1. 05:32:957 (7) - i think here is a nc nedded
2. 03:31:557 (3) - ctrl + g so you'll have a same pattern that you used before by playing flows better and the sme thing here 03:34:757 (3) -
3. i thik slider like: could make softer for this king of song if will flow much better i think :
   04:05:157 (3) -
   04:07:557 (3) -
   04:09:957 (1) -
   04:17:157 (4) -
   04:20:357 (2) -
   04:29:957 (4) -
   04:33:157 (3) -
4. 06:10:857 (5,6) - unsnapped ( or they are snapped to 1/6 o3o)// and i think a new combo to the (5) will be good or to the 06:11:357 (8) - personally by playing i was a little bit lost to see (11) i'm not a pro but is just a suggestion :3

1. Switch Combo Colour 2 & 3? could make your combo change more readable :>
2. Try this soft-hitfinish to instead of default?
   Click here to download

1. First, use "white.png" to instead "black.jpg" and then use C code to dye it black. Also, the white.png could do some more effect for u that i'm going to introduce.
2. 04:03:957 - from here to 04:39:557 - , this part is very important in the music, so consider to add an effect here by that "white.png".
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"white.png",320,240
    P,0,243957,281157,A
    V,0,243957,281157,1.333334,1
    F,2,243957,279557,0,1
    F,1,279557,281157,1,0
    C,0,243957,274757,240,0,0
    C,0,274757,279557,240,0,0,255,255,255
    C,0,279557,281157,255,255,255

   put it at bottom of your SB code and hope you like it~~
3. and also, if you would like to, you can apply white.png with P...A code to your pulse effects following

1. 01:29:157 (1) - When i heard this slider, i suddenly notice that despite in other cases we neglect soft-slidertick sample, the default slidertick is heard nice here. So i suppose maybe you can add a slidertick sample to your folder and rename it to something else like soft-hitclap, and add it to the end of this slider to instead default soft-hitnormal? and also some other sliders like 01:41:957 (1) -
2. 01:55:957 (2) - i'd like to add a whistle on the head, and also 01:57:157 (3) -
3. 02:03:557 (5) - add a whistle?
4. 02:09:957 (3) - add a whistle on the head?
5. 02:09:957 (3) - ^ on the end?
6. 02:28:957 (4,5) - move whistle to (4)?
7. 02:35:557 (3) - whistle on the head?
8. 02:53:757 - add a note here?
9. 03:19:557 (5) - looked odd a bit because all other sliders around here are curved or straight ... and i suppose there's nothing different in music here.
10. 03:29:157 (5) - whistle on the end?
11. 03:49:157 (3) - extend to 3/4 length?
12. 04:09:957 (1) - add a whistle sliderslide here and reduce volumn of that sliderslide gruaduately?
13. 05:01:757 - the blank here is heard odd.. i'd like to add a note here or change 05:01:557 (8) - to a slider
14. 05:08:757 (1) - reduce to 1/1 length?

1. 04:13:157 - можно что-то под скрипящий звук, если не собьёт то, что ты мапал под эти колокольчики
2. 05:03:957 (7) - я бы как-то поменял его изгиб, чтобы подходило к мини-стриму, или вообще сделал прямым, если б не слайдер до него
3. 06:11:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - как-то слишком широко, нет?
4. 06:17:557 (6) - можно разделить на слайдер и ноту после него, даже с небольшим прыжком (не знаю)
5. 06:49:157 (1) - лучше финиш свистком заменить
6. 07:07:557 - что-нибудь поставить?
7. 07:08:357 (2,1) - как-то они.. не знаю, не связаны между собой, что ли
8. 07:18:090 (1) - мне кажется, его надо продлить на 1/6, чтобы конец совпал с этим звуком

inverness wrote:

grumd, didn't you told me you want to add a vid instead? 0.0

FessCat wrote:

When in the middle of the map started some "noise" all squeaked I was a little scared. Some thought that pops Screamer

FessCat wrote:

Some thought that pops Screamer