歡樂作文日...
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
add soft-slidertick.wav to make tick mute.
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
same as other diff:
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
that's all 累了... 這次2hr左右...
^必須 不然不recheck>_>... 記得跟AHO說
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
general
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- 02:56:103 - add kiai and end at 02:58:630 - ?
Normal
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- unused green line:
01:36:367 - - fix timing line to correct time:
00:01:319 -
00:13:793 -
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
- 02:27:998 (1,3) -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
add soft-slidertick.wav to make tick mute.
- 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
- 01:42:840 - ^
- 00:50:893 (2) - finish here is better then 00:50:735 -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:02:893 (3) - (optional) move it to x:48,y:240? try to make this pattern more smooth.
- 00:23:261 (5,6,1) - I'm not sure about your idea. but I find (6) should move 1 grid left & down to make those straight.
- 00:45:367 (2) - (optional) to make it a turning point at 00:45:840 - like this↓ because at this point have a kinda big beat. just used turning point to express it
- 00:49:788 (1,2) - suddenly rhythm. It a kinda confuse for newbie because it's easiest diff for this song. try to used rhythm like this↓
- 00:54:682 (1) - move this slider to x:188,y:44 to make pattern more smooth
- 01:32:577 (1,2,3,4) - (suggestion) try to used some curve. It's a rigid pattern for player. If you approve my opinion. just take it
112,224,92577,6,0,B|140:280|204:308,1,120
244,232,93367,2,0,B|200:216|184:176,1,80
248,116,93998,2,0,B|306:170,1,80
364,104,94630,2,0,B|349:68|305:52,1,80
220,32,95261,6,0,B|56:32,1,160 - 01:45:367 (1,2) - same as preview point issue. It's a kinda hard pattern for newbie.
- 01:06:051 (3,4) - ,02:01:630 (3,4) - ok~ It's a rigid pattern for player too. ((I give you 02:01:630 (3,4) -'s code[img]It's%20a%20rigid%20pattern%20for%20player[/img]
256,64,121630,2,0,B|216:76|168:64,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,152,122261,2,0,B|124:136|76:152,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 02:37:630 (6,1) - Errr....
Hard
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- fix timing line to correct time:
00:01:319 -
00:13:793 -
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
- 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
- 01:42:840 - ^
- 00:50:893 (2) - It should add finish imo.
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:07:946 (2) - move the last node to x:344, y:88? I know you want make 00:09:051 (3,4) - centered. so just change slider shape to make more good flow.
- 00:57:840 (2,3,4) - ma... 作的有趣點嘛=3=
32,292,57840,2,0,B|64:340|121:352,1,110
240,312,58472,2,0,B|146:254,1,110
140,132,59103,2,0,B|197:144|229:192,1,110 - 01:07:630 (2,3,4,5,1) - Errr... It's let me feel wrong click... general we click the hit sound at 1/1 beat and end at 1/2 rhythm. so try to used rhythm e.g: ↓
- 02:48:682 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
kiai#2 was copied at kiai#1 ... don't want more explain.
AHO鬼畜沒有之一
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:23:577 (3,4,5,6) - don't you used same spacing like 00:23:261 (1,2,3,4) - ?
- 01:18:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - copy don't explain it.
- 01:35:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - It can be more like star shape, It's more pretty ((btw. I think 01:35:419 (2,2) - should be stacked.
- 02:01:314 (10,11,12,13,1) - make pretty curve plz lol
- 02:50:419 (11,12,13,14) - very confuse to play pattern. 通常看到這麼高AR的note誰會知道這是1+3的排法 很容易就看成只有3連阿 即使是前面都用這樣的節奏還是會讓人難看懂
- 02:53:577 - give you 2 options.
- first: break at 02:53:577 -
- second: add object at 02:53:419 - and 02:53:577 - ((or like this ↓
- first: break at 02:53:577 -
- 02:56:103 (3,4) - ...SPOILER讓人感覺真是隨手的不能再吐嘈了>_>
Pain
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- fix timing line to correct time:
00:01:319 -
00:13:793 -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
- 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
- 01:42:840 - ^
- 00:50:893 - It should add finish imo.
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 01:46:788 (1,1) - It's intentional? just find unstack object.
- 02:44:419 (4) - move down 1 grid (size 4) to make 02:43:314 (1,2,4) - have same overlaps area.
Game
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- fix timing line to correct time:
00:01:319 -
00:13:793 -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
same as other diff:
- 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
- 01:42:840 - ^
- 00:50:893 - It should add finish imo.
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 02:16:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (optional) I have some idea :> try to exchange (2,4)'s place. it's can be good flow imo.
- 02:53:419 (10,1) - change (1) to other place. 從背景音樂聽出兩個的曲調是不同的 於是擺在同位置就會顯得有些奇怪.
that's all 累了... 這次2hr左右...
call me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
^必須 不然不recheck>_>... 記得跟AHO說