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This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:19:019 - There's something I just don't understand here. At the other "big-while-lines", you've added finishes to the beginning of these sliders and for this one, it magically doesn't have one. Can you explain to me why there's no finish? Or even, add one here to keep the consistency with the other hitsounds. Also, I just seen that it as a whistle at this point and the other doesn't have it. It may be annoying in some ways because you've also added a whistle to the end of the slider so you added the same hitsounds twice in a row. It should also be the same with this slider: 00:22:001 (1) -
•00:26:473 (2) - The rhythm was pretty good until you add a clap at the end of this slider. It doesn't fit with the first part, which should have the same consistency. So to fix this, delete the clap at the end of the slider and replace it by a whistle instead.
•00:30:199 - Well, that's the same thing here. To make it consistent with the point above and the first part, delete the clap at the end of the slider and replace it by a whistle.
•00:30:945 (1) - This seems weird to don't have the finish after that clap on the last downbeat (the big-white-line). If you were trying to keep the consistency, you would have replaced the whistle by a finish. Also, it sounds more good with the finish than the whistle. In conclusion: Replace the whistle by a finish.
•00:33:181 - Same as the points above: Delete this clap. It just don't fit here and you have two claps in a row. Instead of having nothing here, add a whistle.
•00:55:541 - You can skip this one if you want, but I think a finish will sound good here with the last slider.
•01:02:248 - I don't know if I pointed it some points above but, the whistle doesn't belong here, it would have been better if you kept the consistency with your finishes. So: Replace the whistle by a finish.
•01:05:230 - Same as the point above.
•01:14:174 - I understand why you've added a whistle here instead of a finish (Like the two points above), but in my opinion, a finish sounds better and it keeps the consistency. So it's up to you, but a finish seems way more better than a whistle c:

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:20:510 (2) - The flow here, is not really good. The flow should have been like this, but it goes like this. Here's another example of a good flow: 00:32:435 (3,4) -
•01:11:192 (3) - I don't think it sounds good the way it is. I'm suggesting you to delete the next circle (4) and make a reverse arrow to this slider. I think it could be better with the rhythm.

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•00:27:963 (3) - Add a new combo here. Look at the other combos, it had three objects per combos. But this time, the spinner counts for an object in this combo. (Hope you understand). Also, it will be better with a new combo because of the song. It has like a "new chorus" (I didn't knew what to say here)
•00:33:926 (4) - It would be good to add a new combo here, it will follow the song even if it's only a two-circles-combo.
•01:11:192 (3) - Same as the point above. Add a new combo to follow the song.

[Normal]

To be honest, the circle size seems to be too small with the approach rate for a Normal.. maybe it's just me.

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•00:17:529 (3) - I've tried to look for the consistency of your hitsounds and this clap seems to don't fit at all. It should be replaced by a whistle instead which will be less annoying to have two claps in a row.
•00:19:019 - I also saw on the previous difficulty that you've added a whistle instead of a finish. To be honest, it doesn't make it more loud with a finish and it keeps the consistency by adding a finish instead of a whistle. So the conclusion here: Replace the whistle by a finish; It will keep the consistency.
•00:20:510 (3) - Is it a copy/paste of this slider 00:17:529 (3) - ? LOL. Actually, it's the same thing here, the clap to the slidertail doesn't sounds good, also, as mentionned to the point above, "it won't make it louder with a finish", but this clap is too loud, unfortunatly. So I would like you to keep the consistency here by replacing the clap by a whistle.
•00:22:001 (1) - It will be better if you add a finish here instead to keep the consistency with your finish, clap, finish on the downbeat.
•00:27:218 - nendlwednlkwenlknwelrk. I don't understand this clap here! Q.Q. It just kills all the consistency without a whistle ;-;... Replace the clap by a whistle please..
•00:28:336 (1) - Have you forgot to add a clap here? I meant, a clap without custom sounds. It will be better with a clap so it will keep the consistency.
•00:30:199 - Hi there clap. Replace it by a whistle.
•00:30:945 - Shouldn't this whistle be replaced by a finish? (I feel like repeating myself o.o); But yeah, anyways. Like some points above, "it won't make it louder with a finish". Replace the whistle by a finish, the consistency will be followed.
•00:33:181 - Replace the clap by a whistle, it will keep the consistency.
•00:54:795 (3,4,5) - Oh gawd, that clap spam. To be honest, it fits pretty well, but I don't like it. Can you do like this: 00:11:939 (2,3) -, it's like.. more soft?
Sorry, for the points above, I've became really lazy..
•01:10:447 - Replace it by a whistle instead.
•01:13:428 - Same thing as above.
•01:14:174 - Replace this whistle by a finish.
•01:16:410 - Replace this clap by a whistle

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:55:168 (4) - What do you think of doing something like this? It seems to be good, in my opinion.
•01:09:702 (5) - This slider could have been more smooth. The way it is right now.. it looks odd.

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
•01:18:646 (1) - With the song, the combos should be like that.

[TicClick]

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
TicClick, I'm inlove with your hitsounds. They're perfectly following each others and these whistle sliderslide are <3
The only thing I didn't liked, was the whistle spam at the beginning. For an example: 00:01:132 (1,2) - . But still, it follow the music pretty well!
Good job~

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:11:566 (1,2,3,4,5) - I like what you did there with the circle (5). But I have a suggestion here: You should actually make it for the whole combo. Here's a picture of what I meant: [img=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/490055]Clic me.[/img] I placed these circles like that with the Approach circle. But you're able to do it by playing with the distance snap.
•00:20:137 (4) - Can you move this circle somewhere else so it won't be overlapped with 00:19:019 (1) - ?
•00:36:907 (2) - Same thing as I said above. Because it looks ugly when objects are touching each others.

This box is for new combos. If new combos are fitting well with the vocals or if they aren't too big (ex: 23combos)
I looked at the combo twice and found nothing. Actually, I would have given you some suggestion, but I've kind of "read on your mind" and thought it was pretty good the way it is.

[bomber34]

This box is for hitsounds. When I look for hitsounds, I am mostly looking for the consistency. Sometimes I may give some suggestions
•Two things that I didn't liked here: The normal whistles at the beginning and then *boom* it goes to claps without consistency. You should pay attention here to make your hitsound consistent and have soft whistles. You can look at the other difficulty to have an example. So for now.. I will mod your hitsounds the way you've did it.. Also, with your hitsounds, try to be logic. By this i meant, don't add random hitsounds because you think it sounds good. It must have atleast some consistent.
•00:05:604 (1,2,3,4) - Seems like you've stopped to add whistle here and restart after the combo. Actually, it may be bad because it sounds empty. My suggestion here will too add whistles to the circle 2 and 4. With the way you've placed your previous whistles, it will be better with adding some there.
•00:09:889 (6,1) - Of these two combos, do you see something different? I've said to two points above and it's what I didn't liked. Having alot of whistles and then it magicaly goes to claps. Try to keep all your whistle and start doing clap consistency at 00:13:057 (4) - .
•00:16:038 - Since you have a clap here and a clap at the slidertail, it would be better if you replace the clap by a finish.
•00:44:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I have a suggestion here that may fit your song better. Delete add the hitsounds to these objects and add whistles to 00:44:361 (1) - , 00:44:640 (3) - , 00:44:920 (5) - , 00:45:106 (6) - , 00:45:385. Try to keep that consistency with the next combos.

This box means that I am looking at flows and useless circle/slider that doesn't sound really good or even, doesn't fit well for the difficulty.
•00:19:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These circles should make a better square form here.
•00:20:883 - Do this slider has to have this form? It looks very weird. Try to make something else.