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Tshemmp

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Tshemmp 2012-12-19T11:56:06+00:00

Saten wrote:
[Hard]
00:21:923 (2,3) - having a straight moving like this feels odd. letting (3) move in a different direction plays better imo well, I like this kind of straight movement
SPOILER
00:25:073 (4) - You should move it down a bit so the start becomes more clearer okay
00:29:873 (4) - imo there's no need for a finish on the start okay
01:55:973 (2,3,1,2) - mind moving the combo to (2) instead? Having it at the end of the stack just makes it more confusing imo meh, I really hate breaking my ususal NC pattern but you are probably right
02:44:273 (2,1) - I don't think patterns like this plays so well I see no problem here
03:03:173 (1) - no need for a finish here although I am not 100% convinced - changed
03:22:148 (2) - mind moving the second point more to the right so the reverse-arrow becomes more visible? I guess you meant to the left. Well, did that (to the left).
03:24:623 (2,3) - same as 00:21:923 (2,3) - . but this one might be a bit harder to arrange no change
03:27:773 (1,2) - as above ^
03:42:173 (1) - Why a finish when you barely even can hear it? o.o Because it fits with the part of the song, so I placed it regardless of the low hitsound volume here. After yor comment I am not so sure anymore, let's see if other people find this one stupid, too.
03:44:573 - 5% since it's basically muted anyway if it doesn't make any difference anyway I can aswell leave it as it is now because it is more logical

HelloSCV

Tshemmp's Hard
00:54:140 (1) - touch HP bar no, check with the default skin please O_O
01:12:590 (2,3) - move 1 grid right? - nazi you are right (I like nazi modding btw)
02:35:840 (4) - add note here and 02:35:990 (5) - here? feels better I feel like a little break fits here ._.
02:40:040 (2) - ^ 02:40:190 (3) - ^ same here, I don't want to place too many objects

LKs

LKs wrote:
[hard]

01:07:823 (2,3) - I'd suggest add a note at 01:07:823 (2) - with clap. and move clap from the slider head to slider end The note as well as a clap on it would "feel" a bit strange to play and to hear imo. Moving the clap away from the slider start makes no sense to me because I had this pattern for clap usage the whole strophe, I don't see any reason to change it here. I added a clap on the end of the slider though because it gives a nice transition into the chorus.

Thank you all!

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P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-19T11:58:28+00:00

ok. update done :3

Edit: ok!

LKs

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LKs 2012-12-19T13:31:23+00:00

try harder and sth more unique the next time
also, find your own style

good luck

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-19T13:34:58+00:00

LKs wrote:
try harder and sth more unique the next time
also, find your own style

good luck

thanks LKs :3 ok! i do my best

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2012-12-19T20:46:22+00:00

Hi~

Sorry for being a bit late, but mod time /o/

These are suggestions for personal distastes, you are free to follow or not.

[Tshemmp's Hard]
Maybe AR 7, I felt it too fast with AR8
00:24:773 (3,4) - I don't like how this overlap looks, you can make a tiny jump between these objects, arrange (3) to the left in a way it would be totally visible and (4) to the right, and maybe stacking the end with the start of 00:25:373 (1). This is an idea of what I am telling.

03:33:773 (1) - Not a perfect blanket, put the 2nd node in x:204 y:44 and the red node in x:184 y:88 for a more perfect one.

[Insane]
Maybe AR8, but as I'm not good for Insanes, you can ignore this.

Good luck in your way for rank, I'll be waiting for playing this~ \o\

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-19T21:38:51+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi~

Sorry for being a bit late, but mod time /o/

These are suggestions for personal distastes, you are free to follow or not.

[Tshemmp's Hard]
Maybe AR 7, I felt it too fast with AR8
00:24:773 (3,4) - I don't like how this overlap looks, you can make a tiny jump between these objects, arrange (3) to the left in a way it would be totally visible and (4) to the right, and maybe stacking the end with the start of 00:25:373 (1). This is an idea of what I am telling.
03:33:773 (1) - Not a perfect blanket, put the 2nd node in x:204 y:44 and the red node in x:184 y:88 for a more perfect one.

[Insane]
Maybe AR8, but as I'm not good for Insanes, you can ignore this. bpm200. i think keep better :3

Good luck in your way for rank, I'll be waiting for playing this~ \o\

bubbled now. i keep modding. so.if popped.I make an appropriate decision

thanks modding and star :3

narakucrimson

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narakucrimson 2012-12-27T16:19:22+00:00

If you have to change something, change it. It doesn't really matter if the map is bubbled or not. Change that and maybe call the bubbler back. I was about to mod this but I won't do it with the answer you provided in the previous post.

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-27T16:29:57+00:00

[Insane]
Maybe AR8, but as I'm not good for Insanes, you can ignore this. bpm200. i think keep better :3 no change. so AR 9 is better looks![/quote]
i keep diff now.

Tshemmp

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Tshemmp 2012-12-27T18:01:46+00:00

SPOILER

DakeDekaane wrote:
[Tshemmp's Hard]
Maybe AR 7, I felt it too fast with AR8 once again, AR 7 is way too low for 200 BPM
00:24:773 (3,4) - I don't like how this overlap looks, you can make a tiny jump between these objects, arrange (3) to the left in a way it would be totally visible and (4) to the right, and maybe stacking the end with the start of 00:25:373 (1). This is an idea of what I am telling. I like my version much more
03:33:773 (1) - Not a perfect blanket, put the 2nd node in x:204 y:44 and the red node in x:184 y:88 for a more perfect one. done

Thanks!

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P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-27T18:19:32+00:00

ok up done.

LKs

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LKs 2012-12-28T06:10:57+00:00

rechecked

since changes are minor

Niva

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Niva 2012-12-29T04:20:23+00:00

wa >_<

SPOILER

09:53 Niva: hi P o M u T a are you here? xD
09:53 Niva: I'm checking your map now
09:53 *Niva is editing Sonic Syndicate - Denied [Normal]
09:58 Niva: uhm, well, I'm thinking of PreviewTime: 181298 on all diffs
09:59 Niva: plus you must add 'Warning - Lyrics may be offensive!' on beatmap listing
10:00 Niva: Normal:
10:01 Niva: 01:08:573 (1,3)- add clap to both slider's end
10:08 P o M u T a: ;o
10:08 Niva: oh you're here xD
10:08 P o M u T a: hello :3
10:09 P o M u T a: thanks ;v; i check going~
10:09 Niva: okay~
10:10 P o M u T a: ok fixed
10:10 Niva: Insane
10:11 Niva: 00:48:173 (7)- new combo
10:11 P o M u T a: fmm, sure

fixed
10:11 Niva: 00:51:173 (6)- ctrl+g? (:
10:11 P o M u T a: o.o i like flow now ._.
10:12 Niva: oh okay...
10:12 Niva: 00:58:073 (2)- remove clap from slider's end
10:12 Niva: clap should be on 00:58:373 (3)-
10:12 Niva: 01:07:673 (8)- this also, clap should be on (9)'s start
10:13 P o M u T a: The sound is expressed there well. I was pointed out. o.o
10:13 P o M u T a: 00:58:073 (2)
10:14 Niva: umm if you decide to keep it
10:14 Niva: then add clap on 00:58:823 (6)- as well? xD
10:14 Niva: same for 01:08:273 (10)'s end
10:15 P o M u T a: okay
10:15 P o M u T a: 00:58:373 (3) should add?
10:16 P o M u T a: 00:58:373 (2) is keep now
10:16 Niva: umm no

10:16 P o M u T a: oh time miss
10:16 P o M u T a: okay
10:16 Niva: umm but i prefer if you used it on (3) and (6) though
10:17 P o M u T a: clap (3) and (6) better ?
10:17 Niva: yes~
10:17 Niva: 01:07:973 (9,10)- here also
10:17 Niva: (9)'s start + (10)'s end
10:18 P o M u T a: ok, sound is no problem and naturel feel fixed.
10:18 Niva: okay~
10:18 P o M u T a: so, 01:07:673 (8)- slider end is remove clap ok?
10:19 Niva: yep

10:19 P o M u T a: okay~
10:19 Niva: btw 02:33:773 (9)- maybe new combo?
10:19 P o M u T a: ok add NC
10:19 Niva: 02:43:973 (3,6)- here also clap
10:20 Niva: 02:43:673 (2)- remove clap from slider's start
10:20 Niva: *slider's end
10:20 P o M u T a: okay fixed both
10:20 Niva: 02:53:423 (4)- remove clap
10:20 Niva: 02:53:573 (1,4)- clap here (:
10:21 P o M u T a: question
10:21 P o M u T a: 01:54:173 ~ 01:56:498
10:21 P o M u T a: this place clap change o.o?
10:21 P o M u T a: same sound
10:21 Niva: umm no?
10:22 P o M u T a: 01:55:673 (2)- slider end
10:22 Niva: ...oh that
10:22 Niva: yes you can change if you want~
10:22 P o M u T a: :3
10:22 Niva: umm 03:01:373 (1)- until 03:03:173 (1)-
10:22 Niva: on drum snares like this
10:23 Niva: place claps ONLY on every (1), remove any other claps :3
10:23 P o M u T a: ok both clap only

10:24 P o M u T a: other all remove
10:24 Niva: umm I mean
10:24 Niva: 03:01:373 (1)- 03:01:823 (1)- 03:02:273 (1)- 03:02:723 (1)- 03:03:173 (1)-
10:24 Niva: remove other claps

10:24 P o M u T a: oh

10:24 P o M u T a: thanks ~
10:25 P o M u T a: fixed

10:25 P o M u T a: sorry ,_.
10:25 Niva: np

10:26 Niva: okay~
10:26 Niva: one other thing I'd like to suggest
10:26 Niva: on all diff
10:26 Niva: end the last spinner on 03:50:573, with 5% Soft hitsample
10:26 Niva: okay

10:28 Niva: oh btw remove rock from tags
10:28 Niva:

10:28 P o M u T a: ok f
10:29 P o M u T a: http://puu.sh/1GBYm
10:29 P o M u T a: this sampleset change ok?
10:29 Niva: yes~
10:30 Niva: umm btw don't update first, I want to recolor title text
10:30 P o M u T a: oh ! me too :3
10:31 P o M u T a: btw hard diff is not suggesiton o.o?
10:31 Niva: oh it's fine
10:31 Niva:

10:31 Niva: already checked
10:32 P o M u T a: okay~
10:34 P o M u T a: and Rock tag remove.
10:35 P o M u T a: but, not need o.o?
10:35 P o M u T a: so rock tag
10:35 Niva: yes~ not needed
10:35 Niva: in genre already (:
10:35 Niva: okay you can update now

10:35 P o M u T a: o.o
10:35 P o M u T a: thanks :3
10:36 Niva: np

10:36 P o M u T a: btw, I do not have a lot on the color of the title.
10:37 P o M u T a: But I wanted to change it.
10:37 Niva: umm?
10:37 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546624
10:37 P o M u T a: black and red !! oh sweet :3
10:37 P o M u T a: this colors okay
10:37 Niva:

10:39 P o M u T a: i upload o.o? wait ?
10:39 Niva: yes you can upload now~
10:39 P o M u T a: roger ~
10:40 P o M u T a: done
10:41 P o M u T a: if missing .. i go to change.
10:41 Niva: okay

10:41 Niva: you keep the preview point?
10:41 P o M u T a: fm, you suggesiton?
10:41 P o M u T a: i keep good. but, other very good preview point, i want ;3
10:42 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546629 orz

10:42 Niva: btw please add the lyrics warning at least~
10:42 P o M u T a: O:
10:45 Niva: umm updaetd?
10:45 P o M u T a: wait, Tshemmp
10:45 Niva: oh okay
10:45 P o M u T a: i talk
10:46 Niva: suggestion for Tshemmp's diff is only preview time and last spinner though, everything else is fine
10:48 P o M u T a: fmm , Tshemmp like 01:09:704- o.o
10:48 P o M u T a: i thinking time ._.
10:48 Niva: umm preview time?
10:48 P o M u T a: yes...
10:48 Niva: err okay, you can keep current preview time though
10:49 P o M u T a: ah sorry._. keep._/
10:49 Niva: np, but please add lyric warning on beatmap listing at least (:
10:49 P o M u T a: ah sorry
10:49 P o M u T a: 1 comment
10:49 P o M u T a: before
10:49 P o M u T a: i not look ._.
10:49 Niva: umm?
10:50 P o M u T a: so irc tag remove ._.
10:50 Niva: oh forgot to remove tag?
10:50 Niva: np, I'll wait
10:50 P o M u T a: rock tag is removed
10:50 P o M u T a: so , i forget ?
10:51 Niva: eh nope
10:51 Niva: lyric warning is something like this
10:51 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48045
10:51 Niva: ' Warning: Lyrics may be offensive'
10:51 P o M u T a: fm
10:52 P o M u T a: so 01:08:498
10:52 P o M u T a: 01:08:498- ?
10:52 Niva: ah, it should work good too~
10:52 P o M u T a: ok all diff fix wait :3
10:52 Niva: :3
10:55 P o M u T a: ok 68498 i update done!
10:56 Niva: umm I still don't see the warning in creator's words o.o
10:57 P o M u T a: o.o
10:57 P o M u T a: i what fixed should o.o?
10:57 Niva: umm, submit once more
10:57 Niva: in creator's words
10:57 P o M u T a: ok
10:58 Niva: add 'Warning : Lyrics may be offensive'
10:58 P o M u T a: ah
10:58 P o M u T a: i see
10:58 Niva: yep~
11:00 P o M u T a: Warning : Lyrics may be offensive
11:00 P o M u T a: ok
11:00 Niva: oh
11:00 Niva: okay~
11:01 P o M u T a: fixed. but big good?
11:01 Niva: I have to redownload first, please wait
11:01 Niva: yes

11:01 Niva: should be fine
11:01 P o M u T a: ok :3 and red color
11:02 Niva: ok ok :3
11:02 P o M u T a: ok
11:02 P o M u T a: fix!
11:02 Niva: please wait
11:02 P o M u T a: roger
11:40 Niva: umm P o M u T a
11:40 Niva: 03:11:573 (1,2)-
11:40 P o M u T a: o,o
11:40 Niva: Insane
11:40 Niva: I think to be safe you can just
11:41 Niva: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/546667
11:41 P o M u T a: little slip_
11:41 P o M u T a: ?
11:41 Niva: yep~
11:42 P o M u T a: x:62 y:288?
11:42 Niva: yes~
11:42 Niva: 03:11:873 (2)- ~x:448 y:289
11:43 P o M u T a: fm(1) and (2) y:288 , y289 different,, ok?
11:44 Niva: umm y:288 or 289 both is fine
11:44 P o M u T a: i think 288 . change
11:44 Niva: ok!~
11:44 P o M u T a: (1) x62
11:44 P o M u T a: (2) x448
11:45 P o M u T a: y 288!
11:45 Niva: umm~
11:45 P o M u T a: o.o
11:45 Niva: err?
11:45 Niva: nothing else actually
11:45 Niva: after it I'll rank
11:45 P o M u T a: ok! update
11:45 P o M u T a: wait~

Ranked ~

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2012-12-29T04:22:00+00:00

thanks Niva and LKs !! and everyone!!!

Cygnus

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Cygnus 2012-12-29T04:23:51+00:00

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