Hey, from my modding queue~
red = unrankable
blue = important stuff
purple = I wanted to mention
black = suggestions and opinions
Easy
In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles
00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners
00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it
00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this
00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here
01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this
01:39:144 (1) ^
01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part
02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow
02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano
Normal
00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead
00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o
00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song
00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission
01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here
01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up
01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~
01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals
02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles
Hard
00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long
00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ?
01:47:751 (8) NC
Ok, that's all I can do for now~
Very nice for your first map
Good luck on rank~
red = unrankable
blue = important stuff
purple = I wanted to mention
black = suggestions and opinions
Easy
In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles
00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners
00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it
00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this
00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here
01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this
01:39:144 (1) ^
01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part
02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow
02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano
Normal
00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead
00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o
00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song
00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission
01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here
01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up
01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~
01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals
02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles
Hard
00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long
00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ?
01:47:751 (8) NC
Ok, that's all I can do for now~
Very nice for your first map
Good luck on rank~