[AKBreezel]
You have 1 unsnapped inherite section here.
00:27:722 - snap to 00:27:712 -
I suggest moving 01:51:337 (2) - to 01:51:150 - OR 01:49:837 (2) - to 01:50:025 - (i prefer 1st variant). Because as it is now it ruins the rythm of the music imo.
[Origin]
00:40:650 (7) - add NC. Fits the music.
00:52:650 (1) - You should place NC here
01:03:900 (1) - remove NC
01:04:650 (1) - add NC
01:13:650 (5) - maybe NC?
02:15:150 (4) - touches hp bar
02:30:712 (3) - place it somewhere according to your distance spacing. e.g. like this?
http://puu.sh/LOn6[Rebirth]
Unsnapped inherite sections: 01:19:653 - snap to 01:19:650
00:20:025 (1) - touches hp bar
00:27:900 (1) - I think it will be more interesting if you reverse this slider. (ctrl+R)
00:53:400 (4) - touches hp bar
00:56:025 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:56:400 -
00:58:650 (8) - NC
01:09:150 (10) - add NC
01:09:337 (1) - remove NC
01:09:900 (1) - remove NC
01:18:150 (7) - add NC
01:18:712 (1) - remove NC
01:30:150 (11) - NC
01:33:150 (3) - touches hp bar
01:38:962 (1) - try to stack it with 01:38:775 (2) -
01:40:650 (4) - NC
02:25:650 (1) - add NC
02:26:025 (3) - remove NC
02:28:650 (1) - fix it. Because now it can't be understood where the slider goes - left or right. Unrankable.
02:31:087 (1,2,3,4) - maybe turn it into some jump pattern? Just a suggestion.
I like this song a lot and your map is really nice!! Good Luck ^ ^