akrolsmir wrote:

General:
Offset +14 or so, to 2868. I'm hitting an average of 15 ms late, and listening to the song in .25x confirms that the metronome tick hits before the beat from the song. Do this after fixing everything, though, since my mods are for the timing before it was fixed.changed to2864

Soul-Less-Ly easy: (nice title btw)
Aesthetic suggestions, no real problems.

00:24:312 (1,4) - Make the curve flatter and fit around (2,3)?
01:13:359 (1,2,3) - Imo would look better if 2 wasn't covered by 1, maybe like this:

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or at least make 2 horizontally aligned with 1.
01:41:386 (2,3,4) - Maybe try this:

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or this:

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having just one wrapping around (3) while the other doesn't looks weird.

And some combos I think would fit the music better:
01:44:452 (1) - Not NC
01:44:890 (2) - NC
01:45:766 (1) - Not NC
01:48:393 (5) - NC
01:49:269 (2) - Not NC
01:51:897 (1) - NC
01:52:772 (2) - Not NC
01:55:400 (5) - NC
01:56:276 (1) - Not NC

I think this fits with the musical measure of this section better, b/c right now it seems one note off, especially with that short 2-note combo at 01:44:452 (1).

Normal:
00:28:253 (3) - Seems like an awkward angle, why not just make this a copy+flip of (2)?I dont like copy n paste
00:51:901 (1,2,3,4) - Lacks a clear pattern, are these supposed to be right angular to each other? Looks like:Dont wanna bother it

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right now, try:

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(you can do this by just copying (1) and rotating 90 degrees each time.I dont copy n paste
01:04:820 (4,5) - A bit cramped as it is, touching (3).Fix
02:11:384- Kinda random space, try having a spinner from here to 02:12:917. You might have to move the next beat close to the center,though.Ok
Has the same ending problem of just stopping as Hard, see below.extended

Hard:
00:08:109 (1) - Not new combo for consistency with 00:04:605 (1).
The song end is kinda incomplete, it feels like you just suddenly... stop playing while the music continues. Try mapping until the end, and maybe finishing with a spinner from 02:42:696 to 02:44:010 for the fading effect (a silenced one, of course). Or doing what Soul-Less did in easy, it feels like a finish there.extended

Nice melody, I liked the streams in Hard (b/c they weren't too fast) Like I said in description, I made for my streaming training purpose, Too fast will become steep learning curve for me . Starred!

qilliam wrote:

[general]
Use background image with 4x3 size ratio. (ie. 800x600 or 1024x768)
Delete .osb file (I don't know why, ppl tell me to delete it too)

[soul-less-ly easy]
00:49:273 (2,3,4) - Might be too difficult for easy. Slow AR and default skin makes it look all cluttered.
00:51:025 (3,4,5) - ^

[normal]
ending seems abrupt... maybe end at spinner like in your easy diff? or map until the end and add a spinner as it fades out.extend

[hard]
01:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - These have same spacing as streams but they're 8th notes.no changes
01:28:687 (7,1) - Spacing is too close.fix
01:44:233 (1,1) - This part seems a bit cruel. Short spinner and a note right afterwards. Can cause combobreak for ppl playing map first time. I suggest removing the spinner and adding note at 01:44:890.Change it
02:13:136 (1) - Shows up under the combo counterIt above the counter, even with 800x600 windowed

Same abrupt ending as normal. Read normal's suggestion.Extended


Star~

kokoroanime wrote:

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Hello!!!!

On Soul-less-ly Easy

00:09:094 (5): One grid right.
00:10:298 (1): One grid down.
00:38:763 (1): Snapping? - Slight nazi fix and resnapping all notes.

Well, I'll do Normal and Hard (Not Taiko.) next time whenever I get back to it.

Here's a star.
Thank you and good luck.

qilliam wrote:

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[soul-less-ly easy]
00:49:273 (2,3,4) - Might be too difficult for easy. Slow AR and default skin makes it look all cluttered.
00:51:025 (3,4,5) - ^ - Noted. Won't change yet, unless more complains on it.

akrolsmir wrote:

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Soul-Less-Ly easy: (nice title btw) - Ah haha.
Aesthetic suggestions, no real problems.

00:24:312 (1,4) - Make the curve flatter and fit around (2,3)? - Fixed.
01:13:359 (1,2,3) - Imo would look better if 2 wasn't covered by 1, maybe like this: - Fixed.

or at least make 2 horizontally aligned with 1.
01:41:386 (2,3,4) - Maybe try this: - Made the two slider covering the middle beat.

or this:

having just one wrapping around (3) while the other doesn't looks weird.

And some combos I think would fit the music better:
01:44:452 (1) - Not NC
01:44:890 (2) - NC
01:45:766 (1) - Not NC
01:48:393 (5) - NC
01:49:269 (2) - Not NC
01:51:897 (1) - NC
01:52:772 (2) - Not NC
01:55:400 (5) - NC
01:56:276 (1) - Not NC
- I get what you wanted, but sorry not changing these.
I think this fits with the musical measure of this section better, b/c right now it seems one note off, especially with that short 2-note combo at 01:44:452 (1).

KanaRin wrote:

Taiko mod by HeatKai's request~
Here's some suggestion~

[Heat's Taiko]

00:17:315 (65) - Oh no! Remember Taiko diff can't add Big note in 1/4!
00:21:475 (82,83,84,85) - I don't think there should be 1/6. Fix it to 1/4 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86581
00:25:198 (99) - Kat here
00:26:073 (102) - Big Don
00:27:825 (111) - Big Don not Big Kat, sounds better
00:28:044 (112,113) - Kat
00:28:701 (115) - Big Don not Big Kat
00:28:920 (117) - Kat
00:29:577 (119) - Big Don, sounds better
00:30:015 (121) - ^
00:30:453 (123) - ^
00:47:970 (203,204,205,206...) - Seems like you can use 1/4 here, Like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86587
You can change the hitsounds here , Also don't take off the volume.. Sounds weird. NO
01:18:843 (367~~) - All 1/2 in this part? try to add some OOO? <--(1/4)
01:44:462 (481,482,483,484,485,486,487) - Same problem, I think it can use 1/4.
02:30:006 (650,651,652,653,654,655,656) - ^ NO

Okay.. That's all.
Taiko diff is fine. Good job this time.
But since it has a big mistakes (1/4 Big Note) , I can't vote >8
So..

My Rating: 7 / 10

Star~

Winshley wrote:

Well, I just had fun!