HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Suzully's Normal]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:55:970 (1,2,3) - Since it seems that the sliders really follow vocals, while playing the (1) slider feel it should be longer, but like this you'll follow the drums too↓ Fixed.
      
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2. 01:00:687 (x,x) - Add those two notes and scrap AIMod. They shouldn't be hard to take. It's too hard for normal-player because of too short break after a spinner.
   
3. 01:08:800 (3,4,5) - Feels better mapped using a 1/1 repeating slider Ah, I prefer current pattern. Sorry no change.

1. 00:01:630 (2) - Move the 2nd SliderPoint to x:456|y:160 [Grid lvl: 3]
2. 00:04:649 (3) - Yes.. Copy pasta here with ^ ~
3. 00:27:290 (2) - dasas Move this Slider to x:168|y:184 [Grid lvl: 3] ... Distance Snap? .. Grid lvl 3.. It's ok.
4. 00:40:121 (3) - You forget Add a Clap in the End of the Slider for Continue your Hitsouding o3o..
5. 01:00:498 (1) - I think this Spinner can Start in the Time: 01:00:309
6. 01:18:611 (3) - You can Delete the 2nd And the 8th SliderPoint o3o... Symmetry?.. This don't break the Symmetry..

1. 00:09:177 (1) - This Slider is Touching the object 00:07:668 (2) >A< ... You can Rotate the Slider by -8º or -7º and Move to the same original place. [x:500|y:244]
2. 00:18:611 (3) - This Slider isn't in The correct place :33 ... Move it to x:148|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4]
3. 00:32:951 (2,3) - sdasad Stack in Normal Diff?.. Without change color? .. Shhh I never see a problem with this.. So don't change this.. But all the modders says this is bad :I

1. 00:18:988 (8) - Hmm.. The same but Invert :33 Am.. For Avoid confusions.. This ~
2. 00:23:894 (5,6) - Touching are bad :c .. Try move the (5) to x:136|y:192 [Grid lvl: 3]. .. Or maybe not D: .. Or try invert the (6) :333
3. 01:10:687 (8) - Move this Slider to x:408|y:152 [Grid lvl: 3]
4. 01:36:724 (5) - The End of this Slider is not ... ''prefectly'' in the same place of the Object 01:35:215 (1) :33 asdda Eyup... Nazi ewe
5. You have a Unsnapped Green timing point at 01:25:692 x:

1. Engage..? .. Wut.. Insane Is Better ._. Much better.. for the Mapset o3o .. I know why but.. o3oU
2. 00:02:385 (6,7) - Move these Sliders to x:80|y:216 [Grid lvl: 3]
3. 00:08:045 (5) - Move this to x:208|y:248 [Grid lvl: 4]
4. 00:11:064 (5) - Move 1 grid Down. [Grid lvl: 4]
5. 00:41:253 (2) - Move this to x:380|y:104 [Grid lvl: 4]
6. 00:43:894 (1,2,3) - This Tripler Isn't working... good..
7. 01:07:102 (6,7) - So far.. D:
8. 01:25:592 (6) - This note can be in the same place of 01:24:083 (7)

1. Taiko lite.. ? .. I Don't know.. Imo.. Futsuu is better.. o3o
2. 00:51:441 (1) - Move this object to 00:51:253
3. 00:54:460 (1) - Move this object to 00:54:271
4. 00:57:479 (1) - Move this object to 00:57:290
5. 00:58:234 (3) - k
6. 01:00:121 (2) - d
7. 01:25:592 (x) - Rly srry for this.. I see the bg but.. Add a note here. ''d'' :I)b
8. 01:28:423 (4,5,1) - Change this to ''kkk''

1. I think all the Difficulty can be in the center :I HP and OD - 1 :33 .. Is only a oni.. And is a Slow song.. Imo..

DaxMasterix wrote:

Engage:[list][*]Engage..? .. Wut.. Insane Is Better ._. Much better.. for the Mapset o3o .. I know why but.. o3oU

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

DaxMasterix wrote:

Engage:[list][*]Engage..? .. Wut.. Insane Is Better ._. Much better.. for the Mapset o3o .. I know why but.. o3oU

read the source

28,128,68422,1,8
96,60,68800,1,0
164,128,69177,1,8
232,60,69554,2,0,B|256:36|300:44,2,60,0|0|8

• 00:00:121 ~ 00:12:385 - consider this is Normal, how about turn up the volume? we can't here the hitsounds and newbie players may be confused because they can't know clearly whether they hit the note or not.
  00:14:460 (1,2,) - I can understand that this note is just after the spinner and it must take interval, then you put note on white tick and ignore the melody on red tick. but second or third time, you put notes on red tick and make rhythm with the melody on red tick, for example, 00:16:724 (1,2) and 00:19:743 (1,2).
  I wonder to this inconsistency.
  00:16:724 (1) - the hitsounds of slidertick is surely correct, but I think this sound may confuse newbie players. volume of the end of slider is lower than slider tick, so we sometimes feel this slider is end at 00:17:102.
  00:19:743 (1) - ^
  00:24:083 (3) - I think this slider is not kind. sure, the end of this slider is visible, but when we look at the start of this slider, we can't know where this slider is to go.
  00:45:404 (3,4) - nazi. the distance between these notes is a bit shorter than others.
  00:57:290 (3) - the previous slider ends on red tick, and this slider starts on red tick. I think this something difficult. how about this rhythm? I feel this is a little easier to follow the rhythm because the slider is start on white tick...
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  and if you don't accept this, how about to make this slider not to overlap with previous slider?
  01:03:517 - according to Duca's singing, I want you to put some note here.
  01:08:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - BPM is not so low, so this placement is difficult for newbie player imo. it's kind if you make this rhythm with using sliders, or change the placement which doesn't use stacking.
  01:15:592 - same as 01:03:517
  01:23:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 01:08:422
  01:26:158 (1,2) - same as 00:14:460. also, I think it's not bad thing to use various rhythm, but some of newbie players may feel it difficult and why.
  01:30:498 (3) - the connection with previous slider is not so good imo. I feel that you put this note at here because of not having enough place to put note.

• 00:15:592 (6,7) - this is Insane, so this jump will be accepted, but it's difficult to put stream just after large jump.
  then the song of this part, surely it swells more than previous part, but I think it is not enough to make this difficult section. how about to shorten the distance of jump?
  00:18:611 (6,7) - ^
  00:23:139 (3,4) - ^ and how about this placement?
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  00:46:536 (11,1,2,3,4) - the flow of cursor is almost linearly and it makes me difficult to follow. how about move (1,2,3) to a bit above?
  00:57:668 (7,8,1) - nazi. I want to make equilateral triangle with these notes.
  00:57:668 (7,8,2) - ^
  01:07:102 (6,7) - it's better to stack them imo because in later section, you stacked all notes in this rhythm.
  01:29:177 (1,3) - nazi. I don't think the form of these sliders are best of yours.

Saten wrote:

[Suzully]
AR+1 (I found it quite pleasant on patterns like 01:08:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) Okay changed.
00:46:913 (1) - something like this looks better imo, you micht wanna fix the spacing on the next object after this Sorry but I prefer the current one. I changed the shape a bit.

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00:56:536 (2,3) - I think (2) is too close to the slider (not the slider head) maybe move it abit more right or something Fixed.

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01:07:668 (1,2) - start the NC on (2) instead? Hum, it's not necessary imo.

1. Set AudioLeadIn: 2000 to all diffs
2. I have 112(-3 ms) as offset. Try it and if it works better for you don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes.

1. 00:12:190 (1) - I'd end this slider with a default soft finish. It would emphasize the cymbals in the song much better.
2. 00:19:737 (1,2,3) - You should use the same hitsound pattern of 00:14:454 (1,2,3) to keep consistency.
3. 00:39:360 (2) - Finish on this slider's head? It'd sound nice together with that sound in the music, especially together with the previous slider's point on 00:38:605
4. 01:00:492 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 earlier.
5. 01:00:492 (1) - Same of 00:12:190 (1)? Like the other diffs.
6. 01:02:756 (1) - Whistle on slider's head?

1. 00:09:171 (1) - You could improve this blanket to have a better flow:
   
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   488,232,9171,6,0,B|456:268|396:268|364:228,2,135.000005149841,4|0|0

2. 00:14:454 (1) - I think that this whistle together with the previous custom slider's point on 00:14:831 sounds really bad. Removing it would emphasize better the whistle on 00:15:964 (3).
3. 00:16:718 (1) - ^
4. 00:19:737 (1) - ^
5. 00:48:605 (3) - Clap on this slider's end too? It'd be consistent with 00:48:039 (2).
6. 00:49:926 (1) - Default soft finish would sound better here than the custom one.
7. 01:07:662 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on 01:08:416 (2) instead.

1. 00:34:077 (6) - x:284 y:244? It'd be centered between 00:33:699 (5,7).
2. 01:20:114 (8) - We have already talked about the SV changes via IRC but I think using NC here would be really much better.
3. 01:23:133 (1,3,5) - I think that soft finishes with 50% volume on these sliders' tails would be better because there are cymbals in the song there.
4. 01:33:507 - What about to add a circle here to keep consistency with previous parts? It seems there is a missed sound here :\

1. 00:02:379 (6,7) - Select them and move to x:80 y:232, the spacing between 00:02:001 (5,6) would be consistent with 00:01:624 (4,5).
2. 00:41:247 (2) - x:376 y:80 so that to be equidistant from 00:40:869 (1,3), it flows better.
3. 01:04:454 (9) - CTRL + R? Also to make a jump between 01:04:454 (9,1) :3
4. 01:12:945 (9) - I would reduce this slider by 1/2 moving it 1/2 later and adding a circle here. Everyone at the first try would think that the rhythm is this one:
   
5. 01:23:511 (4,4,4) - Same of Hard about the finishes >w<

1. 00:47:850 (4,6) - Why don't you use 2 kats here? According to this suggestion you should delete 00:48:416 (7)
2. 01:29:548 (2,1) - k d
3. 01:31:058 (3,1,1) - k d k
4. 01:32:567 (3,1) - k d
5. 01:35:586 (2,1) - ^

1. 01:38:416 (2,4,6) - Big kats here are much better

1. I am not sure if 0.7 SV is a good idea. The bpm isn't that high actually. I find it really easy even with 1.4. Should probably change it to standard SV.
2. 00:49:548 (1) - k? Because I can hear the melody here a bit stronger.

1. Nothing really wrong here, just some suggestions to consider.
2. 00:36:152 - Around this part I don't like how your rhythm sounds, because a couple of the interesting things in the music fall on red ticks here. More specifically vocals and the guitar. I know taiko is a drum, but following that makes it sound better in my opinion. I made a small change into this:
   
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   I moved the note 00:36:341 (103) - to 00:36:152., added a note to 00:36:530 and moved the note 00:37:096 (105) - to 00:36:907. I find this a lot more interesting, up to you how you handle this though.

1. 00:25:398 (4) - A new combo here would make sense. Looks prettier and follows the music too.
2. 00:40:869 (1,2,3) - Even if spaced properly, it looks a little bad because of the slider 1. Nothing wrong here, but consider adjusting the position of 00:40:492 (9,1) to make it look better, like moving both of these a bit lower and to the left to preserve the spacing.
3. 00:52:756 - Consider silencing this tick because it doesn't sound that good to be honest.
4. 01:07:662 - This one is a bit too quiet. Try 48%.
5. 01:13:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really hear a stream in the music, but okay. Consider removing 4 and 6 though, it gives more impact. (haha, after checking your hard diff, I see that you did there exactly what I am suggesting here. Well the suggestion still stands regardless.)
6. 01:26:152 (1) - Consider adding a whistle to the start as well, because of really loud music here, making your finish almost inaudible because it blends too much and this makes it lose impact. This goes for hard diff as well, I suppose.
7. 01:35:209 (1) - Don't like this because the melody can be really heard at 01:35:398, which is the time I am suggesting to end the slider.

1. OD+1.
2. Try 40~42% for slidertick soft whistles, they sound a little too loud to me.
3. 00:54:265 (3,4) - Maybe remove 4 and extend the slider 3? It sounds better as the slider tick is just powerful enough to play for the sound at 00:54:454. Having a beat there sounds wrong to me because of the drumline which ends at 00:54:265 (as well as the vocal) and starts at 00:54:643 again.
4. 01:01:247 (1) - You didn't slow this one in the insane diff. Hmm, well I'm kinda okay with it, but maybe try removing it and leaving nothing here or just a circle at 01:01:624? That sounds pretty okay to me. Just a small suggestion.
5. 01:07:662 - Yeah, try 48~50% here, just like I said for insane. Easy diff has 50% and it sounds okay. This goes for 01:20:492 as well.
6. 01:32:756 (2,3) - Reversing the order sounds better in my opinion. Try it and see. By this I mean that the slider should go before the circle, like this. Just put the clap on the circle 3 instead then.

1. AR+1?
2. Lower the volume of claps on slider ticks by 10~12%, they are too loud.
3. 01:03:322 (4) - This slider bugs me a little, try making it longer by 1/2? It sounds much better to me. Also try putting that whistle on the start.
4. 01:15:398 (4) - Same here.

1. AR+1? The kiai looks really packed with AR2.
2. 00:04:265 (2,3) - This stack seems completely random to me. There isn't anything in the music that I can hear which would make this a fitting pattern. Try unstacking it and position the circle above the sliders 1 and 3, keeping the distance snap the same.
3. 01:34:831 (3,1) - Same thing. Just move it by distance snap between the two sliders please, or something.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Suz]
00:37:850 (1,2) - partial overlap '~' try this instead, it flows more smoothly and makes a triangle: http://puu.sh/167R8 Okay changed =~=
01:07:096 (4,1) - I don't have a solution for this but it also looks bad Maybe it became better now. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/437640
01:29:171 (1,2,3) - just straighten this out so that it doesn't jerk the flow around like that This too. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/437641

lolcubes wrote:

[Normal]

1. AR+1? Okay changed.
2. Lower the volume of claps on slider ticks by 10~12%, they are too loud. Fixed on all stuff.
3. 01:03:322 (4) - This slider bugs me a little, try making it longer by 1/2? It sounds much better to me. Also try putting that whistle on the start. Changed a pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/437643
4. 01:15:398 (4) - Same here. Yup http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/437648

lolcubes wrote:

Alright, I'll just go ahead then.

[Taiko Lite]

1. 00:49:548 (1) - k? Because I can hear the melody here a bit stronger. k d D intentional cadence.

[Duelist]

1. 01:13:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really hear a stream in the music, but okay. Consider removing 4 and 6 though, it gives more impact. (haha, after checking your hard diff, I see that you did there exactly what I am suggesting here. Well the suggestion still stands regardless.) Bass riff, not drum fill
2. 01:35:209 (1) - Don't like this because the melody can be really heard at 01:35:398, which is the time I am suggesting to end the slider. Not too sure what you mean here, exactly. Will confirm when you come around to check again.

[Hard]

1. 00:54:265 (3,4) - Maybe remove 4 and extend the slider 3? It sounds better as the slider tick is just powerful enough to play for the sound at 00:54:454. Having a beat there sounds wrong to me because of the drumline which ends at 00:54:265 (as well as the vocal) and starts at 00:54:643 again. Wanted to distinguish between this and 00:51:247 (3,4) - where the bass melody isn't heard.
2. 01:01:247 (1) - You didn't slow this one in the insane diff. Hmm, well I'm kinda okay with it, but maybe try removing it and leaving nothing here or just a circle at 01:01:624? That sounds pretty okay to me. Just a small suggestion. SV is different between diffs because the objects that lead to this slider are different. I felt this would be appropriate here and not in the Insane (follows two circles).
3. 01:32:756 (2,3) - Reversing the order sounds better in my opinion. Try it and see. By this I mean that the slider should go before the circle, like this. Just put the clap on the circle 3 instead then. I feel 01:32:945 - requires more emphasis than 01:32:756 - , or that's how I make out the lyrics anyway.

lolcubes wrote:

[Easy]

1. AR+1? The kiai looks really packed with AR2.
2. 00:04:265 (2,3) - This stack seems completely random to me. There isn't anything in the music that I can hear which would make this a fitting pattern. Try unstacking it and position the circle above the sliders 1 and 3, keeping the distance snap the same.
3. 01:34:831 (3,1) - Same thing. Just move it by distance snap between the two sliders please, or something. Got rid of the stack for both but did something different than the suggestion.

those wrote:

01:35:209 (1) - Don't like this because the melody can be really heard at 01:35:398, which is the time I am suggesting to end the slider. Not too sure what you mean here, exactly. Will confirm when you come around to check again.

Chewin wrote:

still waiting for rank