard~
00:27:51 (2) - Stack right on top of 1.
01:14:12 (1) - Align with 2 and 3.
02:50:58 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the end?
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Thanks for modding Mafiamaster.. all fixed
:)
and thanks fo starrin satosid n_n
happy30
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Joined August 2008
happy30
[Easy]

00:26:12 (1,2,3) - the timing of these beats is kinda hard to figure out for new players
01:35:70 (3,4) - ^

Overall good map.

[Lissette's Normal]

All good ^^

[Hard]

maybe too much symmetry here and there imo, but nicely done.
It has evil jumps though ><
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

happy30 wrote:

[Easy]

00:26:12 (1,2,3) - the timing of these beats is kinda hard to figure out for new players u r right, replaced this for sliders... thnx
01:35:70 (3,4) - ^

Overall good map.

[Lissette's Normal]

All good ^^

[Hard]

maybe too much symmetry here and there imo, but nicely done.
It has evil jumps though ><
thanks for modding happy30 :)
kioukiou
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kioukiou
Try -8ms to all offset lines.

It's better for me.

And nice map set, star for you.
Lizbeth
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Done...
thanks for modding kioukiou :)
GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
Love this song :D
Well done, one more time ^^

//Easy// - GOOD!!!
  1. 00:49:657(1) - The New Combo should be on the (2), not here ._.
  2. 01:30:734(1) - I think that should have only one loop. The way that is now, its ending where should have New Combo note. If you do this, add a note at 01:33:503.
//Lissete's Normal// - Cool :D
  1. 01:50:119(3,4,5) - make them at the same distance.
  2. 02:05:580(3) - please, make it on the same place that the other threes are .__.
  3. 02:11:349(1,1,1,1,1) - Too much New Combos =/
  4. 02:42:503(5) - move one tiny grid to the right.
//Hard// - Really fun >D
  1. 00:58:426(x) - I know that it does not make part of the song but could you make note here? Keyboard playing starting on the blue tick it's a little... unatural =/
Really hard to thing wrong thing here :?

But that's good. Star /o/
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
thanks roxkyuubiforever

all fixed!
yaya
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yaya
easy . normal .

good


[insane]

02:17:81 - add a note

others are all good . good map .
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

easy . normal .

good


[insane]

02:17:81 - add a note oh yes i missed that.. fixed

others are all good . good map .

thanks for modding
v2b
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Joined October 2008
v2b
I think it will sound better if you use normal hitsound at chorus part,but it's all up to you :P

hard:
02:24:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks ugly,change it?

star :)
Lizbeth
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v2b wrote:

I think it will sound better if you use normal hitsound at chorus part,but it's all up to you :P i think i ll let this as it is, so i can keep the emphasis of soft finish (that i really like)

hard:
02:24:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks ugly,change it? changed

star :)
thanks for modding v2b n_n
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by anonymous_old , edited 2 times in total.
Lizbeth
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thanks for Loogiesquared :)
Tanmak
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Tanmak
Hello~ ^-^)/

[Easy]
01:25:19 Break time is too short so looks like bad cause arrows in play time. Remove it?

[Lissette's Normal]
02:46:42 (1) I think this spinner note put in effect 'Finish'.

[Hard]
02:47:23 (1) Same [Lissette's Normal].

Great song~. :)
Star ~ ☆
al2e10
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al2e10
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth
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thanks for modding Tanmak and al2e10 :)
minyeob
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minyeob
Hmm..... Tsubasa Cronicle......

[Lissette]
00:58:54 (1) - Umm sorry but this slider sounds strange for me.

That's all what I've found.
Nice map~ ★
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth

minyeob wrote:

Hmm..... Tsubasa Cronicle......

[Lissette]
00:58:54 (1) - Umm sorry but this slider sounds strange for me. fixed

That's all what I've found.
Nice map~ ★
thanks for modding minyeob :)
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
sorry, can't find anything ;_;
is priority enough? cause that's all I got.
You and your sister map pretty similar?... maybe all twins do the same, idk
Best of luck to you guys on this project ;D
Lizbeth
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lol i dont know, liss maps are jumpie jumpie :)

thanks a lot for checking eee n_n
Behon
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Easy:
Not much to complain about here, though maybe you could add a finish to the spinner at the end?

Normal:
00:38:234 (3,4): Get rid of 4 and stretch 3 out a bit to end in its place.
00:46:888 (6,7): Add claps?
00:48:273 (4): Why is the BPM at half-speed only at this point? It seems unnecessary and will throw off players.
02:27:965 (Spinner): End this at 02:31:196.

Hard:
00:20:350 (6): Make this a new combo and the 1 after it a regular circle.
00:48:273 (3): Same as Normal.
01:31:426 (3): See above.
02:07:657 (4): Again...
02:09:503 (6): And again.
Lizbeth
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Behonkiss wrote:

Easy:
Not much to complain about here, though maybe you could add a finish to the spinner at the end?

Normal:
00:38:234 (3,4): Get rid of 4 and stretch 3 out a bit to end in its place.
00:46:888 (6,7): Add claps?
00:48:273 (4): Why is the BPM at half-speed only at this point? It seems unnecessary and will throw off players.
02:27:965 (Spinner): End this at 02:31:196.

Hard:
00:20:350 (6): Make this a new combo and the 1 after it a regular circle.
00:48:273 (3): Same as Normal.if you listen to the vocals i think make sense n_n i'll keep it
01:31:426 (3): See above.
02:07:657 (4): Again...
02:09:503 (6): And again.
thanks for modding :)
jericho2442
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Armin
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Armin
I didn't write of important, just suggestions. <_<

[Easy]

00:18:734 Finish at the start?
00:45:042 (1,3,5) Claps
00:50:580 (reverse arrow) add a clap instead
00:54:273 (reverse arrow) clap
01:25:657 (3,4) Add hitsounds, like finish

Lissette's Normal

00:29:811 2/4 Back?
00:49:888 Whistle at the start
00:58:426 1/4 back, then prolong this slider of 1/4
01:19:657 Add also a finish at the start?
01:28:888 finish
01:30:734 That broken the "finish rythm" so.. add this one.
01:32:350 ^ so add a finish at the start

I really hate this difficulty <_<''

[Hard]

00:24:273 Finish
00:25:657 ^
00:27:273 (1,2) ^
01:23:350 ^
01:32:811 Stack perfectly with (5)
02:18:734 Finish
02:31:657 ^
Andrea
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Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point.
- Cut the mp3 please.

[Easy]

01:35:34 (3) - New combo.

[Lissette's Normal]

02:15:96 (3) - Too close from (2).

[Hard]

00:54:96 (1,2) - Replace with grid snap, please. Seems weird.
01:00:96 (3,4) - ^
01:32:35 (5,6) - ^
02:26:81 (2) - New combo due to jump.
02:40:42 (1,2) - Replace with grid snap like others.
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