340,116,44307,5,0
332,196,44749,2,0,B|376:200|404:168,2,80.000000596046,8|8|2

Chewin wrote:

Hi PainSinger, mod request from my modding queue.

[General]
There is inconsistency in kiai times in the "Sawa's Hard" diff. I guess it is for some unsnapped green lines.
Set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:168, ends on 00:18:283 and Kiai #2: Starts on 00:46:514, ends on 01:11:215 plz
This BG is really LQ >w< Consider to change it ok, I'll look for a better one
Offset: 176 is better to me. Try it and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes. fixed

[Easy]
00:44:749 (2) - You could move it in this way to make a blanket: http://puu.sh/N3Dz fixed

340,116,44307,5,0
332,196,44749,2,0,B|376:200|404:168,2,80.000000596046,8|8|2

01:00:188 (1) - Remove NC here and use it on 01:00:629 (2). It fits much better since the vocal starts on 01:00:629 (2) and you used a finish hitsound. fixed
01:05:481 (2,3) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387422 ^

[Normal]
00:21:812 (1) - Remove this finish? It sounds too loud for me or you could decrease his volume. fixed
Good map

[Insane]
00:04:168 (1) - Unsnapped slider's end fixed
00:05:933 (1) - ^ ^

That's all =w= Good luck!

Chewin wrote:

[General]
There is inconsistency in kiai times in the "Sawa's Hard" diff. I guess it is for some unsnapped green lines. Ok resnapped all notes
Set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:04:168, ends on 00:18:283 and Kiai #2: Starts on 00:46:514, ends on 01:11:215 plz Ok

[Sawa's Hard]
00:18:283 (1) - Finish on this slider's head? Okay
00:24:459 (10) - I highly suggest you to use a single New combo here to advice the players about the SV change Ok
00:25:341 (3) - Same of 00:18:283 (1) Okay
00:44:749 (8) - Same of 00:24:459 (10) Okay
00:53:571 (5) - Finish Okay
01:25:330 (1) - Unsnapped spinner's end Okay
I like how you used 1/4 snap divisor here :3 Good job OMG *--* Thanks

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:020 (1,2,3) - Try to do a better pattern fixed

That's all
Good luck

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~

This will be short as the map is fine to me.

[Easy]
00:45:167 (2) - What about removing the clap in the reverse arrow? fixed

[Normal]
00:31:053 (5,6) - This looks a bit closed in my opinion, you could try putting 00:31:935 (6) in x:164 y:140 and make the start of 00:32:376 (1) stack with it. fixed

That's all, good luck c:

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:50:020 (1,2,3) - Try to do a better pattern

[Hard]
00:06:351 (6,8) - You can place them better, align them and put their start/end aligned vertically Really don't see a reason to put them aligned...
I really didn't like your superpositions, but it's your choice, I reported them, tough.
00:47:483 (6,7) - You can stack them better Ok
00:52:776 (2,3) - Same here Same
00:54:210 (7,8) - ^ I really don't want to change this...
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:55:974 (2,3) - ^
01:03:363 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:478 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:708 (3) - Not straight Ok

That's all
Good luck

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Sawa's Hard]

I like streams in general but parts like 00:10:762 (8,9,10) and 00:28:626 (4,5,1) , I don't know but I feel weird, maybe the spacing between the notes are small, you could increase a little, because the speed change in these pattern annoyed me, well, it's only my opinion. [color=#FF0000]Will consider this but no changes for now[/ color]

That's all, good luck c:

wantuole wrote:

[General]
write "Heidi." in Artist fixed
all start at 00:00:176 is butter well it's up to the GD's creator where he/she wants to start
yellow line is so bad，other place like 00:45:829 fixed
[easy]
01:16:044 (2) - remove 2 is butter fixed
[Normal]
00:32:376 (1) - more high, overlap 6 isn't good，fixed

SPOILER

00:42:081 (2,3,4) - so poor do somework of this 3 I think it's good as it is so I'll leave it for now
01:24:867 (4) - there is butter，end must do more clean( I‘m miss this where with FL mod) fixed

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:30:502 (8) - move a little fixed

SPOILER

00:35:244 (4) - not use short low slider there， play so strange ^
01:03:474 (2,4) - ctrl+g(old is "ctrl+r")，you change direction so fast ^

SPOILER

that all
if you can fix Sawa's Hard audio vol , maybe it's all ready for bubble
good luck

raririn wrote:

sorry for huge delay >.< and here's my noob mod

[General]
remove 'ed' from tag since it can't be searched and is unnecessary as you have already put 'ending' fixed

[Easy]
fine diff,but you use patterns like slider-circle-slider a bit too often :> try changing some of them okay I'll change it up a bit later

[Normal]
fine , but whatever try AR4 , AR5 is really hard for a normal diff fixed
00:05:911 (3) - finish here instead of whistle? i think its sounds better no change, it sounds a bit awkward because of the upcoming finish

[Taiko]
00:24:878 (3) - K ? fixed
00:28:627 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - boring for players :/ ^
00:33:259 (9) - D ? ^
00:39:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - a 10 note stream with only d is quite boring , try changing the ② to k ？ ^
im noob at taiko but this diff really needs more mod :/ yeah, I know, this is my 1st time making a tako diff

[Insane]
CS5 makes it hard for players to play with HR ,so i suggest using CS4 no change, I like smaller circles here
00:50:461 (2,3,4) - you can make the DS larger , for example 1.00 between ① and ② , 1.20 between ② and ③ ,1.40 between ③ and ④ fixed

i didn't see the 'really unrankable issues' here , but this map can surely be better ,sorry if my mod is necessary/ \
work on , make it better and good luck on rank , i believe you can do it :> Thanks :3

wantuole wrote:

[General]
all start at 00:00:176 is butter I feel my diff start is fine, and really don't want to start here.

[Sawa's Hard]
00:04:145 (1) - not repeat，music play1212121223232323。follow you diff isn't like this song It's not a bad idea use 1/4
00:13:629 (2) - clap in end Ok
00:16:496 (1) - clap Ok
sorry,so poor aduio sound get me tired find all，this song not use audio sound at blue line is butter.
[/spoilerbox]

raririn wrote:

[Hard]
00:19:143 (3,4,5,6) - a little hard pattern for a hard diff ,try reducing the spacing? Hm...no, since i can pass this easily
00:31:493 (3) - i think it would be better if you change them into 3 circles :/ I think slider plays better
01:15:382 (3,4,5) - like this ? i think it's more interesting Good! Like it! Ok fixed

SPOILER

01:23:102 (4) - add a 2nd point at (x=312,y=304) ? Seems good like this so no

KuronumaSawako wrote:

I feel my Hard is more a Hard+/Insane like a normal Hard now orz...

NewibornCLivee wrote:

req. Taiko Mod from mod queue

All of them are suggestions.

[Taiko]
It's better to tell people the difficulty of the map. You can change Taiko to Taiko Oni so people know this is an oni level. fixed

00:31:714 - kd fixed
00:33:037 - kd ^
00:36:566 - kd ^
00:40:095 - kd ^
01:21:117 - k ^

I think that's all nice music and map.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Sawa's Hard has a different preview time. I suggest to set it at 46491, like the other diffs. fixed
Artist shouldn't be capitalized in that case. Change "Heidi." into "heidi." ^
I suggest to change the Title in "∞ Loop (TV Size)" and to leave Romanized title "Loop (TV Size)" ^
I thing you should change kuronumasawako into KuronumaSawako in tags. ^

[Easy]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one fixed
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
00:12:968 (3) - New combo + Combo Color 2 ^
00:16:497 (3,4) - New combo + Combo Color 4 ^

01:14:722 (1) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:16:486 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 1 ^
01:18:250 (1) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:20:015 (2,3) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2 ^

[Normal]
00:07:675 (1,2,3) - Change the Combo Color to another one fixed
00:11:204 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
00:12:968 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 2 ^
00:16:497 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 4 ^

00:34:135 (3) - New Combo? ^
01:14:722 (1,2) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:16:486 (3,4,5) - New combo + Combo Color 1 ^
01:18:250 (1,2,3) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:20:456 (4,5,6) - New combo + Combo Color 3 or 1 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 2 ^

[Insane]
00:11:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Combo Color 3 fixed
00:12:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Combo Color 2 ^
00:14:733 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 1 ^
00:16:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Combo Color 4 ^

01:12:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change the Combo Color to another one ^
01:14:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Combo Color 3 ^
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4) - Combo Color 4 ^
01:21:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combo Color 2 ^

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Easy]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1 fixed

[Normal]
00:14:733 (1,2) - Combo Color 1 fixed

Don't kudosu this post.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Sawa's Hard]
00:07:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change the Combo Color to another one, then:
00:11:203 (10) - New combo + Combo Color 3
00:11:423 (1) - Remove New Combo

cirno- wrote:

Note: Some of this is personal preference. You can use your own judgement obviously.

Easy
00:12:968 (1) - remove nc these nc's were made so they would fit in with the flowers in the video
00:16:497 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:486 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:015 (1) - ^ ^
The short combos make more sense in normal. Otherwise, this is a well done easy.

Normal
Consider raising the OD by 1 or 2. raised by 1

Sawa's Hard is good. So is insane. I found insane easier than hard, but maybe that's because I don't play hard all that much ;p yeah, they pretty much feel the same

Good luck.

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Hi,mod from my queue

[Easy]

00:05:469 - Add beat here I didn't add notes here since I wanted to keep it really easy
00:07:233 - ^ ^
00:08:997 - ^ ^
00:14:291 - ^ ^
00:35:463 - ^ fixed
00:46:492 (1) - why is this slidertick silenced? I don't see the sense ^
00:47:823 - add beat ^
00:48:256 (2) - I think you should delete this slider and add a spinner,it fits better for me (and noob players like spinners \o/ ) spinner sounds kinda weird there for me
01:16:044 - add beat same as 00:05:469
01:19:573 - ^ ^
01:25:308 (1) - Gradualy silence this spinner ok

[Normal]

00:05:911 (3) - Instead of this no change, it sounds good the way it is



do this



00:09:439 (3) - ^ ^
01:24:867 (4) - place this beat x:256 y:312 fixed

[Sawa's Hard]

Nothing here,looks fine

[Insane]

Nothing here too


Nice map :3

1. Your offset should be 617 but I think it's too early so I highly suggest you use 655 (+38 on 617 offset) because it's too early. Don't forget to snap all the notes in all diffs when fixing this one. On the other hand, I would like you to look for some modders to confirm your new offset because I'm not that good at this.
2. 01:11:192 (1) - I think you should emphasize this slider more by turning on the volume. The finish sound here is too quiet imo. Try increasing it more. This suggestion applies to all osu! standard diffs.
3. 01:25:345 - You should add a note here, it'll fit much better with the music. Therefore, the spinner on the last part should start on 01:25:566. (This suggestion applies to all your difficulties including Taiko Oni. (Would also be better if you add a finish hit sound on this one.

1. 00:02:419 (4) - Mark a new combo to maintain consistency in your combo number for this diff.
2. 00:14:329 - It would be much better if you could add a circle on this part.
3. 00:31:493 (3) - Add a finish here too?
4. 01:09:428 (2) - Same as above too. Both of these suggestions make the hit sounds much better.
5. 01:20:052 (1) - Remove new combo here to avoid getting a single note on a slider.

1. Bump your HP Drain +1, it fits better with the difficulty of the map.
2. I don't know if it's just me but your circles are too small for a Normal difficulty. Try bumping it to Circle Size 3?
3. 00:05:910 (3) - I prefer you remove one reverse for this slider and add a circle on 00:07:233 instead. The reverse slider doesn't make much sense imo.
4. 00:11:203 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why did the combo count suddenly becomes short on this part? Looks weird huh. I prefer remove the new combos on 00:12:967 and 00:16:496 to maintain combo consistencies in this diff.
5. 00:30:170 (4) - Mark a whistle in the start of this slider and another whistle on the slider end of the slider in 00:31:053 (5).
6. 00:35:022 (3) - Add finish on the reverse part of this slider. (00:35:904)
7. 00:42:080 (2) - Remove finish because it feels like the finish hitsound was overused on this part.
8. 00:44:285 (5) - I don't think it's good to start the reverse slider here. You should just add a circle here. On the other hand, reduce one reverse on the slider and move it to 00:44:726.
9. 00:46:050 (6) - Would be better if you mark a whistle here. It sounds nice because you'll here a whistle before chorus.

1. 00:12:085 (5,6) - I think it would be better if the slider comes first than the circle. Try checking it out, it makes much more sense.
2. 00:32:376 (1) - You should move this slider farther from the previous circle because if you would try to notice, the spacing of the circles between the circle in 00:31:934 are equal but they are not consistent with the timing of notes. The first one is 1/2 apart from 00:31:934 while the other one is 1/1.
3. 00:44:726 (1) - Would be better if you'll reduce the volume of the ticks here and same goes for the reverse part of this slider.
4. 00:46:491 (3,4) - Try making these sliders parallel for better gameplay in terms of visuals.
5. This diff is awesome. Notes are perfectly placed and most of the patterns go really well with the song's rhythm.

1. Bump your HP Drain +1 to maintain difficulty spread in your mapset.
2. 00:26:090 (3,4) - These circles are badly placed. Try moving (3) on 00:26:310 instead.
3. 00:27:965 (5,6) - There should be a triple circle stream here. Please try adding one on this part and remove some of the triplets on this combo to avoid redundancy in your pattern's structure.
4. 00:29:729 (5,7) - Add finish here too since you added one on the two previous white ticks.
5. 00:50:019 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if the inconsistency in the spacing of these notes are done on purpose but they don't look good. I suggest increasing the spacing more and making them a bit more consistent for better gameplay.
6. 01:11:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is just too much and it's not making any sense any more imo. Try removing the circle in 01:11:743.
7. 01:12:515 (1) - Remove new combo on this slider and add new combo on 01:12:956.
8. 01:20:896 (4,5,6) - I think the gameplay would be better if the slider starts first than the two circles. Try checking it out.
9. 01:24:976 - Add note here. I think it'll be better to have it before the song ends.
10. Overall, this difficulty is fine but some of your triplets are placed a bit badly. Triplets are best played when they are placed on red ticks. Try scanning out some of your triple circles. There are some that show great potential when placed on a red tick.

1. 01:00:606 (2) - kat for this one. Doesn't sound good when don is used here.
2. 01:01:929 (2,1,2) - This triplet is badly placed. What about d - k k ?
3. 01:10:861 - Add a don here and another one on 01:10:971.
4. 01:14:500 - Place a kat here because it feels empty without it. Same goes in 01:18:029 and 01:21:558.

Philippines wrote:

Here's a mod from me after so many weeks of having a broken keyboard. Thank God I can type normally now! XD I know that feeling xD

General

1. Your offset should be 617 but I think it's too early so I highly suggest you use 655 (+38 on 617 offset) because it's too early. Don't forget to snap all the notes in all diffs when fixing this one. On the other hand, I would like you to look for some modders to confirm your new offset because I'm not that good at this. fixed
2. 01:11:192 (1) - I think you should emphasize this slider more by turning on the volume. The finish sound here is too quiet imo. Try increasing it more. This suggestion applies to all osu! standard diffs. ^
3. 01:25:345 - You should add a note here, it'll fit much better with the music. Therefore, the spinner on the last part should start on 01:25:566. (This suggestion applies to all your difficulties including Taiko Oni. (Would also be better if you add a finish hit sound on this one. ^

Easy

1. 00:02:419 (4) - Mark a new combo to maintain consistency in your combo number for this diff. fixed
2. 00:14:329 - It would be much better if you could add a circle on this part. ^
3. 00:31:493 (3) - Add a finish here too? ^
4. 01:09:428 (2) - Same as above too. Both of these suggestions make the hit sounds much better. ^
5. 01:20:052 (1) - Remove new combo here to avoid getting a single note on a slider. ^

Normal

1. Bump your HP Drain +1, it fits better with the difficulty of the map. fixed
2. I don't know if it's just me but your circles are too small for a Normal difficulty. Try bumping it to Circle Size 3? ^
3. 00:05:910 (3) - I prefer you remove one reverse for this slider and add a circle on 00:07:233 instead. The reverse slider doesn't make much sense imo. ^
4. 00:11:203 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Why did the combo count suddenly becomes short on this part? Looks weird huh. I prefer remove the new combos on 00:12:967 and 00:16:496 to maintain combo consistencies in this diff. this is because of the video if u play it with the video u'll know what I mean^^
5. 00:30:170 (4) - Mark a whistle in the start of this slider and another whistle on the slider end of the slider in 00:31:053 (5). fixed
6. 00:35:022 (3) - Add finish on the reverse part of this slider. (00:35:904) ^
7. 00:42:080 (2) - Remove finish because it feels like the finish hitsound was overused on this part. ^
8. 00:44:285 (5) - I don't think it's good to start the reverse slider here. You should just add a circle here. On the other hand, reduce one reverse on the slider and move it to 00:44:726. ^
9. 00:46:050 (6) - Would be better if you mark a whistle here. It sounds nice because you'll here a whistle before chorus. ^

Insane

1. Bump your HP Drain +1 to maintain difficulty spread in your mapset. fixed
2. 00:26:090 (3,4) - These circles are badly placed. Try moving (3) on 00:26:310 instead. ^
3. 00:27:965 (5,6) - There should be a triple circle stream here. Please try adding one on this part and remove some of the triplets on this combo to avoid redundancy in your pattern's structure. ^
4. 00:29:729 (5,7) - Add finish here too since you added one on the two previous white ticks. ^
5. 00:50:019 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if the inconsistency in the spacing of these notes are done on purpose but they don't look good. I suggest increasing the spacing more and making them a bit more consistent for better gameplay. ^
6. 01:11:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is just too much and it's not making any sense any more imo. Try removing the circle in 01:11:743. ^
7. 01:12:515 (1) - Remove new combo on this slider and add new combo on 01:12:956. ^
8. 01:20:896 (4,5,6) - I think the gameplay would be better if the slider starts first than the two circles. Try checking it out. ^
9. 01:24:976 - Add note here. I think it'll be better to have it before the song ends. ^
10. Overall, this difficulty is fine but some of your triplets are placed a bit badly. Triplets are best played when they are placed on red ticks. Try scanning out some of your triple circles. There are some that show great potential when placed on a red tick. fixed what I could find

Taiko Oni

1. 01:00:606 (2) - kat for this one. Doesn't sound good when don is used here. fixed
2. 01:01:929 (2,1,2) - This triplet is badly placed. What about d - k k ? ^
3. 01:10:861 - Add a don here and another one on 01:10:971. ^
4. 01:14:500 - Place a kat here because it feels empty without it. Same goes in 01:18:029 and 01:21:558. ^

The mapset was okay but I was expecting more than this. Especially on the Insane difficulty. But I'm glad maps like the Hard diff is greatly made, kudos to the mapper (no, not the SP XD). lol. Call me back again via Forum PM when you're done with my mod and I would be glad to do a recheck. On the other hand, I would like to see some reasons if my suggestions are rejected (:

1. I think it's better to end your last spinner with a soft hit sound.
2. Why is Easy the only spinner with descending volume of hitsound? Add some with the rest but you can keep Taiko XD

1. 01:07:701 (1,2,3) - These whole combo doesn't suit well with the music. Follow this instead: Click Me!. On the other hand, If you followed this suggestion, don't forget to fix the hit sounds. Suppose you already fixed it, remove the finish in (2) and add clap hit sound. Then add finish hit sound on (3) and another clap hit sound on (4).
   
2. 01:25:566 (1) - Whoop, looks like I missed this one. This spinner seems to appear so early that you can see it even when you're at 01:25:235. Try moving it on 01:25:676 instead. But you may reject this one if you want to.

1. 00:01:978 (3) - Remove whistle on start cause you overused whistle on this part.
2. 00:31:090 (5) - You forgot a clap on the start of this slider.
3. 00:37:707 (1) - Remove finish here and add finish on 00:39:471.
4. 00:43:882 (4) - I don't know why but right after you followed my suggestion on this, I can't hear the sound now. D: On my second though, I feel like this shouldn't be a circle so what I think is that you should replace 00:43:000 (3,4) into a slider instead. I mean make them one slider not make them both a slider.

1. I'll do a recheck on this one right after you're done with my mod.

1. 00:14:770 (1,2,3,4) - They are not symmetrical. 1 and 2 are fine but 3 and 4 are not so better try to fix them up. Although this is not really a problem, but the gameplay would be better if you'll fix this one.
2. 00:23:150 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on the next note.
3. 00:28:885 (1,2,3) - Is the spacing in (2) intentional? Doesn't play good for me. Try moving (2) farther from (1) while keeping the distance of (2) from (3).
4. 01:05:716 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on the next circle.

1. Right now I think the speed is too slow. Try SV 1.65 ~ 1.70.
2. You forgot to resnap your green inherited lines (inluding Kiai). Please add +38 in all the green inherited lines.

Philippines wrote:

I'm back even though you haven't called me yet ^^. So I did a recheck and here's what I got:

General

1. I think it's better to end your last spinner with a soft hit sound. fixed
2. Why is Easy the only spinner with descending volume of hitsound? Add some with the rest but you can keep Taiko XD ^

Easy

1. 01:07:701 (1,2,3) - These whole combo doesn't suit well with the music. Follow this instead: Click Me!. On the other hand, If you followed this suggestion, don't forget to fix the hit sounds. Suppose you already fixed it, remove the finish in (2) and add clap hit sound. Then add finish hit sound on (3) and another clap hit sound on (4). fixed
   
2. 01:25:566 (1) - Whoop, looks like I missed this one. This spinner seems to appear so early that you can see it even when you're at 01:25:235. Try moving it on 01:25:676 instead. But you may reject this one if you want to. ^

Normal

1. 00:01:978 (3) - Remove whistle on start cause you overused whistle on this part. fixed
2. 00:31:090 (5) - You forgot a clap on the start of this slider. ^
3. 00:37:707 (1) - Remove finish here and add finish on 00:39:471. ^
4. 00:43:882 (4) - I don't know why but right after you followed my suggestion on this, I can't hear the sound now. D: On my second though, I feel like this shouldn't be a circle so what I think is that you should replace 00:43:000 (3,4) into a slider instead. I mean make them one slider not make them both a slider. ^

Insane

1. 00:14:770 (1,2,3,4) - They are not symmetrical. 1 and 2 are fine but 3 and 4 are not so better try to fix them up. Although this is not really a problem, but the gameplay would be better if you'll fix this one. fixed
2. 00:23:150 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on the next note. ^
3. 00:28:885 (1,2,3) - Is the spacing in (2) intentional? Doesn't play good for me. Try moving (2) farther from (1) while keeping the distance of (2) from (3). ^
4. 01:05:716 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo on the next circle. ^

Taiko Oni

1. Right now I think the speed is too slow. Try SV 1.65 ~ 1.70. fixed
2. You forgot to resnap your green inherited lines (inluding Kiai). Please add +38 in all the green inherited lines. lol, yeah forgot to resnap xD

lol it feels like I've missed a lot on my last mod XD you call me back when you're done.

Philippines wrote:

Hard

1. 00:12:085 (5,6) - I think it would be better if the slider comes first than the circle. Try checking it out, it makes much more sense. Ok
2. 00:32:376 (1) - You should move this slider farther from the previous circle because if you would try to notice, the spacing of the circles between the circle in 00:31:934 are equal but they are not consistent with the timing of notes. The first one is 1/2 apart from 00:31:934 while the other one is 1/1. Ok
3. 00:44:726 (1) - Would be better if you'll reduce the volume of the ticks here and same goes for the reverse part of this slider. Ok
4. 00:46:491 (3,4) - Try making these sliders parallel for better gameplay in terms of visuals. Ok changed slider a bit here...
5. This diff is awesome. Notes are perfectly placed and most of the patterns go really well with the song's rhythm. *---------------* Arigato! \o/

1. 00:46:087 - I think this part should be your preview point because you're missing the lyrics before the chorus.

1. 01:16:523 (1) - Remove the new combo here to maintain consistency in your combo numbers. I might as well state that it's not necessary here so better remove it instead. (:

1. 00:43:000 (1) - It would be better if this slider ended on 00:43:661.
2. 00:44:323 - If you followed my suggestion above, I recommend you add a circle here to fill up the empty space and because there's some kind of a beat here in the vocals. XD
3. 00:59:982 (1) - I've been thinking of this slider since then. For somehow, I think the slider is going with the rhythm but the problem in my opinion is that it is kind of breaking the flow of circles. No one kind of expects this one to start in the red tick. My suggestion instead is this: [urhttp://puu.sh/1AYcO]Click[/url]
4. 01:12:994 (3) - Add a new combo here to maintain combo count on this part. As you can see, you've added new combos in every tall white tick on the part where the kiai ends. But for somehow, you forgot to add one on this part so yeah.. Add new combo XD Oh and this suggestion also implies with the circle on 01:23:581 (3).

1. Okay now I've finally realized you didn't map the first part of the song. Map it instead? The rest of the diff except Taiko have circles on this part.
2. 00:28:885 (1) - Move the 2nd point of this slider 2 grids left because this slider together with the two previous circles don't make a straight line at all. So fix this one to make it straight.
3. 00:43:441 (2) - This slider would be more readable if you unstack it and use .7 DS instead.
4. 00:46:529 (3) - Mark a new combo here because it's the start of the kiai.
5. 01:25:345 - Perhaps you didn't see my suggestions in [General]. I think you should add a circle here instead to emphasize the last beat the occurred in the song. So basically you're gonna have to move the spinner on 01:25:566 if you followed this one.
6. Regarding the spinner in the last part, why not add a descending volume in it like what PainSinger did in all his diff?

1. 00:43:441 (8) - Inconsistent spacing here. Make it consistent please. Don't use 1.0 DS here, doesn't look great because you don't expect tight spaces on an Insane diff (unless it's stream of course. XD)
2. I'm still seeing a lot of weird triples here. I guess you're not getting my point. D: For example, if you would listen closely in the music, the triples started in 00:17:416 but you added the triples on 00:17:637. So basically,you're triples are misleading and is causing MASS DESTRUCTION. lol jk. Btw, you should fix this thing because it's not making any sense at all. I hope you can fix this one and the rest of it. I've seen a lot of things like this on this diff.

1. Meh, I can't find anything wrong anymore XD But I suggest you consult a taiko modder about this one as I'm not good at this.

Philippines wrote:

Double Recheck from my queue (: XD

General

1. 00:46:087 - I think this part should be your preview point because you're missing the lyrics before the chorus. fixed

Easy

1. 01:16:523 (1) - Remove the new combo here to maintain consistency in your combo numbers. I might as well state that it's not necessary here so better remove it instead. (: fixed

Normal

1. 00:43:000 (1) - It would be better if this slider ended on 00:43:661. fixed
2. 00:44:323 - If you followed my suggestion above, I recommend you add a circle here to fill up the empty space and because there's some kind of a beat here in the vocals. XD ^
3. 00:59:982 (1) - I've been thinking of this slider since then. For somehow, I think the slider is going with the rhythm but the problem in my opinion is that it is kind of breaking the flow of circles. No one kind of expects this one to start in the red tick. My suggestion instead is this: [urhttp://puu.sh/1AYcO]Click[/url] ^
4. 01:12:994 (3) - Add a new combo here to maintain combo count on this part. As you can see, you've added new combos in every tall white tick on the part where the kiai ends. But for somehow, you forgot to add one on this part so yeah.. Add new combo XD Oh and this suggestion also implies with the circle on 01:23:581 (3). ^

Insane

1. 00:43:441 (8) - Inconsistent spacing here. Make it consistent please. Don't use 1.0 DS here, doesn't look great because you don't expect tight spaces on an Insane diff (unless it's stream of course. XD) fixed
2. I'm still seeing a lot of weird triples here. I guess you're not getting my point. D: For example, if you would listen closely in the music, the triples started in 00:17:416 but you added the triples on 00:17:637. So basically,you're triples are misleading and is causing MASS DESTRUCTION. lol jk. Btw, you should fix this thing because it's not making any sense at all. I hope you can fix this one and the rest of it. I've seen a lot of things like this on this diff. fixed quite a few of them >.< but now I'm confused if it's okay or not D:

Taiko Oni

1. Meh, I can't find anything wrong anymore XD But I suggest you consult a taiko modder about this one as I'm not good at this.

One kudosu ain't enough X( lol hahahah

Philippines wrote:

Hard

1. Okay now I've finally realized you didn't map the first part of the song. Map it instead? The rest of the diff except Taiko have circles on this part. Music instruments starts here, so then I started to map out where the guitar starts.
2. 00:28:885 (1) - Move the 2nd point of this slider 2 grids left because this slider together with the two previous circles don't make a straight line at all. So fix this one to make it straight. Ok
3. 00:43:441 (2) - This slider would be more readable if you unstack it and use .7 DS instead. Used .5 DS
4. 00:46:529 (3) - Mark a new combo here because it's the start of the kiai. Ok
5. 01:25:345 - Perhaps you didn't see my suggestions in [General]. I think you should add a circle here instead to emphasize the last beat the occurred in the song. So basically you're gonna have to move the spinner on 01:25:566 if you followed this one. Yeah i missed that sorry, fixed. But, i moved the spinner to 01:25:455.
6. Regarding the spinner in the last part, why not add a descending volume in it like what PainSinger did in all his diff? Ok

1. 01:28:433 - Tone down this spinner's soft volume to 5%. I think 5% enough to be heard.

1. 00:58:879 (3) - I think it would be better if this slider will follow the vocals. So basically this should end on 00:59:541 if you agree with this suggestion. Also, If you happen to follow my suggestion, I would also suggest that you add a 1/2 slider on 00:59:982. But it's up to you. You could leave it like that or you could remove the circle and add a 1/2 slider instead.

1. 00:35:060 (3) - Okay, now I don't feel like this slider's in place. I think you should just remove it and replace it with circles. Try this:
   
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2. 00:35:942 - Oh btw if you followed my suggestion above, add a new combo here because there's a change in rhythm and to maintain combo count consistency.
3. 00:59:320 (4) - Add a clap on this slider's head to maintain hit sound consistencies. This suggestion also applies in the slider's tail in 00:59:982.

1. 01:21:596 (6) - This slider is actually breaking the flow of the new combo because it's tail is in the downbeat part. What I can suggest for this one is you replace this slider with two circles instead. So if you followed this suggestion, you basically have to put a new combo on the circle in 01:21:816 to maintain the consistency in your new combo.
2. 01:25:345 (1) - A new combo here is not necessary and is the only circle that has a new combo in all the difficulties of this map. Remove it please.
3. 01:25:455 (1) - This spinner is appearing too early. Please move it on 01:25:566 instead so that players won't be shocked with the appearance of this spinner.

1. 00:26:238 - I think the triplet should be here instead not in 00:26:459. Try to listen to the music closely. You'll get my point.

Philippines wrote:

Hard

1. 01:21:596 (6) - This slider is actually breaking the flow of the new combo because it's tail is in the downbeat part. What I can suggest for this one is you replace this slider with two circles instead. So if you followed this suggestion, you basically have to put a new combo on the circle in 01:21:816 to maintain the consistency in your new combo.
2. 01:25:345 (1) - A new combo here is not necessary and is the only circle that has a new combo in all the difficulties of this map. Remove it please.
3. 01:25:455 (1) - This spinner is appearing too early. Please move it on 01:25:566 instead so that players won't be shocked with the appearance of this spinner.

Fix this and I'll bubble XD loljk o.o