Let me finish this as a mod post [Hell:]• 02:44:551 (2): Add a Clap on the Slider end, there is a Clap sound there so it sounds better if you add one
• 03:00:069 (2): This is here, just to make a good Slider, but to be sincere it doesn't follow the music very well. Since it is an Approval map try to risk the Rhythm a bit more, you should try something like this (you can take the Note placement too if you want):
• 03:15:690 (Spin): I don't know if this Spinner is very neccesary, the long vocal can be represented with the Slider, for example adding a Reverse Arrow on the previous Slider. Try a Rhythm something like here:
• 03:21:384 (5,6): Listening the music, could be better if you replace these Notes on a Slider, because it is a long vocal instead of 2 separated things like you did with two Notes
• 03:24:693 (1): A Clap on the Reverse arrow work preety fine with the Instrumental
• 03:44:554 (1,2): (Nazi)- Plays better on a symetry pattern if you moved to the middle of the screen, the pattern looks more enjoyable in my opinion.
• 03:46:209 (1,2,3): This pattern don't follow very well the music, to make a better thing with the long Vocal that appear on there and with the Instrumental, try to do something like this:
• 03:49:313 (x): Add a Note, fit properly with the Vocal
• 04:03:795 (6,7,8): Unnecesary 3-plet, there is no sound on the middle, so is better if you Remove (7) from here
• 04:04:830 (3,4): This sound preety ugly, because it doesn't following the music on any aspect. Well, if you listen properly the music, it is easy to fix the problem. Just replace the position of Notes on the Timeline to make something like this:
• 04:07:726 (1,1): Those Whistles sound loud here, and it doesn't make a good sound. It's better if you Remove both whistles from both Spinners
• 04:17:243 (3,4,5): Can you explain me the usage of an antijump? Is really weird and flows preety bad. Would be better if you increase the distance between the Notes, also it is really inconsistent with the section on 04:21:795 (1,2,3,4).
• 04:17:657 (5): Hmm... Maybe you can add a New Combo here
• 04:27:588 (1): Is better if you start with the Claps here, because the battery starting in this point. I really hope a Clap on the beginning of this Slider
• 04:28:415 (3): For the same reason as above, add a Clap on the Slider end
• 04:36:484 (2): Clap on the beginning of the Slider
• 04:39:174 (6): (^)
• 04:40:002 (1,2): (^)
• 04:52:847 (1,2,3,4): This pattern totally stright it becomes weird at the hour to play the map. Maybe you can place (2,3) like I show you on the screenshoot
• 05:21:398: This break is preety unnecesary, why do not you map the woman voice? I think that it is a good idea to don't have an extrenmly short break
• 05:31:329 (1): To keep consistency, add a Clap here
• 05:44:985 (1): (^) On slider beginning
• 07:06:500 (4): To remark the Instrumental, a New Combo works perfectly here
• 07:11:673 (4,5,6): It is a very slow section, an increase on the Spacing is really unnecesary especially because you are using a lot of antijumps here, the flow between jump and antijump is preety bad. Please, reduce the spacing here
• 07:24:811 (3): The 3-plet is unnecesary here too (listen the music on 25% please). Remove this Note
• 07:31:328 (6,7,8): Again, this increase on the spacing play bad. Reduce it, please
Oh.. And here it is the first of the map on IRC
Chatlog16:12 Barney Stinson: hey
16:12 Barney Stinson: we made m4m 5 days ago xD
16:13 mancusojuanmattos: sorry, I'll do it but I'm kinda busy/lazy at the same time :P
16:14 Barney Stinson: who minds about lazyness when getting an accord. I didn't ask u a mod request. we made m4m
16:15 mancusojuanmattos: asdadas.. I was going to said if you wanted an IRC but it is a collab :/+
16:15 Barney Stinson: no problem
16:15 Barney Stinson: who cares
16:15 Barney Stinson: I have the aurotization
16:15 mancusojuanmattos: ok, then
16:17 mancusojuanmattos: well, let's start
16:18 mancusojuanmattos: Tags: Remove the underscore from katty pie, is easier to find her
16:18 mancusojuanmattos: without iy
16:18 mancusojuanmattos: it*
16:18 Barney Stinson: kay
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: 00:27:156 (5,6)- Increase the spacing (at least with the DS) between this note and Slider, flows
16:19 mancusojuanmattos: better imo
16:21 mancusojuanmattos: let me know when you fix the stuff (or not :P)
16:21 Barney Stinson: fixed
16:21 Barney Stinson: I think the start of this map
16:21 Barney Stinson: is the most hated pattern evah
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: xD
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: I forgot something before on, 00:12:674 (T)-
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: Is necesary this Red Line? you didn't mapped on this place, and then there is no change on the BPM
16:22 mancusojuanmattos: or offset reset
16:22 Barney Stinson: ?
16:23 Barney Stinson: nah
16:23 Barney Stinson: removin' it
16:23 Barney Stinson: nono
16:23 Barney Stinson: that part is in 4/4
16:23 Barney Stinson: when it's mapped it's in 6/4
16:24 mancusojuanmattos: oh and 6/4, anywyas is unnecesary because you didn't map this part :P
16:25 mancusojuanmattos: 00:29:225 (4,5)- Hmm.. I don't think that stacked Notes fit fine on the beginning on the map, I
16:25 mancusojuanmattos: think that it's more enjoyable if you unstack
16:25 mancusojuanmattos: 00:31:708 (3,4)- Same here
16:25 Barney Stinson: okay
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: 00:39:156 (3)- Well, it is touching the HP BAR, is a bit weird when you play the map, maybe you
16:27 mancusojuanmattos: can move it to another place :P
16:28 Barney Stinson: fixed in another way
16:29 mancusojuanmattos: 00:41:639 (3,4)- Unstack these, I guess that the stack Notes (following the music) start with a good
16:29 mancusojuanmattos: flow on 00:45:777
16:32 Barney Stinson: dude
16:32 Barney Stinson: fixed
16:32 Barney Stinson: I'm beeing very distracted
16:36 mancusojuanmattos: 00:54:466 (3)- Whistle on all this Slider (except on the Sliderbody), works perfectly with this sound
16:36 mancusojuanmattos: that appear on the background of the song
16:38 Barney Stinson: added
16:38 mancusojuanmattos: 00:56:949 (3)- Clap on the beginning
16:41 Barney Stinson: done
16:42 mancusojuanmattos: 01:05:639 (1,2,3)- Flow better if you make an equal spacing between these Notes, I thought in
16:42 mancusojuanmattos: move (3) to x:324 y:240
16:43 Barney Stinson: well
16:44 Barney Stinson: nah
16:45 mancusojuanmattos: well...
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: 01:13:087 (1,2)- In this case, the second Slider doesn't follow the music very well, you should try
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: something like this (on Rhythm and Placed of Notes)
16:46 mancusojuanmattos: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441550
16:47 Barney Stinson: oh god no dude
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: I highly suggest that, if you don't like the thing like I showed you on the screenshoot do it by
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: yourself, but really sounds bad the second Slider
16:48 mancusojuanmattos: the Reverse arrow doesn't follow anything on the music
16:49 mancusojuanmattos: I don't know if the Slider should be shorter or something, meh let's continue
16:52 mancusojuanmattos: 01:47:429 (6)- Hmm.. Add a Clap?
16:52 Barney Stinson: nah
16:54 mancusojuanmattos: 02:00:670 - 02:05:843- Some Whistle would be benefit with the consistency in the map, I think that
16:54 mancusojuanmattos: you have good places to add them
16:56 Barney Stinson: hmhm
16:56 Barney Stinson: done
17:00 mancusojuanmattos: 02:30:888 (5)- Hmm... this inconsistency on the Number of Repetitions, don't work a lot, you can
17:00 mancusojuanmattos: make something like this because you have music to do it
17:00 mancusojuanmattos: http://up.ppy.sh/files/xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.jpg
17:01 Barney Stinson: it follows violins
17:01 Barney Stinson: wth il dat link
17:01 mancusojuanmattos: xD
17:02 mancusojuanmattos: I know that follow the Violing, but it becomes boring because it is a slow part on an app map
17:03 mancusojuanmattos: then.. 02:33:372 (5,6,7)- Unnecesary 3-plet (listen the music on 25/50% of speed), remove the
17:03 mancusojuanmattos: middle Note
17:04 Barney Stinson: right
17:06 mancusojuanmattos: 02:52:626 (2)- Sounds better if you reduce this Slider by 1/2 and then add a Note on 02:53:040-
17:07 mancusojuanmattos: because there isn't a long vocal in there
You know Barney, I had to delete some things on the chatlog
When you showed this very, very, very, VERY!! preety Girl haha xDWell, that's it
Good Luck with the map, Barney