Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

Shinji Orito - Tori no Uta [Osu|Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
48
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 พฤศจิกายน 2555 at 18:52:19

Artist: Shinji Orito
Title: Tori no Uta
Tags: Air Lia IA Vocaloid3
BPM: 122
Filesize: 19207kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.5 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Hard (4.77 stars, 380 notes)
  3. Normal (3.06 stars, 191 notes)
  4. Taiko Fuutsu (3.19 stars, 307 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4.82 stars, 658 notes)
Download: Shinji Orito - Tori no Uta
Download: Shinji Orito - Tori no Uta (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My first beatmap -,,,- (Really ?)

Status

Easy = 100%
Normal = 100%
Taiko Fuutsu = 100%
Hard = 100%
Taiko Oni = 100%

23 Nov 2012 : Fix something with my map and update.

Please give me some suggestion, I'll improve this map to get rank it. :)

Thanks.
Last edited by R e v i v e , edited 29 times in total.
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
To get it rank, you'll need to have a lot of mods. People will check your map and tell you what is not good for them, they'll make suggestions or they'll create diffs.

To rank it, see there: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/How_to_Get_Your_Map_Ranked

You'll need a BAT approval and some MAT mods. To make your map much prioritary, you'll need to shoot stars on your map (Or you'll need that other people shoot stars on it) and after that, BATs and MATs will see your map easier. Stars are given to you by other peoples when you mod their maps. That can be a little confuse with my bad English, but I hope you understood what I wrote.

I'll see if I can mod it. I like this style of music but I'm not a pro mapper. Just a simple beatmapper.

Good luck ^^
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

JudgeTheDude wrote:

To get it rank, you'll need to have a lot of mods. People will check your map and tell you what is not good for them, they'll make suggestions or they'll create diffs.

To rank it, see there: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/How_to_Get_Your_Map_Ranked

You'll need a BAT approval and some MAT mods. To make your map much prioritary, you'll need to shoot stars on your map (Or you'll need that other people shoot stars on it) and after that, BATs and MATs will see your map easier. Stars are given to you by other peoples when you mod their maps. That can be a little confuse with my bad English, but I hope you understood what I wrote.

I'll see if I can mod it. I like this style of music but I'm not a pro mapper. Just a simple beatmapper.

Good luck ^^
Thanks for your guide. >w<
Arnold0
1,675 posts
Joined February 2012
Arnold0
Just a little thing before the mod : Judge say that : "Stars are given to you by other peoples when you mod their maps"
I'd like to say some more info so you wont do the same error as I've made when I've got my first mod on my map :)
When you recive a mod, next the the post you'll have a button "No kudosu yet Click here to give kudosu" or a thing like this I don't remember exactly. Clicking on it will give a star to the modder, and also make you map current priority grow.
So give kudo to usefull mods so modder get a star it can shoot at his/other/yours map and it makes your map SP grow by 1. Don't give kudo to usless posts for make your SP grow since MAT/BAT will deny them so... :)
Unlike I was thinking when I started mapping, you don't need any kudosu for giving one to modders ^^

Now let's mod :P
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
hit0.png is missing
There is more than 10 sec blanck in the start of your MP3 file, maybe you can cut it?

[Easy]
00:42:582 - Add note
Sorry nothing more...

[Hard]
00:58:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream like this may be a little too hard but it up to you to see if you want to change it.
02:36:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I think this is too hard too and 17 combo is realy high.

Sorry for my noob mod :O
I can't belive this is your first beatmap, for me it's realy well made. Please, don't give up, I'm sure you can get it ranked!
And sorry I have no more star to give now, I'll give you one when I've got some kudosu.
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

Arnold0 wrote:

Now let's mod :P
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
hit0.png is missing
:arrow: Added.
There is more than 10 sec blanck in the start of your MP3 file, maybe you can cut it?
:arrow: Nah, it's not big problem of this.

[Easy]
00:42:582 - Add note
Sorry nothing more...
:arrow: Not change sry.

[Hard]
00:58:565 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A stream like this may be a little too hard but it up to you to see if you want to change it.
:arrow: Yup this is my style mapping, so don't change it.
02:36:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I think this is too hard too and 17 combo is realy high.
:arrow: Forgot NC lol, Fixed.

Sorry for my noob mod :O
I can't belive this is your first beatmap, for me it's realy well made. Please, don't give up, I'm sure you can get it ranked!
And sorry I have no more star to give now, I'll give you one when I've got some kudosu.
Thanks for modding.
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Easy
01:48:975 (3) - NC
02:13:565 (3) - ^
02:53:894 (1) - increase spinner's lengh by 02:56:106 - here


Normal
00:55:614 (6) - maybe clap is better
00:55:860 (1) - delete whistle
02:27:336 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/NGCY
02:45:286 (4) - NC?
02:53:894 (1) - same as Easy

Hard
01:35:450 (2) - NC?
01:47:008 (3) - move 1 grid down ( to make perfect square ) nazi
02:13:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this stream is littlbe bit long how about delete 2,4,6 note? and 1,3,5 try other pattern
02:53:894 (1) - same as Easy

lol is this really your first beatmap? Awesome :D
good luck!
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
My Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
Easy
01:48:975 (3) - NC
:arrow: ok
02:13:565 (3) - ^
:arrow: ok
02:53:894 (1) - increase spinner's lengh by 02:56:106 - here
:arrow: it's end rhythm here, so not change.


Normal
00:55:614 (6) - maybe clap is better
:arrow: ok, thanks for check my sound :)
00:55:860 (1) - delete whistle
:arrow: ok
02:27:336 (3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/NGCY
:arrow: ok
02:45:286 (4) - NC?
:arrow: ok
02:53:894 (1) - same as Easy
:arrow: Same as above.

Hard
01:35:450 (2) - NC?
:arrow: ok
01:47:008 (3) - move 1 grid down ( to make perfect square ) nazi
:arrow: lol
02:13:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think this stream is littlbe bit long how about delete 2,4,6 note? and 1,3,5 try other pattern
:arrow: change a bit pattern.
02:53:894 (1) - same as Easy
:arrow: Same as above.

lol is this really your first beatmap? Awesome :D
good luck!
Thanks for modding :3
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
- when I download the diff I can't see [Taiko], make sure you full submit it again.
- You may want to crop the silenced section at the beginning.

- For Taiko diffs the hitsound must be loud enough to be clearly audiable, and S60% is too soft. Consider S 100%.

[Taiko]
00:16:270 - comparing with previous terms this one has even higher pitch, so use k k again?
00:24:385 - k d for this one for downgoing melody.
02:49:713 - I can hear a weak drum beat in the music, so k here?
02:53:893 - use softened spinner here, i.e., insert a very soft timing section at the beginning of the spinner.

Very good diff considering it's following the song well and this is your first trial only.
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
Can someone help me cut blank of mp3 at begin of this song ? ;)
Arnold0
1,675 posts
Joined February 2012
Arnold0
Hi,
Cutted MP3 :
http://puu.sh/PuAA
I think offset 706 is good for this one but try yourself, I'm not a good timer :)
Good luck with resnapping all notes manualy because all my try with the automatic things inside the editor give failed results.

No kudosu for this please.
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
Thanks you Arnold :)

but can you add some blank for 2-3 second ?

I can't paste first note for your mp3 >3
Arnold0
1,675 posts
Joined February 2012
Arnold0
http://puu.sh/V9X3
With approx 2sec blank.
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
Thanks you :)
Deni
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Easy

Your combos don't make sense. Please don't use only 1 combo and then make a new combo...

00:49:964 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit to the voice or to the beat. Map something with sliders and circles.
00:55:865 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:56:849 (1) - ^
00:57:832 (1) - ^
01:03:734 (1) - ^
01:04:718 (1) - ^
01:11:603 (1) - ^
01:12:587 (1) - ^
01:13:570 (1) - ^
01:19:472 (1,1,1) - ^
01:26:357 (1,1,1) - ^
01:29:308 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:47:996 (1) - ^
02:04:718 (1) - ^
02:28:324 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit to the voice or to the beat. Map something with sliders and circles.

Normal

00:44:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Normal. Delete this stack and map something Normal.
01:43:570 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:11:111 (1) - ^

R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e
@dubbadeni : Most fixed thanks ~ ;)

update : Add Taiko Muzukashii difficulty.
KonataN
248 posts
Joined December 2011
KonataN
Hey, from my modding queue.

no kudos for this

I cant find any bad places! I wonder why Deni raged to me so much about this map? Dx

here, have a star.

Edit:Just because I love Vocaloid <3
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

KonataN wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue.

no kudos for this

I cant find any bad places! I wonder why Deni raged to me so much about this map? Dx

here, have a star.

Edit:Just because I love Vocaloid <3
Thanks >3
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Hey, from my modding queue~

red = unrankable

blue = important stuff

purple = I wanted to mention

black = suggestions and opinions



Easy


In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles

00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners

00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it

00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this

00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here

01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this

01:39:144 (1) ^

01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part

02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow

02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano



Normal


00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead

00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o

00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song

00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission

01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here

01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up

01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~ :D

01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals

02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles



Hard


00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long :o

00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ?

01:47:751 (8) NC


Ok, that's all I can do for now~

Very nice for your first map :)

Good luck on rank~
R e v i v e
43 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
R e v i v e

Konei wrote:

Hey, from my modding queue~

red = unrankable

blue = important stuff

purple = I wanted to mention

black = suggestions and opinions



Easy


In general I feel you could use more hitsounds for this diff :/ Just try adding consistant whistles

00:08:652 (2) You maybe should let this end on the first white tick, because of the change in music and the fact it doesnt make it more confusing for beginners

00:08:652 (2) You should add whistles on this slider if you are following the piano for it :arrow: Add.

00:22:423 (2) It's probably better allgining this :arrow: Done.

00:26:357 - 00:53:898 You should add whistles in this part for some hitsound here :arrow: Add some.

01:07:669 (1) Very boring and confusing for newbies, you should change to more sliders http://puu.sh/11h8x Don't forget to look on the following notes if you change this

01:39:144 (1) ^ :arrow: Change.

01:49:226 What's about this break? x.x It's just breaking the flow and some kinda boring. Should add a spinner or map this part :arrow: okay

02:15:046 (3,4) You should do them a slider because of giving the player something to do here and not breaking the flow :arrow: Change.

02:33:242 From this part on you could use whistles for emphasizing the piano :arrow: It's not red tick ._.



Normal


00:28:816 (1,2,3,4) 4 Circles in a row are a bit much for Normal, consider putting some slider here instead

00:40:128 (1) Why this NC? o.o

00:40:865 (1) This clap is a bit to loud according to the song

00:49:964 (1) I think at this point is one spinner enough :/ I'm quite not sure so it's your decission

01:45:046 (1) remove NC, it's not neccesarry here

01:47:751 (1) This slider has many repeats which is only boring, so split it up

01:49:226 I don't understand this break, there are still vocals and instruments to map, so feel free to do so~ :D

01:55:373 (1,2) Try timeline like this http://puu.sh/11hjo for following vocals

02:22:914 (1) remove claps, sounds strange with the following whistles

:arrow: Fixed all

Hard


00:38:160 (7) NC, this is too long :o :arrow: okay.

00:39:873 (4,5) CTRL + H ? :arrow: nope.

01:47:751 (8) NC :arrow: okay.


Ok, that's all I can do for now~

Very nice for your first map :)

Good luck on rank~
Thanks for modding >3
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, R e v i v e

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 01:49:964 (1) - Use circle or slider instead of using spinner be better.
  2. 02:19:964 - Add circle here?

Normal

  1. 02:10:373 (1,2) - Change is slider instead of 2 circle.

Hard

  1. 00:42:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - The placement of them, is curved that isn't pretty. If make to this code, It will be better.
    156,384,42832,1,0
    224,336,43078,1,0
    304,312,43324,1,0
    388,304,43570,1,0
    472,312,43816,1,0
    472,312,44062,1,0
  2. 01:24:882 (1) - Reduce the repeat the slider 1 time. Then add circle in 01:25:373?
  3. 01:40:620 (1) - Same as 01:40:620 (1) - Add circle in 01:41:111?

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 48