Kitagami wrote:

Hello! Thank your for requesting on my Modding Queue!

Here's my mod!

General

Looking good for me. It's just that Hard has less Inheriting points than Normal or Easy during Kiai Time.

Easy

1. 00:02:366 (2) - The spacing here is a bit close (0.97x), I would try to fix it. fix
2. 00:15:981 (2) - This slider sounds weird when playing. I guess it's because it doesn't follow the vocal that well. How about removing the Reverse, moving it to 00:16:443 and adding a note where the slider previously started? (http://puu.sh/1HFMd) change but not your way~
3. 00:57:058 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think there are too many single notes for Easy, maybe it can become difficult for starters? How about transforming, for example, 3~4 and 6~7 into sliders? (http://puu.sh/1HFRq) fix
4. 01:01:212 (2,3) - How about deleting 3 and making 2 a 1/2 beat slider? To follow the song better. (http://puu.sh/1HFT2) fixs

Normal

1. 00:26:149 - How about adding a note here? When I was playing, it felt like something was missing, in my opinion. no but keep><
2. 00:37:234 (1) - This slider looks weird, all the other sliders of this type were round... fix
3. 00:38:851 (3) - How about doing something like this? (http://puu.sh/1HFz1) It follows the vocal better and is easier to play, in my opinion. okay
4. 00:40:929 - How about adding a note here? If follows the vocal. umm..nop
5. 00:48:058 - This is really, just a suggestion. How about adding a note here? i'll think about it.

Hard

The second Timing Section is a bit off. I found this for it:
BPM 107,250
Offset 69098
thanks ><!

1. 00:02:828 (6) - How about moving it to y:268 to get some symmetry with 00:02:135 (4,5) ? fix :3
2. 00:18:289 (8) - Hmm, this slider seems a bit odd to play. You were doing full or 1/2 beat sliders and then, suddenly, there's this 3/8 one. How about turning this slider a 1/2 beat one and then, adding a note on 00:18:981 to make a 3 note stream? The stream follows the vocal well, in my opinion. You just have to recheck the New Combos around here. (http://puu.sh/1HFcz) fix too
3. 00:33:404 (5) - Seems like something is missing, in my opinion. How about making a 3 note stream here? (http://puu.sh/1HF09) nop.i want keep that o3o
4. 01:02:135 - How about adding a note here? It really seems like something is missing. okay o3o

That's all! Good luck!

1. Please use this version of the background image which is 1024x768:
   
   
   Your current one is 1022x767. It may not matter, but I think it's better.
   
   
2. In my opinion, the normal sample set is not fitting well with this song. The normal set is making the hitsounds very loud and obnoxious and it's ruining this nice sweet song. I highly suggest that you change all timing sections before the kiai time to soft sample set. Plus, the transition from soft to normal at the kiai time will sound very good because that is the sort of thing that is happening in the music. I'll try and give some suggestions in each difficulty.
   I did all the hitsound modding here with these changes made.
   
   
3. I really recommend starting the kiai time at 00:33:981 instead.

1. 00:03:981 (3) - The blanket is a bit off here. Move the 3 to (472,240) to make it perfect.
   
   
2. 00:11:827 (1) - I suggest following the same rhythm here that you did at 00:04:443 (1,2,3,4,5) because the music is repeated and the one you are using right now sounds very strange. Shorten 00:11:827 (1) so that it ends at 00:12:520.
   
   
   
   
3. 00:30:981 (1) - This spinner really needs to be changed. The 00:33:520 (1) appears before the spinner is even halfway done and it can be very confusing for beginners. Plus the gap between 00:30:289 and 00:30:981 right now is very awkward. I suggest moving the spinner to 00:30:751 and having it end at 00:32:597. This fits the music and gives the player time to recover afterwards, and also we don't have the spinner starting on the red tick which was weird.
   
   
   
   
4. 00:46:674 (3,4) - I don't like the gap between the 3 and 4 here, I think it's very awkward to play. Can I suggest a different rhythm?
   
   
   00:45:058 (1) to 00:48:751 (1)
   There are no weird gaps and we follow the vocal line well.
   
   
5. 00:54:058 (3) - This slider looks very strange. :O This slider is very confusing to play because the repeat lands on a blue tick. May I suggest a different rhythm?
   
   
   00:52:443 (1) to 00:56:135 (1)
   This follows the vocals very well and is easy to read.
   
   
6. 01:01:212 (2,3,4) - Hmm, maybe make this flow a little better by rotating the 3 and 4 like this:
   
   
   And you can adjust the 3 to make the blanket nicer.

1. 00:00:751 (1) - These finishes on the head are so loud! I suggest adding a 20% volume section at the head of the slider, and then a 40% section at the next blue tick. So~
   00:00:751 - 20% volume
   00:00:866 - 40% volume
   This will make the finish not so loud and fit better with the music.
   
   
2. 00:03:981 (3) - This circle feels a little flat without a hitsound on it. Try adding a whistle here, which will give it a nice push into the next slider.
   
   
3. 00:04:443 (1) - I think the finish on the head of this slider is not needed. There is no finish in the music here, and it's quite loud. Please remove it.
   
   
4. 00:06:520 (4) - Whistle on the head sounds very nice and accents the vocal line.
   
   
5. 00:07:674 (5) - I suggest a whistle here for the same reason as 00:03:981 (3). It feels empty without it.
   
   
6. 00:08:135 (1) - Again we should silence this finish a bit.
   00:08:135 - 20% volume
   00:08:251 - 40% volume
   
   
7. 00:11:827 (1) - Please remove the finish from the head because there is no finish in the music here.
   
   
8. 00:12:981 (2) - Whistle
   
   
9. 00:13:904 (4) - Whistle on head to accent vocal rhythm again. This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
   
   
10. 00:13:904 (4) - Clap on the end to be consistent with 00:06:520 (4). This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
    
    
11. 00:15:058 (5) - Whistle to keep consistent and to push into the next section better. This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
    
    
12. 00:15:520 (1) - Maybe silence this finish to 30% or so. It sounds much nicer that way to me.
    
    
13. 00:16:443 (3) - If you are adding a clap on the upbeats in this section, then you should also add a clap on the slider repeat here.
    
    
14. 00:19:212 (1) - Please remove this redundant finish from the head. It's very unsounding here. Add a whistle instead.
    
    
15. 00:22:904 (1) - Reduce the volume of the finish on the head to 20%.
    
    
16. 00:24:751 (3) - We're missing a hitsound here. Maybe a whistle on the head to accent the vocals a bit.
    
    
17. 00:26:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - We should try and make hitsounds consistent throughout this section. I feel that offbeat claps work well. Try this:
    00:27:520 (2) - Remove whistle from end and add clap to end.
    00:28:443 (3) - Clap on repeat
    
    
18. 00:33:520 - The transition to normal sample set here for the kiai time is nice, but the volume is too loud and the hitsounds are very ugly. I suggest 40% volume to start the kiai time and adjust the rest of the volumes from there.
    
    
19. 00:58:904 (5) - Missing clap on end I think.
    

1. 00:19:212 (1) - Since the vocals are held here, I think it would feel much better if we had a slider. Maybe a rhythm like this:
   
   
   00:18:289 (6) to 00:20:366 (3)
   This feels really nice with the vocals.
   
   
2. 00:29:597 (4,5,1,2) - I think a different rhythm would be better here so that we could hit the slider at 00:30:058 and have a new combo there just like the hard diff. Maybe this:
   
   
   00:28:443 (3) to 00:32:597 (4)
   
   
3. 00:33:520 (2) - I really dislike this section because the downbeat that starts the chorus at 00:33:981 is on the end of this slider. It feels very bad because that down is not stressed. This is the most powerful and most important part of the song, so here's what I suggest:
   00:32:366 (3) - NC
   00:33:058 (1) - Remove NC
   And maybe this rhythm so we can start the chorus right:
   
   
   00:33:058 (3) to 00:35:597 (3)
   NC at 00:33:981 on the downbeat when the chorus starts. It's MUCH more powerful that way.
   
   
4. 00:37:212 (1) - The NC here is very confusing because it's part of the previous verse. The new vocal line starts on the downbeat 00:37:674. I suggest removing this NC and adding a NC at 00:38:135 (2) instead. That makes more sense musically.
   
   
5. 00:39:289 (1) - It would be better if you remove this NC here because this slider is part of the same verse as the previous two sliders.
   
   
6. 00:40:674 (5) - I believe that we could follow the vocals better and have a more flowing rhythm if this were a 1/2 slider like this:
   
   
   
   
7. 00:41:366 (7) - The new vocal verse starts here so it would be the perfect place for a NC. Please add a NC here.
   
   
8. 00:48:058 - We should add a circle here because there is a sound in the music and it will make this section feel better because there won't be such a large gap. Like this:
   
   
   The 5 could even be a 1/2 slider.
   
   
9. 00:57:981 (1) - It would be better to remove the NC here and add one at 00:59:827 (3) to fit the vocal line and to be consistent with the easy diff.

1. 00:00:751 (1) - Maybe silence the finish to 20% just like easy.
   
   
2. 00:04:443 (1) - Remove this finish from here because it's noisy and there is no finish in the music at this point.
   
   
3. 00:07:212 (5) - Adding a clap here would sound nice and be consistent with your easy diff.
   
   
4. 00:11:827 (1) - Remove finish from head please.
   
   
5. 00:14:597 (5) - Clap for the same reason as above.
   
   
6. 00:15:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - The soft sample clap goes perfectly here, just saying.
   
   
7. 00:19:212 (1) - Same as easy, I think a whistle sounds much better than a finish here.
   
   
8. 00:43:212 (1) - Remove finish. It's noisy and doesn't fit music imo.
   
   
9. 00:52:443 (1) - Missing clap on end I think.
   
   
10. 00:59:827 (3) - Missing finish on the head like other diffs.
    
    
11. 01:01:443 (5) - Whistle here rather than finish imo.

1. 00:33:058 (4) - This rhythm is very strange. Can I suggest something that would be very fun here?
   
   
   A long slider at 00:33:058 and the triplet at 00:33:520 just like in the music. And then this awesome circle flowing jump into the kiai time.
   
   
2. 00:46:674 - I think we should change the rhythm here to follow the crashes in the music. There's one at 00:45:058 and 00:45:751 and 00:46:674. We hit a slider on all of them except for 00:46:674. Here's what I suggest.
   00:46:674 (5) - Delete this
   00:46:904 (1) - Move the 1 to 00:46:674 so it hits along with the crash.
   00:47:366 - Add a circle here
   This rhythm feels much nicer.
   Just a suggestion:
   
   
   
   
3. 01:03:520 - End the kiai time here because this is the new verse and the end of the chorus.
   
   
4. 01:02:597 (1) - Maybe remove the NC here and add one at 01:03:520 (3) because the verse changes at the 3 there and a NC would accent that.

1. 00:00:751 (1) - Again reduce volume of finish please.
   
   
2. 00:02:135 (4) - I think that the claps you used in this section are not fitting very well because there are no claps in the music at this point. It's just vocals and piano. I suggest removing the clap from the head here and adding a whistle instead.
   
   
3. 00:02:828 (6) - Again remove clap from repeat and add whistle.
   
   
4. 00:03:520 (7) - Remove clap from end and add whistle.
   
   
5. 00:04:443 (1) - Remove finish from head please. It's so loud. ;_;
   
   
6. 00:07:212 (8) - Remove the clap from the tail and add it to the head. This is consistent with the other diffs.
   
   
7. 00:10:904 (10) - Remove clap from head and add a whistle to the tail for consistency.
   
   
8. 00:11:827 (1) - Remove finish from head. Noisy and no finish in music.
   
   
9. For consistency, remove clap at 00:14:135 (5) and add it to 00:14:597 (8). Sounds better to me.
   
   
10. The volumes in the kiai time are quite noisy. I suggest reducing them by 10% or so.
    
    
11. 00:35:827 (1) - Please remove the finish on the head here. It's very redundant and sounds bad. And you didn't do this in the other difficulties.
    
    
12. 00:37:674 (1) - Remove whistle from head and add finish. More consistent and sounds better.
    
    
13. 00:38:135 (2) - Missing clap I think
    
    
14. 00:38:366 (3) - The whistle on the repeat is super noisy to me. Can you remove it or reduce it's volume?
    
    
15. 00:39:981 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 00:43:212 (1) - Please remove finish from head.
    
    
17. 00:45:058 (1) - Remove whistle from head and add finish.
    
    
18. 00:48:751 (1) - Finish on head instead of whistle please.
    
    
19. 00:50:597 (1) - Remove finish from head.
    
    
20. 00:52:443 (1) - Finish on head instead of whistle sounds better.
    
    
21. 00:54:289 (1) - Maybe remove finish here from head because it's sort of weird.
    
    
22. 00:59:827 (1) - Finish on head would be better than whistle.
    
    
23. 01:02:597 - From here to the end should be soft sample set because the song becomes very soft again.
    
    
24. 01:03:520 (3) - Why do you make the repeat so quiet? It sounds very strange.
    
    
25. 01:05:827 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you should remove all of the claps from this section and replace them with whistles or just leave them blank. The claps aren't fitting at all with the piano.
    
    
26. 01:09:657 (2,3) - These are currently set to drum sample set. On purpose? It sounds very off. Change to auto please.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello Yanlu-sama~
Modding as requested. <3

Awesome SB~!

Red stuff = super duper highly recommended you fix.

[General]

1. Please use this version of the background image which is 1024x768:
   
   
   Your current one is 1022x767. It may not matter, but I think it's better. OKAY
   
   
2. In my opinion, the normal sample set is not fitting well with this song. The normal set is making the hitsounds very loud and obnoxious and it's ruining this nice sweet song. I highly suggest that you change all timing sections before the kiai time to soft sample set. Plus, the transition from soft to normal at the kiai time will sound very good because that is the sort of thing that is happening in the music. I'll try and give some suggestions in each difficulty.
   I did all the hitsound modding here with these changes made. fix~
   
   
3. I really recommend starting the kiai time at 00:33:981 instead. ><

[Easy]

SPOILER

Map Design / Rhythm

1. 00:03:981 (3) - The blanket is a bit off here. Move the 3 to (472,240) to make it perfect.
   
   
2. 00:11:827 (1) - I suggest following the same rhythm here that you did at 00:04:443 (1,2,3,4,5) because the music is repeated and the one you are using right now sounds very strange. Shorten 00:11:827 (1) so that it ends at 00:12:520.
   
   
   
   
3. 00:30:981 (1) - This spinner really needs to be changed. The 00:33:520 (1) appears before the spinner is even halfway done and it can be very confusing for beginners. Plus the gap between 00:30:289 and 00:30:981 right now is very awkward. I suggest moving the spinner to 00:30:751 and having it end at 00:32:597. This fits the music and gives the player time to recover afterwards, and also we don't have the spinner starting on the red tick which was weird.
   
   
   
   
4. 00:46:674 (3,4) - I don't like the gap between the 3 and 4 here, I think it's very awkward to play. Can I suggest a different rhythm?
   
   
   00:45:058 (1) to 00:48:751 (1)
   There are no weird gaps and we follow the vocal line well.
   
   
5. 00:54:058 (3) - This slider looks very strange. :O This slider is very confusing to play because the repeat lands on a blue tick. May I suggest a different rhythm?
   
   
   00:52:443 (1) to 00:56:135 (1)
   This follows the vocals very well and is easy to read.
   
   
6. 01:01:212 (2,3,4) - Hmm, maybe make this flow a little better by rotating the 3 and 4 like this:
   
   
   And you can adjust the 3 to make the blanket nicer.

Hitsounds

1. 00:00:751 (1) - These finishes on the head are so loud! I suggest adding a 20% volume section at the head of the slider, and then a 40% section at the next blue tick. So~
   00:00:751 - 20% volume
   00:00:866 - 40% volume
   This will make the finish not so loud and fit better with the music.
   
   
2. 00:03:981 (3) - This circle feels a little flat without a hitsound on it. Try adding a whistle here, which will give it a nice push into the next slider.
   
   
3. 00:04:443 (1) - I think the finish on the head of this slider is not needed. There is no finish in the music here, and it's quite loud. Please remove it.
   
   
4. 00:06:520 (4) - Whistle on the head sounds very nice and accents the vocal line.
   
   
5. 00:07:674 (5) - I suggest a whistle here for the same reason as 00:03:981 (3). It feels empty without it.
   
   
6. 00:08:135 (1) - Again we should silence this finish a bit.
   00:08:135 - 20% volume
   00:08:251 - 40% volume
   
   
7. 00:11:827 (1) - Please remove the finish from the head because there is no finish in the music here.
   
   
8. 00:12:981 (2) - Whistle
   
   
9. 00:13:904 (4) - Whistle on head to accent vocal rhythm again. This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
   
   
10. 00:13:904 (4) - Clap on the end to be consistent with 00:06:520 (4). This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
    
    
11. 00:15:058 (5) - Whistle to keep consistent and to push into the next section better. This is with the rhythm change suggested above.
    
    
12. 00:15:520 (1) - Maybe silence this finish to 30% or so. It sounds much nicer that way to me.
    
    
13. 00:16:443 (3) - If you are adding a clap on the upbeats in this section, then you should also add a clap on the slider repeat here.
    
    
14. 00:19:212 (1) - Please remove this redundant finish from the head. It's very unsounding here. Add a whistle instead.
    
    
15. 00:22:904 (1) - Reduce the volume of the finish on the head to 20%.
    
    
16. 00:24:751 (3) - We're missing a hitsound here. Maybe a whistle on the head to accent the vocals a bit.
    
    
17. 00:26:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - We should try and make hitsounds consistent throughout this section. I feel that offbeat claps work well. Try this:
    00:27:520 (2) - Remove whistle from end and add clap to end.
    00:28:443 (3) - Clap on repeat
    
    
18. 00:33:520 - The transition to normal sample set here for the kiai time is nice, but the volume is too loud and the hitsounds are very ugly. I suggest 40% volume to start the kiai time and adjust the rest of the volumes from there.
    
    
19. 00:58:904 (5) - Missing clap on end I think.

[Normal]

SPOILER

Map Design / Rhythm

1. 00:19:212 (1) - Since the vocals are held here, I think it would feel much better if we had a slider. Maybe a rhythm like this:
   
   
   00:18:289 (6) to 00:20:366 (3)
   This feels really nice with the vocals.
   
   
2. 00:29:597 (4,5,1,2) - I think a different rhythm would be better here so that we could hit the slider at 00:30:058 and have a new combo there just like the hard diff. Maybe this:
   
   
   00:28:443 (3) to 00:32:597 (4)
   
   
3. 00:33:520 (2) - I really dislike this section because the downbeat that starts the chorus at 00:33:981 is on the end of this slider. It feels very bad because that down is not stressed. This is the most powerful and most important part of the song, so here's what I suggest:
   00:32:366 (3) - NC
   00:33:058 (1) - Remove NC
   And maybe this rhythm so we can start the chorus right:
   
   
   00:33:058 (3) to 00:35:597 (3)
   NC at 00:33:981 on the downbeat when the chorus starts. It's MUCH more powerful that way.
   
   
4. 00:37:212 (1) - The NC here is very confusing because it's part of the previous verse. The new vocal line starts on the downbeat 00:37:674. I suggest removing this NC and adding a NC at 00:38:135 (2) instead. That makes more sense musically.
   
   
5. 00:39:289 (1) - It would be better if you remove this NC here because this slider is part of the same verse as the previous two sliders.
   
   
6. 00:40:674 (5) - I believe that we could follow the vocals better and have a more flowing rhythm if this were a 1/2 slider like this:
   
   
   
   
7. 00:41:366 (7) - The new vocal verse starts here so it would be the perfect place for a NC. Please add a NC here.
   
   
8. 00:48:058 - We should add a circle here because there is a sound in the music and it will make this section feel better because there won't be such a large gap. Like this:
   
   
   The 5 could even be a 1/2 slider.
   
   
9. 00:57:981 (1) - It would be better to remove the NC here and add one at 00:59:827 (3) to fit the vocal line and to be consistent with the easy diff.

Hitsounds

1. 00:00:751 (1) - Maybe silence the finish to 20% just like easy.
   
   
2. 00:04:443 (1) - Remove this finish from here because it's noisy and there is no finish in the music at this point.
   
   
3. 00:07:212 (5) - Adding a clap here would sound nice and be consistent with your easy diff.
   
   
4. 00:11:827 (1) - Remove finish from head please.
   
   
5. 00:14:597 (5) - Clap for the same reason as above.
   
   
6. 00:15:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - The soft sample clap goes perfectly here, just saying.
   
   
7. 00:19:212 (1) - Same as easy, I think a whistle sounds much better than a finish here.
   
   
8. 00:43:212 (1) - Remove finish. It's noisy and doesn't fit music imo.
   
   
9. 00:52:443 (1) - Missing clap on end I think.
   
   
10. 00:59:827 (3) - Missing finish on the head like other diffs.
    
    
11. 01:01:443 (5) - Whistle here rather than finish imo.

[Hard]

SPOILER

Map Design / Rhythm

1. 00:33:058 (4) - This rhythm is very strange. Can I suggest something that would be very fun here?
   
   
   A long slider at 00:33:058 and the triplet at 00:33:520 just like in the music. And then this awesome circle flowing jump into the kiai time.
   
   
2. 00:46:674 - I think we should change the rhythm here to follow the crashes in the music. There's one at 00:45:058 and 00:45:751 and 00:46:674. We hit a slider on all of them except for 00:46:674. Here's what I suggest.
   00:46:674 (5) - Delete this
   00:46:904 (1) - Move the 1 to 00:46:674 so it hits along with the crash.
   00:47:366 - Add a circle here
   This rhythm feels much nicer.
   Just a suggestion:
   
   
   
   
3. 01:03:520 - End the kiai time here because this is the new verse and the end of the chorus.
   
   
4. 01:02:597 (1) - Maybe remove the NC here and add one at 01:03:520 (3) because the verse changes at the 3 there and a NC would accent that.

Hitsounds

1. 00:00:751 (1) - Again reduce volume of finish please.
   
   
2. 00:02:135 (4) - I think that the claps you used in this section are not fitting very well because there are no claps in the music at this point. It's just vocals and piano. I suggest removing the clap from the head here and adding a whistle instead.
   
   
3. 00:02:828 (6) - Again remove clap from repeat and add whistle.
   
   
4. 00:03:520 (7) - Remove clap from end and add whistle.
   
   
5. 00:04:443 (1) - Remove finish from head please. It's so loud. ;_;
   
   
6. 00:07:212 (8) - Remove the clap from the tail and add it to the head. This is consistent with the other diffs.
   
   
7. 00:10:904 (10) - Remove clap from head and add a whistle to the tail for consistency.
   
   
8. 00:11:827 (1) - Remove finish from head. Noisy and no finish in music.
   
   
9. For consistency, remove clap at 00:14:135 (5) and add it to 00:14:597 (8). Sounds better to me.
   
   
10. The volumes in the kiai time are quite noisy. I suggest reducing them by 10% or so.
    
    
11. 00:35:827 (1) - Please remove the finish on the head here. It's very redundant and sounds bad. And you didn't do this in the other difficulties.
    
    
12. 00:37:674 (1) - Remove whistle from head and add finish. More consistent and sounds better.
    
    
13. 00:38:135 (2) - Missing clap I think
    
    
14. 00:38:366 (3) - The whistle on the repeat is super noisy to me. Can you remove it or reduce it's volume?
    
    
15. 00:39:981 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 00:43:212 (1) - Please remove finish from head.
    
    
17. 00:45:058 (1) - Remove whistle from head and add finish.
    
    
18. 00:48:751 (1) - Finish on head instead of whistle please.
    
    
19. 00:50:597 (1) - Remove finish from head.
    
    
20. 00:52:443 (1) - Finish on head instead of whistle sounds better.
    
    
21. 00:54:289 (1) - Maybe remove finish here from head because it's sort of weird.
    
    
22. 00:59:827 (1) - Finish on head would be better than whistle.
    
    
23. 01:02:597 - From here to the end should be soft sample set because the song becomes very soft again.
    
    
24. 01:03:520 (3) - Why do you make the repeat so quiet? It sounds very strange.
    
    
25. 01:05:827 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think you should remove all of the claps from this section and replace them with whistles or just leave them blank. The claps aren't fitting at all with the piano.
    
    
26. 01:09:657 (2,3) - These are currently set to drum sample set. On purpose? It sounds very off. Change to auto please.

fix everything you say~ so i'm not commented on~

Well that's all. Sorry long mod ._.
I like the song and I found a lot.
Anyways, I hope it helps. If you can't understand something, please ask me.
See ya <3 Star~

BounceBabe wrote:

M4M

General

Half of the song is kiaitime part - shorten it abit nop><cuz it's short..
Change the Audio Lead-In to 1 second ok
Disable "Letterbox during breaks" since you have a SB okayy

Easy

00:14:366 - Add a circle here instead (fits the vocal) and start the slider at 00:14:597 - keep atm~

Normal

00:20:366 (3) - Turn this over so that the spacing is easier to read Fix
00:24:751 (5) - Move this slider a half tick earlier that it fits the vocal and place a circle at 00:25:674 - umm...keep
00:26:366 (6) - New combo - Remove next new combo fix
00:30:289 (1,2,3,4) - Add a spinner here maybe? 00:33:058 (1) - Delete this circle after This part is also a bit confusing imo nop><
00:41:135 (4) - This circle is a bit hard to see better now maybe~
00:56:135 (1) - Remove new combo - Add new combo on next element fix
00:57:981 (1) - Remove new combo fix in above
00:59:827 (3) - Add new combo fix too above
01:02:597 - Add a slider here? Maybe a reverse one and then start the spinner at 01:03:635 - okay >_<

Hard

General

AR - 1 or 2 (because of Hard not Insane Diff) no...cuz it's the hardest diff~

Overall

00:03:520 (7) - This slider has an too fast antijump maybe move it below the preview slider? i think it's okay...keep atm ><
00:10:212 (6,7,8) - , 00:27:981 (7,8,9) - , 00:42:174 (3) - There is no tripple rythm and also doesnt fit - Remove it uhmm..but i think it's okay in hard diff D:
00:17:251 (5) - Remove this circle - fits better fix
00:33:520 - Add a stream here? - Focus on the BG music fix~
00:44:366 (3) - Dont know but this slider doesnt fit :s
00:56:597 (2,3,4,5,6) - The stream doesnt fit the rythm, music or vocal dele (3) to follow vocal now~
01:03:520 (3) - Add a spinner instead - fits a lot better I don't want x"D
01:05:827 (4,5,6,7) - These circles are not right i can here no music at this part
01:08:597 (4) - Here is no piano note? Delete it dele
01:08:827 (5) - Doesnt follow the piano right - Place it here 01:08:904 - fix
01:10:776 (5) - Doesnt follow the music replace in 01:10:683 (5) -

Good luck

Xinely wrote:

hi yanlu :3

sorry for little mod. this map is good and ofc cute SB and song ~ ♥ thank you

[Easy]
00:18:289 (5,6) - change to 4/4 slider? many circle is hard for newbie imo >,<
00:33:520 (1) - please delete. it's hard for newbie suddenly circle after spin fix the spin place~so not dele it :3

[Normal]
00:40:674 (3) - change slider until 00:40:904 - ? already change :3

Hard seems good for me but maybe AR-1 ~ no ><
Good Luck~

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello! your mod request via my queue mods ..

[Easy]

00:00:751 (1,2) I think it should go on an easy level .. no change
00:04:443 (1,2,3) change but other way :3

[Normal]

1 single error, the map will be different rhythms .. sorry.. I can't understand you mean..?_?

[Hard]

Change the name to Insane
00:35:135 (4) Replace with a single circle uhm..no
00:39:520 (1) ^ no too..
Good Diff..

Well, you could rename hard to Insane, and could make a new level for Hard quieter, or if you want I can make the Hard level, just ask and I will be happy ..
With nothing more to say I say goodbye, good luck with your map .. I think it's like Hard diff imo..every test player say it's easy too >_<
and it's no fit with this soft song~so i don't want to add an Insane diff~

1. "SB1.jpg"~"SB8.jpg" is too large. You must resize it.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

2. "normal-sliderslide.wav" and "normal-slidertick.wav" are both the silent. You must delete one
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

1. 00:08:135 (1,2,3) - could not follow vocal (or bgm) here. vocal started in 00:09:751.
   
   00:08:135 (1) - 3/2 slider
   00:09:289 (2) - circle
   00:09:751 (3) - 3/2 slider
   00:10:904 (4) - circle
   I suggest this rhythm.
2. 00:19:212 (1) - this note could not follow bgm imo.
   suggestion:
   
   00:19:212 (1) - 3/2 slider
   00:20:366 (2) - 1/1 slider
   00:21:289 (3) - 1/2 slider
   00:21:981 (4) - 1/1 slider
3. 00:28:443 (3,4,5) - ^
   
   00:28:443 (3) - 3/2 slider
   00:29:597 (4) - 1/2 slider
4. 00:33:981 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
   
   00:33:981 (2) - 3/2 slider
   00:35:135 (3) - circle
   00:35:597 (4) - 5/2 slider
5. 00:33:981 (2,4) - [nazi] I really dislike this overlap.
   00:35:366 (4,5) - move few grid down
6. 00:37:674 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:46:674 (3,4) - this overlap makes hard to see to beginner.
   
   
   try this.

1. 00:24:751 (5) - this note could not follow bgm imo.
   
   00:24:520 (5) - 1/1 slider
   00:25:212 (6) - ^
2. 00:30:058 (1,2) - [nazi] appearance suggestion.
   
   

1. 00:35:597 (5,1) - exchange their positions.
   vocal start is 00:35:597. so slider is late.
2. 00:39:058 (4,1) - I could not understand this rhythm.
   If you want to use 3/4 slider, (4) should start in 00:38:827 and (1) in 00:39:289.
3. 00:53:366 (4,5) - ^ move 1/2 early.
4. 01:10:683 (5) - why did you use kick slider? this place can pick up 01:10:776 only imo.

Lanturn wrote:

Hey there from #modreqs! This is a pretty nice map and I can't point out too many errors.

[Storyboard]
The only thing that really bugs me is the instant transition between some of the pictures.. I suggest using some sort of quick fade out/fade in to transition them possibly. 00:15:520 - 00:19:212 - 00:22:904 etc... also it seems like you are trying to follow the beat with fade outs/ins just before 00:22:904 you can notice an odd picture behind it.. may I suggest removing the picture behind it when you do this?

Also, some of the stuff on widescreen(16:9) mode lets me see outside of your pictures, such as when you rotate the ones at 00:33:981 (I don't know how to fix this since i'm not very good with storyboarding, or if you even need to fix this) idk too...orz i seem okay ;_;

00:11:366 | Not sure if this is intentional but when you do the fade out. It is really noticeable that you increase the size on the back picture before you start reducing the size. You might just want to leave the picture at the normal size, or make the pictures before bigger before you start decreasing it. fix~

There's nothing else really I can point out about the storyboard. I really like it.


[Easy]
Honestly nothing wrong here.

[Normal]
Again, there really isn't much here, what i'm going to say is JUST A SUGGESTION. Only do this if you wish.
00:16:904 - Try this rhythm out. It seems to go better with the vocals and the chime.

SPOILER

00:24:289 - Again as above, see if this rhythm appeals to you. also possibly try out the last few notes as well.

SPOILER

00:27:289 - Add note to match vocals?
01:00:520 - ^
Not sure if you would consider this too hard for a normal difficulty or not, but other than those few things, the normal map seems to be done pretty nicely.
uhmm..no change in normal ><
[Hard]
00:44:943 (5) - honestly this note seems to over to the right a bit more than it should, maybe something like x:466 y:144? ok

The ending is a bit strange.... though i don't seem to have any problems getting all 300s on this spot
01:09:377 (1) - The piano note seems to hit on 01:09:412 : (a 1/16th)
01:10ish (5) - The piano note seems to hit on 01:10:741 : (a 1/16th)
These last two things probably don't need to be changed as I'm probably just looking at it a bit too deeply. yes..i think no need to change then ;3

Anyways.. I hope this mod helps somewhat. This map shouldn't have any issues getting ranked. Good luck!

Also, I'm sorry if this is a bit complicated to read. I just realized after I wrote all this that your first language isn't English. Feel free to contact me on osu! if you have any questions about my mod.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

1. "SB1.jpg"~"SB8.jpg" is too large. You must resize it.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

2. "normal-sliderslide.wav" and "normal-slidertick.wav" are both the silent. You must delete one
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

thanks for telling me >w<!

[Easy]

1. 00:08:135 (1,2,3) - could not follow vocal (or bgm) here. vocal started in 00:09:751. ok
   
   00:08:135 (1) - 3/2 slider
   00:09:289 (2) - circle
   00:09:751 (3) - 3/2 slider
   00:10:904 (4) - circle
   I suggest this rhythm.
2. 00:19:212 (1) - this note could not follow bgm imo. ok
   suggestion:
   
   00:19:212 (1) - 3/2 slider
   00:20:366 (2) - 1/1 slider
   00:21:289 (3) - 1/2 slider
   00:21:981 (4) - 1/1 slider
3. 00:28:443 (3,4,5) - ^ uhmm..no change
   
   00:28:443 (3) - 3/2 slider
   00:29:597 (4) - 1/2 slider
4. 00:33:981 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion no
   
   00:33:981 (2) - 3/2 slider
   00:35:135 (3) - circle
   00:35:597 (4) - 5/2 slider
5. 00:33:981 (2,4) - [nazi] I really dislike this overlap. fix..
   00:35:366 (4,5) - move few grid down
6. 00:37:674 (1,2) - ^ fix
7. 00:46:674 (3,4) - this overlap makes hard to see to beginner.oh>< fix too
   
   
   try this.

[Normal]

1. 00:24:751 (5) - this note could not follow bgm imo. okay change~
   
   00:24:520 (5) - 1/1 slider
   00:25:212 (6) - ^
2. 00:30:058 (1,2) - [nazi] appearance suggestion. fix some
   
   

[Hard]

1. 00:35:597 (5,1) - exchange their positions. keep><
   vocal start is 00:35:597. so slider is late.
2. 00:39:058 (4,1) - I could not understand this rhythm. i think it's okay...
   If you want to use 3/4 slider, (4) should start in 00:38:827 and (1) in 00:39:289.
3. 00:53:366 (4,5) - ^ move 1/2 early. keep too
4. 01:10:683 (5) - why did you use kick slider? this place can pick up 01:10:776 only imo. but i change it in above mod o_o"

gl

Sekai-nyan wrote:

yanlu o.o you should remove "op" and "opening" from the tags.

Because it's an ending so, add "ED2" and "ending" to the tags >.<

1. Nice Storyboard!
2. I think you should increase the Audio lead in to 1500 ms. The reason for this is because there is only 1751 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

1. 00:03:981 (3) - Since this soft-whistle is not emphasizing anything in the music, I suggest removing this soft-whistle.
2. 00:04:443 (1) - A soft- whistle at the start and end of this slider would be sound nice here. It helps emphasize with the piano chords.
3. 00:05:597 (2) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte here.
4. 00:07:674 (4) - I would add a soft-whistle on this hit circle, since you can hear the piano chords playing here.
5. 00:08:135 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:443 (1). You might as well fix the hitsound at 00:11:827 (1) as well.
6. 00:12:981 (2,3) - I think you should swap the soft-whistle with circle 3 to follow the piano.
7. 00:13:904 (4) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte at the head of this slider.
8. 00:16:443 (3,4) - I think you can improve this slider blanket a bit more.
9. 00:19:212 (1,2) - I would add soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the piano chords.
10. 00:21:981 (4) - You can add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano chords.
11. 00:29:827 (4,5) - (optional) Not really necessary, but I think you should replace the two hitcircles with a single 1/2 slider so it can follow the music better.
12. 00:30:751 (1) - I think you should start the spinner at 00:30:981 (1) instead of 00:30:751 (1) to follow the music better. Don't forget to add the finish back if you want to fix this.

1. Looks Good! Nothing to suggest!

1. AR8 is a bit high for this difficulty! I suggest removing it?
2. 00:18:981 (8,9,1) - (nazi) This stream is not straight! Move circle 8 to x:240 y:144 to fix.
3. 01:03:520 (3) - This slider is offbeat (look at the repeat)! I suggest using a different slider.
4. 01:10:683 (5) - You have an unsnapped slider at the repeat and at the end of this slider. Please resnap!
5. I believe you have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 01:10:822. Resnap to to 01:10:776.
6. 01:10:683 (5) - I think you should replace this repeat slider with a single hit circle. Avoid overmapping! Also, you might have to add another red timing section somewhere, so the note is on beat at 01:10:776 (5).

BeatofIke wrote:

orz, I've been so busy =_=! I'll try to finish modding this map today!

[General]

1. Nice Storyboard!
2. I think you should increase the Audio lead in to 1500 ms. The reason for this is because there is only 1751 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

[Easy]

1. 00:03:981 (3) - Since this soft-whistle is not emphasizing anything in the music, I suggest removing this soft-whistle.
2. 00:04:443 (1) - A soft- whistle at the start and end of this slider would be sound nice here. It helps emphasize with the piano chords.
3. 00:05:597 (2) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte here.
4. 00:07:674 (4) - I would add a soft-whistle on this hit circle, since you can hear the piano chords playing here.
5. 00:08:135 (1) - Same suggestion as 00:04:443 (1). You might as well fix the hitsound at 00:11:827 (1) as well.
6. 00:12:981 (2,3) - I think you should swap the soft-whistle with circle 3 to follow the piano.
7. 00:13:904 (4) - Since there is no prominent emphasis of piano chords anywhere, I think you should remove the soft-whislte at the head of this slider.
8. 00:16:443 (3,4) - I think you can improve this slider blanket a bit more.
9. 00:19:212 (1,2) - I would add soft-whistles at the end of these sliders to emphasize the piano chords.
10. 00:21:981 (4) - You can add a soft-whistle at the head of this slider to emphasize the piano chords.
11. 00:29:827 (4,5) - (optional) Not really necessary, but I think you should replace the two hitcircles with a single 1/2 slider so it can follow the music better.
12. 00:30:751 (1) - I think you should start the spinner at 00:30:981 (1) instead of 00:30:751 (1) to follow the music better. Don't forget to add the finish back if you want to fix this.

almost fix >A<!

[Normal]

1. Looks Good! Nothing to suggest!

[Hard]

1. AR8 is a bit high for this difficulty! I suggest removing it? ar7 now >w<
2. 00:18:981 (8,9,1) - (nazi) This stream is not straight! Move circle 8 to x:240 y:144 to fix. fix~
3. 01:03:520 (3) - This slider is offbeat (look at the repeat)! I suggest using a different slider. i want to keep D:
4. 01:10:683 (5) - You have an unsnapped slider at the repeat and at the end of this slider. Please resnap!
5. I believe you have an unsnapped inherited (green) sections at 01:10:822. Resnap to to 01:10:776.
6. 01:10:683 (5) - I think you should replace this repeat slider with a single hit circle. Avoid overmapping! Also, you might have to add another red timing section somewhere, so the note is on beat at 01:10:776 (5). cuz it's used1/6 to put so look it's unsnap><

Good Map indeed!

Laurier wrote:

Easy all fix in easy diff~!
00:15:058 (5,1,2) - (2) move to 2 grid right. and it make (5.1.2 )'s straight line
00:18:289 (5) - make bracket ? http://puu.sh/1Lyn5
00:48:751 (1) - move this and make better bracket http://puu.sh/1Lyoj
00:57:520 (3,4,5) - about symmetry pattern ? http://puu.sh/1LypF

Normal
00:17:366 (5) - start at before red tick ? please follow vocal. and same pattern as 00:24:289 (4,5) no chage
00:41:135 (3) - it is hidden by slider. maybe move to another place ? umm...i think it's fine so no change>_< http://puu.sh/1Lyxf

Hard
00:18:289 (7) - why volume down..? I think you can add clap on this slider end fix
01:02:597 (1) - remove nc no cuz nc follow the vocal
01:03:520 (3) - add nc ^

kajiyatta wrote:

hi, M4M here.
General
almost suggetions
Easy
Placement
00:45:520(2) make a blanket like this? fix

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:29:827(4,5,1)　the spinner would start at 00:30:289, it feels much imo fix..

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:08:135(1) add finish at head? other diffs already did. oh okay><

Normal
Placement
00:06:058(3) x:256 seems better same as (1) fix
00:20:366(3) like this? fix

SPOILER

00:35:597(3) like this? it will be nice yea

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:32:366(1,2) slider instead here? fix

SPOILER

00:57:289(2) to fit to vocal, maybe reverse slider seems nice. e.g) really :3

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:30:058(1) add finish at head? okay

Hard
feel much AR7 imo but current AR is fine. oh...okay...chage :l
Placement
00:47:597(7) not overlapped with (5)'s end seems nice fix

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:38:366(3,4,5) sounds weird, so maybe like this? no ><

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:26:597(1) add finish and remove whistle better like other diffs. fix
00:30:058(1) add finish at head? okay

overall fine this map, good luck & star!

scanter wrote:

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:06:058 (3) - Delete Clap? no><
00:07:674 (4) - Add Clap? no><
00:30:751 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/562207 change but not ur say.
00:53:597 (2) - Delete Whistle & Add Clap noc

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:07:212 (5) - This Clap look outstanding. how about change different sound? fix
00:14:597 (5) - ^ fix

[Hard]

SPOILER

Nice !

Beatmap & Song is nice! Good luck for rank (* ･◡･​)

thank you all for modding~

1. 00:15:981 (2) - move to x:280 y:144 (line up straight)
2. 00:29:827 (4) - move 1 grid to the right

1. 00:30:981 (2) - add finish at the end of slider
2. 01:02:597 (5) - curve around (4) more neatly ><
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:02:828 (6) - add clap on reverse
2. 00:10:904 (10) - add clap on end (it just sounds a little "empty" right now)
3. 00:37:558 (7) - one grid to the left (so it looks straight)
4. 00:56:943 (4) - one grid up
5. 00:59:366 (4) - clap?
6. 01:07:212 (1) - remove finish, and use whistle instead (finish sounds too loud here..)

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hallowww ~
You requested in-game ~

[General]
- Enable epilepsy warning.
- End kiai time at 00:48:635 and start another one at 00:48:751 ? owo okay~


[Storyboard]
- Light.png should be in the SB folder ~ owo (After you do this, you have to go into the .osb and change light.png to SB/Light.png) changed
- I think you should make the snow appear at the beginning of the vocal or at 00:08:135
01:01:674 - 01:09:058 is left blank. ??
- Scale Light -2.png a bit closer ~ fix


[Easy]
00:30:289 (1) - You should leave some space between spinner and then next object, so shorten this spinner to 00:32:597
or, you can remove 00:33:520 (1) i dele (1)


[Normal]
- There are no claps in the beginning like the easy and hard diff ;w; fix ;w;


[Hard]
01:07:904 (3) - Last point at x:320 y:136 fix o.o


Very nice map and storyboard ~
Good luck with rank and star! >w<

meiikyuu wrote:

from modding queue ~ <3

Easy

1. 00:15:981 (2) - move to x:280 y:144 (line up straight) ok
2. 00:29:827 (4) - move 1 grid to the right ok

Normal

1. 00:30:981 (2) - add finish at the end of slider okay
2. 01:02:597 (5) - curve around (4) more neatly >< fix
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:02:828 (6) - add clap on reverse fix
2. 00:10:904 (10) - add clap on end (it just sounds a little "empty" right now) no ><
3. 00:37:558 (7) - one grid to the left (so it looks straight) fix
4. 00:56:943 (4) - one grid up fix
5. 00:59:366 (4) - clap? okayy
6. 01:07:212 (1) - remove finish, and use whistle instead (finish sounds too loud here..) oh yes><

good luck <3

cheesiest wrote:

[General]
The circles near the end in the SB only fits on hard. Perhaps you can make it difficuly-specific for Hard and delete the circles in the SB in Normal and Easy.

I only have a mod for Hard, since I believe the other difficulties are perfect.

[Hard]

00:09:289 (3) - For purpose of aesthetics, make it blanket (1).
Start: 300, 116
Middle: 260, 136
End: 240, 168
You'll probably have to move 00:09:751 (4) .

00:39:058 (4) - Make it blanket (3) better.
Start: 356, 224
Middle: 404, 188
End: 462, 176
Then move 00:39:520 (1) or use what I have below:
Start: 500, 164 Middle: 504, 124 End: 488, 76


00:40:904 (7) - Make it blanket 00:40:443 (5) better.
Start: 296, 220
Middle: 260, 200
End: 244, 160
After doing that, you'd probably have to make 00:41:366 (1) blanket 00:40:904 (7) .
Start: 256, 88 Middle: 180, 120 End: 176, 204
And then after doing that you'll probably have to move 00:42:058 (2) .

01:07:904 (3) - Make it blanket (2) better.
Start: 272, 200
Middle: 304, 176
End: 320, 136

These are mostly just aesthetic.

01:10:683 (5) - Snap to 1/16th before the beat ( 01:10:741 ), make it a circle.

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI

[General]

I think diff spread is not good between Normal and Hard. Normal and Hard's sv interval is 0.6. that's bad. IMO I think it's okay..
did you cut your mp3's earlier part ? consider use intact mp3 file no,i didn't cut~
why don't you change source to 'WORKING!!' nvm
offset +11 (762) I think it's fine now o.o

[Easy]

reduce Difficulties yourself. 3 Difficulties so hard for Easy players 2.5star for easy is okay i think..
00:13:904 (4) - adjust this slider to more pretty like before fix
00:33:981 (1) - ^ fix
I like your map thank you :3!

[Normal]

00:35:597 (3) - try use round slider instead sharp. just suggestion no change
00:57:981 (3) - why don't you highlight slider's point like this? fix some

[Hard]

00:09:520 - volume too low. increase pls okay..
00:28:904 (3) - add Clap. forgot add Clap? D: or willfully? fix~
00:35:827 (1) - move up 1 grid for cover round with 00:35:827 - . - i recommend adjust this note to balance i think it's okay..but fix too ;3
00:50:597 (1) - stuff notes in this section instead use long slider and 00:51:289 - remove Whistle okay
01:11:335 (1) - add Whistle? I think use whistle to highlight this spinner for piano melody ok

good maps :3

yurunneram wrote:

Lol I dunno if this map need modding but I would like to mod it (plus I'm a yanlu fan >w<) Really good storyboard OwO I like it a lot
lol thank you ww
Easy
01:01:212 (2) - Add finish? umm..no need to i think

Normal
01:00:751 (2) - Why not cut the slider into half and make a repeat? cuz same as(3)
00:26:135 - add note? no change but keep o.o

Hard
00:58:904 (3) - Distance it?
01:03:520 (3) - This isn't very nice. Find something with more rhythm.
00:21:520 (7) - Make Parallel to 00:20:827 (6)
00:27:981 (7,8,9) - I would choose not to put a triple here. Maybe delete the 8 and re position?
no change
nya, sry if not much didn't hv much time ^^ gd luck for the rank it's a really nice map~

yurunneram wrote:

Ne, Yanlu. Which anime did u get the story board pics from (the two neko girls)

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, yanlu

My mod from your request in pm forum

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Add "(TV Size)" in title name like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72805

Easy

1. 00:13:443 (3,4,5) - Make to this picture and code. It will play to more smoothly.
   
   SPOILER

   

   120,236,13443,1,2,0:0:0
   44,264,13904,2,0,P|84:308|144:312,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   220,292,15058,1,2,0:0:0

2. 00:33:981 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
   
   Comment: Nice diff. I can't find the problem more than this.

Normal

1. 00:26:135 - Add circle here.
2. 00:38:827 (2) - Add clap in slider end.
3. 00:41:135 (3,4) - Slider of 00:39:289 (3) is conceal them. You should avoid overlapping of them.
   
   Comment: Nice diff as well.

Hard

1. 00:02:597 (2) - Move to down 3 grids.
2. 00:17:135 (4,5) - If you want to make it more beautiful, make to this picture and code.
   
   SPOILER

   

   332,92,17135,1,0,0:0:0
   252,84,17366,2,0,P|220:112|208:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:18:289 (7) - The sound on slider end is too low. May increase volume about 40~45% or remove a green line in 00:18:635.
4. 00:39:058 (4) - It's weird when I listen rhythm of notes. You should end the slider at 00:39:289 to following the rhythm.
5. 01:03:520 (3) - Ctrl+G. It will be able to more smoothly.
6. 01:09:657 (2,3,4) - Spacing are too far.
7. 01:10:741 (5) - Unsnapped slider. Please resnap it, and resnap a green line sections.
8. 01:10:881 - Resnap a green line sections.
   
   Comment: Some notes may weird for me, and I see some notes in before end of the song part are unsnapped, too. So I think that this diff should more work.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

stevemin wrote:

hello~
(m4m)
i am a newb mapper and modder so feel free to just ignore me~

[Easy]
00:21:289 (3) - clap, sounds better
00:46:674 (3) - finish
00:47:597 (4) - finish, its in the music
really nothing to fix~ perfect~

[Normal]
00:28:443 - maybe this slider looks better
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/248/56736203.png/
00:33:520 (3) - maybe clap here? oops miss
nothing to fix here too...

[Hard]
00:10:212 (6) - the triple here is too much, change like this
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/841/49624064.png/
00:48:751 (1) - this is a minor thing but how about rotating this slider more anti clockwise so the curve flows smoothly~
01:01:443 (4) - nc
01:02:135 (5) - "
01:05:827 (4) - "

So well made and awesome story boarding star~

1. Put 藤田咲 as Artist?

1. Uhm, fine ><

1. 00:25:212 (6) - Hold shift while placing this, so it's directly underneath (5)?
2. 00:28:443 (4) - Endpoint 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
3. 00:43:212 (1) - Place this somewhere else? With both the slider not fading completely out, and the hitburst from (5), this can be a bit hard to read for beginners.

1. 00:23:827 (3) - Move to 204;228, and then move the endpoint 3 gridlvl4 up.
2. 01:03:520 (3) - Make a heart-shape? To go with the Storyboard
   

   256,224,63520,2,0,P|283:155|415:205|383:18|301:32|256:64|256:64|210:32|128:18|96:205|

3. 01:10:776 (5) - Put in the center?

CXu wrote:

Hi yanlu

Randomly modding from here.

Please take anything I say as a suggestion, and feel free to ignore my mod post~

[General]

1. Put 藤田咲 as Artist?

[Easy]

1. Uhm, fine ><

[Normal]

1. 00:25:212 (6) - Hold shift while placing this, so it's directly underneath (5)?
2. 00:28:443 (4) - Endpoint 1 gridlvl4 to the right.
3. 00:43:212 (1) - Place this somewhere else? With both the slider not fading completely out, and the hitburst from (5), this can be a bit hard to read for beginners.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:827 (3) - Move to 204;228, and then move the endpoint 3 gridlvl4 up.
2. 01:03:520 (3) - Make a heart-shape? To go with the Storyboard
   

   256,224,63520,2,0,P|283:155|415:205|383:18|301:32|256:64|256:64|210:32|128:18|96:205|

   eh...it' cann't work orz
3. 01:10:776 (5) - Put in the center?

That's all~ Good luck!

256,216,63520,6,0,P|274:133|388:195|400:59|326:-1|256:61|256:61|186:-1|109:63|130:182|232:153|235:187,1,560,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

General

SB Wise
You have two osb files, delete one! ahhh~dele ><
Light -2.png should be 640x480, once you have this fix the scale coding to 1 fix~
The BLACK.png should be 640x480, once you have this fix the scale as well to 1 fix too~
lyrics 1.png is cut off, fix this! okay,I make all lyrics sb change again now>~<
http://puu.sh/1XVo0
sb1 should start at 00:00:751 - with the music fix
Make sure the pictures go over the edges!
The Light -2.png effect should end here 01:11:335 - , its too much fix lol
The transition between sb7 and sb8 isnt good, fix this too fix now~

Hard

00:05:135 (2,3) - Even for symmetry, should be consistent spacing it's okay i nc next jump..
00:07:212 (8,1) - ^ ^
00:14:135 (5,6,9) - ^, jump feels nonsense
00:18:289 (7,8) - Why ? Keep the spacing consistent please want to keep that..i think it's okay to readable and playable ;O00:23:827 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:28:212 (9,1) - ^ ^
00:29:135 (4,5) - ^ Really needed? ^
00:36:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the star pattern so it has similar spacing and not changing, or better just make it symmetric fix..it's star already imo..
00:49:905 (4,1) - Spacing fix
00:57:058 (5,1) - this jump feels so forced, dont make this i'll think about..
00:58:443 (2,3,4) - You stack 2 and 3 but 4 is single, why dont you make a triangle pattern i think it's okay and fit with vocal ><
01:10:776 (5) - Theres no matchable sound to it, just add a single circle fix><!


Only things to fix, not more on Easy or Normal, well done and good luck

1. Maybe you want to use some fading on SB. or is it just me?

1. So many sliders that end on red tick, and then the next slider is started at white tick. afaik this could confuse new players and player who never heard this song before. Change it...
2. 00:06:058 (3) - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
3. 00:08:827 - 00:10:904 - did you stop the whistle hitsound here? Put Whistle on 00:08:827 and 00:09:751, do the same to all diffs...
4. 00:13:904 (4) - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
5. 00:19:212 (1) - whistle on the start of this slider?
6. 00:43:674 (3) - imho ugly shape, the head and tail of this slider are blocking each other... try this :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Set the hitsounds like [Easy]
2. 00:02:366 (3) - - delete the clap hitsound and put whistle on the tail of this slider?
3. 00:09:751 (3) - ^
4. 00:07:212 (5) - delete the clap and put whistle
5. 00:18:404 (7) - just in case if you want better flow..
   
   SPOILER

   

1. set the hitsound like [Easy]
2. 00:06:289 (4) - delete?
3. 00:09:981 (5) - ^
4. 00:10:327 (7) - ^, well the song is quite slow and calm, a stream is not good on that part
5. 00:13:443 (4,5,6,7) - make it like this :
   
   much better
6. 00:21:289 - an object here is useless, especially that you silence it, try this :
   
   don't forget to delete the inheriting sections..
7. 00:31:904 (6,1,2,3) - try this :
   
8. 00:38:597 - 00:38:712 - delete these inheriting sections, it's useless imo
9. 00:39:520 (1,5) - delete finish on these slider
10. 00:39:058 (4) - put finish in the end of this slider, and put finish in the start of 00:40:904 (7)
11. there's also other wrong placement of soft finish, fix it..

BounceBabe wrote:

Much better improvment on SB, but you still didnt fix the "Light -2.png" Scale, also I'm deliberate...i want it not too much><!

00:18:289 (7,8) - Why ? Keep the spacing consistent please want to keep that..i think it's okay to readable and playable ;O
00:23:827 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:28:212 (9,1) - ^ ^
00:36:520 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the star pattern so it has similar spacing and not changing, or better just make it symmetric fix..it's star already imo..
00:58:443 (2,3,4) - You stack 2 and 3 but 4 is single, why dont you make a triangle pattern i think it's okay and fit with vocal ><

Really advise you to fix these please! The spacing is something im strict on unless its really suiting

rEdo wrote:

[// Timing check]
751, 130.00 BPM
67904, 120.00 BPM
69137, 110.00 BPM

I guess that should work a lot better.
i think it's fine now >_<

[Easy]
00:19:212 (1) - add a whistle at its beginning fix
00:53:597 (2) - that whistle sounds pretty random... consider deleting it. okay

also, maybe map it until the end? t's a waste when it's not mapped! i want it....keep ;w;

[Normal]
00:26:135 (7) - new combo here fix
00:29:597 (5) - ^ fix

you should map it until the end as well! ;w;

[Hard]
00:08:135 (1) - the finish on its beginning is way too loud, you should decrease the volume on its timing section to 20%, like in previous difficulties. fix
00:18:981 (8) - you should try to set new combos on the beginning of patterns like this one. it doesn't look cool when you've got extra two circles from the previous pattern in the wrong combo >< fix
00:26:827 (2) - new combo here, instead of current (1). you shouldn't stick to the white lines in setting up the combos, they are supposed to help you only~ fix
00:31:904 (6) - here too, I think it looks a lot better when the new combo would start on that note instead of your current (1). no
00:33:058 (4,5,6,1) - something like that fits the music a lot better~ okay ><much better
00:37:443 (6) - new combo fix
00:40:904 (7) - a pattern like this might play a lot better imo, the jump is on a more important moment in the song~ fix but not your way~
00:44:943 (5) - new combo fix
00:59:366 (4) - ^ ^
01:02:135 (5) - ^ ^


that's a nice map you've got there~ :3

1. Moe Cute Kawaii lovely song have NOTHING to do with song or sb. I don't think people will look for song using tag "kawaii".
2. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think.
3. I can clearly hear 1/2 ticks, so, try to use Slider Tick Rate 2. It will fit here better, imo.
4. clap hitsounds sometimes feels weird.

1. 00:00:751 - Check SB load here. According to osu! editor it is above recommended SB load (x5.00). Make sure that you have reasons to break this guideline and use higher SB load :<
2. 00:08:135 - same as above. Try to reduce SB load, please!

1. Nazi - I'd recommend you to use distance spacing x1.1, so circles will not touch each other and it will look the way better. (In other words, it will make your patterns neater
2. 00:02:366 (2,1) - this kind of overlap (overlap with previous slider's hitburst) will confuse some beginners. example (00:05:597 (2) - is stacked with 00:02:366 (2) - )
3. 00:21:289 (3) - for calm song and Easy diff this slider is TOO short. It will stress beginners, I STRONGLY recommend you to avoid using 1/2 sliders here.
4. 00:37:674 (1,2) - why don't you re-arrange this part a bit to follow vocals closer? Just swap (2) and (3) this way
5. 00:43:674 (3) - nazi - why don't you create better (softer) shape for this slider? Curent one may confuse some beginners and it doesn't look good, imo.
6. 00:54:981 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to follow Storyboard and music? Current combo placement here feels weird.

1. 00:09:751 (3) - uh.. It seems like you can follow vocals closer and make pattern more consistent. Make slider end at 00:10:212 - and put circle at 00:10:443 - you did the same with 00:13:904 (4,5), so it's ok to do it here as well.
2. 00:17:135 - I'm sure you've missed some vocals here. It really feels wrong to me without circle here.
3. 00:43:674 (2,3) - how about removing (3) and adding repeat to 00:43:674 (2) - it will follow vocals better.example (personally, I feel like vocals here should end at 00:44:597 - that's why I want you to end slider here)
4. 00:54:981 (5)/00:56:597 (1) - - same as Easy? Swap new combos to follow vocals and storyboard? It feels weird the way it is now, imo.
5. 00:58:443 - don't you feel like this beat sould have louder slider-tick? It feels REALLY loud, simple slider-tick is not enough here, make it louder, please!
6. 01:02:135 (4) - New combo for vocals and storyboard? I'd place NC here, to be honest.

1. Song is calm, but your patterns are not calm. Use AR8 to make them easier to read. It will fit with your slider velocity better, too!
2. 00:39:058 (6) - end it 1/2 earlier, please! There's no ANY beat at 00:39:404.
3. 00:46:674 (7) - nazi - it feels like NC here will fit good enough. It will make your comboing more consistent + long combos don't look good.
4. 01:10:916 - ultimate-nazi - pointless green line, remove it, please!

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi~ Map finally got anime-related SB and BG. Now I'm happy to mod it. I'll grave my version of this song as soon as possible, ofc. nooo you don't have to! D:

[General]

1. Moe Cute Kawaii lovely song have NOTHING to do with song or sb. I don't think people will look for song using tag "kawaii". lol I know...okay dele them ;_; but i want lovely song keep seems it really is ;D
2. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think. A1-pictures and wagnaria?? i want to know why..
3. I can clearly hear 1/2 ticks, so, try to use Slider Tick Rate 2. It will fit here better, imo. okay! silder tick rate 2 now~
4. clap hitsounds sometimes feels weird.

[Storyboard]

1. 00:00:751 - Check SB load here. According to osu! editor it is above recommended SB load (x5.00). Make sure that you have reasons to break this guideline and use higher SB load :< fix :<
2. 00:08:135 - same as above. Try to reduce SB load, please! fix too>_<!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pretty nice map, good luck.

yanlu wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi~ Map finally got anime-related SB and BG. Now I'm happy to mod it. I'll grave my version of this song as soon as possible, ofc. nooo you don't have to! D: i want to

[General]

1. If you remove tags as I suggested above, you need new ones. A1-pictures and wagnaria will be ok, I think. A1-pictures and wagnaria?? i want to know why.. that anime is created by A1-pictures. and wagnaria is a name of a cafe where they work.. go and watch this anime, you'll like it

-Bakari- wrote:

[Easy]

1. Nazi - I'd recommend you to use distance spacing x1.1, so circles will not touch each other and it will look the way better. (In other words, it will make your patterns neater it's okay now >.<...
2. 00:02:366 (2,1) - this kind of overlap (overlap with previous slider's hitburst) will confuse some beginners. example (00:05:597 (2) - is stacked with 00:02:366 (2) - ) fix~
3. 00:21:289 (3) - for calm song and Easy diff this slider is TOO short. It will stress beginners, I STRONGLY recommend you to avoid using 1/2 sliders here. fix
4. 00:37:674 (1,2) - why don't you re-arrange this part a bit to follow vocals closer? Just swap (2) and (3) this way fix
5. 00:43:674 (3) - nazi - why don't you create better (softer) shape for this slider? Curent one may confuse some beginners and it doesn't look good, imo. i want it..keep
6. 00:54:981 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to follow Storyboard and music? Current combo placement here feels weird. fix

[Normal]

1. 00:09:751 (3) - uh.. It seems like you can follow vocals closer and make pattern more consistent. Make slider end at 00:10:212 - and put circle at 00:10:443 - you did the same with 00:13:904 (4,5), so it's ok to do it here as well. no..it's consistent with 00:01:904 (2,3) -
2. 00:17:135 - I'm sure you've missed some vocals here. It really feels wrong to me without circle here. fix but change to slider
3. 00:43:674 (2,3) - how about removing (3) and adding repeat to 00:43:674 (2) - it will follow vocals better.example (personally, I feel like vocals here should end at 00:44:597 - that's why I want you to end slider here) fix and snap too.
4. 00:54:981 (5)/00:56:597 (1) - - same as Easy? Swap new combos to follow vocals and storyboard? It feels weird the way it is now, imo. fix
5. 00:58:443 - don't you feel like this beat sould have louder slider-tick? It feels REALLY loud, simple slider-tick is not enough here, make it louder, please! okay"
6. 01:02:135 (4) - New combo for vocals and storyboard? I'd place NC here, to be honest. fix

[Hard]

1. Song is calm, but your patterns are not calm. Use AR8 to make them easier to read. It will fit with your slider velocity better, too! okay
2. 00:39:058 (6) - end it 1/2 earlier, please! There's no ANY beat at 00:39:404. okay..
3. 00:46:674 (7) - nazi - it feels like NC here will fit good enough. It will make your comboing more consistent + long combos don't look good. fix
4. 01:10:916 - ultimate-nazi - pointless green line, remove it, please! fix too

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pretty nice map, good luck.

No_Gu wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[General/All diffs]
好像缺个black.png 欸..有阿"
我觉得可以找custom clap..因为这首我觉得真的不适合默认的 okay
00:40:212这边出来这张在16:9里看是这样的。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615900 ..看了下 00:26:597 这边这张也是。。改完版我就没做过SB了所以hhh 我不知道怎麼解決寬屏問題;w;
为啥EN不做完
hhh我原来开过这首
然后这首不是伊波的吗！..其實我沒看過..不知道lol

[Easy]
其实不用tick调音的话我觉得tick1在easy里够够的
00:41:366 (1) - 把5包住? 已修改

[Normal]
00:40:674 (2,3) - 不得不说这边好像被挡的挺厉害 恩...現在應該好一點了

[Hard]
00:13:212 (3,4) - 我觉得这边还是跟前面弄个三角形比较好。不过个人习惯问题 好吧 改了
我觉得可以一条长白线1NC.或者看看超过10的comboNC一下。。 都沒有超過10combo呀

整体还不错。。感觉好像remap过？。。原来看好像没这么整齐。EN补全了我叫pokie来看看

Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello yanlu! A further modding here:

　General

1. Is that adding a tag for lovely song necessary? If not, I'd recommend to remove that. There's no need to have a customized tag for yourself. okay ;(
2. Timing is totally off'd on 01:07:903 - . Please apply rEdo's timing. And remind that don't forget a resnap after changes. fix
   

   rEdo wrote:

   751, 130.00 BPM
   67904, 120.00 BPM
   69137, 110.00 BPM

3. Pretty weird that you only have a silenced sliderslide for Normal set, please consider adding one for Soft set too. add

　Storyboard

1. Storyboard部份用中文說明好了(汗
2. 優化(?)了一下代碼… http://puu.sh/24Vwa 用這個代替現有的osb, SB Load應該不會有超過5.00的地方了… (替代後請刪除BLACK.png) 恩~非常感謝!
3. 製作Storyboard時請避免使用Black覆蓋無需使用的背景, 這樣會佔用2.00的SB Load.
   
   • - 在背景layer加一條這樣的代碼可以去掉背景, 需要使用到背景的時候再另外加進去

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0

:OO (還是不會用囧"..

1. 唔…為何Light -2.png的代碼裡會有一行Rotate效果? 建議刪除 (目前使用Rotate會導致在寬屏的位置也顯示出storyboard元件…)
2. 00:59:827 - 這裡明明是同一句歌詞, 但卻fade out了 orz …將lyrics 12.png分成will reveal our / golden day 兩張圖? 恩..其實是故意的orz

　Easy

1. Slider tick rate 1 should be enough for Easy difficulty.
   00:03:981 (3,1) - Adding a whistle on downbeat wasn't nice, please swap the whistle just like how you did on 00:07:674 (4,1) -
   00:09:751 (3) - (slider's head) To keep the consistency with 00:02:366 (2) - and 00:06:058 (3) - , add a whistle here?
   00:11:366 - Consider adding a circle/slider with whistle, instead of leave it blank?
   
   
   01:03:520 (1) - I-I tried to shape this but it took over 15 minutes Dx
   
   SPOILER

   

266,187,63520,6,4,P|311:164|331:140|360:95|342:40|288:36|254:75|254:75|224:36|171:40|150:100|189:147|197:149,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Normal

• 00:28:443 (5) - For the slider's end, seems there's no point for ending this slider at such timing point. Please extend it by 1/2 beat (00:29:366 - )
  01:03:520 (1) - Wha- again?! Well thanks god that we've a scale tool.
  
  SPOILER

  

265,187,63520,6,4,P|305:166|323:145|349:104|333:55|284:51|254:86|254:86|227:51|179:55|160:109|195:151|202:153,1,350,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Hard

• 00:27:981 (6,7,8) - If you ever wanted to add triples here, please don't leave 00:27:404 (4) - blank.
  00:31:674 (5) - Just to let you know that rhythms aren't even according with the music, I could say it's totally off'd here...Please use this rhythm instead of the current one.
  
  00:35:827 (1) - If you're trying to follow vocal, please move this slider to 00:35:597 - . (I've fixed the pattern for you until 00:38:135 (4) - )

320,300,35597,6,0,P|304:264|328:228|328:228|356:192|340:148,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
213,53,36289,1,8,0:0:0
256,176,36520,1,0,0:0:0
293,51,36751,1,0,0:0:0
189,129,36981,1,0,0:0:0
319,127,37212,1,8,0:0:0
257,176,37443,5,0,0:0:0
257,208,37558,1,0,0:0:0
253,240,37674,2,0,P|245:284|257:316,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,337,38135,1,8,0:0:0

• 00:39:520 (1) - Swap the whistle to 00:39:058 (6) - 's slider's end.
  00:45:751 (5,1,3) - (slider's head) Kind of ridiculous that you've added plenty soft/normal finishs through the chorus part, but missing them here. Please add finishs to both slider's head properly.
  00:49:905 (4) - Same suggestion with 00:31:674 (fixed until 00:51:751 - )

424,236,49904,2,0,P|460:256|498:256,1,80
316,244,50366,6,0,P|240:192|172:192,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,296,51058,1,2,0:0:0
76,212,51289,1,2,0:0:0
48,236,51404,1,0,0:0:0
28,268,51520,1,2,0:0:0
64,349,51751,1,0,0:0:0

• 00:53:135 (3) - ^ (fixed until 00:54:058 (1) - )

344,296,53135,2,0,P|328:236|348:184,1,120
372,160,53597,2,0,P|396:128|400:88,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
343,27,54058,6,0,P|308:55|314:101|314:101|269:178,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fix =A=
(愛心修的好漂亮喔...我都拉的不好看;w;

That's all, good luck

neonat wrote:

Minor suggestions.

Hard

00:28:327 - add a note (you can hear in the background) no..
00:33:635 - add a note (I think it would be nicer rather than just starting when the vocals do) ^
00:39:058 (6,1) - try this rhythm? (emphasizes 00:39:289 -) better but i have another way..fix now~

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Love the song I love it too

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! This is M4M from your queue. I hope you find my mod helpful, but i'm a newbie mapper and still learning D: Take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
01:03:520 (1)- I think the heart shape could be improved how..i think it's good enough now :/

[Normal]
00:27:289 - add note nop..it'll be harder
00:35:366 - ^
01:00:520 - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Heart shape could be improved same as easy :/

[Hard]
00:02:135 (4,5) - Consider switching these two to fit better with the music hmm..it's fine i think
00:10:442 (7,8) - move to the next white tick ..? I can't understand your mean =A=
0:26:597 (10)- NC, remove NC from 00:26:827 (1) change nc before like now..i think no to change again ><
01:08:654 - add note no..

Goodluck on your maapppp

tony8128 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod
The music is great~ And I like your mapping style

[SB]
The first picture seems to be appearing suddenly from pitch black. Consider changing to some fade-in effect.

[Easy]
01:10:227 (2) - This clap seems a bit strange... Change it to whistle and remove the whistle on the end seems better.
01:03:520 (1) - You can try this: First make a symmetry pattern of a heart with lower grid level, without considering the length. Then use "Scale by..." in the "Edit" menu to adjust its length, using the largest possible number. The shape will look better that way.

Btw, b/178353 in this map on Nogard diff, at 03:27:404 there is a good example of heart-shaped slider. You can take that as a reference.

[Normal]
00:02:366 (3) - The clap on the end is a bit inconsistent to the music... How about changing to whistle?
00:07:212 (5) - ^
00:14:597 (5) - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Same as Easy


[Hard]
OD 6? Maybe +1 would be better... (I SSed on the first try)
Flows are great.

00:10:904 (10) - Move the whistle to the beginning (optional)
00:14:135 (5) - Add a clap here
00:14:597 (8) - Remove this clap (optional)
00:18:289 (3) - Add a whistle on the beginning
01:10:227 (4) - Maybe adding a whistle sounds better...

Frostmourne wrote:

ok

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General
sorry for inconvenience
for the only 1st offset (751) , change it to 756(+5) since it's a bit early , don't need to touch the other offsets
don't forget to resnap all green lines, preview time,SB and notes
I'm sorry for inconvenience really ;_;

Easy
00:54:981 (1) - remove this NC and add NC here instead 00:56:135 (5) - , it makes sense better since it follows the phrase in the song

Normal
00:32:366 (1) - add clap for the head of this slider too , as you hear , it sounds the exactly same as the tail of this slider so it will work correspondingly better too
00:33:058 (2) - this finish is weird , you shouldn't let the pre-part (a part before the kiai) be the more important part than kiai part
you should emphasis the kiai part best , so what I suggest is you should lower volume this note to 30% or lower than this
so the finish at 00:33:981 (1) - will stand out and fit the song perfectly

Hard
I find AR7 play better , the thing is the way you map , you didn't put jumps everywhere + the song itself is quite calm. so AR7 fits the song much better
00:32:139 (1) - this new combo is weird , when players play on this part, they might feel a bit astonished (at least to me) so I suggest you remove NC here
and keep long combo like you did in other points in this diff
00:51:524 (5) - without this whistle sounds much better because it doubles with 00:51:293 (3) - and it feels strange
01:01:447 (7) - finish?
01:02:139 (1) - ^
as I heard from the music, and this is the very end of the song so adding them will fit better

let me know when you have fixed this

no kudosu (you gave me for the timing fixes before)

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from PM but sorry for late.

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• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. for SB, it is weird that sb1.jpg suddenly appear on 00:00:751 - , try to use fade to get it slowly appear ok

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:33:520 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - re finish at start, because music should start at a quite sound, add nothing would be better for music, don't you feel weird because of the finish?>~< nop:/
3. 00:08:135 (1) - same as ^, there also add nothing would be better, finish is too weird for there :/
4. 00:21:981 (4) - I think there flow isn't comfortable, try to ctrl+j, ctrl+h, ctrl+g and move to x:168 y:288, would be much smoother. If you change, remember to fix 00:22:904 (1) - distance
5. 00:54:981 (1,2) - swap NC, I feel there vocal is same as 00:40:443 (4,5,1) - , but NC is different.
6. 01:03:520 (1) - slidertick is too loud for there, why don't you make there like Hard? try to reduce volume because there is quite place
7. 01:09:404 (1) - unsnapped slider (end)

nice diff !~

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   01:03:058 -
   01:03:174 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - same as Easy, also 00:08:135 (1) - :/
3. 00:29:827 (2) - add clap to make 00:28:443 (5,1,2) - have a hierarchical sense
4. 00:33:058 (2) - this finish is too weird for music, try to use Drum-clap, I think would be very suitable xD
5. 00:40:212 (1,4) - swap NC, why don't you make NC like Easy? I think NC should on 00:41:366 (4) - because have stress or make 00:41:366 (4,5) - length same as 00:43:212 (1,2,3) - . also 00:54:981 (1,3) - like there (I also think it is still readable)
6. 00:59:827 (3,1) - swap NC, I think there vocal like 00:45:058 (1,4) - 's part
7. 01:03:520 (1) - same as Easy

good diff :3!

[Hard]

1. AR is not suitable for this diff, it feels faster a bit. try to -1, would be much better for the diff ok
   
   
2. 00:18:981 (1,3) - swap NC, stress is on 00:19:212 (3) -
3. 00:26:597 (10,1) - same as ^, because I feel stress is on 00:26:597 (10) -
4. 00:31:904 (6,1) - I think 00:32:135 (1) -'s start dosen't follow anything with music, only could follow approachcircle to hit, and weird rhythm for me, try this rhythm want to keep ;w;
5. 00:33:058 (4) - same as Normal
6. 00:33:751 (1,3) - swap NC, because 00:33:981 (3) - have a stress or kiai time's start-time
7. 00:51:289 (3) - re whistle, because too many soft-finish sound make noisy , and 00:51:981 (7) - add whistle at start to make a new rhythm with 00:51:058 (2,3,5) -
8. 00:58:674 - add a note, I think would be better for rhythm or more readable
9. 01:07:904 (3) - I feel weird on 01:08:154 - , can't hear anything to follow, try this

smooth SV for this diff ~ good ! only AR is a bit fast

good luck for rank~! lulu >w<!
star~

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck
Offset 67904 (01:07:904 (3) - this note in Hard) change to 67909 , please resnap all notes in between 01:07:909 to 01:09:409 interval as well
(also snap something before 67909 such as 01:07:217 (2) - in Easy diff too

Easy
01:01:217 (2) - shorten this slider end at 01:01:448 (1/2 back) because there is no music supporting at the next 1/2 beat
also it's not too hard for the beginner I believe

Normal
00:56:602 (4) - NC
00:57:986 (1) - remove NC
00:59:832 (5) - NC
01:02:140 (1) - remove NC
^ these are for better look and you can see that it makes sense more than before (the new NC will follow the new phrase accordingly)

no kd

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Flash.png",320,240
 F,0,7679,8140,0,1
 M,0,8025,,320,240
 S,0,8025,,1.343358
 F,0,8140,8371,1,0

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:294 (3) - I would shorten this by half a beat to match the piano and preserve the 1 beat between clicks. Otherwise, you would have to change 4 so that it is not half a beat's distance from this end nop

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
00:10:332 (7) - why the random note in the middle? Nothing in the music calls for it. oh..dele
00:14:486 (7) - ^ ^
00:27:409 (5,8) - ^ having random extra notes in your song isn't usually a good mapping practice. no dele this >_<