Sekai-nyan wrote:

yanlu o.o you should remove "op" and "opening" from the tags.

Because it's an ending so, add "ED2" and "ending" to the tags >.<

1. Nice Storyboard!
2. I think you should increase the Audio lead in to 1500 ms. The reason for this is because there is only 1751 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

1. 00:03:981 (3) - Since this soft-whistle is not emphasizing anything in the music, I suggest removing this soft-whistle.
2. 00:04:443 (1) - A soft- whistle at the start and end of this slider would be sound nice here. It helps emphasize with the piano chords.
3. 00:05:597 (2) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte here.
4. 00:07:674 (4) - I would add a soft-whistle on this hit circle, since you can hear the piano chords playing here.
5. 00:08:135 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:443 (1). You might as well fix the hitsound at 00:11:827 (1) as well.
6. 00:12:981 (2,3) - I think you should swap the soft-whistle with circle 3 to follow the piano.
7. 00:13:904 (4) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte at the head of this slider.
8. 00:16:443 (3,4) - I think you can improve this slider blanket a bit more.
9. 00:19:212 (1,2) - I would add soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the piano chords.
10. 00:21:981 (4) - You can add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano chords.
11. 00:29:827 (4,5) - (optional) Not really necessary, but I think you should replace the two hitcircles with a single 1/2 slider so it can follow the music better.
12. 00:30:751 (1) - I think you should start the spinner at 00:30:981 (1) instead of 00:30:751 (1) to follow the music better. Don't forget to add the finish back if you want to fix this.

1. Looks Good! Nothing to suggest!

1. AR8 is a bit high for this difficulty! I suggest removing it?
2. 00:18:981 (8,9,1) - (nazi) This stream is not straight! Move circle 8 to x:240 y:144 to fix.
3. 01:03:520 (3) - This slider is offbeat (look at the repeat)! I suggest using a different slider.
4. 01:10:683 (5) - You have an unsnapped slider at the repeat and at the end of this slider. Please resnap!
5. I believe you have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 01:10:822. Resnap to to 01:10:776.
6. 01:10:683 (5) - I think you should replace this repeat slider with a single hit circle. Avoid overmapping! Also, you might have to add another red timing section somewhere, so the note is on beat at 01:10:776 (5).

BeatofIke wrote:

orz, I've been so busy =_=! I'll try to finish modding this map today!

[General]

1. Nice Storyboard!
2. I think you should increase the Audio lead in to 1500 ms. The reason for this is because there is only 1751 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

1. 00:03:981 (3) - Since this soft-whistle is not emphasizing anything in the music, I suggest removing this soft-whistle.
2. 00:04:443 (1) - A soft- whistle at the start and end of this slider would be sound nice here. It helps emphasize with the piano chords.
3. 00:05:597 (2) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte here.
4. 00:07:674 (4) - I would add a soft-whistle on this hit circle, since you can hear the piano chords playing here.
5. 00:08:135 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:443 (1). You might as well fix the hitsound at 00:11:827 (1) as well.
6. 00:12:981 (2,3) - I think you should swap the soft-whistle with circle 3 to follow the piano.
7. 00:13:904 (4) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte at the head of this slider.
8. 00:16:443 (3,4) - I think you can improve this slider blanket a bit more.
9. 00:19:212 (1,2) - I would add soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the piano chords.
10. 00:21:981 (4) - You can add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano chords.
11. 00:29:827 (4,5) - (optional) Not really necessary, but I think you should replace the two hitcircles with a single 1/2 slider so it can follow the music better.
12. 00:30:751 (1) - I think you should start the spinner at 00:30:981 (1) instead of 00:30:751 (1) to follow the music better. Don't forget to add the finish back if you want to fix this.

almost fix >A<!

[Normal]

1. Looks Good! Nothing to suggest!

[Hard]

1. AR8 is a bit high for this difficulty! I suggest removing it? ar7 now >w<
2. 00:18:981 (8,9,1) - (nazi) This stream is not straight! Move circle 8 to x:240 y:144 to fix. fix~
3. 01:03:520 (3) - This slider is offbeat (look at the repeat)! I suggest using a different slider. i want to keep D:
4. 01:10:683 (5) - You have an unsnapped slider at the repeat and at the end of this slider. Please resnap!
5. I believe you have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 01:10:822. Resnap to to 01:10:776.
6. 01:10:683 (5) - I think you should replace this repeat slider with a single hit circle. Avoid overmapping! Also, you might have to add another red timing section somewhere, so the note is on beat at 01:10:776 (5). cuz it's used1/6 to put so look it's unsnap><

Good Map indeed!

Laurier wrote:

Easy all fix in easy diff~!
00:15:058 (5,1,2) - (2) move to 2 grid right. and it make (5.1.2 )'s straight line
00:18:289 (5) - make bracket ? http://puu.sh/1Lyn5
00:48:751 (1) - move this and make better bracket http://puu.sh/1Lyoj
00:57:520 (3,4,5) - about symmetry pattern ? http://puu.sh/1LypF

Normal
00:17:366 (5) - start at before red tick ? please follow vocal. and same pattern as 00:24:289 (4,5) no chage
00:41:135 (3) - it is hidden by slider. maybe move to another place ? umm...i think it's fine so no change>_< http://puu.sh/1Lyxf

Hard
00:18:289 (7) - why volume down..? I think you can add clap on this slider end fix
01:02:597 (1) - remove nc no cuz nc follow the vocal
01:03:520 (3) - add nc ^

kajiyatta wrote:

hi, M4M here.
General
almost suggetions
Easy
Placement
00:45:520(2) make a blanket like this? fix

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:29:827(4,5,1)　the spinner would start at 00:30:289, it feels much imo fix..

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:08:135(1) add finish at head? other diffs already did. oh okay><

Normal
Placement
00:06:058(3) x:256 seems better same as (1) fix
00:20:366(3) like this? fix

SPOILER

00:35:597(3) like this? it will be nice yea

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:32:366(1,2) slider instead here? fix

SPOILER

00:57:289(2) to fit to vocal, maybe reverse slider seems nice. e.g) really :3

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:30:058(1) add finish at head? okay

Hard
feel much AR7 imo but current AR is fine. oh...okay...chage :l
Placement
00:47:597(7) not overlapped with (5)'s end seems nice fix

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:38:366(3,4,5) sounds weird, so maybe like this? no ><

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:26:597(1) add finish and remove whistle better like other diffs. fix
00:30:058(1) add finish at head? okay

overall fine this map, good luck & star!

scanter wrote:

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:06:058 (3) - Delete Clap? no><
00:07:674 (4) - Add Clap? no><
00:30:751 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562207 change but not ur say.
00:53:597 (2) - Delete Whistle & Add Clap noc

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:07:212 (5) - This Clap look outstanding. how about change different sound? fix
00:14:597 (5) - ^ fix

[Hard]

SPOILER

Nice !

Beatmap & Song is nice! Good luck for rank (* ･◡･​)

thank you all for modding~

1. 00:15:981 (2) - move to x:280 y:144 (line up straight)
2. 00:29:827 (4) - move 1 grid to the right

1. 00:30:981 (2) - add finish at the end of slider
2. 01:02:597 (5) - curve around (4) more neatly ><
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:828 (6) - add clap on reverse
2. 00:10:904 (10) - add clap on end (it just sounds a little "empty" right now)
3. 00:37:558 (7) - one grid to the left (so it looks straight)
4. 00:56:943 (4) - one grid up
5. 00:59:366 (4) - clap?
6. 01:07:212 (1) - remove finish, and use whistle instead (finish sounds too loud here..)

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hallowww ~
You requested in-game ~

[General]
- Enable epilepsy warning.
- End kiai time at 00:48:635 and start another one at 00:48:751 ? owo okay~


[Storyboard]
- Light.png should be in the SB folder ~ owo (After you do this, you have to go into the .osb and change light.png to SB/Light.png) changed
- I think you should make the snow appear at the beginning of the vocal or at 00:08:135
01:01:674 - 01:09:058 is left blank. ??
- Scale Light -2.png a bit closer ~ fix


[Easy]
00:30:289 (1) - You should leave some space between spinner and then next object, so shorten this spinner to 00:32:597
or, you can remove 00:33:520 (1) i dele (1)


[Normal]
- There are no claps in the beginning like the easy and hard diff ;w; fix ;w;


[Hard]
01:07:904 (3) - Last point at x:320 y:136 fix o.o


Very nice map and storyboard ~
Good luck with rank and star! >w<

meiikyuu wrote:

from modding queue ~ <3

Easy

1. 00:15:981 (2) - move to x:280 y:144 (line up straight) ok
2. 00:29:827 (4) - move 1 grid to the right ok

Normal

1. 00:30:981 (2) - add finish at the end of slider okay
2. 01:02:597 (5) - curve around (4) more neatly >< fix
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:02:828 (6) - add clap on reverse fix
2. 00:10:904 (10) - add clap on end (it just sounds a little "empty" right now) no ><
3. 00:37:558 (7) - one grid to the left (so it looks straight) fix
4. 00:56:943 (4) - one grid up fix
5. 00:59:366 (4) - clap? okayy
6. 01:07:212 (1) - remove finish, and use whistle instead (finish sounds too loud here..) oh yes><

good luck <3

cheesiest wrote:

[General]
The circles near the end in the SB only fits on hard. Perhaps you can make it difficuly-specific for Hard and delete the circles in the SB in Normal and Easy.

I only have a mod for Hard, since I believe the other difficulties are perfect.

[Hard]

00:09:289 (3) - For purpose of aesthetics, make it blanket (1).
Start: 300, 116
Middle: 260, 136
End: 240, 168
You'll probably have to move 00:09:751 (4) .

00:39:058 (4) - Make it blanket (3) better.
Start: 356, 224
Middle: 404, 188
End: 462, 176
Then move 00:39:520 (1) or use what I have below:
Start: 500, 164 Middle: 504, 124 End: 488, 76


00:40:904 (7) - Make it blanket 00:40:443 (5) better.
Start: 296, 220
Middle: 260, 200
End: 244, 160
After doing that, you'd probably have to make 00:41:366 (1) blanket 00:40:904 (7) .
Start: 256, 88 Middle: 180, 120 End: 176, 204
And then after doing that you'll probably have to move 00:42:058 (2) .

01:07:904 (3) - Make it blanket (2) better.
Start: 272, 200
Middle: 304, 176
End: 320, 136

These are mostly just aesthetic.

01:10:683 (5) - Snap to 1/16th before the beat ( 01:10:741 ), make it a circle.

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI

[General]

I think diff spread is not good between Normal and Hard. Normal and Hard's sv interval is 0.6. that's bad. IMO I think it's okay..
did you cut your mp3's earlier part ? consider use intact mp3 file no,i didn't cut~
why don't you change source to 'WORKING!!' nvm
offset +11 (762) I think it's fine now o.o

[Easy]

reduce Difficulties yourself. 3 Difficulties so hard for Easy players 2.5star for easy is okay i think..
00:13:904 (4) - adjust this slider to more pretty like before fix
00:33:981 (1) - ^ fix
I like your map thank you :3!

[Normal]

00:35:597 (3) - try use round slider instead sharp. just suggestion no change
00:57:981 (3) - why don't you highlight slider's point like this? fix some

[Hard]

00:09:520 - volume too low. increase pls okay..
00:28:904 (3) - add Clap. forgot add Clap? D: or willfully? fix~
00:35:827 (1) - move up 1 grid for cover round with 00:35:827 - . - i recommend adjust this note to balance i think it's okay..but fix too ;3
00:50:597 (1) - stuff notes in this section instead use long slider and 00:51:289 - remove Whistle okay
01:11:335 (1) - add Whistle? I think use whistle to highlight this spinner for piano melody ok

good maps :3

yurunneram wrote:

Lol I dunno if this map need modding but I would like to mod it (plus I'm a yanlu fan >w<) Really good storyboard OwO I like it a lot
lol thank you ww
Easy
01:01:212 (2) - Add finish? umm..no need to i think

Normal
01:00:751 (2) - Why not cut the slider into half and make a repeat? cuz same as(3)
00:26:135 - add note? no change but keep o.o

Hard
00:58:904 (3) - Distance it?
01:03:520 (3) - This isn't very nice. Find something with more rhythm.
00:21:520 (7) - Make Parallel to 00:20:827 (6)
00:27:981 (7,8,9) - I would choose not to put a triple here. Maybe delete the 8 and re position?
no change
nya, sry if not much didn't hv much time ^^ gd luck for the rank it's a really nice map~

yurunneram wrote:

Ne, Yanlu. Which anime did u get the story board pics from (the two neko girls)

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, yanlu

My mod from your request in pm forum

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Add "(TV Size)" in title name like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72805

Easy

1. 00:13:443 (3,4,5) - Make to this picture and code. It will play to more smoothly.
   
   SPOILER

   

   120,236,13443,1,2,0:0:0
   44,264,13904,2,0,P|84:308|144:312,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   220,292,15058,1,2,0:0:0

2. 00:33:981 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
   
   Comment: Nice diff. I can't find the problem more than this.

Normal

1. 00:26:135 - Add circle here.
2. 00:38:827 (2) - Add clap in slider end.
3. 00:41:135 (3,4) - Slider of 00:39:289 (3) is conceal them. You should avoid overlapping of them.
   
   Comment: Nice diff as well.

Hard

1. 00:02:597 (2) - Move to down 3 grids.
2. 00:17:135 (4,5) - If you want to make it more beautiful, make to this picture and code.
   
   SPOILER

   

   332,92,17135,1,0,0:0:0
   252,84,17366,2,0,P|220:112|208:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:18:289 (7) - The sound on slider end is too low. May increase volume about 40~45% or remove a green line in 00:18:635.
4. 00:39:058 (4) - It's weird when I listen rhythm of notes. You should end the slider at 00:39:289 to following the rhythm.
5. 01:03:520 (3) - Ctrl+G. It will be able to more smoothly.
6. 01:09:657 (2,3,4) - Spacing are too far.
7. 01:10:741 (5) - Unsnapped slider. Please resnap it, and resnap a green line sections.
8. 01:10:881 - Resnap a green line sections.
   
   Comment: Some notes may weird for me, and I see some notes in before end of the song part are unsnapped, too. So I think that this diff should more work.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

stevemin wrote:

hello~
(m4m)
i am a newb mapper and modder so feel free to just ignore me~

[Easy]
00:21:289 (3) - clap, sounds better
00:46:674 (3) - finish
00:47:597 (4) - finish, its in the music
really nothing to fix~ perfect~

[Normal]
00:28:443 - maybe this slider looks better
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/248/56736203.png/
00:33:520 (3) - maybe clap here? oops miss
nothing to fix here too...

[Hard]
00:10:212 (6) - the triple here is too much, change like this
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/841/49624064.png/
00:48:751 (1) - this is a minor thing but how about rotating this slider more anti clockwise so the curve flows smoothly~
01:01:443 (4) - nc
01:02:135 (5) - "
01:05:827 (4) - "

So well made and awesome story boarding star~

1. Put 藤田咲 as Artist?

1. Uhm, fine ><

1. 00:25:212 (6) - Hold shift while placing this, so it's directly underneath (5)?
2. 00:28:443 (4) - Endpoint 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
3. 00:43:212 (1) - Place this somewhere else? With both the slider not fading completely out, and the hitburst from (5), this can be a bit hard to read for beginners.

1. 00:23:827 (3) - Move to 204;228, and then move the endpoint 3 gridlvl4 up.
2. 01:03:520 (3) - Make a heart-shape? To go with the Storyboard
   

   256,224,63520,2,0,P|283:155|415:205|383:18|301:32|256:64|256:64|210:32|128:18|96:205|

3. 01:10:776 (5) - Put in the center?

CXu wrote:

Hi yanlu

Randomly modding from here.

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~

[General]

1. Put 藤田咲 as Artist?

[Easy]

1. Uhm, fine ><

[Normal]

1. 00:25:212 (6) - Hold shift while placing this, so it's directly underneath (5)?
2. 00:28:443 (4) - Endpoint 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
3. 00:43:212 (1) - Place this somewhere else? With both the slider not fading completely out, and the hitburst from (5), this can be a bit hard to read for beginners.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:827 (3) - Move to 204;228, and then move the endpoint 3 gridlvl4 up.
2. 01:03:520 (3) - Make a heart-shape? To go with the Storyboard
   

   256,224,63520,2,0,P|283:155|415:205|383:18|301:32|256:64|256:64|210:32|128:18|96:205|

   eh...it' cann't work orz
3. 01:10:776 (5) - Put in the center?

That's all~ Good luck!

256,216,63520,6,0,P|274:133|388:195|400:59|326:-1|256:61|256:61|186:-1|109:63|130:182|232:153|235:187,1,560,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

General

SB Wise
You have two osb files, delete one! ahhh~dele ><
Light -2.png should be 640x480, once you have this fix the scale coding to 1 fix~
The BLACK.png should be 640x480, once you have this fix the scale as well to 1 fix too~
lyrics 1.png is cut off, fix this! okay,I make all lyrics sb change again now>~<
http://puu.sh/1XVo0
sb1 should start at 00:00:751 - with the music fix
Make sure the pictures go over the edges!
The Light -2.png effect should end here 01:11:335 - , its too much fix lol
The transition between sb7 and sb8 isnt good, fix this too fix now~

Hard

00:05:135 (2,3) - Even for symmetry, should be consistent spacing it's okay i nc next jump..
00:07:212 (8,1) - ^ ^
00:14:135 (5,6,9) - ^, jump feels nonsense
00:18:289 (7,8) - Why ? Keep the spacing consistent please want to keep that..i think it's okay to readable and playable ;O00:23:827 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:28:212 (9,1) - ^ ^
00:29:135 (4,5) - ^ Really needed? ^
00:36:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the star pattern so it has similar spacing and not changing, or better just make it symmetric fix..it's star already imo..
00:49:905 (4,1) - Spacing fix
00:57:058 (5,1) - this jump feels so forced, dont make this i'll think about..
00:58:443 (2,3,4) - You stack 2 and 3 but 4 is single, why dont you make a triangle pattern i think it's okay and fit with vocal ><
01:10:776 (5) - Theres no matchable sound to it, just add a single circle fix><!


Only things to fix, not more on Easy or Normal, well done and good luck

1. Maybe you want to use some fading on SB. or is it just me?

1. So many sliders that end on red tick, and then the next slider is started at white tick. afaik this could confuse new players and player who never heard this song before. Change it...
2. 00:06:058 (3) - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
3. 00:08:827 - 00:10:904 - did you stop the whistle hitsound here? Put Whistle on 00:08:827 and 00:09:751, do the same to all diffs...
4. 00:13:904 (4) - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
5. 00:19:212 (1) - whistle on the start of this slider?
6. 00:43:674 (3) - imho ugly shape, the head and tail of this slider are blocking each other... try this :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Set the hitsounds like [Easy]
2. 00:02:366 (3) - - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
3. 00:09:751 (3) - ^
4. 00:07:212 (5) - delete the clap and put whistle
5. 00:18:404 (7) - just in case if you want better flow..
   
   SPOILER

   

1. set the hitsound like [Easy]
2. 00:06:289 (4) - delete?
3. 00:09:981 (5) - ^
4. 00:10:327 (7) - ^, well the song is quite slow and calm, a stream is not good on that part
5. 00:13:443 (4,5,6,7) - make it like this :
   
   much better
6. 00:21:289 - an object here is useless, especially that you silence it, try this :
   
   don't forget to delete the inheriting sections..
7. 00:31:904 (6,1,2,3) - try this :
   
8. 00:38:597 - 00:38:712 - delete these inheriting sections, it's useless imo
9. 00:39:520 (1,5) - delete finish on these slider
10. 00:39:058 (4) - put finish in the end of this slider, and put finish in the start of 00:40:904 (7)
11. there's also other wrong placement of soft finish, fix it..

BounceBabe wrote:

Much better improvment on SB, but you still didnt fix the "Light -2.png" Scale, also I'm deliberate...i want it not too much><!

00:18:289 (7,8) - Why ? Keep the spacing consistent please want to keep that..i think it's okay to readable and playable ;O
00:23:827 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:28:212 (9,1) - ^ ^
00:36:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the star pattern so it has similar spacing and not changing, or better just make it symmetric fix..it's star already imo..
00:58:443 (2,3,4) - You stack 2 and 3 but 4 is single, why dont you make a triangle pattern i think it's okay and fit with vocal ><

Really advise you to fix these please! The spacing is something im strict on unless its really suiting

rEdo wrote:

[// Timing check]
751, 130.00 BPM
67904, 120.00 BPM
69137, 110.00 BPM

I guess that should work a lot better.
i think it's fine now >_<

[Easy]
00:19:212 (1) - add a whistle at its beginning fix
00:53:597 (2) - that whistle sounds pretty random... consider deleting it. okay

also, maybe map it until the end? t's a waste when it's not mapped! i want it....keep ;w;

[Normal]
00:26:135 (7) - new combo here fix
00:29:597 (5) - ^ fix

you should map it until the end as well! ;w;

[Hard]
00:08:135 (1) - the finish on its beginning is way too loud, you should decrease the volume on its timing section to 20%, like in previous difficulties. fix
00:18:981 (8) - you should try to set new combos on the beginning of patterns like this one. it doesn't look cool when you've got extra two circles from the previous pattern in the wrong combo >< fix
00:26:827 (2) - new combo here, instead of current (1). you shouldn't stick to the white lines in setting up the combos, they are supposed to help you only~ fix
00:31:904 (6) - here too, I think it looks a lot better when the new combo would start on that note instead of your current (1). no
00:33:058 (4,5,6,1) - something like that fits the music a lot better~ okay ><much better
00:37:443 (6) - new combo fix
00:40:904 (7) - a pattern like this might play a lot better imo, the jump is on a more important moment in the song~ fix but not your way~
00:44:943 (5) - new combo fix
00:59:366 (4) - ^ ^
01:02:135 (5) - ^ ^


that's a nice map you've got there~ :3

1. Moe Cute Kawaii lovely song have NOTHING to do with song or sb. I don't think people will look for song using tag "kawaii".
2. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think.
3. I can clearly hear 1/2 ticks, so, try to use Slider Tick Rate 2. It will fit here better, imo.
4. clap hitsounds sometimes feels weird.

1. 00:00:751 - Check SB load here. According to osu! editor it is above recommended SB load (x5.00). Make sure that you have reasons to break this guideline and use higher SB load :<
2. 00:08:135 - same as above. Try to reduce SB load, please!

1. Nazi - I'd recommend you to use distance spacing x1.1, so circles will not touch each other and it will look the way better. (In other words, it will make your patterns neater
2. 00:02:366 (2,1) - this kind of overlap (overlap with previous slider's hitburst) will confuse some beginners. example (00:05:597 (2) - is stacked with 00:02:366 (2) - )
3. 00:21:289 (3) - for calm song and Easy diff this slider is TOO short. It will stress beginners, I STRONGLY recommend you to avoid using 1/2 sliders here.
4. 00:37:674 (1,2) - why don't you re-arrange this part a bit to follow vocals closer? Just swap (2) and (3) this way
5. 00:43:674 (3) - nazi - why don't you create better (softer) shape for this slider? Curent one may confuse some beginners and it doesn't look good, imo.
6. 00:54:981 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to follow Storyboard and music? Current combo placement here feels weird.

1. 00:09:751 (3) - uh.. It seems like you can follow vocals closer and make pattern more consistent. Make slider end at 00:10:212 - and put circle at 00:10:443 - you did the same with 00:13:904 (4,5), so it's ok to do it here as well.
2. 00:17:135 - I'm sure you've missed some vocals here. It really feels wrong to me without circle here.
3. 00:43:674 (2,3) - how about removing (3) and adding repeat to 00:43:674 (2) - it will follow vocals better.example (personally, I feel like vocals here should end at 00:44:597 - that's why I want you to end slider here)
4. 00:54:981 (5)/00:56:597 (1) - - same as Easy? Swap new combos to follow vocals and storyboard? It feels weird the way it is now, imo.
5. 00:58:443 - don't you feel like this beat sould have louder slider-tick? It feels REALLY loud, simple slider-tick is not enough here, make it louder, please!
6. 01:02:135 (4) - New combo for vocals and storyboard? I'd place NC here, to be honest.

1. Song is calm, but your patterns are not calm. Use AR8 to make them easier to read. It will fit with your slider velocity better, too!
2. 00:39:058 (6) - end it 1/2 earlier, please! There's no ANY beat at 00:39:404.
3. 00:46:674 (7) - nazi - it feels like NC here will fit good enough. It will make your comboing more consistent + long combos don't look good.
4. 01:10:916 - ultimate-nazi - pointless green line, remove it, please!

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi~ Map finally got anime-related SB and BG. Now I'm happy to mod it. I'll grave my version of this song as soon as possible, ofc. nooo you don't have to! D:

[General]

1. Moe Cute Kawaii lovely song have NOTHING to do with song or sb. I don't think people will look for song using tag "kawaii". lol I know...okay dele them ;_; but i want lovely song keep seems it really is ;D
2. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think. A1-pictures and wagnaria?? i want to know why..
3. I can clearly hear 1/2 ticks, so, try to use Slider Tick Rate 2. It will fit here better, imo. okay! silder tick rate 2 now~
4. clap hitsounds sometimes feels weird.

[Storyboard]

1. 00:00:751 - Check SB load here. According to osu! editor it is above recommended SB load (x5.00). Make sure that you have reasons to break this guideline and use higher SB load :< fix :<
2. 00:08:135 - same as above. Try to reduce SB load, please! fix too>_<!

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Pretty nice map, good luck.

yanlu wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi~ Map finally got anime-related SB and BG. Now I'm happy to mod it. I'll grave my version of this song as soon as possible, ofc. nooo you don't have to! D: i want to

[General]

1. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think. A1-pictures and wagnaria?? i want to know why.. that anime is created by A1-pictures. and wagnaria is a name of a cafe where they work.. go and watch this anime, you'll like it

-Bakari- wrote:

[Easy]

1. Nazi - I'd recommend you to use distance spacing x1.1, so circles will not touch each other and it will look the way better. (In other words, it will make your patterns neater it's okay now >.<...
2. 00:02:366 (2,1) - this kind of overlap (overlap with previous slider's hitburst) will confuse some beginners. example (00:05:597 (2) - is stacked with 00:02:366 (2) - ) fix~
3. 00:21:289 (3) - for calm song and Easy diff this slider is TOO short. It will stress beginners, I STRONGLY recommend you to avoid using 1/2 sliders here. fix
4. 00:37:674 (1,2) - why don't you re-arrange this part a bit to follow vocals closer? Just swap (2) and (3) this way fix
5. 00:43:674 (3) - nazi - why don't you create better (softer) shape for this slider? Curent one may confuse some beginners and it doesn't look good, imo. i want it..keep
6. 00:54:981 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to follow Storyboard and music? Current combo placement here feels weird. fix

[Normal]

1. 00:09:751 (3) - uh.. It seems like you can follow vocals closer and make pattern more consistent. Make slider end at 00:10:212 - and put circle at 00:10:443 - you did the same with 00:13:904 (4,5), so it's ok to do it here as well. no..it's consistent with 00:01:904 (2,3) -
2. 00:17:135 - I'm sure you've missed some vocals here. It really feels wrong to me without circle here. fix but change to slider
3. 00:43:674 (2,3) - how about removing (3) and adding repeat to 00:43:674 (2) - it will follow vocals better.example (personally, I feel like vocals here should end at 00:44:597 - that's why I want you to end slider here) fix and snap too.
4. 00:54:981 (5)/00:56:597 (1) - - same as Easy? Swap new combos to follow vocals and storyboard? It feels weird the way it is now, imo. fix
5. 00:58:443 - don't you feel like this beat sould have louder slider-tick? It feels REALLY loud, simple slider-tick is not enough here, make it louder, please! okay"
6. 01:02:135 (4) - New combo for vocals and storyboard? I'd place NC here, to be honest. fix

[Hard]

1. Song is calm, but your patterns are not calm. Use AR8 to make them easier to read. It will fit with your slider velocity better, too! okay
2. 00:39:058 (6) - end it 1/2 earlier, please! There's no ANY beat at 00:39:404. okay..
3. 00:46:674 (7) - nazi - it feels like NC here will fit good enough. It will make your comboing more consistent + long combos don't look good. fix
4. 01:10:916 - ultimate-nazi - pointless green line, remove it, please! fix too

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Pretty nice map, good luck.

No_Gu wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[General/All diffs]
好像缺个black.png 欸..有阿"
我觉得可以找custom clap..因为这首我觉得真的不适合默认的 okay
00:40:212这边出来这张在16:9里看是这样的。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615900 ..看了下 00:26:597 这边这张也是。。改完版我就没做过SB了所以hhh 我不知道怎麼解決寬屏問題;w;
为啥EN不做完
hhh我原来开过这首
然后这首不是伊波的吗！..其實我沒看過..不知道lol

[Easy]
其实不用tick调音的话我觉得tick1在easy里够够的
00:41:366 (1) - 把5包住? 已修改

[Normal]
00:40:674 (2,3) - 不得不说这边好像被挡的挺厉害 恩...現在應該好一點了

[Hard]
00:13:212 (3,4) - 我觉得这边还是跟前面弄个三角形比较好。不过个人习惯问题 好吧 改了
我觉得可以一条长白线1NC.或者看看超过10的comboNC一下。。 都沒有超過10combo呀

整体还不错。。感觉好像remap过？。。原来看好像没这么整齐。EN补全了我叫pokie来看看

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello yanlu! A further modding here:

　General

1. Is that adding a tag for lovely song necessary? If not, I'd recommend to remove that. There's no need to have a customized tag for yourself. okay ;(
2. Timing is totally off'd on 01:07:903 - . Please apply rEdo's timing. And remind that don't forget a resnap after changes. fix
   

   rEdo wrote:

   751, 130.00 BPM
   67904, 120.00 BPM
   69137, 110.00 BPM

3. Pretty weird that you only have a silenced sliderslide for Normal set, please consider adding one for Soft set too. add

　Storyboard

1. Storyboard部份用中文說明好了(汗
2. 優化(?)了一下代碼… http://puu.sh/24Vwa 用這個代替現有的osb, SB Load應該不會有超過5.00的地方了… (替代後請刪除BLACK.png) 恩~非常感謝!
3. 製作Storyboard時請避免使用Black覆蓋無需使用的背景, 這樣會佔用2.00的SB Load.
   
   • - 在背景layer加一條這樣的代碼可以去掉背景, 需要使用到背景的時候再另外加進去

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0

:OO (還是不會用囧"..

1. 唔…為何Light -2.png的代碼裡會有一行Rotate效果? 建議刪除 (目前使用Rotate會導致在寬屏的位置也顯示出storyboard元件…)
2. 00:59:827 - 這裡明明是同一句歌詞, 但卻fade out了 orz …將lyrics 12.png分成will reveal our / golden day 兩張圖? 恩..其實是故意的orz

　Easy

1. Slider tick rate 1 should be enough for Easy difficulty.
   00:03:981 (3,1) - Adding a whistle on downbeat wasn't nice, please swap the whistle just like how you did on 00:07:674 (4,1) -
   00:09:751 (3) - (slider's head) To keep the consistency with 00:02:366 (2) - and 00:06:058 (3) - , add a whistle here?
   00:11:366 - Consider adding a circle/slider with whistle, instead of leave it blank?
   
   
   01:03:520 (1) - I-I tried to shape this but it took over 15 minutes Dx
   
   SPOILER

   

266,187,63520,6,4,P|311:164|331:140|360:95|342:40|288:36|254:75|254:75|224:36|171:40|150:100|189:147|197:149,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Normal

• 00:28:443 (5) - For the slider's end, seems there's no point for ending this slider at such timing point. Please extend it by 1/2 beat (00:29:366 - )
  01:03:520 (1) - Wha- again?! Well thanks god that we've a scale tool.
  
  SPOILER

  

265,187,63520,6,4,P|305:166|323:145|349:104|333:55|284:51|254:86|254:86|227:51|179:55|160:109|195:151|202:153,1,350,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Hard

• 00:27:981 (6,7,8) - If you ever wanted to add triples here, please don't leave 00:27:404 (4) - blank.
  00:31:674 (5) - Just to let you know that rhythms aren't even according with the music, I could say it's totally off'd here...Please use this rhythm instead of the current one.
  
  00:35:827 (1) - If you're trying to follow vocal, please move this slider to 00:35:597 - . (I've fixed the pattern for you until 00:38:135 (4) - )

320,300,35597,6,0,P|304:264|328:228|328:228|356:192|340:148,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
213,53,36289,1,8,0:0:0
256,176,36520,1,0,0:0:0
293,51,36751,1,0,0:0:0
189,129,36981,1,0,0:0:0
319,127,37212,1,8,0:0:0
257,176,37443,5,0,0:0:0
257,208,37558,1,0,0:0:0
253,240,37674,2,0,P|245:284|257:316,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,337,38135,1,8,0:0:0

• 00:39:520 (1) - Swap the whistle to 00:39:058 (6) - 's slider's end.
  00:45:751 (5,1,3) - (slider's head) Kind of ridiculous that you've added plenty soft/normal finishs through the chorus part, but missing them here. Please add finishs to both slider's head properly.
  00:49:905 (4) - Same suggestion with 00:31:674 (fixed until 00:51:751 - )

424,236,49904,2,0,P|460:256|498:256,1,80
316,244,50366,6,0,P|240:192|172:192,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,296,51058,1,2,0:0:0
76,212,51289,1,2,0:0:0
48,236,51404,1,0,0:0:0
28,268,51520,1,2,0:0:0
64,349,51751,1,0,0:0:0

• 00:53:135 (3) - ^ (fixed until 00:54:058 (1) - )

344,296,53135,2,0,P|328:236|348:184,1,120
372,160,53597,2,0,P|396:128|400:88,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
343,27,54058,6,0,P|308:55|314:101|314:101|269:178,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fix =A=
(愛心修的好漂亮喔...我都拉的不好看;w;

That's all, good luck

neonat wrote:

Minor suggestions.

Hard

00:28:327 - add a note (you can hear in the background) no..
00:33:635 - add a note (I think it would be nicer rather than just starting when the vocals do) ^
00:39:058 (6,1) - try this rhythm? (emphasizes 00:39:289 -) better but i have another way..fix now~

SPOILER

Love the song I love it too

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! This is M4M from your queue. I hope you find my mod helpful, but i'm a newbie mapper and still learning D: Take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
01:03:520 (1)- I think the heart shape could be improved how..i think it's good enough now :/

[Normal]
00:27:289 - add note nop..it'll be harder
00:35:366 - ^
01:00:520 - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Heart shape could be improved same as easy :/

[Hard]
00:02:135 (4,5) - Consider switching these two to fit better with the music hmm..it's fine i think
00:10:442 (7,8) - move to the next white tick ..? I can't understand your mean =A=
0:26:597 (10)- NC, remove NC from 00:26:827 (1) change nc before like now..i think no to change again ><
01:08:654 - add note no..

Goodluck on your maapppp