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Yusuke Takahama - X - Tunnel Scene

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tieff
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tieff
[Easy]
A don't see any technical problems, just few suggestions. You don't need to do this.
01:16:00 (4) - Clap on end?
01:19:20 (4) - ^
01:22:40 (4) - ^
01:24:80 (3) - ^
01:30:40 (2) - So ronery whistle. =( Or remove or add more.
01:39:200 - Add note.

[Normal]
Cool hitsounds.
00:40:60 (2) - Add clap on start of slider, remove clap from end.
01:03:00 (5) - ^
01:06:20 (2) - ^
01:19:20 (3) - Add whistle on start.
01:39:200 - Note here.

[Insane]
All cool.
01:39:200 - Add note?

Starred.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Couldn't find anything wrong~
Star!
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Easy:
00:41:60 (1) - midway through this spinner, I have really no clue what the spinner is supposed to follow
01:07:20 (5) - align with 4?

Normal:
00:41:60 (1) - midway through this spinner, I have really no clue what the spinner is supposed to follow

Insane:
00:22:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these should all be of equal length, and to me they don't go well with the music
00:28:80 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - " "
00:42:40 (1) - what is the beginning of this spinner supposed to follow?

Most of your difficulties feel like you just placed notes randomly after turning on distance snap. It is pretty boring with no pattern.

Since you have very few technical flaws, Star.
Xgor
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Xgor

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Most of your difficulties feel like you just placed notes randomly after turning on distance snap. It is pretty boring with no pattern.
I know this map isn't perfect in every way possible....
But it's my first map! :roll: But it's better than my second one.....
cyanberryio
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Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
[Easy]
Raise tick rate.
00:42:40 (1) - End spinner at 00:48:00 with soft whistle sound.

[Normal]
Sounds a bit better with Tick Rate lowered by 1.
00:42:40 (1) - End spinner at 00:48:00 with soft whistle sound.

[Insane]
Lower tick rate?
00:42:40 (1) - End spinner at 00:48:00 with soft whistle sound.
01:26:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Do not like at all. Doesn't fit.
01:32:80 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^

Only starring cause Easy and Normal were pretty decent and good for slower difficulties.
PandaCath
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PandaCath
[Easy]
Nothing obvious.

[Normal]
01:16:00 (3,4,5) - Looks a little offly spaced.

[Insane]
00:48:400 (x) Why is there nothing here o_o I guess you forgot to put a break here?

Very good map. You get a star!
Pasonia
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Pasonia
I agree, this map has seen some rather good influences. Has James-ism started to permeate the whole good mapping community? X__X

Anyway c'ping savelog here, bolding what is important and removing whatever is inconsequential.

Easy is fine if a bit dull, but meh, we need to take care of our inexperienced players. As they say in the army:
Care for soldiers!

17:53 <Pasonia> : Normal: 00:26:80 (1,2,3)
17:53 <Pasonia> : I don't know about this part, but I was expecting a few repeats

17:53 <Pasonia> : also, what did you use for distance?
17:54 <Pasonia> : there seems to be some rather suspect spacing (not immediately noticable but yea, there is a bit of a gap
17:54 <Pasonia> : difference even right from the first two notes, using beat spacing 0.8x
17:54 <Pasonia> : so I wish you can correct as many of this as possible because it's intermittent all over your map

17:54 <Pasonia> : back to 00:26:80 (1)
17:55 <Pasonia> : I wish you can make this repeat six times while removing 2 and 3
17:55 <Pasonia> : but if you are vehemently against this, you can treat this as optional

17:55 <Pasonia> : I might not always be correct, but I will give out suggestions whenever possible

17:56 <Pasonia> : 01:02:00 (4,5) - given the music at this part
17:56 <Pasonia> : I am quite worried whether this will throw off unsuspecting players
17:56 <Pasonia> : it's actually the same situation as the one in 00:26:80(1)
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18:01 <Pasonia> : Insane @ Xgor
18:02 <Pasonia> : 00:41:60 (10) - newcombo
18:02 <Pasonia> : 01:07:20 (11) - same
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18:02 <Pasonia> : also
18:03 <Pasonia> : it's a personal comment of mine, but
18:03 <Pasonia> : since ALL of your maps utilise less than 1/2 the original mp3
18:03 <Pasonia> : I suggest shortening the beatmap's mp3 to 2 minutes, with a fadeout at 1:55
18:03 <Xgor> : Ok
Xgor
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Xgor
Just a tiny question!
Does the easy difficulity sounds better with 1 on slider tick rate rather then 2?? :?:
eee
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eee

Xgor wrote:

Just a tiny question!
Does the easy difficulity sounds better with 1 on slider tick rate rather then 2?? :?:
I think it's fine, it can be both, imo

eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]
00:22:40 (1) - finish on first circle of the slider???
00:28:80 (1) - ^???
00:35:20 (1) - I prefer this ending 1/1 later, that's to the next white tick, I think, w/e you call it, end it at the next white tick or just occupy that tick with a circle
00:38:40 (1) - ^ here too, I think it makes the map move faster but stay easy
01:37:60 (3) - one more repeat?

[Normal]
00:22:40 (1) - finish on beginning???
00:28:80 (3) - ^
01:26:40 (1) - ^
01:32:80 (1) - ^
01:36:00 (2) - ^
01:39:200 (x) - something here, circle? slider endpoint?

[Hard]
01:39:200 (x) - something here?

Hitsound modding is not my type, but I tried, so do what you will
also, I prefer the map ending here 01:39:200, if you don't like it, don't do it

Starred, looks like this map has got it's fair share of mods
vytalibus
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vytalibus
Offset: 10 ms. The whole thing sounds a bit rushed originally.
Doomsday
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Andrea
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Andrea
[Timing]

Offset 10 BPM fine.

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

00:28:80 (3) - New combo.

[Insane]

00:39:60 (4,5,6) - Wrong spacing.

Suggestion : Lower soft section by 2 or 3 ticks.

Starred.
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
hey.

offset 9.625 and renew the breaks afterwards.


other than that i have no problems with all diffs
sesito71
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sesito71
:D

[Easy]

00:40:01 (2) - This is nazi mod but, well, if you move this one grid lvl 3 down it looks better (cause you align 2 with start of slider 3) ^^ Anyways it's ok the way it is now :D

01:04:01 (1) - Same as before, maybe you'd want to align this with end of slider 4 (then adjust the next notes) This is optional ;)

01:07:21 (5) - New combo?

[Normal]

01:36:01 (2) - New combo here?

[Insane]

nothing found. I love this diff :D


Star*
minyeob
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minyeob
Just one thing

[Insane]
01:22:21 (4) - Inconsistent Spacing?
Symbolic
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Symbolic
[Easy]

Use Slider Tick Rate 1.
Most of the times it sounds bad if you let ur sliders end on blue ticks.

00:12:01 (4) - Extend or Shorten this slider 1/4 cause it sounds crap like this :(.
00:15:21 (3) - ^
00:18:41 (3) - Shorten 1/4.
00:28:81 (1) - Extend 1/4.
00:33:61 (3) - Shorten 1/4.
00:35:21 (1) - ^
00:37:61 (3) - ^
00:38:41 (1) - Extend 1/4.


[Normal]

00:37:41 (5) - New combo.
00:38:41 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:21 (3) - Add new combo.
00:39:61 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:05:21 (1) - ^
01:07:21 (4) - New combo.
01:38:01 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Insane]

00:11:81 (3) - Spacing issue, fix this.


That's all! Nice, I like the song + map :)
Starred *
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
alright

mod

[normal]
01:02:010(1) : one less bounce
01:05:210(1) : "



and that's it

starred

maybe add a vid (suggestion)
Xgor
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Xgor

x3ns0r wrote:

[normal]
01:02:010(1) : one less bounce No,That's sounds not good at all..........
01:05:210(1) : "
ft1717492
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kino77
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kino77
Good job~ :)
Just a little suggestion~

[easy]
Nothing~

[normal]
Turn slider tick rate to 1?
00:41:61(1)-spinner too long?a little boring...

[insane]
Turn slider tick rate to 1?
Turn overall difficulty to lv.7?
00:41:61(1)-same as normal?
01:08:01(1)-to long for insane?
01:38:41(3)-spacing?

Star~
Xgor
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Xgor
To be honest...
The only reason the spinners are so long is because that is the most fitting on that part :P
Ekaru
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Ekaru
Insane isn't there. As in, it doesn't come with it when I download it.

Also, tickrate of 2 on Easy sounds better to me.

So, do a full resubmit, that should hopefully fix it. I need to play Insane so I can star this sucker.
Xgor
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Ekaru wrote:

Insane isn't there. As in, it doesn't come with it when I download it.

Also, tickrate of 2 on Easy sounds better to me.

So, do a full resubmit, that should hopefully fix it. I need to play Insane so I can star this sucker.
Thats odd.....

Anyway i keep the tick rate because i think my tick rate sounds better.

Anyway try to re-download now :)
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Easy]
Raise Hitsound Volume a bit
00:22:41 (1) - Finish on beginning of slider and clap at the end?
00:28:81 (1) - ^
01:26:41 (1) - Clap on first repeat and end with a finish.

[Normal]
00:26:81 (1) - Whistle on first repeat
00:32:01 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the slider

[Insane]
00:37:61 (8) - Add a Finish?
01:07:21 (1) - Add clap
01:07:41 (2) - Remove Clap
01:14:81 (8) - Add clap
01:16:41 (8) - ^
01:18:01 (8) - ^
01:19:61 (8) - ^
01:21:21 (8) - ^
01:22:81 (8) - ^
01:24:31 (6) - Clap at end of slider
bmin11
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Xgor
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bmin11 wrote:

I think this map needs difficulty [Hard]. There is a huge difficulty gap btw normal and insane.
True :roll: But i am pretty happy with what i have right now and i have no ideas to a Hard ;)
Starrodkirby86
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Real1
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Cool map, this. The only thing I didn't like was the BG image. It's a bit boring.. Maybe you can spice it up by using some custom combo colours for the hit circles?

Options->Song Setup->Colours->Enable Custom combo colors

Other than that. I see nothing that bothers me.

Have a star!
Xgor
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Real1 wrote:

Cool map, this. The only thing I didn't like was the BG image. It's a bit boring.. Maybe you can spice it up by using some custom combo colours for the hit circles?
It's true that the background is a bit bland but that is because that this picture (and the game-box) is the only fitting picture to the game X and that one was the one i liked the most.
Oh! also about custom colors,The main reason i haven't added custom colors is because i haven't a idea of what colors i should take and also because I'm pretty happy with those colors i have.
whymeman
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Xgor wrote:

Real1 wrote:

Cool map, this. The only thing I didn't like was the BG image. It's a bit boring.. Maybe you can spice it up by using some custom combo colours for the hit circles?
It's true that the background is a bit bland but that is because that this picture (and the game-box) is the only fitting picture to the game X and that one was the one i liked the most.
Oh! also about custom colors,The main reason i haven't added custom colors is because i haven't a idea of what colors i should take and also because I'm pretty happy with those colors i have.
Although it is true that it is from the game. The song is also played in SSBB so you can use images from there as well. :)
Xgor
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whymeman wrote:

Although it is true that it is from the game. The song is also played in SSBB so you can use images from there as well. :)
I thought about that some time you posted that but i decided to not do it, but i assume that a picture from the Lylat Cruise stage would be the best brawl picture. (Im pretty happy with what i have right now :) )
whymeman
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Alright :)

And the current background isn't causing playability issues so it should be okay. Not trying to force you to change it.
zwlda
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SenichiSeung
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SenichiSeung
I like it a lot ^.^

star~
antony11
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antony11
Insane:
01:00:41 (4) - I think this should also be jump put it below 2

Actuall I think your's Insane is hard only, it's just too easy for me =V=

Other difficulty are OK. But I think you should try to make the map more interesting by adding some own rhythm/

Started
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Jarby
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Jarby
Raise hitsound volume a notch or two.

Insane:

Pretty much all of the sliders are simply straight lines. They would look better if you curved some of them slightly (bezier).
00:15:81 (5) - Remove finish.
00:16:01 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
00:22:21 (6) - Remove finish.
00:22:41 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
00:42:00 (3) - Remove finish from slider end.
00:45:20 (4,5) - Remove finish.
00:46:00 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle.
00:59:21 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:20:01 (1) - Place finish.
01:25:41 (3) - Remove finish.
01:25:61 (4) - Remove finish from end.
01:26:41 (1) - Place finish on start.
01:30:81 (7) - New combo, remove next combo's marker.
01:32:41 (6) - Remove finish.
01:32:81 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
01:36:01 (1) - Finish on slider start.

Wait, so you give kudosu to a later poster for saying the same thing in a different way? Hmm...
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Xgor
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JarJarJacob wrote:

Raise hitsound volume a notch or two.

Insane:

Pretty much all of the sliders are simply straight lines. They would look better if you curved some of them slightly (bezier).
00:15:81 (5) - Remove finish.
00:16:01 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
00:22:21 (6) - Remove finish.
00:22:41 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
00:42:00 (3) - Remove finish from slider end.
00:45:20 (4,5) - Remove finish.
00:46:00 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle.
00:59:21 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
01:20:01 (1) - Place finish.
01:25:41 (3) - Remove finish.
01:25:61 (4) - Remove finish from end.
01:26:41 (1) - Place finish on start.
01:30:81 (7) - New combo, remove next combo's marker.
01:32:41 (6) - Remove finish.
01:32:81 (1) - Place finish on slider start.
01:36:01 (1) - Finish on slider start.
From what you said it sounded more serious then it was....

...First of all i like having a finish on the last beat in a combo ,not on the first
I also like the special spacing at 00:59:21 (it's fun that way :P ) and i like the combos at 1:29:609 - 1:32:409

Yes i also know the sliders are strait line but meh :| i think it's ok as it is

I don't see most of those things as being major....
Jarby
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Jarby
That spacing isn't rankable, first of all. As for finishes, they would fit the song more like this. Regardless of whether or not it's a major change, it's an improvement.
Lybydose
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The background is somewhat bland.

Insane:

01:00:01 (3,4) - Fix this spacing or make the 4 a new combo to warn about the spacing inconsistency. You probably want to do the ladder since you've expressed interest in keeping it how it is.

Normal:

00:10:01 (2,3) - These randomly have higher spacing than the rest of the map, which seems to adhere to a constant distance spacing throughout.

Easy:

No problems.
Xgor
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Eddycted
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Some suggestions:

Insane

00:33:61 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make these four circles form a square

And a star.
Xgor
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Eddycted wrote:

00:33:61 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make these four circles form a square
Aren't those circles doing that already?....
ztrot
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ztrot
Easy: Fine~
Normal:Fine~
Insane:fine~
Just move that offset back by 2ms. <3
you coulda kept the jump from left to right just line it up but nvm.
bubble~
Xgor
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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
looks good

[Normal]
cool

[Insane]
ranked o.o
Xgor
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YAY! :D :D :D

But i noticed that the BG has disappeared oddly enough... (i have a guess that i by a mistake deleted the BG when i submitted it >:( )
It someone still got the background, give a copy to me :)
Real1
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Congratulations on 1st ranked map. :)
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