Kei wrote:

I'M FIIIIIIIIIRST! damn. OMG!!.. (you said me: 'will be short' if I'm not wrong! xD)

[General]

1. Nothing! Perhaps consider adding some tags like "snow" or "winter"..? I'm not sure at all about this.. it is related to xmas but perhaps not related with the song at all. Not really, not all the Christmas song is totally relationed with Winter or Snow (like this), as you said. I'm fine with just xmas.

[Easy]

1. 00:27:292 (2) - I think it would be better of you place this slider more like this to make a better pattern with the previous slider (in the image the slider (2) is at x412 y284. I also rotated it a bit to make the pattern look better): Okie.
   
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2. 01:55:446 (2,3) - Perhaps consider replacing these notes with a slider? I think it would be better to avoid various consecutive notes, you know :3 In general the map is based in Slider Patterns, I prefer to keep it as it is now. I think that 3 Notes in 1/1 will not cause problems.
3. 02:05:138 (3) - Sort of similar suggestion mentioned about 00:27:292 (2): Fixed
   
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4. 02:13:446 (1) - What is this normal clap for? It doesn't fit with anything imo o.o you didn't use claps before so it sounds odd. I guess this is a little mistake.As i Said to Moody, the clap just emphatisize a bit the clap in the Intrumental, remove it and you will see that
5. 02:19:907 (3) - Exactly same suggestion as at 02:05:138 (3). Done.
6. 02:40:215 (2) - I think this flows better if you place this slider more over here imo: And the screenshoot?
   
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   Really flawless! Just as I expected from you :3 Thanks ya!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:908 (1) - This pattern flows much better if you place this note over here imo. Where it is now feels like.. forced to be there: Fixed a bit.
   
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2. 00:14:831 (5) - I suggest you to add a whistle here since it can be heard like a bell sound here. Hmm.. Ok.
3. 00:18:292 (5) - Hmmm perhaps make this slider curved like this to make this pattern flow and look a bit better (at least that's what I think): The flow is similar, but looks much better your way. Fixed.
   
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4. 00:27:292 (2) - Hmm this is a minor detail. How about moving this slider more like this to make those 2 shapes look better together?: Hmm.. I'm fine with them :/
   
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5. 00:42:061 (2,3) - I think that this pattern would flow better if you switch places in the timeline of these two sliders. The flow is too similar, really. In addition I think that you can move better the mouse in my way.
   
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6. 01:18:523 (3) - How about adding drums like in your easy diff? I think a clap-drum sound fits here. I'll not mention anymore drum suggestions :p try to apply these by yourself if you're going to, obviously xD Added and added another Drum Claps
7. 01:46:446 (5) - This blanket looks a bit bad since its border almost touch the border of the previous slider. I suggest you to move this slider to x:160 y:316. 1 Grid Up! Yey! xD. Moved anyways.
8. 01:59:138 (2) - ^ How about improving this blanket a bit too?: Ok
   
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9. 02:10:907 (4,5) - This rhythm sounds weird. It doesn't follow the vocals at all. I think this rhythm fits much better with the music. I suggest you to try it to see if you like it: I'm following just the vocal here. I prefer to keep that as it is.
   
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10. 02:13:446 (1) - This odd clap again like in your easy diff ;__; Same response.
11. 02:18:753 (4) - I think this overlap would look better if you change the shape of this slider into a simple curved one, liike this: Nah..this is just a simple thinks, i think that the overlap looks preety fine and playable. So, nope.
    
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12. 02:26:138 (5) - I think that this note should be replaced with a short 1/2 slider :3 to follow the vocals. Just a suggestion! Again, just following the Vocal.. there is no vocal on the Downbeat
13. 02:35:599 (1) - Missing clap-drum here o.o? (ok this is the last thing i mention about drums xD and this time is for real) Meh.. Added
    
    Wow so many spoilerboxes! well i think this diff can be polished a lot with some mods, to improve it aesthetically

[Hard]

1. 00:02:600 (2) - I think that the whistle at the start of this slider would sound better at the end of it, not at the start. Alright!
2. 00:06:753 - Consider adding a note here since it is your hardest diff of your mapset? just to keep following the music constantly and to make this difficulty a bit more challenging.
3. 00:10:446 - ^ I don't want any 1/2 spam, I think that both stops work fine with the music.
4. 00:44:831 (1) - This note feels a bit forced where it is placed imo. I would rather place it like this to make the map flow more naturally: Oh.. no!. It doesn't look forced, if you look fine the Slider end is looking to up, and not to the down. The flow is really correct here.
   
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5. 00:54:061 (1) - This nc isn't really necessary imo. I think all of these notes are part of the same verse. Hmm.. Well, Removed
6. 01:03:984 - Same stuff mentioned at 00:06:753. Same response.
7. 01:18:754 (3) - How about making this shape curved like this to make prettier patterns ? haha. Nice. Curved.
   
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8. 01:41:600 (4) - Hmm why did you added whistle at the end istead of adding it at the start? I personally prefer how it sounds at the start Oh.. I don't know what's happend here. Fixed.
9. 02:18:061 (3) - This blanket looks good but it kinda ruins the flow. I've spoted lots of cases like this one so it would be good if you take a look af these. If youre interested you can talk with me about it ingame :3 I think that I understan. Fixed.
10. 02:00:985 (6) - ^ but if you want to keep it, i would like to point out something veeery nazi. How about moving this note 1 grid to the left to make a perfect blanket? Fixed to increase the flow.
11. 02:08:599 - Same stuff about 00:10:446. Again...
    
    I think this diff would flow better if it didn't have so many blankets. These look very good but I think they derail the playability of the difficulty. Also, I think this difficulty should be a bit more challenging but that's up to you. Overall, you did a good work! It's very pleasant to see your mapping style so different and better than before.

Star de confianza :3 buena suerte Mancu! respondé en español si querés, a mi me gusta moddear en inglés así se entiende.

Buee.. Respondi en Ingles tambien xD..
Como me encantan tus mods y tenes ganas de ser MAT, voy a hacer una pequeña critica constructiva para tus mods siguientes, algunas veces intenta entender un poco mas al mapper, revisar bien el map en general y luego mencionar algo que esta mal. Por ejemplo, en la Hard creo que debiste ver bien lo que queria seguir porque en general siempre hay stops de Vocal en esas partes, despues un par de cosas que dijiste en la Normal pasó lo mismo. Espero que te sirva esto a vos (como me sirvio a mi el mod ).
Sigue asi y pronto te vere Violeta!!
Updated!!

Hola mancuso newbie newbie mod


[General]

• 02:13:907 Aun tengo la duda de que porque solo en este lugar usaste clap diferente a todos los demas ?

[Easy]

• 00:00:062 (1,2) Tengo una mejor idea en cuanto hisounds , Porque no haces esto :
• 00:50:830 (3) Este ritmo realmente no lo siento como la musica , yo preferiria que lo hagas de esta manera
Y bueno si lo haces asi ^ , Pon un Finish al final y el reverse del slider y en el circle va con la musica y suena bien

[Normal]

• 00:00:062 (1,2) Lo mismo que en Easy
• 00:08:831 (3) Solo es una sugerencia , cuando la jugue como que se me hace un poco raro sentirla con la musica , no seria mejor si
la mueves aqui 00:09:061

[Hard]

• 00:13:215 (x) Talvez podrias agregar un circle aca ?

No me gusta el Drum

Como sabes aun no soy bueno modeando pero ahi le voy , Suerte con el rank

IRC modding for the Easy, Normal, and the mapset in general. Here's the chatlog below.


Here, have a star on me.

XinCrin wrote:

Hola mancuso newbie newbie mod


[General]

• 02:13:907 Aun tengo la duda de que porque solo en este lugar usaste clap diferente a todos los demas ? Todo el mundo me lo pregunta, quitalo y te vas a dar cuenta que aparece en el Instrumental y es la unica vez que aparece en toda la cancion. Mi Clap tan solo enfatiza un poco, lo que escuchas es de la musica principalmente.

[Easy]

• 00:00:062 (1,2) Tengo una mejor idea en cuanto hisounds , Porque no haces esto : Sabes una cosa. Estoy completamente de acuerdo contigo, suena mucho mejor. Bien hecho :3. Fixed.

•00:00:062 (1) Quitale el Finish y ponle un whistle o simplemente solo.
•00:00:523 (2) Ponle el Finish solamente al comienzo del slider
En mi opinion suena mucho mejor

• 00:50:830 (3) Este ritmo realmente no lo siento como la musica , yo preferiria que lo hagas de esta manera Cierto. Arreglado

Y bueno si lo haces asi ^ , Pon un Finish al final y el reverse del slider y en el circle va con la musica y suena bien

[Normal]

• 00:00:062 (1,2) Lo mismo que en Easy Hecho
• 00:08:831 (3) Solo es una sugerencia , cuando la jugue como que se me hace un poco raro sentirla con la musica , no seria mejor si
la mueves aqui 00:09:061 Suena coherente. Movida

[Hard]

• 00:13:215 (x) Talvez podrias agregar un circle aca ? No realmente, no ahi, asi que spammearia de 1/2s innecesariamente

No me gusta el Drum Ya te acostumbraras

Como sabes aun no soy bueno modeando pero ahi le voy , Suerte con el rank

Hice la mayoria de lo que me dijiste. Gracias Xin

Roddie wrote:

IRC modding for the Easy, Normal, and the mapset in general. Here's the chatlog below.

chatlog

00:17 Roddie: okay the mapset in general
00:17 Roddie: i'd say its best to remove the letterbox
00:17 Roddie: during the breaks, it looks badly represented imo
00:18 mancusojuanmattos: Oh.. Agree.
00:18 mancusojuanmattos: my BG looks better in the break without it
00:18 Roddie: yes :D
00:18 Roddie: okay, as for the combo colors
00:19 mancusojuanmattos: tell me..
00:21 Roddie: it's probably a good idea to replace the 4th combo color. maybe something... pink? xD
00:22 Roddie: here's the color pattern that is selected
00:22 Roddie: http://puu.sh/1y2tl
00:23 mancusojuanmattos: I find it well the light brown, I find it coherent with the BG
00:23 Roddie: just a suggestion. you don't have to do it if you don't feel comfortable about it
00:23 Roddie: ah okay
00:23 mancusojuanmattos: Combo 1 is a pink, so I prefer to leave it as it is
00:23 Roddie: k
00:24 Roddie: on easy
00:24 Roddie: 00:56:369-A new combo could be fitting there. try it out!
00:25 mancusojuanmattos: that's true
00:25 mancusojuanmattos: Added.
00:25 Roddie: moving on to normal
00:26 mancusojuanmattos: oh..
00:26 Roddie: what is it?
00:27 mancusojuanmattos: the Easy was fast, just this xD
00:27 Roddie: oh, yea
00:27 Roddie: lol
00:28 Roddie: okay, on normal
00:28 Roddie: 02:26:830 (1)-Did you leave the spacing on this intentionally?
00:28 Roddie: imo, its best to keep the spacing consistent for this normal diff
00:29 mancusojuanmattos: since it is 3/2 between (5,1), I think that a little 'jump' will not cause a problem
00:30 mancusojuanmattos: btw, I did that for a bit of symetry
00:32 mancusojuanmattos: connection problem..
00:32 Roddie: its fine
00:32 mancusojuanmattos: I don't know if you responsed me something
00:32 mancusojuanmattos: do you?
00:32 Roddie: i was going to then you d/c
00:32 Roddie: i was about to say far enough
00:32 mancusojuanmattos: d/c?
00:33 Roddie: disconnected
00:33 mancusojuanmattos: oh.. did you read my response?
00:34 Roddie: oh yeah I did
00:35 mancusojuanmattos: oh.. wait, I will fix it xD
00:35 Roddie: okay, sure
00:35 Roddie: one more question I got to ask and this is out of curiousity
00:36 Roddie: 02:13:446 (1)-Why a normal clap on the end?
00:36 mancusojuanmattos: fixed and..
00:36 mancusojuanmattos: this part is weird, if you remove the Clap you will listen the same sound in the Instrumental
00:37 mancusojuanmattos: it is in the only part where this sound appear
00:37 mancusojuanmattos: my Normal Clap just emphatisize a bit this sound
00:37 Roddie: ah now I hear it
00:37 Roddie: very good sir!
00:38 mancusojuanmattos: in other parts like 02:17:599 (2)- appear but much lower than the first one.. So, I could cover it with
00:38 mancusojuanmattos:  the Normal sampleset
00:38 mancusojuanmattos: :3
00:43 Roddie: okay
00:43 Roddie: thank you for sharing that info
00:43 Roddie: oh and that's it
00:43 mancusojuanmattos: No problem and Thanks.

Here, have a star on me.

Thanks for the IRC and the Star Rod!! :3

Updated!!

Because of english song <3

Hard

00:20:369- if i were you i will copy previous slider to 3. slider
00:55:446- unnecessary finish

Normal

00:04:215- finish at the last
00:57:061- circle should move to 172.116

Easy

Clear

Hi~

[General]

1. Not sure if tick rate 1 fits better, or it's just me. >.</ Anyway, try tick rate 1 and I think you will like it
2. Enable letterbox during breaks? It just looks/plays better to me.
3. add tags Very Special because this song is a part of A Very Special Christmas 7 album. le wiki
4. I'd reduce volue of the second redline. Feels too loud. Try 70% instead?
5. Song fades out too fast, imo. Such a nice song and such a quick end! I want mooooooreeeeeeee >.</

[Hard]

1. 00:00:523 (2) - same for all diffs - since there's red point - it would be reasonable to point it out with new combo.
2. 00:10:446 - I've read your previous reply, but I think that this beat NEEDS note. remember, that you don't spam as long - as it fits! But if you still disagree, try moving (5) 1/2 later. I think it will work fine, too
3. 00:20:369 (1) - nazi - your style looks better now, but I still miss some of your good-old-mancuso's-style patterns. Try to do it the same shape as 00:19:446 (2) - just to be symmetrical.
4. 01:27:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - nazi (flow) - it plays a bit confusing to me even with NC. I'd try something different 1 is hidden under (1). It gives better, imo.

[Normal]

1. distance between 1/1 notes looks too long, but anyway, we cant'f fix it now.
2. 00:27:292 (2) - I understand yor rhythm but it feels weird when vocal starts at 00:27:523 - it feels a bit weird. try 1/2 slider started at 00:27:523.
3. 01:25:215 - how about beat here? Usually stacks here means 1/2 notes, so be consistent! put 1/2 notes here! It will fit with the music, too
4. 01:27:984 - I;d put circle here to follow vocals, it sunds good, imo. Try it!
5. 02:25:446 (4) - gives weird flow because there's beat at 02:25:215 - and players will probably start this slider in a wrong way.

[Easy]

1. Song is quie long. I'd use here two breaks here, because beginners need some time for rest

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good map

sorry for delay


General

clear

Easy
00:11:599 (1) - move to center and stack on 00:07:907 (1) - ? of course 00:10:215 (4) - moving to little down.you set some note on center. it is more good.
00:26:369 (1,2) - move to anti clockwise and 00:29:138 (3) - make more better blanket how about...http://puu.sh/1y6Eu
02:13:446 (1) - this sliders end,I think Drum clap is better
02:41:138 (1) - finish is little noisy. maybe remove it ?

Normal
00:01:908 (1) - remove nc
00:02:369 (2) - add nc
00:04:677 (4,1) - ^ your pattern is little confusing.
00:25:907 (7) - make straight line http://puu.sh/1y6Rh its good flow
02:13:446 (1) - same as easy
02:41:138 (1) - ^

Hard
00:03:292 (3) - make better blanket http://puu.sh/1y6Us
00:20:369 (1) - change to same form as 00:19:446 (2)
01:16:677 (7) - add more way point and make smooth slider http://puu.sh/1y6XW
02:13:677 (1) - same as easy
02:41:254 (1) - ^


That's all good map

Me gustaria poder ayudar con algo pero aun soy demasiadooooooooo noob para modear el mapa de un MAT futuro BAT ;___;
Solo te puedo dejar algunas estrellas :3
Suerte mancu-sensei o3o!

General

Hi M4M ! (＾∇＾)

Combo 3 and Combo 4 are quite similar. Maybe change it a bit...

Easy

01:06:523 Add a circle here to keep the rhythm
01:48:523 Same here
02:13:446 (1) - Slider End: Remove normal clap here since you didn't use it before.. // It doesn't fit.
02:41:138 (1) - Make the finish at the end a bit more silent.. EDIT: The green point is unsnapped! That's the problem.

Normal

00:52:215 (1) - Remove New Combo and put it....
00:52:676 (2) - here!
01:24:523 (4,1) - Could be a bit confusing for normal
02:13:446 (1) - Same here as in Normal
02:41:138 (1) - ^

Hard

02:13:677 (1) - The clap problem here again...

Nice sliders, good flow. Ready for rank!

That's it! If you have any questions ask them via PM or ingame!

Btw, Thanks for the Stars Yue:3

Thanks for those helpful mods! Updated!!

Such a mod hacker.

<3

as per your request

General
fine !

Easy
00:35:599 (5) - why place on that point ? even its curve goes well with 00:37:446 (1) - but it still plays strange between 00:35:138 (4) - and 00:35:599 (5) - though
if you decided to change it, please move 00:35:599 (5) - on the same position as 00:33:753 (1) - and ctrl+shift+r and move around -11 degree by selection centre to make it proper with the 00:37:446 (1) - 's tail
02:12:061 (3) - maybe this slider's tail can go well with drum sampleset with adding clap, I tried once and it sounds same as the music actually sounds
02:16:676 (5) - add clap here ? to correspond with 02:13:446 (1) - 's tail
02:41:138 (1) - eh.. last green line wasn't snapped correctly (that's why the 30 volume doesn't work), snap it please
(162985 to 162984) -1 -_-"

Normal
02:04:215 (3) - not a big deal ,(still don't want to ruin the well symmetry there) from the 02:03:292 (2) - , it follows the vocal and 02:06:984 (3,4) - also follows the vocal surely, I would like to see following vocal rhythm on this too by moving 02:03:984 (3) - back 1/2 and extend slider to the 02:04:676 (old one)
02:11:830 (5) - end with normal sample set? I think it fits well with the snare in the music
02:21:753 (2,3) - same idea, would like to move (3) back 1/2 to make it go along with vocal well (it's the logic of this for now ! hope you change it)

Hard
02:06:523 (2) - start this slider with normal sample please, it sounds very empty here
02:36:292 (3) - move down about 2 grid would be the best because the curve almost touches 02:36:061 (2) - and doesn't look good imo

Good luck : )

hello mancusojuanmattos :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. fine very clean song folder =v=

[Easy]

1. 00:16:676 (2) - add whistle to end of the slider. constant whistle is good here like 00:19:907 (2,3,4,5). or 00:18:061 (4) - remove whistle to start of the slider, if remove here. I think the big white tick that you should put whistle as other
2. 00:26:369 (1,2,3) - It is not bad. However, i think some flows of 00:27:292 (2,3) are not natural. so the form that I suggest here http://puu.sh/1yOp7
   
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   440,104,26369,6,0,P|467:151|463:205,1,110,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   372,268,27292,2,0,P|300:232|228:268,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   300,352,29138,2,0,P|347:379|401:375,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   492,312,30061,5,4,0:0:0

3. 00:46:215 (2) - this slider, chage to two circles. http://puu.sh/1yOyc I think this is the best flow, and appropriate to the symmetrical :3
4. 00:50:830 (3,1) - I prefer this finish pattern. but 00:50:830 (3) - As for me, it is audible in this repeat part o.o so i suggest to use the finish instead of whistle. and It is better when you give a volume change ( so for ex: 80⇒90% ). and 00:47:138 (3,4) - Here it is the same pattern. I suggest that you do it in the same way o.o?
5. 01:06:984 (1) - add whistle to end of the slider? The pattern that it matches 01:09:753 (3) - start whistle.
6. 01:11:599 (2,3,4) - Better to be aligned parallel you look beautiful. http://puu.sh/1yP4L ( 01:12:523 (3) - x184,y192 )
7. 01:16:676 (4) - nazi. slider use 01:15:753 (3) - copy and Ctrl+c,v,h,j,g is better than now( ctrl+c,v,h) http://puu.sh/1yPaV
8. 01:40:215 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think center position here is very good looking. http://puu.sh/1yPkc
   
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   204,40,100215,6,0,P|256:24|308:40,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   352,140,101138,2,0,P|368:192|352:244,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   308,344,102061,2,0,P|256:360|204:344,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   160,244,102984,2,0,P|144:192|160:140,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   256,192,103907,5,4,0:0:0
   348,132,104369,1,0,1:0:0

9. 02:13:446 (1) - remove clap to end of the slider. I feel that it is not fit a little to use it for a sound only for here. That is too high-pitched tone clap to this song. As said frostmoune, It may come to be fit if I use it moderately
10. 02:24:523 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yPHf ( Exchange of the rhythm ) I thoght repeat part more fit than now >< It is not necessary if you do not come to mind to change placement. I do not have an idea, too
11. 02:36:523 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This simple straight form a little lonely in the last part o.o? For example, how is such a form? http://puu.sh/1yQnq ans then↓
    
    SPOILER

    432,92,156523,2,0,P|378:85|329:110,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
    256,192,157446,1,2,0:0:0
    182,273,157907,2,0,P|133:298|80:292,1,110,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
    8,208,158830,1,0,1:0:0
    108,164,159292,6,0,P|92:112,2,55,4|8|0,0:0|0:3|1:0,0:0:0
    216,140,160215,2,0,P|232:192,2,55,2|8|0,0:0|0:3|1:0,0:0:0

[Normal]

1. If you use OD,HD5 in Hard, I think that OD,HD3 is better for normal. Since it has already enough difficulty >.<
2. 00:14:831 (5) - why whistle here ? yep. Probably clap(normal hitsound) do not match it o.o? but I suggest that you use clap(normal hitsound) here, and 00:15:061 (x) - add note ( and add drum clap ). clap will come to be audible naturally~ >_<!
3. 00:16:677 (3) - add whistle to end of the slider. reason same as Easy diff.
4. 00:38:369 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is slightly different compared to the previous note. 00:30:984 (3,4,5) - 00:35:138 (3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest that along the vocal as these. so for ex like this: http://puu.sh/1yUfJ
5. 00:50:369 (4,5,1) - and 00:47:599 (5,1) - same as Easy 00:50:830 (3,1). 00:47:138 (3,4). 00:50:369 (4) - add whistle to end of the slider at least~
6. 00:57:061 (3) - very nazi. one grid left. Appearance of the DS
7. 02:13:446 (1) - same as Easy diff.
8. 02:25:446 (4,5,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1yUCA This is the first time rhythm. i mean 02:26:138 (5,1) - red tick⇒white tick rhythm. I thought and suggested that this might get a wrong timing by a play.
9. 02:35:599 (1) - add finish instead to clap(normal hitsound) to end of the slider. have a finish sound here and same as Easy diff ~

[Hard]

1. 00:00:062 (1) - Why is it that only hard has finish here o.o? You should put all it together because it is the first ?
2. 00:14:369 (6,7,1) - same as Normal 00:14:831 (5).
3. 00:43:446 (1,2,3) - normalsound is unexpectedly bigger than softsound. 00:44:369 (3) - I felt that last 3 consecutive normalsound was very bigger than others. so i suggest 00:44:369 (3) - remove nromalsound to 1st repeat of the slider, and add normalsound to end of the slider. I hear this more naturally. or It is better if you adjusted to gradually raise the volume.
4. 00:51:292 (6,1) - same as Easy 00:50:830 (3,1).
5. 02:03:292 (4) - Ctrl+G. i think it will better the flow more
6. 02:12:292 (3) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/1yVso and also 02:13:677 (1,2,3) - this flow suggest. http://puu.sh/1yVuh
   
   SPOILER

   452,64,132292,2,0,P|384:104|368:32|296:48|256:96|256:96|216:48|144:32|128:104|60:64,1,425,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   72,148,133677,6,0,P|113:151|159:137,1,85,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
   216,80,134138,2,0,P|256:64|256:64|294:80,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   357,139,134599,2,0,P|398:151|440:148,1,85,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0

7. 02:13:677 (1) - same as Easy 02:13:446 (1).
8. 02:27:061 (5) - I thought this whistle was not necessary in a continuous note pattern.
9. 02:37:446 (1,2) - 02:39:292 (1,2,3,4) - I thought that you did not put a jump till the last o.o! haha xD but It's no problem. I just said

very neat map. Only small suggestion~

Star☆ and Good luck~

Thanks for both mods again guys
Updated!!

Te lo debia :p

[Easy]
01:53:599 (3) - Esta muy cerca de la orilla, incluso topa con ello
02:39:292 (1) - Podrias mover masel punto final del slider a direccion del stick 02:37:907 (5)

[Normal]
00:26:369 (1,2,3) - Se ve mas hermoso así http://puu.sh/1zFi5
01:25:446 (1) - Me confundi en el ritmo, podrias moverlo para reconocer mas el AR?

[Hard]
00:57:754 (4) - http://puu.sh/1zFou

Cristian wrote:

Te lo debia :p haha, me parece bien :3

[Easy]
01:53:599 (3) - Esta muy cerca de la orilla, incluso topa con ello El editor lo exagera un poco, si testeas el map, vas a ver que esta en la pantalla correctamente.
02:39:292 (1) - Podrias mover masel punto final del slider a direccion del stick 02:37:907 (5) Hmm.. nah. Me gusta asi como esta.

[Normal]
00:26:369 (1,2,3) - Se ve mas hermoso así http://puu.sh/1zFi5 haha, cierto. Se ve mas hermoso, asi que hecho
01:25:446 (1) - Me confundi en el ritmo, podrias moverlo para reconocer mas el AR? Es donde fluye mejor para mi, igual queda a consideracion si alguien mas lo menciona.

[Hard]
00:57:754 (4) - http://puu.sh/1zFou Por que no? Hecho

Gracias Kuri!
Updated!!

I hope this won't be a nazi-modding your maps are perfect

[General]

maybe add a little sb or part of skin...
drum-hitclap has high volume in all the 3 difficulties is better to make lower volume when used that hitsound in my opinion
add winter, present and other tags connected with christmas

[Easy]

00:52:676 (2,3) - Not perfect symmetrical
01:11:138 (1) - I don't like this up... Move more left and down
02:06:984 (3) - A better blanket? o:

[Normal]

00:03:754 (5) - Maybe is confusing for a normal :/
00:29:138 (5) - ^
01:25:446 (1) - better stack (I'm feeling so nazimodder çAç)


Hard is perfect D: Good job mancuso

02:13:907 - Wtf is that Clap in all diffs ? ;-;

Perfect as always ..

Modding as requested
Christmas song~~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
i book that 5-star rating on the mp3~ you must really like the song
dat kiai time

[Easy]
01:18:061 (1) - add a drum clap on this? (if you apply it, do it on every diff for consistency)
01:20:830 (4) - this can blanket 01:18:984 (3) better
01:53:599 (3) - wow this note is almost touching the lower boarder (it will touch the hp bar oh hr)...if you can move it up 1 grid or 2 somehow that will be great
02:06:061 (1) - drum clap if you did the first one
02:13:446 (1) - yeah i agree to the previous post, that clap...how but just the normal-hitnormal? (for all diffs as well)
02:35:599 (1,2) - make this a repeat slider like 02:31:907 (1)? that hitsounding seems really cool, it needs to be used again

[Normal]
00:47:599 (5) - finish on slider end? Its supposed to follow the two-finish pattern you have
00:57:292 (4) - move this 2 grid right to get a perfect triangle (you can adjust the curve on the bottom for ds)
01:25:446 (1) - overlap like this on a normal? others usually tell me not to do it, but in this case it plays ok so i guess fine?
01:42:984 (4) - whistle on end
01:59:138 (2,3) - this one plays better like this imo
02:35:599 (1) - finish on end

[Hard]
00:03:985 (5) - finish on end
00:11:369 (1) - ^
00:29:138 (7) - based on what i hear in the music you should change this to a repeat slider
00:48:062 (8) - finish on head
01:40:215 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - judging from the prominence of the music, the first measure should have the 1/1 circles while the second measure with the 1/2 sliders...at least that seems more intuitive imo
02:26:254 (10) - put a normal-hitnormal either on this or 02:26:369 (1), makes it sound better
02:27:292 (6) - also a normal-hitnormal on the slider head seems good too (makes it similar to 00:43:446 (1,2,3))

Very great map! I can barely find any notable issues.
Good luck on ranking ^_^

Thanks guys!
Updated!!

Edit: ... you ninjja'd me D: let's see what you already have fixed what i suggested xDD

[General]
- not a fan of your KIAI fountains ._. I would like to see KIAI for the whole choruses and not just for the last one

[Hard]

1. 00:04:446 (6,1) - the transition between this to is not so good imo. It interupts the flow. I don't see a suggestion to fix that though
2. 00:06:753 - I really miss a note here, because the sliders before also followed the beat and not this long sound that starts at 00:06:061 -
3. 01:00:985 (4,5) - I don't really like the stack for some reason. It is not like it does not fit here completly but idk. i would prefer a 0.2/0.1x stack or so orz

I don't know what bothers me witht this map. it is nicely mapped but idk. the spacing is often choppy for the flow imo ._.
01:01:215 (5,6,7) - here for example but i guess it is just me

[Normal]

1. 00:42:061 (2,3) - ctrl + h. That has a better transition from (1) to (2) and from (3) to (1,2), because well it as a friendlier flow
2. 01:11:599 (2) - X: 256 Y: 156. Plays better imo
3. 02:03:292 (2,3) - I see what you did there but that spacing brought me a Combo miss >.< I recommemd something like 1.0x and trying to keep that pattern or something ._.
4. 02:26:138 (5) - stack under sliderend (4). Feels better for me, because it emphasizes on the vocal like it were a hold ... wow what a strange way to describe it orz

I like this diff :3 It is very nice

[Easy]

1. 00:19:907 (2,3) - flow is ... i don't know. I think it could be better

great diff

Yeah didn't find that much but oh well maybe it helps

bomber34 wrote:

Edit: ... you ninjja'd me D: let's see what you already have fixed what i suggested xDD

[General]
- not a fan of your KIAI fountains ._. I would like to see KIAI for the whole choruses and not just for the last one I really prefer the fountains this time because if I don't do that the map would be full of Kiai and I don't want that this time.

[Hard]

1. 00:04:446 (6,1) - the transition between this to is not so good imo. It interupts the flow. I don't see a suggestion to fix that though Sorry, but I have to say that I'm totally disagree with you, I did that a pair of times before too, I think it doesn't affect in the flow.
2. 00:06:753 - I really miss a note here, because the sliders before also followed the beat and not this long sound that starts at 00:06:061 - The note is not necesary but I fix this in my own accord
3. 01:00:985 (4,5) - I don't really like the stack for some reason. It is not like it does not fit here completly but idk. i would prefer a 0.2/0.1x stack or so orz I didn't understand you really well

I don't know what bothers me witht this map. it is nicely mapped but idk. the spacing is often choppy for the flow imo ._.
01:01:215 (5,6,7) - here for example but i guess it is just me

[Normal]

1. 00:42:061 (2,3) - ctrl + h. That has a better transition from (1) to (2) and from (3) to (1,2), because well it as a friendlier flow Ok
2. 01:11:599 (2) - X: 256 Y: 156. Plays better imo Hmm.. Ok
3. 02:03:292 (2,3) - I see what you did there but that spacing brought me a Combo miss >.< I recommemd something like 1.0x and trying to keep that pattern or something ._.
4. 02:26:138 (5) - stack under sliderend (4). Feels better for me, because it emphasizes on the vocal like it were a hold ... wow what a strange way to describe it orz Stacks under Slider cause confusion in an average player, I think that it is ok this way

I like this diff :3 It is very nice

[Easy]

1. 00:19:907 (2,3) - flow is ... i don't know. I think it could be better But.. Why? :/

great diff

Yeah didn't find that much but oh well maybe it helps

Thanks for mod! :3
Updated!!

Nice map mancuso Good luck!

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Fine!

[Easy]
00:19:907 (2) - It may look better to me if you place like this.
01:02:369 (5) - Break suddenly makes me feel so strange.What about use a 1/1 slider instead?
01:06:061 (4) - hmm..as above
01:27:984 - Normal sound effect sounds better to me.
02:13:907 - Mistake? What does this odd clap mean?-



[Normal]
00:03:754 (5) - Consider stacking it with 00:01:215 (2).
00:51:753 (5,1) - Try stacking them together?.. It makes me feel more sensible.
01:06:523 (5,1) - As above.
01:47:599 (1,2) - ^
02:11:830 (5) - Let ppl realize that there is a tiny break between (4,5) better.




[Hard]
00:00:523 (1) - Using finish instead of whistle makes me feel better <3.
00:18:985 (6) - What about removing this newcombo and add it to the next instead? (also remove NC which on 00:20:369 (2)).
01:03:523 (9) - Why not add newcombo to next instead of this? Then ppl can realize the 1/1 break between them.
01:51:523 (1,2,4) - Try making them line up.
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Excellent Mapset
Great Job

Thanks guys. Updated!!

Hello~

Easy:

01:04:215 (2) - 1 Grid Right and down to make the space closer.. (nazi)
01:26:830 (2) - Imo, the curve being more rounder will make a better shape
02:06:523 (2) - 1 Grid up (nazi)
02:12:984 (4) - How about a drum-clap instead?

Normal:

00:08:830 ( ) - I would also made this place empty, but also consider adding a note since there is a strong beat at the song
01:57:753 (5) - I don't know how to do, but I can say that you can make this more like.. a parallel with (4)

Hard:

00:31:676 (4) - Idk if this is a symmetry pattern, but if so, 1 grid left, and then respace some notes after this
01:06:523 (6) - Shape like 01:54:061 (6)?
01:29:138 (1) - I would prefer to place somewhere else, instead of stacking. At (256,328) or something?
02:13:676 (1) - Was this the odd Clap mentioned at the previous mods? Hope you to make this consistent with other diffs~
02:25:676 (8) - Make a line with (6,7)?

Good map~~~
Star

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

Easy:

01:04:215 (2) - 1 Grid Right and down to make the space closer.. (nazi) Done
01:26:830 (2) - Imo, the curve being more rounder will make a better shape Hmm.. I'm ok with it.
02:06:523 (2) - 1 Grid up (nazi) Done
02:12:984 (4) - How about a drum-clap instead? true. fixed.

Normal:

00:08:830 ( ) - I would also made this place empty, but also consider adding a note since there is a strong beat at the song I don't listen anything to be emphatisized here. i leave it as it is.
01:57:753 (5) - I don't know how to do, but I can say that you can make this more like.. a parallel with (4) Hmm... I think that it is ok

Hard:

00:31:676 (4) - Idk if this is a symmetry pattern, but if so, 1 grid left, and then respace some notes after this Fixed
01:06:523 (6) - Shape like 01:54:061 (6)? Nah.. it is ok as it is.
01:29:138 (1) - I would prefer to place somewhere else, instead of stacking. At (256,328) or something? Well.. I moved to another place.
02:13:676 (1) - Was this the odd Clap mentioned at the previous mods? Hope you to make this consistent with other diffs~ Removed
02:25:676 (8) - Make a line with (6,7)? Nah.. I made this because it provides a little blanket to the previous (5)

Good map~~~
Star

Thanks for mod man! Updated!!

HAI Mancuso.

I'm going to be randomly nazi. If something catches my eye during gameplay, I'll just write it down

Easy:
00:08:369 (2) - blanket 00:09:753 (3) better (Look at http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/532070 if you need to see why)
00:38:830 (2) - move the ending a few grids up so the slider looks like it points toward 3 (that seems to the type of flow you are aiming for)
01:04:215 (2) - same as 00:08:369 (2)
01:26:830 (2) - I agree with Sonnyc that would look a lot better if it was not as sharp

Normal:
02:26:830 (1) - why did you add a new combo here? You didn't add one to 01:27:523 (4)

Hard:
01:08:599 (5,7) - these would look better if they blanketed 6 better
01:29:138 (1) - move down so it is not overlapped by the hp bar
01:42:984 (3) - ^
02:13:676 (1,3) - I feel that if you don't want sliders to be symmetric, you should accent its lack of symmetry more
02:33:292 (4) - I found it a little strange that you didn't want to align this with 3 (It seems to be your style)
02:38:830 (4) - try to make this blanket 02:38:138 (3) a little better since the curves don't seem to fit each other
(talked about combos being random on irc)

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Pretty nice overall. Tell me when you are done and I'll probably bubble.

omg why did you give me such a good map you can't do this.

Ok, let's go >w<~

Hard:
01:12:984 (3) - Add normal hitsample here
01:13:907 (8) - ^
01:42:984 (3) - Nazi- Slightly touching the HP bar
02:39:984 (4,5) - Slightly mixed feelings about this. (4) looks weird near (3), but I'm not sure how to change it ;A;

Normal:
omg mancuso pls

Easy:
01:26:830 (2) - omg i thought I found something but then yoshi-nyan had to say the same thing
01:46:676 (5) - Make this curve deeper?

I like it owo

Thanks guys!
Time to Update!!

Mostly hitsound mods.

~Easy~
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms

~Normal~
• OD is too low imo
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms
01:09:753 (4) - this slider have different sounds compared to the current part since 00:59:599
01:18:523 (3) - sounds out of place, use clap instead

~Hard~
• OD is too low imo
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms
00:01:907 (5) - add clap
00:14:369 (5) - NC
01:10:215 (8) - this slider have different sounds compared to the current part since 00:59:599
02:24:869 (3) - add clap
02:24:984 (4) - remove clap
02:26:715 (3) - add clap
02:26:830 (4) - remove clap
02:27:753 (7) - add clap on the 3th and 4th note, but I suggest use this clap pattern : • clap ○ none : (6) ○•○• (7) ○•••
02:33:292 (4) - remove finish at middle
02:37:446 (1) - remove finish

DJPop wrote:

Mostly hitsound mods.

~Easy~
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms Agree with you. Fixed.

~Normal~
• OD is too low imo Ok, Increased it by 1 Tick
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms ~
01:09:753 (4) - this slider have different sounds compared to the current part since 00:59:599 Hmm.. Sounds good for me.
01:18:523 (3) - sounds out of place, use clap instead Oh.. yes. Fixed.

~Hard~
• OD is too low imo OD+1 here.
• Timing 62 - I'm not sure if this is necessary, you can use only 1 red timing at -1322ms ~
00:01:907 (5) - add clap
00:14:369 (5) - NC Both things fixed.
01:10:215 (8) - this slider have different sounds compared to the current part since 00:59:599 Because the Rhythm is different, and the music is different too.
02:24:869 (3) - add clap
02:24:984 (4) - remove clap
02:26:715 (3) - add clap
02:26:830 (4) - remove clap I prefer to leave it as it is, because follow better the music in my point of view.
02:27:753 (7) - add clap on the 3th and 4th note, but I suggest use this clap pattern : • clap ○ none : (6) ○•○• (7) ○••• Hmm.. I think that my hitsound pattern sounds more coherent with the drums, really. I'll leave it as it is, sorry
02:33:292 (4) - remove finish at middle
02:37:446 (1) - remove finish emm.. ok, both Removed

Thanks for your mod Pop! :3. I'll try to mod your map then!

Small Changelog:
Adjusted a kiai section to fall on the downbeat
Hard: 02:13:677 (1,3) - made these blanket 02:12:293 (3) slightly better (still not perfect but whatever)

Not fully confident of the timing, but confident enough to award a bubble.

Merry Christmas!

aww it got bubbled ><.

oh well GL on the rank <3.

Thanks Byaku-nyan! :3
And ofc, thanks for the bubble to Bliss (well, I said thanks him in-game anyways xD)

Hi mancuso!

~General~

1. Honestly, I don't like the actual preview time. I would set PreviewTime: 75466 when the vocal is starting.
2. I feel your current offset late. I have -7 from your current one. Change it only if you agree with it, don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes.
3. Why don't you add custom clap instead of default settings for sounds like 00:00:985 / 00:01:908 / 00:02:831 and so on? Hitsound patterns look to be too empty.

~Easy~

1. 01:53:601 (3) - I think this circle could be moved some grid up. It is almost offscreen and the hitburst is, exactly, offscreen, and it's bad imo.
2. 02:28:216 (2,1) - Mh, if you want to keep consistency with all the other patterns you should switch new combo here. You have always used it on downbeats according to finish hitsounds.
3. 02:34:677 (4) - Missing whistle on the slider head? It would be consistent with previous two sliders and with 02:38:370

~Normal~

1. 00:02:370 (4) - Add whistle on the tail, to keep consistency with 00:06:062 (3). It's too empty without that whistle IMO xD
2. 00:58:678 (6,7,8) - I would change with 1/2 slider with repeat, I don't like stacks in easy/normal diffs
3. 01:07:447 (2) - Missing whistle on the tail? There should be one, maybe.
4. 02:10:677 (3,4,5) - To be honest, this rhythm is a bit confusing. Beginners could be confused, everyone would think the rhythm is:
5. 02:30:524 (4) - I guess you are missing again whistle on the tail
6. 02:34:677 (6) - On the head, this time

~Hard~

1. 00:05:831 (3,1) - I would unstack them because of (1) new combo
2. 00:20:370 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 00:23:601 (5) - New combo
4. 00:24:524 (1) - Remove new combo. I think this combo pattern fit better with the map
5. 00:51:754 (1,2) - Switch new combo. It looks more logical
6. 02:37:447 (1) - Remove new combo

I'm late seems ;_;

Chewin wrote:

Hi mancuso!

~General~

1. Honestly, I don't like the actual preview time. I would set PreviewTime: 75466 when the vocal is starting. Ok, Agree.
2. I feel your current offset late. I have -7 from your current one. Change it only if you agree with it, don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes. Hmm.. yes, sounds a bit better I think. Fixed.
3. Why don't you add custom clap instead of default settings for sounds like 00:00:985 / 00:01:908 / 00:02:831 and so on? Hitsound patterns look to be too empty. Hmm.. I don't agree with that.. In general I used this kind of Custom Claps in previous maps, and in this one especially I think that sounds coherent. I'll not change that, sorry.

~Easy~

1. 01:53:601 (3) - I think this circle could be moved some grid up. It is almost offscreen and the hitburst is, exactly, offscreen, and it's bad imo. Ok, Ok.. I also moved the previous Sliders because I want to keep the blanket.
2. 02:28:216 (2,1) - Mh, if you want to keep consistency with all the other patterns you should switch new combo here. You have always used it on downbeats according to finish hitsounds.Agree
3. 02:34:677 (4) - Missing whistle on the slider head? It would be consistent with previous two sliders and with 02:38:370 Not really, because the music here doesn't sound like the previous 2 Sliders. If you listen the music properly you will notice that

~Normal~

1. 00:02:370 (4) - Add whistle on the tail, to keep consistency with 00:06:062 (3). It's too empty without that whistle IMO xD You know, I added this Whiste but I removed the one in 00:06:062, it is not following anything in the music, at least is not following the things that I want to follow in the music.
2. 00:58:678 (6,7,8) - I would change with 1/2 slider with repeat, I don't like stacks in easy/normal diffs I think that an average player should start understanding this kind of things. No changes, sorry.
3. 01:07:447 (2) - Missing whistle on the tail? There should be one, maybe. Hmm.. I don't think so. It is not following a Vocal or a Instrumental properly I guess.
4. 02:10:677 (3,4,5) - To be honest, this rhythm is a bit confusing. Beginners could be confused, everyone would think the rhythm is: Hm..Really? I don't think so because an average player try following the Vocal especially, and this pattern follow the Vocal, you know this is a Normal, so they should understand more things about the gameplay I think.. In addition, I don't see the difficult in the pattern.
5. 02:30:524 (4) - I guess you are missing again whistle on the tail Added this one.
6. 02:34:677 (6) - On the head, this time But not this one.

~Hard~

1. 00:05:831 (3,1) - I would unstack them because of (1) new combo
2. 00:20:370 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 00:23:601 (5) - New combo
4. 00:24:524 (1) - Remove new combo. I think this combo pattern fit better with the map
5. 00:51:754 (1,2) - Switch new combo. It looks more logical All added here.
6. 02:37:447 (1) - Remove new combo This one is to reamrk the jump. So, I prefer to leave it as it is.

Thanks Chewin! :3. Updated!!

I can't rank this because of timing changes, orz.
Rebubbled ~

Merry Christmas, Mancuso!

Ranked~

Gratz~

Gossip Gurrl bby

Oh Andrea is back ♥

Merry Christmas, mancuso. Gratz on the rank :3

Congratz Mancuso

UnderminE wrote:

Gossip Gurrl bby

leighton <33333

also, gz on the rank

Felicitaciones! lo lograste justo para la fecha como querías.

Felicitaciones mancu-sensei x3

Congratulation mancuso!

Oh... WTF? I didn't expect that xD
Thanks guys (especially Andrea for the Rank) and Merry Christams to everybody! :3

Congratz <3