HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Normal
01:51:915 (4) - i think this note is hard to read for beginners ( just my opinion )

Hard
00:25:971 (4) - move slider 00:25:764 (4) - here ( this is hear and play better my guess )
01:23:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - making some jumps? ( looks boring )
01:41:547 (7) - NC fixed
02:27:429 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same as 01:23:900
02:50:371 (7) - add finish? fixed
02:53:900 (1) - add finish start of slider fixed
02:54:782 (4) - ^
03:23:900 (4) - ^
03:47:503 (1) - add clap?

lol nice mapset!
good luck with my star~

Kin wrote:

Hi ~
From my mod queue ~
Just some suggest ~

Normal :

01:50:591 (2,3,4) - I think this pattern look to hard for normal, 4 are hidden by 2
02:47:724 (2) - I think it's better if we see propely this slider
03:03:606 (3,1,2) - this pattern look too hard for normal

Taiko :

00:34:513 (2) - kat
01:27:209 (1,1) - d k sound better for me
01:27:760 (3) - kat
02:09:231 - add kat
02:13:973 (2) - wrong color
02:50:591 (4) - kat

good luck ~

1. 00:40:763 (2) - k
2. 00:45:347 (2) - d
3. 00:49:513 (2) - d
4. 01:03:606 (2) - k
5. 01:10:003 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1) - kkd k d kkd
6. 02:42:650 (2) - d
7. 02:43:091 (2) - k

ReySHeL wrote:

Taiko mod req~ :3
Hi, ReySHeL~

[Taiko]

1. 00:40:763 (2) - k fixed
2. 00:45:347 (2) - d
3. 00:49:513 (2) - d fixed
4. 01:03:606 (2) - k fixed
5. 01:10:003 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1) - kkd k d kkd
6. 02:42:650 (2) - d fixed
7. 02:43:091 (2) - k

good song good luck!

Banana wrote:

blabla~

taiko
后半段我觉得蓝色的（x）比较适合
无责任建议：
02:57:650 (1,2) - xx
02:59:635 (4,5,1) - xxo
03:08:018 (1,1,2,3,1) - oxxxo
03:10:885 (1,2) - xx
03:32:944 (1) 到 03:39:782 (1) - 我在想这边一堆x会不会出问题

hard
02:05:812 (6) - Ctrl+Shift+R 中心旋转-12°
02:51:253 (2) - 怎么看都应该是向下弯来的
02:59:194 (4) - 向上弯？
03:26:988 (2) - 这个尾巴被combo数挡住了 可能的解决方案

normal
02:23:459 (3) - 求curve
02:59:635 (4) - ^
best normal ever!

-话说我确实记得咱irc过这个..还吐槽过三角梗的方向什么什么来的

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Modreq~ <3
Hi, mintong89~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko General]
Kiai Time 怎么没放？

[Taiko]
00:53:680 - k
00:58:974 - k
01:33:385 - k fixed
01:34:268 - k
01:40:224 - k
01:43:091 - k
01:55:224 - k fixed
02:50:371 - k fixed

KayeSara wrote:

哈哈哈 妹妹你懂的 以下是不好好学习的产物
嗯，姐姐我懂！

[general]
remove sliderscorepoint.png

[Normal]
03:04:268 (1) - 太靠边了
01:59:856 (1) - ^
01:51:915 (4,5) - 遮挡，放到01:50:591 (2) - 中间跟(3)成一条直线
03:19:488 (1,2) - 遮挡

[Hard]
02:44:635 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不好看，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/476880

[taiko]
01:45:738 (2,3,1) - 这个跟前面一样，改成1/6

764,833.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
9694,857.142857142857,4,1,1,50,1,0
11669,805.369127516779,4,1,1,20,1,0
14113,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
15757,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
17452,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
19096,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
20757,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
22429,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
24095,869.565217391304,4,1,1,30,1,0
27527,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
30758,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,1
57430,441.176470588235,4,1,1,30,1,0

LKs wrote:

timing 有点慢测完之后直接给你了我没时间听了 你看看那里不对就自己调整

764,833.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
9694,857.142857142857,4,1,1,50,1,0
11669,805.369127516779,4,1,1,20,1,0
14113,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
15757,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
17452,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
19096,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
20757,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
22429,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,0
24095,869.565217391304,4,1,1,30,1,0
27527,857.142857142857,4,1,1,30,1,0
30758,833.333333333333,4,1,1,30,1,1
57430,441.176470588235,4,1,1,30,1,0

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. Inconsistent Title/ArtistUnicode. It must be fixed. fixed

Normal

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:49:097 (3,1) - move to x:488,y:248 to avoid overlaps? fixed
2. 01:10:665 (2,1) - move to x:366,y:96 fixed, x:336...
   
   
3. 04:11:939 (1) - move to x:24,y:248 fixed

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 03:04:488 - clap? (bell sound) fixed
   if you used my recommend hitsound. you may to add "soft-slidertick3" because 03:18:606 - need used bell sound too. add Storyboard Sound Samples
   
   
2. 03:51:939 - to 04:16:939 - about hitsound: soft-hitclap.wav it's fine, but this it's pretty more for me fixed, and [Hard] is same

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:38:900 (2,3) - [minor] Umm... I guess you will try to make symmetrical pattern. so move that to x208,y308 no, since the distance spacing, and the asymmetry is barely visible, you know, it is no grid when you are playing

Hard

• 
  
  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  

1. 03:15:076 (4,5) - it's a bit odd/noise when I test it. bell sound not suitable for this part, and you haven't used bell sound at preview part . fixed
2. 03:17:724 - remove this whistle (maybe change to slider tail)... change to slider tail, and same as 01:59:194 (1) -
   
   
3. 03:29:415 (4) - same as 03:15:076 (4,5) - fixed

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:46:597 (4) - (optional) rotate this -20 ∘and move 00:47:847 (1) - to x:200,y:104? try to make flow better. fixed, 04:07:772 (4,1,2) - same
   
   
2. 01:09:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (suggestion) make decreasing spacing with pitch. fixed
   
   
3. 01:27:430 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - actually, It's not a pretty flow. 這麼說吧,我認為01:28:091 (1,2) - reverse selection 會比較好 第一,是因為讓這五個note作出繞圈的感覺 會比01:27:871 (3,1) - 這種折點來的好些 第二,可以聽到01:28:091 (1,2) - 的音調是(1)比較高, (2)比較低 而現在的排法卻剛好與音調相反
   因此我認為把(1,2) reverse會比較好 fixed
   
   
4. 02:15:076 (3) - (bug/nazi) unsnap note (1ms away from the right position.) fixed
   
   
5. 01:38:018 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Umm... make a curve stream? straight stream (horizontal 180∘) is rigid pattern for player fixed
   
   
6. 02:02:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - make a bit rotate? It's rigid pattern for player too. fixed
   
   
7. 02:38:018 (1,2,3) - odd hitpoint for melody, follow music rhythm ↓
   
   photo

   
   fixed
   
8. 03:00:959 (4,1) - (nazi) because of make clean pattern. try to make stack for those slider. no, i like it~~~~~

吐嘈下... 01:54:121 (2,3,4) - 這梗怎麼絕響了 不知道啊……的确打起来不顺手

Taiko

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. 03:48:606 - add x1.5 green line? 可以看出後頭的note全部擠在一團了 使用1.5倍會讓BPM前後變化看的出來 卻又不會讓後頭的note全部擠在一起, 當然的 如果你改了那後頭的03:51:522 - 也必須是x1.5 fixed

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 03:22:135 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddk? 03:22:135 - & 03:22:577 - 對03:22:356 - 相對音高較高 fixed
   
   
2. 03:23:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 說實話 我寧願用kkddkdd來代過 03:23:900 - 與03:24:341 - 重音使用同樣的音符打起來會比較順一點 fixed
   
   
   
3. 03:41:216 (1) - move to 03:41:327 - will be better. 在03:41:216 - 沒有明顯的音符, 而後者卻有很重的重音 相比之下後者會好的更多 fixed
   
   
   
4. 03:44:746 (1) - ^ fixed

看來LKs timing已經到了... 記得去改 fixed

call me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

^ 一定要用兩種顏色改 不然我不recheck喔 >_>

spboxer3 wrote:

抱歉...這麼晚才來recheck.

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

Normal

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unsnap kiai timing line: 00:55:763 -

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
01:23:900 (1) - ,02:27:429 (1) - 當老闆作了三點式slider有沒有對當初畫圓劃這麼久感到很心酸阿 ((stress

1. you must resnap all note

Hard

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unsnap kiai timing line: 00:55:763 -

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 03:46:179 (2,3,4) - move to x256,y102.

Taiko

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. volume it's too low. please used Normal hitsound and 50%.
2. remove letterbox during break

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. resnap all note
   
   
2. 01:49:488 (1,1,2,1) - Err... 這個不要用1/3 把1/3用在01:52:577 - 到01:53:018 - 之間吧 那01:52:466 (2) - 就刪了 於是整段變成這樣:
   
   rhythm

   從01:52:135 (1) - 開始

SPOILER

SPOILER

1. 02:58:305 - New timing section (offset 178305 - the metronome resets there, also the song got moved by -7ms)
2. Offset 228608 -> 228599

1. 00:53:258 (4) - New combo to beautify this part?
2. 01:38:018 (1) - Definitely can be made better orz:
   

   328,172,98018,6,0,B|256:128|176:148|150:220,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 01:53:018 (2) - Hmm, your idea to add a gradual volume increase here is good, but imo it'll be better if you're using 30 -> 50 -> 70 (instead of 50 -> 60 -> 70)
4. 02:49:488 (3) - For me it's better if you change this into a circle and then start the repeating 1/4 sliders on 02:49:709 instead (as the 1/4s actually get distinct there), however just skip this if you can't find a good position xD
5. 04:14:439 (4) - Again, new combo here to beautify the map?

1. 01:07:135 (4,5,1) - ...well I much prefer something like this though, it'll form a fun to play circular movement (and it fits the song a lot better compared to static stacking imo) :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:22:135 (x) - The vocal is quite strong here to abandon imo, add note here and start spinner 1/8 after?
3. 01:53:238 (6) - Whistle on slider's body with lowered volume might fit here, your call though :3
4. 02:06:253 (1) - Same as 01:22:135, add note here and start spinner 1/8 after?
5. 02:25:665 (1) - Same as above
6. 02:47:613 (3,4) - ...it's actually repeating 1/8 here, but 1/4 lands on beat as well (:
7. 02:52:025 (4,5) - Same as above
8. 03:08:900 (1) - Same here about the spinner...

Niva wrote:

Hi cmn_891127~ Randomly checking bubble here, and found these issues:

[General]

-> ...are you sure about using the kanji for Asuka for song's title? Because this is what I got orz: I try to fix it, but it doesn't work...

SPOILER

(also imo the title would be more beautiful if it's put in 00:30:758 or 00:57:430 and colored light yellow/gold, if you want to change it just tell me :3)
Really good~
-> All of your soft-hitnormals (soft-hitnormal1, soft-hitnormal2, soft-hitnormal3) has a ~10ms delay on it's start:

SPOILER

In gameplay I can hear the soft-hitnormal sounds quite late compared to the others, orz... I've removed the delay here, should sound better now (:
All changed to new hitsound
-> Regarding to the issue above, I rechecked the timing and I got:

1. 02:58:305 - New timing section (offset 178305 - the metronome resets there, also the song got moved by -7ms)
2. Offset 228608 -> 228599

(it's highly recommended to resnap your inherit sections, especially kiai, after doing this (: )
not add new red line here, but @00:57:424, this red line put forward 6ms, and the lasted red line is also

[Normal]

-> Remove lead-in here? It's not necessary considering your starting point orz... fixed

1. 00:53:258 (4) - New combo to beautify this part? fixed
2. 01:38:018 (1) - Definitely can be made better orz: fixed
   

   328,172,98018,6,0,B|256:128|176:148|150:220,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 01:53:018 (2) - Hmm, your idea to add a gradual volume increase here is good, but imo it'll be better if you're using 30 -> 50 -> 70 (instead of 50 -> 60 -> 70) fixed
4. 02:49:488 (3) - For me it's better if you change this into a circle and then start the repeating 1/4 sliders on 02:49:709 instead (as the 1/4s actually get distinct there), however just skip this if you can't find a good position xD I reverse the slider before, and cut (3)
5. 04:14:439 (4) - Again, new combo here to beautify the map? fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:07:135 (4,5,1) - ...well I much prefer something like this though, it'll form a fun to play circular movement (and it fits the song a lot better compared to static stacking imo) : similar, but a bit change
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:22:135 (x) - The vocal is quite strong here to abandon imo, add note here and start spinner 1/8 after? add a note, but remove NC of spinner
3. 01:53:238 (6) - Whistle on slider's body with lowered volume might fit here, your call though :3 Really good, 30%
4. 02:06:253 (1) - Same as 01:22:135, add note here and start spinner 1/8 after? add a note, but remove NC of spinner
5. 02:25:665 (1) - Same as above add a note, but remove NC of spinner
6. 02:47:613 (3,4) - ...it's actually repeating 1/8 here, but 1/4 lands on beat as well (: not change
7. 02:52:025 (4,5) - Same as above not change
8. 03:08:900 (1) - Same here about the spinner... add a note, but remove NC of spinner

...also remove the lead-in on Taiko as well, it's not necessary orz >_<
Mapping overall is great, though~

1. 00:30:758 (1) - Inherit section can only be stacked with timing section if they're used to change slider speed orz... Here, the inherit section isn't used to change slider speed so it shouldn't be here (just set kiai and S:C1 50% on the red line~)

1. 00:30:758 (1) - Same as Normal

Niva wrote:

(don't kudosu this)
...uhm, about title color, it can only be changed by Admin/BAT orz... I've changed the timing and color, I hope you like it (:

[General]

-> A new timing section in 02:58:306 here is definitely required, yes, as I've said before it's because the metronome resets here (however because you already changed offset before, just simply add a new timing section without further modification xD)
change the green line to red

[Normal]

1. 00:30:758 (1) - Inherit section can only be stacked with timing section if they're used to change slider speed orz... Here, the inherit section isn't used to change slider speed so it shouldn't be here (just set kiai and S:C1 50% on the red line~) fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:30:758 (1) - Same as Normal fixed

...when placing the new timing section, once again I remind that red line and green line can't be stacked together if not for slider speed change, orz >_< mark~

1. Silence both slidertick and sliderslide sound is unrankable, they sounds fine for me though, I'll discuss with other members too see if this could be a exception
2. Add some tags like "Wafuu"(和風)?
3. PreviewTime should move 57222 to 57424 since you changed timing right?

1. 00:27:527 (1) - End this spinner with soft custom sound1 seems better
2. 01:18:600 (1) - Hmm, it's not recommended use unusual spacing in the easiest diff. Change it if possible
3. 03:18:606 - The SB sound sounds too loud here, try reduce 80 to 60

1. 00:27:527 (1) - Soft custom1?
2. 01:22:185 (2), 02:06:302 (2), 02:25:714 (2), 03:08:949 (2) - Add NC to those spinner just in case

1. 00:54:091 (2) - Spinner, NC in case of any issue

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Silence both slidertick and sliderslide sound is unrankable, they sounds fine for me though, I'll discuss with other members too see if this could be a exception no change here
2. Add some tags like "Wafuu"(和風)? added
3. PreviewTime should move 57222 to 57424 since you changed timing right? fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:27:527 (1) - End this spinner with soft custom sound1 seems better fixed
2. 01:18:600 (1) - Hmm, it's not recommended use unusual spacing in the easiest diff. Change it if possible I use such pattern extensive in this diff. If changing all of them, I think it is indeed equivalent to remapping...and unusual spacing is not the hardest part in this diff, since breaking tail is more difficult than it, if you really want to get full combo.
3. 03:18:606 - The SB sound sounds too loud here, try reduce 80 to 60 fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:27:527 (1) - Soft custom1? Okey
2. 01:22:185 (2), 02:06:302 (2), 02:25:714 (2), 03:08:949 (2) - Add NC to those spinner just in case
   In the wiki - Ranking Criteria, I see "Generally, a spinner and the next object after a spinner should both have New Combo markers. You can remove one of the New Combos if the spinner belongs to the same musical thought as some objects around it (1), (2), but use sparingly." I remove the NC of spinner in the second case, so I don't change them.

[Taiko]

1. 00:54:091 (2) - Spinner, NC in case of any issue fixed

Call me back

Breeze wrote:

有跟其他人商量了下, 虽然你的slidertick和slide不是完全静音, 但是他们说听不到跟静音就没区别了:s
所以还是得换一个能听到的才行,tick和slide可以静音一个, 另外一个就换个吧

Breeze wrote:

Alright, rebubbled

Flask wrote:

你沒給微風kd daijobu? 恭喜啦~