1. Advanced (5 stars, 555 notes)
2. Basic (2.8 stars, 188 notes)
3. Extreme (4.97 stars, 731 notes)
4. Normal (4.27 stars, 281 notes)

Anticloud wrote:

hahaha eat shit

from jbt+ and also appears in AGEHA

CSY the corrupt wrote:

Anticloud wrote:

hahaha eat shit

from jbt+ and also appears in AGEHA

大爷科普帝

Anticloud wrote:

CSY the corrupt wrote:

大爷科普帝

尿裤 这也给?

本着取之于民用之于民的原则 star

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

only suggest

Basic
General
简单难度的话combo连到数字6不怎么适合，多考虑下NC。比如长白线NC这种，整个easy难度有很多这种问题你可以参考下

00:08:855 (3) - NC
00:10:188 (5) - NC
后面的我就不多说了，尽量挑长白线下
00:24:855 - add note，如果这么做了后面的clap要重新下
02:20:521 - add note
03:05:521 (6) - finsh？
这些比较简单我顺手帮他大致改了一下

Normal
01:46:188 (6) - NC 感觉太短了就这样吧
01:54:188 (5) - ^
02:42:188 - 5%容易被挑，这根绿线改成soft 20%？ 不用

Advanced
00:03:688 - add note
00:04:688 - ^
01:18:355 (1) - 这里不如做成三连
02:01:022 (1) - ^
02:17:021 (1) - remove NC
02:29:688 - spinner从这里开始吧。。
02:42:521 (1) - ^
02:42:188 - 这个绿线同Normal
02:57:021 (6) - NC
03:04:855 - add note

Extreme
00:34:855 (1) - remove NC
00:40:188 (5) - NC从这里开始，如果你这么做了00:40:355 (1) - 的去掉 直接不用NC了,其实也没啥用,类似地方也改了.
01:23:188 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:26:188 (1,2) - 1和2也做成跳 其实不是大问题,但我感觉是不能跳,所以就这样吧
01:27:688 (7,8) - 这里也是 ^
01:43:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里一段不要过多使用NC。。 感觉酷炫,就这样吧
02:13:021 (2) - 这里也是，如果跳的话最好一起跳 同上上
03:06:355 - spinner从这里开始吧 其实我本意是spinner开头跟03:06:188 (1) - 重叠来着..既然不行就这样,再往后感觉不太好
这个难度建议你碰到啥跳针,those啥建议换鸡爷和他们交流，无法沟通就一面包车撞死 面包冲锋!

good luck~

1. Audio Lead-In 不一致 Advanced只有1000ms, 請把他調整到1500ms (因為也沒有提早開始嘛orz)

1. 00:10:855 (5) - 把slider body的finish去掉
2. 00:27:188 (5) - Spacing出錯了 修一下吧o.o
3. 00:27:855 (2,3) - 不是很建議這種overlap 說起來這(2)還能包上(3) 範例
4. 00:31:521 (3) - 尾巴上clap好奇怪 還是去掉的好 這裡不是24tick嘛
5. 00:34:855 (4) - (end) Finish吧 有個很明顯的響音
6. 00:48:188 (3) - 看起來像是故意的 但還是不要上clap的好 破壞clap rhythm就不好了
7. 00:48:855 (1) - 頭去掉clap 第一個reserve+clap
8. 00:50:521 (3) - 第一個reserve & end去掉clap, 第二個reserve上clap 還是照著24走比較好._.
   Clap就不在做吐槽 自己check一下有沒有照24tick走吧
9. 01:34:188 (1,2) - 包的不好看
   
   
   

   176,288,94188,6,0,B|220:340|296:336|332:268,2,180,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 03:00:188 (4) - 這個弄成直的? 因為03:01:188 (2) - 是直的 會看起來對稱點
    排版來說很棒 只是hitsound部分有点亂...

1. 02:57:521 (5) - 感覺上擺到x:464, y:216 比較flow
   這個diff的排版很棒 都挑不出什麼zzz不過一個clap都沒?

1. 00:27:855 (2) - 移到00:28:021 - ? 聽上去就怪 跟vocal比較好
2. 01:07:521 (1) - 這東西reserve在藍線上聽上去就怪 感覺應該再白線然候spinner縮短一小格往後。。。
4. 01:50:188 (1) - ^
5. 01:10:188 (1) - NC Bug
6. 01:52:855 (1) - ^
7. 02:17:021 (1) - 沒必要NC
   後面有點坑 一樣都沒clap?

1. Stack leniency 在2以下是unrankable的 調到7吧 (defalut)
2. 00:02:188 (1,2) - (1)延長到藍線 (2)移到白線 比較跟vocal
3. 00:43:188 (5) - 這應該跟(3)同個方向比較flow
4. 01:31:188 (5) - ^

Flask wrote:

哇有生之年竟然有榮幸mod屎哥的圖 真是>.< Mod Request from my Queue (￣∇￣;)我不是屎哥...当然也不是什么屎爷之类的(;°д°)

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. Audio Lead-In 不一致 Advanced只有1000ms, 請把他調整到1500ms (因為也沒有提早開始嘛orz)

fixed

[ Basic]

1. 00:10:855 (5) - 把slider body的finish去掉
2. 00:27:188 (5) - Spacing出錯了 修一下吧o.o
3. 00:27:855 (2,3) - 不是很建議這種overlap 說起來這(2)還能包上(3) 範例
4. 00:31:521 (3) - 尾巴上clap好奇怪 還是去掉的好 這裡不是24tick嘛
5. 00:34:855 (4) - (end) Finish吧 有個很明顯的響音
6. 00:48:188 (3) - 看起來像是故意的 但還是不要上clap的好 破壞clap rhythm就不好了
7. 00:48:855 (1) - 頭去掉clap 第一個reserve+clap
8. 00:50:521 (3) - 第一個reserve & end去掉clap, 第二個reserve上clap 還是照著24走比較好._.
   Clap就不在做吐槽 自己check一下有沒有照24tick走吧
9. 01:34:188 (1,2) - 包的不好看
   
   
   

   176,288,94188,6,0,B|220:340|296:336|332:268,2,180,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 03:00:188 (4) - 這個弄成直的? 因為03:01:188 (2) - 是直的 會看起來對稱點
    排版來說很棒 只是hitsound部分有点亂...

比较简单所以帮他改了一下,基本上都改了.

[ Normal]

1. 02:57:521 (5) - 感覺上擺到x:464, y:216 比較flow fixed
   這個diff的排版很棒 都挑不出什麼zzz不過一個clap都沒? 主要是Basic是个GD

[ Advanced]

1. 00:27:855 (2) - 移到00:28:021 - ? 聽上去就怪 跟vocal比較好
2. 01:07:521 (1) - 這東西reserve在藍線上聽上去就怪 感覺應該再白線然候spinner縮短一小格往後。。。
4. 01:50:188 (1) - ^
5. 01:10:188 (1) - NC Bug
6. 01:52:855 (1) - ^
7. 02:17:021 (1) - 沒必要NC
   後面有點坑 一樣都沒clap?

[ Extreme]

1. Stack leniency 在2以下是unrankable的 調到7吧 (defalut) 这个"2以下"包不包括"2".就这张图而言如果2分拍也有Stack的话感觉某些地方非常的不美观.我先看看吧如果实在要改的话我会改掉,连同那些地方一起remap.
2. 00:02:188 (1,2) - (1)延長到藍線 (2)移到白線 比較跟vocal 感觉现在就挺适合其实
3. 00:43:188 (5) - 這應該跟(3)同個方向比較flow 这个问题不大吧(主要是改了的话不单只这个,连同后面的也要改,比较麻烦
4. 01:31:188 (5) - ^ ^

對不起mod這麼少 整個圖已經不錯 只需要點nazi之類的
加油~

感谢mod

Curisu wrote:

黑长直黑丝超棒

[BSC]
...hitsounds没啥好说这里变化太少 小建议插fin
01:20:855 (1,2) - vol+10没存在感 后同
01:40:188 (2,1) - 重叠?
像NM 180BPM够蛋疼了

[Normal]
00:10:855 - 不做折返这点做3个circle? 突出重音 like this 02:03:521 (1,2,1)
01:20:855 (1) - ^
01:36:855 (5) - +NC
01:52:521 - 转盘后间距略小
02:04:855 - removeNC

[ADV]
00:03:188 (4) - ctrl+G来坑爹
00:05:521 (3,4,5) - 1grid up(4)
00:30:188 - 这根绿线意味不明
00:50:021 (1,3) - 重叠
00:59:355 (8,9,1) - 感觉跟vocal好些
01:07:355 (3,4,1) - 这比起上面跟vocal效果要更好
01:11:355 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...突然大跳略违和
01:22:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - polygon nazi
01:50:188 (1) - 为什么折返端蓝线
02:24:521 - 有点空不补点啥..
02:42:521 (1) - 可以试试1.25x加疾走感
ctrl+c部分同

02:36:021 (2,4,2) - awesome

[EXT]
一些random part看的好蛋疼
00:10:855 (1,2) - 不觉得这里需要这样overlap
01:08:689 (4) - 建议ctrl+G回来这里坑

大致改了一下,感谢mod

CCHV-16 wrote:

03:06:188 (1) - 这里这么多绿线不知道有什么存在意义建议删掉

Basic
00:34:855 (4) - 第二折返的拍子用下clap音效试试效果可能更好
01:07:521 (1) - 这个旋转总觉得很奇怪，感觉可以改成01:07:521 (1) - 到01:08:521 (1) - 一个spin另起一个01:08:855 (1) - 开始到01:09:855 (1) - 的spin，就是不知道现在的规则normal可不可以这样摆放，不可以的话请无视
01:50:188 (1) - 这个结尾降低音量感觉不是很有必要


Normal
00:03:521 (7) - 建议添加finish音效
00:10:855 (4) - 最后一拍的finish可能去掉更好
01:11:521 (4) - 这里的4和5时间轴上换一下【4做成一个折返链条，01:12:521 (5) - 单独放一个note】实玩手感可能会更好
02:28:855 (1) - 可以加个finish
02:32:855 (4) - 这里的建议和01:11:521 (4)一样可以试试45时间轴上换位打击效果可能会更好

Advanced
00:35:521 (1) - 到00:40:688 (10) - 感觉combo可以重新分一下2个10不是很好大概
01:45:521 (3) - 不做成S型吗-3-
02:20:855 (3) - 这个345的距离有点坑的感觉
【阿黄我偶像】

Extreme
01:26:355 (2) - 这个2可以尝试和左右间距对齐
01:30:355 (2) - 同上感觉
02:53:521 (2) - 这个不用new combo颜色吗
02:54:188 (1) - 这里的123也可以试试看用new combo大概效果会比较好

好鬼畜的歌o.o

BakaHuang wrote:

能rank我去吃屎

BakaHuang wrote:

能rank我去吃屎

etc wrote:

被吃屎爺抓來mod

那麼開始吧
總體

給我的感覺是詭異的slider太多 flow不夠順暢 距離時大時小read不能 儘量吧距離控制一下 該跳的跳 不跳的距離儘量保持相同

easy+hard

沒什麽毛病
-------------------------------------
adv

epic！
-------------------------------------
ex

00:02:688 (3,4) - ds1.0重新擺
00:06:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 個人建議這樣擺會比較流暢




00:10:188 (2,3) - 這樣更順

00:10:855 (1,2) - 同上 把2的綠線去掉 不要0.75然後擺成這樣

00:56:188 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡估計要神反應了 感覺不要分那麼遠
01:07:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 人性呢？
01:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - 跳的距離不要那麼亂
01:30:188 (1,2,3,4,5) - 任然是距離,建議

01:43:521 (1) - 距離建議不要那麼開 ？
01:50:354 (2) - ↑
02:41:521 (1) - ↑
02:52:188 (1,1) - ↑
02:58:355 (2,3) - ↑
03:00:021 (4,5) - ↑

歌是很好 希望能做的更流暢點打起來舒服點的
最後套用一下

BakaHuang wrote:

能rank我去吃屎

頂！

• • Your BG is already used in a ranked beatmap, please find another one to use.

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 4
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:06:188 (1) - Delete this slider and do the same pattern as before.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:24:855 (1) - This circle is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it. (or end the spinner at 00:23:855)
  • 01:00:188 (2) - Remove 1 repeat, delete the next circle and add a 1/1 repeating slider at 01:02:188.
  • 01:34:188 ~ 01:38:521 - I don't like all these claps here, try to add a clap every 2 white tick.
  • 02:20:855 (2,3,4) - Delete all this stuff then start a slider at 02:20:855 and end it at 02:21:521.
  • 03:05:188 (5,6) - Why this spacing here? This is an Easy so try to avoid doing "jumps".
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855)

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • 01:40:855 (3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:42:188 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part.
  • 02:16:855 (1) - End this slider at 02:17:355 and add a circle at 02:17:688.
  • 02:18:688 (4) - End this slider at 02:19:188 and add a circle at 02:19:521.
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855)

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • 00:28:021 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:32:855 (1) - This is the only diff that has a spinner here, delete it and map this part. (if you want to keep it, end it at 00:34:855 and add a circle at 00:35:188)
  • 00:44:855 (x) - You can hear a cymbal here so add a circle with a finish.
  • 01:07:521 (1,1) - Delete this slider and start the next spinner at 01:07:521. (or add a circle at 01:07:521 and start the spinner 1/4 later)
  • 01:50:188 (1,1) - Same thing here.
  • 02:18:021 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:18:021 and another one at 02:18:355.
  • 02:24:688 (3) - Remove the repeat, move it 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:24:688 and another one at 02:25:355.
  • 02:26:021 (5) - Remove the repeat, move it 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:26:688.
  • 02:27:354 (7) - Same thing here.
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855)

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • 00:56:355 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:56:355.
  • 02:08:271 (4) - Start this slider 1/4 later.
  • 02:13:605 (6) - ^
  • 02:26:188 (3,4) - Delete (4). End (3) at 02:26:688 then start a slider at 02:26:855 and end it at 02:27:188.
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855)

xxheroxx wrote:

[list]• Your BG is already used in a ranked beatmap, please find another one to use.[/list

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Your BG is already used in a ranked beatmap, please find another one to use. I think this BG is very fit for this song, so don't want to change it

Basic

• • HP Drain Rate: 3 fixed
  • Approach Rate: 4 fixed
  • Overall Difficulty: 3 fixed
  • 00:06:188 (1) - Delete this slider and do the same pattern as before. fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:24:855 (1) - This circle is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it. (or end the spinner at 00:23:855) fixed, end the spinner at 00:23:855
  • 01:00:188 (2) - Remove 1 repeat, delete the next circle and add a 1/1 repeating slider at 01:02:188. fixed
  • 01:34:188 ~ 01:38:521 - I don't like all these claps here, try to add a clap every 2 white tick. fixed
  • 02:20:855 (2,3,4) - Delete all this stuff then start a slider at 02:20:855 and end it at 02:21:521. fixed
  • 03:05:188 (5,6) - Why this spacing here? This is an Easy so try to avoid doing "jumps". I think it just a miss when he was mapping, fixed
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855)not so obvious and hasn't too much different, I think it's ok now

Normal

• • HP Drain Rate: 5 fixed
  • Approach Rate: 5 fixed
  • Overall Difficulty: 5 fixed
  • 01:40:855 (3,4) - Try this: fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:42:188 (1) - Is this spinner really necessary? Delete it and map this part. fixed
  • 02:16:855 (1) - End this slider at 02:17:355 and add a circle at 02:17:688. fixed
  • 02:18:688 (4) - End this slider at 02:19:188 and add a circle at 02:19:521. fixed
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855) same as Basic

Advanced

• • HP Drain Rate: 7 fixed
  • Overall Difficulty: 7 fixed
  • 00:28:021 (x) - Add a circle. fixed
  • 00:32:855 (1) - This is the only diff that has a spinner here, delete it and map this part. (if you want to keep it, end it at 00:34:855 and add a circle at 00:35:188) fixed, end it at 00:34:855 and add a circle at 00:35:188
  • 00:44:855 (x) - You can hear a cymbal here so add a circle with a finish. fixed
  • 01:07:521 (1,1) - Delete this slider and start the next spinner at 01:07:521. (or add a circle at 01:07:521 and start the spinner 1/4 later) I try it but feel not so good, so no change
  • 01:50:188 (1,1) - Same thing here. fixed
  • 02:18:021 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:18:021 and another one at 02:18:355. fixed
  • 02:24:688 (3) - Remove the repeat, move it 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:24:688 and another one at 02:25:355. fixed
  • 02:26:021 (5) - Remove the repeat, move it 1/2 later and add a circle at 02:26:688. fixed
  • 02:27:354 (7) - Same thing here. fixed
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855) same as Basic

Extreme

• • HP Drain Rate: 8 fixed
  • 00:56:355 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:56:355. I think it's so interesting now, and it's hasn't serious wrong, no change
  • 02:08:271 (4) - Start this slider 1/4 later. this place really has this rhythm. This is the only difference with the other two sections of this same music part, so I think it should be prominent.
  • 02:13:605 (6) - ^ ^
  • 02:26:188 (3,4) - Delete (4). End (3) at 02:26:688 then start a slider at 02:26:855 and end it at 02:27:188. I just make it different from 02:24:855 (1,2) - , it's fun, and I think it's fit enough
  • 03:06:188 (1) - This spinner is way too long! End it at 03:11:521. (or end it at 03:12:855) same as Basic

Call me after your fixes for a recheck.

Zarerion wrote:

xxheroxx wrote:

• Your BG is already used in a ranked beatmap, please find another one to use.

So what? Many maps use bg's that are used in other maps. I think this is up to the mapper.

• • HP Drain Rate is still 2 and you said that you raised to 3.

• • 00:35:521 (2) - Add a new combo.
  • 01:07:521 (1,1) - You said fixed but it's still the same here. Delete this slider and start the next spinner at 01:07:521. (or add a circle at 01:07:521 and start the spinner 1/4 later)
  01:50:188 (1,1) - ^
  • 01:52:855 (1) - Add a new combo.

• • Stack Leniency: 3, why? Read this.

• • HP Drain Rate is still 2 and you said that you raised to 3. oh I forgot it, sorry. Fixed now

• • 00:35:521 (2) - Add a new combo. fixed
  • 01:07:521 (1,1) - You said fixed but it's still the same here. Delete this slider and start the next spinner at 01:07:521. (or add a circle at 01:07:521 and start the spinner 1/4 later) this part I try to do it first but effect not so good, so I change it back, and after I edited the post 1 time ->http://puu.sh/2bYSP
  01:50:188 (1,1) - ^
  • 01:52:855 (1) - Add a new combo. fixed

• • Stack Leniency: 3, why? Read this. ok, what a pity. Fixed it and make a change at 01:23:521 (1) - because that part is so ugly in Stack Leniency 3

xxheroxx wrote:

Ok, good luck with ranking~

BakaHuang wrote:

能rank我去吃屎

444,112,144188,2,0,B|416:84|372:80,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

440,244,59521,6,0,B|435:166|478:186|478:106,2,140

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

source: jubeat

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Rainbow☆Rainbow收集了remix版
AGEHA收录的是原版 以及原版是IIDX曲目 不过如果你想写可以把AGEHA和Beatmania IIDX都写进tags 好我全写上吧还是

[extreme]

00:02:438 (2) - 离近一点 现在打着很别扭http://puu.sh/2evYc fixed
00:08:854 (2,3,4) - 00:09:520 (6,7,8) - 这两个直线都做直一点 fixed
00:09:021 (3,4) - 这种三连+跳打起来有点别扭 不如先slider后circle？ 这个我觉得还好,先slider后circle才更难打吧
00:10:021 (1) - 这我建议放在两者之间 也就是http://puu.sh/2ew6R fixed
00:24:855 (1) - http://puu.sh/2ew9L 如图 每个slider都做了调整 重点是长slider再弯曲一点竖一点 最后一个slider改成直线避免全是曲线看起来很乱 fixed
00:31:438 (6) - 全图的这种1/4最好间距一样 除了 00:28:855 (2,3) - 这种 不然会比较乱 比如00:53:688 (3,4) - 突然这么小间距不舒服 01:06:021 (5) - 这种时候间距才应该小点 改了一些不知有没改全
00:32:855 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这六边形歪了 这个我都没考虑到居然是个六边形,其实就是跳来跳去而已
00:44:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:35:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 我猜你是受jbt影响梗下出来都是构成了正方形 但这种梗并不那么好看 不过也可以算style吧 这里貌似随便摆了一下成这样了,其实没受啥影响
02:13:355 (4) - 这个spacing change感觉无意义 fixed
02:17:355 (3) - 02:26:188 (3) - 关于slider摆放 这个是不是跟原来的一样的(;°д°)

444,112,144188,2,0,B|416:84|372:80,2,67.5000025749208,2|0|0,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:27:521 (1,2,3,4) - 菱形太歪了 fixed

[Advanced]

00:59:521 (1) - 这slider要调一下

440,244,59521,6,0,B|435:166|478:186|478:106,2,140

fixed
01:06:188 (7) - ^ fixed
02:15:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 先把3和5reverse 再把得到的4和5reverse 这个看不懂,而且如果改的话前面也有一个一样的梗用不用也一起改

[normal]

00:26:188 (4) - 波浪形slider做法 fixed
01:36:855 (1) - ^ fixed


[easy]

01:14:188 (2) - 不太好看 fixed

如果方便的话能不能帮我把那个title text的开始时间调到00:11:521

CSY the corrupt wrote:

如果方便的话能不能帮我把那个title text的开始时间调到00:11:521

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