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Mr.T - xenon

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Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Light]

00:16:84 (3) - New combo.
01:20:61 (3) - Remove new combo.
01:22:13 (5) - ^
01:23:65 (x) - Add a slider from 01:23:654 to 01:24:413.
01:24:79 (x) - Add a note with clap here.


[Standard]

The diff is a bit too repetitive. You use the pattern of 00:10:74 (1,2,3,4,5) really much :(.

00:07:70 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:09:22 (1) - ^
00:13:78 (1) - ^
00:15:29 (1) - ^
00:19:85 (1) - ^
00:21:37 (1) - ^
00:25:93 (1) - ^
00:27:45 (1) - ^
Remove the new combo's like that ^ in the whole diff.


[Kirby's Challenge]

Most of the jumps are unintuitive imo.

00:30:29 (BREAK) - A bit long break, 11 seconds. Map something in it?


Nice map, I don't really like [Kirby's Challenge] this time, normally i really like his diff's but this time it's too overmapped and too many unintuitive jumps imo.
Starred *
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
[yeahyeahyeahhh]
00:53:65 (5,8) - lol At first time, I thought these circles were slider.
01:13:30 (3) - Extend 1/4 beat please
01:20:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Timing is not good..... Especially (1). Compare with 01:19:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and remap this.
yeahyeahyeahhh
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Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh

minyeob wrote:

[yeahyeahyeahhh]
00:53:65 (5,8) - lol At first time, I thought these circles were slider.
01:13:30 (3) - Extend 1/4 beat please
01:20:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Timing is not good..... Especially (1). Compare with 01:19:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and remap this.
Remapped the section at 01:19:09.... I think Xgor took care of the other two?

Re-up

Download: Mr.T - xenon (Xgor) [yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy].osu
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
starred
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Love it~

[light]
Great~

[standard]
Why slider tick rate higher than light?
Nothing wrong~I love the hitsound~boopaboopa~

[yeahyeahyeahhh's heavy]
Slider velocity is a little bit heavy...
00:15:11(x)-one circle here?
01:22:89(3)-spacing?x__x

[kirby's challenge]
00:08:46(4)-reverse it for the spacing?
00:11:50(4)-^
00:55:08(3,4)-change the place of 3,4 for the spacing?
00:55:84(3,4)-^ and so as ^ after this?
01:11:31(4)-put it right at the end of 1?

This diff is cool~:)


Star~
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Xgor
:D
SPOILER

You will understand why i used a spoilerbox when you click it. :P

Lybydose
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Kirby's Challenge:

Please decrease the circle size by one tick and/or increase the overall difficulty by one tick so it's possible to tell what the hell is going on.

Reinsert the break.

Otherwise, awesome.

Heavy:

Reinsert the break

Standard:

Might want to increase the circle size by one tick to make this difficulty easier.

00:34:28 (3,4,5) - These circles are very high up due to stacking, and they intersect with the life bar a bit (especially if you increase circle size)
00:53:27 (3) - This slider moves off the grid. You may want to move it more to the right, which means you'd have to move the 2 as well. Look at the attachment for my suggestion.

SPOILER

Light:

Reinsert the break
00:06:97 (2) - Circle is a bit high and might make it hard for new players to see the approach circle correctly.
01:23:65 (1) - This spinner might be a bit short for easy.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Light]
lol every note in this stepchart is down.
01:06:94 (1,2,3) - Hitsound the end of the sliders
01:13:02 (1,2,3) - ^

[Standard]
Suggestion : Use the clap as a slider tick?
00:59:35 (5) - Remove clap on the beginning and 2nd repeat
01:11:50 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider or a finish

[Challenge]
00:08:46 (4) - Hitsound the end of the slider
00:11:50 (4) - ^
00:55:17 (4) - Add a clap
00:55:93 (4) - ^
00:58:21 (4) - ^
00:58:97 (4) - ^
01:01:24 (4) - ^
01:02:00 (4) - ^
01:04:28 (4) - ^
01:05:04 (4) - ^
01:11:12 (3) - ^
01:17:19 (3) - ^
01:24:69 (1) - Add a finish?

[Heavy]
00:12:26 (1) - Add a Finish?
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Mafiamaster
Resnap your notes in light :P

Edit: Looked through everything again. Didn't see anything wrong~
Nice job~ I like the health bar!
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
My first guest <3

[Light]
00:06:21 (1) ~ 00:23:68 (5) - Resnap these notes plz

Wow, a nice easy map. I want to learn how to map like this really.

[Standard]
I really see nothing from this diff. Nice job

[Kirby's Challenge]
00:21:18 (3) - kinda hard to read (I might be the only one)
00:27:26 (3) - ^

The jumps are kinda random, but I think this is playable. Unlease I can pass this :P

[yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy]

I guess yeah's diff is meant to be difficulty [Hard]?
I don't know how to fix it, but we gotta let people know that Kirby's Challenge is the hardest.
Or Xgor can make a new difficulty. I actually want to play Xgor's hard or insane too :)

Overrall, nice song and a nice SB. A fun map to play :)
Nice job and here is your star
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor

bmin11 wrote:

I guess yeah's diff is meant to be difficulty [Hard]?
I don't know how to fix it, but we gotta let people know that Kirby's Challenge is the hardest.
Or Xgor can make a new difficulty. I actually want to play Xgor's hard or insane too :)
I fixed that problem by lowering the difficulty by one tick on Kirby's Challenge :!: :?: (wut)
Also i tried to make a Hard on this beatmap many times but failed ,and because of that i asked someone else!
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Kirby's beatmaps are always harder :P
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
antony11
153 posts
Joined August 2008
antony11
I think BPM 158.01 must be right beacuse this was tested by software.
And my offset provide you is 125. I got 0~1ms late is test mode.

Another thing is Kirby's Challenge has many jumps which have beautiful spacing, but I think they almost have uneven spacing and difficult for people to notice.

Started for you.
adam2046
1,653 posts
Joined April 2008
adam2046
I think it's more like:
BPM: 158.00
Offset: 112

A big ol' star for you.
DJPop
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DJPop
~Light~
01:23:65 (1) - move ending point 1/4 backward? it sounds better and don't make a map any harder

~Standard~
01:23:65 (1) - move ending point 1/4 backward? it sounds better and don't make a map any harder

~yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy~
00:14:73 (4,5,6) - align to the same line as (1,2,3)
00:51:75 (4) - I think you forgot to add hitclap here

~Kirby's Challenge~
I can't mod this =_="
00:08:46 (4) - reverse it (suggestion)
00:11:50 (4) - ^
01:24:13 (4,5,6,7) - too close to (3)


+Star
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
I'm confused how to do/if i should do some the suggestions and kirby never show up :(
Just so you know why i don't fix all the stuff on Kirby's Challenge!
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Light]
  1. 00:35:04 (4) - Move 1 grid to the left.
[Standard]
  1. Fine.
[yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy]
  1. Fine.
[Kirby's Challenge]
  1. I'm not touching this >.<.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Light
00:42:643 - remove the finish noise on the note right before this area, then add a note at 00:42:643 with a finish noise, then re-add the break

Standard
looks standard to me:D

yeahyeahyeah
00:28:97 (1) - add finish?
01:24:70 (4) - This note is wack yo, space it properly

Kirby's Challenge
Too much confusion
I am now confused, can't mod this diff, it will only be formed with new combo this, new combo that ?_?

Nice map, just make sure u also re-add all breaks, they seems a little off :P
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Don't see biggest mistakes, star~
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Changes made to my diff suggested above, thanks!
fartownik
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fartownik
I didn't find anything wrong... Kirby's difficulty is really funny. ~Star

(move to pending)
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Jeffro
[Standard]
00:11:69 (4) - clap here

Very nice, couldn't spot any other issue :D Love this!

Starred!
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Remapped. :<

Download: Mr.T - xenon (Xgor) [Kirby's Challenge].osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Remapped. :<
To be honest that don't fix one of the main problems that is that the break is to long.... also the changed part feels worse then the old one so i keep it for now (but i change it if to many people want this version)
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
All right. So if it's only because of the long break...I'll see what I can do there. >_>

I just thought the remapped version seems to fit more within its supposed difficulty instead of being ungodly hard here and eventually easier by the end or something.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

All right. So if it's only because of the long break...I'll see what I can do there. >_>

I just thought the remapped version seems to fit more within its supposed difficulty instead of being ungodly hard here and eventually easier by the end or something.
The thing is was that some liked it that way and that some of the new parts was easier then yyy,s heavy <,< (like 0:18:339 - 0:21:187)
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Fix the slider arrow ball.

Epic map, and Kirby's difficulty was awesome.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
O.O at the skin. Good job ! Not much of a mod that I can give ya. D:

Lol at the custom hitsounds, especially comboburst-4 & applause.

Too bad you can't make the slider arrow turn backward during U-turn. XD. Or else it would epic.

STANDARD
Superb ! I like it ! SUggestion : Increase overall difficulty by 1 ? Cause imo, this is more fun. XD

KIRBY"S CHALLENGE
I am not in position to mod this cause obviously I was a bad jumpy map player.But the break is a bit too long ?

YEAH's HEAVY
00:23:46 (4) - OMG, this is good.
SPOILER
00:36:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is really weird.I try fix it, but nothing seems weird. Seems it falls on 1/8. Idk.
01:06:75 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:83 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
LIGHT
Good !

Star cause it's good.

EDIT :
SPOILER
For STANDARD, would you consider putting whistle at parts like 00:31:44 (4,4,4) - ? It sounds better imo, but the original sounds good. Just my extra 2 cents. XD

Modded by:
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
Xgor
@JInxyjem : I tried to fix that but failed :(
@alvisto: I think the timing is fine on those parts on yyy's Heavy.
Also i asked Kirby to fix the long break 8-)
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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jericho2442
cool map and fun to play :)

star
CXu
osu! Alumni
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CXu
:)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Simple
Perfect!

Standard
00:35:04 (1) - end this slider with a finish
00:59:35 (5) - where there aren't sounds in this slider, add whistles

yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy
00:57:83 (1,3) - whistle here
01:00:87 (1,3) - ^
01:00:87 (1,3) - ^ (plus, remove finish)
01:03:90 (1,3) - ^
01:24:70 (4) - ... whistle-finish? I'm not sure...

Kirby's challenge
Nothin'wrong...

Clear mapping and an original skin: this is enough to earn another star... very well!
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Light/Standard
01:23:65 (1) - This ends in an awkward spot, I know it's on a note but it doesn't fit the beat of the song. I say either end it on the next or previous white tick

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
00:15:11 (x) - Add a beat here
00:17:67 (7) - To me it makes more sense to move this to the next blue tick instead
00:36:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole combo is really awkward to play. I know it's synced to the rhythm in the background but unless you really know the song it isn't gonna make a lot of sense to play. Could you try maybe mapping more to the beat here? Using more sliders instead might work too. (this goes for future combos like this too)

Kirby
I DON'T KNOW HOW TO MOD KIRBY INSANES AHHH

Solid map, *
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
Xgor

0_o wrote:

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
00:15:11 (x) - Add a beat here
00:17:67 (7) - To me it makes more sense to move this to the next blue tick instead
00:36:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole combo is really awkward to play. I know it's synced to the rhythm in the background but unless you really know the song it isn't gonna make a lot of sense to play. Could you try maybe mapping more to the beat here? Using more sliders instead might work too. (this goes for future combos like this too)
I let yeahyeahyeahh decide if those things are good or not :)
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
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yeahyeahyeahhh
I'm going to keep it as it is for now, I'll try mapping around it though. Could you change this please though xgor

00:45:68 (4) - Clap on repeat
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
[Light]

Clean

[Standard]

Clean

[yeahyeahyeahhh]

01:06:75 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - plays a little weird, the only way to fix this is with alot of sliders i think.

[Kirby]

i missed few notes cuz i didnt see them, probably just me xD
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
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Topic Starter
Xgor

happy30 wrote:

[yeahyeahyeahhh]
01:06:75 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - plays a little weird, the only way to fix this is with alot of sliders i think.
I like that part :o
Anyway yeahyeahyeahhh said that that he will try mapping around it.
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
pretty good map =3 Starred =)
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Lol I love how the arrows isn't going reverse at all.

Uhh..yeah I came late. Couldn't find anything sadly.
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
i'm fine with all of them

starry :)
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod, as per request :)

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

Overall, This map is well made, however, it may be an idea to minimise the use of slider reverses since the slider is an arrow. When it reverses, the image doesn't flip, which I think makes it look a little wierd. However, that's my opinion, and the map is still great. Difficulty mods, GO!

[Light]
01:23:65 (1) - I think the ending may be better if you shorten this by a beat and place a note where the slider initially ended

[Standard]
No Problems Found :)

[yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy]
No Problems Found :)

[Kirby's Challenge]
No Problems Found :) (Unless you count the fact that I'll never pas this diff....)


Starred!
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
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yeahyeahyeahhh
I won't be that active due to exams and such so change anything you feel needs changing on my diff xgor
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
All is ok except Kirby's chalenge, Nothing are seems imperfect (well, except Kirby's chalenge)

Kirby's chalengge note placement makes me go WTF. Make it little easier by changing the note's place so it's not invisible, I'm sure it helps.

3/4 diff are okay. Star!!!
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Light
SPOILER
No visible faults. Too eay, perhaps.
Standard
SPOILER
No visible faults
Yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy
SPOILER
I think the overall difficult i too hard, because notes fade-in very fast.
Kirby's Challenge
SPOILER
:o
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
Can't mod, sorry.
But definitely starred.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Kinda annoys me that the arrow doesnt reverse too on sliders.... *as some people have mentioned above*

light:
01:00:87 (1,2) - align? (the ones before it all are)
-it is a very easy map... but people always complain we need more of these..

standard:
no problems

yeahyeahyeahhh's heavy
00:36:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part (and all of them like it throughout the song sound wierd to me for some reason... I think its the hitsounds. But if you dont see a problem with it then maybe its just me :P

kirby's challenge:
wow......kirby your insane
no problems than I could see when i could keep up..

nicely done
*star*
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Nazi modding as requested:

Timing:
BPM -> Okay
Offset -> 138 (20ms off original)

Just in general, I would find a new background or one that isn't horrifically blurred if I were you. The background is important for the general presence of the map and contrary to popular belief, does determine a good portion of its overall population eventually. The background is bearable, but you could certainly find better and make the map just that bit more with substantially little effort.

[Kirby's Challenge]
Flawless, as one would expect from a BAT.

[yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy]
Not fond of the spacing on this map at all, nor the random triplets and crossover streams. Just throwing that out there.

00:16:84 (1) - Hideous slider. Revert to 2 bezier points and reform to a tilde or wave slider. What is that thing even supposed to be?
00:36:39 (1,2,3) - From here for about the next 20 seconds, snapping this to 1/3 is utterly ridiculous and if I were a BAT this would be basis to refuse the entire map for bubbling period. You don't go from 1/2 -1/4 to 1/3 1/6 on a map unless your timing is wrong. Which it isn't. No excuse. Snap this to 1/4 or 1/2.
00:45:70 (4) - Remove 1 bezier point and align slider line to a right angle to make a perfect curve
01:06:77 (1,2,3) - This again? Snap to 1/4 or 1/2. It's out of the beat entirely as it currently is.

[Standard]
Can't see anything wrong with this either. Props for nice slider construction - I squee a little when I see somebody who actually uses equal bezier point spacing for perfect curves.

[Light]
Is also perfect. Top notch job, one of the better easy difficulties I've seen in a very long time.

Worthy of a star in my eyes. As long as you fix yeah's difficulty, this will get ranked for sure.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
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Topic Starter
Xgor
The thing is that it is snapped to 1/2's and 1/4's :(
I assume that i need to redo the part i can't find a fault with X.X (Due to that it seems like yeahyeahyeahhh won't fix it....)
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
It may be a slightly different offset, though it appears to be snapped to 1/3 on my end..
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
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Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Nice DDR skin

Light-
Straightforward Easy diff, good job

Standard-
Perfect!

Yeahx3's-
The triplets with all claps were kinda loud at my end, but they're fine I guess. Aside from that, the map's okay

Kirby's-
It's like its missing a few hitsounds here and there-
SPOILER
00:08:49 (4) - You can barely hear the finish at the end, I think a clap would be better
00:11:53 (4) - ^
00:16:84 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yea, no, this part has too much hitsounds~ (whistle spam...) try removing some (Try removing 2,4,6,7's)
00:18:17 (1) to 00:21:21 (3) - the paced claps disappeared!
00:22:92 (1) - why isn't there a clap at the end of this
00:24:25 (1) to 00:28:99 (1) - ^ same thing (since it's copy and pasted)
or... just remove the claps once you started using the whistles in those sections ^
00:48:36 (2) - missing clap?
01:11:15 (3) - ... add if you wanna keep the pace I guess, but goes either way for this one
01:17:22 (3) - ^ copy+pasted
01:24:72 (1) - as far as I hear it, the combo before this is where the claps ended, so remove this clap?
I AM NOT PICKING ON YOU OR ANYTHING. -runs-

All are fairly straight forward, and it seems like you just changed the offset/bpm, all the breaks are slightly off XD
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Star ^^
Armin
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2009
Armin
-Light
00:39:631 (3) Align with 1 and 2
01:08:492 (2) Whistle at the start
01:14:568 (2) As above
01:23:682 (1) ^

-Standard
01:03:175 (reverse arrow) Clap
01:23:682 (spinner) This spinner should finish at 01:24:726

-yeah's Heavy
00:14:758 (4,5,6) Rotate this hitcircles of 11° (Ctrl+Shift+R)
00:16:846 (1) Clap at the end
01:08:777 (1) Align with (4)
01:14:093 Remove new combo
01:14:853 Add new combo
01:15:043 Remove new combo

-Kirby's Challenge
orz, I don't see nothing of wrong.

Starred, I like the last difficulty >A<
Revengexsoyah
652 posts
Joined June 2009
Revengexsoyah
Nice map
this map is funny in CTB jijijijij
starred map i loved :D
good luck Xgor,
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hello :)

Light:
NOTHING O.O

Standard:
00:54:82 :[1] move down one tiny square... [suggestion]
00:59:37 [5] move to the right by one tiny square

Yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy:
it's fine.

Kirby's Challenge:
nothing :)

cool song ^^

star star for you you ^^

- sorry. noob modder =____________=
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Gens
Nice! The sliderball is kinda tricky. Looks weird when it goes in reverse, but still, looks good~

Maybe add a Soft Inherited section at 01:23:58 in [Kirby's Challenge]?
Also, the section at 00:36:59 in [yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy] is way too confusing. Please regulate (or be consistent or whatever) those beats, or use sliders :<
Xgor
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Gens wrote:

Maybe add a Soft Inherited section at 01:23:58 in [Kirby's Challenge]?
Also, the section at 00:36:59 in [yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy] is way too confusing. Please regulate (or be consistent or whatever) those beats, or use sliders :<
Great idea with the Soft Inherited section on Kirby's Challenge.
I also remapped that part on yyy's heavy.... i don't know if it is for the better but i guess so because lots of people complained about that part.
Doomsday
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Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

Timing looks good

[LIGHT]

lookin' good

[STANDARD]

seems fine to me

[YEAHYEAHYEAHHH'S HEAVY]

00:38:39 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this only applies to the sliders, but they sound off to me on the blue ticks. could be just me, but anyway. they'd make more sense on the red ticks to me
01:06:78 to 01:17:321 - again, the beats on the blue ticks don't fit in to me. i don't know what you are mapping these to. again, could be just me

[KIRBY'S CHALLENGE]

00:56:34 (1,2,3,4) - even though its in a predictable layout, it still unclear at first how this goes. maybe seperate the sliders a bit so you can see the number on the beat?
00:59:37 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:02:41 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:45 (1,2,3,4) - ^

not a bad map set. very balanced difficulty wise, which i don't see much of nowadays. good job :)

star'd
peppy
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Offset 124ms

[Light]
No problems.

[Standard]
No problems.

[Heavy]
01:05:44 (1,1) - don't you think this (and all other spinners) are too close to the next note?
The ratio of slider velocity to distance spacing feels really awkward, and the last hitcircle is taking it a bit far (move it closer).

[Challenge]
I'm not a great judge on insanes, but don't see anything too seriously wrong here.

Starworthy.
Xgor
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Done most of those things except in heavy....
I did it a bit easier on some sliders and the last note but thats it.......
ugh, i will try to fix all if the problems are too big though.
yeahyeahyeahhh
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/me still away from home :(

If my diff is causing that big a problem xgor u can just delete it.
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yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

/me still away from home :(

If my diff is causing that big a problem xgor u can just delete it.
No.... I'm not that desperate....
And due to the high difficulity of kirby's challenge it's pretty much needed to make a diff between Standard and that one.... (and some pepole like that diff)

Oh! And so you all know, the skin is mostly things ripped from different things in stepmania except for the HP bar that was taken from a old DDR skin. :)

Also why are so few BATs checking this map.......Even if it has 61 SP :o
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Light
fine

Standard
fine

yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy
00:36:38 to 00:41:13 and 01:06:95 to 01:11:23 - i didnt like how u follow the rhythm, sounds weird
the rest of the map very nice

Kirby's Challenge
fine @.@

good job
star!
v2b
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please remap the part that Lizbeth mentioned

star :)
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Star for waiting for ages....
Gens
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Xgor wrote:

Also is this part so problematic so the map can't be ranked?
It is quite confusing so yes. Here, have a cookie.

[attachment=0:99b32]Mr.T - xenon (Xgor) [yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy].osu[/attachment:99b32]

I remapped those parts just as a draft. You can do whatever you want with those, but please keep the rhythm consistent. ;o
Also, please don't give me more kudos~ 1 was too much for the other mod post. ;x
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Gens wrote:

Xgor wrote:

Also is this part so problematic so the map can't be ranked?
It is quite confusing so yes. Here, have a cookie.

[attachment=0:42d11]Mr.T - xenon (Xgor) [yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy].osu[/attachment:42d11]

I remapped those parts just as a draft. You can do whatever you want with those, but please keep the rhythm consistent. ;o
Also, please don't give me more kudos~ 1 was too much for the other mod post. ;x
YES! THANK YOU! (i would like to give you two kudosu for that thing but if you disagree....)
anyway....did i say thank you....umm yeah :P
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? - up to you/suggestion
(?) - not entirely sure myself

Lovely clap hitsound btw

Light
Fine

Standard
Also fine

yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy
Also nice usage of hitsounds
Less break, more mapping ? IMO, the first break is too early in the song.

Kirby's Challenge
lolhard
Xgor
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Remco32 wrote:

yeahyeahyeahhh's Heavy
Also nice usage of hitsounds
Less break, more mapping ? IMO, the first break is too early in the song.
Im not that found of that the break is a bit early but i don't want to remap the song X.X (I also find the long break on Challenge being a bigger problem)
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Poor you, getting ignored by BATs T.T
All seems ready to be ranked.
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is this ranked yet?
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>_<

Download: Mr.T - xenon (Xgor) [Kirby's Challenge].osu
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Starrodkirby86 wrote:

>_<
Updated it :)
Agnes
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Da-don, da-don.
Hi hi Xgor.

[Light]

O.K.!

[Standard]

O.K.!

[YYY's Hard]

Thought there was an error at 00:21:055, but it seemed to fit the beat just fine for me.

O.K.!

[Kirby's Challenge]

Well done!

No issues within this map. Let this one small star get this mapped ranked.

Star~
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AgnesChan wrote:

[YYY's Hard]

Thought there was an error at 00:21:055, but it seemed to fit the beat just fine for me.
I don't find any problems here :| (If anyone else noticed a error there please tell)

Edit:Also i changed i bit now on Kirby's challenge to make it possible to get a FC on CTB (i hope that the changes don't destroy the diff.....)
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Agnes
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Xgor wrote:

AgnesChan wrote:

[YYY's Hard]

Thought there was an error at 00:21:055, but it seemed to fit the beat just fine for me.
I don't find any problems here :| (If anyone else noticed a error there please tell)
Thought there was. I had to play that part like... 3 times just to get it, though. ;_;

also, i had some soda, which fucks up my mind lol
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[Kirby's Challenge]
I really hate this difficulty.
00:08:47 (4) - Covers this slider. 00:09:42 (2)
00:18:16 (1) - Covered by the other notes
00:19:87 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Almost impossible to read
00:24:23 (1,2,3,4) - Covered by the previous slider.
From there.. ehhhhh.. Yeah.. It's just very messy and..

Other than those problems, I'm fine with it.
Zekira
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Offset: 120 (51/100 tests... somehow this song's hard to find an offset for D:)

[General]
Why does the slider ball point in the wrong direction when going off a reverse slider? Maybe it's an OpenGL issue thing...

[Heavy]
00:17:59 (2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaaah uneven stacks

[Kirby]
...THIS was the style I was looking for... and I wanna cripple it to pieces for annoying the hell out of me... in a positive way, that is.
Xgor
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m980 wrote:

[Kirby's Challenge]
I really hate this difficulty.
00:08:47 (4) - Covers this slider. 00:09:42 (2)
00:18:16 (1) - Covered by the other notes
00:19:87 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Almost impossible to read
00:24:23 (1,2,3,4) - Covered by the previous slider.
From there.. ehhhhh.. Yeah.. It's just very messy and..

Other than those problems, I'm fine with it.
I noticed that almost every problem but better when i highred the difficulity by one 1 although when i do that osu! says that yyy's heavy is harder then kirby's challenge so i lowred the HP drain too (This NEEDS to be fixed)
I did fix everything exept for 00:19:87 (1,2,3,1,2,3) but if that still is a issue i can fix it like this :D

Edit: meh did it now!

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 120 (51/100 tests... somehow this song's hard to find an offset for D:)
[General]
Why does the slider ball point in the wrong direction when going off a reverse slider? Maybe it's an OpenGL issue thing...

[Heavy]
00:17:59 (2,3,4,5,6) - aaaaaaaaaah uneven stacks
I fixed the offset (hope it's right)

I thought i fixed it but i guess that it only fixed it for me
Well... Put this folder in the skin folder and i thing the issue will be gone for you :)
Download: Flip fix.zip

Also, I'm surprised i didn't see that problem with the stacks earlier...Fixed :D

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Luneko
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Wow repect ._.
rly cool map ;)

Star~
Shulin
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Fantastic maps, nothing much to suggest so I can only give some opinions:

Easy: Fine.

Normal: Fine. Though try it with the difficulty up one tick, I think it plays better.

yeahyeahyeahhh’s Heavy: - All fine, though I tweaked with the spacing a little and thought it worked well:

00:08:47 (3,4) – I think this looks and plays better if you use x0.7 spacing between 3 and 4.
00:11:51 (3,4,5,6,7) – Same but space 3 and 4, and 6 and 7.
00:14:55 (3,4,5,6) – ^ 3 and 4.
00:17:58 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 4 and 5, 5 and 6.
00:20:62 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 1 and 2
00:54:61 (11,1) - ^ 11 and 1.
01:00:49 (4,1) - ^
01:16:82 (1) – This slider is an odd shape it’s hard to follow, but otherwise its ok.

Kirby’s Challenge: Fine, and extremely challenging.

All great, I'll add my star then.
Behon
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Light:
The opening section (from 00:06:195 to 00:14:550) seems kind of repetitive, both in timing and hitcircle placement. Maybe rearrange some of the notes on the grid, or add sliders to some parts for variety?
01:09:993 (3): Why are the slider points on this all over the place? Delete it and make a smooth and similarly curved Bezier slider.
01:17:588 (4): Move the circle up to be on the same horizontal plane as the end of the slider. It looks nicer.

Standard:
00:41:132 (Spinner): Maybe end this earlier, at 00:42:271?
00:53:284 (3): Finish at the end of the slider?

Heavy:
Because this is a harder difficulty, you might want to make some of the combos last longer. There are way too many that end really early, like after 3 circles. Also, the second half seems to drop dramatically in difficulty. Either make it harder by adding more circles and sliders or do the opposite to the first half.
00:12:082 (7): Finish?
00:18:157 (6): Same as above.
01:00:499 (4): Same as above, but only at the beginning of the slider.

Kirby's Challenge:
00:08:474 (4): Finish at the very end of the slider?
00:11:512 (4): Same as above.
Xgor
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@Shulin: I think the spacing is better as it is :)
@Behonkiss:Did most things except for the beginning on light (love it myself :P ) and the hitsound modding on yyy's heavy (sounds worse....)
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~Star. ;)
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Star! :)
LuigiHann
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Looks all right to me. The jumps in Kirby's mix are pretty obscene, but they're all pretty well documented by the combo colors, and it's just the speed that makes them insane. So I'm gonna go ahead and bubble this. Great skin by the way, the sliderball arrow looks great and the CtB fruits are awesome.
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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NachoPiggy wrote:

Awesome skin and map itself, and Kirby's diff is evil great as always!
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So this map have been copyright calmed huh. Kinda wish I got a PM about it instead of being a surprise when I tried downloading this to a new computer..
Glad that AM-3P didn't got removed though..
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Xgor wrote:

So this map have been copyright calmed huh. Kinda wish I got a PM about it instead of being a surprise when I tried downloading this to a new computer..
Glad that AM-3P didn't got removed though..
there were about 200 claimed maps
you can still download them from mirrors though
Xgor
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TicClick wrote:

there were about 200 claimed maps
you can still download them from mirrors though
Yeah I can imagine, considering it's beatmania related. I do have it on my other computers so that's no big issue to get it. just a minor annoyance.
I guess that's one of the main thing I've missed while being inactive on osu!
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