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DeathxShinigami

ztrot wrote:

Just to let you know I will most likely remove Fly away!!! from this map
Just waiting for the okay to do so.
You suck. Go die.
Topic Starter
ztrot
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
Ztrot, there is still hope for this map. Don't give up on it because everyone is counting on you. :-3

And DxS, that harsh comment wasn't really needed. I know you're pissed off about it, but please refain from using harsh context.
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

[Extreme] Detailed Modding go! (Insane Mod only)

Osz. File Check

SPOILER
Video: Yes
Custom Skin: Yes
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 13.00 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

[Easy] (Exempt from modding)

[Normal] (Exempt from modding)

[Hard] (Exempt from modding)

[Fly Away!!!] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 186.040 / 10,010 ms (Seems okay so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: Yes
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 2.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 265 ( 231 Circles / 28 Sliders / 6 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 317
[Current] Max Score: 2,604,080
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9

00:22:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing isn't the same. This can make it harder to keep up with the pace on this difficulty.
01:06:77 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some uneven spacing here.
01:12:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Uhhhh...... wtf just happened?
01:14:83 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^

Notes: Not sure what to say honestly. I know this map is trying to go for something insane, but I think its been over done a bit too much like with 01:12:57. I don't think even a tablet player can catch that either. Try to use more caution with the patterns too as over doing it would kill the playability alot.

Overall: Well, 2 things that was getting to me.... 1.) The approch circle looks kinda a bit odd. Even though you can hit it on time, it would be very confusing in the higher difficulties as it moves faster. 2.) The transparancy + almost alike background colors + faster appearance of the circles = blindness... :o Though this map has hope to be fixed. Just letting you know these to keep in mind of. I'll drop my star in then.
blissfulyoshi
Fly Away:
00:34:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing (I do see the pattern, but it is misleading in my opinion)
00:59:67 (6) - new combo to make it easier to read

That is all I can find.

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!!].osu
Topic Starter
ztrot
Due to stuff that is outta my hands I will Remove the insane diff.
And wait for a re-rank
Azure_Kite
I want this map to live, so for the sake of survival; fly, my little star, FLY!
alvisto
Awww... It's a nice song... Support !

Star !
Topic Starter
ztrot
I will not touch this map untill told to do so.
CptButtBalls
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Babble
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gopice
Why not put the hardest difficulty in the approved pending list as a separate map?
This way you wouldn't have to change the difficulty and still get your map ranked.
Lesjuh
I almost fc'd it dood, wtf, and now you removed it D:
Gopice
Ok fine.. it's ranked now.. :cry:
Could you please put the previous hardest difficulty as a separate map in the approval pending list?
It's your best difficulty of this map, and it would be a shame to waste it ;)
livender
Bah the Hard difficulty is boring (i miss the Fly away one)
anyway It's still not ranked!
but i still don't get it Chocobo and Emerald sword are ranked and that's fine why can't the fly away one?
I think there will be someone who could full combo this map because it's shorter then the other insane one's
anyway Star and i still hope the Fly away gets ranked :(
DeathxShinigami

gopice wrote:

Ok fine.. it's ranked now.. :cry:
Could you please put the previous hardest difficulty as a separate map in the approval pending list?
It's your best difficulty of this map, and it would be a shame to waste it ;)

I'm pretty sure StarrodKirby86 made the FLY AWAY!!! Diff so maybe you should ask him about submitting that to approval :P
Topic Starter
ztrot
That is correct DxS
Ask Starrod
Starrodkirby86
If you really want it to go for approval, I'll be welcome to submit one. Of course, I'd probably do some things here and there to make it a bit interesting. <.>

Hopefully no one kills me for it. >.>; xD

If you're a reader here, make a forum PM to me if you want me to put Fly Away!!! as approved. Thank you.
Lesjuh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
ztrot
Peppy I'll let you chose if it can Be re added to the set. Some changes have been made to make it more playable But it's still really hard.

Also Here is the re-sized Comboburst.

And I fixed a few things in hard
The score wasn't changed but I don't know if it will affect replays.
BTW the that's how I wanted the comboburst not being lazy. :P

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!!].osu

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Hard].osu

Diasios
Easy:

It's ok

Normal:

It's ok

Hard:

It's ok

I love this map <3
starred

(i don't like the hit-circles... they're too transparent)
Topic Starter
ztrot
Still Waiting on peppy to look so mods are pointless I think He want's to add it without changing anything
except insane diff
Mashley
star star star
Metroid
Fy Away!!!
00:27:42 (5) - err it feels weird being closer to (4) whole (3) is farther from the (4) but both being 1/2 beats.

starred'
rust45
This is a very fun map to play. I don't know why I didn't download this earlier. *
Ephemeral
It's been fixed for a while - wasn't much wrong with it to begin with, a pretty decent map that definitely deserves to be ranked again.

Star'd
DeathxShinigami
Way to let this die. I want my refund back. :<
peppy
All scores reset. Do whatever the fuck you want (new BATs check before ranking etc.)

For the record this was not what I intended to happen.
GbL
[Easy]

00:31:61 (break) - Fix break

[Normal]

00:31:61 (break) - Fix break

[Hard]

Looks fine~

[Fly Away!!!]

00:11:62 (5,6) - Spacing
00:15:65 (4,5) - ^ or new combo (5)



It's all awesome, staaar~
Ephemeral
Might as well mod this the second time round:

[Easy]

00:15:81 (3) - Paste the inverted and appropriately rotated slider from 00:18:39 (3) - here, will look more consistent and quite a bit nicer
01:12:57 (1) - End this at the third repeat and place three circle beats up to where the slider originally ended. It doesn't really click with the vocal line past the third repeat.

[Normal]

00:36:45 (1) - Drag the mid bezier point one small grid unit to the right to make this as curvy as it can possibly be without stretching it across beats. Looks nicer.
00:59:67 (1) - End this on the second repeat and fill in the gaps with circle beats. Really doesn't click with either the vocal or beat at this part.

[Hard]

00:26:13 (1) - Drag mid bezier point out a small grid unit again. Same thing carried on from Normal, basically.
00:36:45 (1) - Drag the single point in this actually to the middle and down two small grid units.
00:41:61 (1) - Drag mid bezier point up two units and to the right by one unit
00:51:93 (1) - Drag mid bezier point to the right by two units
00:56:12 (1) - Drag this and all duplicated copies of this (the next 2 rainbow sliders) mid bezier point down by one grid unit
00:59:67 (1) - Drag mid bezier point left by one and down by one
01:07:41 (3) - Drag end bezier point right by three units and up by two
01:17:73 (2) - Drag mid bezier point to the left by one grid unit
01:20:31 (1) - Drag end bezier to the right by three units
01:22:89 (6) - Considered putting a kiai burst at the end? Not really needed but I think it'd look nice.

I have slider OCD. All of my mod suggestions are there with the intent of giving you primarily perfectly median sliders. Aside from a few very slight errors (which I have pointed out), there is nothing wrong that I can see
EEeee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mrtn
offset -10ms and use bpm 92,01
set a preview time
each difficulty needs to have a spinner

[fly away]
00:33:23 (10,1) - unintuitive
00:33:87 (3,1) - ^
0_o

mrtn wrote:

each difficulty needs to have a spinner
There's nothing in the ranking criteria for there having to be a spinner..
3 of my 6 ranked maps don't have any spinners at all :|

Easy
00:42:45 (2) - New combo for a new phrase
01:04:06 (2) - Move ahead 1/4
01:08:25 (3) - Take out a repeat and add a beat at 01:09:38
01:19:22 (2) - New combo

Normal
00:40:84 (2) - This threw me off a little, maybe get rid of this to match the previous combo?
00:41:81 (x) - It kind of seems empty between 4 and 1, add a beat here?

Hard
00:55:19 (x) - Add a beat? I expected to click something here
01:14:86 (x) - Add a beat?
01:17:28 (1,2) - New combo on 2, and maybe remove new combo on 1? Your call on that one

Fly Away
um.. lol
whymeman
Though it is true you can have a map ranked without spinners, the scores would be too rigid when it comes to competetion.

*Redownloads the map*
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks good so far, no problems here but just the BPM i'm looking at.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks fine here as well, but just the BPM i'm worried about...

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks clean here too. Same as before with the BPM.

[Fly Away!!!] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

01:13:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . . . WTF? These accelerating jumps is REALLY harsh :-/

Notes: Besides the BPM issue, make sure you can get the map ranked with those jumps... seriously.

Overall: The map overall is okay, just make sure to check the BPM again and I hope the jump on [Fly Away] doesn't cause another screw up.... You have my support though.
Shinde
I demand something to eat.
SPOILER
ATTACH[BACK-ON - Flyaway (ztrot).osb]
Pop this is afterwards, there was a slight translation change I wanted to make. I've checked and just popping it in the folder should be fine.

Download: BACK-ON - Flyaway (ztrot).osb

Download: Lyric SB.rar
Lesjuh
Delete the button-left, right and middle from the song folder. You don't use them if I'm not mistaken.

And omg, [Fly Away!!!] is so... Easy... compared to the previous version ;_;
Topic Starter
ztrot

lesjuh wrote:

Delete the button-left, right and middle from the song folder. You don't use them if I'm not mistaken.

And omg, [Fly Away!!!] is so... Easy... compared to the previous version ;_;
I Know but It can't be helped Sorry D:
Topic Starter
ztrot

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks good so far, no problems here but just the BPM i'm looking at.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks fine here as well, but just the BPM i'm worried about...

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

- No Appearent Errors Found -

Notes: Looks clean here too. Same as before with the BPM.

[Fly Away!!!] (Done)

SPOILER
Misc. Note: I thought the BPM was supposed to be 93 flat?

01:13:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . . . WTF? These accelerating jumps is REALLY harsh :-/

Notes: Besides the BPM issue, make sure you can get the map ranked with those jumps... seriously.

Overall: The map overall is okay, just make sure to check the BPM again and I hope the jump on [Fly Away] doesn't cause another screw up.... You have my support though.
lol the bmp was better at this rate. and i'll make sure to get the jumps checked.
Lybydose
The comboburst had random stuff where there should have been transparent pixels (I think think the letters weren't fully removed)

Anyway, I fixed it.

Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: BACK-ON - Flyaway (ztrot) [Fly Away!!!].osu

Download: BACK-ON - Fly Away (ztrot) [Fly Away!!! -Original-].osu
Ex Boy
I like these maps!So~~~crazy!!!
gdeath
[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
00:21:81 (1)--->>00:25:68 (1) fade out
01:13:41 (1)--->>01:17:28 (1) ^

[Hard]
plz decrease slider tick.it sound bad.i think 2 tick is good.
00:31:81 (1,2,3,4,5) - dont fit stream here IMO

[Fly Away!!!]
00:16:65 (5) - new combo
00:43:74 (8) - how about new combo?if you dont change it,its also no problem.
00:46:32 (8) - ^
00:53:74 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:48 (9) - new combo

nice SB&skin.star for you
mrtn
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m980
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peppy
Someone mind telling us what is going on here?
Topic Starter
ztrot

peppy wrote:

All scores reset. Do whatever the fuck you want (new BATs check before ranking etc.)

For the record this was not what I intended to happen.
The BATs checked this. Did they need to clear it with you 1st.
Honestly I'm confused. I did make a few changes to the map bulid and changed the mp3 to a better one.
Only thing I can think Of is that they where supposed to check with you 1st right?
So I would like to know what's wrong I'm a bit lost. Plz don't Get mad at the BATs that ranked this. I should have asked you for more info.
Or I'm guessing you didn't like The insane diff.....
Just plz explain What detail did I miss?
Edit:
I'm a fucking retard. Now I see why you would have to change it it still has data from the last time it was ranked
I See that now... You just needed 2 BATs to say it was fine. not to bubble and rank it like a normal map. Fuck....
Sorry Man I Did it again I think I'll hold off for awhile On Osu Recollect and try again
I'm not sure what you have to change to fix this (Tho I don't blame you if you don't)
But I'm really sorry I can't seem to do anything right.
awp
ztrot what on earth is going on with your use of capital letters I'm having a hard time reading it all
Topic Starter
ztrot
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peppy
I was querying why it was unranked a second time?
Topic Starter
ztrot
it was unranked a 2nd time? I know of the 1st time.
But I never knew of a 2nd time.
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