1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.

1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3

1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    

    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    

    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-

16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.

1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end

1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
2. 01:28:572 - ^
3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    

    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047

13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!

Flask wrote:

Request from my Queue~

[General]

1. Owari no Hoshi no Love Song to Source? youtube says it's from this anime, so it should be in source not tags
2. Add Invincible to tags due to the name
3. You need to make kiai time inconsistency in your diff.

[Easy]

1. tick rate 1? Seems nice because you're SV is low a bit, will be messy if tick rate 2 D:
2. 00:18:572 (1) - remove clap to finish? I don't think clap here is nice
3. 00:29:429 (2) - (end) clap due to your clap rule (:
4. 00:33:715 (2) - clap here and remove clap on (3)
5. 00:35:715 (1) - remove nc to fit the song, and you use 3 ncs in here, that's a bit messy D:
6. 00:38:715 (2) - remove a reserve and put it on 00:38:715 - to fit the song, the vocal is very individual here. And you can add clap at the begin & end to fit the song
7. 00:40:858 (2) - ^
8. 00:43:144 (2) - ^
9. 00:47:715 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:50:001 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:42:572 (2) - ^
12. 01:44:858 (2) - ^
13. 01:47:144 (2) - ^
14. 01:51:715 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:48:287 (3) - ^
16. 03:50:573 (2) - ^
17. 03:57:430 (3,4) - ^
18. 00:46:001 (1) - remove nc, you don't need to nc here
19. 00:59:429 (3) - clap here? sounds nice imo :3
20. 01:00:858 (2) - (end) you missed the clap
21. 01:01:715 (3) - ^
22. 01:02:001 (1) - finish at begin, remove clap at end, finish+clap is a bit noisy
23. 01:03:144 (2) - finish at begin & end, remove clap at end to keep inconsistency with (1)?
24. 01:12:287 (1) - This spinner is a bit short in an over 200bpm song, and we're talking about Easy diff. Maybe use a 4/1 slider instead?
25. 01:30:715 (2) - Add a reserve to fit the song, and add clap at begin, end and reserves to make the volume stronger
26. 01:36:287 (2,3) - Sounds great if add clap at the first & the third short white tick, and remove clap from the second short white tick
27. 01:38:572 (1) - Stop at 01:40:287 - to make more distance between this spinner and 01:41:429 (1) - ?
28. 02:03:715 (1,2) - missed clap at the end, breaks the rhythm D:
29. 02:10:572 (1) - ^ (reserve)
30. 02:12:287 (2) - ^ (begin), and remove clap at end due to your clap rule
31. 02:22:001 (1) - (begin,end) finish?
32. 02:28:858 (1) - finish to keep inconsistency with 02:26:572 (1) - , and it's a good point to add finish :3
33. 02:31:144 (1) - finish+clap is tooooo noisy imo, remove clap here
34. 02:34:572 (2) - remove finish from the end, it's a bit noisy and you've added finish on the downbeat on (1) before, to keep inconsistency with (1) is great
35. 02:35:715 (1) - (end) finish, same reason as above :3
36. 03:03:144 (1) - finish to fit with song? There's a sound in the song lol
37. 03:13:287 (1,1) - Use a slider instead these two notes would be more readable imo
38. 03:21:715 (1) - clap at the end due to your clap rules
39. 03:26:287 (1) - ^
40. 04:10:573 (2) - ^
41. 04:11:716 (1) - finish+clap is noisy again.
42. 04:22:001 (2) - finish at begin?
43. 04:41:144 (4) - (nazi) clap at the end? The music is individual here so...
44. 04:55:769 - Add a note here
45. 05:03:269 (1) - whistle? There's some piano sound, so whistle would be great i think
    You need to improve your hitsound, it's weird and messy. Placement is good imo :3

[Normal]

1. I'd suggest you to AR-1 OD-1 HP-1 because the bpm is high
2. 00:18:572 (1) - (end) clap
3. 00:21:715 (2) - clap
4. 00:30:572 (2) - Can you make it 1/2 shorter, than add a reserve? fit the vocal is a good idea because the vocal here's individual :3
5. 03:40:287 (2) - ^
6. 00:38:572 (4) - (end) finish
7. 00:48:858 (2) - ctrl+G this due to (1)'s end is at right, but (2)'s begin is at left, that's a bit hard to "normal"
8. 03:58:573 (2) - ^
9. 00:59:715 (1) - clap at the end
10. 01:02:858 (2) - clap
11. 01:09:429 (2) - remove finish at the begin because there's no finish sound
12. 01:12:287 (2) - remake this slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474670
    

    316,108,72287,2,0,B|408:92|472:136|488:208|484:268|464:332|388:344|344:340|300:316,1,440.000002384188,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

13. 01:29:430 (1) - ^
14. 04:22:002 (2) - ^
15. 01:22:572 (1) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474678
    

    224,36,82572,6,0,B|140:24|64:48|12:96|-8:160|-

16. 01:24:858 (1,1) - ^
17. 01:24:287 (2,3) - I'd suggest you to delete these sliders and put note at 01:24:429 - and 01:24:715 - , what you did is a bit hard to newbies
18. 01:26:573 (2,3) - ^ (01:26:715 - and 01:27:001 - )
19. 01:32:001 (1) - Spacing? I hate jumps D:
20. 01:50:287 (2) - clap at the begin
21. 01:56:858 (1,2) - clap at end to keep clap inconsistency
22. 02:04:287 (3) - (nazi) remove clap at the begin? Sounds weird but it's ok to me D:
23. 02:12:858 (1) - clap at end
24. 02:24:287 (1) - Umm.. Try this, not a big change but you better fix, because what you did is ugly imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474685
25. 02:26:858 (2) - clap to keep inconsistency
26. 02:33:429 (1,2,3) - This overlap is not clear, newbie will be messy here, please fix it.
27. 03:14:001 (3) - put on 03:13:858 - ? fits the vocal is a good idea imo
28. 03:24:287 (2) - I know you're making like this to fit with the vocal, but I suggest you 1/2 longer this slider. Sounds really weird here
29. 03:28:287 (1) - clap at the end to keep inconsistency
30. 03:39:144 (4) - touches the hp-bar a little bit, it's not hard to fix it, right? (:
31. 03:39:715 (1) - clap at the end
32. 04:18:573 (1) - ^
33. 04:40:287 (3) - ^
34. 04:40:001 (2) - clap
35. 04:40:858 (4) - clap at begin, end and reserves? There's a sounds :3
36. 04:41:429 (1) - end at 04:43:715 - , and add note at 04:44:179 - to improve the downbeat
37. 05:03:440 (1) - whistle, same reason as Easy
    Great at all.

[Invincible]

1. 00:30:858 (3) - clap
2. 01:40:429 (1,2,3,1) - Put a square? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474699
3. 02:15:715 (2) - ctrl+G? This jump is a bit too big D:
4. 02:54:001 (3) - finish
5. 04:21:287 (5) - put on (6)'s begin?
6. 04:55:769 (4) - remove finish from the end

[Ra's Hard]

1. 00:24:572 - Add a note here to make the rhythm inconsistency
2. 01:28:572 - ^
3. 00:34:572 (1) - finish
4. 00:32:287 (3) - ^
5. 01:04:287 (1) - ^
6. 01:12:287 (3) - ^ (end)
7. 01:36:287 (3) - ^
8. 01:38:572 (1) - ^
9. 01:44:858 (1) - Remove nc here, because you don't nc at 01:42:715 (6) - D:
10. 02:08:287 (1) - finish
11. 02:38:072 (1) - ^ there's a strong finish sound
12. 03:35:572 (3) - Make like this? Seems more blanket than yours lol
    

    212,276,215572,2,0,B|196:332|140:348|92:316,1,140.000000596047

13. 03:44:287 (1) - finish
14. 03:54:429 (3) - remove finish, I don't here any finish here D:
15. 04:21:429 (2) - finish would be better
16. 04:22:001 (3) - ^ (begin & end)
17. 04:32:144 (5) - Remove nc then overlap on 4? I heard the vocal, and the downbeat is on (1), so move (5) to somewhere else
    Nice map /w/!

I'm a bit tired now, so I don't mod S.S D: takes me 3 hours to mod this..
Anyway good luck

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Invincible]
01:59:429 (2,4,6,8) - make the place change a little every time, the effect would be better. Pattern changes
02:02:715 (5,6,7,8) - i think far like this is meaningless... Change closely

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Taiko DS]
Use alternating colours next time~
Use default hitsounds, remove unnecessary timing points. Taiko hitsound volume try not to go below 60%. this bug orzzzzz.. fixed
00:01:715 - move to 00:01:858 good suggestion :33 moved
00:08:572 - d IMO 'kkk k k k..' fits better.
00:08:715 - d ^
00:29:572 (65,66,67) - add finish i think it's not so good.. the tension of that point isn't so high, right?

nice map~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko DS]
01:31:572 - still 0.75x here plz. it changes too sudden now. it's already fixed in CQ's modding :33
02:09:431 (212) - Unsnapped. fixed
02:42:429 - add k? hmm.. added some notes
02:44:715 & 02:44:787 - add d? ^
02:47:001 - add k? ^
03:05:429 - too silent. raise some volume here. :3
fun diff.

01:28:858 (3) - use 1/6 snap here, the right one should be http://puu.sh/1jzC5

NatsumeRin wrote:

01:28:858 (3) - use 1/6 snap here, the right one should be http://puu.sh/1jzC5

still there.

Ra-s wrote:

http://puu.sh/1kuCn
적어도 주말이 되야지 Breaktime부분을 매꿀 수 있는데...평일은 시간이 안됌

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

01:11:144 (1,3) - wrong snap ?!

Garven wrote:

[Invincible]

01:45:001 (1,2,3,4) - This is okay, but it would be best if you could extend the pattern so that the next time you mirror it the same part of the song is happening, so if you can, extend the pattern until 01:47:287 - Don't understand

02:00:858 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ctrl + h this section, then set 01:59:429 (2,4) - around here (about 2x DS)

SPOILER

01:59:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part pattern change

02:53:644 (1,2,3) - This isn't really following the guitar right (and is what you should be following after that previous part)I tried fixing it, don't konw if I got it right though

Remainder is complete

Garven wrote:

[Taiko]
02:17:429 - End kiai here fixed by Binjip :3
04:44:179 - Should lower the volume a bit here. ^
05:02:589 (107) - Maybe have a drum roll here instead? If you do, have it crescendo like the ride cymbal. no change becuz i think this last part needs stability more than a crescendo

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding concerning missed mods on the Easy and these points on the Insane.

[Invincible]
00:30:858 (3) - This jump right here.. is really bugging me. It's just out of nowhere to keep your pattern pretty, but it plays rather poorly.
00:48:429 (1,2) - This jump doesn't make sense when you compare the same part of the music with 00:46:144 (1,2,3,4) -
00:57:429 (5) - Stack this with 00:57:858 (2) -
01:50:715 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These returns to stacks are a little confusing to read. Think you can make it more clear?
02:02:715 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't read very well afte doing a circular pattern at 02:01:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - The jump from 1 -> 2 is the culprit here. Maybe using more even spacing for all 4 instead of this random jump will fair better.
02:07:715 (5) - Change the spacing on this one too, considering the rest of the pattern.
02:59:715 (1) - This repeat arrow is slightly obscured by the hitburst from 02:58:858 (2) - . Should be easy to adjust.
03:35:144 (1) - I find this plays better unstacked
03:38:001 (4,5,6) - Maybe change these to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/505284 Flows much better
04:02:429 (2) - This should be the slider, and the end of 04:02:572 (1) - should be the circle, rhythmically.

Garven wrote:

Bothered? By what?

[Easy]
03:56:287 (1) - Remove new combo

Garven wrote:

[Star's Normal]
Um, the video was removed from this.

1. Added Japanese Artist and Title.
2. Fixed some stuff on Invincible diff.

Breaks
All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.

OnosakiHito wrote:

To be honest @ KDS and BAT's, I'm not sure about this break in the Taiko diff. at the beginning.
It has no reason to have such a - long - break, either I don't feel like it fits here in any way well. This isn't such a small issue. It feels akward, like it has been just cut at this part after this k-stream.

Please give me a reason why you used it here, else this should be unranked and mapped because of following guideline:

Breaks
All break sections should be artificially removed from the .osu file.

This also means to have in general no break sections as long as it dosen't fit.

Edit: I noticed right now, there are even more breaks. Why so KDS?
03:07:715~03:28:287 - those are 21 seconds are in general a not allowed time range, especially when the song it self is going on.

Morbon wrote:

>5~ min song
>1600~ max combo at hard, 1800~ combo at insane
>ranked, not at approved

ok why not lol
anyway good song and map