JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
preview point太奇葩 我也觉得 哈哈lol
AH难度的background colour与其它难度不符 哦对 改正了
除了AH难度以外 其它难度的combo colour 3&4太暗 有时候跟bg那货的黑头发混在一起会看不到approaching circle 记得之前有提醒过2ha 看来.....-_-

[AngelHoney]
没kiai 差评 毛线 , 明明有好不 而且不止一处O.O
02:42:998 (1) - NC给后面的note 这个没改NC , 不过排列改了下 更好读了
另外像00:23:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)这种排列 34和78对调一下会不会好一点 会不会太鬼畜了点._. 我可不是2ha啊....

spboxer3 wrote:

歡樂作文日...

AHO鬼畜沒有之一

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:23:577 (3,4,5,6) - don't you used same spacing like 00:23:261 (1,2,3,4) - ? hm..好吧 稍微修正了下排列._.
2. 01:18:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - copy don't explain it. ? 意义不明, 也是指排列?
   
   
3. 01:35:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - It can be more like star shape, It's more pretty ((btw. I think 01:35:419 (2,2) - should be stacked. 好吧 稍改了下0.0
   
   
4. 02:01:314 (10,11,12,13,1) - make pretty curve plz lol lol , 改了
   
   
5. 02:50:419 (11,12,13,14) - very confuse to play pattern. 通常看到這麼高AR的note誰會知道這是1+3的排法 很容易就看成只有3連阿 即使是前面都用這樣的節奏還是會讓人難看懂 um 也对 , 改好了
   
   
6. 02:53:577 - give you 2 options. (break的话试过了 实际玩起来太短 没感觉有变化 , 没动 , 另外个主意 不采纳...你看我之前几处break之前也是连打那几串 也是这么布置的 不打算突然该节奏
   
   1. first: break at 02:53:577 -
      
      
   2. second: add object at 02:53:419 - and 02:53:577 - ((or like this ↓
      
      
7. 02:56:103 (3,4) - ...
   SPOILER

   讓人感覺真是隨手的不能再吐嘈了>_>
   我..我...我也有稍微排列过的说(炸

yooo wtf this diff!!!(sp3:太送分了吧

spboxer3 wrote:

歡樂作文日... 小三姐姐你好帅！

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. 02:56:103 - add kiai and end at 02:58:630 - ?

OK

Normal

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  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unused green line:
   01:36:367 - OK
2. fix timing line to correct time:
   00:01:319 -
   00:13:793 -

OK

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)

1. 02:27:998 (1,3) -

没地方放了

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

add soft-slidertick.wav to make tick mute.

1. 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?OK
2. 01:42:840 - ^OK
   
   
3. 00:50:893 (2) - finish here is better then 00:50:735 -

OK俩都加了

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:02:893 (3) - (optional) move it to x:48,y:240? try to make this pattern more smooth. OK
   
   
2. 00:23:261 (5,6,1) - I'm not sure about your idea. but I find (6) should move 1 grid left & down to make those straight. OK
   
   
3. 00:45:367 (2) - (optional) to make it a turning point at 00:45:840 - like this↓ because at this point have a kinda big beat. just used turning point to express it
   
   
   

   300,32,45367,2,0,B|321:78|295:117|295:117|344:136|360:184,1,180.000006866455,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   OK
4. 00:49:788 (1,2) - suddenly rhythm. It a kinda confuse for newbie because it's easiest diff for this song. try to used rhythm like this↓ OK
   
   
   
   
5. 00:54:682 (1) - move this slider to x:188,y:44 to make pattern more smooth OK
   
   
6. 01:32:577 (1,2,3,4) - (suggestion) try to used some curve. It's a rigid pattern for player. If you approve my opinion. just take it 这里我还是觉得直直的下来好一点
   
   
   

   112,224,92577,6,0,B|140:280|204:308,1,120
   244,232,93367,2,0,B|200:216|184:176,1,80
   248,116,93998,2,0,B|306:170,1,80
   364,104,94630,2,0,B|349:68|305:52,1,80
   220,32,95261,6,0,B|56:32,1,160

   
   
7. 01:45:367 (1,2) - same as preview point issue. It's a kinda hard pattern for newbie. OK
   
   
8. 01:06:051 (3,4) - ,02:01:630 (3,4) - ok~ It's a rigid pattern for player too. ((I give you 02:01:630 (3,4) -'s code 这里我还是觉得直直的玩好一点然后那个图崩了↓
   
   [img]It's%20a%20rigid%20pattern%20for%20player[/img]
   

   256,64,121630,2,0,B|216:76|168:64,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   164,152,122261,2,0,B|124:136|76:152,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   
   
9. 02:37:630 (6,1) - Errr....

改了改了改了...........

Hard

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. fix timing line to correct time:
   00:01:319 -
   00:13:793 -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
   
   
2. 01:42:840 - ^
   
   
3. 00:50:893 (2) - It should add finish imo.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:07:946 (2) - move the last node to x:344, y:88? I know you want make 00:09:051 (3,4) - centered. so just change slider shape to make more good flow.
   
   
2. 00:57:840 (2,3,4) - ma... 作的有趣點嘛=3= 除了这个，我还是比较喜欢整齐的直的这么一下哈=3=
   
   
   

   32,292,57840,2,0,B|64:340|121:352,1,110
   240,312,58472,2,0,B|146:254,1,110
   140,132,59103,2,0,B|197:144|229:192,1,110

   
   
3. 01:07:630 (2,3,4,5,1) - Errr... It's let me feel wrong click... general we click the hit sound at 1/1 beat and end at 1/2 rhythm. so try to used rhythm e.g: ↓
   
   
   
   
4. 02:48:682 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
   
   kiai#2 was copied at kiai#1 ... don't want more explain.

都改了

Pain

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. fix timing line to correct time:
   00:01:319 -
   00:13:793 -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?
   
   
2. 01:42:840 - ^
   
   
3. 00:50:893 - It should add finish imo.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 01:46:788 (1,1) - It's intentional? just find unstack object.
   
   
2. 02:44:419 (4) - move down 1 grid (size 4) to make 02:43:314 (1,2,4) - have same overlaps area.

OK都改了

Game

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. fix timing line to correct time:
   00:01:319 -
   00:13:793 -

OK

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
same as other diff:

1. 00:47:261 - 50% It's a bit louder. mby used 40%?OK
   
   
2. 01:42:840 - ^OK
   
   
3. 00:50:893 - It should add finish imo.

OK

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:16:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (optional) I have some idea :> try to exchange (2,4)'s place. it's can be good flow imo.
   好主意改了OK
   
2. 02:53:419 (10,1) - change (1) to other place. 從背景音樂聽出兩個的曲調是不同的 於是擺在同位置就會顯得有些奇怪.

OK

that's all 累了... 這次2hr左右...

call me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

^必須 不然不recheck>_>... 記得跟AHO說AHO究极恐怖diff已上传

Normal

AngelHoney

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck.

[Hard]
01:07:630 (2,3,4,5,1) - you said all fixed. but I haven't look that :/
same as 02:48:682 (1,2,3,4,1) - 可能是我忘了打了对不起当时基本上满屏幕的代码感觉所以漏了=_=|||，因为节奏来说前面的那个是断点，也就是一个note在红线上，再拉slider的话总觉得不干脆，然后节拍是从红线开始的所以从红线转短slider，嘛，这是hard嘛.....至少我觉得打起来一点问题都没有.............

[Pain]
fix timing line to correct time:
00:13:793 still need be fixed
^改了！

(ˊ_>ˋ)~"

bossandy wrote:

驚爆遊戲 D
前幾天才在學校跟同學借手機來看了兩集
看到第二集時我徹底黑化了 \:D/

Fleareon wrote:

whats the anime name of the video in the beatmap?

whymeman wrote:

Fleareon wrote:

whats the anime name of the video in the beatmap?

Source: BTOOOM!

As shown from the opening post.

Raging Bull wrote:

Anime is btooom. Music Video isn't far as I know