modGeneralAdd KattyPie to tags.HellUnsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 02:07:876 - snap to 02:07:912
00:27:156 (5,1) - 0.9 is better.
00:36:674 (3) - How about a 1/2th length repeat slider instead?
00:38:742 (3) - Move to the right until it lines up with the pattern.
00:39:156 (4) - Curve should be in the other direction IMO. It makes more sense if it is.
http://puu.sh/158Wg00:39:156 (4,1) - 1.0 is better.
00:45:777 (1) - Move to x 192 y 128?
00:47:432 (4,1) - 1.0 is better IMO.
00:52:398 (5,1) - ^
00:54:260 (2,3) - Exactly 0.9.
01:05:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Decent pattern
01:19:500 (4,5) - Unintuitive spacing. I really don't know why you don't just stack the triple before and then you can have this note here.
01:27:153 (5) - Not symmetrical. Use this
338,333,87153,2,0,B|318:281|256:254|188:279|170:337,1,210,6|0
(The end points may still need adjustment, I'm not great at making things perfectly symmetrical)
01:31:291 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Good pattern!
01:36:878 (4) - Move up 1 unit to move it further away from previous slider?
01:41:636 (1) - Slider isn't symmetrical. You can make it better by moving the 2nd point to x 176 y 44 and the 3rd point to x 104 y 40. If it was supposed to look something like this 01:44:533 (1) - it's definitely needs some work to get it to that shape.
01:52:395 (4,1) - Not lined up perfectly. Move 01:52:809 (1) - to x 364 y 384? (the finishes on 1 are kind of distracting IMO) Replace finishes with claps?
02:09:360 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't understand why you just have the first few notes as a slowdown and then you go fast again without any indication that the pace has changed. (According to the bpm, the bpm actually goes down after the slowdown. Kind of counter-intuitive don't you think?
02:19:294 (5) - Just use a regular curve, the current one doesn't look good going into a spread out triple.
02:34:201 (1,2,3,4,1) - Good pattern!
02:39:998 (4,5,6,7) - I don't think the curve should change, make it more consistent.
02:40:826 (1,2,3) - Okay this is counter-intuitive. Don't have anti-jump and then go into an in combo jump right after. Keep spacing 0.9-1.2
02:47:452 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really don't like this transition. Use more sharpness here. Like so.
http://puu.sh/159Qb02:53:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - So very awkward and more difficult than anything thus far. Timeline should look like this IMO.
http://puu.sh/159SC02:55:523 (7) - Move right 1 unit.
03:22:221 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why 0.6?? It plays so badly. If there isn't a slowdown there's no point in having slowdown spacing.
03:38:156 (2) - I'd prefer if this note was not here and you just moved the next slider further away.
03:38:363 (1) - Sounds better when it doesn't repeat and is a full beat long IMO
04:01:130 (1) - I suggest you remove this and include a 1/2th length repeat slider that starts here 04:02:164 -. I feel that skipping the three ticks before the stream makes the stream itself less intuitive to start. These notes are required IMO.
04:02:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - Stream doesn't really reflect the music all that well .
http://puu.sh/15act < Timeline is a more interesting representation of the beat. I really recommend it.
04:04:855 (3) - Okay you just skip over all the vocals and this song is mapped primarily to vocals. I highly recommend you move this 1/2th forward and remove a repeat. 04:06:200 (4) - Move 1/4th back to fill the gap.
http://puu.sh/15agi You have no idea how recommended I feel this is.
04:22:648 (1) - Seems like it should be moved down a few units to fit the pattern correctly.
04:49:948 - For each one of these sounds (it keeps repeating through here) could be a hitsound like a clap or something. 04:51:189 - , 04:52:431 - ,04:53:672 - etc.
05:08:569 (6,1,2,3,4) - Please 0.9 snap.
05:10:017 - Add note.
05:21:396 -
Oh don't have a gap like this. It kills the drain.05:25:121 (4) - Move to x 192 y 368?
05:52:844 (5) - Make part of next combo. It harder to see as part of the green combo.
07:00:706 (1) - This is in a bad position going into the blanket. This looks nicer IMO.
http://puu.sh/15aIz Also I think that blanket slider should blanket more fully, because it looks weird not being a perfect blanket.
07:04:016 (1) - Would be better if you used a normal slider here. It doesn't need that lip.
07:20:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps don't make sense to me. They don't fit the music or the pacing IMO.
07:23:879 (2,3,4,5,6) - Awkward and unfitting.
Do not speed up for no reason in the middle of a slowdown.07:34:223 (3,4,5) - Plays badly IMO. This is a lot more intuitive IMO.
http://puu.sh/15aUd