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Topic Starter
Kanari
Its fine~
Thankkyhuu^^
suzutsukikanade
Requested in my queue, i check this map before the request.
Your map is fine in my opinion but i see a spacing error in Insane, in 00:35:977 (1,2,3): This stacking is weird, change to this:

Good map :D
i want to star but i can't.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you^^
I'll have Sun Rainbow fix it when he comes on~
riffy
Yo~

Mod request from your signature

General?
wtf! combo colors looks weird

Insane
00:10:977 (1) - spacing
00:12:088 (2) - nc (new combo) / remove NC
00:19:681 (4,1) - a bit messy. don't touch sliders
00:21:347 (5,9) - stack them> (put (9) on start of (5))
00:58:384 (1) - x316 y 172
01:28:755 (9) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis
01:55:792 (1,4) - stack start points
03:15:792 (5,1) - stack them
03:16:532 (6,2) - overlap

Hard
00:15:051 (1,1) - new combo spam
00:28:755 (1,3) - stack properly
00:33:199 (1) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

fine for me. but still needs a bit more modding :|
GL~
Cygnus
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
SPOILER
  1. Map needs more improvement, so I'll basically just mod easy, and shoot a star.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
SPOILER
  1. 00:42:088 (3) - Inconsistent spacing. http://puu.sh/oEvN

  2. 01:01:347 (4) - This slider is unrankable imo.

  3. 01:26:162 (7) - Spacing.
Topic Starter
Kanari
I think the slider is fine so ill keep it~
Thanks for mod and star! ;D
Poggo
Hey :3


General
1) Slider tick rate on all diff's should be identical
2) - 01:02:829 - remove this kiai time

Rainbow's Insane
00:04:310 - this slider not beautiful( this look better
392,64,4310,2,2,B|424:116|348:180|304:144,2,159.999990463257,2|0|0
00:06:347 - make this slider not double and add note on 00:06:903
00:12:273 - remove new combo
00:18:940 - remove this slider and add note on 00:19:125
00:40:421 - remove this slider >< make this http://puu.sh/qUcR
01:22:088 - remove NC
01:55:421(4,5,6,1) - wow wow it's UNRANKBLE bcz hides reverse slider(1)
01:59:125 - remove NC
01:59:681 - ^
02:00:792 - ^
02:01:347 - ^
02:01:718 - add NC
02:01:903 - remove NC
02:02:458 - ^
02:03:014 - remove NC
02:03:940 - add NC
02:04:310 - remove NC
02:11:903 - ^
02:32:644 - ^
02:45:236 - ^
02:56:162 - ^
03:05:421 - ^
03:09:495 - make this slider shorter and add note on 03:10:051
03:31:718 - on end spinner make volume more silently

Hard
00:21:903 - add note
00:47:088 - make this look better
00:48:384 - add note
01:04:310 - sound better http://puu.sh/qUtC
01:08:384 - add note
01:17:273 - add NC
01:18:755 - remove NC
01:19:866 - add NC
01:26:532 - make this
248,128,86532,6,2,B|292:68|404:124|384:200,1,200
01:50:607 - add note
01:51:347 - ^
01:53:014 - ^
02:45:607 - remove this spinner and put notes
03:03:199 - add note
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu~
Sun Rainbow
Sorry I decied to remap my diff...
ertyukjh010


Hello :)
Oh, 41000.... What the

[Easy]

00:27:273 (1) - ugly. Make it use a 4 point. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302321
02:12:458 ~ 03:05:792 - Some useless inherited point. Delete it if unused.

[Normal]

00:03:570 - Useless inherited point
00:39:495 - NC bug
02:58:014 (3) - Move ↑ 1 grid. Make it same horizontal with 02:56:903 (1,2)
03:05:792 (1) - End at 03:07:273 pls. Because the spinner length is too short and too little time between the spinner and the next note

[Hard]

02:10:051 (1) - Stack some mess and easy to miss this note.
02:22:273 (6) - Stack with 02:20:977 (3) at beginner. And end at 02:23:569 better.
02:31:532 (6) - reverse at 02:31:718 and reverse more 2 times.
02:45:051 - NC bug
02:56:903 - NC bug

[Rainbow's Insane]

竟然在外國人的圖驚見彩虹君!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!owo
00:22:829 (9) - 向下移動1格,與00:21:347的開頭重疊
00:27:088 (2) - 坑嗲啊ww,這個減速真心太突然=3= 還有節奏應該是這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302333
00:40:421 (2) - 折返點應該是00:41:162
02:39:310 (2) - 我想您原意是放在02:38:755 ?
02:40:792 (2,3) - 上面改了這兩個可以刪掉
02:41:718 () - 上面改了這裡可以add note
02:45:236 (1) - Remove NC
03:28:014 (1) - 在03:27:829開始吧? 音樂感覺在這邊

That all :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyhu! ^w^
DerekMcD
[General]

You fix overlapped stuffs, because their unrankable.

[Easy]

Their are some overlapped stuffs.
Finish the whole diff...

00:36:162 (1) - Fix this slider.
01:18:755 (1) - It's overlapping (5).

[Normal]

00:45:051 (2) - Fix this slider in a better way.
00:46:347 (3,4,5) - It's overlapping (2).
00:56:903 (3) - Fix one like this. puu.sh/s34G
01:22:088 (1,2,3) - Overlapped.
02:42:088 (4) - Try x:340 y:152?

[Hard]

00:12:458 (1) - Move the 2nd point two grids left.
02:22:273 (6) - Overlapped.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankks~
I'll mod your map soon! ^^
Topic Starter
Kanari
Blehhh! ><
Fixed a few things and moved to WIP since Sun Rainbow has exams and is gunna take a while to remap his diff ;w;
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Like that song x333 I wish you good luck with it ^-^
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~
>w<
Chloe
Hello ~ Mod request from Chloe's Modding Queue


  • [General]
  1. All the difficulty, the SB option of the Setup page, plz cancel the Letterbox during breaks.

  • [Normal]
  1. HP-1
  2. 02:43:940 (6) - Change to two 1/2-note
  3. 02:59:866 (3) - Keep the spacing



  • [Hard]
  1. 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - It's dull , re-arrange it
  2. 02:07:088 (1) - Add a note.
    I feel that this map need to be arranged some triple click. But everyone have their own mapping style, you can just ignore this/




  • [Insane]
  1. 03:05:699 (4) - Move it?But I can't determine that...
    Great.. I could not pick any dissatisfied. A nice Insane-Diff.
    Stared!


Hmm... sry for later. because I was very busy for last a few days and also now... Maybe I'll back for a recheck when got some free time.
Yeah That's all I found ^^ Bye~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you ~ ;D
>w<
Melt
I love this song >.<

star ~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Meltt ~
Thank you >w<
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Easy]
00:48:384 (2,3) - alignment~x:388?~or~~~
00:51:718 (1,2) - 2 alignment 1(end)?~

[Normal]
00:59:866 - nc~
01:00:421 - remove nc~
02:03:384 - add note?~or move 02:03:570 (3) - to this time point?~
02:55:977 - .hmmmmmm~~~maybe u can move 02:56:162 (2) - ~to this point~~~~then~move 02:56:532 (3) - ~to 02:56:347 - ~this time point~~~~~~just suggestion~

[Hard]
00:31:718 (5,6,7,1,2) - just suggestion~00:31:718 (5,6) - alignment~then change 00:33:199 (1) - slider appearance~~~then......just look more beautiful~

01:48:569 - add note?
01:48:755 - delete this note?~
01:48:940 - add note?~
01:49:125 - delete this note?~
01:49:310 - add note?~.....................idk why this rhythm listen feel a little strange~~just suggestion~hmmmm~~maybe u can change like 01:56:718 - to 01:59:032 - ~this is good~
01:51:532 - to 01:53:199 - ^~
01:53:569 (1) - to 01:56:162 (6) - ^~

That all~~~if sun rambow done his map ~u can tell me~~~i will remod it~xD
Nice song~ and mapset~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you A-tan ~
I will fix it after school. >w<
DarkSkyKnight
sucky mod lol..

em..

Red mods are retarded ones that don't really make sense even to myself so yeah....

General:

00:03:570 I think you should let this part be softer in volume, make it 40% perhaps, then add a new timing point at 00:15:421 to 50% and then finally at 00:27:273 turn it to 60%.

[Easy]
00:46:718 (2,3) - I think you should move these two upwards because it is visually gives more distance spacing.
00:51:718 (1) - This overlaps with 00:49:125 (4) in an awkward way
01:26:162 (7) - Maybe it shouldn't overlap with 6.

[Normal]
00:27:273 (1) - This should perhaps go somewhere so it doesn't overlap with the rest of the combo.
00:27:829 (2,3,4) - It's ok but maybe there's a better way to map this part, try transforming 2 and 3 into a slider?
00:42:829 (2) - This should perhaps not be that long, but perhaps make a slider from 00:42:829 to 00:43:199 and then the slider 3 from 00:43:384 to 00:43:755. From here on maybe you could let slider 3 repeat two times, or let it repeat only one time + the same circle on 00:44:495 (3) etc.
00:56:903 (3) - Perhaps flip this vertically so that it does not overlap with 00:54:681 (1). At the same time don't infringe the distance spacing...

on the whole there's a lot of minor overlapping. Occasional ones won't affect the map much, but too much of these make it look a bit awkward.
some are fine though...

[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) and 01:31:718 (1) - these two spinners don't appear to fit the music.
02:32:644 (7,8,9) - because of previous stacking the visual distance of these notes from 6 appear to be lesser. Try moving it down by one grid.
02:40:977 (3,4,5) - I prefer putting these three notes even further apart but that's up to you.
03:03:199 (4,5) - .....it's a trap. em..this is not good because 4 blocks 5 as 5 is short, making it visually as if 5 is a single circle on its own.
03:05:236 (1) - perhaps this spinner should be moved to 03:05:884 and at 03:05:236 you should add some notes to fit the vocal part.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank yhuu ~ >w<
Regou
Collab Insane requested by baka rainbow~
Coming soon
Sun Rainbow
http://puu.sh/CHW2
Diff by :Me and Regou~
Regou
*P.S.
Start to 01:35:421 by Sun Rainbow

01:47:273 to 03:33:940 by me
Topic Starter
Kanari
owo okayy ~
Regou
Rainbow_Regou (4.97 stars, 189 notes)
what's happening Q___Q 笨蛋彩虹你是在做什麼
anyway here's the finished one

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 3570,13940,25792,39125,51532,62829,74681,86532,95421,107273,119125,132458,144310,156162,165051,176903,185792,187273
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"SPiCa.avi"
0,0,"SPiCa_Headphone-Tokyo.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,63029,73931
2,95621,106523
2,144510,155412
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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195977,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
207644,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
208014,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255

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Topic Starter
Kanari
Okayy ~
Sun Rainbow, can you hitsound your diff too? ><
Or maybe get Regou to help you?
Regou

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Okayy ~
Sun Rainbow, can you hitsound your diff too? ><
Or maybe get Regou to help you?
Oops, I see, Sun Rainbow sent you the hisounded one but it didn't include my part orz
Wait
I remember he said he did this , maybe he sent you the wrong ver?
btw did this for him first and fixed some minor stuff for him
SPOILER
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Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
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Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga

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Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
delete osz file~...if u not SB~

Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
删掉一个把~这两个颜色很相近~或者换个颜色?~【delete a colours, because these r colour too similar~~i think......maybe u can change it~


[Rainbow_Regou]
00:18:755 - 删掉这个note?节奏感觉对不上。。~然后~...看图把~xD

00:21:162 - 删掉again~xD~~~只是建议~
00:30:236 (1) - 没摆好?~
SPOILER

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00:32:829 (4) - 减少一拍?~后面的slider感觉好空虚orz~把后面的slider移到这个结尾把~。。。额。。。果断上图。。。。试下吧。。。我觉得听起来舒服点。。

00:47:273 (2,3,4,1) - 距离有点乱。。
SPOILER
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01:23:477 (4) - 减少2拍?~然后在01:26:532 - add note?~

02:09:495 (1,2) - 距离太远了。。。。最好近一点把~第一次读图很容易错。。。~
03:27:644 (1,2,3,1) - 改成这样?~

thats all~
good luck!~xD
Regou

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

02:09:495 (1,2) - 距离太远了。。。。最好近一点把~第一次读图很容易错。。。~ 才騙1PC就算了吧
03:27:644 (1,2,3,1) - 改成这样?~ 那個音樂是明顯的1/4 note啊...

thats all~
good luck!~xD
Topic Starter
Kanari
Sun Rainbow will fix his part soon ~
Aurele
Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL

edit: here's a star. So your map could be Bubbled if a MAT thinks it needs to be bubbled. (You know, this new system. (y))
Regou

Gabe wrote:

Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL

edit: here's a star. So your map could be Bubbled if a MAT thinks it needs to be bubbled. (You know, this new system. (y))
I wrote "Rainbow x Regou" in my own file ._. But...
Aurele

Regou wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Rainbow_Regou, oh okay. LOL
I wrote "Rainbow x Regou" in my own file ._. But...
It's better with Rainbow x Regou than Rainbow_Regou, because it's like if the difficulty was made by Rainbow_Regou and not Rainbow AND(x) Regou.
Topic Starter
Kanari
I'll change it after Sun Rainbow updates from the previous mod and i'll move the map into pending as well.
Sun Rainbow
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow_Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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SliderTickRate:1

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252,120,76532,2,0,B|172:120,2,79.9999952316285,8|2|8
252,200,77088,1,2
252,280,77273,6,8,B|288:308|324:324|368:312|404:276,1,159.999990463257
336,228,77829,2,2,B|368:156|344:64,1,159.999990463257
272,44,78384,2,8,B|196:20|116:52,1,159.999990463257
96,128,78940,1,2
124,204,79125,5,8
136,208,79218,1,0
148,212,79310,2,0,B|184:232|232:232,1,79.9999952316285,2|10
292,272,79681,1,2
304,268,79773,1,0
316,264,79866,2,0,B|360:260|408:232,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
468,264,80236,2,8,B|488:176|464:104,1,159.999990463257
396,68,80792,5,2
396,68,80884,1,0
396,68,80977,2,0,B|352:52|312:68,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
300,144,81347,2,0,B|344:156|388:144,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
388,228,81718,1,8
332,284,81903,6,2,B|252:268|164:292,1,159.999990463257
184,368,82458,2,8,B|228:300|204:208,1,159.999990463257
260,156,83014,2,2,B|196:224|96:208,1,159.999990463257
64,148,83569,6,0,B|88:116,1,39.9999976158142,8|2
168,112,83940,2,0,B|208:84,1,39.9999976158142,8|2
280,104,84310,2,0,B|364:72,2,79.9999952316285,8|8|8
256,192,85236,12,0,86532
192,224,86718,5,2
228,296,86903,1,8
292,248,87088,2,0,B|336:232|380:256,1,79.9999952316285,2|8
216,200,87458,5,2
240,276,87644,1,8
312,240,87829,2,0,B|352:216|356:172,1,79.9999952316285,2|8
232,168,88199,5,2
248,248,88384,1,8
320,216,88569,2,0,B|360:192|352:140,1,79.9999952316285,2|8
344,68,88940,5,2
312,44,89032,1,0
272,40,89125,2,0,B|188:40,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
136,96,89495,2,0,B|100:136|136:196,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
184,224,89866,2,0,B|232:180|212:112,1,119.999992847443,8|0
212,114,90236,2,0,B|300:136,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
296,212,90607,2,0,B|212:212,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
176,280,90977,2,8,B|220:208|208:124,1,159.999990463257
132,104,91532,1,2
72,160,91718,5,8
88,196,91810,1,0
104,232,91903,2,0,B|136:316,1,79.9999952316285,2|8
196,160,92273,5,2
216,196,92366,1,0
236,232,92458,2,0,B|276:312,1,79.9999952316285,8|2
344,264,92829,2,0,B|384:248|440:260,2,79.9999952316285,8|2|8
304,196,93384,2,0,B|324:156|300:108,2,79.9999952316285,2|8|2
232,164,93940,6,0,B|136:140,1,79.9999952316285,10|2
84,288,94310,2,0,B|176:328,1,79.9999952316285,10|2
316,288,94681,2,0,B|360:248|348:200,1,79.9999952316285,10|2
440,88,95051,2,8,B|356:44|248:88,1,159.999990463257,8|4
140,92,107273,6,0,B|120:272,1,159.999990463257,4|8
56,320,107829,1,0
144,352,108014,2,0,B|212:308|312:344,1,159.999990463257,2|8
320,248,108569,2,0,B|404:288,1,79.9999952316285,0|0
404,376,108940,5,0
384,188,109125,1,8
292,160,109310,2,0,B|240:160|204:196,1,79.9999952316285,0|2
136,236,109681,1,0
152,328,109866,2,0,B|72:344,1,79.9999952316285,8|0
56,344,110144,1,0
40,344,110236,1,4
48,80,110607,6,0,B|88:60|160:72,1,79.9999952316285,8|0
148,160,110977,2,0,B|212:184|248:136|332:168,1,159.999990463257,2|8
400,160,111532,2,0,B|468:212|416:316,1,159.999990463257,0|0
256,316,112088,1,8
168,352,112273,2,0,B|156:248,1,79.9999952316285,0|2
316,100,112644,1,0
304,240,112829,1,8
96,152,113014,1,0
184,56,113199,1,4
56,360,113569,6,0,B|16:336|12:288,1,79.9999952316285,8|0
96,252,113940,2,0,B|160:200|132:96,1,159.999990463257,2|8
40,160,114495,1,0
40,160,114866,1,0
248,208,115051,1,8
336,176,115236,1,0
264,116,115421,1,2
240,228,115607,1,0
352,180,115792,1,8
256,100,115977,1,2
204,312,116162,6,0,B|268:380|380:344,1,159.999990463257,6|8
156,232,116718,1,0
156,232,116903,2,0,B|108:236|60:276,1,79.9999952316285,2|0
72,348,117273,1,8
64,344,117458,1,4
88,108,119125,6,0,B|128:32|236:48,1,160,4|8
260,136,119681,2,0,B|252:184|264:232,1,80,0|2
368,136,120051,2,0,B|372:96|368:56,1,80,0|8
168,244,120421,6,0,B|192:300|232:312|280:308|316:292,1,160
348,212,120977,1,8
400,292,121162,2,0,B|428:328|432:372,1,80,0|2
248,208,121532,1,0
220,116,121718,1,8
304,64,121903,1,2
388,116,122088,6,0,B|428:140|452:176|452:220|436:260,1,160,4|8
136,212,122644,1,0
44,240,122829,2,0,B|24:292|40:352,1,80,2|0
216,272,123199,1,8
300,224,123384,6,0,B|324:144|308:60,1,160,0|0
216,92,123940,2,0,B|204:132|216:184,1,80,8|0
302,303,124310,2,0,B|304:304|312:264|300:224,1,80,2|0
216,272,124681,2,0,B|52:292,1,160,8|4
12,208,125236,5,0
24,112,125421,1,8
248,184,125792,5,2
268,104,125977,1,0
320,40,126162,1,8
360,256,126532,5,2
400,224,126718,1,0
452,212,126903,1,8
444,304,127088,5,0
360,256,127273,1,2
264,256,127458,1,0
176,292,127644,1,8
84,284,127829,1,0
64,192,128014,2,0,B|52:112,2,80,2|0|8
228,128,128755,6,0,B|236:64,2,59.9999982118607,2|0|8
416,156,129495,6,0,B|436:112,2,40,2|0|8
304,336,130051,1,0
288,120,130236,1,2
428,288,130421,1,0
216,232,130607,1,12
64,100,132273,5,2
148,48,132458,2,0,B|168:96|164:140|132:180|92:196,1,160,4|8
107,188,133755,5,0
140,272,133940,2,0,B|184:256|232:264,1,80,4|0
396,280,134681,2,0,B|348:288|304:276,1,80,8|0
276,196,135236,1,0
240,108,135421,6,0,B|220:72,1,40,4|0
336,120,135792,2,0,B|364:88,1,40,0|0
368,220,136162,2,0,B|392:276|364:348,1,120,8|0
272,316,136903,5,2
208,276,137026,1,0
136,276,137150,1,0
68,308,137273,2,0,B|44:228,2,80,8|2|8
132,104,138384,6,0,B|148:140|208:152|260:124|268:76|268:76,1,160,4|2
263,87,139495,1,8
356,72,139681,1,0
448,104,139866,6,0,B|464:156,1,40,2|0
380,204,140236,2,0,B|368:248,1,40,8|0
420,324,140607,2,0,B|384:356|332:348,1,80,2|8
260,304,141162,1,0
164,320,141347,6,0,B|8:348,2,160,4|8|4
256,192,142921,12,0,143940
256,192,144310,5,4
128,84,156162,6,0,B|144:216,1,119.999996423721,4|8
116,276,156718,1,0
180,320,156903,2,2,B|228:368|296:364,1,119.999996423721,2|8
328,304,157458,6,0,B|352:284|388:284,1,59.9999982118607,0|2
492,212,157829,2,0,B|460:228|432:220,1,59.9999982118607,0|8
368,180,158199,1,0
288,180,158384,2,0,B|164:168,1,119.999996423721,2|8
104,212,158940,6,0,B|108:276,1,59.9999982118607,4|2
180,296,159310,1,0
40,304,159495,2,0,B|4:252|28:180,1,119.999996423721,8|2
25,189,160236,5,8
80,128,160421,1,0
160,104,160607,2,0,B|212:96|248:104,1,59.9999982118607,2|0
296,112,160977,2,0,B|360:132|436:120,1,119.999996423721,8|2
456,60,161532,1,0
376,200,161718,1,8
488,304,161903,1,2
488,304,162088,6,0,B|444:264|356:264|288:312|288:384,1,239.999992847443,4|2
84,364,163199,1,8
120,296,163384,1,0
60,248,163569,2,0,B|40:176,1,59.9999982118607,8|0
112,156,163940,2,0,B|124:88,1,59.9999982118607,8|0
272,48,164310,5,8
320,56,164403,1,0
368,68,164495,1,8
408,96,164588,1,0
436,136,164681,1,8
452,180,164773,1,0
456,228,164866,1,8
448,276,164958,1,0
416,320,165051,6,0,B|384:360|324:360,1,103.999998140335,4|0
204,236,165421,2,0,B|248:204|304:204,1,103.999998140335,8|0
144,340,165792,2,0,B|80:368|32:328|0:280|32:208,1,207.99999628067,2|8
112,128,166347,1,0
208,216,166532,6,0,B|252:172|248:116,1,103.999998140335,2|0
112,128,166903,1,8
208,216,167088,1,0
352,220,167273,2,0,B|392:180|456:176|512:204|532:260,1,207.99999628067,2|8
260,288,167829,6,0,B|220:248|216:184|244:128|300:108,1,207.99999628067,4|0
352,220,168384,2,0,B|380:268|372:336,1,103.999998140335,8|0
260,288,168755,2,0,B|144:344|64:228,1,207.99999628067,0|8
240,96,169310,1,0
368,140,169495,6,0,B|424:156|480:148,1,103.999998140335,2|0
240,96,169866,2,0,B|192:64|124:64|76:112,1,155.999997210503,8|0
64,140,170236,1,0
176,212,170421,1,0
208,248,170514,1,0
224,292,170607,1,8
220,340,170699,1,0
188,376,170792,1,0
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8
348,224,171532,1,0
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0
348,108,172088,1,8
224,164,172273,1,2
348,224,172458,5,4
228,280,172644,2,0,B|184:324|112:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2
228,280,173569,1,8
440,324,173755,6,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
332,108,174310,1,8
312,100,174403,1,0
292,96,174495,1,0
268,96,174588,1,0
244,104,174681,1,2
224,120,174773,1,0
212,140,174866,1,0
208,164,174958,1,0
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0
112,352,175421,5,4
48,28,175607,1,0
176,68,175792,1,8
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0
420,96,176532,1,8
284,24,176718,1,0
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0
300,288,177273,1,8
172,356,177458,1,0
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8
300,288,178199,1,0
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8
64,264,179681,1,0
204,236,179866,5,4
352,256,180051,1,0
452,352,180236,1,8
352,256,180421,1,0
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0
496,68,180977,1,8
468,200,181162,1,0
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,2|0
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2
356,28,182273,1,0
408,216,182458,1,8
220,168,182644,1,0
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
384,160,183384,1,0
384,160,183477,1,0
384,160,183569,1,8
136,368,183940,5,2
256,304,184125,1,0
140,240,184310,5,4
124,220,184496,5,8
104,200,184680,5,8
88,180,184866,5,8
256,192,185792,12,2,186903
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80
212,176,187644,1,8
308,136,187829,1,0
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8
144,272,188569,1,0
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0
156,172,189403,1,0
176,160,189495,1,2
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8
192,64,190051,1,0
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8
456,220,190792,1,0
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0
351,365,191347,1,8
448,316,191532,1,0
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8
368,100,192273,1,0
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0
180,168,192736,1,0
160,168,192829,1,8
88,92,193014,1,0
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2
88,92,194125,1,0
120,72,194218,1,0
156,64,194310,1,8
192,68,194403,1,0
228,80,194495,1,0
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8
396,144,195236,1,2
396,144,195607,1,0
260,312,195792,1,8
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0
260,312,196532,1,8
352,352,196718,1,0
352,352,196810,1,0
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0
360,176,197644,5,2
164,160,197828,1,0
384,180,198014,1,8
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0
92,64,198755,1,2
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8
408,216,199681,1,0
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0
496,208,200236,1,8
444,120,200421,1,2
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8
4,316,201903,1,0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8
116,24,202644,1,0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8
440,152,203384,1,0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0
428,308,203940,1,8
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0
24,104,206162,1,8
119,149,206347,1,0
228,164,206532,5,4
448,100,206718,1,0
320,268,206903,1,8
316,48,207088,1,2
112,324,207644,5,2
104,328,207736,1,2
96,332,207829,1,6
256,192,207921,12,2,213940
Topic Starter
Kanari
Updated ~
B2IN
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

m4m

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
consider. The front part in diff is generally too stiff.
01:29:125 (2) - Consider moving.01:26:532 (1) - this stack touches it
02:40:977 (1,2,3) - try this :3
[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) - This part does not fit the spinner..
02:10:236 (2,3) - right 1grid
02:19:495 (6) - Neatly stack to the slider
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6) - try this

02:23:570 (7) - remove ?
02:27:273 (1) - same.This part does not fit the spinner
02:45:144 (2) - remove
02:52:366 (4) - ^
[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:569 (9) - um.. this overlappning is not good . consider stacking or respacing :3
01:17:273 ~ 01:18:940 - try this

01:25:236 (1) - end the spinner at 01:26:347. and add the note to 01:26:532
03:05:792 (1) - try this
Length: 03:05:236 ~ 03:06:903


good luck for rank !


My map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49720

ty !
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you ~ >w<
I'll mod your map soon ~
KRZY
[Easy]
[quote="Ranking criteria: Guidelines":040ca]Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.I suggest you map this difficulty 'till where the other difficulties are mapped to if there is no special reason not to.

01:09:495 (1) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:09:495 ~ 01:10:236 and the other covering 01:10:977 ~ 01:11:718.
01:16:903 (5) - NC
01:18:755 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:607 (4) - NC
01:22:088 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:088 (2) - Divide this into two sliders, one covering 01:21:903 ~ 01:22:644 and the other covering 01:23:014 ~ 01:23:940.

[Normal]
00:06:532 (1) - Stack this under 00:05:792 (4), and move the following three notes (00:07:273 (2,3,4)) to where 00:06:532 (1,2,3) are located currently. Place notes after this period accordingly.
00:16:162 (1) - Remove one repeat
00:19:125 (2,1) - Move these to 00:18:384, and remove one repeat from 00:19:866 (1)
00:21:347 - If you take the two mods above, you'll have to fill in this spot. Same goes for 00:22:088.
00:23:569 (3) - Try to place this note so that it does not overlap with the following slider.
00:26:347 (4) - Move the repeat somewhere else so it does not overlap with the previous slider. An example would be:
00:36:162 (1) - Make this a slider without a repeat, as there is no reason for a repeat to be there.
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - Try the below to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music:
01:29:495 (1) - Remove finish at the end of the slider.
01:31:718 (4) - Remove NC.
01:33:570 (3) - End this slider at 01:33:940 and add a note at 01:34:310 to avoid putting a note right after a slider and to better fit the music.
02:08:755 (1,2,3) - Remove these notes.
02:10:051 - Add a note.
02:18:755 (2) - Remove.
02:20:977 - Add a note.
02:31:718 (1) - Divide this into two sections, one being 02:31:718 ~ 02:32:273 and the other being 02:32:644 ~ 02:34:125.
02:35:051 - Either add a note here, or remove 02:34:866 (2).
02:52:273 - Add something here. Personally I would recommend something like this:

[Hard]
00:47:273 (2,1) - Make these two parallel for better aesthetics.
02:27:273 (1) - Unfitting place for a spinner. Map it out.
02:39:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I would map this part 4/4 instead of 3/5.
03:03:199 (4,5) - Not a good idea, very difficult to read where the slider ends.
03:05:236 (1) - This spinner ends in a place that is different with Normal. Make them match.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:18:199 (8,9) - Replace with a single note at 00:18:199, as the rest is not mapped to anything.
00:26:347 - Add a note, since you've been following the vocals in previous sections.
00:32:458 ~ 00:38:384 - Currently, this part does not fit the music at all. Try something like the following. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:44:310 (4) - Start this slider at 00:44:495 instead. End at 00:44:866.
00:45:607 (2,3) - Switch these two to better fit the music. Place them accordingly.
00:46:347 (1) - Make this a repeating slider with the repeat on 00:46:718 to better fit the music.
00:48:014 (1,2,1,2,3) - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:51:532 ~ 00:53:940 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:54:495 ~ 00:56:718 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
00:58:755 ~ 01:00:977 - Try the following to better fit the music. Place them accordingly (watch the timeline):
01:20:236 (7) - Break down into a slider and a note.
01:23:569 (1,2,3) - This slowdown is unexpected, and unnecessary.
01:24:310 (3) - Remove repeat .
01:25:236 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:25:051, and end it at 01:26:162.
01:26:532 - Add a note.
01:27:458 (1) - Remove.
01:35:607 - Is this timing section necessary?
01:35:792 - ^
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.
03:05:236 - Add a note.
03:05:421 - ^
03:05:607 - ^
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.


Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!
Topic Starter
Kanari
QAQ
Thank you for modding!
I'll fix them soon. ><
Regou

KRZY wrote:

[Rainbow x Regou]
02:16:903 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 is uncalled for. Nowhere in the music does it suggest a rhythm of 1/3.(Oops,unsnapped, and fixed)03:05:236 - Add a note. Fixed
03:05:421 - ^ Fixed
03:05:607 - ^ Fixed
Why did you decide to map until the end of the song in only this difficulty? Refer to the ranking guideline I quoted on [Easy] mod.


Needs much, much more work before it can be considered for a bubble imo. Pay special attention to [Normal] and [Rainbow x Regou], as big chunks of these difficulties are mapped with disregard to the music. Try hard, and good luck!
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
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136,212,122644,1,0
44,240,122829,2,0,B|24:292|40:352,1,80,2|0
216,272,123199,1,8
300,224,123384,6,0,B|324:144|308:60,1,160,0|0
216,92,123940,2,0,B|204:132|216:184,1,80,8|0
302,303,124310,2,0,B|304:304|312:264|300:224,1,80,2|0
216,272,124681,2,0,B|52:292,1,160,8|4
12,208,125236,5,0
24,112,125421,1,8
248,184,125792,5,2
268,104,125977,1,0
320,40,126162,1,8
360,256,126532,5,2
400,224,126718,1,0
452,212,126903,1,8
444,304,127088,5,0
360,256,127273,1,2
264,256,127458,1,0
176,292,127644,1,8
84,284,127829,1,0
64,192,128014,2,0,B|52:112,2,80,2|0|8
228,128,128755,6,0,B|236:64,2,59.9999982118607,2|0|8
416,156,129495,6,0,B|436:112,2,40,2|0|8
304,336,130051,1,0
288,120,130236,1,2
428,288,130421,1,0
216,232,130607,1,12
64,100,132273,5,2
148,48,132458,2,0,B|168:96|164:140|132:180|92:196,1,160,4|8
107,188,133755,5,0
140,272,133940,2,0,B|184:256|232:264,1,80,4|0
396,280,134681,2,0,B|348:288|304:276,1,80,8|0
276,196,135236,1,0
240,108,135421,6,0,B|220:72,1,40,4|0
336,120,135792,2,0,B|364:88,1,40,0|0
368,220,136162,2,0,B|392:276|364:348,1,120,8|0
272,316,136903,5,2
208,276,136995,1,0
136,276,137181,1,0
68,308,137273,2,0,B|44:228,2,80,8|2|8
132,104,138384,6,0,B|148:140|208:152|260:124|268:76|268:76,1,160,4|2
263,87,139495,1,8
356,72,139681,1,0
448,104,139866,6,0,B|464:156,1,40,2|0
380,204,140236,2,0,B|368:248,1,40,8|0
420,324,140607,2,0,B|384:356|332:348,1,80,2|8
260,304,141162,1,0
164,320,141347,6,0,B|8:348,2,160,4|8|4
256,192,142921,12,0,143940
256,192,144310,5,4
128,84,156162,6,0,B|144:216,1,119.999996423721,4|8
116,276,156718,1,0
180,320,156903,2,2,B|228:368|296:364,1,119.999996423721,2|8
328,304,157458,6,0,B|352:284|388:284,1,59.9999982118607,0|2
492,212,157829,2,0,B|460:228|432:220,1,59.9999982118607,0|8
368,180,158199,1,0
288,180,158384,2,0,B|164:168,1,119.999996423721,2|8
104,212,158940,6,0,B|108:276,1,59.9999982118607,4|2
180,296,159310,1,0
40,304,159495,2,0,B|4:252|28:180,1,119.999996423721,8|2
25,189,160236,5,8
80,128,160421,1,0
160,104,160607,2,0,B|212:96|248:104,1,59.9999982118607,2|0
296,112,160977,2,0,B|360:132|436:120,1,119.999996423721,8|2
456,60,161532,1,0
376,200,161718,1,8
488,304,161903,1,2
488,304,162088,6,0,B|444:264|356:264|288:312|288:384,1,239.999992847443,4|2
84,364,163199,1,8
120,296,163384,1,0
60,248,163570,2,0,B|40:176,1,59.9999982118607,8|0
112,156,163940,2,0,B|124:88,1,59.9999982118607,8|0
272,48,164310,5,8
320,56,164403,1,0
368,68,164495,1,8
408,96,164588,1,0
436,136,164681,1,8
452,180,164773,1,0
456,228,164866,1,8
448,276,164958,1,0
416,320,165051,6,0,B|384:360|324:360,1,103.999998140335,4|0
204,236,165421,2,0,B|248:204|304:204,1,103.999998140335,8|0
144,340,165792,2,0,B|80:368|32:328|0:280|32:208,1,207.99999628067,2|8
112,128,166347,1,0
208,216,166532,6,0,B|252:172|248:116,1,103.999998140335,2|0
112,128,166903,1,8
208,216,167088,1,0
352,220,167273,2,0,B|392:180|456:176|512:204|532:260,1,207.99999628067,2|8
260,288,167829,6,0,B|220:248|216:184|244:128|300:108,1,207.99999628067,4|0
352,220,168384,2,0,B|380:268|372:336,1,103.999998140335,8|0
260,288,168755,2,0,B|144:344|64:228,1,207.99999628067,0|8
240,96,169310,1,0
368,140,169495,6,0,B|424:156|480:148,1,103.999998140335,2|0
240,96,169866,2,0,B|192:64|124:64|76:112,1,155.999997210503,8|0
64,140,170236,1,0
176,212,170421,1,0
208,248,170514,1,0
224,292,170607,1,8
220,340,170699,1,0
188,376,170792,1,0
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8
348,224,171532,1,0
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0
348,108,172088,1,8
224,164,172273,1,2
348,224,172458,5,4
228,280,172644,2,0,B|184:324|112:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2
228,280,173569,1,8
440,324,173755,6,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
332,108,174310,1,8
312,100,174403,1,0
292,96,174495,1,0
268,96,174588,1,0
244,104,174681,1,2
224,120,174773,1,0
212,140,174866,1,0
208,164,174958,1,0
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0
112,352,175421,5,4
48,28,175607,1,0
176,68,175792,1,8
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0
420,96,176532,1,8
284,24,176718,1,0
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0
300,288,177273,1,8
172,356,177458,1,0
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8
300,288,178199,1,0
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8
64,264,179681,1,0
204,236,179866,5,4
352,256,180051,1,0
452,352,180236,1,8
352,256,180421,1,0
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0
496,68,180977,1,8
468,200,181162,1,0
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,2|0
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2
356,28,182273,1,0
408,216,182458,1,8
220,168,182644,1,0
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2
384,160,183384,1,0
384,160,183477,1,0
384,160,183569,1,8
136,368,183940,5,2
256,304,184125,1,0
140,240,184310,5,4
124,220,184495,5,8
104,200,184681,5,8
88,180,184866,5,8
252,40,185236,5,0
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,14|0
256,192,185792,12,2,186903
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80
212,176,187644,1,8
308,136,187829,1,0
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8
144,272,188569,1,0
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0
156,172,189403,1,0
176,160,189495,1,2
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8
192,64,190051,1,0
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8
456,220,190792,1,0
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0
351,365,191347,1,8
448,316,191532,1,0
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8
368,100,192273,1,0
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0
180,168,192736,1,0
160,168,192829,1,8
88,92,193014,1,0
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2
88,92,194125,1,0
120,72,194218,1,0
156,64,194310,1,8
192,68,194403,1,0
228,80,194495,1,0
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8
396,144,195236,1,2
396,144,195607,1,0
260,312,195792,1,8
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0
260,312,196532,1,8
352,352,196718,1,0
352,352,196810,1,0
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0
360,176,197644,5,2
164,160,197829,1,0
384,180,198014,1,8
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0
92,64,198755,1,2
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8
408,216,199681,1,0
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0
496,208,200236,1,8
444,120,200421,1,2
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8
4,316,201903,1,0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8
116,24,202644,1,0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8
440,152,203384,1,0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0
428,308,203940,1,8
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8
160,312,205051,6,0,B|120:344|32:332|-20:272|8:168,1,240,4|0
104,228,205792,2,0,B|120:188|120:140,1,80,2|0
24,104,206162,1,8
119,149,206347,1,0
228,164,206532,5,4
448,100,206718,1,0
320,268,206903,1,8
316,48,207088,1,2
112,324,207644,5,2
104,328,207736,1,2
96,332,207829,1,6
256,192,207921,12,2,213940
Atema
Hi ! From my modding queue :)


Easy

- I don't really understand why you did not use the distance snap in the beginning. Ok, the notes got the same spacing between them but I don't see why would you put a distance changement in an Easy. Well, I dunno if i'm clear but I advice you to respect it even in the beginning. Plus there are some (few) others distance mistakes, please recheck your map and follow the distance snap each time (not for the stacks ofc)

- Please, finish to map this diff, you can't have a difference where the play lenght is twice inferior as the others, that's not "fair" ^^

Normal

- Make this diff ends at the same time as the Hard diff ? Just just have to make the last spinner a little bit longer ^^

00:26:347 (4) - Please unstack this :it look weird when you just had every note and a stack on white ticks to have here a 1/2 and quite long stack.
00:30:977 (2) - Spacing
02:43:940 (2) - Make it end here 02:44:310 - ?

Hard

01:34:866 (1) - Put them like this 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - but going up and not down so it makes a parallel ?
02:10:607 (4) - Unstack this one please
02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this part XD
02:45:144 (2) - Remove this note ?
02:52:366 (4) - ^
03:03:384 (5) - "Unstack" this please ^^

Rainbow x Regou

01:57:644 - Map this break ? =O
02:24:495 - ^


Well good job, good luck ! :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thanks ~
;-;
I guess i'll finish mapping easy then.
Verlaren
Hai~

Hard:
01:15:977 - maybe NC?
01:16:162 - slider must end in 01:16:347
01:16:532 - add circle.
02:45:144 - remove circle.
02:47:088 - maybe add note?

Rainbow x Regou:
00:18:569 - remove note.
00:18:199 - unsnapped note. slider must be end in 00:18:569
01:30:051 - ^
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~
Regou

Verlaren wrote:

Hai~

Rainbow x Regou:
02:39:495 - slider must be end in 02:39:681
02:39:866 - add note. (hitsound --> clap)
This doesn't sound really bad, and this properly give a better game flow
03:00:977 - remove note
03:00:607 - slider must be end in 03:00:977
You know, end every slider on White/Red line is very, very boring, and doing these changes won't really make a different
03:11:347 - remove note
03:10:977 - slider must be end in 03:11:347 No, the piano sound make the pitch isn't that correct so this would be better to hid that sound :)
03:24:125 - slider should be completely on the screen. He's must be fully visible It work fine in my computer

Don't forget to place hitsounds.
If you would need my help, contact me at any time.
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]

[Easy]
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - difficult rhythm For Easy.
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:56:718 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:384 (2,3,4) - difficult for Easy
You should have long break.
You catch mass oof vocal but it is not easy...

[Normal]
00:15:051 (4) - NC
00:42:644 (1) - completely separate with before slider
01:30:607 (2) - completely separate with before circle or stack with No.2 circle.
02:20:977 (4,1) - add and delete NC

[Hard]
02:45:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - distorted

[Insane]
01:02:829 - KIAI TIME!?remove KIAI TIME.
02:12:458 - ^
nice map!

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thanks ~
Dino99
Hi~ :D

<Easy>
  1. AR+1?
  2. 00:15:051 (1) - Remove whistle is better IMO, because I don't hear bell here :<
  3. 00:15:421 - whistle to follow the bell~
  4. 00:39:125 (2) - finish here have a good effect :3
  5. 00:42:088 (3) - Remove finish
  6. 00:47:088 (3,1) - Stack a little>_>.. It looks not really good.. try to make them don't stack?
  7. 00:48:755 (2,3) - Blanketing it better~~ http://puu.sh/OhrN
    348,160,49125,2,0,B|360:208|352:264|294:294|236:277,2,200
  8. 00:56:903 (2) - A little ugly QAQ.. Too twist..
  9. 01:09:495 (1,2) - Make them a bit curve? I think it's better~ http://puu.sh/Ohxc
  10. 01:21:903 (1) - Strange!!.. I strongly suggest change The slider's start at 01:22:088 - , (and add finish here :>)
  11. 01:22:644 - finish
  12. 01:23:384 - ^
  13. 01:33:940 - ^
  14. 01:34:495 - ^
  15. 01:43:199 (1) - This spinner should start at 01:44:310 - , I think it's better~~
  16. 02:04:310 (1) - Too twist >.<
  17. 02:07:088 (1) - Remove this slider? it sounds a bit strange..
  18. 02:36:069 - a bit louder :< How about 35% volume? I think it more fit the music
  19. 02:52:458 (1) - finish
  20. 03:04:310 (2) - ^
  21. 03:04:310 (2) - Change the slider's end at 03:04:866 - is better~ (Don't forget add finish at 03:04:866 - it really fit the music :>)
  22. 03:05:421 (1) - I highly suggest that change the slider's start at 03:05:792 -
<Noraml>
  1. 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want make them to be straight... http://puu.sh/OhNl Here is the code ;)
    52,52,3570,1,2
    180,148,4310,1,0
    308,244,5051,1,2
    436,340,5792,1,0
  2. 01:14:681 (1) - Ugly.. QAQ Try to fix the shape better~
  3. 01:17:644 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:088 (1) - finish
  5. 01:33:940 - ^
  6. 01:34:495 (5) - ^
  7. 01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy
  8. 01:50:236 (2) - How about 4 grid up? :>
  9. 02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm... stack with 4 circle is not good in a Normal diff.. Use a slider with 2 arrows to replace them?
  10. 02:52:458 - finish
  11. 02:53:014 - ^
  12. 02:53:755 - ^
  13. 03:04:310 - ^
  14. 03:04:866 - ^
<Hard>
  1. 00:51:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange ryhthm :< This is better IMO~
  2. 01:05:792 (1,2,3) - Blanketing it better!!~~~ http://puu.sh/OhZ1
    412,92,65792,6,0,B|412:140|488:136|464:196|484:236|420:264,1,200,4|0
    332,256,66903,1,2
    396,196,67273,1,6
  3. 01:22:088 - How about this ryhthm? I think it's better~
  4. 01:31:718 (1) - This spinner is really strange here... I super suggest remove it and add some circle to replace!! ><
  5. 01:43:199 (1) - Same as Easy Orz..
  6. 02:13:199 (4) - Bad shape :< fix it plz!! ><
  7. 02:43:940 (5) - Add some green to Turn the volume gradually up?
  8. 02:52:458 (4) - finish
  9. 02:53:014 - ^
  10. 02:53:755 - ^
  11. 03:04:310 (2) - ^
<Rainbow x Regou>
  1. 00:17:458 (5,6) - 疊到了不是很好看..
  2. 00:18:199 (7,8) - 怪怪的節奏._. 這樣吧~ :>
  3. 00:35:051 (4,5,6) - 疊到一點>_> (4)再往上一些吧
  4. 01:02:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星星歪掉了OJZ.. 幫你重做了個.. http://puu.sh/OibJ 給個密碼吧~ @w@
    276,80,62088,5,0
    222,145,62273,1,0
    268,216,62458,1,0
    350,194,62644,1,0
    354,109,62829,1,0
  5. 01:43:199 (1) - 這轉盤位置好怪.. 01:44:310 - 改這邊開始吧!!
  6. 02:44:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 音量漸增吧~ 挺好的
Okay~ That's all~
Good luck!!~~~~~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou! >w<
Aunxfb
From:Fishball's NEWBIE modding queue

Here goes~
[Easy]
00:03:570 - change slider velocity to 0.75x
00:03:570 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away(00:04:310 - )
00:05:051 (2) - ^
00:07:273 - add circle
00:08:755 - ^
00:09:495 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:10:977 (2) - ^
00:13:199 - add circle
00:15:421 - move this timing section to 00:15:051
00:15:051 (1) - remove reverse(shorten it on timeline)
00:16:162 - add circle, NC(new combo)
00:16:903 (1) - remove NC
00:16:903 (2) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:19:125 - add circle
00:19:866 (1) - change this into a slider, end it 2 beats away
00:22:088 - add circle
00:23:569 - add circle
00:32:458 (3) - add NC
00:33:199 (1) - remove NC
00:41:718 (2) - snap to 00:41:532
00:42:088 (3) - snap to 00:41:903
00:49:125 (3) - slider start at 00:49:310,shorten slider so it ends at 00:50:607
00:53:940 (2) - add whistle(although I dind it hardly noticeable...)
01:02:829 (1) - remove circle
01:01:347 (3) - extend slider so the last circle ends at 01:02:829 ,add finish to last circle
01:03:569 - add circle
01:03:940 (5) - remove slider
01:04:310 - start a slider here, end it at 01:04:681,NC
01:13:199 (4),01:14:681 (1) - remove circle(s)
01:13:199 - start a spinner here, ends it at 01:14:681
01:44:310 (1) - delete spinner?(seems like an extra to me)
01:50:607 (1) - delete circle
01:50:977 (2) - start slider at 01:50:792 ,end at 01:51:532
01:51:718 (7) - delete circle
01:52:088 (7) - start slider at 01:51:903,end at 01:52:273
02:52:458 (1) - add finish to last circle too?

[Normal]
00:26:347 (4) - add 2 reverse
00:28:384 (4) - snap this to 00:28:569
00:51:718 (1) - shorten slider so it ends at 00:53:014
00:53:569 (2) - snap this to 00:53:384
00:53:755 - add circle
00:54:681 (1) - end slider at 00:55:977
00:56:347 - add circle
00:56:532 (3) - snap to 00:56:718
01:14:681 (4) - add NC
01:20:607 (1) - remove NC ,add finish to last circle
01:22:088 (1) - remove NC and finish
01:22:829 (3) - snap to 01:22:644
01:23:014 - start spinner here, end it at same position
01:34:125 - add circle?
01:47:644 (1) - let slider start at 01:47:829
01:50:607 (1) - let slider start at 01:50:792
02:35:236 (4) - add reverse(extend on timeline)
02:48:014 (1) - delete circle
02:47:273 (5) - add finish
02:47:644 - start a slider here,end it at 02:48:014 ,NC
02:48:570 (3) - remove finish on first circle
02:55:421 (1) - add 1 reverse
02:56:162 (2) - snap to 02:56:347
02:56:718 - add circle


[Hard]
00:13:199 (2) - delete circle
00:12:458 (1) - add reverse
00:19:495 (2) - delete circle
00:18:940 (1) - extend slider so the second circle is at 00:19:218(Whole thing ends at 00:19:495 )(You may need some other fix for this(or just ignore this))
00:19:681 (2) - remove reverse,extend it so it ends at where it should
00:26:903 - add circle
00:27:088 - ^
00:42:088 (8) - add finish
00:45:421 (2) - snap to 00:45:607
00:46:162 (4) - delete circle
00:48:755 (3) - change this into a circle
00:51:347 (1) - snap this to 00:51:532
00:51:718 (2) - extend slider so it ends at 00:52:644
00:52:829 (3) - delete circle
00:53:199 (4) - let this start at 00:53:384 and ends at 00:53:940
01:17:644 (2) - let this start at 01:17:458, end at 01:18:384
01:21:718 (3) - snap this to 01:21:903 ,add NC
01:22:088 (1) - shorten slider, add 1 reverse(whole thing ends at 01:22:644).remove NC'
02:21:532 (4) - remove circle
02:22:273 (5) - remove slider
02:21:718 (4) - move to 02:22:088
02:23:570 (5) - remove circle
02:22:829 - start a slider here, end it at 02:23:940,add whistle/finish on second circle
02:26:347 - add circle
03:03:199 (4) - delete circle

[RainbowxRegou]
I'm not skillful enough to mod this,but I do see that it needs some modding, go get some experienced modder :P
Topic Starter
Kanari
I didnt change anything for the beginning of the easy diff but the rest I changed ~
Thankyou for modding ~ ;D
pimp
general

remove your osb file and full submit

normal

00:39:866 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:48:014 (1) - this note is a bit overlapped by the previous hitbursts, not good in normal imo
01:30:607 (2) - overlapped by hitbursts, i gess this one is not so serious but consider avoiding it too
01:47:551 (1,2,1) - i dont like how "skinny" this sliders are. you could try "S" sliders. i know s liders are too obvious but yeah, this is just my own opinion
02:55:421 (1,2,3) - this combo sounds really strange, i would sugest you add 1 repeat to (1) and move (2,3) to the next red ticks, but it will be difficult for normal because (3) will be too close to the next combo, consider changing the style of these two combos


hard

00:46:347 (1,2,3) - align then a bit more simmetrycally
02:22:273 (6) - overlapped by the previous hitbursts, still visible but looks bad imo
02:56:903 (2) - add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
03:03:199 (4,5) - i gess this placing does not works in small sliders, and looks confusing/ugly (imo)
03:05:236 - maybe a note here and in the next white tick? you are using it in normal i gess hard should use too
03:05:792 - i dont know much about this, but i think you should not end the kiai here. move this inherit to the previous note or to spiner end?


rainbow x regou


00:18:199 (7) make the slider end in the white tick?
00:18:569 (8) remove note?

i'm going to finish this mod later :o

edit
sorry for keep you waiting i was really busy ;_;


rainbow x regou


you are using 1x slider speed in the slow part of the song and 0.50x in the normal part, thats a bit strange imo
btw i think 0.50x is too slow for this sliderspeed

the rithym is so strange, in the 1st minute you are just filling the white/red tick as much as possible
try to follow the vocal and make it harder when it "calls for it" just like you did at 00:41:162 (4,5,6,7,1)
and dont force yourself to fill everrything

00:32:829 (4,1,2,3) - this pattern does not fits here imo, try to follow the vocal?
00:35:421 (6) - this long slider sounds really bad imo, ans using 0.50x slider speed its not "insane",
you should try to make it end at 00:36:162 in the long white tick

00:36:718 (1) - this reverse slider sounds bad, try to make it end in the long white tick
00:42:088 (1) - you should consider shortening this slider, it looks like a normal/easy long slider imo
try shortening it to 00:42:644 in the red tick, and make a 1/1 beat slider in the white tick
00:50:607 (3) - make this slider end at 00:51:532
00:51:532 - you made a slider speed change here while the slider still moving at 0.50x if you dont follow my sugestion above, move this inherit to the next white tick

01:57:644 - map this part too

01:17:273 (1,2,3) - this notes looked like a sudden slow down, this is my own opinion
try to keep the fast rithym of the previous notes and keep using the clap pattern?
01:33:940 (1,2) - align them better

thats all

good luck :)
Nathien
Well, ill give it a try, but dont expect to much =)
if its not helpfull just ignore it ^^

modding attempt
Easy:
01:50:607 (1) - 2 problems with this, first: to go with the vocals it would be on the blue line (but probably u knew that already ^^) 2nd and more important: while playing this part i was in another flow, so that i tried to hit the circle to early. Especially for beginners this might be difficult, so maybe move it somewhere else?
01:50:977 (2) - delete that slider, set a hitcircle there
01:51:347 (3) - set a slider to the next red line here
01:52:088 (4) - delete that slider
01:51:903 (4) - hitcircle here
01:52:273 (5) - hitcircle here

Normal:
00:26:347 (4) - this one is a bit difficult to read since its a compltely different beat
01:35:421 (1) - spinner giving 15k bonus ... mb a bit to long? the highes i've seen on ranked maps gave me 13k :o
02:55:977 (2) - i'd add a note here somehow, either give that slider more reversearrows or just put a hitcircle. Everytime i play i desperately search that note ^^

Hard:
01:22:088 (2) - make this one one tick shorter and add a reverse, sounds better to me
01:47:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a strange mix of vocal- and beat-based notes, maybe its just me but it sounds a bit weird ^^
02:10:607 (4) - this was my first real "wtf"-moment while playing ^^ without watching the editor i would probably still search for that note >_< mb set it to x256, y48 ??
02:12:829 (3) - set this note to 02:13:014 (3)

rainbow x regou:
00:30:236 (1) - at this point i'd increase the sliderspeed again, it feels very very strange to have that insanely slow sliders there >_< + the music wants more notes! dont steal them ^^
00:30:607 (4) - missing note
00:31:347 (4) - missing note
00:35:421 (6) - this slider starts and ends in the middle of nowhere :o
00:36:718 (1) - same here, no real start no real end. It would be better if it would either fit the vocals OR the music (like drumbeat or sth)
00:39:866 (3) - maybe it would fit if there was no hitsound on the reverse, but i would rather make one more reverse and set them on the white lines like the beat wants them ^^
00:42:088 (1) - ok, here is a usefull start and endpoint, but im still missing notes, maybe add sounds to the sliderticks? would probably help. That goes for a lot of sliders, just try to give them slidertick-hitsounds.

well, thats what i found so far. Maybe (or probably) you did most of them on purpose, but since im a quite unexperienced modder i just showed you what caught my eye =)

its a great map anyway and somehow i began to like the song while listening it over and over again xD so good luck with it!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~ >w<
I'll get to modding your map soon.
I'll update when PimpG continues with his mod ~
terametis
Hi :)
from your queue.

These are all suggestion.

[Easy]
00:49:125 (3)         I feel this pattern is difficult. It is not on vocal, so beginners must look at the approach circle. How about this? 01:12:755 (2)         Why different Distance snap? It has the potential to confuse the beginner.
01:50:607 (1)~(5)      These are symmetric, but it is not an easy rhythm. I propose to make the same rhythm as part of one before. 
[Normal]
00:28:755 (1)         Different Distance snap.
02:55:977 (2)         How about this? 02:59:125 (4)         Add finish.
02:59:495 (1)         Remove finish.
03:00:607 (2)         Add finish at the end of slider.
03:01:718 (6)         Remove finish.

[Hard]
00:28:014 (4)         I feel, Finish sound is a little noisy. If you want anything hitsound, I recommend change to whistle.
01:50:792 (1)         This jump is really confusing.
02:45:051 ~ 02:51:718  Please add some finish. This song really fit finish.
02:56:903 ~ 03:01:718  ^

[Rainbow x Regou]
I feel noisy sliderslide sound. If possible, I propose remove it.
00:18:199 (1),(2)      I don't like this pattern.
00:27:273 ~ 01:02:829  This song really fit finish and whistle. I wish add some hisounds.
02:55:421 (2)         <3

That's all.


I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~ :)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkkyhuu ~
Ohrami
fffffuuuuuuuckkckckck



sCam told me to try it

it's pretty cool
Regou
What the-
double time!!!

@Crystal: I have no way to fix those 0.5x in rainbow's part...;__; so...
Topic Starter
Kanari
Maybe.... Sun Rainbow will have to remap again... ><
Anyway, please update soon, 5 mods already since last update on your diff ;w;


blehhh, let me see what I can do ~

andandd, Kyou-kun so pro ~ owo
CTB Fia
Easy
00:03:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Try to use distance snap
01:44:310 (1) - remove this one (noob need a rest for a while you know)
01:03:199 - 01:03:569 - put a slider
02:13:940 (1,2,3,1) - please use distance snap
02:45:607 - you should start your notes here

and at song setup,decrease approach rate to 2 and hp drain to 2

Normal
01:23:199 - 01:24:773 - decrease spinner length
01:25:236 - try putting a slider here
02:10:051 (1) - copy this kind slider to 02:11:616

as you see from my modding queue
i'm just mod 2 diff for song >2 minutes
so i must take my leave anyway don't give up and i'm sure your map will be ranked for sure
Topic Starter
Kanari
Sorry, no change. ;w;
Nichiyouki


Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 01:03:569 - Add a note here.

Normal

  1. 00:23:940 (1,2) - Remove NC in (1), but add it in (2) instead?
  2. 00:36:162 (1) - Slider end at 00:36:903 - be better.
  3. 01:14:681 (4) - Add NC
  4. 02:34:681 (1,2,3) - Move to up 1 grid
  5. 01:47:644 (2) - Adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Hard

  1. 02:31:532 (6) - Add NC

Rainbow x Regou

  1. 01:57:458 - 01:59:125 Why you use the break? Because period of time to waiting is short.
  2. 00:27:273 (1) - Makes shape similar to (2).
  3. 02:05:792 (1,2,3) - I noticed that the position is a little strange. Moving them to left 4 grids and down 1 grid be better.
  4. 02:45:051 (1) - Move right and up to 1 grid. Spacing between (8) to (1) is farther than spacing in 02:44:301 (1) to (8).
  5. 02:55:421 (1,2) - Spacing is quite far. May move it closer than this.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu ~
I did everything except the note in easy, I think its fine as it is ~
Loneight
Hi~
Request from in-game ~ maybe this is recheck ?~


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. osb. should be removed >w<!

[Easy]

  1. 00:16:903 (1,2) - swap NC ?~ if you do this 00:19:866 (1,2) - too
  2. 00:30:977 (1) - re NC ?~
  3. 00:49:125 (3) - 4th point on x:292 y:300 ~ last point on x:236 y:288
  4. 00:59:495 (1,2) - swap NC ?~
  5. 01:29:495 (1) - last point on x:476 y:68 ?
  6. 02:41:718 (4) - x:104 y:116 ?~

[Normal]

  1. 00:22:088 (3) - NC ?~
  2. 01:17:644 (3) - ^
  3. 01:50:607 (3) - ^
  4. 02:45:051 (1) - remove whistle, clap and add finish at start?

[Hard]

  1. 00:55:977 (1) - re NC if you do this 00:56:718 (3) - NC
  2. 01:26:532 (1) - 3rd point on x:160 y:248
  3. 02:26:903 (8) - NC

[Rainbow x Regou]

  1. 嗯 ~ 咱想可以做些名字放在SB裡,這樣可以知道哪部分是誰做的;w;

  2. 00:15:421 (3,1) - 交換NC
  3. 00:57:458 (3,4) - ctrl+R吧? 感覺flow 會比較好 (被打
  4. 02:08:014 (6) - NC
good luck ~!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou L18 ~ >w<
sCam
Star! Cause Crystal encouraged me to start modding maps, and cause Regou is a awesome mapper. Love your discharger map man, gotta give me that cursor trail D:
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Try Offset: 3564 and then snap all notes and timing sections.

[Easy]
01:18:749 (2) - spacing?
01:50:601 (1) - remove this note since it's a bit hard for beginners to click it accurately
01:50:971 (6) - then newcombo here
01:59:119 (1) - finish at start
02:02:082 (1) - ^
02:32:823 (1) - try end at 02:35:230 .



[Normal]
00:36:162 (1) - finish at start
00:42:644 (1,2) - try to move to x:152 y:272 ,looks better.
02:35:236 (4) - move to x:244 y:244 then (1,2,3,4) form a line.


[Hard]
01:25:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this..it sounds better

02:04:681 (4) - remove finish
02:27:273 (1) - :< dont be lazy ,map here without spinner
02:39:125 (1,3) - ctrl+R


[Rainbow x Regou]
00:14:866 (7) - 存在的意义不明 放在这里不仅不好听而且还搞了个没意义的大跳 节奏过于紧密 没有层次感
00:18:940 (1) - 00:19:125 从这里起吧> >
01:23:570 (1,2,3) - 求教这里减速的意义?
03:07:273 (1) - 开头finish
--------------------------------------------------
总体来说还好=-=
Nice Mapset
Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thank you ~

I'll leave the offset as it is though.
Stefan
Yo.

[General]
Add "Sun Rainbow" as Tag. I just checked out and I got way more results by searching this Tags.

[Easy]
The Begin (until 00:25:792) looks boring with using almost only Hit Circles. Let me give some Ideas.
00:09:495 (1,2) - Instead of Hit Circles you could also use a Slider.
00:12:458 (1,2) - ^
00:21:347 (1,2) - ^
00:25:792 (2,1) - The transistion of the Sliders looks strange and feels not really good to play. Try another placement.
00:39:866 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
00:45:051 (3) - ^
00:46:347 (1) - ^
00:47:088 (3,1) - This could be too fast for a beginner, especially because (3) starts as 1/2 Beat and (1) as 1/1.
00:47:644 (1) - Add Whistle at the Middle Point.
00:51:718 (1,2) - You should Ctrl+J (1) and add Whislte at the Start. Move (2) that it is snapped. This would look much better: http://puu.sh/YoYu
00:54:681 (1) - Remove NC.
00:56:903 (2) - NC
00:58:384 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:347 (2) - You should move the Middle Point a bit away from the Corner.
01:03:569 - I would really like a Circle here.
01:03:940 (3) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Move it to 01:04:310.
01:05:051 (4) - (Only if you accept 01:03:569) Delete it and set a Circle at 01:05:421. (It would look like this: http://puu.sh/Yp3M)
01:16:162 (3,4) - It should be not too close in the edge.
01:22:088 (1) - NC is not neccessary.
01:44:310 (1) - This Spinner makes no sense here imo. I would recommend to remove it.
01:47:273 - (Only if you follow 01:44:310) Set a Circle with Finish.
01:50:051 (5) - Change the Circle into a 1/2 Slider. It fits better with the Music.
02:07:088 (1) - Move it to 02:07:273, and please change this Slider like here: http://puu.sh/Yphd
02:13:940 (1) - Remove NC.
02:32:829 (1) - I would move it to 02:33:199, because Miku's Voice hold it at this time. And it should end at 02:36:162.
02:36:162 (1) - (Only if you accept the suggestion above) Delete this Slider and set a Circle at 02:36:903.
The whole Kiai Time (from 02:45:051) should have a Volume of 75%. The current Volume is really low.

The Diff is much better as last time when I modded it. But it needs still work at it. I personally say, that the Rhythm is sometimes not there and could be done better.

[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - I would perfer a 1/2 Slider.
00:34:310 (2,3) - Move (3) a bit away, to avoid touching.
00:36:162 (1) - NC is not really neccessary.
00:41:718 (2,1,2) - The flow is awkward.. Try this: http://puu.sh/YpLi
00:42:644 (1,2,3) - It feels very fast.. You should change something.
00:44:866 (1,2) - Move them to x:220,y:184.
00:46:347 (1) - Spacing Error.
00:48:014 (1) - Move it at x:364,y:72. The current position is confusing.
00:50:051 (3,4,5) - You should avoid this in Normal Diffs.
00:59:495 (2,1,2,3,1) - Change the placement, it looks ugly at the moment.
01:17:273 (2,1) - Shouldn't the Finish of (2) be at the Start of (1)?
01:26:532 (1) - Remake this Slider. Like this?: http://puu.sh/YpPK
01:44:310 (1) - Same as in Easy.
02:05:421 - Set a Circle.
02:06:162 - ^
02:08:384 - ^
02:09:125 - ^
02:13:755 (1) - Set at the End Finish.
02:22:273 (1) - Please silence at least the End of the Spinner.
02:29:866 (2) - Remove Whistles.
02:31:718 (1) - Add Whistle at the Start.
02:34:681 (1,2,3,4) - Feels really fast to click..
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - I would not recommened to set this pattern for a Normal Diff.

The Diff has no real Hitsound building, the Hitsounds sounds sometimes not really senseful and at other places they are Hitsounds like Whistle missing. However, I also would say that this Diff need some more work. But it goes a good way, so keep it up!

[Hard]
00:19:681 (3) - Ctrl + J it, looks cooler.
00:46:347 (1) - Whistle on the Slider sounds bad, remove it.
00:59:495 (3,4,5) - The Start of (5) looks very hidden due the End of (3).
Please check the Hitsounds from 01:14:681 - 01:35:421, you should add more there.
01:44:310 (1) - Same as the Diffs before.
01:47:644 (1) - Remove NC.
02:10:051 (1,2,3,4) - What the.. Such a Jump totally don't fit in a Hard Diff.
02:20:977 (3,4,5,6,7) - You should change the placements of the Hitobjects.
02:55:421 (1) - I don't like the Spinner so much..
03:03:199 (4,5) - (5) makes it confusing.

The Diff need way more work. The placement of some Circles are terrible and the Rhythm should made much better.. To be honest, I would except of the first 1/4 remake the Diff.

Conclusion:
The Mapset is much much much better then some months ago, but you need in all still work. About the Sliders: This thread should help you to create your Slider better. The Hitsounds at Normal/Hard should made better. I gave you a Star, since I thought I gave you one in the past, so orz.
Flask
Hey Crystal :3 sorry for a huge delay x_x

Mod Request via In-Game PM

[General]
  1. anyway, you should put some claps like this http://puu.sh/q20x in kiai time or anywhere .-., rhythm always need you~
  2. Remove .osb if you want
  3. Maybe add "Sun Rainbow" in tags? (no _)
    Other's are fine~~~
[Easy]
  1. AR-1 please
  2. 00:03:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I hate this part ;w; it's weird and a litttttle bit hard imo. Try to do that long slider to instead? Such like this.
  3. 00:27:273 (1) - Try this~
    SPOILER

    344,192,27273,6,0,B|384:124|328:64|252:-32|168:68|124:128|164:196,2,400
    (If you use this please do some change o.o)
  4. 00:49:125 (3) - Spacing
  5. 01:07:273 (3) - finish?
  6. 01:10:236 - ^
  7. 01:34:310 (3) - I'd like to change to a note and put it at 01:34:310 -
  8. 01:44:310 (1) - This should be remove imo
  9. 02:04:310 (1) - Add a reserve and put finish on 02:05:051 -
  10. 02:13:940 (1) - Remove nc
  11. 02:13:940 (1,2,3,1) - Boring here orz. try to make a square?
  12. 02:21:347 (3) - I got confuse herespacing and this would be confuse imo ._.
  13. 02:50:977 (2) - finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You know it. If I were you I'll change all to 1/4 slider xD
  2. 00:44:495 (3) - remove it?
  3. 01:17:273 (2) - why finish o.o
  4. 01:20:236 (2) - ^
  5. 01:21:718 - ^
  6. 01:23:199 (1) - Maybe stop at 01:25:792 - to keep some distance with (1)?
  7. 01:34:866 (1,2,3) - Change to a slider that has 1 reserve
  8. 01:44:310 (1) - Same as Easy
  9. 02:24:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - You put them just on a line :cry: Try to do in other ways
  10. 02:36:162 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - What all clap?! sounds weird ._.
  11. 02:53:940 (1) - Use a slider to instead please, this's to short
I'll give you the full mod tomorrow :3 I mean "today" xD now is... 03:19 am o.o I should go sleep and I'm going to sleep :o
*don't give me kd please please*


*27/8
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:570 (1,2,3,4) - If you want, I suggest you to change these note to a slider that reserve 2 times
  2. 00:28:014 (4) - why finish?
  3. 01:05:792 (1) - If you want to make a blanket with (3), put the third tick on x:448,y:152 , forth tick put on x:432,y:224, fifth tick put on x:436, y:256. (more blanket imo lol)
  4. 01:15:977 (1) - My brain told me you should make a jump
  5. 01:19:495 (8) - why finish?
  6. 01:20:970 - add a note
  7. 02:13:755 (1,2) - You should add finish at (2) not (1)
  8. 02:14:310 (3) - remove finish
  9. 02:29:403 (1) - delete this ._. it's hard to read imo
  10. 03:03:199 (4,5) - What is thissssssssss
  11. 03:05:607 - note here plz.
  12. 03:05:607 (1) - move to long white tick (don't forget do it shorter!)
[彩虹x熱狗(?)]
  1. 00:15:421 (3) - finish吧
  2. 01:03:014 - 為什麼不map
  3. kiai那邊是什麼怪clap下法 orz
  4. 02:06:532 (1,2,3) - 這三顆spacing改0.8 我覺得比較對的上O~O (因為這裏有3個不同的spacing, 1.2>1.0>0.6 最後應該是0.8)
  5. 02:10:607 (5) - 好吵 去clap
  6. 02:38:940 (5) - 做成這個 還能跟(7)作個包 o.o http://puu.sh/ZfJY

    我比較喜歡熱狗的part -w-
Goooood luck~~~
Topic Starter
Kanari
pwq
I'll fix all of it soon, thanks for your mods~
BeatofIke
Map looks fine to me. Nothing to mod here!
those
Quick run through of collab diff.

[Rainbow x Regou]
  1. Slider tick rate 2, based on the amount of 1/2 rhythms you have in the entire map. You can also emphasize your hitsounds more clearly with fixed slider ticks - important in the Kiai.
  2. 01:25:144 (1) - Hitsound(s) missing from spinner end.
  3. 01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not one bit readable. Pattern can be improved to represent song better.
  4. 01:30:977 (2) - Not too sure what you're trying to emphasize with S:C2 clap here, but I don't think it fits very well.
  5. 01:54:495 (3,1) - Best if unstacked. If used correctly, it works great, but in this position it just creates a stalling, hanging feeling.
kajiyatta
Hi from #modreq
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:49:125(3) DS error? if you aim something, sorry this.
Rythem
01:50:607(1) I think this stacking note is difficult for newbie because music rythem changed. so I suggest rythem and placement like this
Hit Sonud
01:23:014(2) add whistle? it's strong voice heard for me.

Normal
Placement
Rythem
01:22:458(2,3) this rythem doesn't fit well with this song, so try to use this rythem?
01:34:310(4,5) delete those and add 1/4 slider? it's a bit hard for Normal in using notes many times imo.
Hit Sonud
01:26:532(1) add finish at reverse? you already did that 01:14:681
02:50:977(5) remove finish at reverse and add finish at head?
02:57:644(2) what strong pushes with all adding hitsounds? i don't know how this mean but, removing finish better cause this vocal doesn't strong.

Hard
Placement
Rythem
01:25:051(1,2,3,4,5,6) it doesn't fit this rythem with vocal, so try this rythem?
Hit Sonud
01:47:243~02:03:384 without hitsounds? other diffs seem to be added hitsounds, so I think you can put hitsounds, if you aim something, not to be.
02:52:644(5) add finish at end?

Rainbow×Regou
nice diff =3
Hit Sonud
01:34:681(3) I think without hitsounds seems more good because of weak vocal.
02:10:607(5) delete finish, clap and add whistle?

it's fun for me, good luck and star!
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyouu for your mod ~
Laurier
mod4mod time

Easy
00:09:495 (1) - make a little curve ? It's fit the song http://puu.sh/14Xqk
00:21:347 (1) - ^
00:36:162 (1) - ^
00:53:940 (2) - add finish
01:25:051 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XrG
01:28:014 (2,3,4) - (3) bit down . It's make good flow imo
01:34:866 (4) - http://puu.sh/14XsZ
02:59:125 (3) - nazi fix spaxing(1 grid left)

Normal
00:16:162 (1,1) - same opinion as easy make a curve?
00:24:310 (1) - ^
00:37:273 (1) - move 00:37:644 - and 00:37:273 - add note
00:42:829 (2,3,4) - like this http://puu.sh/14XxM
02:21:347 (6) - like thishttp://puu.sh/14Xz2
02:53:940 (1) - this spinner is broke flow

Hard
00:34:681 (3) - move this is better http://puu.sh/14XAp
00:58:384 (1) - delete 2nd way point
01:05:792 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/14XB6
02:55:421 (1) - ~ try this http://puu.sh/14XCa

Rainbow x Regou
00:30:236 (1) - wyh not Symmetrical ?
00:48:014 (1,2,3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/14XEo
02:55:421 (1) - this jump is too far..

That's all
Regou
Fixed something~
I didn't fix 02:55:421 (1) ... mind that it's the speed-up part and this is an Insane diff...
http://puu.sh/15cd1
alacat
Hi:3

[General]
●fine

[Easy]
●00:15:051 (1) - Aim for here ? 00:16:903 (2) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432534
●00:47:644 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal here
●00:58:384 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ? follow the piano sound :3
●01:47:644 (1) - Too soon after spinner.try to close the center?
●02:05:051 - Why put a Break time ? you should put a note ><
●03:04:310 (2) - remove clap on slider head . it doesn't follow the music well.

[Normal]
●00:37:273 (5) - add whistle
●00:45:051 (4) - changed to curved one slider?
●00:59:866 (1) - remove finish.or use lower volume?
●01:20:607 (1) - some-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
●01:23:014 (3) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:31:718 (4) - remove whistle .
●01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.make some slider ?
●02:04:125 (1,2,3) - try this ?
●02:07:088 (1,2,3) - same , here
●02:17:644 (1) - add finish on the slider's end instead of whistle? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●02:21:347 (6) - same here ~ but Case here slider's head ><
●02:24:310 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.around 40% ~ 50%
●03:00:977 (3) - remove finish ><

[Hard]
●00:12:458 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:30:607 (1,2,3) - try align the vertical x:40 or 44
●01:50:051 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●02:00:421 - add note ? follow the Lyrics
●02:24:310 - same Normal diff ~
●02:36:162 - ~ 02:36:162 - gradually add volume? for last kiai time ></

[Rainbow x Regou]
●00:18:940 (1) - Hmm, it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:25:792 (1) - remove New combo
●01:01:162 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432551
●01:20:236 (2) - add finish on the slider's end
●01:22:088 - it needs stronger sound imo o.o make notes or slider and add finish sound :3
●01:34:310 (2) - same ,here 01:01:162 (1) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/432553
●02:36:162 - same Hard diff ~


(ノ・ˇ∀ˇ・)ノ spica ~ ♪

good luck ^^
Aurele
Going to look at this map anytime soon.
Be ready for an huge mod c:
Himesaka Noa
Hi, xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx.

I try to mod this beatmap by your request, but i can't mod this beatmap.
I'm so sorry, i'll shoot a star when i have more than one kudosu T^T

P.S. Video offset is 273 (± 5).

Edit: Shoot a Star =☆
Topic Starter
Kanari
Oh okayy, its fine ~
Kuroneko-sHerald
[General]
I suggest to swap the combo colour order, because these colours are too similar.
So instead of
Combo1 : 44,243,184
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
I think is better
Combo1 : 44,243,184
Combo2 : 196,136,255
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255
or something similar


[Easy]
00:15:051 (1) - I suggest to spacing properly this. It's confusing (especially for newbie) since it's close to the previous beat.
00:49:125 (3) - New Combo to be consistent with 00:46:347 (1) -
00:49:125 (3,4) - I think that would be nice to move (3) to 00:49:310 - (with same end) and fix slider and spacing. That way it follow the previous placement (00:46:347 (1) - ) and, for me, sounds better.

01:50:977 (2) - Spacing. This is my suggestion:
Find another way if you don't like, but fix spacing.


[Normal]
02:20:977 (4) - New combo because it suddenly has a triplet.
02:52:273 (1,2,3) - Move all up (see image) so (2) doesn't overlap with 02:50:978 (5) - and it's more readable.


[Hard]
02:08:755 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Overlap and then jump? :? If you want to keep it, I suggest to change like the image, so it should be more simple to understand.
02:29:403 (1,2) - Please unstack (1). It's on a blue tick and is a jump. I suggest to move it 6 grid up (grid size 4).
02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Do you really like to overlap, uh? :roll:


[Rainbow x Regou]
00:49:495 (2) - Overmapping for me. I suggest to remove it. It sounds unnatural.
01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Overlapping everywhere lol (no need to change btw)
01:55:051 (2) - Overmapping for me. If you want to keep it i suggest to space correctly this beat and 01:54:866 (1) -

Sorry for the problem :o
Kaburagi Kotetsu
Hi!
thank you for mod my map last time. :)
and.. I can't speak English :?
[Easy]
 
00:09:495 (1) - last point : (136, 108)
01:23:384 (3) - http://puu.sh/1gJQE How about arrange like this?
 
[Normal]
 
00:19:125 (3) - Remove NC
00:21:347 (1) - NC
00:22:088 (2) - ^
00:36:162 (4) - ^
00:59:866 (3) - Remove NC
00:23:569 (3,4,1) - (344, 208)
00:33:199 (3) - (328, 112)
01:29:125 (2) - (372, 272)
01:29:495 (1) - (304, 312)
 
[Hard]
 
00:18:384 (4) - (128, 80)
00:41:162 (6) - (156, 236)
You can fix it 02:22:273 (6) - 1st point : (392, 88) 2nd point : (264, 40) 3rd point : (248, 196) last point (116, 164) http://puu.sh/1gKaY
jesse7419
Hi XCrystal :3

mod from m4m , sor for my late.

[General]

fine~

[Easy]
00:03:570 (1,2) - maybe move right 1 grid are more symmetry with 00:06:532 (1,2) - and 00:12:458 (1,2) -
00:30:977 (2) - NC?
00:33:940 (2) - move to x:176 y:160 and 00:34:681 (3) - move to x:96 y:300 will be symmetry.
00:58:384 (2) - distance fix to 0.8x.
01:22:088 (1) - ^
01:44:310 (1,1) - a little far for newbie.
01:50:607 (1,2) - the change distance I think newbie can't read it >< (Except 02:19:125 (2,3) - is fine because not have continuous notes for this part,so you can do this.)

[Normal]
01:53:199 (2) - whistle?
02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap is a little loud , same with Easy is more better!
02:43:940 (2) - add finish in slider end?
02:57:644 (2) - distance can fix more better to let 02:56:903 (1,2,3) - look more good.

[Hard]
00:12:458 (1) - I can't hear whistle in this slider.
00:45:051 (1) - change to slider? 00:54:495 (6) - NC
00:54:681 (1) - remove NC
01:49:495 (1) - change a circle in 01:49:681 - will more flow the music and your rhythm.
02:00:977 - I think this can put notes in Hard diff. How about this? 02:03:755 - add a circle?
02:15:421 (5) - add finish in slider head.
02:20:977 (3) - change finish in slider end?
02:21:718 (5,6) - rhythm is not good for me. How about 02:21:718 (5) - change a circle and 02:22:273 (6) - move to 02:22:088 - ? 02:36:162 - to 02:42:829 - clap same with Normal.

[Rainbow x Regou]
This diff I can use Chinese -.-?
好吧我用中文好了...

00:05:792 (5,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle? 或5上就好
00:07:644 - 這之後的whistle換位置了 我個人比較喜歡把whistle都上在長白線跟第三根白線上 (鋼琴變調都在這上面)
00:17:458 (5,6,7) - 不太好看 6跟7的距離也跑了
00:38:384 (5) - whistle?
00:52:273 (4,6) - slider 開頭都上whistle?
00:56:162 (6) - 尾巴上finish
00:57:644 (4) - 總覺得這邊才是slider的地方...跟Vocal 這樣如何? 00:57:829 (5) - 這尾巴上whistle?
00:58:569 (1) - 感覺尾巴才是上whistle的地方
02:50:977 (1,2) - 好跳 QAQ 而且我覺得 02:51:718 (3) - 更適合跳
02:55:421 (1,2,3,4) - 這不科學 跳的距離都不一樣 我只這邊miss了 0.0
02:58:199 (5) - 放在 x:168 y:214 如何?
03:28:014 (1) - 在 03:32:829 - 這邊結束?

It's good enough for your fist map :)
I see you already get enough mod
Good Luck with rank!!
Star~☆
Lami
[Hard]

00:35:977 (1,2,3) - 1/4 repeat slider?
00:45:051 (1,2,3) - looks so bad.... 00:45:607 (2,3) - stack each other

[Insane]

00:11:162 (1,2,3) -
00:18:940 (1,2) -
00:18:199 (7,8) - remove jump?
00:23:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep distance snap x1.00 ?
00:41:532 (5,6,7) - decreasing spacing? some player might think 1/2 rhythm.
00:49:866 (1,2) - avoid overlapped
00:50:607 (3,1) - not stacking is better for me..
01:15:144 (3) - remove note?
01:57:273 (4,5) - .... stacking?
02:09:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing space
02:50:977 (1,2) - too huge spacing
02:55:421 (1,2) - ^
02:57:644 (4,5) - ^

sorry for my short mod..... =w=
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thankyou ~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode,pls check osu file and fix.
  2. Add 'Collab' in tags.

[Rainbow x Regou]


  1. 00:38:755 - Add a circle to here,follow with piano.
  2. 00:41:532 (5,6,7) - I guess change a slider is better,1/4 stream is no fitting.
  3. 01:14:681 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  4. 01:26:718 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too close and confused parttern,try unstack is better.
  5. 01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
  6. 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics.
  7. 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls.
  8. 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
  9. 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]


  1. OD+1 is better.
  2. 00:51:718 (2) - This slider should end to 00:52:458.
  3. 01:44:310 (4) - Add finish.
  4. 02:29:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hidden by 02:31:532 (1) slider repeat.
  5. 02:53:755 - Missing Add finish to here.

[Easy]


  1. AR,HP-1 is better.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~
;)
Sun Rainbow
01:31:069 ~ 01:35:051 - Why you change SC:2 hitsound to here?
Rika Sama只是因为这样比较好听点(?
你觉得不是很好听吗?如果是这样我一定会改正的~
求回复

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SPiCa-NicoNicoChorus.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74681
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:SPiCa
TitleUnicode:SPiCa
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
ArtistUnicode:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Version:Rainbow x Regou
Source:Toku-P
Tags:Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Nico Nico Douga Regou collab collaboration
BeatmapID:163842
BeatmapSetID:41000

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"SPiCa_Headphone-Tokyo.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,63029,73931
2,101547,103560
2,144510,155412
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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208014,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 44,243,184
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 196,136,255
Combo4 : 255,179,255

[HitObjects]
92,160,3570,2,0,B|92:116|128:84|180:76|220:100,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,164,4125,1,0,0:0:0
248,168,4310,2,0,B|248:212|212:244|160:252|128:232,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,164,4866,2,0,B|200:136|176:92|176:92|244:32,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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148,48,132458,2,0,B|168:96|164:140|132:180|92:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
107,188,133755,5,0,0:0:0
140,272,133940,2,0,B|184:256|232:264,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,280,134681,2,0,B|348:288|304:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,196,135236,1,0,0:0:0
240,108,135421,6,0,B|220:72,1,40,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,120,135792,2,0,B|364:88,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,220,136162,2,0,B|384:256|368:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,298,136903,5,2,0:0:0
127,325,137273,2,0,B|103:245,2,80,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,104,138384,6,0,B|148:140|208:152|260:124|268:76|268:76,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
263,87,139495,1,8,0:0:0
356,72,139681,1,0,0:0:0
448,104,139866,6,0,B|464:156,1,40,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,204,140236,2,0,B|368:248,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,324,140607,2,0,B|384:356|332:348,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,304,141162,1,0,0:0:0
164,320,141347,6,0,B|8:348,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,142921,12,0,143940,0:0:0
256,192,144310,5,4,0:0:0
128,84,156162,6,0,B|144:216,1,119.999996423721,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,276,156718,1,0,0:0:0
180,320,156903,2,2,B|228:368|296:364,1,119.999996423721,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,304,157458,6,0,B|352:284|388:284,1,59.9999982118607,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
492,212,157829,2,0,B|460:228|432:220,1,59.9999982118607,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,180,158199,1,0,0:0:0
288,180,158384,2,0,B|164:168,1,119.999996423721,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,220,158940,6,0,B|88:252|112:284,1,60.0000022888184,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,248,159310,1,0,0:0:0
36,304,159495,2,0,B|4:248|28:180,1,120.000004577637,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
25,189,160236,5,8,0:0:0
80,128,160421,1,0,0:0:0
160,104,160607,2,0,B|212:96|248:104,1,59.9999982118607,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,112,160977,2,0,B|360:132|436:120,1,119.999996423721,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,60,161532,1,0,0:0:0
376,200,161718,1,8,0:0:0
488,304,161903,1,2,0:0:0
488,304,162088,6,0,B|444:264|356:264|288:312|288:384,1,239.999992847443,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,364,163199,5,8,0:0:0
120,296,163384,1,0,0:0:0
60,248,163569,2,0,B|40:176,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,156,163940,2,0,B|124:88,1,59.9999982118607,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,48,164310,5,8,0:0:0
320,56,164403,1,0,0:0:0
368,68,164495,1,8,0:0:0
408,96,164588,1,0,0:0:0
436,136,164681,1,8,0:0:0
452,180,164773,1,0,0:0:0
456,228,164866,1,8,0:0:0
448,276,164958,1,0,0:0:0
420,316,165051,6,0,B|388:356|328:356,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,236,165421,2,0,B|248:204|304:204,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,340,165792,2,0,B|80:368|32:328|0:280|32:208,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,166347,1,0,0:0:0
208,216,166532,6,0,B|252:172|248:116,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,128,166903,1,8,0:0:0
208,216,167088,1,0,0:0:0
352,220,167273,2,0,B|392:180|456:176|512:204|532:260,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,288,167829,6,0,B|220:248|216:184|244:128|300:108,1,207.99999628067,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,220,168384,2,0,B|380:268|372:336,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,288,168755,2,0,B|144:344|64:228,1,207.99999628067,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,96,169310,1,0,0:0:0
368,140,169495,6,0,B|424:156|480:148,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,96,169866,2,0,B|192:64|124:64|76:112,1,155.999997210503,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,140,170236,1,0,0:0:0
176,212,170421,1,0,0:0:0
208,248,170514,1,0,0:0:0
224,292,170607,1,8,0:0:0
220,340,170699,1,0,0:0:0
188,376,170792,1,0,0:0:0
84,296,170977,6,0,B|0:216|44:92,1,207.99999628067,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,224,171532,1,0,0:0:0
456,296,171718,2,0,B|480:244|472:188,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,108,172088,1,8,0:0:0
224,164,172273,1,2,0:0:0
348,224,172458,5,4,0:0:0
224,280,172644,2,0,B|180:324|108:312,1,103.999998140335,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,132,173014,2,0,B|92:36|232:84,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,280,173569,1,8,0:0:0
440,324,173755,6,0,B|500:232|464:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,108,174310,1,8,0:0:0
312,100,174403,1,0,0:0:0
292,96,174495,1,0,0:0:0
268,96,174588,1,0,0:0:0
244,104,174681,1,2,0:0:0
224,120,174773,1,0,0:0:0
212,140,174866,1,0,0:0:0
208,164,174958,1,0,0:0:0
216,188,175051,2,0,B|240:244|224:304,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,352,175421,5,4,0:0:0
36,72,175607,1,0,0:0:0
176,68,175792,1,8,0:0:0
300,168,175977,2,0,B|288:220|328:264|400:288|456:240,1,207.99999628067,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,96,176532,1,8,0:0:0
284,24,176718,1,0,0:0:0
168,124,176903,6,0,B|148:180|176:248,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,288,177273,1,8,0:0:0
172,356,177458,1,0,0:0:0
52,280,177644,2,0,B|24:176|48:52,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,288,178199,1,0,0:0:0
416,224,178384,6,0,B|432:168|420:96,1,103.999998140335,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,236,178755,2,0,B|192:296|204:348,1,103.999998140335,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,88,179125,2,0,B|228:44|164:44|104:72|96:132,1,207.99999628067,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,264,179681,1,0,0:0:0
204,236,179866,5,4,0:0:0
352,256,180051,1,0,0:0:0
452,352,180236,1,8,0:0:0
352,256,180421,1,0,0:0:0
360,116,180607,2,0,B|384:68|452:52|508:72,1,155.999997210503,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
496,68,180977,1,8,0:0:0
468,200,181162,1,0,0:0:0
352,256,181347,6,0,B|300:232|244:240,1,103.999998140335,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,284,181718,2,0,B|64:296|12:264|-8:204|32:136,1,207.99999628067,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,28,182273,1,0,0:0:0
408,216,182458,1,8,0:0:0
220,168,182644,1,0,0:0:0
356,28,182829,6,0,B|412:12|472:24|512:64|520:120,1,207.99999628067,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,160,183384,1,0,0:0:0
384,160,183477,1,0,0:0:0
384,160,183569,1,8,0:0:0
136,368,183940,5,2,0:0:0
256,304,184125,1,0,0:0:0
140,240,184310,5,4,0:0:0
124,220,184495,5,8,0:0:0
104,200,184681,5,8,0:0:0
88,180,184866,5,8,0:0:0
252,40,185236,5,0,0:0:0
204,128,185421,2,0,B|256:148|316:128,1,103.999991941452,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,185792,12,2,186903,0:0:0
72,88,187273,6,0,B|112:104|156:96,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,176,187644,1,8,0:0:0
308,136,187829,1,0,0:0:0
412,156,188014,2,0,B|448:224|424:328,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,272,188569,1,0,0:0:0
40,256,188755,6,0,B|28:300|44:344,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
144,272,189125,2,8,B|156:228|144:188,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,172,189403,1,0,0:0:0
176,160,189495,1,2,0:0:0
276,124,189681,2,0,B|300:156|292:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,64,190051,1,0,0:0:0
288,24,190236,6,0,B|372:56|388:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,220,190792,1,0,0:0:0
356,248,190977,2,0,B|332:304|352:368,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
351,365,191347,1,8,0:0:0
448,316,191532,1,0,0:0:0
448,316,191718,6,0,B|472:240|448:132,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,100,192273,1,0,0:0:0
276,148,192458,2,0,B|232:172|184:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,168,192736,1,0,0:0:0
160,168,192829,1,8,0:0:0
88,92,193014,1,0,0:0:0
60,192,193199,6,0,B|112:256|96:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,92,194125,1,0,0:0:0
120,72,194218,1,0,0:0:0
156,64,194310,1,8,0:0:0
192,68,194403,1,0,0:0:0
228,80,194495,1,0,0:0:0
288,168,194681,6,0,B|328:252|440:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,144,195236,1,2,0:0:0
396,144,195607,1,0,0:0:0
260,312,195792,1,8,0:0:0
104,200,195977,6,0,B|60:120|108:44,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,312,196532,1,8,0:0:0
352,352,196718,1,0,0:0:0
352,352,196810,1,0,0:0:0
352,352,196903,2,0,B|368:300|356:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,136,197273,2,0,B|256:180|264:216,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,176,197644,5,2,0:0:0
164,160,197829,1,0,0:0:0
384,180,198014,1,8,0:0:0
136,160,198199,2,0,B|104:184|44:176|8:156|4:108,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,64,198755,1,2,0:0:0
192,344,199125,6,0,B|228:264|328:280,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,216,199681,1,0,0:0:0
448,312,199866,2,0,B|492:284|504:252,1,80
504,232,200144,1,0,0:0:0
496,208,200236,1,8,0:0:0
444,120,200421,1,2,0:0:0
408,216,200607,6,0,B|236:256,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,324,201162,2,0,B|128:340|84:336,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
8,216,201532,2,0,B|52:200|96:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
4,316,201903,1,0,0:0:0
8,216,202088,6,0,B|48:144|20:56,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,24,202644,1,0,0:0:0
212,68,202829,2,0,B|284:36|368:76,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,203384,1,0,0:0:0
336,172,203569,6,0,B|340:256,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
428,308,203940,1,8,0:0:0
328,348,204125,2,0,B|308:384,2,40,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,216,204495,2,0,B|456:172,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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24,104,206162,1,8,0:0:0
119,149,206347,1,0,0:0:0
228,164,206532,5,4,0:0:0
448,100,206718,1,0,0:0:0
320,268,206903,1,8,0:0:0
316,48,207088,1,2,0:0:0
112,324,207644,5,2,0:0:0
104,328,207736,1,2,0:0:0
96,332,207829,1,6,0:0:0
256,192,208014,12,0,213940,0:0:0
Regou

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

  • [Rainbow x Regou]

    1. 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
    2. 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
    3. 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
    4. 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
      I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~
;)
Thanks Rika >w<
Sun Rainbow

Regou wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx ~ :)

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

  • [Rainbow x Regou]

    1. 02:16:162 (3) - Should change 1/1 slider,follow with lyrics. ok
    2. 02:55:421 (1,2) - This jump really huge and suddenly,reduce spacing pls. ok
    3. 02:57:273 (2,4) - ^
    4. 03:01:718 (2,3) - ^
      I don't really agree with this...This is the speed up part and the spacing is still playable...
OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~
;)
Thanks Rika >w<
热狗不厚道=3=害我得要重新来(?
Regou
=口=...
Birdy
Hi!
this map seems already great, so just have few little suggestions~

[All diffs]
01:35:421 (1) - uh oh, why is this spinner so long?!

[Easy]
00:34:681 (4) - move on x:92 y:300
01:05:051 (4) - move on x:152 y:384
01:22:088 (1) - move first point after start on x:360 y:180
01:23:384 (3) - copy 01:22:088 (1) and flip it here
02:24:310 (1) - move second point after start on x:116 y:60
02:49:125 (1) - move first point after start a bit downwards (3 or 4 squares, which ever you prefer yourself)

[Normal]
00:28:755 (1) - move the point before end a bit more left
00:45:051 (4) - messy points, remake slider with 2 points
01:26:532 (1) - not really too bad, BUT maybe a bit too compact
03:02:088 (1) - same as 00:28:755 (1) but flip it

[Hard]
02:13:199 (4) - too compact :|

and everything else looks just fine~
good luck!
HelloSCV
M4M request~

SPOILER
Easy
Nothing to say :p

Normal
01:20:607 (1) - add finish on start
01:22:458 (2) - ^ on end
02:00:607 (2) - move to ( 132,348 )
02:01:718 (1) - ^ ( 304,180 )
02:19:125 (2) - add finish on end
02:21:347 (3) - ^
02:34:866 (2) - remove note

Hard
00:46:347 (1) - remove slider's whistle
01:23:384 (5) - add finish on start
01:35:236 (3) - remove finish
01:57:458 (4) - finish
02:19:866 (1) - more round to cover 02:20:607 (2) - this?
02:31:532 (1) - remove slider's whistle
02:33:199 ~ 02:36:162 - i think break time is not good choice add some notes or sliders
02:52:644 (5) - add finish on end

Rainbow x Regou
00:09:866 (2) - add whistle on start
00:34:681 (2) - add finish on start
00:43:755 (3) - make this slider more round to cover 00:42:829 (2) - this slider's end?
01:02:088 (1) - remove NC?
01:14:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this timing pattern is better imo http://puu.sh/1AYxE
01:17:273 (5,1) - why 1/1 slider? how about some notes and short slider?
01:21:903 (1,2,3) - ^
01:23:569 (1) - remove finsh and 01:23:384 - add finish here
01:27:458 (5) - not good location how about making star pattern?
01:32:458 (3) - add finish on start
01:53:569 (1) - use custom clap
01:55:051 (2) - ^
02:36:903 (3) - removes slider's whistle
03:01:347 (1) - add finish on start

Thank you for your mod and hope you like my mod too xD
Irie Miyuki
Poor mod. Just suggestions :3

[General]
Maybe move Nico from tags? there's a nico in the artist already.

[Rainbow x Regou]
00:12:458 (1,2) - stack better
00:38:384 (5,6) - maybe a little difficult in reading?
00:49:310 (1) - stack better?
01:17:273 (5) - make the shape more beautiful?
01:57:273 (4,5) - maybe difficult for reading. I think move 01:57:458 (5) - to another place is better, or add NC? it will also cause a problem in reading 03:27:644 (1,2,3)
02:03:384 (1) - move it a little left to stack with 02:01:903 (6) - ? if u change this, don't forget 02:04:310 (3) -
02:05:236 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - makes me confused. If follow piano, the rhythm should be like this
02:08:014 (1,1,1) - I think if these follow the piano sounds better.
02:19:495 (2) - stack better
02:40:236 (1) - stack better
02:46:532 (1,3) - also i think u can move this to stack with 02:45:421 (2) -
02:53:569 (4) - move this a grid left to overlap with 02:52:644 (2) -
02:53:755 (1) - remove NC, and add nc at 02:54:310 (2) -
03:00:977 (6) - stack better
03:04:495 (1,1,1) - change clap to whistle?
03:05:421 (2) - move clap and finish? i think it's a little loud
03:19:866 (3,4,5) - how about changing to this, sounds better imo.
03:26:347 (4) - stack better

[Hard]
00:34:495,00:34:588 - something should be here. But if u ignore it, it's ok
01:28:755 (5) - x232 y144
01:47:273 (1) - remove nc
03:04:866 (5) - x444 y180

[Normal]
00:27:829 (2,3) - someone told me this part could be a little difficult in normal, but i think it's ok
00:32:458 (1,2,3) - you can make this triangle looks better
01:56:718 (1,2,3,4) - change these to sliders? (notes on red lines could be a little hard for new players)
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:34:681 (1,2,3) - ^

[Easy]
00:39:125 (2) - nc, 00:39:866 (1) - remove nc
00:47:644 (1,2,1) - different spacing?
01:50:607 (1,2) - ^
02:19:125 (2,3) - ^

[Overall]
Very good map :3 GL with ranking and a star ☆
Athena Tennos
gogogo!
why not rank yet!~
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