Here's a mod from me after so many weeks of having a broken keyboard. Thank God I can type normally now! XD
General
General
- Your offset should be 617 but I think it's too early so I highly suggest you use 655 (+38 on 617 offset) because it's too early. Don't forget to snap all the notes in all diffs when fixing this one. On the other hand, I would like you to look for some modders to confirm your new offset because I'm not that good at this.
- 01:11:192 (1) - I think you should emphasize this slider more by turning on the volume. The finish sound here is too quiet imo. Try increasing it more. This suggestion applies to all osu! standard diffs.
- 01:25:345 - You should add a note here, it'll fit much better with the music. Therefore, the spinner on the last part should start on 01:25:566. (This suggestion applies to all your difficulties including Taiko Oni. (Would also be better if you add a finish hit sound on this one.
- 00:02:419 (4) - Mark a new combo to maintain consistency in your combo number for this diff.
- 00:14:329 - It would be much better if you could add a circle on this part.
- 00:31:493 (3) - Add a finish here too?
- 01:09:428 (2) - Same as above too. Both of these suggestions make the hit sounds much better.
- 01:20:052 (1) - Remove new combo here to avoid getting a single note on a slider.
- Bump your HP Drain +1, it fits better with the difficulty of the map.
- I don't know if it's just me but your circles are too small for a Normal difficulty. Try bumping it to Circle Size 3?
- 00:05:910 (3) - I prefer you remove one reverse for this slider and add a circle on 00:07:233 instead. The reverse slider doesn't make much sense imo.
- 00:11:203 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why did the combo count suddenly becomes short on this part? Looks weird huh. I prefer remove the new combos on 00:12:967 and 00:16:496 to maintain combo consistencies in this diff.
- 00:30:170 (4) - Mark a whistle in the start of this slider and another whistle on the slider end of the slider in 00:31:053 (5).
- 00:35:022 (3) - Add finish on the reverse part of this slider. (00:35:904)
- 00:42:080 (2) - Remove finish because it feels like the finish hitsound was overused on this part.
- 00:44:285 (5) - I don't think it's good to start the reverse slider here. You should just add a circle here. On the other hand, reduce one reverse on the slider and move it to 00:44:726.
- 00:46:050 (6) - Would be better if you mark a whistle here. It sounds nice because you'll here a whistle before chorus.
- 00:12:085 (5,6) - I think it would be better if the slider comes first than the circle. Try checking it out, it makes much more sense.
- 00:32:376 (1) - You should move this slider farther from the previous circle because if you would try to notice, the spacing of the circles between the circle in 00:31:934 are equal but they are not consistent with the timing of notes. The first one is 1/2 apart from 00:31:934 while the other one is 1/1.
- 00:44:726 (1) - Would be better if you'll reduce the volume of the ticks here and same goes for the reverse part of this slider.
- 00:46:491 (3,4) - Try making these sliders parallel for better gameplay in terms of visuals.
- This diff is awesome. Notes are perfectly placed and most of the patterns go really well with the song's rhythm.
- Bump your HP Drain +1 to maintain difficulty spread in your mapset.
- 00:26:090 (3,4) - These circles are badly placed. Try moving (3) on 00:26:310 instead.
- 00:27:965 (5,6) - There should be a triple circle stream here. Please try adding one on this part and remove some of the triplets on this combo to avoid redundancy in your pattern's structure.
- 00:29:729 (5,7) - Add finish here too since you added one on the two previous white ticks.
- 00:50:019 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if the inconsistency in the spacing of these notes are done on purpose but they don't look good. I suggest increasing the spacing more and making them a bit more consistent for better gameplay.
- 01:11:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is just too much and it's not making any sense any more imo. Try removing the circle in 01:11:743.
- 01:12:515 (1) - Remove new combo on this slider and add new combo on 01:12:956.
- 01:20:896 (4,5,6) - I think the gameplay would be better if the slider starts first than the two circles. Try checking it out.
- 01:24:976 - Add note here. I think it'll be better to have it before the song ends.
- Overall, this difficulty is fine but some of your triplets are placed a bit badly. Triplets are best played when they are placed on red ticks. Try scanning out some of your triple circles. There are some that show great potential when placed on a red tick.
- 01:00:606 (2) - kat for this one. Doesn't sound good when don is used here.
- 01:01:929 (2,1,2) - This triplet is badly placed. What about d - k k ?
- 01:10:861 - Add a don here and another one on 01:10:971.
- 01:14:500 - Place a kat here because it feels empty without it. Same goes in 01:18:029 and 01:21:558.