Scorpiour wrote:

[Revy's Normal]

1. the Sliders before first break are looked weird due to SliderTickRate 2, since it's unnecessary imo, i'd like to suggest 1 but not 2
2. 01:33:848 (6) - Move next NC to here?
3. 01:37:598 (5) - also NC suggest for kiai
4. 01:41:348 (6) - Move next NC to here
5. 01:45:098 (6) - ^
6. 01:48:848 (7) - ^

Generally, it suggests to place NC at downbeat (long-white tick) for better gradation. All fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:31:269 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - how about rotate the by 180 for better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:207 (1,2,3,4) - if you apply above one, it is better to change the order of these four:
   (1): bottom-right => (2) bottom-left => (3) top-left => (4) top-right
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:24:473 (5) - ctrl+g for better flow?
4. 01:30:098 (2) - ^
5. 01:38:301 - i'd like to make a triplet here to 01:38:535 (1) - for transition All fixed except this, I don't like :C
   
6. 01:51:191 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow?

Scorpiour wrote:

make an irc check with mapper, fix inconsistent epilepsy warning.

i think the map is ready~~~enjoy your first bubble here and good luck with the rank :>

RikiH_ wrote:

VAI ROCSAS WOOOOOH

Dammi fuoco.

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Set offset 98. It's for menu strobes and flashes.No affect for notes

Skin
Your skin Digits are too "wide". Look :

It shouldn't overlap, fix please.

Hard
00:34:785 (4,5,6) - 1/4 instead of 1/2 suddenly. but same spacing. eh?
I stumbled there 3 or 4 times, unreadable
00:36:660 (4,5,6) - same
00:38:535 (5,6,7) - same
00:40:410 (5,6,7) - same
01:52:832 - Inis break? unsnapped? why? remove this blue zone~

Revy's Normal
01:18:144 - add note, keep use this 1/2 pattern.
01:36:894 - add note for same reason, 3/2 free place sounds strange when you use 1/1. Make it more rhythmical!
02:21:894 - same

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
01:52:832 - remove inis break

Normal
01:36:894 (5,6) -Add nc to (5)
01:37:598 (1) - remove this nc

small recheck, do not reply, do not kd. fix, poke me in game

Ranked!~

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Moway wrote:

Go to hell, honestly.

Congrats on your first ranked beatmap! ^^

-kevincela- wrote:

If by this sentence you mean this map isn't creative and other things like this,then please go away from here.

Scorpiour wrote:

i expect what you can create.

it is always easy to commend others' work

Roxas wrote:

Mancusojuanmattos: really thanks I'm glad you like it

Baby Strawberry: thanks *-* <3

Gabe: Finally rankeeed \o/

Ayu wrote:

yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.

I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.

/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.

Ayu wrote:

yes let's not make shitty maps and show how much creativity I have by copy and pasting the same fucking patterns everytime over and over again.
let's not forget that the patterns should be just easy and so fucking simple that a 2 year old could do the laundry.

I seriously don't get why people even like this. It just shows that you have no feeling for the song and that you can't come up with anything better than using your ctrl+c and ctrl+v. Seems that I'm one of these few people that actually do care about the quality of maps.

/edit: Don't get me wrong, I'm not hating on you.

Andrea wrote:

The map is good enough, stop complaining already guys, thanks.

GladiOol wrote:

complaining =/= criticizing.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

Roxas wrote:

GladiOol wrote:

complaining =/= criticizing.

Ayu wrote:

Yeah, let's rank more of these maps.

Yet again, osu! is not the game you're looking for if you're looking for creativity, feelings and quality.

For me this is a complain

GladiOol wrote:

I was defending myself, not Ayu.

-zer0- wrote:

your are crazy lml

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Congratz for you first rank :3