Frostmourne wrote:

as per your request

General
fine !

Easy
00:35:599 (5) - why place on that point ? even its curve goes well with 00:37:446 (1) - but it still plays strange between 00:35:138 (4) - and 00:35:599 (5) - though
if you decided to change it, please move 00:35:599 (5) - on the same position as 00:33:753 (1) - and ctrl+shift+r and move around -11 degree by selection centre to make it proper with the 00:37:446 (1) - 's tail Broke the Symetry and fix on your way because flow much better

SPOILER

02:12:061 (3) - maybe this slider's tail can go well with drum sampleset with adding clap, I tried once and it sounds same as the music actually sounds Ok, Done
02:16:676 (5) - add clap here ? to correspond with 02:13:446 (1) - 's tail Not really, is not exactly the same.
02:41:138 (1) - eh.. last green line wasn't snapped correctly (that's why the 30 volume doesn't work), snap it please Didn't I do that before? xD.. Fixed.
(162985 to 162984) -1 -_-"

Normal
02:04:215 (3) - not a big deal ,(still don't want to ruin the well symmetry there) from the 02:03:292 (2) - , it follows the vocal and 02:06:984 (3,4) - also follows the vocal surely, I would like to see following vocal rhythm on this too by moving 02:03:984 (3) - back 1/2 and extend slider to the 02:04:676 (old one) Follows the Instrumental here, i don't want to put a tones of 1/2 in this difficulty, I think that it is enough with 1/2s that I added
02:11:830 (5) - end with normal sample set? I think it fits well with the snare in the music I missed that. Added
02:21:753 (2,3) - same idea, would like to move (3) back 1/2 to make it go along with vocal well (it's the logic of this for now ! hope you change it) Same as before

Hard
02:06:523 (2) - start this slider with normal sample please, it sounds very empty here Added
02:36:292 (3) - move down about 2 grid would be the best because the curve almost touches 02:36:061 (2) - and doesn't look good imo Fixed then

Good luck : )

kosiga wrote:

hello mancusojuanmattos :3 Hi

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. fine very clean song folder =v=

[Easy]

1. 00:16:676 (2) - add whistle to end of the slider. constant whistle is good here like 00:19:907 (2,3,4,5). or 00:18:061 (4) - remove whistle to start of the slider, if remove here. I think the big white tick that you should put whistle as other Ok, Added
2. 00:26:369 (1,2,3) - It is not bad. However, i think some flows of 00:27:292 (2,3) are not natural. so the form that I suggest here http://puu.sh/1yOp7 Oh.. nice. Fixed with your code.
   
   SPOILER

   440,104,26369,6,0,P|467:151|463:205,1,110,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   372,268,27292,2,0,P|300:232|228:268,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   300,352,29138,2,0,P|347:379|401:375,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   492,312,30061,5,4,0:0:0

3. 00:46:215 (2) - this slider, chage to two circles. http://puu.sh/1yOyc I think this is the best flow, and appropriate to the symmetrical :3 I don't think so, to be sincere. The vocal becomes long instead of 2 different points. So, I prefer to keep it as it is.
4. 00:50:830 (3,1) - I prefer this finish pattern. but 00:50:830 (3) - As for me, it is audible in this repeat part o.o so i suggest to use the finish instead of whistle. and It is better when you give a volume change ( so for ex: 80⇒90% ). and 00:47:138 (3,4) - Here it is the same pattern. I suggest that you do it in the same way o.o? At the end I used Finish in bot cases (but I don't feel necesary the volume reduce)
5. 01:06:984 (1) - add whistle to end of the slider? The pattern that it matches 01:09:753 (3) - start whistle. Oke
6. 01:11:599 (2,3,4) - Better to be aligned parallel you look beautiful. http://puu.sh/1yP4L ( 01:12:523 (3) - x184,y192 ) Ok, Done.
7. 01:16:676 (4) - nazi. slider use 01:15:753 (3) - copy and Ctrl+c,v,h,j,g is better than now( ctrl+c,v,h) http://puu.sh/1yPaV I prefer to leave as it is. I like how it flows specially.
8. 01:40:215 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think center position here is very good looking. http://puu.sh/1yPkc Done
   
   SPOILER

   204,40,100215,6,0,P|256:24|308:40,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   352,140,101138,2,0,P|368:192|352:244,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   308,344,102061,2,0,P|256:360|204:344,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   160,244,102984,2,0,P|144:192|160:140,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   256,192,103907,5,4,0:0:0
   348,132,104369,1,0,1:0:0

9. 02:13:446 (1) - remove clap to end of the slider. I feel that it is not fit a little to use it for a sound only for here. That is too high-pitched tone clap to this song. As said frostmoune, It may come to be fit if I use it moderately I don't want, I really don't want. Listen the music properly deleting the Clap from there, and you will notice why I don't want to remove it.
10. 02:24:523 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yPHf ( Exchange of the rhythm ) I thoght repeat part more fit than now >< It is not necessary if you do not come to mind to change placement. I do not have an idea, too Sincerely, I totally agree with you, fits better with the vocal specially. Fixed
11. 02:36:523 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This simple straight form a little lonely in the last part o.o? For example, how is such a form? http://puu.sh/1yQnq ans then↓omg.. this flow perfectly and looks really fine. I liked it, fixed! :3
    
    SPOILER

    432,92,156523,2,0,P|378:85|329:110,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
    256,192,157446,1,2,0:0:0
    182,273,157907,2,0,P|133:298|80:292,1,110,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    8,208,158830,1,0,1:0:0
    108,164,159292,6,0,P|92:112,2,55,4|8|0,0:0|0:3|1:0,0:0:0
    216,140,160215,2,0,P|232:192,2,55,2|8|0,0:0|0:3|1:0,0:0:0

[Normal]

1. If you use OD,HD5 in Hard, I think that OD,HD3 is better for normal. Since it has already enough difficulty >.< Sounds coherent. Rearranged.
2. 00:14:831 (5) - why whistle here ? yep. Probably clap(normal hitsound) do not match it o.o? but I suggest that you use clap(normal hitsound) here, and 00:15:061 (x) - add note ( and add drum clap ). clap will come to be audible naturally~ >_<! Added the Normal Hitsound, but I don't agree with the Note suggestion, there is not a big thing to remark there
3. 00:16:677 (3) - add whistle to end of the slider. reason same as Easy diff. Added
4. 00:38:369 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is slightly different compared to the previous note. 00:30:984 (3,4,5) - 00:35:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest that along the vocal as these. so for ex like this: http://puu.sh/1yUfJ I don't agree about that. in a normal i think that the usage of constanstly 1/2 is not necesary because follow the music properly
5. 00:50:369 (4,5,1) - and 00:47:599 (5,1) - same as Easy 00:50:830 (3,1). 00:47:138 (3,4). 00:50:369 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider at least~ Done.
6. 00:57:061 (3) - very nazi. one grid left. Appearance of the DS haha. Moved anyways
7. 02:13:446 (1) - same as Easy diff. Sameas Easy.
8. 02:25:446 (4,5,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yUCA This is the first time rhythm. i mean 02:26:138 (5,1) - red tick⇒white tick rhythm. I thought and suggested that this might get a wrong timing by a play. I really think that it is ok for a Normal, I'm just following a part of the Vocal. So, I prefer to leave it as it is.
9. 02:35:599 (1) - add finish instead to clap(normal hitsound) to end of the slider. have a finish sound here and same as Easy diff ~ The Cymbals are acting there, so the finish is the most coherent hitsound here.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:062 (1) - Why is it that only hard has finish here o.o? You should put all it together because it is the first ? I had this in all diffs.. I forget to delete it here, deleted now.
2. 00:14:369 (6,7,1) - same as Normal 00:14:831 (5). Done.
3. 00:43:446 (1,2,3) - normalsound is unexpectedly bigger than softsound. 00:44:369 (3) - I felt that last 3 consecutive normalsound was very bigger than others. so i suggest 00:44:369 (3) - remove nromalsound to 1st repeat of the slider, and add normalsound to end of the slider. I hear this more naturally. or It is better if you adjusted to gradually raise the volume. Reduced the Volume since the 1st 1/4 Slider, I think that it is the best way.
4. 00:51:292 (6,1) - same as Easy 00:50:830 (3,1).
5. 02:03:292 (4) - Ctrl+G. i think it will better the flow more Agree
6. 02:12:292 (3) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/1yVso and also 02:13:677 (1,2,3) - this flow suggest. http://puu.sh/1yVuh The flow is really a bit better, the change is not necesary to have a really ugly overlap between (3,2) to increase the Symetry just a bit.
   
   SPOILER

   452,64,132292,2,0,P|384:104|368:32|296:48|256:96|256:96|216:48|144:32|128:104|60:64,1,425,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   72,148,133677,6,0,P|113:151|159:137,1,85,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   216,80,134138,2,0,P|256:64|256:64|294:80,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   357,139,134599,2,0,P|398:151|440:148,1,85,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0

7. 02:13:677 (1) - same as Easy 02:13:446 (1). No changes
8. 02:27:061 (5) - I thought this whistle was not necessary in a continuous note pattern. Removed
9. 02:37:446 (1,2) - 02:39:292 (1,2,3,4) - I thought that you did not put a jump till the last o.o! haha xD but It's no problem. I just said Since it is the end, i decided to add a thing a bit challenging

very neat map. Only small suggestion~

Star☆ and Good luck~

Roxas wrote:

I hope this won't be a nazi-modding your maps are perfect

[General]

maybe add a little sb or part of skin...
drum-hitclap has high volume in all the 3 difficulties is better to make lower volume when used that hitsound in my opinion Hmm.. I think that both things are good as it is. I prefer to leave it as it is.
add winter, present and other tags connected with christmas Added some tags as well.

[Easy]

00:52:676 (2,3) - Not perfect symmetrical Oh.. Fixed xD
01:11:138 (1) - I don't like this up... Move more left and down It flows fine for me.
02:06:984 (3) - A better blanket? o: Meh.. It is ok.

[Normal]

00:03:754 (5) - Maybe is confusing for a normal :/
00:29:138 (5) - ^ I don't think so
01:25:446 (1) - better stack (I'm feeling so nazimodder çAç) haha. Done


Hard is perfect D: Good job mancuso

jonathanlfj wrote:

Modding as requested
Christmas song~~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
i book that 5-star rating on the mp3~ you must really like the song
dat kiai time

[Easy]
01:18:061 (1) - add a drum clap on this? (if you apply it, do it on every diff for consistency) I think that with the finish is enough
01:20:830 (4) - this can blanket 01:18:984 (3) better Done
01:53:599 (3) - wow this note is almost touching the lower boarder (it will touch the hp bar oh hr)...if you can move it up 1 grid or 2 somehow that will be great Hmm.. It is ok for me, it is on-screen and if touches with the HP Bar with HR will not have a big problem
02:06:061 (1) - drum clap if you did the first one No..
02:13:446 (1) - yeah i agree to the previous post, that clap...how but just the normal-hitnormal? (for all diffs as well) Nope, I will not change this really
02:35:599 (1,2) - make this a repeat slider like 02:31:907 (1)? that hitsounding seems really cool, it needs to be used again

[Normal]
00:47:599 (5) - finish on slider end? Its supposed to follow the two-finish pattern you have Ok then
00:57:292 (4) - move this 2 grid right to get a perfect triangle (you can adjust the curve on the bottom for ds) Done
01:25:446 (1) - overlap like this on a normal? others usually tell me not to do it, but in this case it plays ok so i guess fine? It is a Simple Stack, the next object under the first Slider is another Slider, so they are really Easy to be followed.
01:42:984 (4) - whistle on end Oke.
01:59:138 (2,3) - this one plays better like this imo I prefer mine because the Slider Start with the word 'baby' and finish when the word 'please' finish
02:35:599 (1) - finish on end Done

[Hard]
00:03:985 (5) - finish on end
00:11:369 (1) - ^ Both added
00:29:138 (7) - based on what i hear in the music you should change this to a repeat slider but if you just follow the Vocal this said 'Hooome', with the Slider tick is enough I think
00:48:062 (8) - finish on head Oh.. Yes.
01:40:215 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - judging from the prominence of the music, the first measure should have the 1/1 circles while the second measure with the 1/2 sliders...at least that seems more intuitive imo But the Vocal is in 1/2 at the beginning, then she took a break and start the 1/1 in her voice
02:26:254 (10) - put a normal-hitnormal either on this or 02:26:369 (1), makes it sound better Yess.
02:27:292 (6) - also a normal-hitnormal on the slider head seems good too (makes it similar to 00:43:446 (1,2,3)) Agree.

Very great map! I can barely find any notable issues. Thanks :3
Good luck on ranking ^_^

Nemis wrote:

[Hard]
00:21:523 (3) - If you make this slider adherent with 00:21:062 (2) - it should really better Hmm.. I think that it is ok because follow the long voice properly
00:43:446 (1,2,3) - Too curved... linear sliders should be better Really? is not that curved to me. Also my patterns are in general curvy so I think that this provide a better transition
00:52:908 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern isn't fun to play (for me) I don't know why and what do you suggest me? I can't make anything if you just say me that.
01:12:754 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - Stacks should be better to watch and to play I'll keep the Compressed 3-plets, in my opinion flow better.
01:29:138 (1) - Distance from 01:28:677 (7) - :c Hmm.. Well moody suggested me that, but now I don't really agree. So, I prefer to Stack the Notes.
01:42:061 (1) - 3 squares up in the grid Ok
02:20:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not funny to play Why, and What do you suggest me? Please!!
02:24:754 (2,3,4,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Stacks should be better to watch and to play Nope.
02:36:292 (3) - 1 square up in the grid kkk

[Normal]
00:30:061 (1,2) - Symmetry I didn't want to play with symetry here.
02:31:907 (1,2,3) - Not sure about this..
02:39:292 (1,2,3) - Same ^ Hmm.. Why are you not sure? :/

[Easy]
00:10:215 (4) - Simmetry? If should be better at the center I'm making a blanke in there
00:19:907 (2,3,4,5) - Distance I didn't noticed that . Fixed
01:46:676 (5) - A slider like this should be better at the center... it's so random D: wow, sorry man but this was the most random thing that I've ever listen. This kind of Sliders, at the center? really?.. I think that you are wrong.
01:58:676 (1,2,3) - What about make this patterns symmetric? I'm trying to use less symetry now, and this pattern looks esthetic anyways. I'll not change that.

Nice map mancuso Good luck!

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Fine!

[Easy]
00:19:907 (2) - It may look better to me if you place like this. Ok.

01:02:369 (5) - Break suddenly makes me feel so strange.What about use a 1/1 slider instead?
01:06:061 (4) - hmm..as above Sounds Coherent both. So, Fixed.
01:27:984 - Normal sound effect sounds better to me. Nice.
02:13:907 - Mistake? What does this odd clap mean?- omg.. I'm really bored of that. Removed the Clap since a lot of people said me the same thing here.



[Normal]
00:03:754 (5) - Consider stacking it with 00:01:215 (2). Nah.. It provides the same effect as now.
00:51:753 (5,1) - Try stacking them together?.. It makes me feel more sensible.
01:06:523 (5,1) - As above.
01:47:599 (1,2) - ^ In general I don't stack two notes when the combo change.. Also the flow is better in my opinion, so I prefer to keep them as it is.
02:11:830 (5) - Let ppl realize that there is a tiny break between (4,5) better.




[Hard]
02:06:520 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
02:06:520 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). Fixed both.
00:00:523 (1) - Using finish instead of whistle makes me feel better <3. Ohh.. Yes.
00:18:985 (6) - What about removing this newcombo and add it to the next instead? (also remove NC which on 00:20:369 (2)). Hmm.. no. This way follow better my comboing and the I can remark the little jump with a NC.
01:03:523 (9) - Why not add newcombo to next instead of this? Then ppl can realize the 1/1 break between them.
01:51:523 (1,2,4) - Try making them line up. Hmm.. nah.. I like how it flows right now
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Excellent Mapset
Great Job

blissfulyoshi wrote:

HAI Mancuso. Bliss :3

I'm going to be randomly nazi. If something catches my eye during gameplay, I'll just write it down

Easy:
00:08:369 (2) - blanket 00:09:753 (3) better (Look at http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532070 if you need to see why) Yes, i fixed it xD
00:38:830 (2) - move the ending a few grids up so the slider looks like it points toward 3 (that seems to the type of flow you are aiming for) Ok
01:04:215 (2) - same as 00:08:369 (2) Done
01:26:830 (2) - I agree with Sonnyc that would look a lot better if it was not as sharp I feel it well, it flow fine, I think that it is not necesary to replace it imo.

Normal:
02:26:830 (1) - why did you add a new combo here? You didn't add one to 01:27:523 (4) Well, But I added a NC in 01:27:523. I dislike a Combo with 8 Notes in this diff.

Hard:
01:08:599 (5,7) - these would look better if they blanketed 6 better Moved a bit.
01:29:138 (1) - move down so it is not overlapped by the hp bar Ok
01:42:984 (3) - ^ But in this case, I don't agree with you. the touch is not that big and this is the best place to add a note. Anyways I moved it 1 grid down.
02:13:676 (1,3) - I feel that if you don't want sliders to be symmetric, you should accent its lack of symmetry more But.. I want them symetrics xD
02:33:292 (4) - I found it a little strange that you didn't want to align this with 3 (It seems to be your style) Done
02:38:830 (4) - try to make this blanket 02:38:138 (3) a little better since the curves don't seem to fit each other Fixed a bit.
(talked about combos being random on irc)

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Pretty nice overall. Tell me when you are done and I'll probably bubble.

CDFA wrote:

omg why did you give me such a good map you can't do this. lol. Thanks :3

Ok, let's go >w<~

Hard:
01:12:984 (3) - Add normal hitsample here
01:13:907 (8) - ^ Both added.
01:42:984 (3) - Nazi- Slightly touching the HP bar Moved 1 grid down as I explained in Bliss' mod.
02:39:984 (4,5) - Slightly mixed feelings about this. (4) looks weird near (3), but I'm not sure how to change it ;A;

Normal:
omg mancuso pls

Easy:
01:26:830 (2) - omg i thought I found something but then yoshi-nyan had to say the same thing
01:46:676 (5) - Make this curve deeper? No changes in both cases, since I think that they have a good flow

I like it owo