[General]
- Nothing! Perhaps consider adding some tags like "snow" or "winter"..? I'm not sure at all about this.. it is related to xmas but perhaps not related with the song at all.
- 00:27:292 (2) - I think it would be better of you place this slider more like this to make a better pattern with the previous slider (in the image the slider (2) is at x412 y284. I also rotated it a bit to make the pattern look better):
- 01:55:446 (2,3) - Perhaps consider replacing these notes with a slider? I think it would be better to avoid various consecutive notes, you know :3
- 02:05:138 (3) - Sort of similar suggestion mentioned about 00:27:292 (2):
- 02:13:446 (1) - What is this normal clap for? It doesn't fit with anything imo o.o you didn't use claps before so it sounds odd. I guess this is a little mistake.
- 02:19:907 (3) - Exactly same suggestion as at 02:05:138 (3).
- 02:40:215 (2) - I think this flows better if you place this slider more over here imo:
Really flawless! Just as I expected from you :3
- 00:01:908 (1) - This pattern flows much better if you place this note over here imo. Where it is now feels like.. forced to be there:
- 00:14:831 (5) - I suggest you to add a whistle here since it can be heard like a bell sound here.
- 00:18:292 (5) - Hmmm perhaps make this slider curved like this to make this pattern flow and look a bit better (at least that's what I think):
- 00:27:292 (2) - Hmm this is a minor detail. How about moving this slider more like this to make those 2 shapes look better together?:
- 00:42:061 (2,3) - I think that this pattern would flow better if you switch places in the timeline of these two sliders.
- 01:18:523 (3) - How about adding drums like in your easy diff? I think a clap-drum sound fits here. I'll not mention anymore drum suggestions :p try to apply these by yourself if you're going to, obviously xD
- 01:46:446 (5) - This blanket looks a bit bad since its border almost touch the border of the previous slider. I suggest you to move this slider to x:160 y:316.
- 01:59:138 (2) - ^ How about improving this blanket a bit too?:
- 02:10:907 (4,5) - This rhythm sounds weird. It doesn't follow the vocals at all. I think this rhythm fits much better with the music. I suggest you to try it to see if you like it:
- 02:13:446 (1) - This odd clap again like in your easy diff ;__;
- 02:18:753 (4) - I think this overlap would look better if you change the shape of this slider into a simple curved one, liike this:
- 02:26:138 (5) - I think that this note should be replaced with a short 1/2 slider :3 to follow the vocals. Just a suggestion!
- 02:35:599 (1) - Missing clap-drum here o.o? (ok this is the last thing i mention about drums xD and this time is for real)
Wow so many spoilerboxes! well i think this diff can be polished a lot with some mods, to improve it aesthetically
- 00:02:600 (2) - I think that the whistle at the start of this slider would sound better at the end of it, not at the start.
- 00:06:753 - Consider adding a note here since it is your hardest diff of your mapset? just to keep following the music constantly and to make this difficulty a bit more challenging.
- 00:10:446 - ^
- 00:44:831 (1) - This note feels a bit forced where it is placed imo. I would rather place it like this to make the map flow more naturally:
- 00:54:061 (1) - This nc isn't really necessary imo. I think all of these notes are part of the same verse.
- 01:03:984 - Same stuff mentioned at 00:06:753.
- 01:18:754 (3) - How about making this shape curved like this to make prettier patterns ?
- 01:41:600 (4) - Hmm why did you added whistle at the end istead of adding it at the start? I personally prefer how it sounds at the start
- 02:18:061 (3) - This blanket looks good but it kinda ruins the flow. I've spoted lots of cases like this one so it would be good if you take a look af these. If youre interested you can talk with me about it ingame :3
- 02:00:985 (6) - ^ but if you want to keep it, i would like to point out something veeery nazi. How about moving this note 1 grid to the left to make a perfect blanket?
- 02:08:599 - Same stuff about 00:10:446.
I think this diff would flow better if it didn't have so many blankets. These look very good but I think they derail the playability of the difficulty. Also, I think this difficulty should be a bit more challenging but that's up to you. Overall, you did a good work! It's very pleasant to see your mapping style so different and better than before.