So, Here's Combusken!

Download: Pokemon - David Rolfe - Unbeatable (NoHItter) [Combusken].osu

Swampert's up!

Download: Pokemon - David Rolfe - Unbeatable (NoHItter) [Swampert].osu

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Download: Pokemon - David Rolfe - Unbeatable (NoHItter) [Rayquaza].osu

Thanks a lot on the Treecko diff you did make it better

On the Combusken and Rayquaza diffs I made minor changes based on your mod.

The background is cool and all but it seems inappropriate for this beatmap (ask Zekira why.)

And about the Swampert diff you modded. The original seems fine to me.

This is the time that I gotta do what you requested me to do. Anyway, here goes some of suggestions that I have for your beatmap.

Treecko:
You could add your past diff and still retain charlesisgay's diff. Of course, you should put his name there.

Combusken:
I believe there's a missing beat. I'll notify you some other time on the whereabouts of it.

Swampert:
No comment on this one.

Rayquaza:
Try to relocate/re-snap some of the beats. I'll also add this to the notification that I'll give you.

Overall:
The beatmap had a lot of improvements ever since you gave it to me for some testing. Good luck on your other beatmaps, though. And I'll try to mod this as soon as I could find time.

I will be so disappointed if you just replaced the diffs here with whatever charles gave.

I didn't replace everything mind you.

I looked at the beatmap and made a decision that curved sliders>straight sliders.

I didn't actually just copy paste them.

Starred.

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Nice beatmap. Starred.

A few timing issues:

BPM: 152.05 (sounds okay)
1st offset: 164 (20-30ms off what you originally had)
2nd offset: 25,432 (see above)

[Treecko]
00:14:56 (1) - Too early. Extend to the half beats before and after where it is currently situated.

[Combusken]
00:19:87 (4) - Don't jump on sub 5-star maps. Nobody likes it. Looks tacky and doesn't fit with the song at all.

[Swampert]

No anomalies that I can see.

[Rayquaza]
00:37:04 (8) - Snapping issues. Bigtime

Decent map all around. No reason for me not to star it really.

Ephemeral wrote:

A few timing issues:

BPM: 152.05 (sounds okay)
1st offset: 164 (20-30ms off what you originally had)
2nd offset: 25,432 (see above)

[Treecko]
00:14:56 (1) - Too early. Extend to the half beats before and after where it is currently situated.

[Combusken]
00:19:87 (4) - Don't jump on sub 5-star maps. Nobody likes it. Looks tacky and doesn't fit with the song at all.

[Swampert]

No anomalies that I can see.

[Rayquaza]
00:37:04 (8) - Snapping issues. Bigtime

Decent map all around. No reason for me not to star it really.

Done. Thanks alot.

Resnap all notes on all difficulties. Add kiai at 00:25:40 and end it at 00:49:47. Uh, what is your storyboard doing?

Treecko:

00:00:14 (1) - Remove. It interferes with the flow of the beginning.
00:03:30 (1) - Might want to curve this in some way (~ sliders are cool)
00:17:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:50 (6) - New combo, add finish.
00:20:26 (1) - 1/1 forward, add finish, add circle in its place.
00:22:06 - A spinner would be better here.
00:23:34 - Remove break.
00:28:95 (7) - New combo.
00:30:34 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:74 (5) - New combo.
00:46:12 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:50:36 - Pretty large blank space here. Map it.

Combusken:

00:00:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove, breaks flow etc.
00:19:87 (4) - 1/2 back.
00:20:26 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:66 (6) - New combo, add finish.
00:22:63 (1) - Extend to 00:24:62, remove all notes in the next combo.
00:27:38 (2) - Spacing.
00:29:15 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:35 (1) - Change to slider.
00:30:53 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:94 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:13 (1) - Change to slider.
00:46:32 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:50:46 - Large blank space.
00:55:00 (1) - Remove, the time after the spinner doesn't give a player at the level to play this difficulty enough time to react.

Swampert:

00:00:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Remove, flow breaking blargh.
00:11:39 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - This pattern is seemingly random. Try mapping it more to the vocals?
00:14:54 (1) - This spinner is out of place. It feels anticlimatic, so remove it.
00:20:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again, it's just a random 1/2 'stream'.
00:28:95 (1,1,1) - These jumps are silly, and remove new combo on the second and third.
00:30:34 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:44:74 (1,1,1) - Again, with the jumps and removing combos.
00:46:12 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:50:46 - Blank space.
00:54:01 (1) - Remove, it's unfair to players of this blahblahblah.
00:54:80 (4) - Make this spacing less insane.

Rayquaza:

00:00:14 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove.
00:15:13 (3,4) - This spacing is what.
00:17:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:50 (13) - New combo.
00:20:26 (1) - Unfair jump, remove new combo.
00:20:66 (9) - New combo.
00:24:41 (3,4,5) - Spacing what. Use a spinner?
00:27:17 (1) - Spacing.
00:29:14 (1,1) - Remove new combo, slider.
00:30:34 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:32:89 (6,7,1) - Spacing.
00:38:42 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing.
Er, just distance snap the rest of the difficulty, practically every combo has a spacing problem.
00:44:94 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:46:12 (1) - Remove new combo.

nice song great maps

star

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Mafiamaster wrote:

I think you're missing a spinner picture. ;_;

Tree co.~

1. 00:13:38 (2) - Move closer to 1.
2. 00:28:56 (6) - Move closer to 5's endpoint.
3. 00:50:67 (6) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the end?

Combustion~

1. 00:37:83 (1) - Imo, it would sound better starting on the white tick at 00:38:03.
2. 00:51:84 (4) - Suggestion: Add a finish.

Mudkipz aka Swampart~

1. 00:25:40 (1) - Suggestion: Finish?
2. 00:30:93 (6,7) - Imo, the finish sound would sound better at 6.
3. 00:39:02 (3) - Move farther from 2.

Rayquazer~

1. 00:17:13 (11) - New combo.
2. 00:17:52 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:25:40 (1) - Suggestion: Finish?
4. 00:30:93 (5,6) - Finish sound would sound better at 5.
5. 00:49:28 (8) - New combo.
6. 00:50:46 (14) - Remove finish sound.
7. 00:50:66 (1) - Add finish sound.
8. 00:51:25 (4) - Suggestion: ^
9. 00:51:84 (7) - Suggestion: ^
10. 00:55:79 (1) - Start this on the white tick. Don't forget to shorten to the nearest white tick too.

Mhm! It's coming along great~

Thanks.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[*]00:50:66 (1) - Add finish sound.
[*]00:51:25 (4) - Suggestion: ^
[*]00:51:84 (7) - Suggestion: ^

hi) there's only suggestions, that can be ignored as well
[Treecko]
00:04:713 (1) - maybe put it in the line with end of the slider [?]
00:07:687 (4, 1) - ^ [?]
00:10:719 (4, 1) - gap is too much for the easy diff. i think
00:19:894 (1, 3) - put it in a line for better looking [?]

[combusken]
00:10:226 (6, 7) is it intended? if not, put 7 in a line with 6 i think
00:11:620 (1, 2) imo this line lloks a bit wreid in test mode. [?]
00:36:654 (3, 4) maybe put this pattern to the left a bit, right under the end of slider [?]
00:46:322 (4) - put it in a line with end of 3 [?]

[Swampest]
00:36:461 (3, 4) mb put it right above of the end of 3?

[Rayquaza]
00:20:288 (1) spacing [?]

That's all. Nice map, star 4 you =)

Suggestions, not orders!~

Treeko
Combusken
Swampert
Rayquazaa

NoHItter, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Offset: Ok
Timing section 1: Ok
Timing section 2: 152.01 BPM (Make sure to resnap every note manually once you've changed it)

Treecko:
00:39:61 (3) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) right and down.
00:55:00 (1) - remove clap

Combusken:
00:19:89 (4) - Distance snap this note or make it a new combo
00:55:79 (1) - remove clap

Swampert:
00:13:38 (6) - Distance snap this slider
00:16:14 (2) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) left and up
00:16:34 (3) - 2 (lvl 3 grid) left
00:16:73 (4) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) up
00:23:84 (1,2,3,4) - Finish sound
00:25:40 (1) - remove finish sound
00:46:12 (4,5,6,7) - Distance snap or new combo (prefer distance snap)
00:56:18 (1) - Remove clap

Rayquaza:
00:30:34 (3,4,5,6) - reorganize this triangle, use distance snap pls
00:46:12 (3,4,5,6) - reorganize this triangle, use distance snap pls

Some beats became unreadable because of the skin. I suggest making the colors (or rather the color gradient) less bright or less dark, because the gradient is interfering.


EDIT: The BG pic is irritating, IMO. Why not just make it 1 whole big pic rather than 4 then turning back to 1?

jockeytiyan wrote:

Some beats became unreadable because of the skin. I suggest making the colors (or rather the color gradient) less bright or less dark, because the gradient is interfering.


EDIT: The BG pic is irritating, IMO. Why not just make it 1 whole big pic rather than 4 then turning back to 1?

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Try redownloading. . .

Here's my mod

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Treecko]
00:53:81 (3) - Newer players may be confused by this; try placing it at 00:53:62 and see if it works for
you
No Problems Found

[Combusken]
No problems Found

[Swampert]
00:08:25 (8) - Maybe a note here?

No Problems Found

[Rayquaza]
No Problems Found

Whoaaaaaaooooo~ Pokemon....... ADVANCE BATTLE!

Starred ;p

Treecko:
No problems

Combusken:
No problems

Swampert:
The combo between 0:08:253 and 0:10:621 sounds odd to me. If they follow the vocals, would you adjust it please?

Rayquaza:
No complaints

Overall:
You could make a pokemon-themed spinnercircle. I think there are alot of rotating pokemon around <_< ofcourse, its optional starred.

I like the Swedish openings better Ahem.
[Treeko]

0:23:445: A break here would be nice
00:26:59 (3,6) - I suggest you delete those circles (they are pretty confusing and hard for and easy diff)

[combusken]

00:11:80 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is confusing.....but if you like it you can keep it

[Swampbert]

00:15:15 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Also confusing
00:30:53 (5,6) - It would be more fun if it was a jump between 5 and 6
00:46:32 (5,6) - ^ Same as above ^

[Rayquaza]

00:04:80 (8,9) - I would prefer if you deleted those but you can keep them if you want
00:37:04 (8) - Remove the finish on this slider
00:54:21 (1,2,3) - Why is this part harder on Swampbert?.....

Solid map, It's not perfect but it's pretty good made!
*star*

fzeromaster wrote:

Overall:
You could make a pokemon-themed spinnercircle. I think there are alot of rotating pokemon around <_< ofcourse, its optional starred.

you might wanna use this pokemon ( Poliwhirl or w/e ),, kinda trippy:P
Try to cut out his belly, and make that swirl. I think it'll look awesome (i'm not really in the pokemon age zone anymore xD)



Try to find a good picture of it. GL!

1. Delete all unused .osb files.
2. Delete "pokemon.jpg".
3. 00:55:398 - try using this pattern (except Treecko)

~Treecko~
00:55:00 (1) - move starting point to 00:55:398

~Combusken~
00:38:03 (2,3) - too confused for normal-like diff

~Swampert~
00:07:46 (7) - nearly offscreen, you should move up a bit

~Rayquaza~
00:27:38 (2,3) - too close
00:51:64 (6,7,8) - move up a bit to make them look prettier


+Star

[Overall]
- Make diff names like [Treecko (Easy)] etc.
- Harder diffs are IMO overmapped.

[Treecko]
00:03:32 (1) - 1/2 longer.
00:28:56 (6) - delete it?

[Swampert]
Uh, nothing.

[Rayquaza]
00:04:50 (5,6,7,8,9) - remove claps.
00:04:89 (9) - delete it.
00:07:26 (8,9), 00:08:45 (1,2) - I'm not sure if overlap like these is rankable. And even if it is, it's still fucking ugly.

[Combusken]
00:19:10 (3,4) - SPAACING!
00:52:24 (1) - end at 00:54:017 (or ever earlier), then add hitcircles at 00:54:21 and 00:54:60 (2).


Starred.

Overall : These map should be given a normal hitsound twist like in 00:50:662

Treecko :
I don't see anything wrong

Combusken :
00:11:607 (1,2) - I would like these note to be remap to easier, it makes me go wtf

Swampert :
No, nothing.

Rayquaza :
^

I love this song, star

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Rayquaza:
okay

Combusken:
00:19:10 (3,4) - Ugh, this spacing...

Swampert:
fine

treecko:
00:25:40 (1,2,3) - don't stack these. Move 2 and 3 away.

Also, remove the "pokemon.png" from the storyboard.

Larto wrote:

Combusken:
00:19:10 (3,4) - Ugh, this spacing...

treecko:
00:25:40 (1,2,3) - don't stack these. Move 2 and 3 away.

Also, remove the "pokemon.png" from the storyboard.

Done

star

Needs more Charizard.

Treecko:

I would stack the hit circles that are 1/2 after a slider ends under the end of the slider.

Combusken:

Found nothing wrong

Swampert:

00:15:15 (3,4,5) - This didn't flow well to me, I would move 3 a bit so it's not covering 5 at all.
00:30:34 (4,5,6,7) - Move 6 and 7 out from under 4 and 5, still in a stack. That would play better and be much easier to read IMO.
00:41:19 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing to read and not very fun. I recommend using a different pattern completely.
00:46:12 (4,5,6,7) - Again, move 6 and 7 out from under 4 and 5 please, again still in a stack.
00:50:26 (11) - I would move it so it isn't under 9, to flow better.

Rayquaza:

I found it fine. Could be cleaner, but not an issue.

Nice mapset, star!

I might mod this again in the near future. I expect to see a lot better job now... hopefully.

EDIT:

[General]
I could swear I keep getting 144 for the 1st offset... Please tell me which sounds better for you (since I keep getting 144 everytime I try.Eeven if Ultimate suggested it and I really trust his mods, I really think 144 is the best offset...)
00:57:693 until 00:58:357 - I suggest (take note, it's just a 'suggestion') you put a DONDONDON here to go simoltaneously with the "POKéMON!" ending. I don't know, just sounds fitting.

[Treecko]

Ekaru wrote:

I would stack the hit circles that are 1/2 after a slider ends under the end of the slider.

[Combusken]
00:05:68 (3) - slider seems random IMO
...OK sorry if I sound rude, but I don't like how Combusken was mapped, particularly at the entire part before the chorus. The chorus and after looks fine, though.

[Swampert]
00:17:13 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 're-beat' this... it sounds weird IMO.
00:19:69 (7) - remove finish? I dunno, I'm not a good hitsound modder. Just suggesting.
00:23:84 (1,2,3,4) - I love this part I dunno why.
00:55:39 (1) - maybe move this away, since the previous 2-3 was stacked and the 1 is on a different distance on the timeline. (IMO differently timed stacks are very ugly)

[Rayquaza]
00:10:22 (8) - Kinda obvious that it's too near the 6-7.
Too many linear patterns IMO lol, many might hate you for that (don't worry, most of my maps are too linear too and people are hating me for it :\)
EDIT3: Is it just me, or is the HPDrain on this too evil?

And finally I star this map.

EDIT2: This is how much I support 144 for the first offset (I changed it first to 144 then played the map once):

Listen to the metronome, it's going all fdiosjhfdskl

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Treecko
(suggestions)
00:13:38 (2) - move half beat later
00:22:06 (1,2,3,4) - ^ imo sounds better following the music n.n
00:27:77 (5) - make it end at 00:28:17
00:49:28 (1) - new combo

Combusken
00:30:53 (4) - new combo
00:46:32 (4) - new combo
(suggestion) 00:57:96, 00:58:16 and 00:58:35 - add notes

Swampert
00:30:34 (4) - new combo
00:46:12 (4) - new combo
(suggestion) 00:57:96, 00:58:16 and 00:58:35 - add notes

Rayquaza
00:07:26 (8) - remove note
00:30:34 (3) - new combo
00:40:40 (8) - remove note
00:46:12 (3) - ^
00:55:59 (2) - remove this note
(suggestion) 00:57:96, 00:58:16 and 00:58:35 - add notes

Star

hiiii ^^

Treecko:
00:23:44 [*0] er.. i dunno, break here? or was this intentional?

Combusken:
00:36:65 [3 and 4] why not align/aline (can't spell =___=) with the slider before it? prettier~~~

Swampert:
00:44:74 [1-3] was the spacing suposed to be different from the others?

Rayquaza:
nothign here ^^

this map was really good nothign really wrong here... and those are only suggestions.. really...
still noobmodder trying to help as much as a can! YOSHII!

star star for you you ^^

haisha_

offset:try 149,dont forget to reinsert breaktime and resnap notes after changing the timing

swampert:
increase overall difficulty to 6

rayquaza:
increase overall difficulty to 7 or 8
00:24:43 (1) - the spinner will only get 100 bonus score if you increase overall,but it's still rankable

star