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  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[249's Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:55:914 -
   
   
2. fine to me ~

[Normal]

1. 00:33:496 (2) - I think here a little loud, try to use 65% volume

[Haku's Normal+]

1. notes too crowded let a little hard to read, try to CS +1 (edit)
2. 00:01:189 (1,2,3,4) - I feel very strange for here ..., maybe dosen't follow vocal, re them
3. 00:02:507 - there a little noisy for me, try to use 50% volume
4. 02:33:826 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest let them become 2 sliders will much easy and read
5. 02:53:112 (4) - don't stack 02:52:452 (3) - , because it is hard to read

[Hard]

1. 02:16:848 (7,8) - because there rhythm suddenly become close, try to get their distance same as forward or try to have a gentle rhythm like this
2. 02:18:167 (2,3) - I think there are not suitable for use 1.6x distance, try to 1.1x same as forward will easy to read

[Insane]

1. fine to me ~

l1106188 wrote:

[Haku's Normal+]

1. notes too crowded let a little hard to read, try to CS -1 AR+1 (uhm, you intended CS+1?)
2. 02:33:826 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest let them become 2 sliders will much easy and read Eh? It actually flow better with circles there
3. 02:53:112 (4) - don't stack 02:52:452 (3) - , because it is hard to read It's not

that's all ~
good luck ~ :3

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey!

[249's Easy]

1. 00:13:386 (4,5) - This is a quite little thing,so feel free to ignore if you want: as of the oval flow introduced by 00:12:068 (2,3) - ,you should totally curve this in a upside curve: that would work totally good to follow the flow there,and it continues perfectly with 00:15:694 (1) - as of it's oval flow too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   264,332,13386,2,0,P|172:356|96:312,1,180.000006866455
   68,276,14705,2,0,P|64:240|68:208,1,60.0000022888184

   no because i wanna make the flow simple since it's "the beginning" of the song.
2. 00:18:002 (4) - Not a big deal,but anyways I don't think using a 1/1 slider there would fit that good: you have mostly followed the vocals in these sections,and this slider feels quite strange due to its ending not following the vocals at all,which continue at 00:18:661 - ,so what about simply replacing this slider with a note at 00:18:002 - ? A 2/1 gap would actually make sense for the vocals--->piano transition ahh sure done .
3. 00:20:639 (2,3,1,2,3) - Huh,this does not really play that good,probably because of the transition 00:22:617 (2,3) - which is quite harsh to play with that linear slider you have there... Considering 00:23:276 (1) - 's oval flow,I find the best solution here to be a "V" pattern. Here's what I have done,feel free to modify it as you want! ooh alright then fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   256,96,20639,1,0,0:0:0
   304,148,20969,1,0,0:0:0
   356,196,21298,6,0,P|356:288,2,90.0000034332277
   412,148,22617,1,0,0:0:0
   460,96,22947,1,0,0:0:0
   416,36,23276,6,0,P|364:28|256:40,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 01:02:178 (3) - This is a quite little thing,however I suggest you to do that: what about making this instead a 3/2 repeated slider with a note 1/1 later? That works really good to follow the vocals,and with this rhythmical pattern in mind you could create a pretty funny to play and flowing pattern,using opposed sliders to continue the song's progress. Here's what I have done,see if you like it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   184,128,61848,1,8,0:0:0
   124,184,62178,2,0,P|68:200|8:184,2,120
   184,128,63496,5,0,0:0:0
   304,232,64156,1,0,0:0:0
   460,196,64815,2,0,P|460:28,1,160

   Oh,and if you do that remember to silence 01:02:178 (3) - 's sliderticks! and done.
5. 01:07:452 (2,3,4) - Uh,using a linear slider here to continue the flow with these notes' position felt a bit harsh to me imho... It's a pretty much subjective thing,but what about smoothing out a bit the pattern using arc patterns and curved slider? Here it would actually play pretty good!
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   20,152,67452,1,0,0:0:0
   68,216,67782,2,0,P|100:232|152:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,200,68441,1,8,0:0:0
   288,164,68771,6,0,P|364:144|440:184,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   fixed it myself.
6. 02:16:353 (1,2) - Oh well,I didn't like that much the rhythm used there by combining these 2 1/1 sliders... Their transition sounded quite strange,maybe because you skipped over various important elements in the beat. You have two options there: you could follow the vocals instead of the piano by using a pattern using a 3/2 repeated slider at 02:16:683 - ,or you could instead make the second slider there follow a bit more the piano,always using a 3/2 repeated slider

alright then i'll follow the piano.

I have to go already,so I'm leaving my modpost here, tomorrow I will complete it by editing it. I hope I have been helpful in the meanwhile ^^

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time as requested, sorry for the long but I wanted to mod this in a good mood.

[249's Easy]
00:02:837 - 00:23:936 - I feel that some soft whistles are missing here, I suggest some spots, but maybe there are more or less than those. no i find soft whistles in this part of the song unfitting to this part during gameplay.

00:02:837
00:04:156
00:05:145
00:06:793
00:07:782
00:09:101
00:10:419
00:13:057
00:15:035
00:15:694
00:18:661
00:19:650
00:21:298
00:22:287

00:02:837 (1,2,3) - This could look better if these objects follow a single smooth curve, maybe like this.

i don't see a difference in this
00:11:738 (1,2,3,4) - Something similar as above, I don't like how the almost straight flow in the end of (2), (3) and (4) looks. fixed it myself.
00:58:551 (3) - Wouldn't this look better if it's of the same shape as 00:55:914 (1) ? actually it is if you look carefully. when i made (3) look like (1), the slider didn't look symmetrical, so i adjusted it so that it'll look symmetrical.
01:01:848 (2,3) - Try to follow the curve flow of the previous slider for the placement of this. no because using too many curved sliders would break the flow during gameplay for me.
01:34:815 (1) - You can move this to x:408 y:196 to make a better circle with the next slider, I think that's what you want to make here. actually no...if you look at 01:36:463 (2) - 's end, it's stacked on 01:34:485 (4) - , so i don't wanna break that transition.
02:01:518 (1) - I was about suggesting the next object, but this is better, try move it around x:164 y:288, the curve looks nicer if you do this. no, but i adjusted (1).
02:08:112 (5) - Move 1 grid down (level 4), just to make a better shape. no i don't see that much of a difference during gameplay.
02:28:221 (3) - If your intention was to make a blanket for 02:30:200 (1) you can either: move (3) to x:380 y:164, fixing the placement for (2), or move the 2nd node to x:340 y:104 and the 3rd to x:264 y:88, if make a blanket isn't your intention, ignore this orz nahh i didn't intend this to be a blanket. i wanna make it exciting by making this pattern for beginners during gameplay.
02:40:090 (3) - Adjust a bit this curve to fit more the following circles~ i don't see a problem with this, so i think it's fine. should be easy for beginners to follow during gameplay.

That's all from my part, good luck in the way of ranking /o/

-kevincela- wrote:

[Haku's Normal+]

1. 00:55:090 (6) - Preferisco seguire lo stream come ho fatto nelle altre occasioni (anche se in quei casi era da 1/2), inoltre siccome non so se mi obbligano a chiamara Light Hard, voglio evitare di usare 1/2 anche in questi casi
2. 02:16:683 (1) - Ho preferito far cosi per seguire il Finish e devo evitare la segni come Insane >.<
3. 02:34:485 (6,7,1) - Ho preferito curvare un pò i due slider, fanno parte di una parola diversa ed ho usato un micropattern un pò diverso
   I can't really understand what's so wrong in this diff... Some of you talked about this diff like if it was a waste of time,while I actually fin this pretty much enjoable and good to play.

I have to go already,so I'm leaving my modpost here, tomorrow I will complete it by editing it. I hope I have been helpful in the meanwhile ^^

1. About lyrics
   
   SPOILER

   b2 : I risk → I'll risk
   b3 : I whisper → a whisper
   b7 : before this time → up before This time
   c1b : stand up stand up → Stand up stand up
   c2 : (Just gonna keep it when I) → Just gotta keep it I wanna
   c3 : Wake up wake up → wake up wake up
   c4 : (Just tell me how I can) → just tell me how I can
   c6 : 狂おしいほど切ないよ → 狂おしいほど刹那の艶麗
   c8 : they might → They might
   c9 : Or saying ninght cries → for saying I’ll fight
   d2 : 選考眼光は → 閃光眼光は
   d3 : 感覚的衝動くらいね → 感覚的衝動 Blinded
   d7 : 失わぬようにと・・・
   d9 : 零れ落ちそうで → こぼれ落ちそうで
   e2 : 君の惰性を → 日々の惰性を
   e8 : 何度 → 君を
   e4 : Look how far we made it → Look how far we've made it
   e7 : ことはできないでしょ → 事は出来ないでしょ
2. Please make approach circle so that it becomes an entire set of hitcircle skins.

• 02:21:144 (7,8) - Why don't you move these notes 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:21:144? I feel something unnatural with the blank of 02:21:803.
  02:43:067 (5) - I can hear the guitar sound on 02:43:396 so I'd like to suggest to make this slider reversing.

• 00:26:573 (1) - Why don't you move this slider down by 2 grids and put them on one straight line?
  02:43:221 - Almost same as Insane, how about adding a 1/2 slider here?

• 00:01:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. actually I think the rhythm of these notes could follow the song well, but it's really difficult to understand and will cause the mistake. I highly recommend to make the rhythm using 1/2 beat snap divisor even if the rhythm seems a bit different from the music.
  01:02:013 (1) - Half of this circle is under the previous slider and it makes us hard to see the note. Please make it looks more clear.
  01:06:134 (2) - New melody seems starting from here, so I feel it natural to put NC on this slider. If you accept this, please remove the NC of 01:05:804 (1).
  01:43:057 (1,2) - Almost same reason as above, I don't like this overlapping. Why don't you put these notes like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  I want you to fix all notes that have this placement like 01:48:331 (1,2), but actually I don't know the criteria of Normal+ exactly, so if you think they are alright, please keep it.
  02:00:200 (1,2,3) - Hm.. I can't understand why you put only these three notes here. It looks so strange since the same melody is still continued. But if you want to keep these notes, same as 00:01:189, please reconsider the timing of (3).
  02:35:474 (2) - NC here by the same reason of 01:06:134.

• fine.

• 01:10:749 (3,1) - Putting these notes more linearly will make us easier to play.
  SPOILER

  
  01:33:167 - I felt something empty around here because you use almost all of white ticks in the previous section(I mean 01:25:584 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5)) but here the notes are put in 2/1 intervals though the melody is continued, so I suggest to put a circle.
  02:18:991 (1) - Is the length of this slider intentionally? I didn't feel it unnatural at all with a 1/1 slider here, so why don't you replace with it?

lolcubes wrote:

The skin was a bit bad, the black circle border is very hard to see and in addition to that it has a grey outline. Regardless, it should probably get fixed one way or another (I would probably ditch it lol).

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

lolcubes wrote:

The skin was a bit bad, the black circle border is very hard to see and in addition to that it has a grey outline. Regardless, it should probably get fixed one way or another (I would probably ditch it lol).

The name of the color is Red this is Gray

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time as requested, sorry for the long but I wanted to mod this in a good mood.

[General]

Isn't the source of this the recent live action of Rurouni Kenshin?. I recommend you to put "Rurouni Kenshin Live Action" in source, or in tags at least, if you don't want to change the skin or the video. yeah


[Normal]

02:19:980 (1,2,1) - These sliders would look better if make something like blankets, imo. wanna keep this waving pattern since it was intentional XD
02:38:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make a soft curve for this? ;w; no, i think it's quite good to make it straight like this


[Insane]

That's stacks of 2 circles always kill me q_q , just a comment. wanna try to use stack style for this diff, sorry but all of them are intentional XD

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey!

[Insane]

1. 01:05:484 (3,4,5) - This is really and minor and subjective thing,just don't fix if you want it: While I think 01:05:814 (5) - does flow pretty good with 01:06:144 (1) - , I found this jump/spread pattern to be quite umpleasant to play as the improper jump needed to do it. I would instead unstack 01:05:484 (3,4) - and tweak the pattern so that a triangular pattern going downwards---->upwards: other than being spacing-wise consistent, there won't be anymore that problem,creating a nice "ping pong" effect with 01:05:814 (5) - ,which plays really good! Here's what I have done there: i was changing the pattern on this part since i feel the previous one seems not close enough with what im expected from >_<

And I guess I'm done here. Don't forget to check lolcubes' post,as it contains the timing sections you should use! Then call me back. I hope I helped you in the meanwhile ^^

Loneight wrote:

Hi~ maybe I little late ...
Request from PM.

[Hard]

1. 02:16:848 (7,8) - because there rhythm suddenly become close, try to get their distance same as forward or try to have a gentle rhythm like this wanna keep it like this for now because i wanna follow the song beats xP
2. 02:18:167 (2,3) - I think there are not suitable for use 1.6x distance, try to 1.1x same as forward will easy to read[/color] no, i think it was good to make the spacing on this part due of the drum voice became louder on this part

h-728 wrote:

[General]

1. About lyrics
   
   SPOILER

   b2 : I risk → I'll risk
   b3 : I whisper → a whisper
   b7 : before this time → up before This time
   c1b : stand up stand up → Stand up stand up
   c2 : (Just gonna keep it when I) → Just gotta keep it I wanna
   c3 : Wake up wake up → wake up wake up
   c4 : (Just tell me how I can) → just tell me how I can
   c6 : 狂おしいほど切ないよ → 狂おしいほど刹那の艶麗
   c8 : they might → They might
   c9 : Or saying ninght cries → for saying I’ll fight
   d2 : 選考眼光は → 閃光眼光は
   d3 : 感覚的衝動くらいね → 感覚的衝動 Blinded
   d7 : 失わぬようにと・・・
   d9 : 零れ落ちそうで → こぼれ落ちそうで
   e2 : 君の惰性を → 日々の惰性を
   e8 : 何度 → 君を
   e4 : Look how far we made it → Look how far we've made it
   e7 : ことはできないでしょ → 事は出来ないでしょ
   i'll fix this later, thank you so much Q______Q
   
2. Please make approach circle so that it becomes an entire set of hitcircle skins. okay

[Insane]

• 02:21:144 (7,8) - Why don't you move these notes 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:21:144? I feel something unnatural with the blank of 02:21:803. because from the song itself that spot is really blank and i wanna try to make it consistent with the beatpattern Q_Q
  i think it's not a bad way too to make it this way xD
  02:43:067 (5) - I can hear the guitar sound on 02:43:396 so I'd like to suggest to make this slider reversing. no, i prefer to make it without reverse to make it match with the volume of the guitar, because the latter voice (the blank spot again) is kinda low volume, so i just use the loud one

[Hard]

• 
  02:43:221 - Almost same as Insane, how about adding a 1/2 slider here? no, i can't Q___Q

Sorry for the late ><

gdeath wrote:

Sorry for the delay, here is my mod.


[Hard]
03:02:178 (7) - the same suggestion as insane. no because of the same reason

[Insane]
the offset is inconsistent with other diffs.
02:43:067 (5) - The slider ends suddenly. I would reverse it once or set a half-timing speed. no for the same reason as the previous mod, i wanna try to make it consistent with the actual song voice there, also i think this kindof beatpattern is not quite bad since this can form a suddenbreak feel after highspeed movement
03:02:188 (4) - the same feeling as above. Try putting a circle at 03:02:682 & 03:03:177? and new combo the 4th note. no, because i find it quite complicated to mix both the percussion and vocal voice on this part, so i just use the percussion voice for the beatpattern because it was the loudest voice

Good job.

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hi there

I noticed that some of your lyrics are wrong.
yeah and im stil not fix them yet, h-728 already give me the correct one (japanese lyrics mod from japanese ppl ), i'll fix them later

Hope I was able to help you [/color]

Stefan wrote:

Okay.

[General]
- fz.jpg is unused, I guess this was the Background before. ....? i'm sure im already fix this stuff before, ill re fix it again then

Stefan wrote:

Okay.

[249's Easy]
00:02:783 - 00:22:893 - This is really boring since you didn't add any hitsounds here. Make use of the soft Whistles here. that would basically ruin the mood of the song during gameplay and this acts as a sneak peek to the song.
00:09:706 (2,3) - Keep this rhythm: http://puu.sh/1VOKV (The singer holds the Voice at 00:10:365 which should be mapped with a Slider. The Repeat slider is totally misaligned) no it's not. the repeat slider follows "my" in the phrase "in my arms" and to me, that would be misleading to follow.
00:13:003 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1VOTq (Pretty much the same reason as above) notice the sliderticks. i did that because the sliderticks go along with the vocals in this part. it follows "apart"
00:22:893 (3) - Remove this Circle. It feels a little bit too much for a Beginner. And obviously, there are going to play many beginner this Map. :p no because it'll ruin the v formation and this note follows the piano in this part, so the flow would feel really awkward if i do remove this circle.
01:27:178 (3) - Add NC and remove it at the next Slider. Also, would you like to add Finish here? no and no. the fiinsh is because that shows too much emphasis in the BGM and vocals, and (2,3) are connected since it's a hold in the vocals.
01:36:409 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed? :/.
02:18:924 (1) - No.. Snap this to the white Tick at 02:19:253 that would be unsnapped if i do that.
02:31:781 (1) - Remove NC and add it instead at (2). nope this is where the vocals start in the song.

Meh.. kinda boring, but it's fine.

Kuria wrote:

thanks for the star! TwTb

You do a good job x3 Nothing to thank for :3 Just don`t give up

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

You do a good job x3 Nothing to thank for :3 Just don`t give up

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

I did quasi-abandoned the hope of getting my maps ranked in less than 4 months

Kuria wrote:

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

You do a good job x3 Nothing to thank for :3 Just don`t give up

i'll not give up making my own map to be a good set, but i'm already give up on finding this whole team who able to make this map got ranked lol