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Daniel Ingram - Becoming Popular

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Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 12, 2013 at 7:00:37 PM

Artist: Daniel Ingram
Title: Becoming Popular
Source: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Tags: Kazumi Evans Rarity mlp
BPM: 120
Filesize: 12266kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.16 stars, 56 notes)
  2. Hard (4.35 stars, 113 notes)
  3. Insane (4.91 stars, 178 notes)
  4. Normal (2.97 stars, 90 notes)
Download: Daniel Ingram - Becoming Popular
Download: Daniel Ingram - Becoming Popular (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rarity is best pony
Modders:
-Cloudchaser
rezoons
Xagrok
VinylDash14
pimpG (Timing)
rEdo
Haya
BeatOfIke
nouk
Irreversible
Sana
Oyatsu
Kei
Darksonic
HelloSCV
Tur00
popner
Byakugan249
Zeraphlol
ztrot (Timing)
those
Cloudchaser
hey hey, Applejack is the best pony.

add some kias :3

Insane
00:18:678 (6) - http://puu.sh/1HO34 up :3 x:284 y:148
01:19:428 (1) - sounds a little weird, i suggest.
01:38:704 (1) - hey, sounds bad

Hard
00:12:178 - add a note? :3
01:36:971 (4) - yep, sounds bad, you should fix this slider

Normal
Looks good.

Hey, sorry for my poor mod, i like ur map
rezoons
Hello everypony and happy new year :) ,

Here is some suggestins:

Normal (maybe change it to easy)
01:15:178 (1) - Maybe remove it, it's a little weird because she start saying "and the type of pony" at 01:15:428.
01:29:718 (2) - Same here.
01:32:392 (5) - The slider isn't perfectly straight.
01:37:835 (4) - It's weird, i think it's better a slider from 01:37:406 to 01:37:835.

Hard
00:08:928 (2) - 1,2 et 3 are nearly aligned ( as 00:21:428 ). Maybe move down a little the second note.
00:18:178 (5) - You should start the slider at 00:18:428.
00:31:428 - Maybe add a note.
00:38:173 (1) - Same here, it's a little weird because she start saying "and the type of pony" at 00:38:428.
01:02:928 (4) - It doesnt really match to the song.
01:07:678 (1) - She start saying "the top of" at 01:07:928.
01:27:718 (2) - The slider stop in the middle of a word.
01:29:718 (3) - Replace it by a single note at 01:30:051.
01:34:246 (2) - Same here, the slider stop in the middle of a word.

Insane
*Put the aproach rate at 9 or 10 for an insane*

00:37:303 (9,10) - Why two notes?
00:42:178 - Add a note.
01:14:928 (10) - It doesnt seem to have any purpose.
01:16:178 (4,6) - The end of the sliders aren't exactly at the same spot.
01:36:971 (10) - Maybe move down the note a little.

It's my first mod english so i've tried to do my best. And i love the map and the song. Too bad it's hard to have a map very difficult with a BPM so low.
Xagrok
Hey there. I'm bringing some suggestions in here for more Rarity in osu!.

[General]
Add My little Pony: Friendship is Magic as Source.
Add mlp fim Rarity fabulous to the Tags?
How about custom colours?
You forgot the kiai times in all diffs. I'd set one from 00:26:178 to 00:42:178 and one from 01:03:178 to 01:21:928 .
Please disable the countdown in all diffs.
Artist name change to Daniel Ingram? You could move Kazumi Evans to the Tags.
Might not be good for all diffs, but wouldn't 00:59:178 and onwards be perfect for a spinner?

[Normal]
01:34:406 Add a note?

[Insane]
00:18:678 (6) The end of the slider is offscreen, please change that.

Couldn't find more, good luck.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
HOLY SHIT WHEN DID EVERYONE MOD THIS.

Um, I'll update things.
ColdTooth
M4M o3o

[Easy]

00:40:178 (3,4,5) - Consider centering em?


01:27:718 (1,1) - Eh.. kinda looks like a bad overlap

[Normal]

00:26:178 (4) - NC?
01:17:678 (5) - ^
01:27:704 (1) - Is NOT snapped to the next bpm measure Move it to 01:27:718 -
01:38:692 (5) - AI Bat calls that the slider end is unsnapped, wat.

[Hard]

00:08:178 (1,2,3) - Minor spacing issue, make it exactly 1.0x
00:13:678 (6) - Weird slider shape.
00:24:428 (8) - NC?
01:36:978 (4) - Same issue for 01:27:704 (1) - on normal

[Insane]

00:41:178 (8) - NC
01:27:072 (1) - After this point, there a few unsnapped points. Check AI Bat

I'll roll in and give in a star, but make sure to fix those unsnapped parts.
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Too kawaii
pimp
hi cdfa :D
can i check the timing?

offset ..... bpm

00:00:156 - 120
00:59:156 - 120
01:25:156 - 95
01:27:718 - 90,500
01:29:071 - 94
01:31:672 - 90,500 (the last vocal in this timeline is in a 1/6 tick at 01:33:881 while the piano is at the 1/4)
01:34:244 - 89
01:35:591 - 86
01:37:050 - 70 (the small "shh" from the "should" starts in the 1/6 tick at 01:38:478)
01:38:764 - 60,500
01:40:252 - 65
01:41:715 - 60
01:43:357 - 51
01:45:266 - 84 (1/6)

[TimingPoints]
156,500,4,2,0,50,1,0
24303,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
59156,500,4,1,0,50,1,0
85156,631.578947368421,4,2,0,50,1,0
87718,662.986666666666,4,2,0,50,1,0
89071,638.296666666666,4,2,0,50,1,0
91672,662.983425414365,4,2,0,50,1,0
94244,674.158181818181,4,2,0,50,1,0
95591,697.674418604651,4,2,0,50,1,0
97050,857.142857142857,4,2,0,50,1,0
98764,991.735537190083,4,2,0,50,1,0
100252,923.076923076922,4,2,0,50,1,0
101715,999.999090909096,4,2,0,50,1,0
103357,1176.48,4,2,0,50,1,0
105266,714.281566265059,4,2,0,50,1,0

small mod

general

you are not using fanmade_rarity_1.png so you should remove it

your video contains audio track...proof...you should remove it
the mp3 bitrate is too high, 256kbps audio files are not allowed. use something around 128~192 kbps

this song belongs to mlp ost, right? there is 2 ranked maps from the ost, and both use Daniel Ingram as artist and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic as source, you will probably need to use it too

please use at least rarity and kazumi evans in tags (or daniel ingram instead of kazumi evans if you plan to keep the artist)

easy

00:28:178 (2) - slider end in the red tick at 00:28:928 sounds better and fits the previous slider
00:32:178 (4) - ^
00:41:178 (5) - ^
00:42:428 - spinner here until the next long white tick?
01:09:178 (3) - make the slider repeat in red tick and add a circle at 01:11:178
01:30:384 (1) - this slider has unsnapped end since it ends after a timeline with diferent bpm than the previous, unrankeable.
01:36:978 (2) - ^ and it is also overlapping the spinner

hard

00:23:178 (7) - http://puu.sh/1Xc9P ?
01:02:428 (3,4) - make a circle at 01:02:428 and 01:02:553 and a 1/2 beat slider at 01:02:678

insane

00:33:428 - note here
00:31:178 (5,6) - make it a slider, it will help to differ this verse to the next one
01:08:178 (2,3) - same as above
really weird timing in the end of the song, i gave my best to time it but i could miss something, better find other people to check it
star and good luck :)

rainbow dash is best pony >:D
rEdo
[Easy]
00:26:156 (1) - add a finish.
00:29:656 (1) - this finish sounds pretty random here, you should add them at places like these mentioned below.
00:34:156 (1)­ - and yeah, that's an example where a finish should land.
00:38:156 (1) - add a finish here as well.
01:03:156 (2) - ^
01:40:482 (1) - DAYUM GURL THIS SPINNER DOESN'T END WHERE IT SHOULD

[Normal]
00:26:156 (4) - add a finish here.
00:34:156 (2) - ^
01:03:156 (2) - ^
01:11:156 (1) - ^
01:15:156 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:10:156 (1) - that finish sounds overused.
00:20:406 (1,2,3) - imo you should decrease the distance snap to 0.8x for that triplet.
00:26:156 (3) - add a finish.
00:34:156 (1) - ^
01:03:156 (1) - ^
01:06:656 (7) - delete it from here.
01:11:156 (3) - add it.
01:40:713 (1) - THIS ONE DOESN'T END WHERE IT SHOULD EITHER

[Insane]
00:10:156 (1) - that finish sounds overused.
00:30:156 (2) - delete that finish.
00:34:156 (3) - add it here.
00:35:656 (6) - delete from here.
01:03:156 (1) - add here.
01:11:156 (10) - new combo here, also add a finish.
01:30:347 (7) - new combo here.
01:38:764 (1) - replace the finish on its beginning with a whistle I guess.


a good mapset in general, but DAMN YOU ARE USING FINISHES IN THE WRONG PLACES ;_; these are supposed the accent the main beat of the song, not some random place in it.
besides from that, that's some kawaii shit you've got there nigga.
pimp
some things i missed in my mod, no kudos

easy

00:33:656 (5) - nc here and remove nc in the next note for consistency to normal
01:11:156 (1,2) - this placement is strange imo. looks like you just tried to make the distance snap consistent enough bewtween the next / previous notes and the shape didn't matter, its not difficult to fix it since you are not following symmetry or something like that.
yeah thats not an unrankeable issue, its more like my own preference... keep it if you like it, i just wanted to mention this

normal

01:10:656 (7) - nc here and remove nc in next note?

hard

00:12:406 (3) - nc, you are using one in 00:20:406 (1) -
00:14:656 (1) - remove nc or add a nc at 00:22:656 (6) -
00:31:656 (3) - nc?
00:39:656 (6) - nc?
01:06:656 (1) - nc and remove nc in next note?

insane

00:12:531 (6) - nc and remove nc in next note?
00:20:531 (9) - ^
00:25:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this stream looks ugly... because you are using ds 0,5x but the distance is around 0,48x ~ 0,54x
please turn grid snap off and resnap them
00:31:656 (7) - nc
00:41:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as 00:25:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1)
01:02:406 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ but this one is not that bad
01:14:406 (9,10,11,12) - this placement is strange, same as i said in easy about 01:11:156 (1,2)
01:18:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:25:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1)

good luck :)
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Did it like I do Princess Luna in my dreams.
Haya
Hello! From your Modding queue ~

[General]
No Hitsounds? This can be very confusing for new players or even for experienced players!
01:41:715 - unnecessary Timing point
01:43:357 - ^

[Easy]
00:30:656 (2) - 3 grids up
01:30:347 (1) - Seems messed up with the timing points
01:34:244 (1) - Can you make this one more even?

[Normal]
OD+1(?)
00:16:656 (2) - Do this one curvy so it looks better with the following slider
00:25:406 (1,2,3) - Line them up
00:41:156 (5) - Shorten by 1 tick
01:17:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this one symmetric please ._.

[Hard]
00:15:406 - Add a note
00:17:531 (3) - Hard to hit - replace by a slider or similar
00:29:656 (1) - Make it curvy
00:32:906 (4) - making this one look face down (puush not working so: CTRL + HJG) increases the flow
00:34:156 (1) - Make it curvy
00:39:656 (6) - Do it the same angle like 00:38:656 (3) -
00:42:406 (1,2) - Do it like this: http://puu.sh/24Lg3
01:13:156 (6) - Unsnapped slider
01:17:656 (7) - Same angle as 01:16:656 (4) -

[Insane]
00:28:906 (6) - CTRL + H for the flow
00:37:281 (9,10) - Kinda hard to follow
01:13:156 (6) - NC
01:18:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stream looks kinda ugly, make it mroe round

That's all - Sorry for the short mod, but I couldn't find more :S
Good luck with ranking it! :3
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Kudosuing posts, will make changes tomorrow
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Haya wrote:

[General]
No Hitsounds?
Wat
Haya

CDFA wrote:

Haya wrote:

[General]
No Hitsounds?
Wat
The Normals and Claps are silent bro
BeatofIke
Hello! CDFA! Mod Request from my modding queue! Too lazy to point out all the details! XD

[General]
  1. The bitrate of your mp3 is 256 kb/s, which is unrankable! Your mp3 must not be lower then 128kbps or higher than 192 bkps.
  2. You have an unused file in your map (fanmade_rarity_1.png)! If you are not planning on using this file, please remove it.
  3. You have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 00:24:303. Try resnapping it to 00:24:406!
  4. The BPM changes at the last part could be a lot better. It a bit off sync with he music.
[Easy]
  1. You have a few unsnapped slider ends at 01:30:347 (1), 01:34:244 (1), and 01:37:050 (2).
[Normal]
  1. Reduce the Overall Difficulty a bit. An Overall Difficulty of 6 is to high for a Normal difficulty. I recommend OD4 or OD5.
  2. 01:17:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be nicer:
    Code
    124,40,77656,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    72,88,77906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    48,152,78156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    72,216,78406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    124,260,78656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    212,152,79156,1,4,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]
  1. I think you should increase the drain rate to 6, so it's not the same as your Normal difficulty.
  2. 00:17:906 (4) - Try replacing this soft-finish with a soft-whistle on the head of this slider.
  3. 00:26:156 (3) - I can hear a soft crash in the BGM. i think adding a soft-finish at the head of this slider will help emphasize that sound.
[Insane]
  1. Good enough!
That's pretty much it! Good luck with your map!
Distant years
M4M :3c

[Easy]

  • - 00:32:156 (4) - I'd make this slider a little more like this (http://puu.sh/2aPwr) it looks better imo
    - 01:37:050 (2) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2aPyE)

    This was more like suggestions, can't find anything bad here, pretty good easy diff :3
[Normal]

  • - I'd make the OD of this 4 or 5, 6 is too much
    - 01:08:156 (3,4,5) - I don't like this very much, I would make it something like: http://puu.sh/2aPFk
    - 01:13:156 (5) - Make this slider "look" a little bit more down (http://puu.sh/2aPGX)
[Hard]

  • - HP Drain same as Normal?
    - 00:09:156 (3) - I'd make this slider a little more like this (http://puu.sh/2aPKG) It plays better IMO.
    - 00:21:656 (5) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2aPMq) and then make the (5) a blanket for 00:22:656 (6) - (you can see in the previous picture)
    - 01:02:656 (4) - Ctrl+G
    - 01:32:334 (5) - Ctrl+G feels better to me since all sliders are pointing to the right

    Fun DT diff :3c
[Insane]

  • - 00:14:656 (6) - Ctrl+G
    - 00:40:156 (6) - ^
    - 00:40:656 (7) - ^
    - 01:16:656 (5) - ^
    - 01:17:156 (6) - ^
    - 01:17:656 (7) - ^

    Very nice map, the ctrl+g are just suggestons that I feel it plays better :3c
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
yay
Irreversible
Hey m4m :D Took me also a really bit long to get here. i'm sorry about this D;

[General]

No pawnytastic circle colours? o; use: yellow, bright blue, purple, something like this, i think it fits to the powny which is singing
[Easy]

00:20:656 (1) - Don't really get this spinner o,o Why don't you go on with the pattern?
00:42:406 - You could put in a reverse slider here o,o like BABABAM lol
01:37:050 (2) - make this look like.. uhm like a horseshoe?? xD

I can't say anything else here -.- orz

[Normal]

CS +1? o,o
00:12:656 (1,2,3) - Make this look nicer, as you do it like a bow (it looks weirdly straight)
00:14:656 (4) - NC?
00:32:156 (4) - Make this one rounder o,o
00:42:406 - same as easy
01:03:156 (2) - stack the start of the slider with 01:01:656 (2) -
01:04:656 (3,4,5) - Weird flow, I sugegst Ctrl + J slider 5
01:08:156 (3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of this round slider - straight placed circle - round slider thing.. you could change it, its up to you
01:33:992 - Circle?
01:40:713 (1) - Place this on the blue tick .. o,o i'm not sure about this thoug

[Hard]

00:12:531 - Circle? Or is it too hard? WHO KNOWS ok
00:13:656 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/2c1D9 maybe smth like this?
01:15:406 - make the lyrics fit to "i'm the type of pony"
01:19:406 (1) - same as in normal.. should it be on a blue tick?
01:29:390 - circle?

I like the beat of this map! But you could place some circles after the second break, it seems a bit empy

[Insane]

00:24:406 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle with it, like a jump
00:25:156 (4) - NC$
00:25:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Make it look rounder
00:42:406 (1,2,3,4) - Square jump
01:01:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon jump, or a star
01:02:406 (6) - NC

For the jumps: i think its funnier than this.. round thing xD
01:19:406 (1) - blue tick ><

i hope my suggestions were okay ,._.
maybe it helps you a bit >.<

good luck ! ¤    *  ✭
  ✭ o/ ★・。゚・☆・ ゚★・。゚・☆・ ★・。゚・☆・ ゚★・ (
  * ★      ✰
¤    *  ✭
Hanabi
Sana's modding from M4M MODDING

[Easy]

01:07:656 (2) - 2 grid down


[Normal]

00:11:156 (5) - NC
00:12:406 - add circle
01:19:156 (6) - NC
01:32:334 (5) - make perpendicular
01:38:764 (5) - NC

[Hard]

00:25:656 (2) - make it straight
00:42:406 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2Zn2b.jpg
01:38:764 (5,6) - NC

[Insane]

01:06:656 (8) - NC
01:19:406 (1) - spinner starts here
01:32:334 - longer slider
01:38:764 (1) - more roundly

how about using custom hitsound?


i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!! ;)
Oyatsu
Hi, Mod from xChippy's M4M queue, I mod instead of xChippy because xChippy is too busy, ^^
[Easy]
00:13:656 (3,4) - It isn't opposite, So it didn't banlance
00:08:156 (1,2) - Jump in Easy?? ><
00:18:156 (4) - Ugly because it is corved
00:41:156 (5) - Add whistle
[Normal]
01:29:709 (2,3,4) - Distane
00:26:156 (4) - NC
[Hard]
00:22:656 (1) - NC
00:25:406 (5) - No NC and NC at 00:26:156 (1) -
00:32:906 (4) - Move to 16/168 to balance
01:17:656 (1) - I think NC
01:40:252 (1) - ^
Kei
  • General
  1. The mp3 you used isn't an appropiated one. You need to convert it to 192 or 128kbps.
  2. The sliderslide sounds too noisy o.o consider adding a normal-sliderslide sound to make it silent. If you're interested, here's the file: http://puu.sh/34SQd
  3. Changing the mp3 may give you a headache for your red timelines. At least it would be a good opportunity for a second check of the timing. Sounds a bit strange at the end of the song, or it is just me.. :<
  • [Easy]

    *There are some unsnapped sliders: 01:30:347 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:34:244 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:37:050 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  1. 00:36:156 (3) - Place this slider where 00:33:656 (1) was at?
  2. 01:19:406 (1) - This spinner starts too early for an easy diff imo. I highly suggest you to remove 01:19:156 (4), and move the spinner there instead. This would be easier to read for beginners :3 so they can recognize that a spinner will start.
  3. 01:30:347 (1) - This shape looks ugly tbh. You can try something more smoother, without that sharpy edge to fit more with the calm and melodic vocals. How about something like this shape :3?
  4. 01:37:050 (2) - To make the slider shape fit with the music, try to move the red point to x336 y72 approximately. When the vocals start the sliderball goes down. It makes sense imo.
  5. 01:40:713 (1) - Decrease the volume for the end of this spinner, sounds very very loud compared to the music itself. ;-; this applies to your other difficulties as well.

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:41:156 (5) - The clap at the repeat of this slider isn't following anything, the sound you're following with claps it's not heard here, but at 00:41:656. :3
  2. 01:27:718 (1) - To follow more the piano perhaps remove whistle at the repeat and then add whistle at the end?
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:15:531 (7) - This slider sounds bad because it's placed at a blue tick. This is not necessary, you can follow the music in a more flowy way. A note and a 1/2 slider sounds much better than that 1/4 slider imo. ;_;
  2. 00:25:656 (2,3) - Two things :3, 1) 00:25:656 (2) isn't correctly spaced, fix it. 2) After you fix that please consider moving 00:26:156 (3) where you placed 00:25:406 (1), and flip the slider horizontally. I'm reffering to this :3 it's for a better flow:
  3. 01:09:906 (6) - How about replacing this slider with a copy of 01:08:656 (5)? Like this. It doesn't affect gameplay too much but it looks clean o3o
  4. 01:16:656 (4) - Perhaps add a NC here to make the combo of (10) shorter, and to follow the vocals?
  5. 00:17:531 (3) - Similar case as the one about a slider at blue tick. This note if you listen carefully, isn't following the music. The vocal is at 00:17:656, not here. Here the singer is starting to sing again but the vocal is at the next white tick so move this note there.
  6. 01:27:718 (2) - To follow the piano here how about adding whistle at the end of this slider~?
  7. 01:30:347 (4) - ^ At the start of this one. Also at the end, but to avoid making the slider sound too redundant with whistles consider removing the whistle at the repeat.
  8. 01:33:826 (1) - Why is this note here? Move it to 01:33:992 to follow correctly the voice.
  9. 01:37:050 (4) - To change a bit the patterns you used on the difficulty I suggest you to change the curve of this slider like this, for better flow with 01:36:288 (3) too.
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:09:156 (5) - This pattern would flow better if you flip this slider horizontally like this. The curve in this way feels more natural to play when having to click 00:10:156 (1), and before, at 00:08:906 (4) :3 /bad at explaining flow. Also this slider has a whistle on its body, remove it if you can, because it sounds really loud and out of place. ;_; ...
  2. 00:32:156 (5,6) - Hmmm this overlap looks messy :< You can try something better imo. 00:32:906 (6)'s end gets covered up by 00:32:156 (5) a bit and that's not cute. Move 00:32:906 (6)'s to x76 y276 approximately for a better overlap.
  3. 00:36:656 - How about adding a note here to vary the rhythm here? Also to follow that important beat of the music. If you do this I also suggest you to add a note at 00:37:156. Sounds muuuch more accordingly to the music than before imo. :3
  4. 00:42:906 (3) - It looks a bit messy how this note is here where the previous stream was. Not noticeable that much during gameplay but you can improve it by simply adjusting spacing a little bit. Also this diamond pattern doesn't look completely as a diamond :p you can improve this too. Something like this can work o3o
  5. 01:03:156 (1) - Perhaps make a blanket with this slider curve and 01:04:156 (2)? Yes I like to do nazi modding :P I think it benefits the map in a good way.
  6. 01:05:906 (7) - ^ More nazi ;A; Improve this curve? It doesn't look properly curved. Old sliders ;_;
  7. 01:07:156 (1) - The Newcombos are kinda changed here o3o I think that a nc here isn't necessary. This is part of the same verse as 01:06:656 (1,2,3) so better remove this combo, and then add NC to 01:07:906 (6)?
  8. 01:13:656 - Add a note here to keep following the clap sound like you did at 01:09:906 (2,3) for example? The empty space between 01:13:281 (2,4) is kinda big and feels awkward when playing. ;_;
  9. 01:14:406 (5) - This spacing can be confusing. Players may think this is 1/1 instead of 1/2. Use the same spacing you used for 1/2 notes, like at 01:10:406 (3).
  10. 01:29:071 (5) - To follow the piano melody add a whistle here o3o?
  11. 01:30:347 (1) - A hitfinish here sounds too loud, you didn't use this in your hard diff iirc. Replacing it with a whistle sounds much better for this calm part.
  12. 01:32:334 (6) - This whistle at the slider body sounds really noisy and unfitting so better remove it imo.
  13. 01:36:637 (9,10,11) - Why is the spacing of these notes different as of 01:34:581 (3,4,5,6,7,8) etc o.o?
    01:38:764 (1) - Again, a hitfinish soudns too loud ;_; consider replacing it with a whistle like you did with your other diffs.
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The map has potential.The difficulties are quite good so far. Insane's mod is a bit long but it's mostly nazi and hitsounds stuff so don't worry :P it won't take you too much time to check it, I guess.

I'll leave a star icon. You have to change the mp3 file and some other things more for now. :<
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
omg velocidad de bits I'm dying

Thanks so much for modding <3~. Nyaa~. I'll kudosu once I make the changes owo.
Darksonic
Hello, m4m from my queue.

Easy:

00:14:656 (6): Move to x:116 y:144? That overlap with (4)'s tail seems ugly. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:26:156 (1,2): I know you can blank them better, like this.
00:30:656 (2): What about this to improve the flow?
00:36:156 (3): Move to x:44 y:212 so this way this slider will be well stacked with 00:33:656 (1).

Normal:

CS-1?

00:12:156: You're missing a loud piano sound here, which also it's in a white tick, so I suggest you to add a note here because it feels a bit empty and it wouldn't be too hard for a Normal.
00:16:156: ^
00:20:156: ^
00:31:781 (3): Move to x:356 y:304 to perfect symmetry with 00:29:656 (1) ?

Hard:

00:12:156: Same as Normal.
00:12:656 (2): Move some grids to the right?, I don't like this overlap with the previous slider.
00:16:156: Same as Normal.
00:20:156: ^
00:24:406 (1): Move to x:212 y:344 to stack it with 00:22:656 (1)?, seems better imo.
00:26:156 (1,2,3): Uhhh this overlap seems bad, you should try to improve it like this, it makes a nice triangle.
00:32:156 (3,4): Improve the blanket!, move the middle point to x:72 y:216 and the last point to x:-12 y:232.
01:32:334 (5): CTRL+J for a better flow?
01:40:252 (1): Move to x:256 y:292 to symmetry with the previous note?

Insane:

00:16:156: Same as Normal.
01:16:156 (5): This is too close of the previous note, I would move it to x:76 y:324 to make it flow better.
01:17:656 (7): Move to x:252 y:224 to stack it perfectly with 01:15:406 (1,2,3) ?

That's all for me, nice map overall.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yay, thanks >w<~.

Applied Kei's modding but uploading is being silly right now. I'll restart the game when I apply Darksonic's modding, and it should upload soon

As for the mp3, I'll get that done ASAP. My computer locked me out and I'm on a different computer, that doesn't have the program ;A;.
Kei
lol velocidad de bits. Yeah my OS is in spanish ;_; ...
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